[ Drop ] wrote:

my part are the best

[ Sharuresu ] wrote:

Nice map :^)

1. 00:46:536 -01:08:518 - 感覺這兩條綠線音量40%就可以了,你那個clap比較重在這裡有點太吵了
2. 00:50:243 (3) - 感覺尾那裡應該是clickable的才對啊,那裡有重音啊
3. 00:55:760 (3) - ^
4. 01:01:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 前面都是滑條跳呃怎麼突然跑出個8個圈的跳啊=口=
5. 01:07:829 (5) - 這個好像沒對到任何音吧...要不在這裡加個1/1的滑條?
6. 01:17:484 (1,2) - 換成跳吧?歌曲這裡好像沒怎麼變化突然把距離縮成這樣好像怪怪的
7. 02:01:277 (2) - 這弧度打起來eggpain啊;-; 換成直的吧
8. 02:04:208 (3,4) - (還有下面那幾組)把後面那個slider Ctrl+G?這樣不但比較好打(我覺得)而且也能跟前面保持連貫性
9. 02:37:829 (5) - 這個好像怪怪的....沒對上電音啊qwq 電音可是在02:38:346 - 才停的
10. 02:39:812 (2) - 這個也是沒對上電音 電音在白線就停了
11. 02:43:346 (5) - 這裡如果我沒聽錯的話應該是1/6哦 現在沒對好
12. 02:46:363 (1) - 尾巴那裡有重音感覺要是clickable的會比較好呃:3
13. 02:48:432 (4) - ^
14. 02:55:760 (4,1) - 這裡音階不一樣感覺不疊會更合曲:3
15. 03:23:346 (1,2,3,4) - 拿掉whistle吧怪怪的;w;
16. 03:51:794 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?感覺比較好打
17. 04:13:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 這組...打起來簡直蛋疼啊 主要是打完橫條之後要接上04:13:174 (4,1) - 這些地方會很不舒服 考慮改下?;w;
18. 04:28:518 (1,1) - Hi rrtyui
19. 04:52:484 (3,4) - 我覺得可以考慮減少這些滑條中間的間距呃 這裡間距大了反而不及前面01:58:691 (3,4) - 這種好打了 有部分像04:58:691 (1,2) - 有anti-flow的打著更是不舒服;_;
20. 05:01:967 (3,4) - 這兩沒對到電音吧;w;
    05:36:105 (1) - fix sliderart jk

Regou wrote:

M4M (Drop叫我來的)

Chrono Timepieces

General
補上其他tag? 抄我的
講道理我有點擔心開頭那些滑條過不了lol....想法倒是挺好的嘿嘿可以的

1. 00:46:536 -01:08:518 - 感覺這兩條綠線音量40%就可以了,你那個clap比較重在這裡有點太吵了fix
2. 00:50:243 (3) - 感覺尾那裡應該是clickable的才對啊,那裡有重音啊
3. 00:55:760 (3) - ^
4. 01:01:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 前面都是滑條跳呃怎麼突然跑出個8個圈的跳啊=口=
5. 01:07:829 (5) - 這個好像沒對到任何音吧...要不在這裡加個1/1的滑條?
6. 01:17:484 (1,2) - 換成跳吧?歌曲這裡好像沒怎麼變化突然把距離縮成這樣好像怪怪的fix
7. 02:01:277 (2) - 這弧度打起來eggpain啊;-; 換成直的吧ummmm...好
8. 02:04:208 (3,4) - (還有下面那幾組)把後面那個slider Ctrl+G?這樣不但比較好打(我覺得)而且也能跟前面保持連貫性我覺得這樣還可以，連貫性的話我忘記我是怎麼弄得了xddd
9. 02:37:829 (5) - 這個好像怪怪的....沒對上電音啊qwq 電音可是在02:38:346 - 才停的改了個長滑條
10. 02:39:812 (2) - 這個也是沒對上電音 電音在白線就停了fix
11. 02:43:346 (5) - 這裡如果我沒聽錯的話應該是1/6哦 現在沒對好我聽的話是4下應該是1/4才對
12. 02:46:363 (1) - 尾巴那裡有重音感覺要是clickable的會比較好呃:3fix
13. 02:48:432 (4) - ^fix
14. 02:55:760 (4,1) - 這裡音階不一樣感覺不疊會更合曲:3改了個位置
15. 03:23:346 (1,2,3,4) - 拿掉whistle吧怪怪的;w;
16. 03:51:794 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?感覺比較好打
17. 04:13:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 這組...打起來簡直蛋疼啊 主要是打完橫條之後要接上04:13:174 (4,1) - 這些地方會很不舒服 考慮改下?;w;我覺得這樣比較好ㄟ，感覺有趣
18. 04:28:518 (1,1) - Hi rrtyuixdddd想說這裡有機會玩一下
19. 04:52:484 (3,4) - 我覺得可以考慮減少這些滑條中間的間距呃 這裡間距大了反而不及前面01:58:691 (3,4) - 這種好打了 有部分像04:58:691 (1,2) - 有anti-flow的打著更是不舒服;_;我覺得這樣也是可以，不會說難打
20. 05:01:967 (3,4) - 這兩沒對到電音吧;w;fix
    05:36:105 (1) - fix sliderart jkno

水摸完啦 加油↖(^ω^)↗

Regou wrote:

M4M (Drop叫我來的)

Chrono Timepieces

General
補上其他tag? 抄我的
講道理我有點擔心開頭那些滑條過不了lol....想法倒是挺好的

1. 00:50:243 (3) - 感覺尾那裡應該是clickable的才對啊,那裡有重音啊 Follow the background music ;w;
2. 00:55:760 (3) - ^
3. 01:01:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 前面都是滑條跳呃怎麼突然跑出個8個圈的跳啊=口=lol
4. 01:07:829 (5) - 這個好像沒對到任何音吧...要不在這裡加個1/1的滑條? okay ;w;
5. 03:23:346 (1,2,3,4) - 拿掉whistle吧怪怪的;w;sure lol
6. 03:51:794 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?感覺比較好打okay than ;w;

水摸完啦 加油↖(^ω^)↗

blueloniess wrote:

Chrono Timepieces

04:43:346 (1,2,3,4,5) - CTRL+G 打起來比較舒服

怎么说呢,虽然没啥大问题,但总觉得少了点什么,总觉得少了一种气势...虽然很玄学就是了orz

我是看不出啥问题来的,我觉得这个图把那几个跳改一改就可以飞。

再就是连打间距十分鬼畜，十分鬼畜。。。。

blueloniess wrote:

Chrono Timepieces

00:04:088 - 00:44:088 (9) - 建议把这一段放弃了吧..至少我看起来有点无聊的我覺得這是個梗xd
01:08:518 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 加入旋转,一边缩小一边旋转這樣很難打;w;
01:14:553 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 很是不好看的改了
04:03:691 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同上等drop
04:07:829 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同上同上
04:43:346 (1,2,3,4,5) - CTRL+G
05:13:605 (3,1) - 距离稍微大了点這邊是歌最強烈的地方，這樣能表達出這裡的感覺
05:14:036 (1) - ↑↑

怎么说呢,虽然没啥大问题,但总觉得少了点什么,总觉得少了一种气势...虽然很玄学就是了orz

我是看不出啥问题来的,我觉得这个图把那几个跳改一改就可以飞。

再就是连打间距十分鬼畜，十分鬼畜。。。。這樣才有趣

MujouSekai wrote:

M4M

Chrono Timepieces

00:04:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 哇悶死啦www 我覺得這是個梗lol
01:02:312 (5) - NC等drop
01:14:036 (1,2,3,4) - maybe change to parallelogram shape like 01:14:725 (1,2,3,4) - , feels weird to playfix
01:26:450 (1) - the beat does not start on white tick, maybe shorten the previous slider and move it to blue tick beforefix
01:47:139 (1) - this will look better imo (nitpick)等drop
01:42:139 (2,4) - Overlap等drop
03:06:794 (1,2,3) - Jumps a bit uneven等drop
03:19:467 (1) - maybe silent the ending beat of this slider, it stands out quite a bit等drop
03:19:467 (1) - overlap等drop
03:55:415 (6) - NC等drop
04:03:691 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - would it be better if you made it as a regular parallogram, just a suggestion等drop
04:20:243 (1,2,1,2) - awkward pattern會嗎;w;
04:20:243 (1,2,1,2) - why not extend them one more 1/8 beat.你這裡標錯地方了吧xd
04:29:553 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapfix
04:29:553 (1,2,3,4) - Blanketfix

This map is so cool! deadly patterns though:) by Drop...Gd luck

MujouSekai wrote:

M4M

Chrono Timepieces

00:04:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 哇悶死啦www
01:02:312 (5) - NC
01:14:036 (1,2,3,4) - maybe change to parallelogram shape like 01:14:725 (1,2,3,4) - , feels weird to play
01:26:450 (1) - the beat does not start on white tick, maybe shorten the previous slider and move it to blue tick before
01:47:139 (1) - this will look better imo (nitpick)
01:42:139 (2,4) - Overlap
03:06:794 (1,2,3) - Jumps a bit uneven
03:19:467 (1) - maybe silent the ending beat of this slider, it stands out quite a bit
03:19:467 (1) - overlap
03:55:415 (6) - NC
04:03:691 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - would it be better if you made it as a regular parallogram, just a suggestion
04:20:243 (1,2,1,2) - awkward pattern
04:20:243 (1,2,1,2) - why not extend them one more 1/8 beat.
04:29:553 (1,2,3,4) - Overlap
04:29:553 (1,2,3,4) - Blanket

This map is so cool! deadly patterns though:) Gd luck

HighTec wrote:

4m4m4m4m4m with drop

im sorry if my suggestions look bad but its kinda do make my point clear
since there is no SB telling me who mapped what i didnt rly devide any of it up, sorry!


00:04:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i dont think ncing every note here would be a bad thing as the notes are p far apart and thus can drain a lot of the HP for no reason, its scary with HR okay..too much reaction so remove.
00:28:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - also maybe make this go the other way (so just ctrl+h)? would make it a little more creative than pure copypaste uwu
00:48:174 (3,4) - i think 4 should be emphasised with spacing instead of 3, 4 has the main tune going on it and thus is a stronger sound
01:04:725 (1,1) - why did u start NCing here like this while u didnt do it on all other 1/2 tapping occations
01:06:277 (2,4) - consider blanket
01:35:243 (1,2,1) - this plays pretty awkward, the gap from 01:35:415 (2,1) - feels weird because the spacing is a lot lower than 01:35:243 (1,2) - and makes hitting the stream a lot harder as well, consider making it so that the spacing is more equal!
02:37:829 (5) - try maybe making the slider more like this so that the triangular effect is more visible nope I think this slider very cool
02:41:536 (4) - try placing this on x372 y48 so u get an overlapping effect with 02:40:587 (1) - fix
02:43:346 (5) - would advice NC so u can emphasise the song changefix
02:51:622 (5,2,3) - stack this or i will eat ur dogfix lol
02:56:708 (1,1) - i get the blanket but still,,, maybe for reading purposes maybe something like this would work better as it makes the timing gap more clear through spacingfix
03:17:139 (2) - maybe something like this would look better (personal things)
03:19:467 (1,1) - stack this perfectly or your dog will be in my belly
03:53:346 (1,1) - pls no spam NC it doesnt make sense with the other patterns a a a a a
04:37:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - regarding the song, a straight stream doesnt really fit as the sound this is mapped to changes in pitch the whole time. maybe make it something swirly like this to emphasise it all eya
04:38:518 (1,2,1,2) - reduce SV maybe, the kicksliders read like 1/4 sliders eventho thats not the case here
05:38:863 (2,3,4,5,6) - NC all, reason same as for the beginningfix


fun map to play and looked good. tho i wasnt sure about most flow it didnt play bad or anything so i skipped those suggestions
gl!

-himei wrote:

ey boiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii


00:46:450 - 01:08:432 - not wure which sound line you are following here, basically you got the down beat 00:46:794 - here on the slider end
and then you are doing some really random stuff.
you got 2 main sound lines here - first is 00:46:794 - something like voilin or some shit,
00:46:450 - and this, which is basically 1/2 into 3/4 at most part

you basically skipped this sounds for example 00:47:053 -
also this 00:47:786 -
00:48:131 - and this

etc
this secton should be remapped in 1/8 accordingly to some sound line, but for now its bad.

also this line is increasing 00:51:622 - as you can hear here, it gettin pretty much palpable, tho you didnt emphasize this
00:53:260 - this sound isnt mapped, even tho its super palpable
then you got this:
00:50:760 - calm sliders
00:53:346 - jumps
00:56:277 - sliders
00:59:036 - jumps yea? why you didnt make a pattern change tho
01:01:967 - jumps? o_O
01:04:851 - jumps again, and they are not increasing for some reason, the music getting more intense

01:08:518 - why squares? you got 01:08:518 (1,3) - same sounds and its repeating, you should reconsider this place.
try something with constant rotation/scaling etc., also i think triangles are better hereI think squares could be good no change
01:14:725 - why you changing the flow? its the same melody as before but more intensive. It's not same paragraph as squares
01:20:027 - the pattern doesnt change, even tho the previous part was more calm I think those slider correspond different music,use the slider
01:25:070 - this gettimg super intensive, but you got some weird shit sliders all around, make them more idk faster, more roundedNo thanks
01:34:424 - try sv 2 on such sounds.
01:36:450 (1) - this sounds is different from 01:36:622 (2,3) - change it accordingly
01:37:829 (1) - ^
01:38:518 (1) - this shudnt be slider
01:39:208 - the melody decreasing here, try some appropriate pattern here
01:41:277 (1) - same thing about slider^
actually it repeats over and over, cuz of melody, so yea u got some work to do
01:51:967 (1) - this shud be longer than 01:52:139 (1) - cuz of melody obv
02:50:760 - this sound isnt mapped for some reason
02:58:346 - ^ its way different from the others
03:06:794 - why isnt this a slider like these 03:07:484 (5,2,2) -
03:12:312 - ^
03:12:915 (2) - ^
03:23:001 - this is the place of the sliders when it should be spinning in inside of it. like this idk http://puu.sh/swkTZ/b71caaccf7.jpg
03:52:570 - unmapped

idk it repeats from the beginning so yea ill be done for now
can recheck if you want
ggggggg

Kisses wrote:

Chrono Timepieces

1. 00:59:208 (3,4,5) - if you could space these out a bit more the pattern would look prettier imo http://puu.sh/sxkj6/9745e2de89.jpg
2. 01:01:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These seem a bit overspaced in relation to the rest of the section, can you reduce it a bit?
3. imo it would be better to have a jump between 01:08:346 (3,1) instead of 01:08:001 (1,2)
4. 01:41:018 (3) - I think it's a must to place this closer to (2) just because of the blue tick. I also think it would play better if you stacked it on top of (4) so how about doing something like this? http://puu.sh/sxkFh/70b1c58fca.jpg
5. 02:53:691 (3) - the curve seems out of place, delete it? http://puu.sh/sxkNy/6bba2e6dd8.jpgnope
6. 03:12:915 (2,3) - same suggestion about stacking as 01:41:018 (3)
7. 04:28:518 (1,1) - When playing this just plays so crazy that the visual effect of the slider ball doing circles throws you off. I highly recommend you slow down the SVnoooo

GL!

HighTec wrote:

4m4m4m4m4m with drop

im sorry if my suggestions look bad but its kinda do make my point clear
since there is no SB telling me who mapped what i didnt rly devide any of it up, sorry!


00:28:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - also maybe make this go the other way (so just ctrl+h)? would make it a little more creative than pure copypaste uwu
keep OWO
00:48:174 (3,4) - i think 4 should be emphasised with spacing instead of 3, 4 has the main tune going on it and thus is a stronger sound
01:04:725 (1,1) - why did u start NCing here like this while u didnt do it on all other 1/2 tapping occations
01:06:277 (2,4) - consider blanketit already blanket
01:35:243 (1,2,1) - this plays pretty awkward, the gap from 01:35:415 (2,1) - feels weird because the spacing is a lot lower than 01:35:243 (1,2) - and makes hitting the stream a lot harder as well, consider making it so that the spacing is more equal!i think thats really hard lol /me run
03:17:139 (2) - maybe something like this would look better (personal things) i think place like that is more comfortable
03:19:467 (1,1) - stack this perfectly or your dog will be in my belly eat my dog plz D:
03:53:346 (1,1) - pls no spam NC it doesnt make sense with the other patterns a a a a a
04:37:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - regarding the song, a straight stream doesnt really fit as the sound this is mapped to changes in pitch the whole time. maybe make it something swirly like this to emphasise it all eyalazy nah
04:38:518 (1,2,1,2) - reduce SV maybe, the kicksliders read like 1/4 sliders eventho thats not the case here


fun map to play and looked good. tho i wasnt sure about most flow it didnt play bad or anything so i skipped those suggestions
gl!

-himei wrote:

ey boiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii


00:46:450 - 01:08:432 - not sure which sound line you are following here, basically you got the down beat 00:46:794 - here on the slider end
and then you are doing some really random stuff.
you got 2 main sound lines here - first is 00:46:794 - something like voilin or some shit,
00:46:450 - and this, which is basically 1/2 into 3/4 at most part follow the background music and the bass

you basically skipped this sounds for example 00:47:053 -
also this 00:47:786 -
00:48:131 - and thisi can't hear anytings O_O?

etc
this secton should be remapped in 1/8 accordingly to some sound line, but for now its bad.how?

also this line is increasing 00:51:622 - as you can hear here, it gettin pretty much palpable, tho you didnt emphasize this
00:53:260 - this sound isnt mapped, even tho its super palpable
then you got this:
00:50:760 - calm sliders is calm
00:53:346 - jumps is jump - -
00:56:277 - sliders ?
00:59:036 - jumps yea? why you didnt make a pattern change thois jumped for me as the music is clam
01:01:967 - jumps? o_O ^
01:04:851 - jumps again, and they are not increasing for some reason, the music getting more intense ^
01:34:424 - try sv 2 on such sounds.follow before.it speeded up on species sounds
01:36:450 (1) - this sounds is different from 01:36:622 (2,3) - change it accordingly 01:30:932 (1,2,3,4) -
01:37:829 (1) - ^ ^
01:38:518 (1) - this shudnt be slider
01:39:208 - the melody decreasing here, try some appropriate pattern here its appropriate i think xd
01:41:277 (1) - same thing about slider
actually it repeats over and over, cuz of melody, so yea u got some work to do ran out of idea o.o
01:51:967 (1) - this shud be longer than 01:52:139 (1) - cuz of melody obv highlight the strong bass
02:50:760 - this sound isnt mapped for some reason Hey lululu = =
02:58:346 - ^ its way different from the others
03:06:794 - why isnt this a slider like these 03:07:484 (5,2,2) - i donèt get it ?.?
03:12:312 - ^
03:12:915 (2) - ^
03:23:001 - this is the place of the sliders when it should be spinning in inside of it. like this idk http://puu.sh/swkTZ/b71caaccf7.jpg
03:52:570 - unmapped

idk it repeats from the beginning so yea ill be done for now
can recheck if you want
ggggggg

Kisses wrote:

Chrono Timepieces

1. 00:59:208 (3,4,5) - if you could space these out a bit more the pattern would look prettier imo http://puu.sh/sxkj6/9745e2de89.jpg
2. 01:01:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These seem a bit overspaced in relation to the rest of the section, can you reduce it a bit?
3. imo it would be better to have a jump between 01:08:346 (3,1) instead of 01:08:001 (1,2)
4. 01:41:018 (3) - I think it's a must to place this closer to (2) just because of the blue tick. I also think it would play better if you stacked it on top of (4) so how about doing something like this? http://puu.sh/sxkFh/70b1c58fca.jpg
5. 02:53:691 (3) - the curve seems out of place, delete it? http://puu.sh/sxkNy/6bba2e6dd8.jpg
6. 03:12:915 (2,3) - same suggestion about stacking as 01:41:018 (3)
7. 04:28:518 (1,1) - When playing this just plays so crazy that the visual effect of the slider ball doing circles throws you off. I highly recommend you slow down the SV

GL!

happy30 wrote:

MOD!

01:27:484 (6,1) - New combo here isn't really visible since they are the same blue, might confuse people as they don't see the slow slider coming.fix
01:34:381 (1) - I would place this slider a little close to the (4) before it, or move 4 a little close to this slider, it's hard to notice (4).
01:38:518 (1) - Can't really see the repeats coming
01:50:243 (1,1) - this feels a little awkward. it feels like there should be something at the blue tick between these, the jump from a slow slider to (1) doesn't feel right either, i would at least make the spacing smaller here. (don't do jumps after a slow slider in the same direction of the slow slider).

02:01:794 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I would follow the saw-sound here instead of the drums on bg.
03:01:881 (2,1) - This doesn't play well for me, I would stack (2) on the head of next slider
04:28:518 (1,1,1) - was this inappropriate shape intended? nope:(
04:38:518 (1,2,1,2,1) - would break my combo every play >.<; Idea is nice but I wouldn't space these like this.
04:43:432 (2,3,4,5) - this stream is a little too overmapped for me.
05:13:346 (1) - I don't like how this slider ends on a loud beat. It plays better if those beats during this part are clickable objects.thanks you answer my troubled!!

GL!

happy30 wrote:

MOD!

01:34:381 (1) - I would place this slider a little close to the (4) before it, or move 4 a little close to this slider, it's hard to notice (4).
01:38:518 (1) - Can't really see the repeats coming i might fix it if more people pointing out xd
01:50:243 (1,1) - this feels a little awkward. it feels like there should be something at the blue tick between these, the jump from a slow slider to (1) doesn't feel right either, i would at least make the spacing smaller here. (don't do jumps after a slow slider in the same direction of the slow slider).

02:01:794 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I would follow the saw-sound here instead of the drums on bg.
03:01:881 (2,1) - This doesn't play well for me, I would stack (2) on the head of next slider
04:28:518 (1,1,1) - was this inappropriate shape intended?
04:38:518 (1,2,1,2,1) - would break my combo every play >.<; Idea is nice but I wouldn't space these like this.
04:43:432 (2,3,4,5) - this stream is a little too overmapped for me.
05:13:346 (1) - I don't like how this slider ends on a loud beat. It plays better if those beats during this part are clickable objects.

GL!

Len wrote:

wowow

Spaghetti wrote:

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