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(K)NoW_NAME - Freesia

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Vert
424 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Vert
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年9月14日 星期四 at 上午 1:04:31

Artist: (K)NoW_NAME
Title: Freesia
Source: サクラクエスト
Tags: Sakura Quest P.A.WORKS Kashima Zweib
BPM: 90
Filesize: 2374kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Expert (5.29 stars, 299 notes)
  2. Kashima's Insane (4.45 stars, 244 notes)
  3. Normal (1.73 stars, 112 notes)
  4. Zweib's Hard (3.14 stars, 185 notes)
Download: (K)NoW_NAME - Freesia
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metadata from IamKwaN
Last edited by Vert , edited 18 times in total.
LowAccuracySS
605 posts
Joined October 2015
LowAccuracySS
Hi
Vert
424 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Vert

[ Space ] wrote:

Hi
hi
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
[General]
  1. colour 要不要統一??
[Normal]

  • 00:20:165 (5,1) - ??????
    00:25:498 (5,1) - ^
  1. 後面我都不挑了
  2. 大姐不知道Normal沒有「跳」這種東西嗎?? 估計你排列全掛...
[Hard]

  • 00:05:832 (2,2) - 我不削定能不能這樣搞Hard裡的滑條，你自己看著辦吧...(棄牌)
    00:44:832 (11) - NC一下
    00:56:665 (3,4,1) - 這裡的節奏好奇怪啊，你確定你自己沒下錯嗎??
  1. wa. 大佬！！
[Insane]

  • 00:14:748 - miss??
    00:19:998 (7,8) - 這個應該是我對這首曲子的想法，別強行製造節奏 :) 我真的強烈建議不要這樣搞，後面有類似的地方就不說了
    00:30:498 (6,7,8) - 這個好打嗎?? 自己測測看??
    00:35:832 (6,7) - 5連打比你現在這樣放的好太多...
    00:37:998 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這個神祕的5連打，我知道你跟什麼，但就看你前後的排列...不適合
  1. 並不是把時間軸都塞滿就是好圖 :)
[Expert]
  1. 強行加入很多自帶的節奏啊...標準給PP的Ex，我是覺得有很多連打都不必要，刪掉反而我會喜歡這難度
    00:19:582 (4) - 刪掉節奏好很多
    00:23:165 - add??
  2. 我是覺得依你的作圖實力，Expert不該長這樣。有很多在kiai段，很微小的音你都沒跟，會讓這難度變成高密度的連打圖...但還是要看你 :? :?

@_@
Kashima
154 posts
Joined May 2014
Kashima
Hard

00:05:832 (2) - 00:08:498 (2) - 这个形状不知道会不会出事
00:44:832 (11) - NC
00:49:498 (1) - 去NC
00:52:831 (7) - NC
00:55:998 (1) - 去NC
00:56:665 - 改成这样比较好?
1
01:06:165 (8) - NC

Expert

00:14:498 (8,9,10) - 咦这里是故意歪一点还是
Kashima
154 posts
Joined May 2014
Kashima

DreaM117er wrote:

[General]

[Insane]All fixed

  • 00:14:748 - miss??
    00:19:998 (7,8) - 這個應該是我對這首曲子的想法，別強行製造節奏 :) 我真的強烈建議不要這樣搞，後面有類似的地方就不說了
    00:30:498 (6,7,8) - 這個好打嗎?? 自己測測看??
    00:35:832 (6,7) - 5連打比你現在這樣放的好太多...
    00:37:998 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這個神祕的5連打，我知道你跟什麼，但就看你前後的排列...不適合
  1. 並不是把時間軸都塞滿就是好圖 :) newbie mapper 会慢慢努力的T T

@_@
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Depths
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Last edited by Depths , edited 1 time in total.
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Depths
from your request

[Expert]
  1. 00:54:165 (11) - maybe NC?
  2. 01:13:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this section feels overdone to me, I don't fully disagree with it but constant single taps don't seem fitting imo
  3. 01:14:165 (7) - add NC
  4. 01:14:832 (11) - NC

    [Kashima]
  5. 01:17:498 (3) - I think maybe you can shape this better to make the blankets cleaner with 01:16:832 (1,2) -

    [Zweib]
  6. 00:44:832 (11) - NC
  7. 00:52:831 (7) - NC
  8. 01:06:165 (8) - NC
sorry short/bad modding ><
good luck!
Hanazawa Kana
727 posts
Joined February 2013
Hanazawa Kana
来了 随便水水

[nm]
可以不全程ds snap的吗?

[hd]
前面两个折返滑条有点吓人 不会被搞么

00:56:164 (2,3,4) - 前面全跟的人声这里切成跟鼓有点突然

00:58:998 (4) - 这里也有点奇怪 感觉哪个轨都没在跟 感觉可以删掉前面那个note换成3/4滑条

[ins]
00:37:998 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 感觉这里不是很需要这种梗啊 这里音乐还挺平缓的 突然来个5连..我觉得就像你后面那样放俩滑条挺好的
要说5连的话 我倒是推荐这里00:35:832 (6,7) - 放

00:41:165 - 不放东西吗?我看你这里也不是全跟人声的 没啥必要空吧

00:59:498 (5,6,7,8) - 还有这里的音效听着有点突兀啊 和01:04:832 (5,6,7,8) - 这里用一样的多好啊

还有几处有overlap看着好难受x.x

[ex]
00:05:832 - 不是clickable很难受...

00:14:498 (8,9,10) - 很卡手啊..我个人觉得可以直接放个折返条 还能强调后面00:14:832 - 这个音

01:13:165 - 这里放大跳不是很好吧..鼓也少 人声也很慢的

GL.
Kashima
154 posts
Joined May 2014
Kashima

Depths wrote:

from your request

[Kashima]
[*]01:17:498 (3) - I think maybe you can shape this better to make the blankets cleaner with 01:16:832 (1,2) - done

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

来了 随便水水

[ins]
00:37:998 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 感觉这里不是很需要这种梗啊 这里音乐还挺平缓的 突然来个5连..我觉得就像你后面那样放俩滑条挺好的
要说5连的话 我倒是推荐这里00:35:832 (6,7) - 放好

00:41:165 - 不放东西吗?我看你这里也不是全跟人声的 没啥必要空吧这里是有个1/4滑条的呀

00:59:498 (5,6,7,8) - 还有这里的音效听着有点突兀啊 和01:04:832 (5,6,7,8) - 这里用一样的多好啊的确w

还有几处有overlap看着好难受x.xgameplay应该是看不出来的 检查了一遍
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
[Expert]

00:39:998 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g之后的flow应该顺一点

01:00:832 - 重音不太适合摆滑条尾所以01:00:665 (1) - 这个最好拆开放

kiai之前和之后的画风差距有点大。。

[Kashima's Insane]

00:14:748 - 漏音了

00:16:498 (4) - 这地方间距突然变小，不太清楚会不会有人当成1/8处理，建议找几个2000pp的打打看

00:29:499 (3,4,5,6) - 个人不是很喜欢这种flow感觉有点乱

00:30:748 (7) - 间距太大，感觉是1/8的话就不太必要用1/4的间距

[Zweib's Hard]

od6

00:11:165 (2,2) - 这两个怎么没跟前面一样拉回来一点啊

00:41:498 (1) - 太长了，00:44:832 (11) - 这里可以用一个nc

01:06:165 (8) - nc

划水
Vert
424 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Vert

DreaM117er wrote:

[General]
  1. colour 要不要統一?? 同一个麻婆的图统一就行了
[Normal]

  • 00:20:165 (5,1) - ??????
    00:25:498 (5,1) - ^
  1. 後面我都不挑了 其实比较慢节奏的曲子N是可以不等距的，我觉得没啥问题，间距大的地方都是一小段结束
  2. 大姐不知道Normal沒有「跳」這種東西嗎?? 估計你排列全掛...

[Expert]
  1. 強行加入很多自帶的節奏啊...標準給PP的Ex，我是覺得有很多連打都不必要，刪掉反而我會喜歡這難度 我作图以跟vocal为主，恩
    00:19:582 (4) - 刪掉節奏好很多 是这样的，我是跟vocal的，这里听着好像第二个音有些提前所以加了个三连在这
    00:23:165 - add??
  2. 我是覺得依你的作圖實力，Expert不該長這樣。有很多在kiai段，很微小的音你都沒跟，會讓這難度變成高密度的連打圖...但還是要看你 :? :? 大概是曲子太慢而我又跟vocal并且还要做X的缘故吧。。

Kashima wrote:

Expert
00:14:498 (8,9,10) - 咦这里是故意歪一点还是 故意的

Depths wrote:

from your request

[Expert]
[list]
[*]00:54:165 (11) - maybe NC?
[*]01:13:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this section feels overdone to me, I don't fully disagree with it but constant single taps don't seem fitting imo ok i think here is the strongest beat of the song ,so i will lost the chance to put jumps if i even dont do it here,and also i changed 01:15:832 (1) - these two sliders into jumps XD
[*]01:14:165 (7) - add NC
[*]01:14:832 (11) - NC NCs are all fixed

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

来了 随便水水

[nm]
可以不全程ds snap的吗? 节奏慢其实是可以的（我记得

[ex]
00:05:832 - 不是clickable很难受... 我一开始也是这样的，后来觉得其实没啥

00:14:498 (8,9,10) - 很卡手啊..我个人觉得可以直接放个折返条 还能强调后面00:14:832 - 这个音 我觉得还好啊，1/4 kick slider不都是这样用的吗

01:13:165 - 这里放大跳不是很好吧..鼓也少 人声也很慢的 这里不放跳就没机会了呀，我可是要做X标的人(跑

GL.

Speechless wrote:

[Expert]

00:39:998 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g之后的flow应该顺一点 可

01:00:832 - 重音不太适合摆滑条尾所以01:00:665 (1) - 这个最好拆开放 因为是跟的vocal所以我以人声作为滑条开头

kiai之前和之后的画风差距有点大。。是的，前面贪吃蛇后面瞎鸡巴跳
thx for modding XD
JJburstOwO
183 posts
Joined July 2012
JJburstOwO
[Hard]
00:22:832 (6,1) - 距离远一些
00:24:498 (4,5) - ^
00:52:831 (7) - NC
00:55:998 (1) - 取消NC
01:06:165 (8) - NC

[Insane]
00:35:832 (6) - 折返折返
01:03:498 (1) - 这种滑条弯折点往后挪一点

[Expert]
00:31:332 (8) - 叠在00:30:832 (7) - 尾
00:46:832 (9,10) - 减速
00:57:832 (4) - 往右点不用叠
01:04:165 (4,5) - Ctrl+G
01:05:498 (1) - 太长了，搞个Z型小折吧类似01:11:498 (1) -
01:08:165 (1) - 同上不要叠

学妹无敌
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib
all fixed.
除了 00:56:665 (3,4,1) - 这个好像确实什么都没跟不过打起来感觉还行就先不改

code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58165
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Freesia
TitleUnicode:Freesia
Artist:(K)NoW_NAME
ArtistUnicode:(K)NoW_NAME
Creator:Vert
Version:Zweib's Hard
Source:サクラクエスト
Tags:Sakura Quest P.A.WORKS Kashima Zweib
BeatmapID:1267599
BeatmapSetID:599556

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OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.8
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Vert
424 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Vert

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Expert]
00:31:332 (8) - 叠在00:30:832 (7) - 尾 为啥
00:46:832 (9,10) - 减速 可以
00:57:832 (4) - 往右点不用叠 往右就和后面的叠了，我把前面滑条加个减速，恩
01:04:165 (4,5) - Ctrl+G 为啥
01:05:498 (1) - 太长了，搞个Z型小折吧类似01:11:498 (1) - 可
01:08:165 (1) - 同上不要叠 同搞了个减速

学妹无敌
大哥无敌，谢谢大哥
Kashima
154 posts
Joined May 2014
Kashima

Speechless wrote:

[Kashima's Insane]

00:14:748 - 漏音了fixed

00:16:498 (4) - 这地方间距突然变小，不太清楚会不会有人当成1/8处理，建议找几个2000pp的打打看有找过2600pp的试图 都没问题

00:29:499 (3,4,5,6) - 个人不是很喜欢这种flow感觉有点乱感觉还好哇

00:30:748 (7) - 间距太大，感觉是1/8的话就不太必要用1/4的间距fixed

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Insane]
00:35:832 (6) - 折返折返改成5连了
01:03:498 (1) - 这种滑条弯折点往后挪一点猴
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84,213,31998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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174,106,61832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
不好意思来晚了

General
sliderslide消音吧 太吵了尤其是开头结尾的段落
鼓音效的用法我就不予置评了感觉也没怎么跟着曲子走基本上即兴发挥了 soft whistle用得太少了感觉比较残念啊 特别是开头部分一直到00:36:832 (1) - 感觉多加一些soft whistle跟吉他会很好听的

Normal
00:20:165 (5,1) - 最低难度 Normal 还放跳的吗 不要吧 保持1x
00:23:165 (4,1) - 啊后面还有好多啊……这个diff不要跳啊 有点简单了就把ds涨到1.1x
这diff真的飞不动……最好在kiai再加一些简单的1/4节奏类似01:19:165 (5,6) - 这种的 但是不要跳 不要跳 不要跳……

Zweib's Hard
OD6不然spread爆炸
00:05:832 (2,2) - 为什么这两个滑条尾巴搞成这样……？ 正常画吧
00:44:832 (11) - 加NC保持规律
00:50:165 (1) - 去掉NC然后在00:52:165 (5) - 这里加NC
00:56:164 (2,3,4) - 这里节奏不太对劲吧 00:56:998 (4) - 这个滑条不管是人声还是鼓都没压到 建议节奏改成这样，如果你一定要在00:56:665 (3) - 这里起滑条跟那个鼓的话那就把00:56:998 (4) - 换成在红线00:57:165 - 的一个circle或者1/4吧
00:57:498 (1) - 这个没什么必要NC 最好去掉
00:58:998 (4) - 这个滑条我也不太明白是跟的什么 我觉得应该和00:58:832 (3) - 换个顺序 滑条从白线上起然后circle补在00:59:332 - 跟vocal吧
01:01:165 (2) - 这个往右边挪一些吧 感觉01:00:665 (1,2,3) - 这里跳有点大而且主要是01:01:165 (2) - 这个地方并不适合跳啊
01:02:498 (6,7) - 感觉7这个跳又大又不自然，能不能改到上面去或者是怎么样
01:06:165 (8) - 加NC保持规律
01:10:832 (6,7) - 这里音效有点问题吧 应该没有这么多个normal sample

Kashima's Insane
00:25:498 (7) - 怎么说呢 你要顺时针转圈转多久啊……一直到00:32:165 (3) - 转了两个小节都不止 虽然不能说是问题但是感觉很无语 在比如00:28:832 (1) - 这种重音的地方稍微转换一下也好吧 仅供参考
00:37:998 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这我觉得有点overmap了 00:38:248 (7) - 这里没有音吧 建议00:38:164 (6,7,8) - 换成一个1/4滑条
00:45:499 (3) - 这里又开始了 连着转了快三个小节的逆时针一直到00:54:165 (5) - 考虑在00:50:165 (1) - 这种地方转换一下flow好吗
01:04:165 (3,7) - 叠好？01:04:832 (5,8) - 那里叠了这里又不叠就怪怪的

Expert
00:19:498 (3,4,5) - 不是很懂这是什么白线三连 并没有什么音可以跟的感觉 建议把00:19:582 (4) - 去掉
00:33:165 (6) - 这里倒是可以用1/8如果你想的话
00:41:498 (11,12) - 这blanket感觉好歪
00:59:498 (6,7,8) - 这又是什么白线三连 把00:59:582 (7) - 去掉然后跳一跳多好
01:04:165 (4,5,6,7) - 感觉音乐这地方不是特别适合做这么跳 建议把01:04:165 (4,5) - 换成一个滑条和前面00:58:832 (3) - 节奏保持一致
其他都还好吧

这个低难度我感觉有点保不动;w; 怎么办
Vert
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Topic Starter
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Zero__wind wrote:

不好意思来晚了

General
sliderslide消音吧 太吵了尤其是开头结尾的段落 这个加了
鼓音效的用法我就不予置评了感觉也没怎么跟着曲子走基本上即兴发挥了 soft whistle用得太少了感觉比较残念啊 特别是开头部分一直到00:36:832 (1) - 感觉多加一些soft whistle跟吉他会很好听的 其实音效这种东西我也不是很懂，瞎鸡巴弄吧233

Normal
00:20:165 (5,1) - 最低难度 Normal 还放跳的吗 不要吧 保持1x
00:23:165 (4,1) - 啊后面还有好多啊……这个diff不要跳啊 有点简单了就把ds涨到1.1x
这diff真的飞不动……最好在kiai再加一些简单的1/4节奏类似01:19:165 (5,6) - 这种的 但是不要跳 不要跳 不要跳……可，全都改了，改成1x了


Expert
00:19:498 (3,4,5) - 不是很懂这是什么白线三连 并没有什么音可以跟的感觉 建议把00:19:582 (4) - 去掉 好
00:33:165 (6) - 这里倒是可以用1/8如果你想的话 还是算了，如果是kiai可能会改
00:41:498 (11,12) - 这blanket感觉好歪 啊右偏了一格
00:59:498 (6,7,8) - 这又是什么白线三连 把00:59:582 (7) - 去掉然后跳一跳多好 ok，这块整体改了一下
01:04:165 (4,5,6,7) - 感觉音乐这地方不是特别适合做这么跳 建议把01:04:165 (4,5) - 换成一个滑条和前面00:58:832 (3) - 节奏保持一致
其他都还好吧 好改了

这个低难度我感觉有点保不动;w; 怎么办 没关系，我已经把间距统一回去了233
感谢01大师
Kashima
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Kashima

Zero__wind wrote:

Kashima's Insane
00:25:498 (7) - 怎么说呢 你要顺时针转圈转多久啊……一直到00:32:165 (3) - 转了两个小节都不止 虽然不能说是问题但是感觉很无语 在比如00:28:832 (1) - 这种重音的地方稍微转换一下也好吧 仅供参考对flow的转换并不是很熟悉 虽然知道要改flow但是不知道怎么改的时候就只会塞转圈圈了T T不过姑且试着改了改..
00:37:998 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这我觉得有点overmap了 00:38:248 (7) - 这里没有音吧 建议00:38:164 (6,7,8) - 换成一个1/4滑条好的
00:45:499 (3) - 这里又开始了 连着转了快三个小节的逆时针一直到00:54:165 (5) - 考虑在00:50:165 (1) - 这种地方转换一下flow好吗
01:04:165 (3,7) - 叠好？01:04:832 (5,8) - 那里叠了这里又不叠就怪怪的ok

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Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib

Zero__wind wrote:

不好意思来晚了

Zweib's Hard
OD6不然spread爆炸
00:05:832 (2,2) - 为什么这两个滑条尾巴搞成这样……？ 正常画吧
00:44:832 (11) - 加NC保持规律
00:50:165 (1) - 去掉NC然后在00:52:165 (5) - 这里加NC
00:56:164 (2,3,4) - 这里节奏不太对劲吧 00:56:998 (4) - 这个滑条不管是人声还是鼓都没压到 建议节奏改成这样，如果你一定要在00:56:665 (3) - 这里起滑条跟那个鼓的话那就把00:56:998 (4) - 换成在红线00:57:165 - 的一个circle或者1/4吧
00:57:498 (1) - 这个没什么必要NC 最好去掉
00:58:998 (4) - 这个滑条我也不太明白是跟的什么 我觉得应该和00:58:832 (3) - 换个顺序 滑条从白线上起然后circle补在00:59:332 - 跟vocal吧 这边vocal比较糊，跟后面consist的话这样下节奏觉得表现的也可以
01:01:165 (2) - 这个往右边挪一些吧 感觉01:00:665 (1,2,3) - 这里跳有点大而且主要是01:01:165 (2) - 这个地方并不适合跳啊
01:02:498 (6,7) - 感觉7这个跳又大又不自然，能不能改到上面去或者是怎么样
01:06:165 (8) - 加NC保持规律
01:10:832 (6,7) - 这里音效有点问题吧 应该没有这么多个normal sample 直接copy学妹的音效
其他都fix

code
osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58165
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Freesia
TitleUnicode:Freesia
Artist:(K)NoW_NAME
ArtistUnicode:(K)NoW_NAME
Creator:Vert
Version:Zweib's Hard
Source:サクラクエスト
Tags:Sakura Quest P.A.WORKS Kashima Zweib
BeatmapID:1267599
BeatmapSetID:599556

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.8
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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236,276,69998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,212,70165,2,0,P|198:191|217:223,1,119.999996337891,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
416,120,70832,2,0,P|432:88|432:48,1,59.9999981689454,8|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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349,75,71998,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,208,72164,2,0,P|232:272|236:340,1,119.999996337891,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,72664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,220,72831,2,0,P|384:184|432:220,1,119.999996337891,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,214,73331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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44,167,74498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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194,108,75998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,76165,2,0,P|216:304|200:340,1,59.9999981689454,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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88,105,76832,5,2,1:2:0:0:
64,331,77165,1,2,1:2:0:0:
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Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
recheck, no kd

Normal
00:20:832 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个对称绝对是摆歪了不然不可能上面00:20:832 (1,2,3) - 这里是1.0x下面00:22:165 (3,4,1) - 这有一半就变成1.08x了 重新摆一下
00:25:498 (5,1) - 这个1.1x的也调一下
00:32:832 (3,1) - 这有点难看 试试把00:34:165 (1) - 像这样绕00:33:832 (4) - 逆时针20° 然后后面2就可以叠在00:32:832 (3) - 尾巴上了 后面的00:36:165 (3) - 要相应调一点间距不过并不麻烦
00:41:832 (4,1) - 这个1.1x也调一下
00:42:165 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是
好现在进入kiai了我们来说一下哪里可以加1/4
00:57:498 (3) - 首先是这个地方好吧虽然这里还没进kiai不过这个地方绝对是整张图里最值得强调的一个点 换成两个1/4滑条不管跟人声还是跟鼓都是非常合适的
00:59:498 (3) - 这里可以换成一个1/4的折返 同样后面01:04:832 (3) - 一起
01:10:832 (3) - 这个地方强烈建议换成两个1/4滑条 人声和鼓都是有的而且也可以算是歌曲最高潮的部分了
01:15:498 (3) - 这里其实也比较适合换成1/4折返不过可能有点难改了
稍微能加这么一些东西的话 怎么说呢 心里会踏实很多

还有其他可以托管一下的东西
Zweib's Hard
00:57:498 (1) - 这个NC没去掉

Kashima's Insane
00:36:832 (1) - 头上丢了一个normal clap这个很重要必须加

美丽
改好了起飞
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Zero__wind wrote:

recheck, no kd

Normal
00:20:832 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个对称绝对是摆歪了不然不可能上面00:20:832 (1,2,3) - 这里是1.0x下面00:22:165 (3,4,1) - 这有一半就变成1.08x了 重新摆一下
00:25:498 (5,1) - 这个1.1x的也调一下
00:32:832 (3,1) - 这有点难看 试试把00:34:165 (1) - 像这样绕00:33:832 (4) - 逆时针20° 然后后面2就可以叠在00:32:832 (3) - 尾巴上了 后面的00:36:165 (3) - 要相应调一点间距不过并不麻烦
00:41:832 (4,1) - 这个1.1x也调一下
00:42:165 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是
好现在进入kiai了我们来说一下哪里可以加1/4
00:57:498 (3) - 首先是这个地方好吧虽然这里还没进kiai不过这个地方绝对是整张图里最值得强调的一个点 换成两个1/4滑条不管跟人声还是跟鼓都是非常合适的
00:59:498 (3) - 这里可以换成一个1/4的折返 同样后面01:04:832 (3) - 一起
01:10:832 (3) - 这个地方强烈建议换成两个1/4滑条 人声和鼓都是有的而且也可以算是歌曲最高潮的部分了
01:15:498 (3) - 这里其实也比较适合换成1/4折返不过可能有点难改了
稍微能加这么一些东西的话 怎么说呢 心里会踏实很多

还有其他可以托管一下的东西
Zweib's Hard
00:57:498 (1) - 这个NC没去掉

Kashima's Insane
00:36:832 (1) - 头上丢了一个normal clap这个很重要必须加

美丽
改好了起飞
十分感谢XD
all fixed and updated
Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
We added a bit more 1/4 stuff in Normal and polished the hitsounds for all diffs via irc
I'm fine with the mapset now
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