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Simple Plan - Your Love Is a Lie

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Slowmotion_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 10 de setembro de 2011 at 23:04:40

Artist: Simple Plan
Title: Your Love Is a Lie
Tags: cesc Wiinter
BPM: 160
Filesize: 5370kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. cesc x Wiinter (1,77 stars, 189 notes)
  2. Hard (4,93 stars, 626 notes)
Download: Simple Plan - Your Love Is a Lie
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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storyboard by ZLOdeuka

Special Thanks For :
Beuchi Chan ( sb mod )


Ready for Mat/Bat Mod ><

Deleted the sb,change the tags
please redownload de map,
AdRon Zh3Ro
Rofl...

IRC stuff...
Galkan
Map is pretty decent, it has some errors, which I pointed on IRC modding, but it's very good so far. Good luck ;)

+Star
nimi
hit sounds ffu, precisa de mais imo
mas enfim.
00:17:640 (5) - new combo
00:30:015 (9) - ^
00:41:077 (7) - tira esse FINISH iaueheaiuha, soa estranho
00:41:452 (8) - ^
00:56:452 (9) - new combo
00:57:858 (16) - http://puu.sh/GRp
00:58:140 (1) - esse spinner é MUITO random, principalmente com o vazio que tem depois dele. sugiro mudar isso
01:25:890 (7) - new combo
01:46:515 (1) - sou contra esse spinner também, maaas menos do que o outro
02:09:015 (11,12,13) - mudar esse spacing pra algo assim http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/47485 fica melhor imo, assim tá meio amontuado
02:10:140 (1) - mesma coisa do 00:58:140
02:23:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - pra que usar esse spacing feio? ;.; seja mais criativo
02:31:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:33:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:34:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ porra, não acaba nunca isso?
02:43:515 (5,6,7,8,9) - tipa assim fi. tudo bem, é bonitinho, jump, formato legal. mas isso tá MUITO confuso >.> ainda mais com aquelas notas super juntas depois dele. eeeu não concordo com isso. se quer usar jumps distribua eles pelo mapa inteiro, não apenas no fim porque tu teve a ideia quando o mapa já tava acabando u_û
02:52:515 (1) - nada pessoal, mas o que era pra ser esse slider? o-o
02:58:50 - porque esse kiai aqui? owo
03:27:765 (5) - spacing esse 5 tá feio
03:31:702 (9) - new combo
03:37:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - e morra por ter feito esses jumps do caralho no fim do mapa ¬¬

só isso. boa sorte ^^
cesc
irc mod + star

*c'mon Sloooow, let me see other diffs here ;)
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

cesc wrote:

irc mod + star

*c'mon Sloooow, let me see other diffs here ;)

I will make new diff for you cesc :3
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

Wiinter wrote:

hit sounds ffu, precisa de mais imo
mas enfim.
00:17:640 (5) - new combo feito
00:30:015 (9) - ^ feito
00:41:077 (7) - tira esse FINISH iaueheaiuha, soa estranho antes finish do que whistle né?
00:41:452 (8) - ^ feito
00:56:452 (9) - new combo feito
00:57:858 (16) - http://puu.sh/GRp mesmo você explicando não entendi porra nenhuma
00:58:140 (1) - esse spinner é MUITO random, principalmente com o vazio que tem depois dele. sugiro mudar isso obrigado o/
01:25:890 (7) - new combo feito
01:46:515 (1) - sou contra esse spinner também, maaas menos do que o outro coitadinho :/ ja tirei
02:09:015 (11,12,13) - mudar esse spacing pra algo assim http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/47485 fica melhor imo, assim tá meio amontuado concordo xD
02:10:140 (1) - mesma coisa do 00:58:140 feito
02:23:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - pra que usar esse spacing feio? ;.; seja mais criativo feito
02:31:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ feito
02:33:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ feito
02:34:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ porra, não acaba nunca isso?><
02:43:515 (5,6,7,8,9) - tipa assim fi. tudo bem, é bonitinho, jump, formato legal. mas isso tá MUITO confuso >.> ainda mais com aquelas notas super juntas depois dele. eeeu não concordo com isso. se quer usar jumps distribua eles pelo mapa inteiro, não apenas no fim porque tu teve a ideia quando o mapa já tava acabando u_û verdade fia ja ajeitei
02:52:515 (1) - nada pessoal, mas o que era pra ser esse slider? o-o de acordo com o cesc os streams não combinavam muito então preste atenção ao sons da bateria e a simetria das bolinhas do slider que você vai entender
02:58:50 - porque esse kiai aqui? owo fica bonitinho :3
03:27:765 (5) - spacing esse 5 tá feio verdade
03:31:702 (9) - new combo feito
03:37:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - e morra por ter feito esses jumps do caralho no fim do mapa ¬¬ também te amo fia

só isso. boa sorte ^^
nyah
Tomboy_old_1
Arruma esse map, depois eu olho, por enquanto no star :?
Guerra
lie
Kubu
star, but it need break D:
Coy
star

gl :]
ZLOdeuka-
unless I'm missing something write me~

cool song

S T A R ~

Download: 24584 Simple Plan - Your Love Is A Lie.rar
ZLOdeuka-
mikhe
[Hard]
02:52.515 (1) This slider seems ramdonly =/, change form?

In general is good, nice rythm.

Star~
Ultimate
Ingame testing and improving.

Don't be too predictive, try to be more loose =D.
The map is a bit square, but it actually fits the song. Also like the SB.
If you're working on your next map, please inform me so i can be at help with the mapping design (if you would like that).

star + kudo star
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

Ultimate wrote:

Ingame testing and improving.

Don't be too predictive, try to be more loose =D.
The map is a bit square, but it actually fits the song. Also like the SB.
If you're working on your next map, please inform me so i can be at help with the mapping design (if you would like that).ok i will

star + kudo star


Thanks for all o/
Tshabalala
:lol:
Bittersweet
*chega e taca uma star em camera lenta*

boa sorte :3
Kite
General
Offset is a bit too late, try -5 till -10 on offset eventually -8 (1512)
Combo colors blend in too much with the storyboard and background picture making it really hard to see at some points, consider changing them
EDIT : gave some suggestion on colors

Reduce HP drain by 1 tick?

Hard
00:48:770 (1) - remove new combo and place it here instead 00:49:520 (4)?
01:13:145 (5) - move down 1 grid?
01:19:520 (1,2,3,4) - you should unstack those IMO, with current colors hard to read
01:53:270 - add a beat here? :o sounds and plays nicer IMO
03:12:582 (1) - remove new combo?

Nice map so far, was fun to play :p
Great storyboard
ouranhshc
Hard
00:17:637 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:012 (1) - ^
00:34:137 (7) - 1 grid up
00:39:762 (12) - ^?
00:49:512 (4) - new combo?
00:54:012 (4) - line up with (3)?
01:03:387 (1) - line up with (11)?
01:33:012 (3) - make symmetrical to (1), (don't forget to adjust everythiing else after this)
02:01:887 (6) - new combo
02:32:074 (4,5) - make symmetrical to (1,2)
03:11:074 (4) - 1 grid left
03:12:574 (1) - why is this new combo here

Normal
You have unsnapped slider ends
EDIT:
00:14:637 (3) - spacing
00:34:512 (1) - still broken
00:54:012 (5) - line up with (2,4)
01:02:262 (7,8) - line up with (4)
01:04:512 (3) - line up with (2)
01:12:012 (1,2) - line up with (3,4)
01:45:012 (3) - line up with (2), make sure to adjust every thing after this
01:46:512 (1,2,3,4) - line up with (5) of the previous combo

EDIT2: you need an easier diff

call me back so i can recheck normal. also Preview Points
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

ouranhshc wrote:

Hard
00:17:637 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:012 (1) - ^
00:34:137 (7) - 1 grid up
00:39:762 (12) - ^?
00:49:512 (4) - new combo?
00:54:012 (4) - line up with (3)?
01:03:387 (1) - line up with (11)?
01:33:012 (3) - make symmetrical to (1), (don't forget to adjust everythiing else after this)
02:01:887 (6) - new combo
02:32:074 (4,5) - make symmetrical to (1,2)
03:11:074 (4) - 1 grid left
03:12:574 (1) - why is this new combo here

Normal
You have unsnapped slider ends


call me back so i can recheck normal. also Preview Points


i've resnapped the sliders ends :3
fabriciorby
IRC Mod e star






Ainda passarei made of fire, hm
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old
espero que passe :3
Nelsonjd
Nice map <3 Star~
Kotya
*_______*
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

Kotya wrote:

*_______*
*-----*
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hi~ ;)

Normal
-Slider Velocity set at 1.10? maybe better than 1.40?
-Cricle Size +1?
-if you can.. make it at 3star~

00:19:137 (4,5) - Delete this note, and add slider?
00:27:012 (5,6,7) - ^ add slider and do 1 tick back?
00:31:137 (7,8) - Delete note, add slider?
00:38:637 (5,6,7) - ^ and do 1 tick back?
00:53:637 (4,5) - ^
01:12:012 (1) - too close at the front spinner?
01:14:449 (3) - delete this~ and 01:14:824 (4) - this slider start at here
01:37:512 (2) - down one grid?
01:37:887 (3) - left one grid?
01:38:637 (5) - new combo?
01:40:512 (1) - delete new combo
01:43:512 (1) - ^
02:10:137 (1) - is too ugly~ maybe can change other style?

Hard
00:19:324 (15) - change to slider? 00:19:887 ending
00:14:824 (7) - new combo?
00:17:637 (5) - ^
00:18:574 (6) - ^
00:23:449 (5) - ^
00:27:012 (6) - ^
00:29:637 (7) - ^
00:35:637 (6) - new combo~
00:38:637 (7) - ^
00:41:449 (1) - ^?
00:44:637 (7) - ^
00:46:137 (2) - delete new combo
00:46:512 (1) - new combo
00:47:637 (1) - ^
00:51:012 (7) - ^
00:53:637 (3,4) - change to slider?
00:54:762 (1) - Overlap with 00:54:012 (4) -
00:57:762 (7) - new combo
01:02:074 (7) - ^
01:14:637 (4) - ^
01:18:012 (5) - ^
01:20:262 (6) - ^
01:21:012 (9) - ^
01:26:824 (3) - ^
01:30:012 (5) - new combo
01:35:824 (6) - ^
01:38:637 (7) - ^
01:39:012 (9) - change to slider, ending at 01:39:199
01:39:199 (10) - start at 01:39:387, at 01:39:762 do a 1 tick back and add clap
01:42:199 (7) - new combo
01:50:637 (5) - ^
01:53:824 (8) - ^
01:55:137 (13) - ^
01:55:512 (1) - delete new combo
01:56:637 (7) - new combo
02:03:012 (4) - ^
02:08:262 (7) - ^
02:11:637 (7) - ^
02:23:637 (1) - too close for front spinner??
02:43:512 (5) - new combo
02:44:449 (6) - ^
02:52:512 (1) - very ugly for this slider :( and this slider ending is 02:54:387
02:54:762 (x) - add a note?
02:56:637 (5) - new combo
03:01:137 (9) - ^
03:01:512 (1) - delete new combo
03:02:824 (6) - new combo
03:07:137 (4) - ^
03:11:262 (5) - ^
03:36:574 (6) - ^

----------------
Nice song >w<
i <3 it~
but on this map's slider make me boring :(
Good luck to you :D
and starrr~~~~ 8-)
vivere
Star <3
Verdisphena

vivere wrote:

Star <3
Kaoru Evans
:3
Fenya
(viv te voy a matar =_=)
Fabi
Star! You have a lot of work to do hehe.
Offspring__old
Star bro :D
cesc
Here you are the Easy Collab from Wiinchan and me..maybe we need a SB for the names? °°

SPOILER
00:12:762 - 00:36:762 ~ cesc
00:37:137 - 00:48:762 ~ wiinchan
00:49:512 - 01:13:324 ~ cesc (Chorus)
01:16:512 - 01:25:512 ~ BREAK
01:25:887 - 01:46:512 ~ wiinchan
01:49:512 - 02:01:324 ~ cesc
02:02:262 - 02:25:137 ~ wiinchan (Chorus)
02:25:512 - 02:41:262 ~ cesc
02:41:637 - 02:55:512 ~ BREAK
02:55:512 - 02:58:512 ~ cesc
02:58:887 - 03:24:012 ~ wiinchan (Chorus)
03:25:512 - END ~ cesc

And this is the file for you with Hitsounds and all:

Download: Simple Plan - Your Love Is A Lie (Slowmotion) [cesc ♥ Wiinter].osu
nimi
vim pra dar star e já tinha dado 8D memória fail
Mastodonio
Nice song,star ;)
wmfchris
[Hard]
00:03:199 (8) - right 1 grid
00:06:012 (7,8) - unevne spacing, (7) down 1 grid, (8) left 1 grid
00:13:512 (1,2,3) - down 1 grid
00:33:012 (4,5,6,7) - up 1 grid
01:12:387 (3,4) - down 1 grid
01:24:762 (2,3) - right 1 grid like before?
01:32:262 (1) - up 1 grid
01:36:949 (7) - ^
01:45:387 (4) - down 1 grid
02:24:387 (3) - left 1 grid
nice sounding, just some suggestions to make it show symmetry better

[cesc's]
nice as always.

star~
Hyguys
belo progresso com o map. espero que seja ranked .
boa sorte com o map o!
vivere
Hi Slow :3

[General]:

Open your .Osu file and change this:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,150,0
Combo2 : 240,5,5
For this:
[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,0,255
Combo2 : 240,5,5

Fix this in normal and hard

: lol

02:00:012- 2 grids to left
02:00:949- 2 grids to right

[Hard]:

00:49:512 (1)- Finish. Sounds much better imo
00:55:512 (6)- Finish. Only in the beginning

01:59:637 (4)- Finish

02:01:137 (5)- Change this slider for 3 circles, for example: You can? :$

I give you a Star :>
Pesar

ganbatte ne!
Rukario
General:
- 'Beatmap by Z black.png', well because I don't see a diff created by him on the mapset, please delete this image from the folder and full submit.
- All the diffs MUST have the same preview point. Currently there is no previe point set for either diff.
- 'cesc 3 Wiinter' in here the countdown is missing. Also I can see in the .osu file it should be 'cesc <3 Wiinter'. Maybe make something else than the <3.
- Please disable letterboxing during breaks because in cesc' diff there is SB in the break. Also looks better.
- In the Hard diff the tags 'cesc' and 'Wiinter' are missing.
- Shouldn't there be a SB element for 'cesc 3 Wiinter'?
- The first combo colour of the two diffs are different. Open both .osu files in Notepad and make them the same.

cesc 3 Wiinter:
Please Tick Rate 1.
00:13:137 (1) - Remove New Combo, 00:13:512 (2) - Make New Combo
00:33:762 (1) - I can't allow notes being so close after spinners in the easiest diff. Please make the spinner shorter.
01:32:262 (7) - Why don't you split this into two repeat sliders? Seems a bit boring now.
02:01:137 (4) - Add a repeat here so the kiai fountain doesn't feel weird.
02:10:887 (1) - I can't allow notes being so close after spinners in the easiest diff. For this one I can only suggest to remove it and map something else to it.
02:37:512 (1) - Let me make a prettier version of this really nice slider^^. You gotta put in the code for that slider in the .osu file, in the hitobject section.
304,152,157512,6,2,B|296:72|240:24|112:16|32:80|88:264|256:323|256:323|424:264|480:80|400:16|272:24|216:72|208:152,1,1100,6|6
03:04:512 - This emptyness feels really weird. Please consider mapping something here.
03:38:168 - Please end the kiai here if you already make a timing section.

Hard:
01:11:637 (1) - Remove this note and make the spinner end on this time.
02:23:637 (1) - ^

Well this was quite a nice mapset, but there is really General stuff which is not right at all which is why I can't star this either.
nimi
wtf pro 3 no nome da diff er. antes era ♥ aí virou <3 e agora tá 3? sloooooww vai arrumar isso seu puto i.i e me lembre de dar mod no resto do mapa quando ler isso >_>"
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

Wiinter wrote:

wtf pro 3 no nome da diff er. antes era ♥ aí virou <3 e agora tá 3? sloooooww vai arrumar isso seu puto i.i e me lembre de dar mod no resto do mapa quando ler isso >_>"

o não dava pra dar upload com o coração
ZLOdeuka-
Explain that this is my SB plz~
SargentPie
Add more difficulties. You might be working on more difficulties already, but It seems that 2 stars is too easy for me, but 5 starts is too hard (for me).

Also, in the 2 star beatmap, maybe you should make the beat sounds louder. I dunno if you were going for the atmosphere of the song or you wanted the sound to be barely noticeable, but I think that the beat sounds give the song the osu! personality it needs. I acknowledge that the beat sounds get louder at some point in the song, but even for the soft sounds, make them louder.

Why are there 6 spinners in the 2 star beatmap? I actually saw the editing tip "use spinners sparingly!" in the editor! Remove the spinners that are in the middle of the chorus. They just disrupt the gameplay.

I quickly scanned the beatmap for hard, and I think the same requests apply for that map. I can't really give any more specific advice since I can't play those leveled beatmaps, but the previous advice will probably do.

I'll star it because It's a good song and others should know about it.
Andrea
[cesc x Wiinter]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Please make sure to add one.


01:00:762 (6) - New combo.
01:01:512 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:38:262 (x) - End your kiai time here.


[Hard]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Please make sure to add one.

Disable the Letterbox during breaks.


00:06:199 (8,9,10) - Respace correctly.
03:38:262 (x) - End your kiai time here.


Not bad.
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

osuplayer111 wrote:

[cesc x Wiinter]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Please make sure to add one.
where?

01:00:762 (6) - New combo.
01:01:512 (1) - Remove new combo.Done
03:38:262 (x) - End your kiai time here.[/color] Done

[Hard]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Please make sure to add one.

Disable the Letterbox during breaks.
Done

00:06:199 (8,9,10) - Respace correctly.
03:38:262 (x) - End your kiai time here.[/color]Done

Not bad.
Andrea
For set a preview point do like this.
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

osuplayer111 wrote:

For set a preview point do like this.

in this place?
Andrea
Yeah I showed you the correct position where to set the preview point.
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

osuplayer111 wrote:

Yeah I showed you the correct position where to set the preview point.

Done ;)
Andrea
Yeah, nice.

Bubbled~
DJ Angel
star~
James2250
-Try and resize black/white png to 640x480. They don't need to be 800x600 and will just cause more lag on older comps
-Tick rate 2 seems to work nicely with this song, try it out

cesc x Wiinter:
-Shouldn't it say beatmap by cesc and Wiinter on the break?
02:24:012 (3,4,5,6,1) - this pattern could look neater
02:37:512 (1) - nice

Hard:
I would expect at least a small break nearer to the 2nd half of the song
Could use slightly more hitsounds at places (like the kiai) Also the whistles are pretty hard to hear during kiai

A few too many fixes for me to rank, call me back and I will rebubble~
Sabunete
Good luck. :)
(+45)
Hyguys
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old
done~
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

James2250 wrote:

-Try and resize black/white png to 640x480. They don't need to be 800x600 and will just cause more lag on older comps
-Tick rate 2 seems to work nicely with this song, try it out

cesc x Wiinter:
-Shouldn't it say beatmap by cesc and Wiinter on the break?
02:24:012 (3,4,5,6,1) - this pattern could look neater
02:37:512 (1) - nice

Hard:
I would expect at least a small break nearer to the 2nd half of the song
Could use slightly more hitsounds at places (like the kiai) Also the whistles are pretty hard to hear during kiai

A few too many fixes for me to rank, call me back and I will rebubble~
But James, if i resize my black/white png to 640x480 it will ruin my SB D: , please understand
PotsBreaker
8-)
Katsuri
star :D
James2250
-Ok the guest mappers said they were fine with how the sb is during the break
-You can keep white/black as 800x600 if its too hard to change

Didn't notice it before but your offset starts on the wrong beat of the song (making the pulsing on the main menu etc look off) Move your offset to 1,511 to fix this (you shouldn't need to resnap anything)

I don't think your storyboard is completely fixed from resizing your 1024x768 images (which I still have no idea how they got to that size). If you look around 01:25:511 you can see the white doesn't cover the bottom part correctly. Same for other places like 02:26:261 etc

You might have to call ZLOdeuka back and ask him to double check his storyboard again :P
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