AngelHoney wrote:

我還沒做好啊D:

HatsunoWind wrote:

i hate the name "HatsunoWind's Normal"

samipale wrote:

HatsunoChu~

AngelHoney wrote:

Hard

之前忘記說了...
BG color 改成黑色

HatsunoChu

BG color 黑色

SPOILER

whistle感覺有點過多了
還有就是有些地方節奏太單一了._.(不過既然是normal 應該沒啥

00:06:684 (1,2,3) - 剛開始 就讓我囧了麽(間距啊...這也太明顯了吧..
00:24:064 (3,4) - 把(4)删了 把3拉長一格,然後再多一個來回(不改也行)
00:37:305 (3,4) - ^(後面幾處我就不指出了0.0)
01:10:822 (1) - 這spinner感覺不是跟著節奏的...(移到右邊的大白線上開始,原本開始的這個位置放個note)
01:29:857 (5) - 有點丑..
01:49:305 (5) - 這個slider的whistle是故意的這麼加的 還是點錯了O.O
03:28:616 (1) - 結束在右邊的大白線上?(這個感覺結束在哪都彆扭...對於normal..

no7

這是easy 是吧...(儘量用1/1做 像一開始這樣的slider 都結束在左邊的白線上)
STR0.5
01:26:340 (1) - easy的話 最好別這樣 (一個note結束后 馬上就spinner)
02:03:788 (5) - new combo (還有就是和質檢4的間距
這easy有些地方偏難 要改的地方 不少:3

AngelHoney wrote:

HatsunoChu this is HatsunoNoob Q_Q
BG color 黑色
whistle感覺有點過多了 pokie帮我改吧>~<
還有就是有些地方節奏太單一了._.(不過既然是normal 應該沒啥 我是新人不会弄._.

00:06:684 (1,2,3) - 剛開始 就讓我囧了麽(間距啊...這也太明顯了吧.. fixed
00:24:064 (3,4) - 把(4)删了 把3拉長一格,然後再多一個來回(不改也行)
00:37:305 (3,4) - ^(後面幾處我就不指出了0.0) 改了感觉很别扭=.=
01:10:822 (1) - 這spinner感覺不是跟著節奏的...(移到右邊的大白線上開始,原本開始的這個位置放個note) 改成其他的了
01:29:857 (5) - 有點丑..
01:49:305 (5) - 這個slider的whistle是故意的這麼加的 還是點錯了O.O 点错了O.O
03:28:616 (1) - 結束在右邊的大白線上?(這個感覺結束在哪都彆扭...對於normal.. fixed

Vikon wrote:

[General]
我也許只是來給星的，各位mapper的技術太高了. 囧
最初沒留意全也是中國人，所以內容用了英文，見諒了 Orz

[AngelHoney]
00:57:582 (8) a little bit out of screen?
01:52:513 consider to decrease the volume of this timing section? (01:52:617 (1) is a little bit too loud)
03:13:375 (1) it doesn't look good since it was covered by (4)

AngelHoney wrote:

Hard

之前忘記說了...
BG color 改成黑色

HatsunoChu

BG color 黑色
whistle感覺有點過多了
還有就是有些地方節奏太單一了._.(不過既然是normal 應該沒啥

00:06:684 (1,2,3) - 剛開始 就讓我囧了麽(間距啊...這也太明顯了吧..
00:24:064 (3,4) - 把(4)删了 把3拉長一格,然後再多一個來回(不改也行)
00:37:305 (3,4) - ^(後面幾處我就不指出了0.0)
01:10:822 (1) - 這spinner感覺不是跟著節奏的...(移到右邊的大白線上開始,原本開始的這個位置放個note)
01:29:857 (5) - 有點丑..
01:49:305 (5) - 這個slider的whistle是故意的這麼加的 還是點錯了O.O
03:28:616 (1) - 結束在右邊的大白線上?(這個感覺結束在哪都彆扭...對於normal..

no7

這是easy 是吧...(儘量用1/1做 像一開始這樣的slider 都結束在左邊的白線上)
STR0.5
01:26:340 (1) - easy的話 最好別這樣 (一個note結束后 馬上就spinner)
02:03:788 (5) - new combo (還有就是和質檢4的間距
這easy有些地方偏難 要改的地方 不少:3

yangzd88 wrote:

果断射星……
Can I make a guest diff~60% 作图真的很困难

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[no-7's Easy] 交給沒有7

SPOILER

为什么这个难度没有kiai?
slider tick rate: 2? 虽然没用到音效里,但是觉得看着更顺点...
00:26:547 (1) - 结尾clap?
00:51:374 (3) - xoox
00:59:650 (1) - sliderslide的whistle音需要么....
02:30:684 (7) - 一下把音量升20太剧烈了,至少我不太能接受.

[Hatsunoob] Fixed
触姐真彩笔.恩,不过做图长进了
00:17:029 (7) - new combo?
00:24:891 (4,5,6) - 一点点的spacing,关了grid调下.
00:37:305 (3,4) - 4的字被挡掉了,建议改.
01:25:305 (7) - 尾音爆音了

[Hard] Fixed
00:49:098 (5,1) - switch new combo. 不然这里意识不到这个跳.
02:47:236 (1) - 这里是不是在红线也可以补上note(因为在之前看是渐快这样一种感觉)

[AngelHoney] 在等AH回應
这个难度也是没kiai...我觉得你们需要统一啊= =

yangzd88 wrote:

Modder应该忍受不住的
我都快要做到崩溃了
好吧 转换为路人形态围观

ps1:我的4个钟人参啊 一个delete浪费了
ps2:我更想你帮我做guest diff XDDDD

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[AngelHoney]
IRC MODDING, BABY!!!!

Good touhou
STAR

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[no-7's Easy] leave to no-7 & HatsunoChu

SPOILER

01:44:340 (5) - New combo, it's too long for easy diff
02:10:409 (4) - ^
02:28:616 (3) - ^
02:30:271 (6) - ^

[Hatsunoob]

SPOILER

00:13:719 (2) - Ugly slider
00:44:753 (1) - Just an idea, how about about delete the object at 00:46:409 (1) and extend this spinner to 00:46:409? What do you think??
01:38:960 (7) - Why this object is silence??
01:52:616 (1) - How about about delete the object at 01:54:271 (1) and extend this spinner to 01:54:271?
02:55:512 (1,1,1,1) - Can you combine this into one or two? It's a little bit short

[Hard]
02:06:271 (2) - Reverse this slider? To make a nice pattern? No idea for this, need other suggestions ._.
02:55:512 (1,1,1) - Can you combine into one? It just a suggestion fixed, gogo spinner sagesssss

[AngelHoney]
IRC MODDING, BABY!!!!

Good touhou
STAR

Shinxyn wrote:

:D
I would prefer you used REDALiCE as artist and ALiCE'S EMOTiON in tags, since more people would know REDALiCE... plus he's the composerFixed...

no-7-leave to them

SPOILER

01:22:409 (6) - feels like a clap could go here x.x
02:30:271 (6) - ^
That's all I wanted to point out, this map plays quite nicely

Hatsunoob- O.o diff name

SPOILER

The maps is okay,but the hitsounds kinda bore me though, the pace for hitsounds sounds a bit slow compared to music...

Hard- Hey, something I can fc! sugoi shinxyn!
01:20:547 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing (4 left a tick?) fixed
02:28:409 (2,3,4) - ^ (4 right a tick? or is this on purpose) fixed
Great map~ only pick out little nazi ^

AngelHoney- offset is different? (by 1..)
(I downloaded from post before, so it should be updated)

SPOILER

Also great map, but I don't think it's difficulty is worth 14.9mil x.x
01:15:789 (1) - missed a clap here?
01:53:858 (1) - ^ (sorta)

Not too fond of those volume increasing parts, more cuz it doesn't seem to fit well, but your choice
Fun~

Good Good~

samipale wrote:

[General]
The offset of [AngelHoney] doesn't the same as other diffs,it is not mention of the first time,but why not fix it?
HP Drain ~_~

[no-7's Easy]

SPOILER

02:09:995(3) - remove clap?i think you use less hitsound at this map but here much hitsound,but it's not a big deal
02:27:374(1,1end,2,3,4,4end,5,6,7,7end,8,9) ooxxoxoxoxox?(x is clap)

good Easy

[Hatsunoob]

SPOILER

01:39:37(T) - Useless time section
02:07:40(T) - ^ and double time section at this timing
02:20:23(T) - ^
I'm noob so I can't find more >~<

Pretty good as HatsunoWind

[Hard]
Wow,I can't find my master's map any mistakes ~_~ But IMO so many claps doesn't fit this song...
Perhaps control the times of slider's return is better next time hahaha..XD

[TentacleHoney]
>~<Nothing

That's all,give me a chance to practise English:D

samipale wrote:

[General]
The offset of [AngelHoney] doesn't the same as other diffs,it is not mention of the first time,but why not fix it?
HP Drain ~_~

Leorda wrote:

[Hatsunoob]
00:13:719 (2) - Ugly slider fixed
00:44:753 (1) - Just an idea, how about about delete the object at 00:46:409 (1) and extend this spinner to 00:46:409? What do you think?? thank u~ i fixed
01:38:960 (7) - Why this object is silence?? fixed~
01:52:616 (1) - How about about delete the object at 01:54:271 (1) and extend this spinner to 01:54:271? ^02:55:512 (1,1,1,1) - Can you combine this into one or two? It's a little bit short short? i dont like two long spin:(

thx moe/little/cute Leorda baka

samipale wrote:

[Hatsunoob]
01:39:37(T) - Useless time section
02:07:40(T) - ^ and double time section at this timing
02:20:23(T) - ^
I'm noob so I can't find more >~<
Pretty good as HatsunoWind

all fixed~ thx saminoob

AngelHoney wrote:

samipale wrote:

[General]
The offset of [AngelHoney] doesn't the same as other diffs,it is not mention of the first time,but why not fix it?
HP Drain ~_~

因為我在紅線前加note 所以再加了根紅線 就這樣 這種情況下紅線沒必要統一:3

所以offset依然是6685

Shinxyn wrote:

Hatsunoob- O.o diff name
The maps is okay,but the hitsounds kinda bore me though, the pace for hitsounds sounds a bit slow compared to music...

Gens wrote:

Woops, timing is not the same on all difficulties. Not a bubble just yet~

Gens wrote:

Bubbled.

DJ KRZY wrote:

No break for 3:29? Really? lol

fun map to play though

DJ KRZY wrote:

No break for 3:29? Really? lol

fun map to play though

OnizukaEikichi wrote:

The background is awesome, i would like a full version of that :3