Zelos wrote:

Saten-sans insane:

00:41:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - if your gonna make an epic symmetrical map, you should at least make this star symmetrical saten-san :3

Zelos wrote:

Weezy's Easy:

00:39:815 (1) - grab the 2nd slider tick and move down 1? it makes it more symmetrical. (i slider nazi sorry :3)

00:52:122 (1) - grab the end of the slider and move it up 1?

Very nice Weezykins.

Zelos wrote:

Normal:

00:18:661 (1,2,3,1) - this is irreguarly shaped but it seemed no matter where I moved one note to fix it, it would throw off distance snap.

01:22:891 (1) - make this the length of the other spinners in the difficulty?

Also very nice

Hard:

00:28:276 (1,2,3,1) - center these?

00:40:584 (2) - clap at the end of slider?

01:01:545 (4) - isn't grid snapped. grid snap and move down 1 tick?

01:22:891 (1) - make this the length of the other spinners in the difficulty?

Weezy wrote:

its showing that crappy bg now >w<
hurry up and find a new one! D:

Saten-san wrote:

Weezy wrote:

its showing that crappy bg now >w<
hurry up and find a new one! D:

D:

1. Tags: "17" is too generic, remove it please. (Keeping "Ending" is enough)
2. Folder is clean~
3. Whoa that vid <3

1. 00:04:430 (2,3,1) - I suggest to move (3) some grids right, so the spacing between (2)&(3) and (3)&(1) is the same~
2. 00:38:276 (2,1) - Woops! these objects are too close, fix this spacing please :3
3. 00:39:815 (1) - This would sound much better if you start this Kiai time using "Finish"
4. 00:54:622 (1) - tbh this slider doesn't seem easy to hit for rookies, I suggest to start this 1/2 earlier.
5. 01:00:776 (2) - ^
6. 01:09:815 (4,1) - The BPM of this song is kind of high so this kind of jumps for doesn't suit [Easy], reduce spacing please
7. 01:19:238 (2,3) - A 1/2 circle by itself is really hard to hit for beginners, it's even harder if 2 of these circles are stacked, so I suggest to remove the stack and replace those circles with a sliders. (Also the same suggestion about starting it 1/2 earlier)
8. 01:25:391 (2,3) - ^

1. Claps only during kiai ?! This is really nice diff, but it feels really empty without claps, add some during the verses please :3
2. 00:15:199 (1) - I think that this needs a "Finish" to remark the music change
3. 00:52:315 (1) - This spinner sounds better if it starts 1/2 before, (That's where "Freedom" starts)
4. 01:25:584 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to spice up this pattern with some claps too~
5. Good Job! no major complains here, just add those claps during the verses please ;_; (Some Finishes too)

1. OD and HP Drain: 6 suits better this diff, consider reducing them to 6. (-1 tick)
2. The same suggestion about claps here, there are place where you really have to use claps like: 00:30:007 (3,4) - 00:33:084 (2,3) - 00:36:161 (4,5) -
3. 00:15:199 (1) - Same as [Normal] you should start this with Finish to remark the music change.
4. 01:19:238 (1,2,3,4,5) - The lack of hitsounds is clearly noticeable for this pattern, add some please.
5. 01:25:392 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
6. Wow, I really like your patterns Haneii, good job! (again)

1. Jumpy diff, cool! it suits this song.
2. 00:49:815 (5,1) - Oh noes! this stack doesn't look or play nice, I highly suggest to unstack these sliders.
3. 00:52:122 (1) - I missed on these sliders :/ Well at least you used 0.75, but I still think that these sliders (00:58:276 (1) - 01:16:738 (1) - 01:22:892 (1) - ) are killing the great flow you created. Would you replace some of them with spinners please ?
4. 01:06:545 (1,2,3,4) - Make spacing consistent please, It will be easier to read if you use constant spacing for these jumps.
5. 01:29:238 (4) - Well, first of all I suggest to keep the consistency with the other diffs and end this diff here: 01:29:045 - , If you don't want to follow this suggestion, at least use "Finish" instead of "Clap" for the end of the map, Finish sounds way better.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Tags: "17" is too generic, remove it please. (Keeping "Ending" is enough) Okay (Always thought search would pick it up - apparently not >_<)

[Normal]

• ALL DONE

1. Claps only during kiai ?! This is really nice diff, but it feels really empty without claps, add some during the verses please :3
2. 00:15:199 (1) - I think that this needs a "Finish" to remark the music change
3. 00:52:315 (1) - This spinner sounds better if it starts 1/2 before, (That's where "Freedom" starts)
4. 01:25:584 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to spice up this pattern with some claps too~
5. Good Job! no major complains here, just add those claps during the verses please ;_; (Some Finishes too)

[Hard]

• ALL DONE

1. OD and HP Drain: 6 suits better this diff, consider reducing them to 6. (-1 tick)
2. The same suggestion about claps here, there are place where you really have to use claps like: 00:30:007 (3,4) - 00:33:084 (2,3) - 00:36:161 (4,5) -
3. 00:15:199 (1) - Same as [Normal] you should start this with Finish to remark the music change.
4. 01:19:238 (1,2,3,4,5) - The lack of hitsounds is clearly noticeable for this pattern, add some please.
5. 01:25:392 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
6. Wow, I really like your patterns Haneii, good job! (again) Thanks >///<

This is going to most played for sure, good job :3

Thanks for the star and Mod Gonzvlo

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Saten's Insane]

1. Jumpy diff, cool! it suits this song. :3
2. 00:49:815 (5,1) - Oh noes! this stack doesn't look or play nice, I highly suggest to unstack these sliders. unstacked
3. 00:52:122 (1) - I missed on these sliders :/ Well at least you used 0.75, but I still think that these sliders (00:58:276 (1) - 01:16:738 (1) - 01:22:892 (1) - ) are killing the great flow you created. Would you replace some of them with spinners please ? I dunno, I'm really against spinners, but I placed one at the final "Freeeeeeeedom"
4. 01:06:545 (1,2,3,4) - Make spacing consistent please, It will be easier to read if you use constant spacing for these jumps. This is also pretty readable though
5. 01:29:238 (4) - Well, first of all I suggest to keep the consistency with the other diffs and end this diff here: 01:29:045 - , If you don't want to follow this suggestion, at least use "Finish" instead of "Clap" for the end of the map, Finish sounds way better. placed a "Finish" at the end but "Clap" remains

loveFantasy wrote:

[Saten's Insane]
<00:05:776> (5), <00:08:853> (4), <00:11:930> (5), <00:15:007> (4)
- i think adding claps on these notes bring better sound effect / variety to your diff.
<00:30:007> (6,7) i think soft-finish fits more, also i see you using soft custom override 1 but i don't see any custom hitsounds in the folder, if there're some, please does a full submit again.
<01:04:430> (1) add a finish Added

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Weezy's Easy]

1. 00:04:430 (2,3,1) - I suggest to move (3) some grids right, so the spacing between (2)&(3) and (3)&(1) is the same~
2. 00:38:276 (2,1) - Woops! these objects are too close, fix this spacing please :3
3. 00:39:815 (1) - This would sound much better if you start this Kiai time using "Finish"
4. 00:54:622 (1) - tbh this slider doesn't seem easy to hit for rookies, I suggest to start this 1/2 earlier.
5. 01:00:776 (2) - ^
6. 01:09:815 (4,1) - The BPM of this song is kind of high so this kind of jumps for doesn't suit [Easy], reduce spacing please
7. 01:19:238 (2,3) - A 1/2 circle by itself is really hard to hit for beginners, it's even harder if 2 of these circles are stacked, so I suggest to remove the stack and replace those circles with a sliders. (Also the same suggestion about starting it 1/2 earlier) Nope on changing the circles to a slider. Aint that hard tbh :/
8. 01:25:391 (2,3) - ^ ^

loveFantasy wrote:

[Weezy's Easy]
<00:05:584> (2,3,1) make the spacing looks nicer? Fine to me
<00:39:815> (1) add finish
<00:52:122> (1) i think finish at startpoint and x at endpoint fits better Something a bit different
<00:58:276> (1) ^, same thing to two same sliders after 2nd KIAI ^
<00:54:718> this end of KIAI section is snap to a strange point, snap it to 00:52:122 as all other diff does
<01:09:815> (4,1) this spacing might confuse newbies no it isn't ._.
<01:16:752> snap this section to 01:16:738

Yunacat wrote:

Taiko Mod!!!

1) Slider velocity: In Taiko, it should generally only be 1.4 or1.6. I tried 1.6 and it works nicely. Okay
2) Turn the hitsound volume up! O: 100% is where it should be, really. Done
3) Some of the note combinations in the beginning feel strange to me. I'm not entirely sure why... o-o Okay, I'll remap so it flows better...hopefully

Aleks719 wrote:

General
Add "anime" to the tags? Don't have to since it'll be the genre once it gets ranked



Hard
00:42:315 (x) - Want to add note, but there is a slider here sorry - I like slider more (even though a note would flow better with the lyrics)
00:49:815 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo, looks better You're right, and thanks for the code
01:27:699 (4,1) - little confused antijump, but okay. Whoops, that isn't intentional. fixed spacing ^_^

Normal
Hum... Where is you hitsounds?
Especially from 00:27:315 till 00:39:622 ?Left it alone for now, I'll see how its sounds with custom slider tick hitsounds and try and make it sound more like hard
00:49:815 (3) - add clap to the 1st reverse + clap to the end done
00:51:738 (5) - add finish done

00:54:815 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Don't like this... No hitsonds...
So make all this suggestions and try (I hope it will be sounds better than nothing) Added the note and went with the claps, but I don't like how the whistles sound.


01:15:007 (4) - start it 1/2 earlier and..
01:13:661 (1,2,3,4) - imo it will be looks cool with video: LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT, THANK YOU!

kurohacker wrote:

[Saten's Insane]

0'16''738 - New combo here. done
0'51''738 - This big jump is kinda hard to read IMO, with the big slider in between slider [1] and [2]. readable imo
1'09''238 - It's kinda weird that this slider is not in the middle, with most of the other long sliders placed there. fixed

It's quite rare to find so many long sliders in an Insane (not that it's a bad thing). Nice map! lol, thanks :P

kurohacker wrote:

Hi there~

[Normal]

0'38''276 - Maybe move this to 0'38''084 instead, and stack it with [3]?
0'38''468 - You can either add a note here, or extend slider after to this to start at this point. This makes this part harder though, so this is just
For the above two: That sounds and looks okay, but I like what I currently have better

a
suggestion.
1'09''045 - Delete new combo here. Sure

Also a nice diff!

[Hard]

0'18''661 - How about rearranging the slider like this? --->[attachment=0:1a39a]freedom 1.JPG[/attachment:1a39a] Rearranged them a bit to match yours, except for that one slider - hehehe I like it facing that way
Here's the code, if you're interested:

444,148,18661,2,0,B|482:186|455:234,1,92,8|0

1'06''930 - Assuming that you're following the singer, can you add a note here? This could be a problem but I'd rather not, if you look at the first kiai I mapped it like that as well, with a space where a note would be if i was mapping to the lyrics (which technically I am...*sigh*)
1'07''699 - ^ ^
1'16''353 - Maybe add a note here? Okay
0'56''545 - You might want to add finishes to notes [1]-[3]. If not, then....
1'21''161 - You will need to remove the finishes on notes [1] - [3]. These changes help to fix the rhythm. removed ^_^


[Taiko]

Hmm, the kiai time is rather long. Maybe you should just follow the kiai time in the osu diffs.
You might also want to consider having a BG with the black name tape. Try asking the other guys at TBRT for this; I'm not really good at making them DX.
These are all suggestions, and you are free to accept them. Used all your suggestions, except for kiai time

0'03''372 [3] - d -> k. I think this and the rest of these sounds nicer this way.
0'04''334 [8] - d -> k
0'04''911 [x] - Add a d here.
0'06''449 [3] - d -> k
0'07''411 [8] - ^
0'09''526 [3] - ^
0'10''488 [8] - ^
0'12''603 [3] - ^
0'30''007 [17] - k -> K
0'30''199 [18] - d -> K. These two K's will give more impact to the claps in the song.
0'33''084 [39] & 0'33''276 [40] - Same as above two.
0'36''161 [58] & 0'36''353 [59] - ^
0'40''392 [x] - Maybe add a d here.
0'42''315 [x] - ^
1'01''930 [11] - d -> k
1'02''026 & 1'02''122 [x] - Add d's here.
1'02''699 [3] - d -> k
1'06''903 [x] - Add a d here.
1'27''315 [3] - d -> k[/box]

Sorry about the wall of text. Don't be, I love long Mods \o/
Really nice song, and the maps do compliment the song. With the video, it's just pure ecstasy XD. So, here's a star to you guys~
All the best!

HeatKai wrote:

[taiko] All done

SV = 1.4 please

00:05:392 (4) - kat
00:08:084 (12) - ^
00:39:526 (x) - add note
01:29:045 (3) - remove finish
01:29:142 (x) - add circle
01:29:238 (x) - add circle (kat)

I wonder if this one is your first taiko diff - It's my second time trying to map taiko, first one going up for rank



yeay \o/

pic

\o/ YAY!

1. The website doesn't indicate the map has a video. I don't know how important that is, but I think it should be fixed.

1. The hitsounds are rather low. I could only hear the claps.
2. 00:41:368 (3) - I expected the second repeat, but I'm not sure new players would. And the repeat is hidden by a hitburst, so I think it would be better to change this slider's orientation.
3. 00:43:676 (2) - It's a bit nazi, but you can give this slider a prettier curve (move the middle point up and right with grid snap disabled).
4. 00:52:137 (1) - If you want this to be the "freeeeeeeeeedoooooooom", it should end 1/2 earlier.
5. 00:58:291 (1) - Same.
6. 01:20:983 (6) - I expected the second repeat, but I'm not sure new players would. And the repeat is hidden by a hitburst, so I think it would be better to change this slider's orientation.
7. 01:22:906 (1) - If you want this to be the "freeeeeeeeeedoooooooom", it should end 1/2 earlier.

1. The hitsounds are too quiet here again. I could only hear the claps.
2. I find the spacing to be quite high for a Normal diff. If you want to keep it, at least make the circle size bigger so that they circles are easier to catch.
3. For all the spinners mapped on the "freeeeeeeeeedoooooooom" make them end 3/2 earlier ?
4. 01:14:830 (4) - Due to the form of the slider, I didn't see this note's approach circle at all.

1. The hitsounds are too quiet. I could only hear the clap.
2. For all the spinners mapped on the "freeeeeeeeeedoooooooom" make them end 3/2 earlier ?

1. I honestly don't like this much, it's too jumpy and I don't think it really matches the song. It plays fine though.
2. The hitsounds are really too low.
3. 01:22:906 (1) - End this 3/2 earlier so it matches the "freeeeeeeeeedoooooooom"

Odaril wrote:

General

1. The website doesn't indicate the map has a video. I don't know how important that is, but I think it should be fixed.

It did this constantly with the bg too. The thumbnail would be blank but the bg still downloaded for everyone. I waited a couple days and it came back. I'll wait a day before I post a complaint.

Normal

1. The hitsounds are too quiet here again. I could only hear the claps. Other hitsound's are meant to be faint (in normal and hard). Any louder and they overpower the song imo.
2. I find the spacing to be quite high for a Normal diff. If you want to keep it, at least make the circle size bigger so that they circles are easier to catch. Sorry, this is just how I prefer my normals (I actually find normals easier when spacing allows them to be spread out). If this were the easiest diff I might have considered it. Furthermore, this mapset is meant to be "jumpy" - Normal doesn't have actual jumps but I hope beginners can still get the same pumped up feeling as the harder diffs since they'll still be moving further around the screen.
3. For all the spinners mapped on the "freeeeeeeeeedoooooooom" make them end 3/2 earlier ? The singer holds on to/extends that last note. I want the spinner to end on "mm" sound at the ending of freedom.
4. 01:14:830 (4) - Due to the form of the slider, I didn't see this note's approach circle at all.Fixed this by giving the following slider a new combo

Hard Same answers as in Normal

1. The hitsounds are too quiet. I could only hear the clap.
2. For all the spinners mapped on the "freeeeeeeeeedoooooooom" make them end 3/2 earlier ?

Taiko
Make the OD 5 ? ;~; LOL. Sorry, it stays at 6. I've seen quite a few ppl play this and nearly fc it on their first try, making me feel i mapped it too easy (I don't even call it Oni because I don't think its hard enough). I'm actually more tempted to increase OD XD.

Odaril wrote:

Weezy's Easy

1. The hitsounds are rather low. I could only hear the claps. Claps are suppose to stand out more, and same reason listed before
2. 00:41:368 (3) - I expected the second repeat, but I'm not sure new players would. And the repeat is hidden by a hitburst, so I think it would be better to change this slider's orientation.
3. 00:43:676 (2) - It's a bit nazi, but you can give this slider a prettier curve (move the middle point up and right with grid snap disabled).
4. 00:52:137 (1) - If you want this to be the "freeeeeeeeeedoooooooom", it should end 1/2 earlier.
5. 00:58:291 (1) - Same.
6. 01:20:983 (6) - I expected the second repeat, but I'm not sure new players would. And the repeat is hidden by a hitburst, so I think it would be better to change this slider's orientation.
7. 01:22:906 (1) - If you want this to be the "freeeeeeeeeedoooooooom", it should end 1/2 earlier.

Odaril wrote:

Saten's Insane

1. I honestly don't like this much, it's too jumpy and I don't think it really matches the song. It plays fine though. I think it does. I'm changing history here yo' (lol)
2. The hitsounds are really too low. increased with 10%
3. 01:22:906 (1) - End this 3/2 earlier so it matches the "freeeeeeeeeedoooooooom" Same as Haneii

ouranhshc wrote:

Hard
00:10:983 (5) - new combo for consistency Hai
00:57:330 (3) - nazimake symmetrical to (1)? ofc
01:03:483 (N) - add a note here? Naw

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Wait, did you fix da taiko up?

Weezy wrote:

:O wow that was fast no fair Haneii >:T