Sakura301 wrote:

[General]
64 BPM is 1/2 of 128 BPM why not base it off 128 BPM and make a 1/2 section instead?
When I tried that (as the offset is when it starts) it still plays at 1x speed...I might mess with it again over the weekend...
Your background file name is kind of long...
Err...
There are 2 .osb files
Artist change does that. Removed.
Add emotional skyscrapper cosmic mind and Byakuren Hijiri to tags
Yes, found that out last night as well. Added.
You dont need that many red lines at the end, just try another 1/2 section.
This I entirely disagree. The timing isn't that simple.
So... what's the point of SBing hitsounds again?, just to let you know hitsounds are supposed to sound exactly when the player hits the note, instead of being fixed, if you want to add hitsounds to slider ticks and stuff i recommend you add them to each difficulty separately. But remember they are called HITsounds for a reason. (And yes im aware many ppl SB hitsounds but it doesnt look good when you dont hit the note at the exact milisecond it was SBed at, slider ticks are another story tho)
They're mostly in blank spaces that I cannot hitsound (ie during spinners). Ticks, I take care with a custom soundset... ...I'll run through the difficulties again...
You should put your name on your diffs and the guest mapper on the guest diff imo, also something someone told me some time ago "what's the point of SBing the mapper's name if you see it on the song select anyways?" Because I can. jk. It's a placeholder so I can SB the lyrics before someone says REMOVE OSB FILE.

[Easy]
01:33:925 (1) - Dont change BPM in middle of a slider please... Oops

[Normal Sallad]
00:59:472 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:03:457 (2,3,4) - Spacing
01:18:457 (2,3,4) - Spacing

[Hard]
00:18:925 (1) - Make more symmetric? Okay
00:51:738 (1) - ^ But this one I like D: Like a bass cleft-ish thing...
01:18:925 (3) - ^ Okay
01:20:097 (4) - Looks ugly with the waypoints like that, try: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9305 more smooth curve Not your suggestion, but reshaped.
01:26:425 (3) - Once again try something more smooth? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9307 I guess...
01:30:175 (1,2,3,4) - All of theese could use smoother curves. Personally, I think it's fine...

[Lunatic]
The 64 BPM section doesnt hint you in any way it's going to be that slow, the slider speed throws off and the distance doesnt look like it's hinting at all, also why so many streams?

LKs wrote:

No need a Enable countdown
Okay~

Easy

[00:48:926] why not use whistle? Forgot

Normal Sallad

[00:40:019] (4,5) move a bit , i think the spacing is too close
[00:56:543] kiai part should be started at [00:56:426]

Hard

[01:34:719] spacing? Yesh

Lunatic

[00:28:769] new combo Okay

star~

no-7 wrote:

[EASY]
I think that 0.4x spacing may be too close , next note is half covered by previous hit300 etc.,but if you change this you may remap this diff totally it's up to you.
Combobursts will be changed in the near future to make up for this~

Other diffs seem fine, hold on~!

H-boy wrote:

Normal Sallad
00:10:957(5) - use whistle replace finish at end No thanks
00:14:707(5) - ^ ^
00:25:957(4) - ^ ^
00:40:957(x) - note? ^

Sakura301 wrote:

[General]
[Normal Sallad]
00:59:472 (1,2,3) - Spacing ? No spacing problems...
01:03:457 (2,3,4) - Spacing ^
01:18:457 (2,3,4) - Spacing ^

LKs wrote:

Normal Sallad

[00:40:019] (4,5) move a bit , i think the spacing is too close Wait, there isn't a spacing problem...though...
[00:56:543] kiai part should be started at [00:56:426] Yes, changed

Blazevoir wrote:

Heya~ Modding in place of I_Tatsuo_I, so here's my mod:

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might wanna fix this
Red = you MUST fix this

[Easy]
00:02:754 (2) - Wouldn't this note be a bit confusing to hit for beginners?Moved to be a slider? :3
00:40:019 (3) - I keep wanting to hit this early (Btw, this isn't in green because this was just a personal issue. I don't know if others did the same.)Yeah, the vocal comes in 1 and 1/2 beats early. Made a fix, but it looks soso at the moment. Want a second opinion on the new slider.

[Normal Sallad]
01:12:597 (3,4) - Make these into a slider? Both the spacing and timing threw me off.Added
01:27:597 (4,5) - ^^

[Hard]
00:21:503 (5,6,7) - Make into a repeating slider instead?Hm, Iono...I kinda like it this way...
01:36:153 (6) - Why is this the only one out of the last notes with nearly no volume?Trying to avoid the tick sounds until I get a good timing.
01:37:711 (7) - This sounds weird where it ends... Fix it?Fixed hopefully

[Lunatic]
00:42:832 (1) - This practically seems out of place, maybe because of where it starts.
00:48:105 (5) - Make this start a red tick later?
01:19:746 (10) - Make this start a red tick earlier?
01:22:090 (4) - ^

This is very well-mapped aside from what I pointed out. ★~

P.S. For some odd reason, this map excites me more than the SB version... I dunno why...

Blazevoir wrote:

Hooooooooold it!

[Easy]
00:38:144 (2,3,4) - This alone proves you need to fix your spacing for this difficulty. You could at least space (all of) the notes after 4 further apart from each other.Oh, I meant it to be x0.4 spacing to account for the rhythm change.

[Normal Sallad]
01:37:711 (4) - Uhh... I can hear the ticks again during the 2nd half of this slider...Oops changed

[Hard]
00:20:800 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Haha... I just now noticed that the shape you were using here, so yeah... my bad on 5,6, and 7

Waiting for Lunatic to be updated (or at least a post update for it)~

Blazevoir wrote:

[Lunatic]
00:42:832 (1) - This practically seems out of place, maybe because of where it starts.Should be better now.
00:48:105 (5) - Make this start a red tick later?Yes
01:19:746 (10) - Make this start a red tick earlier?^
01:22:090 (4) - ^^

This is very well-mapped aside from what I pointed out. ★~

P.S. For some odd reason, this map excites me more than the SB version... I dunno why...

Blazevoir wrote:

Hmm...

[Lunatic]
00:42:832 (1) - This is just a personal opinion, but maybe make this start on a red tick?
01:36:153 (5) - Shouldn't there be a note after this slider, like around 01:37:098 (or make this slider end around that point)?

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

Wow, nice song and video to go with it. Not quite what I was expecting with an IOSYS song, hehe. I'm used to more.. style from them.

[Easy]
00:00:176 (1,2) - Aaah, so close! Kind of intimidating for the beginning of an easy.
00:00:176 (1) - Oh, can you smooth this out a bit? That angle is kind of sharp. Use two anchor points~
00:03:926 (1) - This one too?
00:37:676 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for an easy - especially an easy of this caliber.
00:46:347 (2,1) - Okay, the super-low distance spacing makes this just impossible to sight-read. Increase the spacing between these so there's a clear indication that there's a gap of time.
01:11:426 (1) - Soon after a spinner, etc
01:15:176 (1,2,3) - Space these out more, please. :/
All changed/fixed

[Sallad]
00:45:410 (2) - Hrm... maybe lower this two grids to reduce overlap?
01:06:269 (2) - Maybe scoot this right a little bit to make a smoother transition to the 3? That or line the 3 up with the two sliders.
All changed/fixed

[Hard]
00:21:621 (6) - Why?! It looks AND sounds bad. :/
00:33:925 (1) - Finish doesn't sound good imo
00:36:621 - There a reason for this timing section?
00:46:816 (6) - Maybe aim this to the right?
01:28:769 (2,3,4) - I was kind of expecting to follow the lyrics here considering what you did right before this...
01:34:719 (3) - Move this to 01:34:660 (3) - for the time being (it's 1/8 snap), though you should get better timing for this section if you want to do all the beats.
01:37:711 (7) - Just do it as a single beat. It doesn't feel right as a slider.
All changed/fixed

[Lunatic]
Streams for a nice cheery slow piano/vocal duet... :/
Same comments from hard for the end section here.
Mm most people didn't like it, so it's removed~


I didn't like the insane that much - it doesn't feel like you're playing the song to me.

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Easy:
Slow sliders and distance snapping to 0,6x makes it slow, but it's fine.

Normal Sallad:
00:45:176 (1,2,3) - Why isn't this on a line while 00:46:816 (1,2,3) - is ? It is to avoid slider overlap~

Hard:
00:45:175 (1) - Hidden by the 300/100 of the spinner when it's completed. Move it.Moved
00:45:175 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing. The distance between two consecutives isn't always the same. ^

Overall a pretty good map. Here's your star.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Note: I might time this at a later date, but not right now

I would probably remove Reitaisai from the tags because no one would search for that without having the number because typing in the name of a convention in general would give you way too many results in many cases.Haha only two results! And it's the other star river map :3

Easy:
Normal mod: (mostly nazi stuff)
00:48:222 (2) - wondering why this is not aligned with 1 For an arc effect?
00:56:894 (2) - change the shape so it leads more to the next note? Sure
01:13:769 (3) - the weak curve combined with how the slider is is only startingto curve at the end makes this slider look bad, so please change it Changed

Combo mod:
00:26:426 (2) - new combo to follow the lyrics (you already have multiple 1 note long combos, so you should probably do that here) Okie
01:28:301 (3) - a new combo because the music gets softer? (not too sure about your style) Nah

Timing section mod:
00:56:426 - a quarter note before this timing section, add another inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai (for the change in hitsound volume)

Normal Sallad:
Combo mod: (I am assuming you are following the lyrics, if I am wrong, you can just ignore me
00:24:551 (1) - remove new combo to follow the lyrics
00:28:301 (1) - ^
All done~
Hard:
Normal mod:
00:06:504 (2) - stack properly under the end of 1 (turn off grid snap and turn ds to x0.0) Done~
00:39:316 (5) - this curve would look better if the curve was more balanced (move the center anchor point more toward the center of the slider) Done
01:05:800 (1,2,3,4) - a more curved pattern will probably look better here Ok~

Combo mod:
00:41:191 (8,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 8 to follow the lyrics
00:46:816 (6) - new combo to follow the lyrics
01:12:597 (4) - new combo to follow the lyrics?
All okay~

Timing section mod:
There are some problems with the end of the beatmap and timing sections, but I not going to ask you to change anything until the ending is retimed because my changes could be useless after the retiming.

Nice mapset overall. Star!

Bikko wrote:

My english is not good. I'm sorry about this but my contury is not english-speaking world. keep in mind please.It's perfectly fine :3


Poof! Summoned!

RED : IMPORTANT
ORANGE : I RECOMMEND IT STRONGLY
BLUE : SUGGESTION, NAZI, PERSONAL DISCONTENT


[Easy]

You used too close distance snap. even they are slow enough. many circles has some overlapping part even they are not intended for stack. I know this is conventional, but I really don't approve of it. I can't not say remap it, but plz think about it carefully.Hmmm, personally I think it should be okay...

00:38:144 (2~4) IMO, this kind of pattern is not good to noobs. Changed.

[Normal Sallad]
00:10:957 (5) 2 gird down. It's more looks good to me. True, changed
00:40:019 (5) 1 grid left, 1 grid down. Ok
01:34:368 (4) I suggest this strongly.

SPOILER

[attachment=0:9aa81]screenshot325.jpg[/attachment:9aa81]

If you accept this, don't forget to check next pattern's distance.
Changed
[Hard]

Increase OD 1 Tick.

I found some distorted spacing. an example, Look 00:10:957 (4,5,1)'s spacing. It's farther than others a little, and I can not found any valid reason for it. 00:37:675 (2~4) Look this. 2~3 not matched 3~4. 00:45:175 (1~4), Why didn't make this just straight line? I point out only these, you should check whole map and sort it for more looks good. of course, if you have your own logic of spacing with confidence, you can keep it. but I don't approve of it.
Wait, but 4,5,1 are equally spaced, and 1~2 etc seem to match...

Catching some of the others though (possibly spacing algorithm rounded wrong?)



[Lunatic]

IMO, you should make it again. you don't need to make it too hard. just harder than [Hard], That is enough.

I'll see~ :3
+star, good luck.

AeoNRivaS wrote:

Wohooo

[Easy]:
nothing found

[Normal Sallad]:
00:56:543 (kiai) - move kiai to white tick? What it wasn't already?';;

[Hard]:
00:20:800 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - very weird circle. Ahaha I think it's fine;;

[Extra]:
nope.

well overall good map.

1. Maybe capitalize the title?
2. I don't actually get why there is no red sections on easy as on other diffs. Make it similar please, so it'll not confuse any modders.
4. 01:38:183 (1) - Feels unsnapped. Maybe cause of those sections.

1. 01:34:043 - Kinda useless section.
   

1. 00:01:582 (2,3,4,1) - Only I feel weird about those those placements? :

1. 00:26:191 (7,1) - Oh this is really hard to see. I could only see it at my 2nd try in editor.

1. 00:13:769 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all those new combos. They look very odd.
2. 01:12:129 (3) - Remove that clap.
3. 01:15:176 (3,4,1,2) - Oh~Oh, those jumps are made of evil.

hujune wrote:

hi

my modding

[Easy]
00:06:738 (3) - End Notes add whistle ok
01:13:769 (3) - Start Notes add clap Nah
01:18:926 (1,2) - End Notes add clap but Volume reduce ^

[Normal Sallad]
00:48:222 (1) - Start Notes change clap?　Nah
00:59:472 (1) - End Notes add clap ^
01:12:597 (3) - 01:12:832 End Here and End Notes add clap Changed
01:18:926 (3) - End Notes add clap but Volume reduce Ok
01:20:097 (5) - ^ Nah

[Hard]
fine

[Extra]
00:59:472 (3) - add clap Nah
01:19:629 (2) - Start Notes add clap ^
01:18:926 (1) - Start Notes add clap ^
01:19:394 (x) - add Notes and add clap^
01:21:269 (2) - add clap but Volume reduce ok

nice song +star

Lunaba wrote:

~Overall~

1. Maybe capitalize the title? Title wasn't capitalized in original song
2. I don't actually get why there is no red sections on easy as on other diffs. Make it similar please, so it'll not confuse any modders. Whoops, fixed
4. 01:38:183 (1) - Feels unsnapped. Maybe cause of those sections. It's fine.

~Easy~

1. 01:34:043 - Kinda useless section. Removed

~Normal~

1. 00:01:582 (2,3,4,1) - Only I feel weird about those those placements? :

?

~Hard~

1. 00:26:191 (7,1) - Oh this is really hard to see. I could only see it at my 2nd try in editor.

I think it's fine...


~Extra Stage~

1. 00:13:769 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all those new combos. They look very odd. Repeated from before. Keeping consistency.
2. 01:12:129 (3) - Remove that clap. Done
3. 01:15:176 (3,4,1,2) - Oh~Oh, those jumps are made of evil.

Song is so soft and charming. Map aswell. Good <3

DJPop wrote:

Suggest to mute spinnerspin.wav and spinnerbonus.wav.

- Easy -
01:22:676 (1) - silence it
01:30:176 (1) - ^
01:38:183 (1) - ^

- Normal Sallad -
Many clap sounds are weird in this diff :<
01:38:183 (1) - silence it

- Hard -
01:38:183 (1) - silence it

- Extra -
Clap sounds are too loud in some parts.
00:02:051 (2) - should be on the same level as (3,4)
00:55:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds only exist on (1) and (5), others notes don't sync to anything
00:58:066 (5) - move 1/4 left
01:13:066 (5) - ^
01:18:926 (1) - BPMx0.5 ??
01:38:183 (1) - silence it


+Star

DeathxShinigami wrote:

DJPop wrote:

Graveyard Defender

wmfchris wrote:

Need more audio lead-in? I think it's fine as is.
[Extra]
0:10:254 (6) left 1 grid to form parallelogram? Done
0:23:144 (1,2) make them similar in shape? Done
0:24:551 (3,4,5) left 2 grids? Nah
nice.

[hard]
0:41:660 (2,3,4,5) left 1 grid? Done

[Normal Sallad]
nice

suggestions only, the only bad thing is the clap sound inserted to the mp3 is really loud and annoying orz

star

441,293,90176,2,0,B|505:45|258:-24|9:45|73:293,1,720,2|2

Garven wrote:

Aah, I thought this was ranked long ago. ;_;

[General]
Left comments about the halved BPMs in Easy/Normal in IRC.
Fixed!

[Easy]
00:11:426 (1) - Position this while holding down shift (to turn off grid snap)
00:15:176 (1) - It'd be awesome if you could smooth out those kinks in the slider
00:20:332 (2,3) - Not much of a fan of stacks in easy difficulties.
00:38:144 (2,3,4,1,2) - Commented in IRC about spacing here
00:54:551 - Add a note? Feels empty.
01:20:801 (2) - Same comment about previous mirrored slider
All fixed!

[Normal Sallad]
Wow, when the custom clap is used it feels super-loud compared to all the sb'd ones.
00:37:676 (1) - Feels way soon after a spinner for a normal. Maybe end the spinner at 00:35:801 - and have a single hit at 00:37:207 - ?
Done
01:30:176 (5) - Not symmetrical, if you care to fix it:

441,293,90176,2,0,B|505:45|258:-24|9:45|73:293,1,720,2|2

Still not symmetrical, but a lot closer. :3
Mkay!

[Hard]
00:24:316 (4) - This felt out of place. Changed!
00:51:738 (1) - Maybe a single note here, and a slow slider from 00:52:676 - to 00:54:551? The break feels odd to have there. Done~
00:37:675 (2) - New combo? (Keeps consistent with the Extra diff) Sure
During the kiai section, it felt like there were so many places you could have used soft whistles. :< Maybe this will work better?
01:10:488 (1) - Woulda been neat if you did a rhythm with those claps ?

[Extra]
Wow, the difficulty jump is huuuge. Slider speed feels disproportionately fast compared to the song.
Left comments in IRC about new combo usage. I really recommend you remove them. Kept it more consistent!
00:05:801 (1,1,1,1) - I'm just biased against corner jumps like this since they're all disproportionate in distance. No need to change, but I wanna mention it.
01:03:926 (2,3) - These aren't very visually appealing. :/
01:30:176 (5) - ^

104,321,90176,2,0,B|88:129|288:73|488:129|472:321,2,600,0|2|2

Garven wrote:

Oop, delete the .picasaoriginals folder and full resubmit.
Done

[Easy]
00:56:894 (2) - This clap is still loud. >< Fixed~

[Normal Sallad]
01:11:426 (2,4) - These aren't symmetrical, if you want to try and address that. Hopefully done

[Hard]
00:57:597 (5) - Loud clap. >< Fixed

[Extra]
01:30:176 (5) - ><

104,321,90176,2,0,B|88:129|288:73|488:129|472:321,2,600,0|2|2

Mainly just need that extra folder deleted. ><

osuplayer111 wrote:

Awesome song and nice job with the beatmap.

Ranked~