1. Coryn's Oni (4.12 stars, 392 notes)
2. Hard (2.47 stars, 155 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2.96 stars, 234 notes)

★ Pokemon Mystery Dungeon ★
❤OPENING THEME ❤



❤Thanks for playing! ❤

My Angel DanyL wrote:

[Guildmaster]
I think for this map Bear Snap Division - 1/6
https://puu.sh/wQfB1/2c653a5a02.png - fix it

Zedther wrote:

My Angel DanyL wrote:

[Guildmaster]
I think for this map Bear Snap Division - 1/6
https://puu.sh/wQfB1/2c653a5a02.png - fix it

Being that this is essentially my first attempt at getting a map ranked,
I'm not sure what all of those errors in Aimod mean, or how to fix them.
EDIT: nvm, I did some quick googling - I think I somewhat know what I'm doing now

So far, you've been a massive help - I resolved those other issues, I'm just going to fix all of that junk that Aimod picked up on before I submit the updated version.

1. I noticed right off the bat you have Offset 0. This 99% of the time makes for an off-timed map! Going around a bit, I found offset 1,496 to work well.
2. There are no Kiais within the map! Use green timing ticks to toggle Kiai in the most important parts of the song :0

Nutik wrote:

Timing

1. I noticed right off the bat you have Offset 0. This 99% of the time makes for an off-timed map! Going around a bit, I found offset 1,496 to work well.
2. There are no Kiais within the map! Use green timing ticks to toggle Kiai in the most important parts of the song :0

Easy

SPOILER

Hitsounds feel a bit odd. Be sure to correlate specific rhythm into specific hitsounds! Summing up the below list, try to make curves more smooth and use no more than 3-4 points! It makes odd shapes with so many of them. Also, try getting more basic straightforward rhythms for the kicksliders, e.g. 1/1 Sliders.

1. Difficulty aspects (CS, AR, OD, and HP) unbalanced. For an Easy, you want up to 3 on OD, AR, and HP.
2. 00:01:959 (2) - Curve with slider is strong, try to make it flow more
3. 00:02:882 (3) - Clap Sound suggested (opinion)
4. 00:03:344 (4) - A strange curve shape, don't make it too detailed! Basic curves are mostly used.
5. 00:07:959 (8) - Very irregular, giving a "dirty" look. The cleaner and easier the curves, the better.
6. 00:09:343 (2) - ^
7. 00:10:728 (4) - ^ try
8. 00:14:420 (8) - ^ using (also object out of bounds)
9. 00:15:805 (1) - ^ less (also object out of bounds)
10. 00:18:574 (1) - ^ points
11. 00:22:728 (6) - ^ here
12. 00:23:650 (7) - ^ xd
13. 00:25:498 (2) - ^
14. 00:27:344 (4) - Clean curve but a bit sharp, flow reasoning. Also, object out of bounds.
15. 00:28:267 (5) - Mix of dirty and sharp
16. 00:30:112 (7) - Strange hook on slider?
17. 00:34:728 (1) - Object out of bounds.
18. 00:35:650 (2) - ^
19. 00:36:574 (4) - "Dirty slider".
20. 00:37:959 (6) - An advanced kickslider for an easy diff, try putting a 1/1 snap slider there instead?
21. 00:39:805 (9) - ^
22. 00:41:190 (2) - "Dirty slider".
23. 00:43:036 (5) - Breaks common flow, which isn't represented in song
24. 00:44:421 (6,7) - Objects out of bounds.
25. 00:45:344 (8) - Advanced rhythm, and out of bounds.
26. 00:48:574 (5) - Object out of bounds.
27. 00:52:728 (3) - Advanced rhythm.
28. 00:56:420 (1) - ^
29. 00:57:805 (3) - "Dirty slider".
30. 01:00:574 (7) - Try to get a cleaner result of the slider here, although fitting and okay in current state.
31. 01:03:344 (1) - Advanced rhythm
32. 01:04:267 (2) - "Dirty slider".
33. 01:06:113 (5) - ^
34. 01:07:498 (6) - ^
35. 01:08:882 (8) - ^
36. 01:09:806 (1) - ^
37. 01:15:344 (3) - ^ Strange hook.

Starz15 wrote:

Free NM because I felt like it ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

[Guildmaster]
00:08:361 (5,6) - This could be stacked better
00:08:880 (1) - Optional | I would recommend a slider starting at 00:08:707 to 00:08:880 so that it captures the drum sound and the note on the white tick
00:40:265 (6) - This slider could be neater
00:45:342 (4,5,6,7) - This stream could be neater
01:15:226 (5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - These triples and 1/4 reverse sliders don't actually reflect the singular note. Try replacing them with just circles

[Normal]
00:04:726 (2,3,4) - There are 4 drum sounds in total, but you only mapped the first one and last 2, skipping the one at 00:04:871
00:14:419 (4) - Slider shape could be neater
00:54:111 (5) - Could be neater here as well so it doesn't overlap with 00:56:726 (2,3)
01:17:034 (1,1,1,1) - I don't really think it's necessary to have these 4 circles all be new combos :/

[Easy]
01:18:111 (2) - Optional | For the sake of aesthetics you could move this circle on top of 01:16:265 (4) so the overlap isn't really noticeable

I hope this helps and GL with ranking this!
-Starz
P.S. Keep in mind that this is from the view of a 100k player with minimal modding experience

Updated: Thanks for the help, I really do appreciate it!

SuperCSGO wrote:

Hello!

From my queue:

This is gonna be a weird mod, because it's not pointing out problems with individual objects - it's a more a b s t r a c t problem overall with both maps.

That problem is slider flow.

I'm nowhere near experienced enough to properly explain slider flow, so here's a video explaining it instead:



Generally, I'm considering a slider's visual flow here, because it's awkward sometimes throughout your maps.

Here's some points around your maps you might want to consider reworking:

Easy

00:01:957 (2,3,4) - The note in the middle has potential for good flow, but doesn't follow either slider's visual or circular flow.
00:12:111 (5,1,2) - Flow bends off at a right angle. Pulling note 1 in and pushing note 2 out to follow a curve - and the slider's circular flow - would be advisable here.
00:23:649 (4,1,2) - More right angles - pushing the sliders further to the left would fix this easily.
00:39:803 (3,4,5) - right angles blahblahblah, moving note 4 down, angling slider 3 toward the note or moving slider 3 up would fix this.
00:52:726 (6,1,2,3) - Try turning 1 2 and 3 into a curve to follow circular flow.
01:14:880 (4,5) - Awkward right angle - try curving slider 5 to follow a smoother flow.

Guildmaster

00:01:496 (1,2) - Jerky angle, curve 2 more?
00:03:188 (5,6) - Slider heads in slightly weird direction, rotate just a couple degrees further counter-clockwise to fix.
00:04:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - More weird slider flow here.
00:14:419 (4,1,2,3,4) - This break in flow might be for emphasis, but I'll list it here anyway.
00:35:188 (5,6) - yeah this one's obvious
00:37:496 (4,5,6,7) - Move this stream in line with the slider to avoid an awkward jerk.
01:10:572 (9,10,11,12) - 90 degree turn - rotate 10 11 and 12 for a smoother flow.

Whilst slider flow should generally be followed, don't think that you're not allowed to break it. However, it should be broken to emphasise important notes, not midway through a melody.

Also why does Easy have the borders around the image as if there's a storyboard?

Anyway, good luck in future mapping!

GL, HF!

1. 01:04:265 - 01:18:111 - red lines are basically for timing that changes the metronome or the rhythm timing, but having those here is unnecessary here tbh. green lines are most suitable to have kiai setting only, including slider speed, volumes, custom hitsounds. to fix that, F6, then check mark "Inherit previous timing settings". it will be the same, dw (note that u might wanna check the snaps all over on that part only, cuz sometimes it might be off or not for some notes)

1. 00:05:649 (6) - would be better to have a rhythm like this rather than the current one here http://puu.sh/zfVuY/22a17610e5.jpg . sometimes people might find it boring to play and the only thing that we want to map is to provide players for getting more fun to play with
2. 00:41:649 (1) - 00:53:649 (8) - 00:58:726 (6) - pay attention to those slider snaps there. it's unrankable to have an off snap there

1. 00:15:803 (1) - removing an NC here should work for a fix
2. 00:59:188 (5,6,7) - here's an unrankable one. consistency of using DS MUST be the same in order to make newbies able to play it more easier without such sudden spacing changes for a diff like this