[Soft]The SV change works well with the song but I doubt it is the right choice for a beginners map. Keep it for now but be prepared to have this mentioned again depending on the MAT you catch later.
00:42:360 (3) - avoid kicksliders in beginners diffs. 1x repeat on 1/2 sliders should be ok though. Maybe you can figure out some beatpattern that matches the song and is more difficulty appropriate
00:48:360 (3) - ^same
not bad
[Abnormal]flawless
[Hard]Why is there a different SV pattern here? It would be nice to add the same higher SV (1,50x) for the KIAI as you did in all the other maps. Up to you.
00:06:172 (7) - remove this clap? feels spammy
00:23:422 (6,7,8) - wrong timing or missing out on the drum roll on purpose? Try mapping this exactly after the drum roll in the song with a 1/4 5stream :
http://puu.sh/hHrh00:48:922 (8) - add 2 1/4 notes after the slider to match the drum roll in the song?
http://puu.sh/hHvL00:52:391 (X) - add a note here (between (2) and (3) on the 1/4) to match the song? Maybe rearrange the pattern a bit to match it.
00:53:422 (2,3,4) - you should definetely add the drum notes on the white ticks before each of those, you could simply stack them without much hassle:
http://puu.sh/hHx5I like how you do the vocal follow for this song and even make a pretty good hard-diff out of it. Really good. Not much to do here and well deserved
