[Seconds Words]
01:22:340 (8) - clap
01:22:929 (10) - no clap
01:14:106 (8) - normal finish with 30-40% of volume is nice imo
01:16:459 (2) - ^
02:22:555 (1) - Beginning at 02:22:482

[Last World]
00:36:467 (1) - Normal Finish with 40%, only in the beginning
01:13:816 (12) - End : normal finish with 30-40%
01:14:698 (2) - Whistle
01:16:463 (3) - too close with 2 o.o
01:16:463 (3) - and normal finish with 30-40%
01:47:048 (3) - soft finish is better than clap imo
01:49:401 (2) - shorten by 1 tick ? and whistle in middle ? and 01:50:283 (x) add a note ?
02:05:575 (1) - soft finish is better than clap
02:07:046 (4) - clap
02:08:222 (2) - normal finish with 40-50% of volume

my english is too bad for more :<

First Breeze's Words
you might wanna call breeze to take out some breaks. he does not have to put breaks in some of the places.
he probably has to fix some spacing issues. it somehow feels odd.

Second Words
00:17:05 (1) make it a better shape
00:25:58 (3) ^
00:55:87 (6) make it closer to slider (5)
01:02:93 (1) take out new combo
01:16:75 (3) spacing
01:22:63 (9) move it 1 space up in grid 3 or make the other ones closer
01:23:81 (1,2,3,4) make it identical to 01:22:63
01:39:69 (5) make it closer to circle (4)
01:59:69 (2) make it a better shape
02:10:28 (2,3,4) spacing
02:24:69 end spinner here

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•Overall•
Offset : 1.180 ~ Resnap All Notes
Delete the .osb file in the map's folder and then do a Full Submit

•Last Words•
00:54:994 (5) - New combo
01:07:493 (5) - New combo
01:08:816 (1) - Remove new combo
01:09:699 (8) - New combo.
01:12:198 (7) - ^
01:14:698 (2) - Replace this note, it's not centred perfectly.
01:20:874 (7) - New combo.
01:24:697 (7) - ^
01:29:403 (7) - ^
01:38:225 (4) - ^
01:39:402 (5) - ^
02:00:282 (3) - 1 grid down.
02:03:811 (8) - New combo.
02:14:986 (9) - ^

•Second Words•
Good.

•Breeze--•
Good.

+Star

Hello,

[Second Words]

Add "Breeze" in tags and full submit.

- 00:24:413(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) : Spacing.

[Last Words]

Add "Breeze" in tags and full submit.

- 02:22:048(x) : Add circle ?


Okay !
Pretty song & map !
Star !

*_*
FFX and X-2 is the most beautiful game I've ever played! ^^
And now even a second map of the game..

Star~ for sure!^^

Pls can I add a difficulty?

Oh and First Breeze's Words sound very strange.. ô.ô
Wouldn't Breeze's First Words be better?

Ah, and I call my difficulty noneed's Finishing Words , kay?
It's easier than your hardest..

• HP,OD+1
  01:23:524(1):Finish
  01:47:071,02:05:893:Resnap these Timing Points

• 00:41:176(1):Add whistle at the beginning of this slider
  00:57:056(1):Symmetry
  01:04:703(1):Add finish at the beginning of this slider
  02:19:695(4):Hard to find the sliderball's direction

• 01:04:703(1):Add finish at the beginning of this slider

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~

Red : You must fix that

[noneed's Ending Words]
01:08:379 (1,2,3,1,2,3,5,6,7,8) - Move 1/4 earlier
01:18:672 (1,2,3,4) - Move 1/2 later
01:21:025 (7,8) - ^ and add note at 01:20:878
01:23:377 (1) - Remove and add note at 01:23:524
01:25:436 (7) - Remove
01:25:730 (7) - Move 1/4 earlier
01:26:612 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move 1/4 earlier
01:28:965 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move 1/4 later
01:37:788 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Move 1/4 earlier
01:57:639 (1) - Extand by 1/4


Star~

Mianki wrote:

Hiya

Breeze's First Words:
Fine~

Second Words:

00:12:943 (3.4.5.6.7) Distance snap
01:12:643 (6) 3 grids left and 1 down?

Last Words:

01:14:702 (7) Did you put this purposely a bit to the left? If not, put it correctly under the last slider
02:02:932 (3) Distance snap

noneed's Ending Words:

Overall, this difficulty felt really awkward. Didn't get the rhythm and the beat placement doesn't match the song. I think the main problem is that you place notes to the blue ticks. It's okay to put notes to blue ticks in a stream and such, but it's bad to start a combo on them (or end). You should redone this diff bearing that in mind. It would become much more playable.

Liked the map, but noneed's diff needs work.
Star~

Leorda wrote:

Swasdi

[General]
1) BPM : 120 Are you sure ?
2) The tags are not same on each diff!!!!

[Breeze's First Words]
*) The HP Drain are too high~
*) Diff name : Breeze's First Word

00:35:588 (1) - Slider is too short for easy diff
01:19:407 (2) - ^
01:55:286 (1) - ^
01:55:874 (2) - ^

[Second Words]
01:02:938 (1) - Clap?

[Last Words]
Fine~

[noneed's Ending Words]
Weird.....

00:10:149 (4) - Move backward to white tick
00:12:502 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:17:501 (4,5,6,7) - Move backward red tick
00:37:352 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Not bad
STAR

vincerio wrote:

น่าจะ fade out mp3 นะ -*- ตัดน่าเกลียดไปนิด ฝากพี่หมอ Fade out เพลงหน่อยจิ ไม่มีโปรแกรมอ่า

BPM 120 แน่ใจหรอคับ - - ?

[Second Word] normal สินะ?

01:43:671 - ขยับ spinner อีกนิด ใกล้ 5 มากเกินไป (เริ่มขีดขาว) ok
02:02:199 - เริ่ม spinnerที่ 02:02:346 ok
02:04:993 - delete note ok
02:02:346 - ขยาย spinner ไปจบที่ 02:05:287 ใส่เสียง finish ok
02:05:582(1,2) - delete note ok
02:07:052(3) - ขยับปลาย slider ไปด้านตรงกันข้าม ok

[Last Word]
00:44:411 - ทำให้ดูดีอีกนิด ok
01:06:763(4) - ก๊อปปี้โน๊ตมาวางแล้วปรับองศาใน edit ดีกว่านะ(ทำให้เหมือน3) ok
01:56:170(7) - ขยับให้ตรงกับ 8 ok
02:09:111(5) - ขยับให้ตรงกับ 3 (ซ้าย 1 grid lv3) ok

choche wrote:

Hi! I'm going to start with the mod

Things you must do.
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it.

[General]
I like the song :3

[Breeze's First Words]

00:11:179 (1) - Add clap in the end of the slider. It's okay,but I added whistle instead of clap.
00:21:766 (3) - Add clap. ^
00:27:354 (3) - Add finish in the end of the slider. I'm not changed it.
00:55:881 (6) - Add finish It's ok.
02:02:346 (1) - Add finish[/color] ^

[Second Word]

Make the same that i've said in the previous difficulty, follow those instructions for the hitsounds (add clap or finish in the end of the phrases when you follow the voice).

[Last Word]

The same

*star*

wmfchris wrote:

Requested to mod noneed's diff.

(lack some hitsounds? soft whistle seems good in this song)

0:15:002 (7) swap the beginning and ending looks better? though fine for me. I like it that way, sry
1:18:819 (2) direction of slider not clear enough? yup, youre right
1:56:756 (4) right 1 grid

some 1/4 slider streams maybe overmapped, but the diff is not bad~