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ClariS - Irony (TV Size)

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ririco
6,402 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
ririco
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 08 ابريل, 2011 at 03:19:05 م

Artist: ClariS
Title: Irony (TV Size)
Source: Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai
Tags: Tonoicutzu puskin heatwave95
BPM: 134
Filesize: 17384kb
Play Time: 00:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (0 stars, 0 notes)
  2. Normal (2.37 stars, 101 notes)
  3. Puskin's Easy (1.42 stars, 71 notes)
  4. Tonoicutzu's Hard (4.45 stars, 141 notes)
Download: ClariS - Irony (TV Size)
Download: ClariS - Irony (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my 2nd map W.I.P

puskin's Easy done
Normal Done
Insane Done
Tonoicutzu's hard Done
Last edited by ririco , edited 23 times in total.
Puskin
14 posts
Joined May 2010
Puskin
Yay first star :)
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
nice map and song! :O
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
Damn my AVATAR is cute , :3 wow again :3
Last edited by HeatKai , edited 1 time in total.
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
[General]
Why don't have hitsound ?
i hear some at hard only i think =.=''
Kiai from 00:51:468 - 01:19:677 :3

[Puskin's Easy]
00:25:946 (7,8,9) - Spacing
00:29:528 (2,3,4) - spacing
00:42:961 (4) - spacing
00:51:916 (5,6,7,1) - spacing

[Normal]
00:03:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing D:
00:44:752 (3) - spacing ~~~
00:48:334 (1,2) - spacing :3
01:00:871 (5) - spacing ?
Always put circle on top of other circle ?
Try to make other patterns ~

[Hard]
00:24:826 (5,6,7,8,9) - Doesn't hit the rhythm :3
The hitsound is a mess =.=
try to hear the rhythm , or put the hitsound when the singer really2 sing.

[Tonoicutzu's Insane]
00:24:602 (n) - add a note
=.= all audio volume why so low ?
better make it higher.
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[Easy]
Incorrect spacing, control it and snap with Distance Snap
use soft Hitsound or add some hitsound
can't continue woth error like those >:<

[Normal]
00:04:901 (5) - From this note and onward there is a violent change of spacing... choose to use 0.8x or 2.2x in all the map.
can't continue woth error like those >:<

[Hard]
Don't do thing like this 00:10:050 (1,2,3,4,5), that you did all over the map
plus most Stream didn't make sense....
can't continue woth error like those >:<

[Tonoicutzu's Insane]
Less HP,OD and AR... go make CS higher!
00:03:781 (6) - New Combo
00:08:483 (5) - ^
00:12:289 (1) - Delete and remap with notes
00:15:871 (2) - Delete and add Spinner long the same as the slider
Map the break part after 00:15:871 (2) -
00:25:946 (5) - New Combo
00:35:125 (7) - ^
00:42:065 (5) - ^
00:47:886 (1) - Delete and remap with notes
01:09:378 (1) - one less repeat
01:16:095 (3) - Delete

01:15:423 (1) - No new combo
01:16:543 (4) - New Combo
01:18:781 (4) - Make it start from 01:19:005 (4) and one less repeat
No Star, call me for recheck

There are arleady 4 ranked map of this, you should do a good work to have it ranked... and a didn't like how it is mapped too...
Lizzehb
645 posts
Joined March 2010
Lizzehb
[Easy]
00:36:692 (4,5,6,7,8) - Space these out a LITTLE more.

[Normal]
Nada~

[Insane]
00:45:647 (8,2) - Overlap these please.
00:58:632 (1,3) - Move up 2 grids.

[Tono's Insane]
01:15:199 - Add note?
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
Done :)
I have do my best in this song :3

Download: ClariS - Irony (TV Size) (- S e k a i -) [Hw's Taiko].osu
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
Requested by heatwave95 to mod taiko diff.

[general]
Tag ALL guest diff makers, and relavent stuffs.
preview time not set.
disable countdown.

[Taiko]
00:01:543 - k
00:01:767 - kdddk
00:08:035 - k
00:27:961 - considering the vocal, 2-3-3-3-3-2 is not so good...
00:40:274 - k k d
00:49:901 - spinner for the whole stream (and 1/4 finish is prohibited)

Rating: (-1 ~ 1)
Pattern: some random triplet patterns and some long stream don't really fit the music : 0
Density: ok, but I think you can make it clearer that the kiai part is streamer and the other part is filled with some 1/2 or 1/1 : 0.5

Keep on working hard, play others work and you'll improve :D

star~
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi

General
orenoimouto37 - this BG image must be 1024x768 or 800x600 resize it
sound in video? i think it must be without it
add tags in easy

Puskin's Easy
Sounds? no? bad
starnge spacing, if there 0.5 spacing than check moments like 00:25:946 (4,5,6)use distance snap better
i will not write about spacing, check it by yourself
00:23:707 (4) - new combo
00:37:587 (6) - ^
00:41:169 (2,3) - not good in easy stack circles like this
00:59:080 (5) - new combo
00:59:975 (1) - remove new combo
01:02:662 (6) - new combo
Bad diff, i propose you to remap it or remove

Normal
inconvenient to check the map with the spacing
Check it out, and work with sounds
00:44:752 - Soft sounds are not heardб use normal
kiai must starts on object

Tonoicutzu's Insane
i think it's too big spacing, may be you will use 1.0 or 0.8?
00:25:946 (5) - new combo
00:37:587 (10) - ^
00:38:483 (1) - remove n.c.
00:58:184 (8) - (nazi) 1 grid right
01:03:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - use 0.5 spacing for streams, it will be better
01:14:080 (4) - ugly slider, do it simmetrical

Insane
spacing spacing spacing
Noral sounds are irrelevantб remove
00:05:348 (8) - new combo

a lot of problems, wtite me PM later when you check your map
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
Taiko mod only, cause heatwave95 to do so.

Hw's Taiko
- Weird kiai. Should be 00:51:916~01:20:572.
- You should map until the end.
- Note density is too even. Usually chorus have higher density than other part, since it's a 'peak'. Do not put too many irregular patterns, though.
00:01:319~00:15:871 - Just follow lyrics here. Don't put notes especially like 00:01:767 (3,4,5,6,7), cause this part isn't suit well with 1/4s.
00:27:961 (100~112) - Meh, this kind of patterns are really rare cause it doesn't suit well with ordinary music. This song isn't exeption.
00:44:744 (T) - Changing hitsound sample to soft like isn't that suit well with this.
00:49:901 (196~206) - Mood of this song isn't that heavy like this stream. Also, BIG NOTES IN 1/4 STREAM AREN'T ALLOWED. You need to change 206 to normal note or delete 205.

Only for some major issues. Random patterns are hard to correct since it's random.
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
done.
wmf mod , put spinner , i don't want , but i put circle only :)

Download: ClariS - Irony (TV Size) (- S e k a i -) [Hw's Taiko].osu
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
[Puskin's Easy]
Still not find any hitsound on this diff x.x
Awaiting for this finished.
Apart from this, nothing can be picked out.

[Normal]
No hitsound? it seems to being work.
01:20:125 (1) - Make the spinner 1/2 later

[Tonoicutzu's Insane]
00:25:946 (5) - Switch combo.
The volume is too low, i almost can hear nothing. Pls turn it up.
I'd suggest to rename Insane to Hard since its not really hard i feel after testing.
Also, if you could have 01:03:558 (1,2,3,4,5) easier, it would play more natural.

[Insane]
Set the volume lower in the beginning part. err...your hitsounds make me blind. Pls dont add hitsound on every note.
Just try to put a clap with lower volume on each 2 white lines. And if you can spend some time in having look at hitsound of those ranked "Irony", it will help you improve these stuffs a lot, for sure.
00:04:005 (7) - What about making it end on 00:04:453 and add two circles on 00:04:901 & 00:05:125?
00:04:901 (x) - Switched combo here if you accepted the suggestion above.

Need more work.

/me shoots star.
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
[Puskin's Easy]
00:46:095 (3,4) - spacing
00:48:781 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:08:035 (3,4,5) - ^
00:49:901 (4) - ugly slider
And maybe add hitsaonds?

Normal
00:04:005 (3,4,5) - 1 grid down?
What distance snap you use? Set distance snap 1.0x and resnap map.

Insane
Set distance snap 1.0x and resnap map.

Tonoicutzu's Insane
00:25:946 (5) - new combo
00:37:587 (10) - ^
00:38:483 (1) - remove now combo
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
made changes:
changed diff name to Tonoicutzu's Hard
added hitsounds
moded a bit, and fixed some issues :)

Download: ClariS - Irony (TV Size) (- S e k a i -) [Tonoicutzu's Hard].osu
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