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IU - Good Day

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Tanmak
896 posts
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Tanmak
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011년 6월 26일 일요일 at 오후 10:27:24

Artist: IU
Title: Good Day
Tags: K-pop
BPM: 128
Filesize: 21862kb
Play Time: 03:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beautiful Day (3.08 stars, 191 notes)
  2. Easy Day (1.95 stars, 59 notes)
  3. Tough Day (4.91 stars, 442 notes)
Download: IU - Good Day
Download: IU - Good Day (no video)
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IU- Good day
(아이유 - 좋은 날)

This map will be rank someday. :3


Completed!

I'm in my Dream~~~~~~~~~

Lyrics translated by Tanmak


2011/05/27 Updated. Plz Redownload.
2011/06/26 Updated. Plz Redownload.
Last edited by Tanmak , edited 9 times in total.
jericho2442
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PotsBreaker
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8-) 8-) star
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
:D
[Dango]
841 posts
Joined December 2009
[Dango]
좋은날 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ
3단고음 3단고음 IU IU오오오오오오~
star~
빨리 랭크되길 기다릴게요~
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
제가 모딩한 거 웬만하면 다 고쳐주세요. >_<


[General]
- Offset : 778
- 바탕화면 크기가 어느 한쪽이라도 1024*768 넘어가면 안됩니다.
back1.jpg랑 backimg_IU7.jpg 가로크기가 1366이던데 가로를 잘라서 1024로 맞추는게 나을것 같네요.
- pause-overlay.jpg 역시 1024*768이 최대 크기입니다.
- 콤보버스트 크기는 500*768이 최대인데요, comboburst-0 같은 경우 위에 빈공간 제거해주세요.
그리고 comboburst-1 크기는 규정에 맞긴한데 사실 조금 큰 편입니다.
콤보버스트 나올때 HP게이지 안으로 들어가버리니까 조금 줄여주세요.
주변이 좀 지저분 하던데 포토샵에서 refine edge 하면 조금 깔끔하게 다듬을 수 있습니다.
- 현재 spinner-circle 색이 커서색이랑 흡사해서 스핀 돌릴때 잘 안보이는데요,
스피너서클 색을 바꾸기 보단 cursor.png를 눈에 잘 띄는 색으로 바꿔서 업로드하면 괜찮을 것 같습니다.
- SB 구성요소 크기는 바탕화면 빼고 800*600 넘어가면 안됩니다.
white.png 경우는 무려 1024*768 이던데, 사실 800*600까지도 필요 없고 640*480으로 해도 됩니다.
- [Colours] 마지막 줄에 SliderBorder : 172,255,0 해보세요. 슬라이더 바깥선 색을 바꾸는 겁니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/92899


[Tough]
00:45:518 (4) - 첫번째 화살표에 피니시
01:08:253 (2) - 피니시
02:02:393 (4) - 첫번째 화살표에 피니시
02:40:128 (1) - 피니시
03:42:393 (5) - 블루틱에 놓으세요. 03:42:354


[Beautiful]
노멀 난이도인가... OD가 너무 높네요. -1 하시고 AR이 슬라이더 속도에 비해 너무 느립니다. +2 추천.
02:51:143 (1) - 02:53:018 여기에서 끝내주세요.
03:26:885 (1) - 아... 키아이 이렇게 터뜨리는 거 랭크불가 입니다. 그리고 스피너 시작 03:27:003 여기부터예요.
키아이는 03:27:003 - 03:32:628 - 03:34:503 - 이렇게 딱 세번만 해주세요.
03:34:620 (1) - 끝을 03:37:784 여기까지.


[Easy]
딱히 흠 잡을 건 없고 시간이 짧은 게 조금 아쉽네요. 뭐 이지니까~


화이팅요!
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Tanmak

ykcarrot wrote:

제가 모딩한 거 웬만하면 다 고쳐주세요. >_<


[General]
- Offset : 778
- 바탕화면 크기가 어느 한쪽이라도 1024*768 넘어가면 안됩니다.
back1.jpg랑 backimg_IU7.jpg 가로크기가 1366이던데 가로를 잘라서 1024로 맞추는게 나을것 같네요.
- pause-overlay.jpg 역시 1024*768이 최대 크기입니다.
- 콤보버스트 크기는 500*768이 최대인데요, comboburst-0 같은 경우 위에 빈공간 제거해주세요.
그리고 comboburst-1 크기는 규정에 맞긴한데 사실 조금 큰 편입니다.
콤보버스트 나올때 HP게이지 안으로 들어가버리니까 조금 줄여주세요.
주변이 좀 지저분 하던데 포토샵에서 refine edge 하면 조금 깔끔하게 다듬을 수 있습니다.
- 현재 spinner-circle 색이 커서색이랑 흡사해서 스핀 돌릴때 잘 안보이는데요,
스피너서클 색을 바꾸기 보단 cursor.png를 눈에 잘 띄는 색으로 바꿔서 업로드하면 괜찮을 것 같습니다.
- SB 구성요소 크기는 바탕화면 빼고 800*600 넘어가면 안됩니다.
white.png 경우는 무려 1024*768 이던데, 사실 800*600까지도 필요 없고 640*480으로 해도 됩니다.
- [Colours] 마지막 줄에 SliderBorder : 172,255,0 해보세요. 슬라이더 바깥선 색을 바꾸는 겁니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/92899


[Tough]
00:45:518 (4) - 첫번째 화살표에 피니시
01:08:253 (2) - 피니시
02:02:393 (4) - 첫번째 화살표에 피니시
02:40:128 (1) - 피니시
03:42:393 (5) - 블루틱에 놓으세요. 03:42:354


[Beautiful]
노멀 난이도인가... OD가 너무 높네요. -1 하시고 AR이 슬라이더 속도에 비해 너무 느립니다. +2 추천.
02:51:143 (1) - 02:53:018 여기에서 끝내주세요.
03:26:885 (1) - 아... 키아이 이렇게 터뜨리는 거 랭크불가 입니다. 그리고 스피너 시작 03:27:003 여기부터예요.
키아이는 03:27:003 - 03:32:628 - 03:34:503 - 이렇게 딱 세번만 해주세요.
03:34:620 (1) - 끝을 03:37:784 여기까지.


[Easy]
딱히 흠 잡을 건 없고 시간이 짧은 게 조금 아쉽네요. 뭐 이지니까~


화이팅요!
전부 다 고쳤습니다~

모딩하느라 정말 수고하셨고, 별 감사드립니다~!


And Siriru and [Dango], Thanks for star. :)
Iluhiwizel
408 posts
Joined May 2009
Iluhiwizel
IU \>w</
SweetBloodyLove
675 posts
Joined July 2009
SweetBloodyLove
star~ :)
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Tanmak
Thanks for star!

Xen and BloodyLove!
Kanon
215 posts
Joined May 2009
Kanon
Mod as request,

general
combo colour is too similar, change 2 -3 of them
timing is a bit off for me. check the offset plz(maybe +10ms?,i am not good at timing-.-)
file size is too big, you should compress the video,make sure the osz file no more then 16mb(now is 21.3mb)
i dont like the bell hitsound.

easy day
Circle size+1 OD-1
map the whole song plz
01:07:549 (1) - strange , you'd better not use red line to start a note or slider in easy diff
01:09:424 (1) - ^

beatiful day
00:16:221 (1,2,3,4,5) - rly dont like here, try not follow the vocal here?
00:23:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (also add hitsound to this two part)
00:53:253 add note
00:55:128 ^
00:57:940 (5) - make it reach the long white line
01:33:096 (1,2,3,4) - rly dont like here, try not follow the vocal here?
01:40:596 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:56:651 (3,4) - why this two start or end with blue line? white line is better
03:42:393 (3) - unsnaped?

tough day
03:42:393 (5) - unsnaped?
i am fine with the diff ,good work

easy and normal need improve, since i like the song. star for you~
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Tanmak
I must return to army. :(
Then, I'll mod when I have a next vacation.

If you want to mod this beatmap, just mod and post this thread.
Then, I'll fix my beatmap when I have a vacation.

Thanks >.<

P.S.: Sorry, Kanon. I must return to army now. I can't read and fix it now. I'll fix or arrange when I return to home.
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
[Easy Day]
Lol, people don't like short easy diffs, but it's fine~

[Beautiful Day]
Didn't notice anything bad, good job~

[Tough Day]
Thought something more special would be done with triple booster, like x2 lol

Barely noticed you made the lyrics... some grammar is wrong, but guess doesn't matter lol

Anyways, looked good, though, some streams that ended with different direction doesn't flow well...

star~
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Tanmak

Kanon wrote:

Mod as request,

general
combo colour is too similar, change 2 -3 of them Arranged 1 color which is darker.

timing is a bit off for me. check the offset plz(maybe +10ms?,i am not good at timing-.-)

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
- Offset : 778
Oh, I didn't notice that ykcarrot's mod. lol.Thanks remind that. I arranged offset. :P

file size is too big, you should compress the video,make sure the osz file no more then 16mb(now is 21.3mb) OTL

i dont like the bell hitsound. Lower bell sound's volume 3/4.

easy day
Circle size+1 OD-1 That's okay.
map the whole song plz ^
01:07:549 (1) - strange , you'd better not use red line to start a note or slider in easy diff ^
01:09:424 (1) - ^ ^

beatiful day
00:16:221 (1,2,3,4,5) - rly dont like here, try not follow the vocal here? I think that's okay.
00:23:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (also add hitsound to this two part) ^
00:53:253 add note Nope.
00:55:128 ^ ^
00:57:940 (5) - make it reach the long white line Fixed.
01:33:096 (1,2,3,4) - rly dont like here, try not follow the vocal here? That's okay.
01:40:596 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:56:651 (3,4) - why this two start or end with blue line? white line is better Because blue is exactly. Anyway, End of note no.4 is fixed about timeline.
03:42:393 (3) - unsnaped? Snapped on 1/6 line. It's right.

tough day
03:42:393 (5) - unsnaped? ^
i am fine with the diff ,good work

easy and normal need improve, since i like the song. star for you~

Thanks for mod and star Kanon! and OzzyOzrock!
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
[General]
offset -5 (773)
it would be better if you could put those SB elements in a \SB folder next time... = =|||
i didn't download the video, but some SB things may not shows well with video on?
it's a little crowded in the first 2 diffs. if you change distance spacing to 1.0x it could probably make people feel better, but it's lots of work so depends on you.
those short breaks (such as 00:19:528 - 00:23:746) is pretty weird... people don't want to play 10s then have a 5s break just because there's no vocal. try to fill in with something.

[Easy Day]
only map 1/3 of the song is too lazy. more plz.
00:26:559 (4,5) - 1 grid right

[Beautiful Day]
00:59:840 (1) - remove sliderwhistle
01:34:762 (3,4) - .. it's really ugly
02:26:793 (3) - remove sliderwhistle

[Tough Day]
....well just stopped. it's like all use Distance Snap...

my opinion is you should try to make your placements more variable (also more fun), try to improve them. it may be rankable or nearly rankable now but really not good. (no errors =!= good). i could see some nice thinking of hitsounds, it's the advantage of the map. good luck.
Sonnyc
7,776 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
General:

-- 그냥 가사 부분은 60%로 음량 줄이시고 Kiai 부분 정도에만 80%로 올려 보세요
-- Song Setup 에서 Storyboarding : Show storyboard in front of Combo fire 클릭

Easy:

-- Circle Size Large

Beautiful:

01:33:121 (1,2,3,4) : 너무 한곳에서 논다는 생각이 드네요..
02:31:949 (X) : 노트 추가?

Tough Day:

-- AR 8 / 가능하시다면 Circle Size는 4로..
-- 그냥.. 이 난이도에서는 SB가 색이 안맞네요.. 아니, 그냥 그렇다고요 (그리고 점프 없는 거도 아쉽ㅋ)

00:31:480 (2) : Nazi 같지만 Spacing
00:34:995 (5) : ^
01:56:089 (2) : (1)과 겹치기

SB 글씨 예쁘네요 혹시 Font좀 알수 있을까요??

아이유 좋은날~~ STAR
ryanenter2
46 posts
Joined January 2010
ryanenter2
Star this map!
Miu Matsuoka
662 posts
Joined May 2008
Miu Matsuoka
Overall
Please include all the beatmap skin elements since if it is overlapped with a user skin, it may be very ugly.
Refer to the FAQ -> 10. Map Design Issues -> Missing/Unnecessary files in the package
It contains all beatmap elements you need to include when having a beatmap customized skin.

[Easy Day]
01:06:403 (4) - 1 grid to the right
Map is too short, at least end at 02:32:653 instead x_x

[Beautiful Day]
00:42:028 (1) - End at 00:43:903
01:35:934 (4) - Put it somewhere else, but just not on the horizontal line
01:56:793 (3) - Snap this to the end of (2) perfectly
01:58:668 (5) - Snap this to the end of (4) perfectly
02:55:153 - Put a note here? (With Finish hitsound) And a break after.
03:34:645 (1) - Finish?

[Tough Day]
Add a lil' bit more hitsounds, coz it's a little dry
00:18:120 (5) - Put this somewhere else like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/107665
00:25:620 (6) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/107666
01:55:855 (1) - Change to two notes instead
02:03:355 (5) - New Combo
02:53:512 - Normal sample set
03:13:199 - ^
03:13:903 - soft sample set
03:21:402 (1) - Finish?

Star!
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