Just a few general pointers here.

BPM: 135.00
Offset: 9,556

Please get a higher-quality background. Find something around 800x600, max 1024x768.

You have two OSB files in the folder (Probably from renaming the artist) delete both and do a full resubmission unless you plan on doing a storyboard for this map set.

Check my user page for some general tips on mapping. Try to make sure your notes go with the music and have a distance from each other that corresponds with the amount of time between the notes.

You should trim the size of your MP3 to avoid wasted space if you don't plan on mapping all the way through. Though just listening to the song, the MP3 is kind of low quality. It's over-boosted for volume and peaks too much. If you can, try and find a new MP3 and I can crop and retime it for you if you wish.

Call me back for a recheck when you get some things going on this and I'll see what I can do to help you out!

Sounds like you got a new MP3, so there's a new offset: 5,860

Don't forget to resnap all your notes and stuff and double check everything so it's the same.

I'd recommend that you change the beat snap divisor (bar in the upper right corner) to 1/4 or 1/2 as you're mapping the easier difficulties. The tight snap tends to make things slightly off at times.

On your hard, 3.0 slider velocity seems a bit much - especially for how you have things mapped so far. I'd tone it down to something around 1.8-2.0. Also set your beat snap divisor to 1/4 here. 1/6 is off for the rhythm of this song.

Fix things up again after the offset change and call me back again and I can get into the mapping a bit more. :D

Don't kudosu this please.

thx for the new offset suggestion . Now it fell much better and sync. ^^

Hey. (I will make an Insane diff)...Let me mod the other 2 diff that you have.

- Source should be "Kage no Stigma" not anime
- Title should be capitalized "Blast of Wind"
- Go into "Audio" in the "Song Setup" and put "Sample Volume" all the way up
- Make sure to use Distance Snap throughout your maps!

[Normal]
^ Change this to Easy
Circle Size: -1 (use large circles for easy)
HP Drain Rate: -4
Approach Rate: -3
Overall Difficulty: -3
Use 1/2 Beat Snap Divsor and fix all of the notes up so that they sound better...Alot of work to do on your maps =P

[Hard]
Circle Size: -1
This Diff is horrid...Lol...Sliders look ugly, and most of the notes dont go on beat or even the lyrics.
(Open AIMOD in the "File" drop-down menu and see all your spacing,snapping, and other errors that need to be fixed)

With that said...I will make a diff...Give me some time...But I'd like to see you fix up your map alot...If you need anything (and if im online in-game) feel free to chat with me about anything. =D

OFF YOU GO! =3

thank for letting me now my map is off beat. it sound fine for normal speed for me.
i know that the slider on hard is well very horrible. i will do full reedit on it again(once i get my map as accurate as possible with rythm)
thanks ^^(will kudosu you after i re post my map)
i felt that 1/2 snap divisor is a little off the tune in some place so i will stick on 1/4 divisor .

levesterz wrote:

thank for letting me now my map is off beat. it sound fine for normal speed for me.
i know that the slider on hard is well very horrible. i will do full reedit on it again(once i get my map as accurate as possible with rythm)
thanks ^^(will kudosu you after i re post my map)
i felt that 1/2 snap divisor is a little off the tune in some place so i will stick on 1/4 divisor .

The problem is, just glancing at the easy, you end up with a lot of slightly off-beat sliders.
Just look at your first two on easy.

Compare the rhythm you have now, then set up your sliders' rhythm to be like this:



You're obviously going with the lyrics here, so try to line up the beats with those lyrics. Maybe you'll want to lower the volume of the hit sounds a little bit so you can hear the song against the beats you place easier. To do this, hit F6 to open up the timing section window.


Under the Audio tab, there's a volume bar. Adjust that so the sounds aren't so loud compared to the song.

Also, your choice of Kiai is a little odd to me. Usually it's used for the chorus of the song (00:39:637 - to 01:18:304 - would be a good choice)

Try combing through your difficulties and get beats lined up with what you're following in the music. Please be very thorough. If you still have problems hearing these, let me know and I can point out a bunch of them for you.

Peeking at hard mode now...

Go to the timing menu at the top next to Design and Web, click on Resnap all notes. Comb through your difficulty to make sure everything is on the correct rhythm like you did in easy.

00:07:526 (3) - Sliders where the beginning and end is ambiguous are not rankable as the player won't know which direction to start. Set up them so you can tell which is the start and the end.

00:24:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'd refrain from making up your own rhythms in the middle of nothing in the song. It's quite unintuitive and tends to break out of the feel of the song. As tempting as it is to do this to make the map "harder", try to aim for "fun" instead. :3

Keep working at it!

i normally turn off the audio sound when editing but turn up the volume when i repost my map (if i remember to turn up) the 0.24 part is piano part if heard carefully but i guess i will omit it out .

thanks and i will remember making it fun not harder ( its very tempting to make it harder on hard map )

[Easy]
Reduce volume,it's too rough for my ears.
Also,add more hitsounds,not just few finishes which don't perfectly fit,moreover.
Reduce Slider tick for 2 ticks,it's too much,sounds annoying.
Don't ever use 2x BPM Timing Sections and easy,remove them.
My suggestion is to remap it,cause it's messed at the moment.The rest of notes are placed at blue tick,and almost everything is out(I wonder if it's because of chaged BPM/Offset and you haven't snapped your notes.)
As I see you're following lyrics mostly.
Use only white and red ticks for that(I'm pretty sure using blue isn't neccesary).
Don't overfill your map with notes,better use more sliders to fill the lyrics and use Distance Snap,cause atm spacing makes no sense to me sometimes.
02:20:415 (x) - This break is too long,you mustn't map the whole song,especially in Easy,so you may finish your map here.

[Hard]
Oh wow,so tiny objects.
Again,the rest of notes are in blue ticks,it's not right,you should use white and red mostly.
Nothing to mod at the moment,sorry.

You need to work much harder on it,use simple rhyms in Easy,placing notes on white ticks mostly.
Hard is raw as well.
Use those tips and suggestions from modders and try to remap it.

Good luck to you~

i did resnap a few time before start when setting the new bmp and offset (my comp crash a few time too along the way) and also resnap it before i repost back. i also rechecking for a few time and it sound good for me .its ok if its nothing too mod( at the moment) cause i nid to make sure my note is really going with the lyrics here( before adding hit sound on it) and sometime i miss some off beat one. i guess i will remap the whole dificulty once again ^^.
thank you for the suggestion and the star

hitsound seems to be too loud.

[hard]
0:19:859 (4) up 1 grid
0:46:526 (4) up 1 grid
0:52:971 (1) down 1 or 2 grid
0:54:748 (1) right 1 grid
1:00:082 (1,2,3,4) try to make a stright line?
1:04:304 (3) left 1 grid?
1:07:637 (3) 1/4 beat backward
1:40:082 (2,3,4,5,6) unevne spacing
2:24:082 (2,3,4) spacing not enough? though fine for me~
2:27:637 (3) right 1 grid or 2
2:29:637 (4) right 1 grid

The spacing is not so consistent (spacing multiple varying from 0.45x to 0.55x), acceptable for me but you can still try to resnap some notes.

That's somehow old style but it's nice <3
star~

fix and thanks for the star ^^

Easy:
Don't put hiticircles and sliders randomly, try to put some style to it.
00:18:304 to 00:39:415: Hitnormal sounds bad here. Put hitsoft?
00:38:748: Remove the slider (1) and place a new one when the KIAI starts or move the KIAI timing to 00:38:748.
00:53:859: Put another slider?

Hard:
Don't put hiticircles and sliders randomly, try to put some style to it.
00:18:304: Hitnormal sounds bad here. Put hitsoft?
00:38:748: (1,2,) are useless here. Remove them.
01:15:193: Remove (5) slider and start the spinner here.

If you're not going to map the rest, then cut the mp3.

Easy
01:13:971 Move this to 01:14:082
01:14:415 Move this to 01:14:304
01:14:748 Move this to 01:14:637
Turn Distance snap on and redo the map's spacing.

Hard
00:02:526 Move this to 00:02:304
00:30:637 Move this to 00:30:526
00:44:193 Move this to 00:44:082
01:04:082 Move this to 01:03:971
01:06:193 Move this to 01:06:082
02:24:082 Move this to 2:23:971
02:30:082 Move this to 02:29:859
02:30:748 Move this to 02:30:526
02:44:971 Move this to 02:44:748
03:08:859 Move this to 03:08:748
03:10:304 Move this to 03:10:193
03:34:917 Move this to 03:35:082
03:45:859 Move this to 03:45:748
03:47:637 Move this to 03:47:526
03:49:415 Move this to 03:49:304
Turn Distance snap on and redo the map's spacing.

Good luck!

fix ^^

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉHihi
[Hard]
I think as follows:
00:07:748 (1) - start at 00:07:637 - better. [end at 00:08:971 or 00:09:193]
00:30:637 (4) - on 00:30:526 or 00:30:748
00:49:304 (1) - o.O
01:22:304 (1) - end at 01:22:971
01:25:859 (5) - ^01:26:748

fix and thanks for the star

Do you really plan on having the easy that short?

Feels kind of cheap, to me.

Edit: Ah, kk. Just assumed since it was in Pending that it's done. You should move this back to WIP forums then. :P

But anyway:

[Easy]
This is looking a lot better than before: good job!
Now then:
I really think slider tick rate 2 is too much. At least lower it to 1 (F3 menu).
00:21:415 (1,2) - In easies, I really recommend that you avoid faster rhythms like this and only used them very sparingly since it may be a bit harder to figure out for newer players. Try using a simpler rhythm, such as this?

00:22:971 (1) - This spinner feels really weird for this part of the song. Another thing is that you allow so little time for the player to recover from the spinner until the next note. For a softer song like this beginning part, I'd recommend you give around 3-4 beats (white ticks) for recovery time.
00:25:859 (1,2) - These aren't really going with anything - move them forward to the red ticks.
00:28:748 (1) - This sounds a lot better like this:

00:32:082 (1) - I'd feel that a better emphasis with the song
00:39:637 - Starting kiai here would feel much better.
00:39:415 (2) - Extend this slider to the white tick. Though the note right after the spinner is really soon.
There's still a lot of weird rhythm stuff going on here. Try combing through this difficulty and see what you can do to may simplify some rhythms, and make spinner recovery times better (and maybe make more intuitive feeling spinner placements)
And please map more than just one minute. >_>

[Hard]
There are a lot of prettiness issues going on in here. I'm mostly talking about the overlaps that you create with sliders.
00:03:860 (2,3) - Like these, etc.
00:25:415 (1) - another thing you may want to watch out for is pushing your sliders way into the HP bar like this. It's still rankable, but it really mars polish from the map.
I'd really like to see a higher distance snap than .5. Causes a lot of the overlap issues as well. It'll give you better opportunities to make better looking combo sets too.
00:29:859 (2,3,4) - It's strange that you follow the lyrics up until the very last note, then you decide to not play then end of the vocal phrase and switch instead to the strings in the background. Try to follow through with the instrument that you're mapping to with each phrase. This will lead to more intuitive-playing maps.

Anyway, just more general commentary on the map design. Things are looking a lot better though: keep it up!

i am not planning for making my easy that short( post it that short because of some error occur whille i am editing the easy map causing osu client to crash everytime and did not save my data. but since i i figured out what problem it was so i continue mapping it again).

thanks for all the suggeston

Mai mod


Hard :


Approach Rate +2

00:02:526 (1) - The slider begins in 00:02:304
00:03:415 (1) - Delete new combo
00:03:637 (3) - Add a note
00:03:860 (4) - Slider begins in 00:03:860 and finish in 00:05:637
00:14:304 (4) - Add a note?
00:14:526 (5) - ^
00:30:193 (3) - The slider finish in 00:30:526
00:32:526 (3) - The slider finish in 00:32:971
00:34:082 (6) - The slider finish in 00:34:971
01:07:859 (1) - The spinner finish in 01:09:859 (?)
01:15:193 (1) - The spinner finish in 01:18:304
01:24:082 (6) - The slider finish in 01:24:748
01:24:971 (7) - The slider finish in 01:25:637
01:34:526 (4) - That does not match the music
01:38:082 (4) - Please, fix this slider
01:41:193 (7) - Add a note
01:44:415 (5) - Move to 01:44:526
02:03:971 (5) - Move to 02:04:082
03:15:859 (4) - The slider finish in 03:16:515
03:22:971 (4) - The slider finish in 03:23:637
03:42:526 (2) - Replaces this slider whit a note or a spinner orz...
03:45:193 (1) - Add a note
03:53:415 (1) - Delete the new combo and the repetition of the slider is in 03:54:082, no in 03:53:971


Easy :

So short?

00:28:748 (1) - The slider begins in 00:28:971
00:30:304 (3) - The slider begins in 00:30:082
00:32:082 (1) - The slider finish in 00:34:304
00:34:304 (2) - Delete the note
00:35:859 (1) - Delete new combo and the slider finish in 00:36:526
00:39:193 (1) - The slider begins in 00:39:637
00:43:859 (2) - The slider finish in 00:44:526
01:15:193 (1) - The spinner finish in 01:18:748
01:38:193 (3) - Move this to 01:38:304
01:39:859 (1) - The slider begins in 01:40:082 and finish in 01:40:971
01:40:971 (2) - Delete the note
01:41:859 (3) - Add a note
02:08:526 (3) - ^

~~

Verdisphena wrote:

Mai mod


Hard :


01:41:193 (7) - Add a notedin add this one because it does not go with lyric from what i heard
01:44:415 (5) - Move to 01:44:526i removed the note because
02:03:971 (5) - Move to 02:04:082same reason as above


Easy :

So short?i added a few note now (my client keep crashing when editing on this map especially) and yup it short for beginner to try to get use of it( will add more note if any mooder still feel short)


~~

all fix and thank you ^^

Hi!

General:
Combo colours:Delete the third colour.The other 4 match perfect with the background!
No Kiai in other choruses?

Easy:
00:22:971 (3) - Too far from (2) away.
00:26:526 (3) - 1 grid down
00:29:859 (2) - Too far from (1) away
00:32:082 (4) - new combo
00:40:971 (2) - To far from (1) away
00:46:526 (2) - ^
I stopped looking here for these spacong issue.Make sure you check the whole map with Distance Snap

Hard:
Timin Section 2:49:77 is not needed.You didn't mapped that part..
01:02:526 (4) - Make it a slider like the (4) before..
01:37:637 (3) - align with two
01:41:415 (7) - new combo



Sry no star atm.This map still needs alot of work.You have some good ideas but the implementation is bad..
I'll take another look at it when it's modded several times and you over worked the map!

fixed and thank you ^^

[General]
you cant add hitsound in all slider , you must add hitsound in begin or end .when you are skillfull , then you can do if you want
you must change the web's tittle , “Saori Kiuji - blast of wind (kaze no stigma opening)" to "Saori Kiuji -Blast of Wind"
KIAI's volume are too silent

[Hard]
OD+1

00:19:415 (3) - remove clap
00:19:859 (4) - add clap in the end
00:20:526 (x) - add note and whistle
00:24:304 (x) - add note
00:28:082 (8) - remove finish
00:30:748 (x) - add note
00:31:415 (x) - add note
00:31:637 (x) - ^
00:32:304 (2) - remove clap
00:32:526 (3) - add finsh
00:33:859 (5) - remove clap
00:35:193 (x) - add note
00:50:971 (1) - end at 00:52:526
01:30:082 (3) - remove clap
01:35:415 (x) - add note
01:35:859 (x) - ^
01:37:637 (3) - remove clap
01:41:415 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
HP+1or2 OD+2or3 AR+1

00:30:304 (3) - end in the white tick
00:32:082 (4) - New combo
00:35:859 (1) - dont use clap at all slider
00:35:859 (1) - end in the white tick
02:45:193 (4) - spacing
02:12:637 (1) - move it to 02:12:971 and end in the white tick
02:21:748 (3) - move it to 02:21:637
02:27:415 (2) - end at 02:28:082
02:29:193 (2) - end at 02:29:859
02:30:637 (1) - move it to red tick

eveless wrote:

[Hard]
OD+1

00:20:526 (x) - add note and whistlei did not add not here cuz i feel it does not nid to put note here
00:24:304 (x) - add note ^
00:35:193 (x) - add note ^
[Normal]nid confirmation from more modder before i chg it to normal
HP+1or2 OD+2or3 AR+1

fixed. thanks for the sugesstion and tips and star ^^

[Easy]
00:52:971 (1) - add a hitclap?
01:07:859 (1) - thses spinner move to 01:08:082 and 01:09:850 the end
02:06:693 (1) - this green line move to 02:06:748
02:12:637 (1) - this silder move to 02:12:526
02:13:859 (2) - add a note and add a hitfinish
02:20:971 (1,2,3) - remove these circle become a cycle silder
02:24:526 (1) - thses spinner move to 02:24:748 and 02:26:304 the end
02:35:193 (1,2,3) - remove these circle become a cycle silder
03:20:748 this green line move to 03:20:961

[Hard]
00:36:748 (4) - grid down 1
03:42:304 (1) - remove this note

all fixed. thanks for the star

May I make taiko diff?

samiljul wrote:

:)

May I make taiko diff?

sure then i move this to wip then ^^ and good luck

Hmm...

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix this
Red = you MUST fix this

[General]
* Remove kaze no stigma blast of wind from Tags since it's already being used for the Source and Song Title.
* Please make a Normal.

[Easy]
* 00:21:637 (1,2) - These threw me off... I think this would sound better if (1) was on 00:21:415 or 00:21:859 then you made (2)'s slider end at 00:22:526 instead.
* 00:26:526 (3,4) - Fix the spacing; (3) is close to (2).
* 00:39:193 (1) - I dunno... Shouldn't this end at 00:40:526 instead? (If you do decide to do this, fix the spacing for (2) and (3) afterwards.)
* 00:56:526 (1) - Sounds weird when it hits the reverse arrow; maybe make this into a non-repeating slider instead?
* 01:00:748 (2) - This would sound better if you ended this on 01:01:415 then...
* 01:02:082 (3) - Move this back to 01:01:859 and extend the slider so that the reverse arrow lands on a red tick.
* 01:03:637 (1,2) - A bit confusing to hit (2); make these into a slider instead.
* 01:05:193 (1,2) - Too confusing; make these into a slider instead.
* 01:06:971 (1,2) - Too confusing; make these into a slider instead.
* 01:14:082 (1,2) - Too confusing; make these into a slider instead OR move (1) to a white tick.
* 01:29:415 (1) - Make this end on a white tick?
* 01:38:304 (3,4) - Make these into a slider instead?
* 01:43:637 (1,2) - Get rid of (2) then make (1) end where (2) used to be?
* 01:52:304 (3,4) - Make these into a slider instead?
* 01:54:082 (1) - Make this end on a white tick; it's currently off-beat.
* 01:55:526 (2) - It's kinda a bad idea to use 1/4 notes in an Easy (although I'm not sure about if they're used in sliders/repeating sliders), so just move this to a white tick.
* 02:10:971 (2,3) - Confusing to hit...
* Why does the 2nd Kiai Time suddenly cut off? I was expecting it to be longer.
* 03:09:859 (1,2,3) - Just make these into a slider instead; like I said earlier, 1/4 notes in an Easy is a bad idea.
* 03:11:304 (1) - It's off-beat where this starts; move it to a red tick (but make sure it still ends at 03:12:304).
* 03:17:193 (2,3) - Make (2) end at 03:17:859, get rid of (3), then make a new slider starting at 03:18:304 and making it end where (3) used to be?
* 03:27:526 (1) - It's off-beat where this starts; move it to a white tick (but make sure it still ends at 03:28:304).
* Why does the final Kiai Time suddenly cut off? I was expecting it to be longer.
* 03:31:193 (1) - Too close to the previous combo
* 03:31:193 (1) - This sounds better if you extended this so that the reverse arrow lands on a red tick.
* 03:38:082 (1,2,3) - Make these into a repeating slider instead. I doubt beginners would be able to hit these easily, especially since they're stacked.
* 03:46:082 (2) - Not sure if this is a good idea to stack this underneath the previous slider...

[Hard]
* To save the trouble of me repeating it over and over again, fix the hitsound volume; I can barely hear most of these notes (It's kinda sad that I have to cut down music volume just to hear the notes ><)
* 00:36:415 (3) - Sounds better if you moved this to a white tick
* 00:49:304 (1) - Shouldn't this be on a white tick?
* 00:50:971 (1) - End on a white tick?
* 01:07:415 (3) - Shouldn't this be on a later blue tick?
* 01:27:637 (1) - Shouldn't this end on a white tick instead?
* 02:15:415 (4) - Sounds weird when it hits the reverse arrow...
* 02:17:748 (6) - Move to a white tick?
* 02:44:859 (1) - Off-beat; move this to a red tick.
* Why does the final Kiai Time suddenly cut off? I was expecting it to be longer.
* 04:02:304 (1) - Shouldn't this end at 04:04:082 (or at the very least, a white or red tick)?

No star for now, but I'll mod this again later.

all fixed. about the 2nd and 3rd Kiai time i stop i because i feel it best to stop there but anyway if got any idea which pplace suggestion that is better for Kiai time to stop i will used that . about the normal diff din think on making one because i din have any idea on how the normal shud go for this map but i will try to do it
thanks for the mod ^^

Hello There!
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Easy:
Seems alright...suggest you go back and add a few notes here and there.
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Normal:
Slow down the slider speed plz.
00:38:748 (1) - Could you bring these closer together?
00:51:415 - Could you put a spinner here that lats to 00:52:204?
01:06:971 (1) - Turn it so that the note we have to hit is facing the previous note plz
01:38:082 (3,4) - Make into 1 slider plz. But add a timing section at 01:37:859 with 0.5 BPM multiplier and add another timing section at 01:39:193 with regular BPM multiplier to make the slider go slow here.
01:55:526 (2,3) - Heard the claps x_x Use whistles?
02:20:971 (1) - Could you make it last to 02:22:971?
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Hard:
Remove the claps and replace with whistles or get a custom hitsound for the claps, they are an earsore (sorry to say, pleade don't hate me ;-;)
01:41:637 (2) - Could you make it into a slider that goes to 01:42:082 ?
03:18:526 (1) - Put a note here and pull the spinner down 1/2, end it at 03:20:082
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Well, that dos it, I liked the song and it seems you're very good at mapping, so have a star and my best wishes!

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

Hello There!helllo ^^
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Easy:
Seems alright...suggest you go back and add a few notes here and there.nope i like the easy that way.
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Hard:
Remove the claps and replace with whistles or get a custom hitsound for the claps, they are an earsore (sorry to say, pleade don't hate me ;-;)may be i will get some nice hit sound but at the meantime just bare with the clap sound( it sound much better than soft whistle sound for me)
03:18:526 (1) - Put a note here and pull the spinner down 1/2, end it at 03:20:082din add this sry
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Well, that dos it, I liked the song and it seems you're very good at mapping, so have a star and my best wishes!

thanks for the mod and star ^^

lol, Kaze no Stigma.. I've watched this anime 4 yeas before. And I love this song of course. XD

[General]

Delete the "blast of wind" in tag, since it's the title of the song.

Also remember to delete .osb thing everytime if you don't want any Storyboard

Make combo colors same in all of you difficulties.

Hitsound volume is too small for me
Suggestion:
Soft--70-80% volume (7-8 ticks) (Decrease 10% for soft finish)
Normal--60-70% volume
hmm, maybe you can use Normal for kiai, and soft for rest of the song?

Also your mp3 file is 320Kbps...and according to the rule it has to be converted to 192Kbps..

Check AI mod to see if there's any spacing you must fix.

[Easy]
I recommend you to use distance snap in Easy diff. Spacing like 00:21:859 (1,2) just feel weird.
Also I feel the mapset is weird...
Need more hitsound..but since your volume is too low, I can't give any suggestion for now..

01:54:304 (1) - Extended 1/4 beat
03:09:859 (1) - ^
03:31:193 (1) - Shorten the slider? The roll back doesn't fit the rhythm

I strongly suggest you to play more songs in osu mode before mapping this.
Or maybe you can just look at other mapper's diff.


[Normal]
Hmm, circle size-1?
00:22:304 (2,3) - What's going on here?
00:45:859 (4) - New combo
01:54:082 (1,2,3,4) - hmm, I don't think it's a good idea to put notes on blue tick, also I just feel bad about long sliders in your map.
Make something like this?

Sigh, though there aren't many errors, I can't enjoy the mapset...


[Hard]
hmm, I feel this is a lot better than other two diffs
just some general ideas:
This diff feels more like Normal except the circle size...
You could try to map some three 1/4 beats part start from red tick
01:07:193 (2,3) - spacing

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

and it seems you're very good at mapping

Are you serious...?

Sigh, this beatmap needs more work .. or...more experience...

I din n otice i was using 320kbps mp3 file ( i got the tendency of thinking all downloaded mp3 file is 192 kbps) thanks for telling me that ^^.
this is my first map that i actually put my effort in so still learning how to map ^^ .
thanks for the mod .

Star First . .

Will Mod This Later . .
^^

thanks for the star ^^

Alrighty then:

[General]
Keep your kiai times the same for your own difficulties. Easy has different times compared to the others.
Remove blast of wind from tags since it's in the title.

[Easy]
00:38:748 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner. Give new players a lot of time to reorient after a spinner. You may be better off mapping through the spinner, tbh
00:40:526 (2,1) - If you can, try to avoid small overlaps like this: it tends to just look ugly to a lot of players, hehe.
00:46:748 - Kind of expected a beat here. Maybe extend the red slider before it?
00:52:971 (1) - Soon after spinner
00:57:193 (3,4) - Please don't do this: it's confusing already with the slider point facing into the next slider, plus is really messy with so many objects on the screen in that spot. I'd recommend against that kind of rhythm in an easy anyway, a normal beat at 00:57:415 - instead of a slider sounds better to me.
01:00:082 (1) - Really bad overlap here. Please rearrange.
01:01:859 (2,1) - Spacing
01:05:193 (1,1) - Spacing
01:10:526 (1) - Another soon after spinner
Anyway, comb through your difficulty for these sorts of things and see what you can find/fix up.

I'll look through the other difficulties later.
No kudosu.

I see Garven has yet to finish modding this map. Contact me via PM if you want me to mod it later.

Garven wrote:

Alrighty then:

[General]
Keep your kiai times the same for your own difficulties. Easy has different times compared to the others.
Remove blast of wind from tags since it's in the title.

[Easy]
00:38:748 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner. Give new players a lot of time to reorient after a spinner. You may be better off mapping through the spinner, tbhOkay . spinner removed .
00:40:526 (2,1) - If you can, try to avoid small overlaps like this: it tends to just look ugly to a lot of players, hehe.fixed
00:46:748 - Kind of expected a beat here. Maybe extend the red slider before it?okay. Done
00:52:971 (1) - Soon after spinnerspinner removed( replaced it with a slider)
00:57:193 (3,4) - Please don't do this: it's confusing already with the slider point facing into the next slider, plus is really messy with so many objects on the screen in that spot. I'd recommend against that kind of rhythm in an easy anyway, a normal beat at 00:57:415 - instead of a slider sounds better to me.okay. fixed( i think)
01:00:082 (1) - Really bad overlap here. Please rearrange.done
01:01:859 (2,1) - Spacingi still combing through all my diff for this problem. Thanks for tellng me^^
01:05:193 (1,1) - Spacing^
01:10:526 (1) - Another soon after spinnerspinner removed( chg to slider i think)
Anyway, comb through your difficulty for these sorts of things and see what you can find/fix up.

I'll look through the other difficulties later.
No kudosu.

thanks for the mod again ^^
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Lesjuh wrote:

I see Garven has yet to finish modding this map. Contact me via PM if you want me to mod it later.

thanks for the star ^^

[Easy]
00:26:304 (3) - Might be better as a single hit instead of a short slider like that.
00:39:637 - Start kiai here
00:45:859 (1) - Maybe adjust this so it's not overlapping the 3?
00:47:637 (1) - Remove new combo
00:54:748 (1) - ^
00:57:415 (3) - Probably better as a single hit too
01:05:193 (1) - New combo
01:12:304 (1) - ^
01:15:415 (1) - End this at 01:18:748 - End kiai here too.
01:32:526 (1) - If you could, try to avoid having notes so high in the upper-left corner so you don't have notes sticking into the HP bar. Just a cosmetic thing.
01:56:878 - Just delete this break (right click on it, then save the map)
02:06:748 - Start kiai here.
02:14:748 (1) - Remove new combo
02:21:859 - Delete break
02:24:526 - ^
02:23:637 (1) - Extend this to 02:24:526 -
02:28:748 (1,2,1) - Maybe rearrange so there isn't so much stuff overlapping each other?
02:30:526 (1) - Hrm, instead of this repeating slider, maybe a slider from 02:30:526 - to 02:31:193 - and a single hit at 02:31:637 - ? Or instead of a single hit, do a long slider.. or follow some of the background music. Fill in that blank spot.
02:42:971 (1) - Remove new combo
02:44:748 (2) - New combo
03:06:304 (1) - Might be better ending at 03:07:193 - to go with the band coming in
03:25:637 (1) - Remove new combo
03:29:415 (1) - ^
03:32:304 - Remove break - map something in here. Strictly vocals on this song leads to some huge gaps, as you've seen, hehe. Fill in the empty spots a bit.
03:34:526 (1) - End this at 03:35:415 -
Fill in the break after it too.
03:41:848 - ^

Anyway, the easy has come a long way - and it's playing a lot better. Good job. :D

I'll start focusing on the other difficulties later on.

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:26:304 (3) - Might be better as a single hit instead of a short slider like that.
00:39:637 - Start kiai here
00:45:859 (1) - Maybe adjust this so it's not overlapping the 3?
00:47:637 (1) - Remove new combo
00:54:748 (1) - ^
00:57:415 (3) - Probably better as a single hit too
01:05:193 (1) - New combo
01:12:304 (1) - ^
01:15:415 (1) - End this at 01:18:748 - End kiai here too.
01:32:526 (1) - If you could, try to avoid having notes so high in the upper-left corner so you don't have notes sticking into the HP bar. Just a cosmetic thing.
01:56:878 - Just delete this break (right click on it, then save the map)
02:06:748 - Start kiai here.
02:14:748 (1) - Remove new combo
02:21:859 - Delete break
02:24:526 - ^
02:23:637 (1) - Extend this to 02:24:526 -
02:28:748 (1,2,1) - Maybe rearrange so there isn't so much stuff overlapping each other?
02:30:526 (1) - Hrm, instead of this repeating slider, maybe a slider from 02:30:526 - to 02:31:193 - and a single hit at 02:31:637 - ? Or instead of a single hit, do a long slider.. or follow some of the background music. Fill in that blank spot.i wonder if i follow the background music suddenlly ,will i confuse some beginner? Anyway added one or two note .
02:42:971 (1) - Remove new combo
02:44:748 (2) - New combo
03:06:304 (1) - Might be better ending at 03:07:193 - to go with the band coming in
03:25:637 (1) - Remove new combo
03:29:415 (1) - ^
03:32:304 - Remove break - map something in here. Strictly vocals on this song leads to some huge gaps, as you've seen, hehe. Fill in the empty spots a bit.
03:34:526 (1) - End this at 03:35:415 -
Fill in the break after it too.
03:41:848 - ^

Anyway, the easy has come a long way - and it's playing a lot better. Good job. Its all thanks the guidance from you and all the modder that mod from my map ^^

I'll start focusing on the other difficulties later on.

all fixed. thanks for the mod

yahha.

for the classmates ><?

Tonoko wrote:

:oops: yahha.

for the classmates ><?

thanks for the star ^^.(yup and i also doing this map for fun too .kinda like this song)

:3..

Download: Saori Kiuji - Blast of Wind (levesterz) [31's Taiko].osu

samiljul wrote:

:3..

thanks for the taiko diff

wtf
my map had 1/4 finish

update this

Download: Saori Kiuji - Blast of Wind (levesterz) [31's Taiko].osu

samiljul wrote:

wtf
my map had 1/4 finish

update this

ok will reupload later (my connection now very bad)
done ^^

Your offset or bpm is kinda off here. there0.98 sec early start at 0.18.304 at easy ( shud start around 0.18.402)my bad the vocal start at 0.13.87 but you put at 0.18.34its kinda obvious if listen carefully( but it follow just fine at hard on blue tick) and some place sound kinda off the vocal that you follow if play slow speed(check at hard too one example is at 0.21.415.The vocal suppose to start at 0.21.446. there are alot but i stop looking for this off beat at 1.45.00.try this (you can ignore it if you want cuz i not good at bmp anyway).
Resnap your note btw if you use this
Bpm:261 (ths is the best i can find)
Offset:861 try this one 1439 last one landed on red tick on most note you follow
as for taiko seem ok .not very good at listening through alot of beat at one time ><
Will add some if i detect anything
one more thing remove the normal custom finish pleas it sounded well i do not know how to describe it but i kinda did not like it(again its ur own choice)
First kiai sounded better if start at 0.39.484 and stop at 1.18.228
just a payment for helping me alot . so dont kudoso me
if you did not want to use the suggested bpm try using offset 1049.I will help you with the normal and easy diff if you want.and the offset i will stop rigth here and will be back to check this map again.... nyaa :3
Below is the changed bpm and offset that i suggested i used it on the easy map i just do some resnap only . Too lasy to rearrange again.try it urself. good luck (no star atm sry).

agan i will help on the normal partfirst(seem there too many unnecessary timing point there)

Download: Saori Kiuji - Blast of Wind (levesterz) [easy easy].osu

the unneccesary timing for the normal is use for my custom hit sound (i chg it from normal and soft throughout the song so it sound nice). thank you for the mod ^^. i will try and see how it goes with the offset and bpm that you suggested.

Quick mod (no kudosu for this):

Offset: 5,900

Also, leave the BPM alone at 135.00

Blazevoir wrote:

Quick mod (no kudosu for this):

Offset: 5,900

Also, leave the BPM alone at 135.00

thanks for the ofset suggestion. it sound even better ^^

IRC mod

all done except for the hit sound

much better now ^^

This is weird... When I redownloaded this map, Normal was missing...

Blazevoir wrote:

This is weird... When I redownloaded this map, Normal was missing...

sry must have been my connection problem is bad when i upload the file.anyway i reuploaded it again.
sry for the incovenience

Nope, still missing... Do a full submission.

second time full submition. so sry about this

Hi o/

General
- Delete .osb file and full submit again

Easy
-Add more hitsounds~ Some parts have none
-02:15:455 (3) - 2nd kiai time ends here

Normal
-Hits in blues ticks sound bad imo :>
-01:17:677 (1) - 1st kiai time ends here
-02:20:122 (6) - 2nd kia time ends here
-03:30:788 (5) - 3nd kia time ends here

Hard
-The repit of the sliders on blues ticks sound bad
-00:27:011 (4) -The finish sound bad >:
-01:18:344 (1) - 1st kia time ends here
-02:04:788 (1) - move to 02:04:344 ?

31's Taiko
Excellent :3

Star~

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