sato9d wrote:

我来献丑了（笑

[bun bun]
00:16:186 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个节奏让我想到加速
01:00:616 (6) - 前段蓄劲半速已经用够了，我觉得不应该再用了
01:07:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 喂这难度也是Insane么。。
01:27:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 如果用音乐的那个紧点的节奏下note我想会更美
01:41:248 (4) - 我想改。。比如去掉半速，01:41:629在前面的滑条头端放个note之类

[Insane]
00:10:300 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 就开始的一段就感觉节奏感违和，其他的各种也感觉表现力不足，节奏之间的衔接等；你可以尝试找LKs的map取经
00:23:021 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 挺讨厌这样的。。除非音乐本身节奏就是如此强烈
00:26:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:53:781 - 高潮段你怎能空着
01:04:793 (1,2,3,4) - 4个都一样感觉单调了点，是我意识过剩么？
01:29:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这段不应该出现这样的拍子吧。。

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Artist: Kanon Nakagawa http://kaminomi.wikia.com/wiki/Kanon_Nakagawa
  
  Offset: -8ms
  
  The current mp3 file is 320Kbps, and it needs to convert to 192Kbps.
  
  Also the video needs to resize too...I remember the max size is 640*480?
  
  BG resize?

[Normal]

Try to use clap at 2nd and 4th white line? For example, 00:00:996 (3) - clap at 1st, 3rd, 5th repeat. 00:13:528 (1) - clap at beginning 00:18:844 (2) - clap.

• 00:22:262 (1,2,3) - Confusing stacking...move 3 to here?
  SPOILER

  
  00:33:274-00:40:869 (T) - map this part with 0.5X BPM?
  00:52:642 (1,1) - clap at repeat?
  00:57:009 (3) - Shape is kinda ugly...make a better shape?
  01:07:452 (1) - Shorten 1/2 beat and Move 1/2 beat forward? And add a note at 01:07:452?
  01:10:869 (1) - Extend the spinner to 01:13:338?
  01:37:452 (3,1) - Spacing
  01:57:199 (1,2) - Unreadable sliders...sigh
  
  SPOILER

  

[bun bun]

• 00:08:021 (4) - New combo (or remove new combo of 00:09:540 (1)?)
  00:12:958 (5) - Sounds too quiet...maybe use this whistle with normal-hit?
  00:28:907 (4) - Remove clap end?
  00:48:844 (7) - Clap end?
  00:49:983 (2) - Clap?
  00:50:743 (1) - Clap begin?
  01:01:376 (7) - ^
  01:08:305 (6) - Remove this note?
  01:08:400 (1) - ^
  01:30:426 (6) - Reduce the volume for 10%?
  01:32:514 (9) - Normal-whistle?
  01:42:009 (1,2,3,4,5) - Increase the spacing between 01:42:515 (2,3,4,5) ?

[Insane]

Begin this diff at 00:00:237?

Also why not spread the notes rather than center them? Really hard to read...

Feel overmapped...

• 00:10:110 (T) - add a note?
  00:53:306 (4) - Remove this?
  00:54:825 (4) - ^
  01:03:274 (1) - Nice, but unrankable... :3
  01:59:477 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - T_T...
  [attachment=0:6c831].jpg[/attachment:6c831]

这难度的排版你叫我怎么吐槽..就连dj婆婆也不这么摆note了啊...
note摆的太小气了..遮挡问题严重 读图困难 真的没必要..

=w= Star~

1. I used to see this skin in 'False&Trues - False and Trues' by S i R i R u, do you just copied it from that mapset? if you do, you should ask for permission at first.
2. hitcircleselect.png absolutely unused image, remove this and full submit.
3. comboburst.png resize this to make the width less than 500 pixels.
4. you need a approachcircle.png for the custom skin

1. stack leniency +2, the slider and circles are stacking ugly
2. +38 ms to all your inherited sections
3. 01:03:218 (1) - add 1 note here and start the spinner at 01:03:313

1. 00:17:079 (5) - new combo for slowdown
2. 00:18:408 (8) - ^
3. 00:57:902 (9) - ^
4. 01:38:155 (8) - ^

1. 01:25:244 (T) - cancel the break
2. +95 ms to all your inherited sections

Saten ruiko wrote:

[insane] mod in irc
[bun bun]
00:12:902 (5) - 這哨音很奇怪
00:25:054 (3) - clap?
00:27:902 (1) - 取消哨音改成clap感覺比較好
00:30:180 (7) - 加上哨音?
前面有幾格0.5感覺很怪
[Normal]
00:23:725 (3) -00:24:484結束
00:24:864 (?) - +note and clap
00:52:586 (1,2,1,2) - 改成http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48940這樣的節奏 不是排列
01:41:953 (1,2) - ^

nice map and star

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. I used to see this skin in 'False&Trues - False and Trues' by S i R i R u, do you just copied it from that mapset? if you do, you should ask for permission at first.
2. hitcircleselect.png absolutely unused image, remove this and full submit.
3. comboburst.png resize this to make the width less than 500 pixels.
4. you need a approachcircle.png for the custom skin

[Insane]:

1. stack leniency +2, the slider and circles are stacking ugly
2. +38 ms to all your inherited sections
3. 01:03:218 (1) - add 1 note here and start the spinner at 01:03:313

[bun bun]:

1. 00:17:079 (5) - new combo for slowdown
2. 00:18:408 (8) - ^
3. 00:57:902 (9) - ^
4. 01:38:155 (8) - ^

[Normal]:

1. 01:25:244 (T) - cancel the break
2. +95 ms to all your inherited sections

nice work

都是建议啊:

• 
  当前的offset没有对齐重音 要对齐重音的话用offset -578
  不过我看从01: 26:763开始重音又变了 要对齐的话 还要在01: 26:763加一根红线
  另外建议Kiai Time都统一一下 我建议：
  00:46:510---01:10:813 01:38:915---01:51:067 在这些地方加Kiai Time

• 
  00:11:573 (3,1): 距离有点近
  00:46:510 (1): 开头+finish
  01:07:206 (1): 不太美观啊- - 建议对称一下
  01:09:199 01:47:934 : 貌似这些绿线没用
  01:10:054 (4): 建议去掉这个Clap
  01:10:813 (1): 转盘延长一拍
  01:26:763-01:32:459 : 建议这一段的间距缩小一下
  01:38:915 (1): 开头+Finish
  01:47:839 : 转盘从这开始
  01:59:421 (2,3): 在这两个Slider的开头和结尾+Finish

• 
  00:27:237 00:44:991 01:01:699 01:41:573 01:41:953 01:44:611 : 貌似这些绿线没用
  00:05:877 (8): Clap
  00:13:472 (1): 开头+Clap
  00:30:370 (8): 这个Clap在这里不合适
  00:31:510 (1): Slider缩短一拍
  00:46:510 (1): 开头+finish
  01:05:686 (3,4): 距离有点近
  01:07:396 (7): 这里+Clap
  01:25:244 (1): 这个转盘可以提前一下 比如在01:25:054开始
  01:38:915 (1): 开头+Finish
  02:00:181 (4): 开头结尾加Finish

• 
  00:24:294 : 这里要加个Circle 防止有人误解把后面的Circle提前点了
  00:25:244 (1,2,3,4): 这间距… 不误导人才怪
  00:27:332 : 这里也是 加个Circle
  00:29:801 (7): 建议去掉这个Clap
  00:33:408 : 这个Break过渡的不自然
  00:46:510 (1): 开头+Finish 另外第一次玩不太容易看清Slider的轨迹 建议把开始和结尾拖得远一点
  00:50:687 (1,2): 这个跳没大有必要
  01:30:181 (1): 结尾+whistle 后面的whistle去掉
  01:35:877 : 这根绿线貌似没用
  01:38:915 (1): Finish
  01:40:813 (5): Clap
  01:54:010 : 没用的绿线（包括前面那根好像也没什么用
  01:55:813 (4): 结尾+Clap
  02:00:181 (3): 建议把Clap都换成Finish

• - 棒棒棒!
  - 沒有其他tags嗎@@? 比如這歌的角色名...
  - 這BG大小..1024*768/800*600/640*480
  - 加一個pause-overlay?
  - menu-back.png 無用, 刪掉後full submit
  - custom clap 太響了...可以試試這個, 再把整體音量都上調20

• 00:33:598, 00:33:978, 00:34:358 - 各補note? 或者把Break拖到00:34:358 - 開始(上方時間軸拖拉)
  01:03:218 (4) - 結尾去clap
  01:05:307 (2,3) - 可以考慮在開頭clap
  01:06:826 (4) - 同考慮clap
  01:07:206 (1) - 拉後一拍開始, 01:07:206 - 補circle, 01:09:294 (2) - 刪
  01:49:548 (1) - whistle?
  
  clap的下法意見同許哥...確實亂
  
  
  
  bun bun
  [list:eac06]- Lead in 改成1500

• - stack是故意拉到右二格的嗎@@?

impossiblexu wrote:

闲的没事做的太鼓难度：

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[attachment=0:d85bb]Kanon Nakagawa - LOVE KANON (ken710) [impossiblexu's Taiko].osu[/attachment:d85bb]

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（希望还能说得过去哈

Leorda wrote:

impossiblexu's Taiko
00:06:637 (4) - Do not put big don here. It's unrankable for taiko Fixed
00:07:016 (7) - ^ Fixed
00:10:054 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:16:130 (9) - ^ Fixed
00:44:991 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Replace to this? http://puu.sh/1oav
01:11:478 (5) - Remove this, it's no good if this place before spinner immediately Removed
01:26:763 (T) - Remove this red timing section. You can change the speed in green timing sections Removed
01:51:731 (5) - Remove this, it's no good if this place before spinner immediately Removed

Alace wrote:

<Taiko>
如果是專作太鼓難度的話,ooO這種1/4夾大圈的case通常是不會使用
另外我剛作太鼓時也碰到差不多的情況,節奏下的跟osu的map沒有太
多的差別,map了一段時間大概就會找到太鼓跟osu節奏上的一些小小
差異了,太鼓可以打一些自創的節奏,用比較複雜的音效下法,當然前提
是要能合音樂 XD 受教了 XD

impossiblexu wrote:

SPOILER

Leorda wrote:

impossiblexu's Taiko
[spoilerbox]00:06:637 (4) - Do not put big don here. It's unrankable for taiko Fixed
00:07:016 (7) - ^ Fixed
00:10:054 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:16:130 (9) - ^ Fixed
00:44:991 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Replace to this? http://puu.sh/1oav
01:11:478 (5) - Remove this, it's no good if this place before spinner immediately Removed
01:26:763 (T) - Remove this red timing section. You can change the speed in green timing sections Removed
01:51:731 (5) - Remove this, it's no good if this place before spinner immediately Removed

Alace wrote:

<Taiko>
如果是專作太鼓難度的話,ooO這種1/4夾大圈的case通常是不會使用
另外我剛作太鼓時也碰到差不多的情況,節奏下的跟osu的map沒有太
多的差別,map了一段時間大概就會找到太鼓跟osu節奏上的一些小小
差異了,太鼓可以打一些自創的節奏,用比較複雜的音效下法,當然前提
是要能合音樂 XD 受教了 XD

Thanks you very much

arien666 wrote:

[impossiblexu's Taiko]
SV 1.4 is prefered ;_; It seems too close ;_; Changed
If possible, do not abuse Finish into every big points :3 Removed a lot
00:00:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kakakat kakakat :3? Changed
00:07:396 (2) - kat?
00:08:156 (2) - ^
00:08:915 (2) - ^
00:09:675 (2) - ^
00:15:940 (7,8,9) - NEVER USE 1/4 FINISH [This is important] Removed
00:16:890 (1) - Delete finish Deleted
00:17:459 (4) - Big kat? Changed
00:29:042 (1) - Delete finish Deleted
00:29:611 (5) - Big kat? Changed
00:46:510 ~ 01:13:852 - Add Kiai Added
01:03:219 (6) - kat?
01:14:232 - Fill something ;_; Added
01:38:915 ~ 01:57:143 - Add Kiai Added
01:43:282 (5) - kat?
01:54:104 (1) - Delete finish
01:54:485 (3) - kat
01:55:244 (2) - ^
01:56:003 (2) - ^



Actually, Taiko is for first time mapping right?Sorry for my bad mapping
Good luck on mapping anyway :3
Thank you very much

1. Your Normal is in my opinion too hard. You'll need an Easy diff.

1. For the beginning (until 00:07:016 (1) - ) you really should reduce the spacing to 1.00x. Jumps in the easiest diff of a mapset isn't a good idea to me, but jumps right at the beginning of it ? On top of that, I found the spacing to be quite confusing and was surprised to see they were 1/1.
2. 00:22:206 (1) - This slider's repeat is hidden by the previous slider.
3. 00:40:813 (1,2,1,1) - The spacing suddenly switches to 0,8x. Is there a reason ? Also, the two first sliders overlap in a bad way.
4. 01:07:586 (1) - The 1/2 here surprised me, because you've been using 1/1 for a long time, and suddenly throw in a 1/2.
5. 01:26:763 (1,2,3) - Them being stacked made the timing confusing to me, so I think you should unstack them.
6. 01:57:143 (1,2) - These two sliders overlap in a bad way.

1. This doesn't play like a Hard at all. There are too many streams, too many jumps, too many added beats, and the spacing is sometimes too surprising and confusing to read. Not to mention the 1/3 that's placed in jumps...
2. Rename to Nana's Hard Insane ?
3. 00:02:839 (4,1) - Why a jump here ?
4. 00:04:737 (4,7) - Add new comboes to make the spacing more readable at least.
5. 00:13:092 (1) - I was quite surprised to discover this was a slider. The slider is hidden by hitbursts...
6. 01:01:699 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This 1/3 is very surprising (it does fit the song), so I'd suggest spacing it normally to make it easier to read. On top of that, (1) and (2) almost have the same spacing as (2) and (3), so you really should change it.
7. 01:46:699 (7,1) - Why a jump here ?
8. 01:59:042 (7,1) - Why a jump here ?

1. 00:23:155 (7,8,9) - Surprising triple.

Numbers 596108 wrote:

Mod Request from ken710 (From 596108's Mod Queue)

Before mod please read the meaning represented by the color

Color Help

Red -> Recommended
Orange -> Must to Fixed
Green -> Currect
Blue -> Don't fixed it...
Purple -> If you fixed the one,please fixed the pattern

Taiko

Timing :

00:00:-578 158.00 BPM - N - -> OK
00:46:510 1.0x - K - -> OK
01:10:814 1.0x - N - -> Currect to 01:12:333
01:26:668 0.5x - N - -> Remove
01:26:763 0.5x - N - -> OK
01:32:744 0.75x - N - -> Currect to 01:32:839
01:35:687 1.0x - N - -> Currect to 01:35:877
01:38:914 1.0x - K - -> OK
01:51:066 1.0x - N - -> Currect to 01:51:827
02:00:223 158.00 BPM - N - -> Nice to set

Notes :

SPOILER

00:03:599 (3) -
00:07:016 (1) -
00:07:586 (4) -
00:08:346 (3) -
00:09:105 (3) -
00:15:561 (5,6) -
00:27:143 (3) -
00:44:991 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Remove
00:44:991 (X) - Add
00:45:276 (X) - Add
00:45:561 (X) - Add
00:45:751 (X) - Add
00:46:035 (X) - Add
00:46:320 (X) - Add
01:38:155 (1) -
01:38:535 (3) -

Others :

Song Difficulty -
HP Drain Rate - 7 -> OK
Circle Size - 5 -> Max
Approach Rate - 5 -> Max
Overall Difficulty - 5 -> 3~4

Fixed some Thanks a lot~

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game
thanks
General

1. Your Normal is in my opinion too hard. You'll need an Easy diff.ok...

Normal

1. For the beginning (until 00:07:016 (1) - ) you really should reduce the spacing to 1.00x. Jumps in the easiest diff of a mapset isn't a good idea to me, but jumps right at the beginning of it ? On top of that, I found the spacing to be quite confusing and was surprised to see they were 1/1. ok, fixed
2. 00:22:206 (1) - This slider's repeat is hidden by the previous slider. ^
3. 00:40:813 (1,2,1,1) - The spacing suddenly switches to 0,8x. Is there a reason ? Also, the two first sliders overlap in a bad way. ^
4. 01:07:586 (1) - The 1/2 here surprised me, because you've been using 1/1 for a long time, and suddenly throw in a 1/2. ^
5. 01:26:763 (1,2,3) - Them being stacked made the timing confusing to me, so I think you should unstack them. I like it, but you are right. fixed
6. 01:57:143 (1,2) - These two sliders overlap in a bad way.ok, fixed

Nana

1. This doesn't play like a Hard at all. There are too many streams, too many jumps, too many added beats, and the spacing is sometimes too surprising and confusing to read. Not to mention the 1/3 that's placed in jumps...
2. Rename to Nana's Hard Insane ?
3. 00:02:839 (4,1) - Why a jump here ?I don't know, and NanaDesu will not fix [Nana]. So
   I'll fix them. fixed
4. 00:04:737 (4,7) - Add new comboes to make the spacing more readable at least. fixed
5. 00:13:092 (1) - I was quite surprised to discover this was a slider. The slider is hidden by hitbursts...^
6. 01:01:699 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This 1/3 is very surprising (it does fit the song), so I'd suggest spacing it normally to make it easier to read. On top of that, (1) and (2) almost have the same spacing as (2) and (3), so you really should change it.reduce the spacing to 1.00x, it's better?
7. 01:46:699 (7,1) - Why a jump here ? ^
8. 01:59:042 (7,1) - Why a jump here ? ^

all fixed, and easier(?)
in my opinion the degree of difficulty is relative
so renamed [Nana] to [Nana's Hard]



Insane
Too many added 1/4s to my taste, really.

1. 00:23:155 (7,8,9) - Surprising triple.I think it is acceptable

impossiblexu's Taiko
seems fine

mjw5150 wrote:

-random modding for thorlee's gay friend, yeah!

[General]
有些绿线没对齐,改不改无所谓 done

[Easy]
没找出什么.....

[Normal]
01:07:586 (1) - 这个slider有点粗制滥造的感觉啊(相对于其他的来说
其實它並不醜.

[Nana's Hard]
感觉3围小了点,试试OD+1到2,HD+1?爲了簡單一點.其實不太想加高，再考慮.
00:15:750 (1) - 在slider开头+clap？fixed
00:52:586(1) - 这个slider在00:52:871 结束(感觉这样比较对的上vocal~是有比較對上，不過打起來還是原本的比較單純，所以暫時先不改
00:54:104 (5) - 这个slider在00:54:390 结束(感觉这样比较对的上vocal~^
00:56:953 (1) - 把2删掉,把1延长到00:57:333,然后00:57:523+个note?^
01:09:675 (2) - +clap?附近都沒下音效，突然多一個感覺有點怪怪的
01:54:295 (1) - +个note?好像是要配合後面，暫時先不改
01:35:497(9) - +finish?fixed
01:35:877(1) - 在slider开头+finish?^
01:36:447(2) - +finish?^
01:37:205 (5) - 在slider开头+finish?^
01:45:370 (3) - 在slider结尾+finish?^
01:46:890 (1) - ^應該是開頭 fixed

[Insane]
堆叠系数是不是太高了点?低一點堆疊會不好看.
00:30:086 - +个note?這裡還是不知道怎麼下好.還是喜歡原本這樣
00:50:687 (1) - 删掉,然后把后面的slider提前到这里,再在00:51:257+个note?(感觉这样比较对的上vocal~好主意!不過改了之後好像有遮擋問題..看看這樣能接受不
01:26:763(1,2,3,4) - 没完全挡住?还是故意不挡的么~恩.擋住好像疊的不好看.所以就這樣了

好给力的转盘皮肤lol 不要說這麼害羞的話
star~謝謝

littlecar3370 wrote:

肯肯沒問題的(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆

gdeath wrote:

I found some tiny stuff, but all of them are just too nazi and I dont wanna be picky.
So, all fine to me. Have my star.

abalee wrote:

comboburst is bigger than the template skin.
fixed, 388x500 that's ok?
Hard:
Kiai time in middle seems too long, consider to shorten it.
fixed

thanks a lot

D87874912 wrote:

0..0 我絕對不是在GOOGLE搜尋小車車神觸找到這張譜的

160,280,55624,2,0,B|128:346|3:301|53:178|124:199,2,239.999980926514

SPOILER

224,100,67586,2,0,B|88:156|132:372|380:372|424:156|288:100,1,539.999957084657,0|0

SPOILER