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Fight69

Joined January 2010

Fight69 2010-09-05T12:53:48+00:00

Hi vivicat o/

Don't forget, everything are only suggestions, especially for the new combos.

[General]

Why the kiai time are not the same on each diff ?!

[Normal]

00:55:785 (1) - This note appear a bit too fast after the spinner, make the spinner shorter (00:54:237 should be good)
01:40:689 (2) - New combo ?
01:54:624 (1,2) - New combo on these 2 slider ?

[LK's Hard]

Oh shi- !

30 circles are not snapped !

Fix them all with AIMod

01:56:173 (3) - New combo ?

[Lunatic]

01:40:689 (2) - New combo ?
01:47:947 (9) - Spacing (don't forget to fix next circles)
01:56:173 (8) - No new combo ?
01:57:334 (9) - New combo ?

Not bad : ~Star !

Selee

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Selee 2010-09-05T16:26:41+00:00

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-09-07T15:08:37+00:00

[Lunatic]
0:30:237 (3,4,5,6,7) SPACING
0:32:560 (1~10) ^
0:35:850 (1,2,5) ... are you killing taiko player?
0:55 ~ 1:05 just a messy arranging...
1:11:463 (1~7) slightly uneven spacing
1:12:818 (1,2,3) spacing of (1,2) different from (2,3)
1:17:463 (1,2,3,4,5) make a regular star path... (3) down 1 grid, (5) right 1 grid and some more adjustments?
1:19:011 (1,2,3,4,5) ^
1:23:463 (7) too near to the boundary
That's insane... but you'll need more different patterns

[Hard]
0:22:108 (3,4,1) nazi jump
1:39:527 (3,4,5,6,7) ^
2:03:527 (7) finish

Menat

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Menat 2010-09-07T15:14:26+00:00

vivere

752 posts

Joined April 2009

vivere 2010-09-09T14:57:24+00:00

Hii

[Normal]:

00:20:173- move two grid level to your left side
-------------------------
[LK's Hard]:

00:40:302- you have to upload 4 grid level

01:23:076- This circle is misplaced (This has to go under each other)
01:46:882- ^
-------------------------

Good map

Star

LKs

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LKs 2010-09-10T13:02:55+00:00

>_> 你又弄错两个1/4
Download: Yuuna Kamishiro - Shrill False (vivicat) [LKs's Hard].osu

aspara_old

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aspara_old 2010-09-11T02:24:46+00:00

神譜面

gogo vivi~

vivicat

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Topic Starter

vivicat 2010-09-12T12:03:07+00:00

LKs wrote:
>_> 你又弄错两个1/4
[attachment=0:bbf70]Yuuna Kamishiro - Shrill False (vivicat) [LKs's Hard].osu[/attachment:bbf70]

=口=b 它怎麼老自己動啊orz

ElecoR

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ElecoR 2010-09-15T12:23:42+00:00

star☆~~

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2010-09-17T11:54:35+00:00

ni hao!

sry for my poor chinglish

ok,lets begin~

Normal
about hitsound(suggestions)

SPOILER

00:12:431(1) - add finish on the start
00:14:753(4) - clap hitsound
00:15:140(5) - ^
00:15:527(1) - add finish at the beginning
00:17:850(4) - clap hitsound
00:18:237(5) - ^
00:18:624(1) - add finsh at the beginning
00:21:721(1) - ^
00:27:914(1) - how about a whistle? put whistle hitsound into the beginning and end
00:29:463(3) - ^
01:23:656(1) - put whistles into start,end and first repeat(01:23:656,01:23:850 and 01:24:237)
01:24:431(2) - add clap(01:24:431 and 01:24:624)

LKs's Hard
额。。

Lunatic
不错，但我fail了。。

Mapper 31

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Mapper 31 2010-09-17T12:26:57+00:00

Hi
May i make taiko diff? :3

Jinxy

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Joined February 2009

Jinxy 2010-09-17T12:54:33+00:00

I think this is a remix from PCB. Maybe a Youmu/Yuyuko BG?

Nothing else. Starred.

vivicat

618 posts

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Topic Starter

vivicat 2010-09-17T12:57:04+00:00

samiljul wrote:
Hi
May i make taiko diff? :3

ok

Mapper 31

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Mapper 31 2010-09-23T14:31:08+00:00

:3~

Download: Yuuna Kamishiro - Shrill False (vivicat) [31's Taiko].osu

vivicat

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vivicat 2010-09-23T14:39:26+00:00

samiljul wrote:
:3~

updated :3

yeokki

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yeokki 2010-10-02T15:08:43+00:00

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-10-07T13:00:17+00:00

[LKs's Hard]
* resnap all note
* remove lead-in? it's fine though just asking ~
01:05:656 (3) - spacing..! >_<!

[Lunatic]
evillll Orzzz

EDIT: FC'd Lunatic >A</*

Kotone

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Kotone 2010-10-07T15:55:25+00:00

原曲：アルティメットトゥルース？
所以加'Ultimate Truth ' 到tag

vivicat

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Topic Starter

vivicat 2010-10-07T16:03:42+00:00

karenying wrote:
原曲：アルティメットトゥルース？
所以加'Ultimate Truth ' 到tag

thx

Beren

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Beren 2010-10-25T15:21:58+00:00

这个图很好啊，还没rank吗
一切都是假象

Alace

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Alace 2011-01-12T12:05:29+00:00

revived

y u c a

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y u c a 2011-01-14T10:04:53+00:00

hi hi vivi~>~<//
thx mod reqest~!

★Normal★
00:48:043 (1) - remove all clap and 00:48:237,00:48:624,00:49:011,00:49:025,00:49:398,00:49:592 add clap
01:39:140 (1) - add finish
01:42:237 (1) - ^
01:45:334 (5) - ^
01:48:431 (2) - ^
01:51:527 (5) - ^

★Hard★
01:01:979~01:06:431 read hard for me Q.Q

★Lunatic★
00:10:882 (1) - add finish
00:11:656 (7) - ^
00:12:431 (1) - ^
00:17:850 (4) - add clap
00:18:140 (6) - ^
00:18:431 (8) - ^
00:24:043 (4) - specing miss?(nazi sorry)
00:35:269 (8) - add clap
01:12:818 (1) - add finish
01:39:140 (1) - ^
01:42:237 (1) - ^
01:45:334 (1) - ^
01:48:431 (1) - ^
01:51:527 (5) - new combo and add finish
01:53:076 (1) - add finish
01:54:624 (1) - ^
01:57:721 (1) - ^
01:58:495 (4) - ^
01:59:269 (1) - ^
02:00:043 (4) - ^

good map, good song~!!
go go vivi~>~<//★

vivicat

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Topic Starter

vivicat 2011-01-14T10:41:59+00:00

y u c a wrote:
hi hi vivi~>~<//
thx mod reqest~!

★Normal★
00:48:043 (1) - remove all clap and 00:48:237,00:48:624,00:49:011,00:49:025,00:49:398,00:49:592 add clap
01:39:140 (1) - add finish
01:42:237 (1) - ^
01:45:334 (5) - ^
01:48:431 (2) - ^
01:51:527 (5) - ^

★Hard★
01:01:979~01:06:431 read hard for me Q.Q

★Lunatic★
00:10:882 (1) - add finish
00:11:656 (7) - ^
00:12:431 (1) - ^
00:17:850 (4) - add clap
00:18:140 (6) - ^
00:18:431 (8) - ^
00:24:043 (4) - specing miss?(nazi sorry)
00:35:269 (8) - add clap
01:12:818 (1) - add finish
01:39:140 (1) - ^
01:42:237 (1) - ^
01:45:334 (1) - ^
01:48:431 (1) - ^
01:51:527 (5) - new combo and add finish
01:53:076 (1) - add finish
01:54:624 (1) - ^
01:57:721 (1) - ^
01:58:495 (4) - ^
01:59:269 (1) - ^
02:00:043 (4) - ^

good map, good song~!!
go go vivi~>~<//★

XD thx!~

Kochiya Sanae

179 posts

Joined June 2010

Kochiya Sanae 2011-01-20T07:44:00+00:00

我新人不会玩osu也不会mod啊=-=
gd的kiai和normal lunatic的kiaitime不同真的没问题么..
[normal]
00:35:463 (4,1) - 需要注意DS么..对新手来说会太难了么..
01:08:173 (1,1) - 2个都减少1/2往返好点么o.o?
01:14:366 (1,2,3,4) - 摆放不好看o.o
01:25:205 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[hard]
只有这个难度加了lead-in3秒没问题么..?
01:05:269 (2,3,1) - 没问题么..?
没啥问题吧..
[lunatic]
01:12:624 (7) - 左下1gird o.o
01:21:140 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不好看o.o 接下来一个也是 (我感觉不好看而已...
有些jump距离突然变得太惊奇了不太适应其他没啥了

说了我不会mod了

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2011-01-20T10:07:35+00:00

[General]
31's Taiko 没有countdown，其他难度都有，请统一~

[Normal]
00:23:269 (3,4,5) - 感觉全叠或全移动，这样略别扭
00:27:914 (1,3) - 这两个whistle有点离群了，考虑删。
00:35:656 - 建议加音，在前面的ox xox之后的x不是很适合空掉那个重音拍。
00:48:043 (1) - 尾音用finish会比clap有力
01:05:076 (1) - 头的whistle漏掉了？
01:08:173 (1) - 感觉这个时候该比前面加快whistle频率，具体而言是加到xooxoxo这样（x=whistle）
01:09:721 (1) - ^
01:11:269 (2,3) - 2尾和3也建议都加
01:14:173 (7) - 删，可以给6的clap一个顿感
01:23:656 (1,2) - 加成xooxxoox
01:46:882 (1,2) - 这为啥不彻底扔中间对称还要偏一格。。
01:57:334 (1) - 尾音finish替掉clap

[31's Taiko]
00:17:947 (47,49) - kat?
00:34:302 - start from her i think you still should add a xxo o o o , to keep the hit pace before the sudden change. (big kat)
01:01:979 (292) - in this part i'd like to see a "growing faster" don pace (like in Don't Cut Inner Oni or the last part of this song)

[LKs's Hard]
00:28:495 (2,1) - 普通3连circle吧，有想按的感觉。
00:36:334 & 00:37:108 - 都加或无视
00:46:689 (2) - 如果后面要偏转我觉得从这就可以开始了
01:03:334 (6,1,2,3) - 感觉都对称掉，因为只有6-1是最有感觉去跳过去的。
01:04:882 (6,1,2,3) - ^，另外不赞同123的spacing
01:11:269 (1,5) - 用normal音比soft-finish有力
01:19:785 (5,1) - 蛋疼了这

[Lunatic]
00:58:495 (3) - 还是不要whistle?
01:01:592 (3) - ^
(
01:08:173 (1,2) -
01:09:721 (1) - 头尾
01:11:463 (1) -
01:11:850 (3,6) - 去除，45加上
)
以上是一串whistle建议。
01:18:624 (7,8) - 大丈夫？
01:42:237 (1) - 头尾clap

好图。

mayosiiiiii

336 posts

Joined September 2009

mayosiiiiii 2011-01-20T11:16:10+00:00

mod request
all suggestion

general
Sound Infinity add tag
check out countdown all diff

normal
00:12:431 - delete kiai time
00:49:592 (1) - delete clap

hard
01:05:656 (3) - new combo

lunatic
00:12:431 - delete kiai time
01:46:495 (6,7,8) - delete clap
01:46:882 (1,2,3) - add clap
01:52:302 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - delete clap
01:56:560 (2,3,4) - delete clap

nice map~ :3

LKs

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LKs 2011-01-20T14:45:41+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
[LKs's Hard]
00:28:495 (2,1) - 普通3连circle吧，有想按的感觉。 ..难道现在不是吗
00:36:334 & 00:37:108 - 都加或无视 ok
00:46:689 (2) - 如果后面要偏转我觉得从这就可以开始了不管了不管了=w=
01:03:334 (6,1,2,3) - 感觉都对称掉，因为只有6-1是最有感觉去跳过去的。
01:04:882 (6,1,2,3) - ^，另外不赞同123的spacing 没太看懂你的意思..按我的理解改了
01:11:269 (1,5) - 用normal音比soft-finish有力是normal啊
01:19:785 (5,1) - 蛋疼了这挺好的啊

Download: Yuuna Kamishiro - Shrill False (vivicat) [LKs's Hard].osu

vivicat

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Topic Starter

vivicat 2011-01-21T09:17:39+00:00

LKs wrote:
NatsumeRin wrote:
[LKs's Hard]
00:28:495 (2,1) - 普通3连circle吧，有想按的感觉。 ..难道现在不是吗
00:36:334 & 00:37:108 - 都加或无视 ok
00:46:689 (2) - 如果后面要偏转我觉得从这就可以开始了不管了不管了=w=
01:03:334 (6,1,2,3) - 感觉都对称掉，因为只有6-1是最有感觉去跳过去的。
01:04:882 (6,1,2,3) - ^，另外不赞同123的spacing 没太看懂你的意思..按我的理解改了
01:11:269 (1,5) - 用normal音比soft-finish有力是normal啊
01:19:785 (5,1) - 蛋疼了这挺好的啊
[attachment=0:5efe8]Yuuna Kamishiro - Shrill False (vivicat) [LKs's Hard].osu[/attachment:5efe8]

updated :3

Sandpig

847 posts

Joined September 2010

Sandpig 2011-01-21T15:41:46+00:00

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

Lunatic

00:16:495 (5,6) - 虽然是lunatic但是还是建议让这几个NOTE的位置更容易观察一些(HD下的话基本被完全挡住了)，比如说可以逐渐拉远和中心circle的距离，这样：

SPOILER

而且我个人觉得距离有变化打起来更有意思 XD

其他都挺好

LKs's Hard

00:23:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个地方的节奏有点难读，按照前边下newcombo的方法在00:24:043 (5) 上加上newcombo可能好一点
00:24:818 (1) - slider前边相比音乐本身的鼓点有点空，加个音做二连啥的
00:38:947 (5,6,7) - 这个三连感觉不够重……加点音量或者最后一个用normal?（前边一直是踩红线感觉这里应该加强了）
01:05:656 (1,1) - 这个地方不建议jump……因为按照前别的节奏和排列来看这里应该是要空出一拍的，我的话打排列不均匀的的地方会习惯性地按照同一种节奏打._.
01:11:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 往返jump稍微加大一点距离吧，有点小气了
01:18:527 (6) - 不建议用短slider做这种二连，不如换成两个circle ._.

Normal

00:34:108 - 这个地方的new combo感觉应该加在00:34:882 (3)和00:35:656 (5)上，删掉00:35:850 (1)上的
00:55:785 (1,2,3,4) - 个人建议稍微排得整齐一点……有点随意了
01:11:269 (2) - new combo?

还有最后几个slider位置有点太random了哇x.x

总体挺好 star

LKs

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Joined August 2009

LKs 2011-01-23T06:28:42+00:00

Sandpig wrote:
LKs's Hard

00:23:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个地方的节奏有点难读，按照前边下newcombo的方法在00:24:043 (5) 上加上newcombo可能好一点
破坏了整体性
00:24:818 (1) - slider前边相比音乐本身的鼓点有点空，加个音做二连啥的等待也是一种美
00:38:947 (5,6,7) - 这个三连感觉不够重……加点音量或者最后一个用normal?（前边一直是踩红线感觉这里应该加强了）这里歌曲比较轻啊
01:05:656 (1,1) - 这个地方不建议jump……因为按照前别的节奏和排列来看这里应该是要空出一拍的，我的话打排列不均匀的的地方会习惯性地按照同一种节奏打._. OK
01:11:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 往返jump稍微加大一点距离吧，有点小气了 OK
01:18:527 (6) - 不建议用短slider做这种二连，不如换成两个circle ._. ._.

Download: Yuuna Kamishiro - Shrill False (vivicat) [LKs's Hard].osu

KSHR

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KSHR 2011-01-25T05:12:29+00:00

thank you for sending me a mod request
but my mod is late because of my cold...
sorryﾟ(ﾟ´Д｀ﾟ)ﾟ
i do my best to mod as early as possible!!

modding

mod request,thank you!!

[Normal]
00:20:173(2)
>00:20:947---add clap(?
>00:21:334---add clap(?
00:23:269(3)---x:488 y:128
00:23:463(4)---x:440 y:136
01:46:882(1)---1grid down

[31's Taiko]
I cant mod taiko dif...sorry

[LKs's Hard]
Beat Snap Divisor:1/4

00:24:431(8)---x:256 y:304
00:40:302(1)---x:272 y:32 (?
00:45:721(1)---1grid down
00:46:495(1)---^
00:47:269 (1,2,3,4,1)---1grid down and left (?
01:25:011(5)---put this circle on end of slider

[Lunatic]
00:17:947(5)---add clap (?
00:30:334(4)---^

nice song and map!! starヽ(*´∀｀)ノ★

swish

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Joined February 2009

swish 2011-01-25T15:21:55+00:00

:3

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-01-26T05:58:00+00:00

[General]:

LKs's Hard里tags: LKs samiljul有两个空格 =.=
tags再加上Perfect Cherry Blossom

[Lunatic]:

Combo Color和其他两个难度保持一致
01:03:140 (7) - 间距用x1.0
01:49:011 (3,4) - 间距保持x1.2
00:12:400 (T) - 这条线删去

[31's Taiko]:

speed up!在这个难度里没有必要的吧 @_@ 以及remi red? 也许是samiljul拿Lunatic直接改过来导致的

[LKs's Hard]:

00:25:398 (2,3,4) - spacing
00:35:850 (1) - cancel new combo
00:36:237 (3) - new combo
00:36:431 (1) - cancel new combo
02:03:914 (T) - add note with finish
00:43:008 (T) - unused section

[Normal]:

00:12:431 (T) - 音量在红线上调这条删去
00:37:205 (T) - 无用绿线删去

star for now.

Mapper 31

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Mapper 31 2011-01-26T10:19:42+00:00

:/

Download: Yuuna Kamishiro - Shrill False (vivicat) [31's Taiko].osu

vivicat

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Topic Starter

vivicat 2011-01-27T01:10:01+00:00

thx for above :p
all fixed

Shiirn

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Joined August 2010

Shiirn 2011-01-27T02:05:20+00:00

Normal
This felt like an easy.
01:09:721 (1,1) - Distance snap ->0.0 turn off grid snap to snap it directly on to the end of the previous slider.
01:12:818 (1,2,3,4,5) -This is very hard to read for the star rating it has.

LK's Hard
Approach rate 7 seems more suited to this speed than the 8 it currently has.
00:22:398 (4,1) - Shorten the distance to have it make more sense next to the spacing of the other 1/4th double notes. That, or extend 00:23:269 (1,2) and 00:23:947 (4,5,6,7).

Lunatic
01:23:656 (1,4) - These sliders could curve a bit better.
01:47:947 (9) - New combo here just to split up the long combo. Optional.

Have a star.

LKs

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Joined August 2009

LKs 2011-01-28T02:55:00+00:00

Shiirn wrote:
LK's Hard
Approach rate 7 seems more suited to this speed than the 8 it currently has.8,
00:22:398 (4,1) - Shorten the distance to have it make more sense next to the spacing of the other 1/4th double notes. That, or extend 00:23:269 (1,2) and 00:23:947 (4,5,6,7).
Have a star.

Colin Hou wrote:
[General]:

[LKs's Hard]:
[list][*]00:25:398 (2,3,4) - spacing
[*]00:35:850 (1) - cancel new combo
[*]00:36:237 (3) - new combo
[*]00:36:431 (1) - cancel new combo
[*]02:03:914 (T) - add note with finish
[*]00:43:008 (T) - unused section[/]

star for now.

全部同意

Bessy

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Joined September 2009

Bessy 2011-02-02T11:41:50+00:00

星

ouranhshc

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Joined July 2009

ouranhshc 2011-02-04T02:45:55+00:00

Normal
01:44:947 (4,5) - make symmetrical to (1,2)?
01:51:141 (4,5) - ^
00:17:076 (3,4) - maybe place this were it doesn't touch (2)?
00:29:463 (3) - place it so that it doesn't touch (2)?

LK's
01:47:656 (5,6) - was this stacked like that on purpose?

Lunatic - i'm still concerned about the jumps on this diff
01:22:689 (3,4,5,6,7) - can you make this more like 01:21:140 (3,4,5,6), i think it might play better that way
01:58:302 (3,4,5) - maybe rearrange this because it looks like this ingame:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/54428

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-02-06T02:28:30+00:00

LKs's Hard - AR8

don't kudosu this, let me know when it's done

EDIT: OK, bubbled

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2011-02-10T20:05:06+00:00

- LK's Hard:

I think you can use AR7 here. It's not THAT hard to need a AR8 and also it will make the difficulty spread slightly better, i guess
01:47:753 (6) - this beat should be fixed, it makes the stack weird when playing. Not a major issue, but why making things ugly? :>
01:25:011 (5) - ^

- Lunatic:

Circle Size 3?? Please tell me a reason why you're doing this, i think that Circle Size 4 is more than enough already.
Please check the stacks from ~1:02:00 to ~1:10:000. You need to tweak Stack Leniency because they're really ugly to see and play at the moment.

- 31's Taiko