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narakucrimson

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Joined March 2010

narakucrimson 2010-11-29T11:41:47+00:00

Here I am at last! xD Sorry for the delay~~

So:

[General]

Offset sounds better at 400ms, I believe.

Not bad, not bad.

All the following times imply the offset change:

[Relax]

Add some more claps. Like here:
- 48:900 (end of the slider)
- 50:900 (end of the slider, too)
- 55:900
- 56:900 (beggining of the slider)
- 57:900 (beggining of the slider, too)

It's a pattern! And an easy one to remember! Like, claps will sound good at every time with 900 ms.

21:429 (2,3,4) - Move them one grid left.
1:17:400 (3,4) - Move them one grid right.
1:45:900 (4) - One grid left.
2:06:400 (7) - Maybe move this so it doesn't get overlapped by 6?
2:19:900 (5,6) - Move these one grid down and one grid right.
2:35:900 (4, 5) - One grid left and one grid down.
3:33:900 (5) - Move this some grids up!
4:02:400 (4) - Try a more equilateral triangle pattern?

[Dance]

Same clap thingy as before, and also in the last difficulty.

Looks better than Relax.

But, I must say, your combos might be too long. Try changing combo every 6-7 circles. Perhaps you could follow a different pattern for the combo change, but I won't suggest any, 'cause I'm not too inspired today. Just keep it in mind.

[Groove]

The clap thing I mentioned earlier.

Also, your combos are too long here too. So, try shortening them.

Hmm... I won't star this now, but keep working on it, and when you believe it's ready, pm me and I'll star it!
Good luck!

IceBeam

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Joined December 2009

IceBeam 2010-11-29T19:09:09+00:00

~~First!~~

BG resolution is 160x120

Remove hatsune miku from Tags,she's already in Artist.
Add vocaloid if you want to.

Ask for timing help,cause offset is out,and reduce volume,too loud for Normal hitsounds.

[Relax]
Don't overuse claps,don't add them to each note,however you missed some.
00:25:429 (2) - Clap.
00:27:429 (4) - ^
01:45:929 (4) - ^
01:47:929 (1) - ^
01:49:929 (5) - ^
01:51:929 - ^
03:22:429 (2) - Whistle.
03:23:429 (4) - ^
03:24:429 (6) - Whistle on whole slider.
03:36:929 (1) - Clap?
03:37:929 - ^
03:38:929 (4) - ^
03:39:929 - ^
03:40:929 (3) - ^
03:41:929 (6) - ^
04:15:929 (1) - Remove NC.

[Dance]
Like 3/4 of song isn't filled with hitsounds,add them!
00:32:929 ~ Add hitsounds.
01:52:929 ~ ^
03:12:429 (1) ~ ^
03:52:429 (1) ~ ^

[Groove]
Deathstreams.

Good luck,star~

Tonoko

507 posts

Joined June 2009

Tonoko 2010-12-05T21:09:44+00:00

Hi...sorry for my bad english

suggestion: add a silent sliderslide for easy diff

[relax]
01:30:400 (6) - end at 01:31:400 ?
02:53:150 (3) - start at 02:52:900 ?

[dance]
nothing much to say but the only thing confuse me is I feel that somewhere should have a note and somewhere should not.
but it's just a feeling.><

[groove]
20m scores is too many.
the stream is sometime unreadable.
but quite funny play.It's a good try.

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Luvdic 2010-12-08T01:40:23+00:00

First. I really but really recommend you to change the bg. I mean, look at these:

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/4220
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/1681
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/1287

I mean, for players like me, i really relate a map with it's background. So changing it would really help your map to differenciate it from the others. I know that they are not exactly the same but... >_>

Timing:

Use offset of 422, that's what i got. At least it's better than the one you have. BPM seems to be fine.

I'm only doing a quick mod cause i'm not a fan of this song, and it's kinda too long.

Groove:

I'm really against those senseless streams. And most of them are hard to see. I mean, look at 01:29:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
And the sliders could use some work to make them look better, as well as some of the patterns. They are not bad, but could be a bit better so it can pass my quality requirements.

Dance:

00:21:650 (5) - Move it so it starts at 00:21:400 -

Miu Matsuoka

662 posts

Joined May 2008

Miu Matsuoka 2010-12-13T13:51:19+00:00

Hi there :3 Here's my mod for ur map~

[General]
Move 'Vocaloid' from Tags to Source in Song Setup
Well-organized and acceptable rhythms~ Great map:)

[Timing]
BPM is ok~
Offset: 415

[Relax]
It should start from 0:08:415, not 0:10:415, so please map in 0:08:415 - 0:10:29
Overall is okay~

[Dance]
It should start from 0:08:415, not 0:10:415, so please map in 0:08:415 - 0:10:29
Overall is okay~

[Groove]
MAXIMUM SCORE TOO LARGE! UNRANKABLE! please truncate the difficulty!
It should start from 0:08:415, not 0:10:415, so please map in 0:08:415 - 0:10:290
There are no hitsounds 0:16:915, try to make a good rhythm to make the beatmap more attractive
0:16:415 (10) Add finish hitsound
0:20:415 (10) New Combo
0:30:415 (1-15) Use as little reverse patterns as possible
0:39:665 (9-15) ^
0:39:665 (9) New Combo
0:42:415 (1) Remove 2nd slider point, it's useless
0:45:415 (1-9) Remap this part, the pattern is not good
0:49:665 (6-12) Make that a nice and good looking curve
0:57:665 (8-12) Hard to determine hitting pattern, please improve that
1:00:665 (4-9) ^
1:01:665 (10-13) Is this better?

SPOILER

1:04:415 (6-14) Hard to determine hitting pattern
1:08:415 (1-7) ^
1:09:415 (1-7) ^
1:10:415 (8) New Combo
1:14:415 (10-13) Reverse pattern again!?
1:28:165 (1) Remove new combo
1:29:540 (1-8) What the heck with those reverse patterns!!?
1:33:665 (3-15 , 1-6) The oval curve is ugly, disable grid snap and make a good looking circle
1:48:400 (1-8) Add Inheriting section and change the Sample Set to Soft

SPOILER

Open 'Hatsune Miku - Lovely Day (SapphireGhost) [Groove].osu', press Ctrl+F, and type in '456,112,108400,6,0,B|408:80,1,50'
Then replace these code

456,112,108400,6,0,B|408:80,1,50
368,72,108650,2,0,B|328:104,1,50
280,120,108900,2,0,B|224:72,1,50
208,56,109150,2,0,B|168:96,1,50
160,136,109400,2,0,B|208:168,1,50
248,176,109650,2,0,B|288:144,1,50
336,128,109900,2,0,B|392:176,1,50
408,192,110150,2,0,B|448:152,1,50

With this:

406,100,108400,6,0,B|312:134,1,66.6666666666667
277,114,108733,2,0,B|203:74,1,66.6666666666667
153,99,109066,2,0,B|92:146,1,66.6666666666667
93,206,109400,2,0,B|154:280,1,66.6666666666667
195,287,109733,2,0,B|266:264,1,66.6666666666667
319,293,110066,2,0,B|400:308,1,66.6666666666667

1:53:650 (5-10) Messy pattern
1:54:400 (1) Add finish hitsound
1:56:900 (2-13) Messy pattern
2:09:900 (8) New Combo
2:10:400 Add Inheriting section and change the Sample Set to Normal
2:16:900 (3) Please do not overuse these hold sliders, change that to something else
2:34:150 (2-11) Make it like this?

SPOILER

2:40:650 (1-14) Again, messy patterns
2:42:440 (15) Hold slider problem
2:45:400 (14) ^
2:53:400 (5-13) These messy patterns are driving me crazy!!

2:55:400 (2) Know what to do, eh?
3:26:400 (13) ^
3:27:400 (15) ^
3:28:150 (1) Remove New combo
3:28:400 (1) ^
3:36:900 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) i rofl-ed when i saw this part, map a little bit with it
3:49:150 (1-9) Again
3:58:400 (1) This is too unacceptable
4:02:525 (1) Remove New combo
4:11:400 (2) Again

kds

Sleep Powder

1,540 posts

Joined October 2008

Sleep Powder 2010-12-14T22:10:24+00:00

[Easy]
00:15:400 (2) - Add Claps?
00:53:900 (2) - Remove Clap at end
02:04:150 (5) - Align slider start and end
02:26:400 (3) - Move away from previous slider (so its not touching)
02:30:150 (1) - Shorten slider by 1/2 beat and move to next 1/2 beat.
02:30:150 (1) - Place a circle here.
02:38:900 (1) - I don't like this slider ._.
02:56:400 (4) - Add a Finish
03:48:900 (6) - Move away from (4) [so its not touching]
03:53:900 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:56:400 (5) - Add New Combo

Tooooo loooong D:

[Dance]
00:13:400 (8) - Make the slider look nicer (align start and end horizontally)
01:35:400 (3) - Add a circle here.
01:35:650 (1) - Move spinner up by 1/2 beat.
01:47:900 (7) - Fix Spacing (compared to [5,6] )
01:52:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - Use less notes in this section and soft sampleset hitsounds.
02:20:400 (9) - New Combo
02:22:900 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:24:400 (8) - Add New Combo
02:36:400 (9) - ^
02:37:400 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:41:900 (3,4,5) - Spacing. (compare with [1,2] )
02:46:650 (4,5) - Spacing. (compare with [1,2] )
03:28:400 (1) - Use soft sampleset hitsounds during this section and use less notes.

[Groove]
00:11:415 (5) - Make the slider look nicer
00:13:415 (5) - ^
00:29:040 (8) - Spaced too far from previous.
00:57:790 (9) - Add a Circle here. Move repeat slider to next 1/4 beat. Move spinner to next 1/4 beat and shorten by a 1/4 beat.
01:05:540 (1) - Move to previous white tick.
01:24:915 (5) - Add New Combo
01:52:915 (1) - Use soft sampleset hitsounds during this section and use less notes.
02:10:415 (5) - Spacing (compared to the rest of combo)
03:10:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Add some claps here.
03:17:290 (7) - Add New Combo
03:26:415 (13) - ^
03:28:415 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:50:290 (10) - Add a Circle here. Place slider on next 1/4 beat and adjust slider.

Rename to "Key-board Breaking" plz.

Overall, I suggest lowering the play time to about 3 minutes or less. I really wouldn't want to play (or mod) something that long (frequently). You should add more hitsounds and make your easier difficulties look nicer.

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-12-19T13:35:32+00:00

Suggestion: mainly use soft hitsound

[Groove]
0:10:415 (1) up 1 grid
0:12:415 (1,2,3) (1,2) down 2 grids, (3) down 1 grid
0:17:290 (2) x:408 y:208
0:51:165 (11) up 1 grids
1:21:915 (6~10) spacing, not symmetical
1:32:165 (8,1,2) stack it together
1:35:165 (15) delete?
1:35:415 (1) no need to 1/8 imo
1:48:165 (11,1,...) right 1 grid
1:48:415 (1~8) weird to me orz
2:01:915 (10,11,12) uneven spacing
2:25:915 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) make it symmetrical
4:11:415 (2,3) 1/4 beat backward

-Quite overmapped, note-only stream brakes the max. rankable total score.
-I don't think you'll have to cut the song, but make it less dense or more slider.

[Dance]
1:01:650 (3) I prefer a smooth slider <_<
1:34:650 (s) This is rankable, but maybe a bit too short as a normal
2:23:400 (2) left 1 grid

Problems mainly comes from the hardest diff, try to make it easier or make a new [hard], otherwise the diff spreadings is too extreme.

star and good locuk~

Oh BTW, very moe BG.

maal

maal 2010-12-26T21:50:27+00:00

~|General|~
Delete .osb and full submit.
You need a preview point. Reply to this if you don't understand how to or find me in-game and pm me.
Tags?

~|Relax|~
01:27:900(x): add note?
01:31:900(1): Add the hitsound clap?

Pretty good easy diff.

~|Dance|~
00:55:400(1,7): I don't like these two sliders. Opinion.
01:26:900(x): Why don't you add two notes to fill out the empty space?
This was kinda, mehish.

~|Groove|~
Great!

narakucrimson

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Joined March 2010

narakucrimson 2010-12-28T00:16:15+00:00

Hi!

Much better now! You really have improved this a lot!

Now, as Emaal said, you need a preview point. Make sure to set one (just go to the timing drop down menu, and select Set current position as preview point. Obviously, you first need to select an adequate preview point xD

[Relax]

Pretty nice!

[Dance]

18:400 (4, 5, 6) - Maybe move these all one grid down? So they don't get overlapped

28:400 (7) - New combo here?
31:400 (1) - Maybe remove this new combo? (If you followed the last suggestion)
54:900 (8) - Distance? The distance from this to the previous and the next object isn't consistent :/
1:01:650 (3) - Maybe move the bottom (the red node) of this slider a few grids up so that the slider looks more symmetrical?

[Groove]

Smoooooooth

Ok, that's all. It has improved a lot. I believe I can star this now.

JoJo

1,177 posts

Joined July 2010

JoJo 2011-01-01T05:46:19+00:00

Hi~>.<~
Here is my poor mod~

[Groove]
04:07:665(5)2 grid left.
A little easy..Maybe increase AR?Or map some jumps?
Fine to me,good diff.

[Dance]
I'm not good at sound effects.But I guess they should be improved in this diff and relax diff..>.<
00:40:400(x)Add a note?
00:58:400(9)This slider doesn't follow the rhythm.
02:00:900(7)New combo.
02:44:400(8)1 grid down.
03:21:650(8)Maybe you'd better move it to 03:21:900?

[Relax]
Ok.Except the sounds.

Happy new year~^^

Sandpig

847 posts

Joined September 2010

Sandpig 2011-01-07T11:25:13+00:00

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

Groove

consider using some claps or normal-sample in the front part

some of the streams look little random...but it's ok...

02:32:415 (1) - I don't like the using of this kind of slider. It is short and looks like a common slider. It may confuse the player

and I think there are some unnecessary new combo, consider making some change of them

00:57:665 (1) - remove new combo?
01:13:665 (1) - remove new combo?(you can add one on 01:14:415 (2) instead)
01:27:165 (1) - remove new combo?
01:32:165 (1) - ^
02:01:665 (1) - ^
02:01:665 (1) - remove new combo and add on 02:36:165 (6) instead?
02:36:665 (1) - remove new combo and add on 02:37:415 (6)?
03:49:415 (1) - remove new combo and add on 03:49:915 (3)
03:50:915 (1) - remove new combo and add on 03:51:915 (3)
03:53:415 (1) - remove new combo and add on next slider
03:55:915 (8) - add new combo here and remove the next new combo
04:05:415 (1) - remove new combo and add on 04:05:915 (2)
04:06:665 (1) - remove new combo

Dance

00:20:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm here seems not to match the other part. consider adding a note on 00:21:400 and start 00:21:650 (6) from 00:21:900
01:02:900 (5) - 1 grid up
02:24:400 (4) - add new combo here and remove the next one?
02:40:900 - add a note?

Relax

remove the timing settings in unmapped part

ok, star

Kamure

735 posts

Joined August 2009

Kamure 2011-01-08T17:12:49+00:00

Ok, another beatmap..

By Mod Request:

General
01:20:400 - how about making this part kiai time and using the normal sampleset until 01:36:400 (claps would be recommended in this part)
02:40:400 - ^ and ending at 02:56:400
03:44:400 - ^ and ending at 03:59:900 (keep the other kiai time)

Relax
Are you going to map the rest of the song? (If not, take out the stuff in the rest of the song and shorten the mp3 for that diff only)
Other than that, the structure and hitsounds are fine.

Dance
00:12:900 (7) - remove the whistle
00:16:900 (1) - remove the clap at the end of the slider
00:21:400 (5) - clap
00:21:900 (6) - move the slider away or put it under (5) and new combo
00:22:650 (7,8,9,10) - remove the claps at (7,9)
00:30:150 (4) - remove the clap
00:36:400 (9) - move away from the slider
01:24:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make symmetrical
01:46:400 (4) - new combo and move away
01:52:400 - move the timing section back 1 blue tick
02:20:400 (3) - 2 grids to the left
02:21:400 (4) - 1 grid left and down
03:28:150 - move the timing section back 1 blue tick
04:04:400 (10) - 1 grid to the right
04:12:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - too much clap spam

Groove
Fine!!!!

~~i'm actually in a hurry right now, i'll mod more later.....~~
Edit: back again. just do the mods

Here's a star....

Weez

2,318 posts

Joined February 2009

Weez 2011-01-10T04:26:07+00:00

Looks fine to me >w<
but the bg should be 1024*768 or 800*600

star

wmfchris

osu! Alumni

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Joined March 2008

wmfchris 2011-01-12T14:05:51+00:00

The timing is not unique.

[Groove]
01:03:415 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - (8) right 1 grid, (1~5) down 1 grid
01:31:165 (6) - down 1 grid
01:48:415 (1,2,3,4) - use 1/3 slider
01:58:248 (3) - right 1 grid
03:12:040 (x) add 3 notes on the 1/4?

[Dance]
00:10:400 (1) - left+up 1 grid
01:28:150 (2) - up 1 grid
02:54:150 (6) - down 1 grid

TTTTTTTTTTTT

1,116 posts

Joined August 2009

TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-14T12:09:43+00:00

as we can seen in the Weezy's reply "the bg should be 1024x768 or 800x600"

Relax
01:18:400(1) - Make symetric
nice~

Dance
00:30:400(5) - Make symetric
01:01:400(3) - move 1 gird right and 1 gird down(lv3)
01:25:150(2) - move 1 gird down(lv3)
01:25:400~01:26:650(3,4,5,6,7,8) - move 1 gird left(lv3)
01:26:900(9) - move 1 gird up(lv3)
02:01:650(4) - move 1 gird up(lv3)
02:25:400(2) - Make symetric
02:32:400(10) - Make symetric
03:22:150(2) - remake this slider(shape)

Groove
01:13:665(1) - remove NC?
01:46:415(7) - remove whistle hitsound
04:00:415(1) - ^ and add a finish hitsound

star

Luneko

842 posts

Joined June 2009

Luneko 2011-01-15T22:27:44+00:00

Green = Request
Blue = Would be nice if you change
Red = Change plz

[Relax]
nothing :3

[Dance]
00:11:900 (4) - New Combo
00:31:400 (6) - ^
00:31:400 (6,7,8) - Move them like this : http://puu.sh/IPP
00:39:400 (6) - New Combo
00:47:400 (8) - Move this slider like this : http://puu.sh/IPR
01:08:900 (4) - New Combo
02:27:900 (9) - ^

[Groove]
nice

Have a Star~

Keksi

987 posts

Joined April 2009

Keksi 2011-01-15T22:36:31+00:00

Mod:
Green:Request
Red: Change it !
[Dance]

00:57:400- (7) add new combo
01:09:650- same
02:27:150- (8) New combo
03:53:900- same

Groove and Relax are nice :3

Good first map

star~

iMuffin

243 posts

Joined March 2010

iMuffin 2011-01-17T03:23:18+00:00

everyone beat me to mods haha.

otherwise i love what i'm seeing, especially the background

star'd

Zelos

1,111 posts

Joined May 2010

Zelos 2011-01-19T21:41:43+00:00

Check your song folders because most likely you have 2 of the same song folder with 2 different mp3s.

it happened with one of my maps, so if possible, look in your song folder and see if you have 2 of the same. delete one folder(make sure you have all diffs in one set) then full submit.

if this isnt the case, then WTF.

Canneh

107 posts

Joined October 2010

Canneh 2011-01-23T03:53:04+00:00

Rly nice for me :3

James2250

osu! Alumni

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Joined July 2008

James2250 2011-01-23T06:14:28+00:00

Some of of these things are just small suggestions, pick which ones you want to follow~

-The offset seems pretty early at the moment, I would try 420 (don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections)
-The default x % . etc look odd with the skinned numbers you are using atm in my opinion, I would skin those too

Relax:
For such a long mp3 it would be nicer if more of it was mapped but ok
00:19:400 (1,2) - switch new combo? Seems to follow your pattern more
01:18:400 (1) - decrease volume on this, its a pretty dramatic change from the ones before and after it

Dance:
Turn the normal hitsound sections down, they are too loud compared to the song
00:20:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - might look neater if spread out more
00:29:400 (3,4,5) - continue your whistle pattern
00:34:400 (1) - kind of an odd shape~ Maybe align ends more?
00:49:400 (4) - add whistle to follow your pattern
00:58:400 (3,1,2) - I wouldn't overlap these
01:03:900 (7) - could look nicer aligned with 5
01:20:900 (1,4) - not a major issue but stack these? (I would make 01:20:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6) more symmetrical in general)
01:47:400 (1) - add whistle (and prob doesn't need new combo)
03:22:400 (3) - add whistle to the start to follow pattern
03:42:900 (4,5,6) - don't overlap?
Go through the entire map and see where you missed off some whistles if possible. It sounds strange when a note doesn't have one when you basically follow the same rhythm 99% of the time

Groove:
Turn the normal hitsound sections down, they are too loud compared to the song
Raise OD slightly for an Insane?
00:44:150 (1) - new combo isn't needed
02:32:400 (1) - add whistle to follow your pattern
03:22:150 (1) - new combo isn't needed
03:58:025 (6) - move to white tick

Maps are pretty nice and very few technical errors. However would suggest you go through and make sure all of your hitsounds are in a consistent pattern and make a few of the patterns slightly neater in general
Have a star~

geckogates

56 posts

Joined February 2010

geckogates 2011-01-24T02:00:49+00:00

great map ^^ hope you rank it soon

"IRC Mod"
2:33:045 (spaced from the slider a bit, moved closer)

DoraX

30 posts

Joined July 2009

DoraX 2011-01-24T03:15:37+00:00

English is poor, sorry
[Groove]
01:11:420(5) - Move it left a little, on the middle line. (I think...^_^)
01:20:920(3) - Move it down a little.
01:29:920(8) - Move it to the slider's tail.

artpiggo

315 posts

Joined December 2009

artpiggo 2011-01-24T06:49:00+00:00

Dance
00 12 920 for me, this note should have finish sound
00 17 420 ^
00 19 420 ^
00 21 420 ^
00 23 420 ^
00 26 170 clap sound, maybe
00 31 920 wrong distance a little bit
00 33 920 clap sound
01 03 420 finish sound maybe
03 19 920 clap
03 20 920 ^
I see, you want to use finish/ clap only in Kiai time, hmm ok then you can ignore about my hitsound modding (But for me, whistle/soft in long term feels me sleepy - -)

Groove
03 24 920 remove combo color
03 36 420 so creative Miku >w< I love it
03 39 920 maybe up this slider to equal to mi-

Star then! Good work

Firo Prochainezo

2,140 posts

Joined June 2010

Firo Prochainezo 2011-01-26T15:01:30+00:00

Dance
The hitsounds sound boring when it's not kiai time. Maybe add hitclaps?
00:17:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - This would be a cool pattern if you do it symmetrical. Maybe do it like this? http://puu.sh/Nwc
00:57:920 (1) - Remove New Combo from here.
01:04:420 (1) - I don't think this spinner fits with the music. Maybe replace it with a slider?
02:02:170 (5) - This hitcircle that appears out of nowhere looks awkard. Maybe move it 1/1 backward?
02:04:170 (7) - Remove this hitcircle.
03:46:170 (5) - New Combo here.
03:48:420 (1) - This spinner doesn't really flow with the rest. Remove it?
04:12:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - In my opinion, this part looks very messy.

Groove
Same thing about the hitsounds on Dance.
Other than that, I see nothing wrong.

Have a star ! :3

MoodyRPG

2,754 posts

Joined August 2010

MoodyRPG 2011-01-27T02:15:43+00:00

star ~~

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2011-01-28T12:23:08+00:00

General:

- The Time lines are off time, because maybe you had an offset change.
Make sure to set in time, including the Preview point which should be in 32900 (actually in 32000) to all difficulties.

Storyboard:

- Make fade in and out ?

Relax:

00:29:920 (4,1) : 1 Grid up?
00:32:420 (1) : Remove New Combo
01:20:420 (1) : Add Finish
01:23:920 (3) : I think there shouldn't be a Whistle at the start, according to your hitsound rules..

Dance:

01:35:420 (1) : Finish
02:16:920 (1) : Whistle
02:20:420 (3) : Whistle at start
02:44:420 (9) : ^
02:54:420 (1) : Remove Whistle
03:27:420 (3) : ^
*04:00:420* Maybe you'll know what's wrong..
04:15:420 (11) : End with Finish

Groove:

01:34:420 (1) : Finish
02:37:045 (6) : Delete?
03:25:920 (x) : Too hard.. I suggest to add a note

Nice, and Cute Miku~~
Star *

Dusty

870 posts

Joined June 2009

Dusty 2011-01-29T03:23:52+00:00

Hey, this map is pretty cool!

*star

Vergence

546 posts

Joined December 2009

Vergence 2011-01-30T13:11:08+00:00

Modding Time!

Overall : You might wanna place some finishes at some parts

Relax
00:32:420 (5) - Add finish

Dance
Seems fine to me.

Groove
Approach Rate and Overall Diff +1
00:32:420 (5) - Add finish
____________________________
I can't find much errors :3
This is one well-made beatmap
Havva star

galvenize

919 posts

Joined June 2010

galvenize 2011-01-30T21:36:01+00:00

Awesome with DT ヽ(´ー`)ノ.

aevv_old

aevv_old 2011-01-30T22:05:33+00:00

galvenize wrote:
Awesome with DT ヽ(´ー`)ノ.

this

soulfear

947 posts

Joined January 2010

soulfear 2011-02-03T15:57:17+00:00

star

blop_old_1

4 posts

Joined December 2009

blop_old_1 2011-02-06T09:29:49+00:00

BAM!

star'd

nimi

978 posts

Joined April 2010

nimi 2011-02-07T18:51:53+00:00

hi hi >u<

General
Please don't consider this an offense. u-û But I think you could improve more the text you used in your sb (specially for the beatmapmadeby.png file) and in the files you used for this custom skin. Well, it's up to you anyways.. XD If you want some help with this poke me ingame that I'll be happy to help you, or at least try to >_<"

Relax
00:23:420 (3) - place this slider a little higher? (like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/55338. Looks better imo)
00:46:420 (4) - instead of this beat, you could make a slider here (which finishes at 00:46:920), follows the lyrics as well.

Dance
00:46:420 (5) - new combo? (not really sure about this ;-;)
00:56:920 (3) - *nazi* 2 grids to the left? - to be at the same place the 00:55:420 (1) finished
02:01:920 (x) - add a note here
02:08:920 (4) - new combo
02:24:420 (4) - add another repeat to this slider
02:37:170 (x) - add a note here
03:34:420 (1) - extend it to 00:35:920
04:08:420 (10) - new combo here instead of 04:08:920 (1) seems better imo

Ahhh the みく slider in Groove is soooo kawaii >oo< Couldn't find anything to suggest in this diff as well.
Well well, really nice map, hope it gets ranked soon ^__^

Selee

1,556 posts

Joined February 2010

Selee 2011-02-07T23:01:34+00:00

[General]

I think you'd better do both fade in/out for one picture. (Use the plus symbol in KeyFrame Control) It might be some problems like this--The myname disapear once then appear again.

spinner-circle.png is too big imo...You don't need that much quanlity for spinner-circle anyway...

Tags: Seems that the original song was by "High Note", add this into tags?

About the hitsounds, I think you can use soft-clap for the song (at 2nd&4th white line), though it doesn't fit the song perfectly, I can't find a better custom one now... 80% would be a good volume for this... You can also add some soft-finish (Lower the volume if you do so.)

50~60% volume for normal sample part please...

[Relax]

I prefer a new combo for 2/1 beats..The new combo pattern seems a little random due to the sliders occurance

00:10:420 (T) - useless timeline, delete?
00:17:920 (3) - New combo like 00:24:420 (1,2,3,1) ?
01:14:420 (4,1) - New combo at 4 rather 1
01:48:420 (1) - Fade this slider? Also remove finish end?

Copy&paste and lack of beats' variety make me feel boring...

[Dance]

00:37:170 (2,3) - Switch these?
00:58:420 (3) - Remove whistle sliderbody? Sounds awkward to me. Also try finish end? ._.
01:09:670 (1) - Remove new combo? 01:10:420 (4) - New combo? 01:11:420 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:10:670 (5) - Remove this note?
01:34:920 (1) - not necessary to use distance snap for whole song...I suggest to move this to center
01:48:420 (1) - Same suggestion in Relax, also whistle?
02:04:170 (8) - Remove this...
03:48:420 (1) - Whistle?
04:00:420 (T) - kiai like Groove?

Could you use slider to replace some notes? I have to say that the notes arrangements are boring...like 03:51:420 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4)

[Groove]

00:10:420 (T) - unused timeline, delete?
00:12:920 (1) - Remove whistle begin.
01:50:420 (1) - Same suggestion in Relax.
02:54:420 (1) - Finish like Dance?

A little overmapped /.

Last edited by Selee 2011-02-08T03:55:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

twistedice

117 posts

Joined July 2010

twistedice 2011-02-08T02:54:04+00:00

No kudosu for this, I didn't find anything.

General

04:00:295
04:08:420 - Lower the volume to 60% or 70% in this kiai section? The loud whistle sound is distracting imo.

Dance

02:46:420 (3) - I think you missed a Whistle sound here?

Also I think spinners should really be used sparingly, but that's just my opinion. (:

STAR ★

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2011-02-08T14:53:56+00:00

Hey

General
1) You need the default score (default-1, default-comma, etc, because every player has a diffrent custom scores (default and score)
2) Why the beatmapmade and myname in design mode has 2?
3) Crop the unnesescary file in myname.png
4) You need a spinner-background and spinner-metre, because of this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/55632
5) IMO, you need more hitsound

Relax
00:36:920 (1) - Move further away from 00:34:920 (1) to prevent overlapped
01:11:420 (3,4,1) - Try make a triangle pattern, that would be neat
01:52:920 (1) - A little too far from spinner
02:31:420 (3,4,1) - Try make a triangle pattern, that would be neat

Dance
00:21:420 (5) - Try make a slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/55608
00:24:420 (6) - Make slider like this to make a blanket combo? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/55610
00:34:420 (7) - Make symetric?
00:39:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - Arrange this pattern to flower pattern?
00:56:920 (3) - Move to X:364 and Y:73, look upper-right to know what I mean, and sorry for nazi
01:01:670 (4) - Arrange like this? The previous object are overlapped them D: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/55612
01:04:420 (1) - Must new combo, to prevent any spinner bug
01:18:420 (1) - ^
01:35:420 (1) - ^
01:48:420 (1) - ^
01:59:420 (6) - The wave slider seems odd for me
02:04:420 (1) - Must new combo, to prevent any spinner bug
02:14:420 (1) - ^
02:20:420 (3) - Make a bit curvy? It just like parallel slider
02:39:170 (1) - Must new combo, to prevent any spinner bug
02:54:420 (1) - ^
03:24:170 (1) - ^
03:34:420 (1) - ^
04:09:920 (6) - Try make a slider like this, it's kinda overlapped http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/55615

Groove
01:48:420 (1,1,1,1) - This is combo spam! Remove it!

Ugh, sorry for long mod

sico91212

85 posts

Joined February 2010

sico91212 2011-02-09T12:55:57+00:00

Leorda wrote:
IMO, you need more hitsound

yep, you needs more hitsounds!

then PM me to mod your map.

senaya

osu! Alumni

5,798 posts

Joined March 2010

senaya 2011-02-09T13:46:25+00:00

Miku has some fine bewbs for a girl of her age

Anyway, your map looks fine to me, I only have some small suggestions.
Also, I think that it needs some more variety in hitsound patterns, but that's up to you to decide.

[Dance]
02:09:670 - clapclap sound here might be a better idea to map, instead of the vocals..
02:22:420 (7,1,2,3) - finish all of these? if yes, then try patterns that look like this throughout the song.

OzzyOzrock

5,185 posts

Joined August 2010

OzzyOzrock 2011-02-17T23:45:55+00:00

[Relax]
Pretty good!

[Dance]
owo Also good.

[Groove]
Gah, also good.

This is the fourth time today in which I've gooded every damn difficulty of a map. It makes me feel bad and useless. orz

What appears in the storyboard at 3:03:170? o wo

star~

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 2011-02-18T11:25:40+00:00

That background... *looks at CDFA*

Ahem, as per your request:

[General]
No custom section-fail?
The spinner-circle needs a center point (just paste the one from the default one and it'd work)
I also don't really like images like this for a spinner circle simply because it's so disorienting as it's spinning. It's easy to lose your cursor.
You also need a spinner approach circle.
Can you get the offset checked? I'm hitting pretty early and I suck at timing. :P

[Relax]
00:46:420 (4) - Forget a whistle?
Eh, felt kind of bland since you ended up using the same basic rhythm for almost the entire song. I kind of lost interest in "playing" the map kind of early on. Think you can spruce it up a bit? You have some rich vocal rhythms and a good bass line that you can try can follow on occasion if you can work it in. It's technically fine though...

[Dance]
There are some holes in your whistle usage in here too, if you want to check through for those.
03:24:170 (1) - Feels like it starts early. Maybe start it at 03:24:420 - ?
03:28:420 (1) - Aaah, remove that whistle from the slider body please.

[Groove]
03:39:920 (3) - Eeh, the rhythm isn't fitting here. It's nice to see the slider art (or at least spelling out the みく ), but if you can't work it in musically, it kind of takes away from it.
04:08:420 - This rekiai intended? If so, add it to [Dance] as well.

Eeh, all the difficulties kind of have that static rhythm feel that I described in [Relax] that kind of made playing this map more of a chore instead of enjoying it as a presentation of the music. I know it's rather late into the life of the map set, but I think it would make the set as a whole much more enjoyable if you could vary up rhythms a little more (especially for a 4 minute long difficulty) it would make the maps much more memorable and fun. That said, they're technically fine, but I know that these can be much, much better, after looking at how you've mapped these.

MathiasXII

335 posts

Joined January 2009

MathiasXII 2011-02-20T19:03:59+00:00

Nice <3 !

laport

1,240 posts

Joined June 2010

laport 2011-02-20T23:38:13+00:00

here's a star

ziin

2,632 posts

Joined January 2010

ziin 2011-02-21T04:39:38+00:00

[general]
that spinner is painful for me to look at. Please center it and put a middle point in it. It's also got leftover eraser marks (look at it on a black background).
resave the background with 95 quality jpg.

maps very nice. I don't quite see the point in switching to normal hitsounds at the end though. I couldn't find any serious problems, and it really is a nice DT map.

[relax]
map the whole thing...

ah crap, that didn't deserve a kudosu. Hang on, lemme make you a spinner.
okay here you go.
http://puu.sh/10KW

Kyonko Hizara

2,855 posts

Joined August 2010

Kyonko Hizara 2011-02-21T23:24:28+00:00

oWingz

89 posts

Joined March 2010

oWingz 2011-02-23T10:25:51+00:00

Star, Nice and peaceful

Ayeen_old

316 posts

Joined October 2010

Ayeen_old 2011-02-23T12:07:36+00:00

Generally:
Nothing much I can say, it all seem good. Dont touch much, leave it as it is. Wait for approval.
I hate fancy spinner >.< ( Coz I spin in small circles same as computer, quite hard to spin. It a nice spinner actually, it just that i cant spin well with it, Psst. DONT CHANGE IT, coz the problem this problem only face by fews (maybe only me >.<)

Dance
If I am not wrong "dance" difficlulty was meant to be "hard". More like normal to me. Maybe wrong slider velocity there, that make it same speed as "relax",plus using 1/2 beatsnap divisor there. 4min + map, If it fast map, must be quite tiring

, That not the issue though, I dont see anything wrong there as slow speed can cover up the long map.

Goodluck in getting approval for this map.

*Star*

jedric_old

38 posts

Joined February 2011

jedric_old 2011-02-24T08:10:04+00:00

lol i suck at spinners, still, it was pretty good... id be better at the spinner parts if my table didnt get friction burns from my mouse always being spun around at a fast speed....MY TABLE IS STARTING TO PEEL!!!

Reed R Gale

120 posts

Joined January 2011

Reed R Gale 2011-02-24T08:41:45+00:00

I liked the map, other than that I could see nothign that hasn't already been said 198237219837 times.

The overwhelmed,

Reed R Gale

Hitoshirenu Shourai

osu! Alumni

990 posts

Here since the beginning

Hitoshirenu Shourai 2011-02-25T06:21:41+00:00

Everything looks good. Nice job!

James2250

osu! Alumni

4,059 posts

Joined July 2008

James2250 2011-02-26T05:31:07+00:00

-Might as well cut off the unnecessary transparency on the "Sapphire Ghost" sb and any of the other ones that need it (Also as its recommended and pretty easy to do resize scorebar-ki etc to 1x1)
-Cut all of the white parts off the middle of your section pass? It looks odd right now (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/60719)
-I would prefer if the 100/100k etc looked different so people could tell when playing, but they don't have to be
-You need to have some sort of hit0 in your folder even if it is the default one to avoid any skin conflicts
-Seeing as you have a section pass include some sort of section fail too?

Relax:
00:57:920 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:920 (2) - new combo (to follow your pattern up to this point)
01:48:420 (1) - sounds odd with a finish after the music has faded out for so long, make it a whistle or fade it out slowly? (same for other difficulties, try and keep them consistent)

Dance:
03:23:920 (1) - new combo isn't needed and seems kind of random here

Groove:
Nicely done map
03:42:920 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - odd new combos

Slightly too many general issues for me to rank, call me back after fixes and I will rebubble though~

Ok all looks good now, good luck on your rank
Rebubbled~

Larto

4,128 posts

Joined June 2008

Larto 2011-02-26T13:32:00+00:00

Hello, I'm just here to disapprove of the shortened easy difficulty, that's all.

James2250

osu! Alumni

4,059 posts

Joined July 2008

James2250 2011-02-26T19:53:29+00:00