thanks for mod-Welsh Corgi- wrote:
Hello! from my queue.
Kanan's NORMAL
00:03:423 (1) - these beginning sliders are nice, but a little bit inconsistent. for example, change this sliders white tick into a red one. did something different
00:06:314 (1) - move the white ticks of these sliders a bit inward, so that the slider is a bit sharper. sure
00:07:760 (2) - delete the first white tick of this slider, and move the second white tick of this slider a bit to the left, so that it has a better curve.moved the white anchor a bit up00:36:676 (4) - rotate this slider 90 degrees to the left, so that it does not overlap with the slider previous to it. the symmetrical wouldn't make sense if i would change it
00:46:796 (1) - these two sliders are extremely not symmetrical™. maybe copy and flip one of these sliders to avoid inconsistencies like these. minor but k
00:53:302 (2) - I see a lot of these sliders in this difficulty, so this is mainly for the GD'er. make sure the white tick is in the middle, so that the slider has a nicer and better curve.like this01:09:206 (6) - i also see a lot of these almost-straight sliders™. try to make them completely straigth™, or make them a bit more tilted for that a e s t h e t i c feel to them lol^.(this matters more in easier difficulties such as normal and easy, than in harder difficulties such as hard, insane and extra) This matters in no difficulty no slider is perfect you can check every ranked map
and the last 2 difficulties are a little bit too hard for me to mod. sorry
well, that's it from me. I hope I helped a little bit. good luck on ranking your map! ^^
mentai pro mapperu w
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