jericho2442 wrote:

Great Preschooler
00:24:549 (3) - this plays odd, i advise to turn it into a slider like this one and then it will flow more to the rythm of the song

SPOILER

00:33:241 (4) - turn this into a repeat slider for one repeat, this way it follows the vocals better and also sets the player up easier for the next note
00:54:716 (1,2,3) - the spacing of this combo show up fine on DS, but it really bugs me, (3) clearly has more space to it than (1,2) i advise this ;p

SPOILER

Great Student
00:34:434 - you need a note here, or to make the repeat slider before it repeat once more, if you do it flows A LOT better with the song, but you will have to remake this pattern :/ Fixed
(suggestion) 01:14:145 (1) - think about moving this and its combo closer to the (10) before, i just feel this jump feels odd to play Fixed

Great Teacher
(suggestion) 00:24:208 (8) - im not 100% sure but i think a newcombo goes nice here, i just dont like this 14 combo D: Decided to put it on (9). (8) belongs to the previous pattern

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overall they are nice maps, good job

jericho2442 wrote:

Great Preschooler
00:24:549 (3) - this plays odd, i advise to turn it into a slider like this one and then it will flow more to the rythm of the song OK~
00:33:241 (4) - turn this into a repeat slider for one repeat, this way it follows the vocals better and also sets the player up easier for the next note OK~
00:54:716 (1,2,3) - the spacing of this combo show up fine on DS, but it really bugs me, (3) clearly has more space to it than (1,2) i advise this ;p OK~

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

GO NAZI MOD!

[Great Schooler]

SPOILER

00:09:550 (5) - Remove
00:12:107 (3) - Change the 3-beat Slider for 2 beats here 00:12:107 and here 00:12:448
00:15:004 (2) - Remove
00:20:628 (5) - ^
00:21:140 - Add a note
00:21:651 (8) - Remove
00:24:719 (9) - ^
00:31:877 (3,4) - ^
00:34:945 (7) - Take off the reverse arrow.
00:36:990 - Add a note
00:37:331 (5) - Change for a single beat
00:40:569 (6,7) - Remove
00:42:615 (5) - Remove
00:43:296 (9) - Remove
00:43:978 - Add a note
00:44:319 - Add a note
00:46:876 (4) - Remove
00:59:147 (7) - End the slider here 00:59:317
01:13:293 (8,9) - Remove
01:18:065 (5) - Remove
01:18:236 - Add a note
01:18:747 (7) - Remove
01:21:474 (4) - ^
01:25:053 - Add a note
01:25:564 - ^
01:27:098 (6) - Remove
01:36:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't like how you follow the instrumental, with the vocals hiding them. But at least you follow something audible. Think of change it, if you can.

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Except for the last line, all the others are not suggestions. Do it, for the sake of one of the best Anime Openings in all-time. When you make this mod, i'll mod the "Great Teacher". And the "Great Preschooler" is done.

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Great Preshooler]
Why did you delete "Lanttu" from the diff title? ehhehehe ;u;
01:05:623 (1,2) - I think that it's a bit hard to be the easiest difficulty. Uguuu~ Well made it easier finally.

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Great Student]
01:25:564 (6,7) - I would overlap these two like 01:24:712 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fixed

Star~

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Great Prechooler Lanttu]
Remove Lanttu from the diff name, Great Preschooler is enough (Lanttu is already on the tags so don't worry) And that's my explanation . Lanttu also said the diffs name would be a tad too long

CracK wrote:

Some hitsound mod:

[Great student]
00:05:630 (3) - Remove clap on the start of the slider Didn't do that
00:05:289 (1) - Add it here ^
00:06:653 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:08:698 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:33:241 (3) - ^ Fixed

[Great teacher]
00:05:630 (1) - Remove clap Didn't do that
00:11:425 (5) - Add clap on the start of the slider Fixed
00:13:129 (7) - Maybe add it here on the end? Finish sounds better imo
00:14:493 (4) - Add clap Didn't do that
00:34:945 (7) - Maybe add it here on the end? Finish sounds better imo
00:40:399 (8) - Remove on the start and add clap on the end? Nah
01:31:189 (3) - Add clap on the start? fixed
01:36:302 - Remove clap here? fixed

And yeah, the song is quite nice

Weezy wrote:

Not so good with hitsounds but I'll try

Lanttu will check her diff

Great Student
00:17:902 (5,6) Fixed
This would be better:


00:59:658 (8) New combo Fixed
01:00:851 remove new combo Fixed
01:01:363 New combo Fixed


Great Teacher
01:02:044 (1) Make the slider start at 01:02:215 The spinner would then give 1000 points in auto, so no change
01:01:363 (7) Add a repeat to the slider if you went with what I said above

Awesome map you got here
STAR POWER!

Weezy wrote:

Great Preschooler
00:24:549 (3) Finish at the end?
00:51:989 (1) Remove the whistle from the middle
00:54:716 (1) ^same
00:57:442 (1) ^same
01:00:169 (1) Clap in the middle
01:01:533 (2) Claps for the two middles and finish at the end
01:02:896 (1) Remove whistle from the middle
01:08:350 (1) ^same

ziin wrote:

[general]
wow that video is ugly. it would be better to get it from a dvdrip than youtube. Dunno where to get better version

[grade]
looks good.

[great student]
00:26:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - very bad rhythm. Fixed

[great teacher]
00:25:060 (4) - I don't like hidden anti-jumps. Here's your complaint. Not that I missed it. Fixed
00:26:935 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - instead of beat slider, beat slider, beat slider, do slider beat, slider beat, slider, and move the spinner up a little to make it longer. Fixed
00:37:331 (6) - half beat before? I prefer my version
00:40:399 (8) - whole beat before? Fixed

you seem to have an aversion to mapping to the lyrics so I'll stop here. If you like my suggestions on great teacher, pm me back and I'll do a full nazi.

ziin wrote:

SPOILER

only teacher has some weird slider positions. I enjoy sliders a lot, but I might have peculiar tastes in the positioning of them. I doubt it will matter much to the playability in the end, so only do the ones you really like. These are all just suggestions/alternatives. A lot of stuff I know you put in because it looks good.

The end is very good, I didn't find much I didn't like, but the beginning has a lot.

00:09:039 (2,3,4,5,6) - circle circle circle slider slider. no beat on 00:10:402 Changed, but I need that beat on 00:10:402, so my future patterns are similar
00:11:255 (4.5) there's just a soft bass drum hit here. See if you like changing (4) into just a circle. Didn't
00:11:936 (2) - slider. In general, I don't think it's right to put a hard beat on an ん (which there is one on the next note) Changed
00:12:959 (6,7) - slider circle Changed
00:14:834 (1,2) - switch these. Consider long slider circle circle. Changed
00:15:686 (2,1) - circle slider circle circle circle. Just make sure you have something on 00:16:368 Changed half
00:17:902 (8) - could do short repeating slider (wa shi na) and circle (i) on 00:18:583 Changed
00:20:799 (4) - sliderDidn't, (se-m-me-ru) goes (4,5,6,7)
00:23:015 (5) - circle circle circle Changed
00:24:208 (8) - slider Changed
00:24:719 (3) - long slider unless you like the anti-jump Changed
00:26:082 (2) - repeating slider 4 and circle Didn't
00:31:025 (2) - slider Changed
00:31:366 (4,5) - circle slider Changed
00:34:945 (7) - half beat later Didn't
00:37:161 (5,6) - slider circle. I know you already said no to this one. Didn't
00:37:842 (1) - repeating slider Didn't, "hashiru" starts at (2)
00:49:262 (2) - remove this Changed
00:53:352 (1,2,3) - short slider circle long slider circle Changed
00:59:147 (9) - short slider circle Didn't
01:03:408 (2,3) - half beat earlier to go with lyrics Changed
01:10:225 (3,4) - really long slider Changed
01:17:213 (3) - short repeating slider circle short slider into 01:18:065 (4) (again it's an ん) Changed
01:21:474 (7) - slider Changed

whew! I'll try to get a better quality video, but I don't know if the one I have will look better just yet. And added
http://www.mediafire.com/?innu7o85martxdr
and it's much better quality, yay! 2 files here, one is 9 MB the other is 5 MB. pick whichever you want: size or quality. My source file was only 1000 kbps (800 and 425 respectively on the 2 files).

Shiirn wrote:

General
The BPM is WRONG. I'm not entirely sure on the exact number, but the beats are off by the end of the song. Heh, checked the BPM calculator and you wre right, should sound now better ^^
The kiai is a bit long. Cutted it

Great Preschooler
Nothing.

Great Student
The following combos feel awkwardly placed. I suggest editting how they go through, or forming them to the music more.
00:31:195 (2,3,4,5) Changed the pattern
01:24:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Changed the pattern
In general, the map felt like it had issues with staying one specific style.

Great Teacher
00:37:842 (1,2) - These sliders don't feel right compared to the rest of the ones you've made. Changed them a bit


Star~

Mukku wrote:

Offset 1548 and 8390 Changed to those~

Wooosh.

senaya wrote:

[Great Preschooler]
00:16:567 (1) - maybe add another repeat?
01:01:546 (2) - maybe remove last repeat to follow lyrics? Also, if 01:02:568 feels empty after that, add circle there..

frost-b-spec wrote:

request modding~

[Great Preschooler]
change diff name (ex.Preschooler) Great Preschooler is fine (reference to Great Teacher Onizuka)

[Great Student]
change diff name (ex.Student) ^
0.47.916(7) - move circle 0.48.086 Made a slider there
1.05.294(x) - add circleAdded and changed objects
1.22.331(2,4) - 1grid left(level3) Fixed


[Great Teacher]
0.26.960(1,3) - reverse selection Fixed

+star

SapphireGhost wrote:

Great Student
00:26:790 (3,1,2,3) This section kind of confused me because of the overlap and then the spacing. Changed it, overlapping is gone
Great Teacher The AR is so high... The harder, the better
00:37:353 (6) Linear slider??? I put that there because I wanted it to copy the same pattern as (2-5)

Yo Star
Imma let you finish but this is one of the most rankable beatmaps of all time.

SapphireGhost wrote:

Yo Star
Imma let you finish but this is one of the most rankable beatmaps of all time.

Leorda wrote:

Great "Triple Tsundere" Preschooler
00:24:575 (3) - Make a symetric will be good It's not supposed to be symmetric here, it's supposed to follow 2. :3
00:34:286 (5) - Move 1 grid down, naziiiiii B-but if I do that, the distance snap breaks and I have to move lots of other stuff, too. ;~;
00:46:553 (1) - Move further away from 00:45:190 (4) to avoiding from overlapping but isn't a little overlap better than jump in easy? I can't find another good placement for those sliders... ;~ ;

ziin wrote:

If you want to make it even easier to run, do a two pass conversion on my high quality video using xvid.

You can also puush a copy of the good video and link it in the first post, although honestly the people with computers which can't handle a 900 kbps h.264 shouldn't be playing with video on, or should learn how to re-encode in an easier codec if they really want video.
Noted. I decided to keep the current video version though. I also got a pretty sh***y PC so I know the feeling ^^

SapphireGhost wrote:

Yo Star
Imma let you finish but this is one of the most rankable beatmaps of all time.

ziin wrote:

OF ALL TIME.

pieguy1372 wrote:

Great Preschooler:

00:17:930 (2) - Too far from (1) It's about one level-3-grid, no-one's going to notice.
00:25:086 ~ 00:26:960 - Add a break? doesn't seem necessary to me.
00:51:323 - Add a note? Nah.
00:57:457 (1) - Too far from (3) Fixed.
01:08:361 (1) - Align with the start of (5)? OK
01:11:086 (1) - Too far from (2) Fixed
01:16:538 (3) - New combo OK
01:19:264 (1) - Too far from (3) One grid, no-one's going to notice.
01:21:990 (1) - Too far from (2) ^

Odaril wrote:

Great Preschooler
The hitsounds are too silent imo. You should make them louder a bit at least. Bit louder now~
I think tick rate 2 sounds better... your call Ooooh, agreed~ :3

OnosakiHito wrote:

May I make a Taiko guest diff.?