Nice map <3 Star~

*_______*

Hi~

Normal
-Slider Velocity set at 1.10? maybe better than 1.40?
-Cricle Size +1?
-if you can.. make it at 3star~

00:19:137 (4,5) - Delete this note, and add slider?
00:27:012 (5,6,7) - ^ add slider and do 1 tick back?
00:31:137 (7,8) - Delete note, add slider?
00:38:637 (5,6,7) - ^ and do 1 tick back?
00:53:637 (4,5) - ^
01:12:012 (1) - too close at the front spinner?
01:14:449 (3) - delete this~ and 01:14:824 (4) - this slider start at here
01:37:512 (2) - down one grid?
01:37:887 (3) - left one grid?
01:38:637 (5) - new combo?
01:40:512 (1) - delete new combo
01:43:512 (1) - ^
02:10:137 (1) - is too ugly~ maybe can change other style?

Hard
00:19:324 (15) - change to slider? 00:19:887 ending
00:14:824 (7) - new combo?
00:17:637 (5) - ^
00:18:574 (6) - ^
00:23:449 (5) - ^
00:27:012 (6) - ^
00:29:637 (7) - ^
00:35:637 (6) - new combo~
00:38:637 (7) - ^
00:41:449 (1) - ^?
00:44:637 (7) - ^
00:46:137 (2) - delete new combo
00:46:512 (1) - new combo
00:47:637 (1) - ^
00:51:012 (7) - ^
00:53:637 (3,4) - change to slider?
00:54:762 (1) - Overlap with 00:54:012 (4) -
00:57:762 (7) - new combo
01:02:074 (7) - ^
01:14:637 (4) - ^
01:18:012 (5) - ^
01:20:262 (6) - ^
01:21:012 (9) - ^
01:26:824 (3) - ^
01:30:012 (5) - new combo
01:35:824 (6) - ^
01:38:637 (7) - ^
01:39:012 (9) - change to slider, ending at 01:39:199
01:39:199 (10) - start at 01:39:387, at 01:39:762 do a 1 tick back and add clap
01:42:199 (7) - new combo
01:50:637 (5) - ^
01:53:824 (8) - ^
01:55:137 (13) - ^
01:55:512 (1) - delete new combo
01:56:637 (7) - new combo
02:03:012 (4) - ^
02:08:262 (7) - ^
02:11:637 (7) - ^
02:23:637 (1) - too close for front spinner??
02:43:512 (5) - new combo
02:44:449 (6) - ^
02:52:512 (1) - very ugly for this slider and this slider ending is 02:54:387
02:54:762 (x) - add a note?
02:56:637 (5) - new combo
03:01:137 (9) - ^
03:01:512 (1) - delete new combo
03:02:824 (6) - new combo
03:07:137 (4) - ^
03:11:262 (5) - ^
03:36:574 (6) - ^

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Nice song >w<
i <3 it~
but on this map's slider make me boring
Good luck to you
and starrr~~~~

Star <3

:3

(viv te voy a matar =_=)

Star! You have a lot of work to do hehe.

Star bro

Here you are the Easy Collab from Wiinchan and me..maybe we need a SB for the names? °°


And this is the file for you with Hitsounds and all:

Download: Simple Plan - Your Love Is A Lie (Slowmotion) [cesc ♥ Wiinter].osu

vim pra dar star e já tinha dado 8D memória fail

Nice song,star

[Hard]
00:03:199 (8) - right 1 grid
00:06:012 (7,8) - unevne spacing, (7) down 1 grid, (8) left 1 grid
00:13:512 (1,2,3) - down 1 grid
00:33:012 (4,5,6,7) - up 1 grid
01:12:387 (3,4) - down 1 grid
01:24:762 (2,3) - right 1 grid like before?
01:32:262 (1) - up 1 grid
01:36:949 (7) - ^
01:45:387 (4) - down 1 grid
02:24:387 (3) - left 1 grid
nice sounding, just some suggestions to make it show symmetry better

[cesc's]
nice as always.

star~

belo progresso com o map. espero que seja ranked .
boa sorte com o map o!

Hi Slow :3

[General]:

Open your .Osu file and change this:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,150,0
Combo2 : 240,5,5

For this:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,0,255
Combo2 : 240,5,5

Fix this in normal and hard

: lol

02:00:012- 2 grids to left
02:00:949- 2 grids to right

[Hard]:

00:49:512 (1)- Finish. Sounds much better imo
00:55:512 (6)- Finish. Only in the beginning

01:59:637 (4)- Finish

02:01:137 (5)- Change this slider for 3 circles, for example: You can? :$

I give you a Star :>

ganbatte ne!

General:
- 'Beatmap by Z black.png', well because I don't see a diff created by him on the mapset, please delete this image from the folder and full submit.
- All the diffs MUST have the same preview point. Currently there is no previe point set for either diff.
- 'cesc 3 Wiinter' in here the countdown is missing. Also I can see in the .osu file it should be 'cesc <3 Wiinter'. Maybe make something else than the <3.
- Please disable letterboxing during breaks because in cesc' diff there is SB in the break. Also looks better.
- In the Hard diff the tags 'cesc' and 'Wiinter' are missing.
- Shouldn't there be a SB element for 'cesc 3 Wiinter'?
- The first combo colour of the two diffs are different. Open both .osu files in Notepad and make them the same.

cesc 3 Wiinter:
Please Tick Rate 1.
00:13:137 (1) - Remove New Combo, 00:13:512 (2) - Make New Combo
00:33:762 (1) - I can't allow notes being so close after spinners in the easiest diff. Please make the spinner shorter.
01:32:262 (7) - Why don't you split this into two repeat sliders? Seems a bit boring now.
02:01:137 (4) - Add a repeat here so the kiai fountain doesn't feel weird.
02:10:887 (1) - I can't allow notes being so close after spinners in the easiest diff. For this one I can only suggest to remove it and map something else to it.
02:37:512 (1) - Let me make a prettier version of this really nice slider^^. You gotta put in the code for that slider in the .osu file, in the hitobject section.

304,152,157512,6,2,B|296:72|240:24|112:16|32:80|88:264|256:323|256:323|424:264|480:80|400:16|272:24|216:72|208:152,1,1100,6|6

03:04:512 - This emptyness feels really weird. Please consider mapping something here.
03:38:168 - Please end the kiai here if you already make a timing section.

Hard:
01:11:637 (1) - Remove this note and make the spinner end on this time.
02:23:637 (1) - ^

Well this was quite a nice mapset, but there is really General stuff which is not right at all which is why I can't star this either.

wtf pro 3 no nome da diff er. antes era ♥ aí virou <3 e agora tá 3? sloooooww vai arrumar isso seu puto i.i e me lembre de dar mod no resto do mapa quando ler isso >_>"

Wiinter wrote:

wtf pro 3 no nome da diff er. antes era ♥ aí virou <3 e agora tá 3? sloooooww vai arrumar isso seu puto i.i e me lembre de dar mod no resto do mapa quando ler isso >_>"

o não dava pra dar upload com o coração

Explain that this is my SB plz~

Add more difficulties. You might be working on more difficulties already, but It seems that 2 stars is too easy for me, but 5 starts is too hard (for me).

Also, in the 2 star beatmap, maybe you should make the beat sounds louder. I dunno if you were going for the atmosphere of the song or you wanted the sound to be barely noticeable, but I think that the beat sounds give the song the osu! personality it needs. I acknowledge that the beat sounds get louder at some point in the song, but even for the soft sounds, make them louder.

Why are there 6 spinners in the 2 star beatmap? I actually saw the editing tip "use spinners sparingly!" in the editor! Remove the spinners that are in the middle of the chorus. They just disrupt the gameplay.

I quickly scanned the beatmap for hard, and I think the same requests apply for that map. I can't really give any more specific advice since I can't play those leveled beatmaps, but the previous advice will probably do.

I'll star it because It's a good song and others should know about it.

[cesc x Wiinter]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Please make sure to add one.

01:00:762 (6) - New combo.
01:01:512 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:38:262 (x) - End your kiai time here.

[Hard]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Please make sure to add one.

Disable the Letterbox during breaks.

00:06:199 (8,9,10) - Respace correctly.
03:38:262 (x) - End your kiai time here.

Not bad.

For set a preview point do like this.

osuplayer111 wrote:

For set a preview point do like this.

in this place?

Yeah I showed you the correct position where to set the preview point.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Yeah I showed you the correct position where to set the preview point.

Done

Yeah, nice.

Bubbled~

star~

-Try and resize black/white png to 640x480. They don't need to be 800x600 and will just cause more lag on older comps
-Tick rate 2 seems to work nicely with this song, try it out

cesc x Wiinter:
-Shouldn't it say beatmap by cesc and Wiinter on the break?
02:24:012 (3,4,5,6,1) - this pattern could look neater
02:37:512 (1) - nice

Hard:
I would expect at least a small break nearer to the 2nd half of the song
Could use slightly more hitsounds at places (like the kiai) Also the whistles are pretty hard to hear during kiai

A few too many fixes for me to rank, call me back and I will rebubble~

Good luck.
(+45)

Download: Simple Plan - Your Love Is A Lie (Slowmotion) [Guys' Taiko Oni].osu

done~

James2250 wrote:

-Try and resize black/white png to 640x480. They don't need to be 800x600 and will just cause more lag on older comps
-Tick rate 2 seems to work nicely with this song, try it out

cesc x Wiinter:
-Shouldn't it say beatmap by cesc and Wiinter on the break?
02:24:012 (3,4,5,6,1) - this pattern could look neater
02:37:512 (1) - nice

Hard:
I would expect at least a small break nearer to the 2nd half of the song
Could use slightly more hitsounds at places (like the kiai) Also the whistles are pretty hard to hear during kiai

A few too many fixes for me to rank, call me back and I will rebubble~

But James, if i resize my black/white png to 640x480 it will ruin my SB D: , please understand

star

-Ok the guest mappers said they were fine with how the sb is during the break
-You can keep white/black as 800x600 if its too hard to change

Didn't notice it before but your offset starts on the wrong beat of the song (making the pulsing on the main menu etc look off) Move your offset to 1,511 to fix this (you shouldn't need to resnap anything)

I don't think your storyboard is completely fixed from resizing your 1024x768 images (which I still have no idea how they got to that size). If you look around 01:25:511 you can see the white doesn't cover the bottom part correctly. Same for other places like 02:26:261 etc

You might have to call ZLOdeuka back and ask him to double check his storyboard again

James2250 wrote:

cesc x Wiinter:
-Shouldn't it say beatmap by cesc and Wiinter on the break?

Yes, it should be better.

cesc wrote:

James2250 wrote:

cesc x Wiinter:
-Shouldn't it say beatmap by cesc and Wiinter on the break?

Yes, it should be better.

But the name of the diff already says it >_>" I don't get why you guys find it soo much better orz I'm ok with it anyways you decide.

Slow, coloca borda preta nos sliders, acho que fica melhor

whatisthisidonteven

Title: Your Love Is a Lie

/me just walks on by

Star for Simple Plan <_<...

Hi
Here a little fix for white and black.jpg, that's all I can do.
Download: SBfix.rar

Uhm that.

Astom wrote:

Hi
Here a little fix for white and black.jpg, that's all I can do.
[attachment=0:5ef60]SBfix.rar[/attachment:5ef60]

Uhm that.

Thanks thanks thanks <3

Another old modding request to fulfill.

SB: 2 - you should probably remove the small white spots to prevent these discolorations

cesc x Wiinter:
Normal modding:
00:41:262 (7) - Try to make the shape wrap around 6 more evenly (it has a little peak right now instead of being circular)
01:32:262 (7) - A mass repeat before a short break is not exactly entertaining, so I recommend you change the pattern here
01:45:387 (4) - ^
03:16:137 (2) - Personally, I like the shape better if the slider does not curve before curving down

Combo modding:
I am guessing that you made combos based off of patterns, so I am going to make suggestions off of that.
01:51:012 (1) and 01:55:137 (1) - new combo to make a symmetrical pattern (you might want to remove 01:55:887 (1)'s new combo if you do this)
03:35:637 (4) - new combo?

Guys' Taiko Oni: Just wondering why the last kiai timing section starts an eighth note earlier

Hard:
Why is the combo color different for combo in comparison to the other diffs? Combo1 : 255,128,0 compared to 255,150,0 of the other 2 diffs.
T_T, don't really understand what your combos are following. I see that there are time where it follows lyrics, but most of the time I am lost such as 01:50:637 (1) and 02:09:949 (1). I can guess at what you are trying to follow, but the combos don't seem that consistent (No need to change anything, but this is my personal observation)
03:37:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - I wouldn't encourage people to put patterns in just to break player's combos at the end (I have tried it before and people don't like it usually)

=================

I guess the largest issues are the sb and the combo color in Hard. Fix those things and anything else that you want to change, and I'll recheck and hopefully give a bubble. For now, Star!

Hi~

Storyboard Mod

~Thoughts and Suggestions~
- Cool effects, but I'm sure lots of people will complain about the flashes because of the white/black contrast
- Shouldn't the guest diffs have credit texts with the guest mappers' names in their diffs? Right now all the diffs say "Map by Slowmotion" >:

~Issues and Adjustments~
- Remove the following unused files from your folder (don't forget to Full Submit after doing so):

1. 4 (the one inside \SB)
2. 6
3. Beatmap by Z black

- Are these black lines in purpose? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88833 The main problem is that these black/white sprites have been cut from a 800x600 bg, so when you have to use them in the storyboard you have to resize them manually to fit with the bg. I guess you won't want to re-make the scaling animations, but if you don't mind to do it call me, I have the sprites cut from 640x480 so you don't have to scale them in the editor.
- 1 has some missing parts that are kinda noticeable sometimes (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88865 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88866 check the drums and the guitar at its right side)

General Mod

~cesc x Wiinter~
00:37:137 (1) - This note is too close to the spinner end. You should give newbies a bit of recovery time for spinners D:
00:39:199 (3) - Stack this note properly under the slider end.
01:34:511 (x) - Add a break here? Or maybe map it...
01:44:262 (1) - Fix spacing here? I don't really like antijumps on easy diffs
02:01:137 (4) - I expected a repeat on this slider o-o it fits the drums.
02:12:762 (1) - This note is too close to the spinner end. You should give newbies a bit of recovery time for spinners D:
02:37:512 (1) - Urrrgh, why would you do thisss Dx But I guess this one is intuitive enough...
03:04:511 (x) - Kinda the same I said before, these mini-breaks in the middle of verses are weird >:
03:35:637 (4) - Add a New Combo to mark the change of pattern/spacing.

~Guys' Taiko Oni~
- Consider increasing the volume of the hitsounds, I can hardly hear them ;~;

00:37:512 (207) - Don't use finishes at the end/start of streams.
00:43:512 (246) - ^
00:51:012 (284) - ^
00:54:387 (306) - ^
00:55:512 (313) - ^
01:00:762 (345) - ^
01:10:512 (406) - ^
01:13:137 (425,426,427,428,429) - You shouldn't do things like these... It's really really confusing: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88878
01:16:886 (x) - Taiko maps don't really need breaks, but I guess it's okay?
01:49:137 (140) - Don't use finishes at the end/start of streams.
01:51:762 (156) - ^
02:25:324 (38,39) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88886 -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88884 Another confusing thing ;~;
02:26:262 (42) - Don't use finishes at the end/start of streams.
02:27:762 (45) - ^
02:29:262 (48) - ^
02:32:262 (61) - ^
02:33:762 (64) - ^
02:35:262 (67) - ^
02:42:386 (x) - Same as I said with the breaks.
02:58:418 (10,11,12) - Why would you change the speed twice in such a short time? D: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88890 -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88889
03:19:137 (130) - Don't use finishes at the end/start of streams.
03:26:262 (4) - ^
03:27:762 (7) - ^
03:29:262 (10) - ^
03:32:262 (26) - ^
03:33:762 (29) - ^
03:35:262 (32) - ^

~Hard~
No problems here!

Looks nice, but the taiko diff is a bit confusing with those things I pointed out =x
Good luck~

EDIT: Oh forgot this

Consider increasing the volume of the hitsounds, I can hardly hear them ;~; Slow , can you do that for me?

00:37:512 (207) - Don't use finishes at the end/start of streams. Sure
00:43:512 (246) - ^ ^
00:51:012 (284) - ^ ^
00:54:387 (306) - ^ ^
00:55:512 (313) - ^ ^
01:00:762 (345) - ^ ^
01:10:512 (406) - ^ ^
01:13:137 (425,426,427,428,429) - You shouldn't do things like these... It's really really confusing: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88878 ^
01:16:886 (x) - Taiko maps don't really need breaks, but I guess it's okay? It's ok i think
01:49:137 (140) - Don't use finishes at the end/start of streams. ;o;
01:51:762 (156) - ^ k
02:25:324 (38,39) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88886 -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88884 Another confusing thing ;~; nope.avi
02:26:262 (42) - Don't use finishes at the end/start of streams.
02:27:762 (45) - ^k
02:29:262 (48) - ^ k
02:32:262 (61) - ^ k
02:33:762 (64) - ^k
02:35:262 (67) - ^k
02:42:386 (x) - Same as I said with the breaks. ;W;
02:58:418 (10,11,12) - Why would you change the speed twice in such a short time? D: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88890 -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88889 dod
03:19:137 (130) - Don't use finishes at the end/start of streams.
03:26:262 (4) - ^
03:27:762 (7) - ^
03:29:262 (10) - ^
03:32:262 (26) - ^
03:33:762 (29) - ^
03:35:262 (32) - ^

did almost all lol
http://puu.sh/24s1

Post Subject: Simple Plan - Your Love Is A Lie

y u let dis graveyard

Hi

General
The credits SB is at a completely random point in the map - move it to the end or something?
4.png, Beatmap by Z black.png and 6.png from the SB folder are not used - delete them.
You can use _C lines to remove the need for a black.png, but it isn't necessary to do for this map. Just something you might want to learn for the future~
I recommend tick rate 2 on all difficulties.

Hard
00:18:574 (1,2,3) - This triplet follows nothing in the music - delete the middle beat.
00:40:699 (4,5,6) - ^
00:51:012 (4,5,6) - ^
All the 1/4 in the map () - ^

In future I'd suggest using some more interesting and varied patterns in your mapping - almost nothing but horizontal and vertical lines gets boring fast. The map is otherwise nice and solid, though.

cesc x Wiinter
Change the credits storyboard on this diff to match the guest mappers?
Tick rate 0.5 is soon to be removed from the editor and made unrankable, so if I were you I'd get ahead of the game.
Not sure why all your sliders end in redpoints but I guess it isn't doing any harm :/
00:33:762 (1) - End at least 1/1 earlier - this little spinner recovery time is unacceptable on the easiest diff
02:10:887 (1) - Map through this spinner - it's just there to fill space that should be filled by beats or a slider
02:18:012 (1) - This one isn't quite as bad, but still, ^

I suggest to remove countdown to both diffs~
I felt timing a bit weird, maybe you should ask an expert about it.

Hard
First kiai section seems a bit overmapped, I think you can follow the rhythm better here. You could use longer sliders for example.
You did it better in others kiai sections.
I don't think notes on blueticks fits this song. 00:55:230 (4) - there isnt even a sound that indicates to add a note here. Same with other stuff like this.
00:48:761 - two inherited section on same point, delete one.
Maybe you could add another break to this diff.

Easy diff looks fine

Good luck~

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