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Topic Starter
m i z u k i

Ballance wrote:

star ,i love this song
Thank you for a lovely picture and the star!!!!!!!!!
Cyril Scarlet
;)
Miu Matsuoka
[Overall]
Please add Kiai Time to emphasis the chorus part of the song

[Yuka's hard]
To hard for a [Hard] map :o , make it a bit easier!
Problems:
1. Too much big jumps
2. Too much streams
3. Tricky beats

[Yuka's insane]
So many identical patterns! A bit boring I'll say...
0:10:178 (1,2) Reverse one time only
0:12:750 (1,2,3,4) What the heck is going on with those jumps!? Reduce the space between them.
0:40:182 (1-12) Move those streams further from each other
1:24:760 (1-6) ^
1:26:475 (1-8) Strange pattern...
1:28:189 (1-6) Move those streams further from each other
1:29:904 (1-8) Strange pattern again...

good map though ;)
feed me with kds, i'm hungry about it~ :P
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

S i R i R u wrote:

;)

star thx><
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

cheukhin1985 wrote:

[Overall]
Please add Kiai Time to emphasis the chorus part of the song

[Yuka's hard]
To hard for a [Hard] map :o , make it a bit easier!
Problems:
1. Too much big jumps
2. Too much streams
3. Tricky beats

[Yuka's insane]
So many identical patterns! A bit boring I'll say...
0:10:178 (1,2) Reverse one time only
0:12:750 (1,2,3,4) What the heck is going on with those jumps!? Reduce the space between them.
0:40:182 (1-12) Move those streams further from each other
1:24:760 (1-6) ^
1:26:475 (1-8) Strange pattern...
1:28:189 (1-6) Move those streams further from each other
1:29:904 (1-8) Strange pattern again...

good map though ;)
feed me with kds, i'm hungry about it~ :P
mod thx!
kds~
boooooooooooooo_old
nice map :D
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

boooooooooooooo wrote:

nice map :D
star thx!
fartownik
Offset: +8 (328) -> Resnap All Notes (on all diffs).



The video quality is horrible. You should find new one (if there's any).

Who's "yuka"? from yuka's hard/insane? y u c a? YuKaMi? :D You must add the creator's name into the tags in all difficulties.

Any thoughts of adding the kiai time at 01:11 or 01:23?

[Normal]

00:59:042 (4) - New combo.
01:05:900 (4) - ^
01:17:902 (3) - ^ o.o
01:28:189 (1) - Don't overlap this note. The players might not be meant to know when the previous slider ends, so they might missclick it.

[Hard]

Work on the consistency of spacing on this difficulty ;]

00:40:075 (1) - Why is this spinner placed on the blue tick? Move it to the previous red tick and make it 1/4 longer.
01:11:044 (3) - New combo.
01:28:618 (2,1) - Spacing.

[yuka's hard]

Where are nazi-modders when they are needed? :<

Capitalize "hard" (Hard).

01:35:055 (1,2,3,4) - Nope, Clap, Whistle and Finish in the same time don't sound very good.


[yuka's insane]

Capitalize "insane" (Insane).

00:10:186 (1,2) - Why 1/8 sliders and why so large spacing? Transform it into 1/4 sliders and make the length of them shorter.
00:12:758 (1,2,3,4) - Unintuitive jump.

Work with spacing on all diffs, this is your biggest problem.
ignorethis
BPM might be 140.00

<Normal>
Distances between the notes are not correct. Click on one note and see top-right corner to see the distance and make necessary adjustment.
01:17:902 (3) - new combo

<Hard>
This dif has pretty many bad distances too
01:11:473 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These should better be changed into bend short sliders rather than straight ones (see MelloN's maps)

<Yuca's hard>
Capitalise hard

<Yuca's insane>
^

might need some work before getting bubbled...
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

fartownik wrote:

Offset: +8 (328) -> Resnap All Notes (on all diffs).



The video quality is horrible. You should find new one (if there's any).

Who's "yuka"? from yuka's hard/insane? y u c a? YuKaMi? :D You must add the creator's name into the tags in all difficulties.

Any thoughts of adding the kiai time at 01:11 or 01:23?

[Normal]

00:59:042 (4) - New combo.
01:05:900 (4) - ^
01:17:902 (3) - ^ o.o
01:28:189 (1) - Don't overlap this note. The players might not be meant to know when the previous slider ends, so they might missclick it.

[Hard]

Work on the consistency of spacing on this difficulty ;]

00:40:075 (1) - Why is this spinner placed on the blue tick? Move it to the previous red tick and make it 1/4 longer.
01:11:044 (3) - New combo.
01:28:618 (2,1) - Spacing.

[yuka's hard]

Where are nazi-modders when they are needed? :<

Capitalize "hard" (Hard).

01:35:055 (1,2,3,4) - Nope, Clap, Whistle and Finish in the same time don't sound very good.


[yuka's insane]

Capitalize "insane" (Insane).

00:10:186 (1,2) - Why 1/8 sliders and why so large spacing? Transform it into 1/4 sliders and make the length of them shorter.
00:12:758 (1,2,3,4) - Unintuitive jump.

Work with spacing on all diffs, this is your biggest problem.
mod thx ><
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

fartownik wrote:

Offset: +8 (328) -> Resnap All Notes (on all diffs).



The video quality is horrible. You should find new one (if there's any).

Who's "yuka"? from yuka's hard/insane? y u c a? YuKaMi? :D You must add the creator's name into the tags in all difficulties.

Any thoughts of adding the kiai time at 01:11 or 01:23?

[Normal]

00:59:042 (4) - New combo.
01:05:900 (4) - ^
01:17:902 (3) - ^ o.o
01:28:189 (1) - Don't overlap this note. The players might not be meant to know when the previous slider ends, so they might missclick it.

[Hard]

Work on the consistency of spacing on this difficulty ;]

00:40:075 (1) - Why is this spinner placed on the blue tick? Move it to the previous red tick and make it 1/4 longer.
01:11:044 (3) - New combo.
01:28:618 (2,1) - Spacing.

[yuka's hard]

Where are nazi-modders when they are needed? :<

Capitalize "hard" (Hard).

01:35:055 (1,2,3,4) - Nope, Clap, Whistle and Finish in the same time don't sound very good.


[yuka's insane]

Capitalize "insane" (Insane).

00:10:186 (1,2) - Why 1/8 sliders and why so large spacing? Transform it into 1/4 sliders and make the length of them shorter.
00:12:758 (1,2,3,4) - Unintuitive jump.

Work with spacing on all diffs, this is your biggest problem.
mod thx :)
Sanjenin Nagi
i would have made you a map of the map Taiko?
and star~
K o h a k u
kami star~★
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

amberuri wrote:

kami star~★
star thx!
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

Sanjenin Nagi -U wrote:

i would have made you a map of the map Taiko?
and star~
sorry ><
no thank you :(

star thx!
y u c a

ignorethis wrote:

BPM might be 140.00

<Yuca's hard>
Capitalise hard

<Yuca's insane>
^

might need some work before getting bubbled...
baka ign:<

not yuca
its mapper is yuka
baka:<
ignorethis

y u c a wrote:

ignorethis wrote:

BPM might be 140.00

<Yuca's hard>
Capitalise hard

<Yuca's insane>
^

might need some work before getting bubbled...
baka ign:<

not yuca
its mapper is yuka
baka:<
doesn't matter since you're both bakas. :)
y u c a

ignorethis wrote:

doesn't matter since you're both bakas. :)
/me slaps baka ign
ヾ(*`Д´*)ノ
S o r d a
ranked kitai~ :)
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

y u c a wrote:

ignorethis wrote:

doesn't matter since you're both bakas. :)
/me slaps baka ign
ヾ(*`Д´*)ノ
紛らわしいよねごめんねゆかみにしといたよ!
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

S o r d a wrote:

ranked kitai~ :)
thx~><
Heatherfield
:O~~☆
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

Heatherfield wrote:

:O~~☆
☆thx :O
swish
cute song :oops:
good map star~
CherryCherry
( ´∀`)bグッ! ないすぅ~♪
:lol:
Topic Starter
m i z u k i
star thx~ ><
Natteke
hi
Topic Starter
m i z u k i
Natteke~
star thx><
Rorry
:evil: nice :evil:
Topic Starter
m i z u k i
Rorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy thx!!!!!!!!!!!!
mayosiiiiii
faito~
Topic Starter
m i z u k i
thx卍
KSHR
modding ;)


[Overall]
- AennaさんMODで削除したosbファイルが再作成されているので削除してください
(いつの間にか再作成されてしまうので、アップする前にチェックしておいた方が安全です)
- BGが全dif反映されていません。
 desin - Insert Background より、BGを入れて下さい

[Nromal]
00:39:863(1)--- Start=00:39:756 ?
01:19:613 (3)--- 前のスライダーとのスぺーシングが気になりました
01:32:470(3,4)--- 1grid 右

[Hard]
01:34:935(1)--- Start=01:35:042 ?

[y_u_z_u_k_i's Insane]
00:59:042(5)--- 1grid 上



動画の画質があまり良くなかったので
勝手かなとは思ったんですが画質上げたものを作ってみました。
一度チェックしてもらって、使えそうだったら使ってください :)
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?ctfb6l6s8k7fumi
上書きすれば入れ替えできます!


starヽ(*´∀`)ノ★
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

KSHR wrote:

modding ;)


[Overall]
- AennaさんMODで削除したosbファイルが再作成されているので削除してください
(いつの間にか再作成されてしまうので、アップする前にチェックしておいた方が安全です)
- BGが全dif反映されていません。
 desin - Insert Background より、BGを入れて下さい

[Nromal]
00:39:863(1)--- Start=00:39:756 ?
01:19:613 (3)--- 前のスライダーとのスぺーシングが気になりました
01:32:470(3,4)--- 1grid 右

[Hard]
01:34:935(1)--- Start=01:35:042 ?

[y_u_z_u_k_i's Insane]
00:59:042(5)--- 1grid 上



動画の画質があまり良くなかったので
勝手かなとは思ったんですが画質上げたものを作ってみました。
一度チェックしてもらって、使えそうだったら使ってください :)
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?ctfb6l6s8k7fumi
上書きすれば入れ替えできます!


starヽ(*´∀`)ノ★
mod thx ><
動画までありがとうございます
使わせてもらいますね!
loli_milk
:)
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

loli_milk wrote:

:)
star thx ><
Apriy
:3
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

r1ca wrote:

:3
chucchu<3
mooai
good map :)
star~~~
Muya
:D
Apriy
:oops:
Topic Starter
m i z u k i
star thx・。・
ZilliTAN
iyh
Apricot
w
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. title: Melancholic (the BG is saying that lol)
  2. offset: 756, for music sense


[y u z u k i's Insane]:
  1. claps: 00:01:185 (3), 00:02:042 (6), 00:02:899 (2), 00:03:542 (1,2), 00:04:613 (5) first circle, 00:05:470 (8) 00:06:328 (2) first circle, 00:06:970 (4,5), 00:07:613 (1) last circle, 00:08:470 (3), 00:09:756 (3), 00:10:399 (6,7) ,00:11:470 (2), 00:12:328 (5), 00:13:185 (3), 00:13:828 (3) (remove yours in this part and set claps on above notes)
  2. 00:14:042 (5) - use normal-hitnormal for this note
  3. 00:14:470 (T) - 1 note here with finish
  4. oh...wait, no hitsounds any more? 0.0 try to place hitsounds in this diff :<, that's an important part of game playing, use soft-whistle in soft part, and try to use normal-hitnormal for heavy beats
  5. 01:38:470 (T) - add 1 note here with finish
[Hard]:
  1. 00:14:470 (T) - 1 note here with finish
  2. lacks hitsounding...
[Normal]:
  1. well...
very good as a first map, except for the hitsounds part. listen to the music carefully and check how other people use the hitsounds for their map.

keep on the nice working :)
Sharp
(・◡・)
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. title: Melancholic (the BG is saying that lol)
  2. offset: 756, for music sense


[y u z u k i's Insane]:
  1. claps: 00:01:185 (3), 00:02:042 (6), 00:02:899 (2), 00:03:542 (1,2), 00:04:613 (5) first circle, 00:05:470 (8) 00:06:328 (2) first circle, 00:06:970 (4,5), 00:07:613 (1) last circle, 00:08:470 (3), 00:09:756 (3), 00:10:399 (6,7) ,00:11:470 (2), 00:12:328 (5), 00:13:185 (3), 00:13:828 (3) (remove yours in this part and set claps on above notes)
  2. 00:14:042 (5) - use normal-hitnormal for this note
  3. 00:14:470 (T) - 1 note here with finish
  4. oh...wait, no hitsounds any more? 0.0 try to place hitsounds in this diff :<, that's an important part of game playing, use soft-whistle in soft part, and try to use normal-hitnormal for heavy beats
  5. 01:38:470 (T) - add 1 note here with finish
[Hard]:
  1. 00:14:470 (T) - 1 note here with finish
  2. lacks hitsounding...
[Normal]:
  1. well...
very good as a first map, except for the hitsounds part. listen to the music carefully and check how other people use the hitsounds for their map.

keep on the nice working :)
mod thx ><。
Topic Starter
m i z u k i
star thx!!!
Rigeru_old
:?:
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

Rigeru wrote:

:?:
star thx !
Cuuuuri
:oops:
Kyonko Hizara
:)
Topic Starter
m i z u k i
star thxxxxxxxxx
Lalarun
:oops:
DeadAlready
nice first map :O
star~ >w</
Hakeru
go go go go :D
namazun_old
ほし
taNa_Coppola
Star :oops:
ririco
;)
Reisyth
:)
Reiji-RJ
awww
Mercurius
8-)
[DBF]
kawaiipandah
Star!
eldnl
Star :)
Thite
:)
Rhythmic_old
ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛
Rare
;)
KiriNoMorii
:)
- Mikey -
This beatmap is BEAST! :)
momoco
Nice map (*゚∀゚)ぐっじょぶ
-saku-
★するのわすれてたっ!

ついでに100げt? 8-)
Melancholy
d(★ゝω・´★)
Takos
><
AisamaDX
おぼれたいのいとしのメランコリ~
PSPDS Eddie
星投げようとして、すごい数あると少し躊躇するよね
いや、投げるけども
Colin Hou
[yuzuki]:
  1. 00:53:684 (6) - new combo
  2. 01:34:184 (8) - ^
  3. 01:17:898 (1) - finish
  4. 01:31:613 (1) - ^
[mizuki]:
  1. kind of overmapped by using too many streams
  2. 00:53:898 (T) - 1 note here with finish
  3. 01:10:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - stream don't fit music here
  4. 00:09:863 (4) - remove
  5. 00:10:184 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - stream don't fit music here
  6. 00:15:756 (5,6,7) - ^
  7. 00:25:184 (3,4,5) - ^
  8. 00:25:613 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
Normal is fine :3
nimba_old
:D
minyeob
IRC mod 後 bubble <_<
Topic Starter
m i z u k i

minyeob wrote:

IRC mod 後 bubble <_<
thank you !
whymeman
Hmmm~
Patchouli
congrats~
NatsumeRin
congrats~!
Suzully
おめでとー!
Colin Hou
おめでとう~~
S o r d a
congrats~>w<
Melancholy
d(★ゝω・´★)
Topic Starter
m i z u k i
thank you~~
IkkiMinami
1st
I like It
syuheihakase

banvi wrote:

メランコリック 8-)

細かいことですが
sourceをVocaloidに
あとtagに作曲者(Junky)を入れてください

Nice map!!
あ、kudosuは不要です
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