This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月31日 at 下午 09:19:34

Artist: Nico Nico Chorus
Title: Mami-san's Theme
Source: Puella Magi Madoka Magica
Tags: AceproCX Tomoe Mami Mahou Shoujo Nico Nico Douga
BPM: 135.92
Filesize: 10748kb
Play Time: 02:55
Difficulties Available:

1. CX's Hard (4.89 stars, 420 notes)
2. Easy (2.33 stars, 194 notes)
3. Tiro Finale (4.99 stars, 502 notes)

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - Mami-san's Theme
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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GOGO~

change the .osb filename please, its the culprit of making this failed to be imported

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[下午 06:19:01] Index: 說好的互相擦背呢

Fix

Finale:
Move 00:09:103 (1,2,3,4,5) >> 00:08:671 - should be 1/8 spacing IMO
00:15:725 (9,1,1) - Uneven Spacing
00:23:892 (5,6,7) - Uneven Spacing
00:28:527 (1) - End with Clap?
01:04:062 (1) - End with Clap?


[For Even Spacing Suggestion?]:
00:30:292 (1,3) - Move to x: 352 y: 112
00:29:851 (1,2,1) - Move to x: 352 y: 272
00:31:175 (2) - Move to x: 224 y: 312
00:31:396 (3) - Move to x: 248 y: 192
00:31:617 (1,2) - Move to x: 120 y: 208
00:41:990 (1) - Move to x: 424 y: 216
00:42:432 (3) - Move to x: 304 y: 304
00:42:873 (2,3,4) - Move to x: 184 y: 248
01:30:990 (4,5,6) - Move to x: 128 y: 56
02:01:228 (6) - Move to x: 376 y: 296
02:03:656 (9) - Move to x: 376 y: 232
02:13:147 (3) - Move to x: 384 y: 96
02:13:368 (4,5) - Move to x: 360 y: 264
02:13:809 (6,7,8) - Move to x: 224 y: 320
02:14:251 (9) - Move to x: 120 y: 216
02:18:444 (3,4) - Move it, Its kinda Ugly IMO

A lot more spacing maybe needs to be fixed

(′ω ‵)つ☆

Fix Thx

CX's Hard

remove the claps in the beginning, they are really too loud! Also lower the volume to 50% or so
Maybe start using them in the chorus.

Please use the same clap pattern for the whole map. (2,4) ?
you are using (1,3) at most parts, so just shift them 1 white tick.

I can mod your hitsounds in detail if you want, just catch me ingame


Also, can I make a guestdiff? (hard/insane if possible D:)

happy30 wrote:

CX's Hard

remove the claps in the beginning, they are really too loud! Also lower the volume to 50% or so
Maybe start using them in the chorus.

Please use the same clap pattern for the whole map. (2,4) ?
you are using (1,3) at most parts, so just shift them 1 white tick.

I can mod your hitsounds in detail if you want, just catch me ingame

Also, can I make a guestdiff? (hard/insane if possible D:)

Of course ok

And I will fix as soon as possible. Thx

I like it :3 star~

CX's Hard
00:45:310 (1,2,3) - maybe copy-paste 00:44:427 (1,2,3) and ctrl+h? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/77752

Tiro Finale
00:05:581 (1,2,3,4) - just suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/77746
00:24:121 (6) - stack with 00:23:459 (3)
00:27:432 (6,3,4,5) - stack?
00:30:081 (2,1) - ^
00:32:959 (1,3) - ^
00:51:490 (1,2,3,4) - copy paste one slider and use ctrl+h,j
00:55:905 (6,1) - stack
01:18:859 (4,5) - just suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/77749
01:20:625 (6,1) - stack and etc.
02:46:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - make this easier\slowing? Following the music

Hellzero wrote:

CX's Hard
00:45:310 (1,2,3) - maybe copy-paste 00:44:427 (1,2,3) and ctrl+h? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/77752
fix
Tiro Finale
00:05:581 (1,2,3,4) - just suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/77746
00:24:121 (6) - stack with 00:23:459 (3)
00:27:432 (6,3,4,5) - stack?
00:30:081 (2,1) - ^
00:32:959 (1,3) - ^
00:51:490 (1,2,3,4) - copy paste one slider and use ctrl+h,j
00:55:905 (6,1) - stack
01:18:859 (4,5) - just suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/77749
01:20:625 (6,1) - stack and etc.
All fix
02:46:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - make this easier\slowing? Following the music umm... I want to stay the same. If other modders think here is weird. I will fix

Thx mod

★★★★★

99% based on test plays...Here's what I have

BPM Offset
135.920 2055
135.920 9088
135.920 55030
135.920 109751
135.920 116800

Emperical timing = = just worth a try...OTL...

Title: Mami-san's Battle Theme (? since the original name is マミさんの戦闘テーマ ?)
Artist: ... Nico Nico Chorus (?)

Nice song btw. Star

/me is doing random modding searching for maps related to Madoka Magica~
ξ( ✿❛ ‿❛)ξ <3
LOL here are some suggestions~

[Overall]
The timing seems wrong, maybe there are multiple parts with different BPMs?

[Easy]
00:02:932 (3) - 2nd point: x:328 y:120
00:04:698 (6) - 2nd point: x:224 y:272
00:11:761 (5) - 2nd point: x:144 y:312
00:13:085 (1) - 2nd point: x:320 y:224
00:55:905 (2) - Delete New Combo
01:25:922 (1) - ^
01:54:174 (1) - ^
01:55:940 (2) - ^
01:57:706 (1) - ^ and Move 1 grid to the right
02:47:147 (1) - Delete New Combo

[CX's Hard]
Acceptable IMO

[Tiro Finale]
00:15:734 (1) - New Combo
00:16:175 (2) - Delete New Combo
00:53:256 (1,1,1) - Finish?
02:04:548 (3) - 2nd point: x:208 y:80

Star~!

Selee wrote:

99% based on test plays...Here's what I have

BPM Offset
135.920 2055
135.920 9088
135.920 55030
135.920 109751
135.920 116800

Emperical timing = = just worth a try...OTL...

Title: Mami-san's Battle Theme (? since the original name is マミさんの戦闘テーマ ?)
I will change Mami-san's Theme. I don't want to change Mami-san's Battle Theme. I think that Mami-san's Theme sound better
Artist: ... Nico Nico Chorus (?)
Fix. and add Nico Nico Douga to tags
Nice song btw. Star

Thx timing help

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

/me is doing random modding searching for maps related to Madoka Magica~
ξ( ✿❛ ‿❛)ξ <3 ξ( ＞◡・)▄︻▇▇〓
LOL here are some suggestions~

[Overall]
The timing seems wrong, maybe there are multiple parts with different BPMs? I think the same,but I can't find the BPMs

[Easy]
00:02:932 (3) - 2nd point: x:328 y:120
00:04:698 (6) - 2nd point: x:224 y:272
00:11:761 (5) - 2nd point: x:144 y:312
00:13:085 (1) - 2nd point: x:320 y:224
00:55:905 (2) - Delete New Combo
01:25:922 (1) - ^
01:54:174 (1) - ^
01:55:940 (2) - ^
01:57:706 (1) - ^ and Move 1 grid to the right
02:47:147 (1) - Delete New Combo

[CX's Hard]
Acceptable IMO

[Tiro Finale]
00:15:734 (1) - New Combo
00:16:175 (2) - Delete New Combo
00:53:256 (1,1,1) - Finish?
02:04:548 (3) - 2nd point: x:208 y:80

Star~!

All fix Thx mod

ξ( <ゝ ‿❛)ξ
もう何も恐くない~！
加油~！

★

ξ( ＞◡・)▄︻┻┳═一 －
All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[General]
Timing is off in the later parts. Please use Selee's timing. It feels much better for me. Don't forget to resnap all diffs after you apply the timing.

Selee wrote:

BPM Offset
135.920 2055
135.920 9088
135.920 55030
135.920 109751
135.920 116800

Each line = 1 Timing Point (red line). Remember to apply on ALL diffs.

[Easy]
01:11:360 (2) - this hidden note is quite hard for beginners.
01:21:513 (1) - imperfect stack, right 1 grid
01:24:162 (4) - left 1 grid
01:27:693 (4) - stack with 01:25:927 (2)
Others fine for me...

[CX's Hard]
...Why circle size is smaller than [Tiro Finale]? CS-1?
00:06:027 - 00:06:910 - add note?
00:07:352 (1) - use normal hitsounds for the end of this slider and 00:09:008 (2) ?
00:17:946 - 00:18:829 - add note?
00:22:581 (2) - remove whistle on repeat
00:23:464 - add note?
00:28:099 - 00:28:982 - ^
00:31:189 (5) - spacing. quite noticeable
00:58:779 - add note?
01:02:090 (1) - remove clap and add whistle on repeat?
01:08:491 (2) - remove clap on repeat
01:28:135 - 01:29:900 - add note?
01:16:105 - ^
01:49:323 (1) - I can't understand the purpose of this slider being shaped like this 0.0 replace with an ordinary one?

[Tiro Finale]
00:02:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If these are meant to be equilateral triangles, I suggest you make a perfect one and then Copy+Paste+Rotate for the rest.
00:29:945 - add note here?
00:50:362 (6) - left 2 grids
00:54:776 - 00:54:886 - add notes because the reverse cymbal had already started, add new combo on the first one and use normal hitsounds for 00:54:776 (1,2,3).
00:55:140 (2) - remove this note if you had done the note adding before.
01:03:417 (5) - whistle?
01:07:942 (4) - move to 01:08:162 ?
01:36:524 (5) - weird spacing... consider stack with 01:36:083 (3) ?
01:55:048 (2) - up about 3.5 grids so that it hides under 01:54:386 (8) perfectly.
02:17:216 (4) - move to 02:16:995 ?
02:22:182 (4,5,6) - left 2 grids up 2 grids for hiding (5) under 02:21:078 (8)
02:23:948 (8) - move closer to or stack with 02:22:844 (2)?
02:30:569 (3) - imperfect stack... move 1 grid up please
02:41:164 (3,4) - move closer to or stack with 02:40:502 (7) ?

Star

Cirno wrote:

ξ( ＞◡・)▄︻┻┳═一 － マミ
All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[General]
Timing is off in the later parts. Please use Selee's timing. It feels much better for me. Don't forget to resnap all diffs after you apply the timing.

Selee wrote:

BPM Offset
135.920 2055
135.920 9088
135.920 55030
135.920 109751
135.920 116800

Each line = 1 Timing Point (red line). Remember to apply on ALL diffs.　OTZ.. 我以為是選一條放就好 fix

[Easy]
01:11:360 (2) - this hidden note is quite hard for beginners.
01:21:513 (1) - imperfect stack, right 1 grid
01:24:162 (4) - left 1 grid
01:27:693 (4) - stack with 01:25:927 (2)
Others fine for me...
Fix

[CX's Hard]
...Why circle size is smaller than [Tiro Finale]? CS-1?
00:06:027 - 00:06:910 - add note?
00:07:352 (1) - use normal hitsounds for the end of this slider and 00:09:008 (2) ?
00:17:946 - 00:18:829 - add note?
00:22:581 (2) - remove whistle on repeat
00:23:464 - add note?
00:28:099 - 00:28:982 - ^
00:31:189 (5) - spacing. quite noticeable
00:58:779 - add note?
01:02:090 (1) - remove clap and add whistle on repeat?
01:08:491 (2) - remove clap on repeat
01:28:135 - 01:29:900 - add note?
01:16:105 - ^
01:49:323 (1) - I can't understand the purpose of this slider being shaped like this 0.0 replace with an ordinary one?

add notes.circle size.slider的地方會先記在心裡，考慮看看
其他地方都修正了

[Tiro Finale]
00:02:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If these are meant to be equilateral triangles, I suggest you make a perfect one and then Copy+Paste+Rotate for the rest.
00:29:945 - add note here?
00:50:362 (6) - left 2 grids
00:54:776 - 00:54:886 - add notes because the reverse cymbal had already started, add new combo on the first one and use normal hitsounds for 00:54:776 (1,2,3).
00:55:140 (2) - remove this note if you had done the note adding before.
01:03:417 (5) - whistle?
01:07:942 (4) - move to 01:08:162 ?
Fix
01:36:524 (5) - weird spacing... consider stack with 01:36:083 (3) ? 考慮看看 假如再有其他人提到，就修改
01:55:048 (2) - up about 3.5 grids so that it hides under 01:54:386 (8) perfectly.
02:17:216 (4) - move to 02:16:995 ?
02:22:182 (4,5,6) - left 2 grids up 2 grids for hiding (5) under 02:21:078 (8)
02:23:948 (8) - move closer to or stack with 02:22:844 (2)?
02:30:569 (3) - imperfect stack... move 1 grid up please
02:41:164 (3,4) - move closer to or stack with 02:40:502 (7) ?

Fix

Star

Thx Mod 話說忘記請你用中文Mod

Hi there~
Here's the mods that you've asked:

[General]
I would suggest that you use 4 combo colours instead of 3, since this is a 4/4 time signature song.

[Easy]
Try Approach Rate+2.

0'47''051 - Add a whistle at the beginning.
0'53''673 - Maybe add finishes to the whole slider, to match the choir's climax?

A really nice diff!

[CX's Hard]
1'20''191 - Add a clap at the reverse of the slider.
1'28''579 - Add a clap here.

[Tiro Finale]
I can't find anything major. This one is fun to watch and listen. (I can't play Insanes T.T)

The maps are really nice, and I enjoy modding them, so one star to you guys~
All the best!

kurohacker wrote:

Hi there~
Here's the mods that you've asked:

[General]
I would suggest that you use 4 combo colours instead of 3, since this is a 4/4 time signature song.
Consider.If someone refer it again,I will add

[Easy]
Try Approach Rate+2. Just +1 I am afraid this will too difficult for beginners

0'47''051 - Add a whistle at the beginning.
0'53''673 - Maybe add finishes to the whole slider, to match the choir's climax?

A really nice diff!

Fix

[CX's Hard]
1'20''191 - Add a clap at the reverse of the slider.
1'28''579 - Add a clap here.

Fix

[Tiro Finale]
I can't find anything major. This one is fun to watch and listen. (I can't play Insanes T.T)

The maps are really nice, and I enjoy modding them, so one star to you guys~
All the best!
Thx

Thx mod

hello~

this is just some suggestions

[General ]

Go to File> Open Song Folder and why you have 2 OSB ? remove it pleasse

[easy]

lmfao epic nice diff

[CX's hard]


00:35:574 (3) - Stack with 00:33:808 (1)? if you do this fix spacing 00:36:236 (4,5)
01:06:286 (1) - grid 1 right?
02:11:367 (3) - Grid 1 uuUUp?If ypu do this 02:11:588 (4,5,6) - Grid 1 right
02:53:304 (4) - grid 1 right and 1 down? if you do this 02:54:407 (5) stack with (1) and fix spacing 02:54:628 (6)

nice diff

[Tiro Finale]

02:17:768 (7) - Grid 2 left?

i can´t find another wrong because i not pro mapping
but i think is fine (for me)
you can not fix if you wish sorry my poor english

well STAR ! and good luck because beuatifull song and have great maps

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~

this is just some suggestions

[General ]

Go to File> Open Song Folder and why you have 2 OSB ? remove it pleasse
oops
[easy]

lmfao epic nice diff

[CX's hard]


00:35:574 (3) - Stack with 00:33:808 (1)? if you do this fix spacing 00:36:236 (4,5)
01:06:286 (1) - grid 1 right?
02:11:367 (3) - Grid 1 uuUUp?If ypu do this 02:11:588 (4,5,6) - Grid 1 right
02:53:304 (4) - grid 1 right and 1 down? if you do this 02:54:407 (5) stack with (1) and fix spacing 02:54:628 (6)

nice diff

[Tiro Finale]

02:17:768 (7) - Grid 2 left?

i can´t find another wrong because i not pro mapping
but i think is fine (for me)
you can not fix if you wish sorry my poor english

well STAR ! and good luck because beuatifull song and have great maps

Fix all
Thx mod

Hey..random modding.

[Easy]
00:05:586 (1,2,3,4) - There're cymbals in the song,and I hear them at every note,but with your finish hitsound,they don't sound so good,fairly..Prorabably first offset isn't correct.
00:19:682 (1) - Finish?
00:32:042 (4) - Could you make this slider curvier or place it few grids down to avoid overlapping with 00:31:601 (3)?
00:37:339 (2) - Finish?
00:43:078 (2) - Why have you changed claps to whistles? D: I think claps fit better.
00:51:464 (1,1,1,2) - Finish to every note?
00:55:030 (1) - Fix distance,it's a bit close to 00:53:673 (2).
01:05:624 (1) - Finish?
01:30:345 (3) - ^
02:06:952 (1) - Move finish to 02:07:394.
02:51:537 (1) - Remove new combo?

[Hard]
Hitsounds are way random..I can't mod them.
Random 0.5x sections don't look so good either..

00:08:676 - End reverse-slider here.
01:06:286 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:11:804 (2) - I'd rotate it by 180.
01:36:304 (7) - Remove this note.

[Tiro Finale]
00:02:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks a bit random,honestly,maybe make some symmetrical/triangle patterns?
00:19:682 (1) - Finish?
00:50:582 (1) - Why so sudden spinner? D: I suggest you to fill this part with notes..
00:54:997 (4) - Finish?
01:05:623 (1) - ^

Star.

IceBeam wrote:

Hey..random modding.

[Easy]
00:05:586 (1,2,3,4) - There're cymbals in the song,and I hear them at every note,but with your finish hitsound,they don't sound so good,fairly..Prorabably first offset isn't correct.I can't find better finish here so i didn't chage here.Also,I think first offset is right.
00:19:682 (1) - Finish?
00:32:042 (4) - Could you make this slider curvier or place it few grids down to avoid overlapping with 00:31:601 (3)?
00:37:339 (2) - Finish?
00:43:078 (2) - Why have you changed claps to whistles? D: I think claps fit better.
00:51:464 (1,1,1,2) - Finish to every note?
00:55:030 (1) - Fix distance,it's a bit close to 00:53:673 (2).
01:05:624 (1) - Finish?
01:30:345 (3) - ^
02:06:952 (1) - Move finish to 02:07:394.
02:51:537 (1) - Remove new combo?
All fix

[Tiro Finale]
00:02:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks a bit random,honestly,maybe make some symmetrical/triangle patterns?it looks random?.. I have made the part carefully OTZ... If someone refer it once again I will fix
00:19:682 (1) - Finish? fix
00:50:582 (1) - Why so sudden spinner? D: I suggest you to fill this part with notes.. If others refer it again i will fix
00:54:997 (4) - Finish? fix
01:05:623 (1) - ^ fix

[Hard]
Hitsounds are way random..I can't mod them. he wantn't change
Random 0.5x sections don't look so good either..

00:08:676 - End reverse-slider here.
01:06:286 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:11:804 (2) - I'd rotate it by 180.
01:36:304 (7) - Remove this note.
fix

Star.

Thx Mod

map is nice and fun!

　ξ(✿ ＞◡❛)ξ▄︻▇▇〓〓tiro　finale☆

fight

你好

[General]
- MP3檔案320kbps是unrankable的, 幫你轉好了192kbps, 請到 http://puu.sh/1WQc 右鍵另存新檔, offset剪過了, 不用更動
- 開頭和最後都會打早, 可能offset稍微有偏, 第一條-10 or BPM136.20我感覺好一點
- audio lead-in 感覺不需要, 最多都只需要1秒
- CX's Hard和其他難度的preview time不一致

[Easy]
- whistle擺太多了, 幾乎是撞到白線都改, common sense上來說把 (w=whistle, x=沒音效) wxwxwxwx改成xxwxxxwx效果反而好 (這稱為2/4白線音效), 1:53~1:58這種part也不用每個都whistle..第三段副歌的音效就下的不錯
<00:19:682> (1) 頭下finish
<00:29:835> (1) 這裡下clap, finish移到(2)
<01:36:966> 建議這裡擺note, 1:37:407才轉盤
<02:07:615> 我很訝異的是這裡反而沒有KIAI, 是比前面兩段還高潮的部份耶
<02:42:267> same, 下note, 02:42:709也下note, KIAI fountain擺這裡, 感覺更好

[CX's Hard]
- 有些地方紅線和綠線重疊了, 請把綠線砍掉, 把你要的音效設定放在紅線上, 否則玩的時候會有hitsound bug
<00:09:088> (3,4) 把(4)的音效和(3)尾巴交換
<00:13:061> 我無法認同紅線clap啊, 像你0:02~0:06下的不就很好嗎
<00:38:884> (1,2) spacing
<00:43:961> remove finish here
<00:47:492> ^
<00:50:582> 一般KIAI fountain都是下在轉盤轉完的位置的, 下在這裡效果其實很沒feel
<01:00:106> (4,5,1) spacing
<01:09:597> 這種上段claps主軸突然切成whistle主軸很奇怪
<01:16:219> 為什麼又紅線clap了..
<01:21:516> (4,5,6) spacing..
<01:27:696> (1) remove new combo
<01:28:137> 下note
<01:28:579> (4) new combo
<01:29:462> (1) remove new combo
<01:29:903> ^
<01:36:525> (S) 同00:50:582
- 01:42~01:49 音量再降更低
<01:46:678> (1,2,3) 沒有對稱到
<01:48:002> (1,2,3) ^
<01:49:971> 這段的new combo只下在1:51:516和1:53:282
<02:14:016> 這邊開始我的心得就是亂clap一通, 不時竄出的紅線clap和頻繁切換的1/3clap 2/4clap..spacing也不穩定, 忽而0.9x忽而1.1x, 用grid lv4 DS 修正一下吧
<02:30:570> (5,6) spacing
<02:46:240> 這後面降音量

[Tiro Finale]
- 打了第一段, 不想mod, 給幾個建議

1. 這首歌本身感覺的到五連以上的地方非常少, 因此有些超過五連的地方, 我只會覺得1-你沒梗了 2-你想讓他很難. 請考慮刪除一些五個以上的1/4s (拆成三連+1個或用reverse slider)
2. 疊太大, 非常多地方都在疊, 另外spacing雜亂無章, 即使是因為最難的難度想用jump也是能有規律的, 排版有很大進步空間.
3. new combo完全找不到規律在哪, new combo是影響gameflow的重要因素之一, 千萬不要無規則的下.

star, Easy很不錯, 完全接近了rank標準

loveFantasy wrote:

你好

[General]
- MP3檔案320kbps是unrankable的, 幫你轉好了192kbps, 請到 http://puu.sh/1WQc 右鍵另存新檔, offset剪過了, 不用更動
- 開頭和最後都會打早, 可能offset稍微有偏, 第一條-10 or BPM136.20我感覺好一點
- audio lead-in 感覺不需要, 最多都只需要1秒
- CX's Hard和其他難度的preview time不一致
謝謝幫忙壓縮，其他修正了


[Easy]
- whistle擺太多了, 幾乎是撞到白線都改, common sense上來說把 (w=whistle, x=沒音效) wxwxwxwx改成xxwxxxwx效果反而好 (這稱為2/4白線音效), 1:53~1:58這種part也不用每個都whistle..第三段副歌的音效就下的不錯 學到了一課
<00:19:682> (1) 頭下finish Fix
<00:29:835> (1) 這裡下clap, finish移到(2) Fix
<01:36:966> 建議這裡擺note, 1:37:407才轉盤 Fix
<02:07:615> 我很訝異的是這裡反而沒有KIAI, 是比前面兩段還高潮的部份耶oops.. 上個mod 修完音效，不小心KIAI跟著弄掉
<02:42:267> same, 下note, 02:42:709也下note, KIAI fountain擺這裡, 感覺更好 Fix

[Tiro Finale]
- 打了第一段, 不想mod, 給幾個建議

1. 這首歌本身感覺的到五連以上的地方非常少, 因此有些超過五連的地方, 我只會覺得1-你沒梗了 2-你想讓他很難. 請考慮刪除一些五個以上的1/4s (拆成三連+1個或用reverse slider)
2. 疊太大, 非常多地方都在疊, 另外spacing雜亂無章, 即使是因為最難的難度想用jump也是能有規律的, 排版有很大進步空間.
3. new combo完全找不到規律在哪, new combo是影響gameflow的重要因素之一, 千萬不要無規則的下.

謝謝建議，會找個時間稍微重弄下

star, Easy很不錯, 完全接近了rank標準 Thx

Thx mod

Thanks for everyone's star and mod

Hi, here's my mod as requested in my queue

Easy:
Nothing found^^

Insane:
Hmm, I think this diff is a little chaotic..

00:48:375 (4,5,6) something's wrong with the distance here
00:51:465 (1,2,3,4) try to make those sliders like this :


01:06:286 (4,5,6) the distance?


Maybe it's just my opinion, but I think some notes and distances between them are "unreadable".

Star for Easy and hitsounds^^

ShiroKitty wrote:

Hi, here's my mod as requested in my queue

Easy:
Nothing found^^

Insane:
Hmm, I think this diff is a little chaotic..

00:48:375 (4,5,6) something's wrong with the distance here
00:51:465 (1,2,3,4) try to make those sliders like this :


01:06:286 (4,5,6) the distance?


Maybe it's just my opinion, but I think some notes and distances between them are "unreadable".

Star for Easy and hitsounds^^

Thx mod I decide to remap "Tiro Finale"

Here's my mod

[Easy]

1. 00:09:088 (1) - It's better to move this 2 grids up and 2 grids left
2. 00:27:628 (1) - Extend this slider to 00:29:394 -
3. 01:59:448 (2) - Spacing
4. 02:53:303 (5) - Replace this with a note?

[CX's Hard]

1. Normal Hitsounds make this diff sound really strange...
2. The shapes of the sliders of this diff could be better
3. 00:12:619 - Add a note?
4. 00:23:213 - Add a note?
5. 00:58:561 - Add a note?

[Tiro Finale]

1. There are many streams that don't fit the song,and the patterns are a bit strange here x.x
2. 00:08:225 (7) - Maybe move this 6 grids up?
3. 00:09:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe you do that on purpose,but this is a spacing error,try to fix this
4. 00:38:664 (10) - Spacing

Well,here's my rating...
7/10
This map needs a bit of mods to get better,but anyway,here's my star~

-kevincela- wrote:

Here's my mod

[Easy]

1. 00:09:088 (1) - It's better to move this 2 grids up and 2 grids left I don't think so If i move it spacing will be wrong
2. 00:27:628 (1) - Extend this slider to 00:29:394 - Fix
3. 01:59:448 (2) - Spacing Fix
4. 02:53:303 (5) - Replace this with a note?

slider better IMO


[Tiro Finale]

1. There are many streams that don't fit the song,and the patterns are a bit strange here x.x
2. 00:08:225 (7) - Maybe move this 6 grids up?
3. 00:09:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe you do that on purpose,but this is a spacing error,try to fix this
4. 00:38:664 (10) - Spacing

forgot to tell you don't mod this diff but Thx
Well,here's my rating...
7/10
This map needs a bit of mods to get better,but anyway,here's my star~

Thx mod

nice

okay
CX's Hard fix some
btw Tiro Finale had remapped

建議

easy
02:00:331(3) 是不是多一個折返比較好?
02:43:150(1) 縮短一點? 可能會太近 對下一個點來說
02:54:186(1) 收尾去掉finish? o o


CX's hard
01:11:583(x) 加一個circle?
01:36:524(1) 去掉finish?
02:17:547~02:20:637(1~8) 好多clap 去掉一點?
02:35:204~02:38:294(1~6,1~7) ^

tiro finale
好像有很多三連是硬上的,不過好像不會影響w
01:14:453(1) 去掉new combo?
02:00:331(8) 加new combo 去掉 02:00:772 的?
02:32:335(1) 去掉new combo?
02:38:736(1) 去new combo 加在 02:39:177 上?
02:38:957 試試和 02:38:074 的尾合上? (可能個人習慣看到遮note就這樣點o o?)

就大概這樣o o

很好的map star~

sirjuyt wrote:

建議

easy
02:00:331(3) 是不是多一個折返比較好? Fix
02:43:150(1) 縮短一點? 可能會太近 對下一個點來說 有人再一次提到就修改
02:54:186(1) 收尾去掉finish? o o 個人感覺維持原樣比較好

tiro finale
好像有很多三連是硬上的,不過好像不會影響w
01:14:453(1) 去掉new combo? Fix
02:00:331(8) 加new combo 去掉 02:00:772 的? Fix
02:32:335(1) 去掉new combo? 有人在提到就去掉
02:38:736(1) 去new combo 加在 02:39:177 上? 不去掉，不過修改了02:38:074的NC
02:38:957 試試和 02:38:074 的尾合上? (可能個人習慣看到遮note就這樣點o o?) 個人感覺維持原樣比較好

就大概這樣o o

很好的map star~ Thx

Thx Mod

* From #Mod request

[Tiro Finale]
00:11:515 (4,5) - Following the spcing in front is better.
00:07:342 (5) - New combo
00:33:587 (5) - Put it on 1 and 2
00:39:105 (4,5) - Spacing
00:40:209 (3) - Put it between 1 and 3
00:41:312 (7) - Put it between 3 and 6
00:55:030 (2) - New combo

[CX's Hard]
00:30:276 (1,2,3,4) - Put it WNWN (W=wistle N=None)
00:33:808 (1) - Why it need a wistle between it? Change it to clap
01:02:092 (1) - Remove new combo
01:32:993 (3) - Calp
01:32:993 (3) - 1-ST Clap 2-ND Wistle
02:31:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Where is the sound effect?

[All]
Good map ,but I think the Hard diff is so "Distance snap"
Good luck STAR

KingsAL2 wrote:

* From #Mod request

[Tiro Finale]
00:11:515 (4,5) - Following the spcing in front is better. Fix
00:07:342 (5) - New combo Fix
00:33:587 (5) - Put it on 1 and 2　I don't know why move it to there
00:39:105 (4,5) - Spacing it's ok IMO
00:40:209 (3) - Put it between 1 and 3 　　　　　 ^
00:41:312 (7) - Put it between 3 and 6 ^
00:55:030 (2) - New combo Fix

[All]
Good map ,but I think the Hard diff is so "Distance snap"
Good luck STAR

Thx mod

:3
I like this song a lot
ξ(✿ ＞◡❛)▄︻┻┳═一 －

Mami-channn~~! <3

Thanks star
btw if someone mod it,plz don't mod GD. he is busy now so can't fix his diff

Sorry it took so long ;_;

General

--Timing seems really weird. Try deleting all timing sections except the first one and change BPM to 135.94
--Kiai times are all weird and don't match up. Also it's better for the kiai time to be on a note, not in between them.

Tiro's

00:33:366 (4) - did you purposely put like 5 claps differently than the previous pattern most of the rest of the song?
01:02:755 (x) - i kind of want to add a note so the spinner starts 1/2 tick after the notes. (and perhaps don't silence this note if you actually put it in)
01:21:957 (6) - same as 00:33;366
01:25:489 (5,6) - i don't understand the point of this. Combo 6 doesn't even start on the music. no note is being played there. WHy not just start Combo 6 at 01:25:930 and extend combo 5 one time.
02:06:953 (4,5) - ^
02:56:835 (1) - i would silence the note. or at least get rid of the finish


CX's

--Hitsounds are a little weird. Could you possible make the pattern more consistent?

00:22:551 (2) - i would would like for this to be normal tempo. up to you to decide tho
00:33:808 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't like how only these notes are slowed down and the rest isn't.

fine other than that


Easy

02:54:186 (1) - Silence it?

looks good :3

Nice map! Star~

winber1 wrote:

Sorry it took so long ;_;

General

--Timing seems really weird. Try deleting all timing sections except the first one and change BPM to 135.94 umm... there are many timing help here.i haven't knew using which one is better
--Kiai times are all weird and don't match up. Also it's better for the kiai time to be on a note, not in between them. Fix on note

Tiro's

00:33:366 (4) - did you purposely put like 5 claps differently than the previous pattern most of the rest of the song?yes,is it weird?
01:02:755 (x) - i kind of want to add a note so the spinner starts 1/2 tick after the notes. (and perhaps don't silence this note if you actually put it in) add
01:21:957 (6) - same as 00:33;366
01:25:489 (5,6) - i don't understand the point of this. Combo 6 doesn't even start on the music. no note is being played there. WHy not just start Combo 6 at 01:25:930 and extend combo 5 one time. Fix
02:06:953 (4,5) - ^ ^
02:56:835 (1) - i would silence the note. or at least get rid of the finish no,unless others think it werid again,i'll delete finish


Easy

02:54:186 (1) - Silence it? ^

looks good :3

Nice map! Star~ Thx

Thx Mod

抱歉，晚了2天才来
Easy
没有问题，很难找到要说的

GD是不要MOD么？ 那SKIP掉

Tiro Finale
00:07:342 (1,2,3,4) - 这里可以做4个TIME PANEL 逐渐提高HITSOUND音量
02:38:736 (1,2) - 这个跳换个位置？ 前面的跳玩起来很舒服，就这里很不自然
嗯。。其他的真没好说的，要MOD也是NAZI了，感觉上排列可以更整齐，美化一点，不过就保持现在这样也是没问题的啦，玩起来很舒服。

嘛>.<等这张图的GD做完需要MOD的话直接PM我RECHECK吧。其他2个难度个人感觉已经很好了。

很好听的歌 ☆~~

Kanon wrote:

抱歉，晚了2天才来
Easy
没有问题，很难找到要说的

GD是不要MOD么？ 那SKIP掉

Tiro Finale
00:07:342 (1,2,3,4) - 这里可以做4个TIME PANEL 逐渐提高HITSOUND音量 Fix
02:38:736 (1,2) - 这个跳换个位置？ 前面的跳玩起来很舒服，就这里很不自然 Fix
嗯。。其他的真没好说的，要MOD也是NAZI了，感觉上排列可以更整齐，美化一点，不过就保持现在这样也是没问题的啦，玩起来很舒服。

嘛>.<等这张图的GD做完需要MOD的话直接PM我RECHECK吧。其他2个难度个人感觉已经很好了。 Thx

很好听的歌 ☆~~

Thx Mod

Beautiful song. My Mami <3 ; w;

Tiro Finale :
00:06:459 (4) ~ Move over one grid on the play field.
... Distance snap? Please use this! Pff well that pretty much covers the rest.
Good

CX's Hard :
00:18:345 ~ New Combo?
00:40:871 ~ New Combo?
1:26:813 ~ New Combo?
1:27:696 ~ New Combo?
1:30:244 ~ New Combo?
Distance Snap A Little Plz? Just a little at the least.
Good map After That

Not Modding Easy. = w=

Happy to see this ranked when its done, star

Elly-chan wrote:

Beautiful song. My Mami <3 ; w; lol

Tiro Finale :
00:06:459 (4) ~ Move over one grid on the play field.
... Distance snap? Please use this! Pff well that pretty much covers the rest. Fix
Good

Not Modding Easy. = w=

Happy to see this ranked when its done, star Thx

Thx Mod

[Easy]

00:44:402 (4) - New combo
00:53:231 (1) - Line up with (1)?
02:20:637 (1) - Remove new combo
02:26:817 (1) - ^

[Tiro Finale]

00:11:295 (3) - Add whistle
01:13:349 (5) - Add whistle in the beginner of the slider
01:16:218 (7) - New combo

Star~

MoodyRPG wrote:

[Easy]

00:44:402 (4) - New combo
00:53:231 (1) - Line up with (1)? no
02:20:637 (1) - Remove new combo
02:26:817 (1) - ^

Fix

[Tiro Finale]

00:11:295 (3) - Add whistle
01:13:349 (5) - Add whistle in the beginner of the slider
01:16:218 (7) - New combo

Fix

Star~

Thx Mod

General:

I disliked the way the spinner was skinned because there's no center point you can spin around, making spinning harder.

Easy:
Lots of the curved sliders are not symmetrical, I'll only point out the most noticeable ones.

00:59:002 (3) - asymmetric
01:02:534 (2) - ^
01:06:507 (2) - ^
01:15:777 - Is there a good reason for switching from .9x to 1.0x spacing here? Because otherwise I'd try and keep the spacing in an easy diff consistent.
01:17:984 (4) - Have this wrap around (3) better, like this:
01:49:751 (1) - asymmetric
01:55:931 (2,2) - adjust the pattern so these stack with 01:53:282 (1) - ?
02:00:331 (3,1) - spacing
02:18:871 (1) - looks too close to (4)
02:30:349 (1) - asymmetric
02:35:646 (1,1,1,1) - Make this a better square pattern

Tiro Finale:
Same problems with slider asymmetry, try taking a look at this guide for nicer sliders.

00:44:844 (4) - Make this wrap around (1) better by using more nodes, and take a look at "beat blankets" in the guide.
00:51:465 (1,3) - Move up 2 grids, and
00:51:907 (2,4) - Move down 2 grids so that all are equally spaced
02:27:921 (1,3) - Adjust so it's in the center?
02:28:583 (4) - Make this a copy of (5) flipped 180 degrees.

Pretty nice maps, Tiro Finale was quite enjoyable even if the spacing felt very random at times. Starred!

akrolsmir wrote:

General:

I disliked the way the spinner was skinned because there's no center point you can spin around, making spinning harder.
I will try to fix

Easy:
Lots of the curved sliders are not symmetrical, I'll only point out the most noticeable ones.

00:59:002 (3) - asymmetric
01:02:534 (2) - ^
01:06:507 (2) - ^
01:15:777 - Is there a good reason for switching from .9x to 1.0x spacing here? Because otherwise I'd try and keep the spacing in an easy diff consistent. In KIAI, i using 1.0x, i want to let harder in KIAI.
01:17:984 (4) - Have this wrap around (3) better, like this:

SPOILER

01:49:751 (1) - asymmetric
01:55:931 (2,2) - adjust the pattern so these stack with 01:53:282 (1) - ? Fix
02:00:331 (3,1) - spacing ^
02:18:871 (1) - looks too close to (4) ^
02:30:349 (1) - asymmetric
02:35:646 (1,1,1,1) - Make this a better square pattern Fix

I try my best to fix sliders

Tiro Finale:
Same problems with slider asymmetry, try taking a look at this guide for nicer sliders.

00:44:844 (4) - Make this wrap around (1) better by using more nodes, and take a look at "beat blankets" in the guide. Fix
00:51:465 (1,3) - Move up 2 grids, and
00:51:907 (2,4) - Move down 2 grids so that all are equally spaced Fix
02:27:921 (1,3) - Adjust so it's in the center? it's weird ?
02:28:583 (4) - Make this a copy of (5) flipped 180 degrees. ^

Pretty nice maps, Tiro Finale was quite enjoyable even if the spacing felt very random at times.spacing random Starred!

Thx Mod

as your per request, only recheck [Tiro Finale]:

1. 00:02:045 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - new combo擺法改為(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2)較好
2. 00:27:186 (7) - space out (1.0x spacing)或直接stack
3. 00:29:835.. - 重音(finish)和new combo都不跟高白線是比較奇怪的arrange, 另外一直切換2/4白線和1/3白線clap依我之見也不是好選擇, 畢竟clap屬於很明顯的主音, 同段落內改變pattern會特別突兀..你可能是想用finish標注一些給你特別感覺的音點, 但是預設的finish並不是一個適合的音效 (他適合四小節出現一次打重拍, 像01:16:218 (1) - 隔四小節 01:23:281 (4) - ), 有一個中國mapper常常使用的有迴音的whistle可能比較適合你的用法(拿來標注特別的note), 附在附件裡給你. 如果擺脫了這個finish, 建議你把new combo都重擺(跟著高白線擺)
4. 01:15:998 (6) - 改成whistle+x或clap+x, 三連finish很糟
5. 01:21:516 (5) - 無必要的重音(finish)
6. 01:36:083 (4) - 頭改clap, 01:36:966再下一個clap, 轉盤起頭移到01:37:407
7. 01:49:646 (T) - 無用綠線
8. 02:06:953 (4) - 基本上...不太建議短時間內連噴兩個fountain, 另外他應該跟著(1,2,3)的spacing
9. 02:07:394 (5) - 然後再把這個上new combo, 擺開, 表示另一段落
10. 這個KIAI (02:07~02:42)的音效就很有規律, 問題是finish敲太多了, 很容易造成音效疲勞
11. 02:41:826 (3,4) - 不好聽

排版雖然spacing很亂, 但不太影響play, 但是new combo的位置真的有加強空間...

Download: soft-hitfinish.rar

loveFantasy wrote:

as your per request, only recheck [Tiro Finale]:

1. 00:02:045 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - new combo擺法改為(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2)較好 Fix
2. 00:27:186 (7) - space out (1.0x spacing)或直接stack Fix
3. 00:29:835.. - 重音(finish)和new combo都不跟高白線是比較奇怪的arrange, 另外一直切換2/4白線和1/3白線clap依我之見也不是好選擇, 畢竟clap屬於很明顯的主音, 同段落內改變pattern會特別突兀..你可能是想用finish標注一些給你特別感覺的音點, 但是預設的finish並不是一個適合的音效 (他適合四小節出現一次打重拍, 像01:16:218 (1) - 隔四小節 01:23:281 (4) - ), 有一個中國mapper常常使用的有迴音的whistle可能比較適合你的用法(拿來標注特別的note), 附在附件裡給你. 如果擺脫了這個finish, 建議你把new combo都重擺(跟著高白線擺) 有試著這個音效，NC也整個重擺了，有些地方還是保留著原本的finish，希望我有下好
4. 01:15:998 (6) - 改成whistle+x或clap+x, 三連finish很糟 Fix
5. 01:21:516 (5) - 無必要的重音(finish) ^
6. 01:36:083 (4) - 頭改clap, 01:36:966再下一個clap, 轉盤起頭移到01:37:407 ^
7. 01:49:646 (T) - 無用綠線 ^
8. 02:06:953 (4) - 基本上...不太建議短時間內連噴兩個fountain, 另外他應該跟著(1,2,3)的spacing 我覺得還ok，暫時保留
9. 02:07:394 (5) - 然後再把這個上new combo, 擺開, 表示另一段落 Fix
10. 這個KIAI (02:07~02:42)的音效就很有規律, 問題是finish敲太多了, 很容易造成音效疲勞
11. 02:41:826 (3,4) - 不好聽

Fix

排版雖然spacing很亂, 但不太影響play, 但是new combo的位置真的有加強空間... Orz...

Thx Mod

Tiro Finale
02:46:682(1)→02:46:892
Ideals and feel

nice MAP

Mami~~~~~~~~~~

LOVE HER SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!

mami
good map
good song
good anime
love ~

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