NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset: i got about +10 done
496*276...you need a better BG, no doubt.X
can you find a better mp3..X, tried many places and files, this was best
i don't think this song nees a kiai.X

[Sad]
wow long sliders....
Overall+1done
00:34:426 (2) - turn off distance snap and move it slightly to align with (1)'s Enddone

[Happy]
00:06:569 (2) - better to make this symmetricaldone
00:30:140 (3) - 1 grid down.done
00:42:283 (3) - 1 grid right.done
00:47:997 (4,5) - spacing. make (4) 1 grid down.done

[Delighted]
Overall+1done
00:28:712 (2,3) - tiny spacing problemX
00:32:462 (3,4,5) - ugly.i dont see anything wrong with it
01:13:355 (4,1) - spacing?done
01:24:069 (6) - new combo?done

[Ecstatic]
01:02:990 (9) - new combo here.done
01:13:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - crazy.done

though no big problems.... but still needs more work.

H-boy wrote:

Happy
00:57:650(x) - add a circledone

suggestion
00:01:936(x) - add a circleX
00:40:329(x) - ^x
00:40:507(x) - ^x
01:14:793(x) - ^done
00:14:972(x) - ^done

Delighted
00:43:364(7) - new combo?
00:43:722(1) - remove new combo.

suggestion
00:03:007(x) - add a circlex
00:05:864(x) - ^x
00:40:329(x) - ^done
00:40:507(x) - ^done

Ecstatic
i think you need turn down the volume at the beginning... its some loud.done

starrr

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Change all beginning offsets to 135. There's no reason to have different offsets for each difficulty, stick with one.Done~

Don't forget to resnap.Done~

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Add Touhou to Source, and delete "touhou project" from Tags. done
- Maybe you'd like to add to Tags the name of the original ZUN song... I think the title is "Because Princess Inada Is Scolding Me", but I'm not so sure oxo; i think thats right only its InaBa EDIT:youre right

~Sad~
No problems here~ sweet

~Happy~
No problems here~ sweet

~Delightful~
00:00:865 - Delete this Timing Section please~ X cause i need a soft anacrusis

~Ecstatic~
00:00:849 - Delete this timing section please~ X see above
00:15:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'm not so sure about this... I've tried to hit it like 10 times and the best run I had 3 x100 because of the sliders. I'd say to continue the stream and delete the sliders... :/ it matches the background... waht if i make the sliders shorter? (as in 0.5 speed for that point)
01:24:776 (1,2,3) - This is just too much IMO, decrease the spacing a bit? done

I'm going to kill you, this melody is going to haunt me the whole day!! xD *star* LAWL

jericho2442 wrote:

ok first off the mp3 is barely acceptable, its a 128 and a not very good one at that :/

also your vid is horrid quality and could be encoded much better for not much more mb

now onto the maps :p

on your two hardest difficultys there is 2 red timing sections while on the two easier there is only 1, this is a nonono, also there is no need for 2 timing sections on this map, sort the section out so that it works for all diffs the same



[Sad]

im bad for ugly sliders but thisone is beyond bad :/ 00:22:277 (1) - changed
01:09:777 - you need a note here or it sounds really off because of the pattern your doing before it changed
(suggestion) 01:19:420 (3) - im not keen at all on the clap at the end of this sliderchanged

some of your spinners feel too small for a easy x


[Happy]
00:27:992 (1,2) - broken spacing and plays very bad, fix spacingk
00:46:206 (1) - remove new combok
00:46:563 (2) - add new combok
00:55:135 (1) - the way the notes in the combo conflict with the combo before make this tricky to play and abit uglyx
(suggestion) 01:13:706 (4) - give it more of a deeper curve if you want this to look goodk
01:23:706 (6) - new combo because as it is your breaking your own patternk


[Delighted]
00:00:313 (1,2) - spacing is wrong, 1 is too close to 2 to fit in with the rest of the combo, thus it makes it iratating to playfixed
00:26:579 (1,2,3,4) - faaaar out of line to the pattern your making line it up with 00:23:722 (1) - and make sure the line it is creating is smoothdone
00:43:186 (7) - new combo, or make it the same as the combo after, it plays wierd it being the same combo as beforex
00:49:079 (5) - new combo is a must here, the break from playing is too long to continue with the same combo
tbh go through this map and make sure all the combos make senceeegh ok

[Ecstatic]

first off, if this is meant to be a insane map sort out the expert criteria what the aimod shows up, if its meant to be expert then ignore this comment
Expert criteria: 42 spacing infringements is greater than 40. not true, most of my spacing is used with distance snap on.
01:24:866 Expert criteria: Two hitobjects are too far apart (reduce by ~5%). 01:25:044 Expert criteria: Two hitobjects are too far apart (reduce by ~6%).its an ending jump, its not THAT bad
00:15:848 Expert criteria: A stream exists with 9 objects 46ms apart (less than 65ms). meh, there can still be a few expert criteria in an insane map... plus its only beta stages

00:22:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i REALLY dont like this section and it also hold no relevance to the song at all. that part by the song is created by a combo of white and blue ticks not white and red, i guess it can be classed as a pattern so this dont really need fixing but to me this does not suit at all X im going with the low offbeat sounds

00:30:848 (5) - new combodone
00:38:706 (6) - new combo donedone
00:39:242 (1) - no new combodone
00:39:242 - i dont agree with using normal timing sections just for a note slow down. if 0x5 aint slow enough then i say rethink your pattern X
00:48:705 (13) - i dont like this note at all and it plays better without it i like it
00:54:419 (13) - same here i like it
01:22:990 (13) - new combo done
___________________________

tbh in my eyes theres still ALOT of work to do on these maps yet

anyway will star after and if you fix the stuff i really think need fixing (like the timing sections and spacing problems)

JarJarJacob wrote:

BPM: 168.000
Offset: 1,845

Don't forget to adjust all timing sections!

NachoPiggy wrote:

Pretty nice and fun mapset

[Sad]
You should capitalize the T in Touhou on this diff k

[Happy]
You should capitalize the T in Touhou on this diff too k

[Delighted]
01:03:630 (6) - This would look nicer with a new combo imho, but your call k

[Ecstatic]
01:17:731 (8) - Move this a bit upper left and make 01:17:910 (9) - aligned with it like this k
01:18:267 (10) - Make this a new combo and remove the new combo of 01:18:445 (1)? X

~star

saymun wrote:

heres a mega nazi and useless mod lol

[Sad]
00:03:987 (2) - align to x-axis?k
00:04:702 (3) - flip of (1)?k
00:06:845 (4) - flip of (2)?k

[Happy]
00:13:273 (3) - 1 grid downk
00:13:987 (4) - 2 grid downk
00:14:701 (1) - flip of the blue (1)?k

[Delighted]
00:23:987 (1) - no new combo?k
00:36:487 (6) - you missed a finish here? (in my opinion this section is too loud, get rid of the finishes with the claps?)k
00:44:701 (4) - 1 grid rightk
00:45:237 (5) - 1 grid downk
00:46:130 (8) - ^k
00:50:773 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -

SPOILER

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k
01:00:773 (5) - 1 grid upk
01:04:344 (3) - 1 grid up, rightk

[Ecstatic]
00:01:844 (4) - 1 grid rightk
00:23:273 (1,2,3,4) -

SPOILER

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k
00:36:665 (5,6) - spacingk
00:43:626 (9) - 1 grid upk
01:05:946 (3,4,5,6) - placement looks weirdk
01:24:874 (2,3,4) - the 2..fixed (c-c-c-COMBOBREAKER)

JInxyjem wrote:

Move offset to 1,487 so the notes are on the white ticks. Not that important and won't vastly affect anything, but still. i moved it to the white tick BEFORE that one, cause i need a soft anacrusis in the last two diffs

[Delighted]
01:04:701 (4,5) - Okay, the end of 4 sounds pretty bad here. I understand its a difficulty thing, but this... just sounds bad. i dont think so

[Ecstatic]
00:16:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Have you actually seen this with stacks on? Its just plain horrible. the start is still ok, but the slider part is BAD. I mean, not only the stacks, but why is it even on 1/8!? If you really want this crap on 1/8, make it like a deathstream:

Note that I don't even know if this damn thing is rankable. well first of all, ive fixed the stacking. Second, im keeping 1/8s cause i like them... also, theres plenty of songs with 1/8 slider only deathstreams (such as marisa wa taihen bla bla cbftoremembertitle ikimashita)

Starred on account of the first 3 difficulties.

YGOkid8 wrote:

not good using marisa as an example. Note that that was a 2007 map? That was before all these strict(?) rules were implemented, because there was less need back then.

Actually, it's not good to use any old map as an example. They're old. And some of the above stuff.

braian5234 wrote:

8-)

adron zhero wrote:

Mod 4 Mod:
[]Suggestion...
[*]You can change.
[>>]Change!

Ecstatic:
*08:808 (6) This still bugs me....fixed
>>17:380 (7) Spacing fixed
>>Try to remove some "Finish" hitsounds, they are kinda annoying in all red ticks but the red ticks are actually white ticks, i have the main timing section starting on an anacrusis.

Other diffs:
Hmm, fine.

Naice.

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~

General
- BG must be 1024x768 or 800x600 also your current one, doesn't fit with the song ... Actually it does fit. this is a screenshot from Touhou Kinema Kan, which this song is from. Also, it doesnt HAVE to be those sizes
- Delete osb file and full sub ok

Sad;
- 00:10:415 (2,1) >> remove whistle from the body of (2) add it just on the start and end, align (1) with the end of (2) removed whistle altogether, i dont like it
- 00:14:701 >> remove whistle from the body done

Happy;
- Is okk ~sweet

Delighted;
- 01:04:701 >> end at 01:05:594ok

Ecstatic;
- 00:53:808 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) >> confusing even for my eyes noone else has complained about it, but i may change it if there are more complaints

* Star ~ :3

TheVileOne wrote:

Sad

00:57:559 (3) - Is there any reason why this isn't on the horizontal line? fixed

Happy

00:04:344 (1) - Eh this plays weird by itself. The beat here just screams three half notes. Maybe add a note here 00:04:522 - ? ok

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/26038

Eh it doesn't appear to go with your patterns. Erm I think the problem may lie in the sharp volume drop in the hitsounds. Ease into it with a medium hitsound and then get lower.

Delighted

00:02:559 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think hitsounds get much more awful. Whistles and slider volumes are WAY too loud!!! Lower it!lowered

00:53:273 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move up 2 unit. The jump is a tiny bit too large. Use 00:54:701 (5) - as a guage. It should be either on the horizontal line or slightly below it.changed slightly

01:04:701 (4,5) - A LOT of people are going to combo break here. You didn't follow any blue ticks previously, why extend this slider to one here? I think you should be consistent and reduce it.changed

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/26039

01:16:129 - Kiai time is too loud >.< changed

Ecstatic

00:08:273 (3,4,5,6) - Shape is not exactly equal on both ends. Make more symmetrical?done

00:47:554 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - And here comes the awkward as hell to hit. But that's just me. changed a bit

00:55:590 (1) - Move down and right 1 unit? (Reapply distance snap) done




Have a star and good luck. thankieessss

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Ecstatic]
A lot of notes aren't snapped.
Remove "Project" from the source.

TheVileOne wrote:

Where's my kudosu? You used my ideas.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Happy] and [Delighted] don't have the videos added in them. Reapply it for those difficulties.dun
Add 2 seconds of lead-in time on all difficulties.dun

[Sad]
00:34:702 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - No finish spam. At least take the finishes off of the end of the sliders.dun

[Happy]
00:35:416 (2) - Remove the finish.dun
00:36:844 (4) - ^dun

[Delighted]
00:34:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Finish spam doesn't sound very good. Just remove the finishes off of the even numbered notes.

[Ecstatic]
00:34:701 (1) - From here to the end of the song, the sounds just dominate over the music making it very unfitting. Same goes for the other difficulties actually. Decrease the volume around 3 ticks away from the max.dun
01:14:165 (11,12) - Move this a tad closer to 10.dun
01:15:415 (9) - New combo.

Yes wrote:

ecstatic
try using slider tick twooo?x
00:05:416 (3) - whistlex
00:05:773 (5) - clapx
00:07:023 (1) - whistle at the beginningx
00:11:308 (6) - whistlex
00:16:130 (1) - whistlex
00:16:487 (5) - ^x
00:28:451 (6) - clapok
00:39:344 (4) - spacing!fixed
00:40:237 (3) - maybe a clap at the end?x
00:43:629 (9) - spacing!fixed
00:51:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i don't like this steam no other complaints about it, so X
01:12:558 (2) - whistle?x

sad
00:04:701 (3) - new combook
00:14:701 (5) - ^ok

delighted
00:36:130 (5) - delete note?x
00:38:987 (5) - ^x
01:04:344 (3,4) - strange overlappingfixed
01:10:058 (5) - new combox
01:10:416 (1) - remove new combox

happy
all good!yay

Also,
Maybe redo the kiai lines since you changed your offset. mmkay

The video is so cute!! Star!

CDFA wrote:

omg this is finally ranked <3~.

Now get Night of Nights approved .

Garven wrote:

TKiller wrote:

spacing overmapping at it's worst

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

TKiller wrote:

spacing overmapping at it's worst

well if you don't like how i mapped it, then delete it from your library and don't bother commenting, no-one gives a crap whether you like the way i mapped it or not :3
thank-you and GTFO of my thread

TKiller wrote:

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

well if you don't like how i mapped it, then delete it from your library and don't bother commenting, no-one gives a crap whether you like the way i mapped it or not :3
thank-you and GTFO of my thread

no, this is not the way you answer if someone tells you something you made has a problem

Faust wrote:

I have to agree with TKiller.