Sprosive wrote:

[clickz]
-[stress]1*100

Heatherfield wrote:

[General]

[Everless]
00:43:127 (4,5) - 这个spacing不是很好读的样子
03:06:011 (1) - 这个slider以及后面的那一串在这个AR下不是很好读，而且有些不是很合的感觉 建议修改 O.o

再见 好吧AR+1 虽然我觉得7完全没问题 而且老师打也没什么问题._.

Everless是谁啊！

Heatherfield wrote:

[General]
对这个出处不敢肯定，我查了半天还是不能确定这个是不是ddr的曲子 o.o I found the tag on Last.fm, not sure either
[Normal]
这里面的slider太坑爹了 囧..总是读不出是几下然后就提早移开就断了，是逼着人开DT HR么lol 大概是压星的缘故？不过总之这样好像更难了..
别的倒是没什么，在压住星的前提下改的好读点吧 oh yeah, i should call this diff EZ. train your reaction>.> 尼玛神触DTHR

[Clickz]
这么简单大丈夫?FC不能大丈夫?
00:37:314 (5) - 加个note似乎好听一点 o.o 人家故意弄断的QAQ
01:46:694 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这几个三连听着不很fit的感觉 Affirmative, this 3 not fit perfectly.....英文烦死了..为了整体性. )前面也有一样的. 出于我这整个风格注重重复性的考虑. 加上转下去不转上来我就浑身不舒服的习惯......我这样放了. 似乎那里已经用hitsound把违和压到最低了


star~
（喂从打起来没太大问题的图里面挑东西mod很蛋疼的呀

yangzd88 wrote:

[General]
按DeeN的说法的话..Source要去掉吧 真的不是DDR D:? are you sure?
Tag:Dj taka collab eveless moeclickz moeveless added

[HentaiClickz]
好简单我随手SS(误 神触请自重
00:39:752 (3) - 坑爹! 也许我真该改下
01:10:504 (5) - 降低点音量?好刺耳.. 卧槽 我忘了绿线
03:02:261 (6,7,8,9) - 排成正方形? no 我整个map的风格都是有点歪斜角度

rofl
[attachment=0:e3e39]DJ Amuro remixed by DM Ashura - AAA (Clickz) [yznoob].osu[/attachment:e3e39]

yangzd88 wrote:

I'm not moe girl rofl= =

karenying wrote:

General
offset 0自重
offset不能是 0 D:

Easy
00:18:001(1) - 好長...轉着累,弄成兩個spinner？ i make that start with the change of soundtrack
02:00:101(1) - 這個倒是太短...長度x2 ^ to short for EZ maybe. if somebody mention it again. i will delete this spin.


moeClickz
00:18:001(1) - 同easy i make that start with the change of soundtrack
00:37:314(x) - 加個circle叠着(3)>_> 我想做到更有节奏感. 那个地方之前的摆法 我做了个新的开始 中间停息下 再连起来加快 挺舒服的 i guess
02:38:822(10) - 叠着(1)吧...放這很別扭 我按照DS弄的 很难看么T^T
03:12:105 - 加條綠線結束kiai time k

給力！

• Offset:18ms
  
  Tags: remove dJ Amuro dm Ashura, add Beatmania IIDX?
  
  This first appearance of the song was on Beatmania IIDX 8th Style and Dance Dance Revolution Extreme...
  So:
  Beatmania IIDX 8th Style: September 27, 2002
  Dance Dance Revolution Extreme: December 25, 2002
  
  I think they both can be source of the song...
  
  Kiai suggestion:
  00:23:954-00:24:376
  00:47:909-00:48:096
  01:12:004-01:12:192
  01:35:912-01:36:099
  02:00:007-02:00:195
  02:23:915-02:24:196
  03:12:012-03:12:199

• 00:29:251 (7) - rotate -90°? It's hard to read though the AR is high enough
  
  SPOILER

  ..
  01:56:257 (2) - Make like 01:54:757 (2,3) ?

• 01:48:006 (3) - New combo?
  02:21:116 (1) - Soft C2 clap?
  03:09:960 (3) - Clap?

• 01:56:632 (3) - New combo

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Offset:18ms
  
  Tags: remove dJ Amuro dm Ashura, add Beatmania IIDX? k
  
  This first appearance of the song was on Beatmania IIDX 8th Style and Dance Dance Revolution Extreme...
  So:
  Beatmania IIDX 8th Style: September 27, 2002
  Dance Dance Revolution Extreme: December 25, 2002
  
  I think they both can be source of the song... May i call you wikiselee?
  
  Kiai suggestion:
  00:23:954-00:24:376
  00:47:909-00:48:096
  01:12:004-01:12:192
  01:35:912-01:36:099
  02:00:007-02:00:195
  02:23:915-02:24:196
  03:12:012-03:12:199 fix some

[Normal]

Remove Kiai? k (for the previous mod. i decided not move the last spin, Cuz although i tried speed 150,
i can make "300")

[Clickz]

• 01:56:632 (3) - New combo k

Blazevoir wrote:

Ooh, I love this song Anyway,

[General]
* Actually, this song (AAA) never appeared in any DDR (what DID appear were A from DDR Extreme and AA from DDR SuperNOVA though), so please remove Dance Dance Revolution from Source and dance revolution from Tags.

[Normal]
* You're overusing Kiai Time.

[yznoob]
* Just a suggestion, but shouldn't this have something like Normal+ or Hard at the end of this diff's name?

[eveless]
* Same case as yznoob's diff, except maybe add Hard+ or Insane?

[Clickz]
* Names are only used for collabs/if you're making a guest diff for someone else's map, so I suggest you rename this diff.
* You're overusing Kiai Time again...

And that's about it. (No kudosu for this post.) ★~

yangzd88 wrote:

lol
@clickz 01:33:193哪里出了问题>_<?其他都改了(笑 无所谓了 ╮(╯_╰)╭ 不明显
谁来给你kd(笑

@Selee OA8 is too fast..Just HP+1

[attachment=0:bf2a0]DJ Amuro remixed by DM Ashura - AAA (Clickz) [yznoob].osu[/attachment:bf2a0]

DeeN wrote:

DDR?
NOT DDR JUST DM ASHURA PRODUCTIONS(ALSO U CAN CHECK THE WIKI ABOUT DM ASHURA)
嘛无所谓了只是IIDX考据党看了会2一下

Leorda wrote:

Hi thereHi leo

[General]
BPM : 160? 159.99 more fits the song really


[/color]
[eveless]
00:45:096 ~ 00:45:940 - Can you fill the object here? It's kinda feels empty for me~No , just a speed down

[/color]

Good job
STAR

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
BPM : 160? no i am pretty sure about 159.9

[Normal]
Inconsistent mapping, please full-mapped. Half-mapped is sucks T^T i am noob, not suck

00:24:376 (1) - This note are too far from spinner, since this is a average diff. Please closer to the spinner, otherwise, the average player couldn't reach these note
01:35:255 (1) - This 1/8 repeating slider are inappropriate for Normal diff[/color] Really?


[Clickz]
01:06:004 (1) - Remove whistle at trace (keep the whistle at beginning and end) ...i guess it is okay, feels this slider slower...i guess i'd better decrease some volume
01:53:632 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This combo are completely messy D: well, somebody said it is messy, somebody said it is okay, someone even get "SS". but i feel it really does fit the soundtrack. Wait for MAT or BAT's judge

Good job
STAR

AngelHoney wrote:

All

bpm 160 offset 5ms ? O.O 也許吧ww www是159.9没错

Clickz

用normal不是比soft更合適么Orz.. 我的摆法设置了快慢变化 慢配重低音 快配轻whistle

01:06:004 (1) - 去掉滑調上的whistle 我真是故意加的
01:10:504 (5) - 左邊一點?或者這一組換一種排列?(因為反向箭頭被之前的300遮住了..差點被秒殺._. 雷神我也看不到._.
01:27:942 (4) - 爲什麽半速O.O? 这半速很违和 超违和 但是为了形状QAQ 让我想想怎么弄,_,
01:48:194 (1) - 移開點? 前面的弄开了点 连打的时候不想换间距 我这样的彩笔也想FC啊 QAQ
01:53:257 (1) - 這一組後面..蛋疼www 基地顺手爱死爱死, 偶也



Normal

normal比normal+圈圈小一號www K
fine

:3

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[eveless]
00:40:127 (9) - 如果为了高音的话new combo，否则调下spacing比较好
00:43:127 (4,5,6) - 认真的吗？
01:42:756 (5) - 这里开始的new combo白线起明显好
02:14:070 (7) - 建议挪出，和后面格式匹配一点
02:44:260 (3) - 为了防止腻外加带下一部分建议加个折返
最后真不错w

eveless wrote:

..offset我改了就是

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Wmf's Taiko]
泥马这弄出一个里战车了

kioukiou wrote:

Easiest diff is 3.5 star.

But it's not a problem for me.

Bubbled.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Normal]
00:18:010 (1) - Move Kiai Time on the end of this spinner. k
00:35:635 (5) - Remove finish? k
00:36:010 (1) - Move Kiai Time on top of this note. k
00:41:635 (5) - ^ on the end of this slider.k
00:47:635 (4) - Remove finish? k
00:48:010 (1) - Kiai on top of this note please. k
01:00:010 (1) - ^ k
01:12:010 (1) - ^ and so on throughout the difficulty. fixed

[yznoob]
01:22:510 (1) - Remove the finish on this spinner? k

[Insane]
Same thing with Kiai. yes

Alace wrote:

AAA(Alace AngelHoney Aakiha) bless you guys
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