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Fiona Fung-Proud of You

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spboxer3
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年6月26日 at 下午 03:23:47

Artist: Fiona Fung
Title: Proud of You
BPM: 82
Filesize: 4511kb
Play Time: 02:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.96 stars, 128 notes)
  2. See the sky (3.56 stars, 228 notes)
  3. try (3.43 stars, 96 notes)
Download: Fiona Fung - Proud of You
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pretty song
bpm 82 so diffcult for me D:
Last edited by spboxer3 , edited 46 times in total.
abcde1234qaz
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abcde1234qaz
先给颗猩猩> <
abcde1234qaz
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abcde1234qaz
>_>
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AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
XD
sexy-commando
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sexy-commando
(o*･ω･)ﾐ☆
wmfchris
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wmfchris
:)
ignorethis
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> <"
Furawa
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Furawa
;)
xxxxx225
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xxxxx225
不錯!!~~繼續加油!!
DeadAlready
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DeadAlready
star~ :D
Uan
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Uan
star!!
good map/music~
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
Welcome to Colin's star queue.
kioukiou
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kioukiou
Some modded in irc.

star.
alu4
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alu4
star~
030129890
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030129890
~star~
pjiang621111
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pjiang621111
Yay! Fiona Fung! Especially her song "Proud of You"! I love this song just as much as Joey Yung's version! :)

Starred! This beatmap is very nice!~ ^^
pjiang621111
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pjiang621111
Seeing as how much I love this song and beatmap, I decided to mod it. :)

I didn't see any problems with every other difficulty except for "Fly in the Sky". There were only two errors, though.

The first error is here:
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/7683/1sterror.png

and the second error is here:
http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/5928/2nderror.png

Both of these sliders, highlighted in blue, are a bit too long. I fixed them by moving the end of the slider slightly, and they both worked perfectly according to the music. Would you like me to send you a fixed version or do you want to fix it? After all, it's a pretty easy fix. ;)

I wish you the best of luck, and I hope this gets ranked! ^^
Alace
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Alace
back to wip
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
star~
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Modding
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BlUe=Just a Suggestion
Red=You must fix this
:!: With Red=The most important thing(major issue)
:?: I can't understand of this
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[General]
~Set review point

[Normal]
Add more hit sound,suggest you put the hitsound in downbeat
Draw the slider beautifully
00;15:919(5)left 1 grid?(LV3)
00:22:505(4)Remove clap.Use a whistle to instead clap?
00:26:895(2)add a whistle
00:30:554(2)down 1 grid(LV3)
00:43:358(2)unlikeness spacing
01:17:383(2)spacing
02:28:724(2)Horizontally with (1)
02;35:675(3)down 1 grid(LV3)
You can Learn The mapping style like kioukiou

[See the sky]
Add more hit sound,suggest you put the hitsound in downbeat
00:04:212(8) New combo?
01;02:749(6)Remove clap?
01:04:212(8)^
02;13:742(x)Map something here?
02:22:139(1.2.3.4.5.6)range is seems like 2008 style? l0l
02;42:261(2)Vertically with (1),than Horizontally
02;42:993(3)Horizontally with (2)
02:43:724(4)Vertically with (3),than Horizontally
02:46:651(8)Vertically with (6)

So,tired...
These first
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[general]
audio lead-in should be unique.

[Heaven in the sky]
suggestion: remove most 1/4s in the slower part~
0:08:236 (5) down 1 grid?
0:09:334 (8) use 1 beat slider?
0:53:236 (5) up 1 grid
0:58:451 (2,3,4) right 1 grid looks better?
1:00:188 (1,1,1,1,1) no need to spam new combo; stack ending of slider on another's beginning
2:19:578 (7,8) (7) finish, remove finish on (8)
2:25:432 (6) remove finish at ending, finish at beginning
2:50:310 spinner starts here

[Fly in the sky]
0:01:651 (3,4) right 1 grid
0:08:236 (5) down 1 grid
0:09:334 (8) up 1 grid
0:55:432 (3) down 1 grid

[See the sky]
0:29:090 (1,6) (1) down 1 grid, (6) up 1 grid
0:34:212 (7) follow the pattern, up 1 grid
0:47:017 (4) left 1 grid
0:52:505 (3,4) spacing
1:51:041 (4) down 1 grid
1:53:602 (3) left a bit

nice song!
yongtw123
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Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Hi hi~

Overall:
Offset 似乎慢了些，我測 534，不過可能找專業的比較好。
我會用原本的offset mod，所以offset要改的話放最後吧。
[See the Sky] and [Fly in the Sky] 在節奏上非常相似。我建議保留其一就好了(第一個?)
Countdown有點吵w，關掉它?
背景請用800*600，現在看的到下方有黑黑的。

[Normal]
唉呀3.02星，想辦法減掉0.02顆星吧www
Spacing請重新調整過: 例如 00:58:358 (1,2,1) / 02:11:163 (1,2) / etc... 就有錯。自己把圖確認過一遍吧。

00:15:919 (5) - 注意 00:14:456 (3,4) 和 00:15:188 (4,5). (3,4)中間有一點空隙, (4,5)卻沒有。這不算是錯誤，只是讓圖好看而已。重點就在於，想辦法讓同個combo中各個物件之間的間距一樣。再舉一個例子: 02:19:212 (3,4) - 這距離比其他的大了點。
01:09:334 (4) - 彎的好?
01:49:944 (1,2,3) - 整張圖中有不少地方類似這哩，東西擠在一起。打散一點擺?
02:29:822 (1) - 延長到下個白線?
02:40:066 (5) - 唔哇不要全部的音效都來啦XD (其他地方也有類似狀況，以後盡量一個圈用一種音效)
02:49:578 (1) - 這之後來個spinner就結束了?! 太突然了...把前面的break也map一下吧

[See the Sky] / [Fly in the Sky]
這兩個實在太相像
Fly in the Sky大部分只是把間距變大...
你選擇一個後我再mod
(記得要self-mod喔~ 自己mod自己的map也是很重要的)

[Heaven in the Sky]
circle size圈大一點+1
整張圖的擺法很散，建議你稍微用點心把他們用好看點。

00:00:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 因為是最難的難度，你大可當成是jump，幾何對稱好一點。
00:13:358 (3,4) - 不太合...我建議把slider延長到白線上
00:46:285 (2) - 這離(1)太近了
01:15:188 (7,8) - 哦哦 意外的不錯www
01:47:017 (1) - 離(5)太近了
01:48:846 (6) - 延長到白線?
01:51:773 (6) - ^
02:04:944 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 這是有意要讓間距逐漸變大嗎?
02:07:505 (2) - 離(1)太近 噢你這裡用x0.5...
02:36:753 (1) - 這是什麼...
02:45:899 (3) - 右移一格

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間距, 排列, 音效都可以有所改進
我之後再回來看
這是首好歌 用心些 加油吧~
Alace
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Alace
time to finish this
_Kiva
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_Kiva
:D/
加油
pjiang621111
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pjiang621111

spboxer3 wrote:

pretty song
bpm 82 so diffcult for me D:
Don't worry! In time this song will be easy for you! :)
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
As per your request:
Remodding.

[General]
  1. 把綠線都snap好把,特別是Kiai開始和Kiai完結部分.
  2. Timing有點off,用offset: 537 ,因為這個沒鼓點,所以Timing會很難抓.(先看mod在改)
  3. 把Easy的Lead in移走,也沒啥用!
  4. 考慮加了靜音slider,這歌自本身就很安靜,現在的滑塊音很吵.
  5. Remove Countdown
  6. 必須吐糟lighting...(明顯是在mm的圖裏拿的)
[Easy]
  1. 00:34:924(x)-為甚麼Kiai不在這裏開始?為甚麼要特別在下一條綠開始?
  2. 00:46:265(2)-這裏為甚麼要踩紅線1拍呢?把白線重音跳掉不太好...我也看不到你有跟歌詞..
  3. 00:53:216(3)-直接在slider上加whistle造成了一層重音!Remove it.
  4. 00:56:143(6)-^ Same.
  5. 01:30:899(1.2)-(1)-Remove new combo 然後再(2)-加上new combo 是為了增強play flow
  6. 01:41:509(1)-Spacing!用distance snap重排一次.
  7. 01:56:143(x)-為甚麼要這樣呢?Kiai應該在這條綠線完結,為甚麼要在下一條綠線上完?
  8. 02:18:094(2)-詭異節奏,對不上音樂,也對不上vocal.
  9. 02:21:021(1)-^ Same. (後面的自己看)
  10. 02:29:802,02:32:729(1)-喂喂,這裏突然跳出clap sound很怪,Remove them.
  11. 02:47:363(1)-這裏的Kiai移走...沒啥用.
[See the sky]
  1. 00:10:777(8)-這裏沒減速的比要,而且在尾部的clap sound真得很詭異!
  2. 00:12:241(1~)-從這裏開始沒放hitsound(放很少?),加點上去.
  3. 00:15:899(7)-這條slider放的不好看,位置也不太好,放在(6)-的下面可能會更好.
  4. 01:00:168(1.2.3.4.5.6)-Bad arrangement!重排把,打起來怪怪的..
  5. 01:01:997(6.8)-Remove the clap!!突然跑出來不好啊...
  6. 01:44:253(x)-在這裏加音.
  7. 01:51:753(4)-沒變速的必要,而且變速也不好..
  8. 01:55:594(x)-你詭異了,為甚麼break開始了Kiai還沒完?Kiai在01:55:412-完結,然後在開始break.
  9. 02:31:814(6)-為甚麼這裏的間距突然放大了?
  10. 02:43:704(4)-這個你放高了,不像正方形了.
  11. 02:47:363(1)-這裏的Kiai移走...沒啥用.
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YuZuKi Kenny
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我喜歡這首歌，所以也給個星星，希望可以被RANK～
spboxer3
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Download: Fiona Fung - Proud of You (spboxer3) [See the sky].osu
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