hi!!!!
[it.]
00:32:193 (1) - yo this anti climatic length pls use higher sv!!
btw if u listen with lower spood in kiai u should hear the melody rhythm like this http://puu.sh/pBFH2/e7755d29ab.jpg
kinda wish this rhythm got mapped too so its more diverse cuz 1/2 spam gets boring fast!! (maybe on last kiai cuz it should be most intense!!!)
also mayb e add finish hitsound on the downbeats on each stanza cuz map is so extrem it might need more intense hitsounds for better xperience
00:47:913 (15) - make this a kickslider would b e nice cuz theres a little stretched sound
01:18:753 (1) - try this lol http://puu.sh/pBFUy/494c768926.jpg
01:34:113 - theres also 1/4 melody thing here in this whole kiai so try thi s http://puu.sh/pBFYn/217512d5e5.jpg cuz why not its last diff (also u mapped 1/4 like 01:41:493 (4) -
01:57:153 (1) - rly dude this is so nOISY i dont see ho w should this part have such stronk hitsounds
02:34:953 (7,8,9) - lol wtf is this intentional cuz 8 should be above 9 (also u could make ds from 9 ~ 16 higher too!!)
03:13:953 (1) - same as b e fore
04:29:673 (1) - could make long slider that ends at 04:31:233 - for a bit more interesting rhythm
fek batman bg its so bad
[Terror]
00:32:193 (1) - kinda same as last diff
00:39:873 (3) - try this to emphasize more melody http://puu.sh/pBGts/d049967ce4.jpg
01:49:083 - useless timing point s
02:18:153 (1) - why is this have red nc? still makes not much sense to me in terms of rhythm if u say its following vocals cuz the rest in this nc is all bw thing thus this looks random
02:27:873 (1) - 2 circles? x d
03:36:513 (3) - nc ? cuz u made jump so its a bit more constant
[Eckstra]
00:39:873 (3,1) - why start of new verse has so low spacing lo l maybe atleast ctrl+g 1
00:46:533 - theres no sound here yO 1/4 double thing is on 00:46:593 - 00:46:653 -
01:14:433 (7,8) - should be emphasized more i m o maybe split them to 1/2 stack circles!!!
01:51:513 (2,3) - dont know why 1/4 got ignored since u mapped 01:50:553 (7,8,9) - rhythm thing (same for next stanza s)
02:29:343 - delete this timing poin t
imo second half is fine rhythm wise
good luck!!
[it.]
00:32:193 (1) - yo this anti climatic length pls use higher sv!!
btw if u listen with lower spood in kiai u should hear the melody rhythm like this http://puu.sh/pBFH2/e7755d29ab.jpg
kinda wish this rhythm got mapped too so its more diverse cuz 1/2 spam gets boring fast!! (maybe on last kiai cuz it should be most intense!!!)
also mayb e add finish hitsound on the downbeats on each stanza cuz map is so extrem it might need more intense hitsounds for better xperience
00:47:913 (15) - make this a kickslider would b e nice cuz theres a little stretched sound
01:18:753 (1) - try this lol http://puu.sh/pBFUy/494c768926.jpg
01:34:113 - theres also 1/4 melody thing here in this whole kiai so try thi s http://puu.sh/pBFYn/217512d5e5.jpg cuz why not its last diff (also u mapped 1/4 like 01:41:493 (4) -
01:57:153 (1) - rly dude this is so nOISY i dont see ho w should this part have such stronk hitsounds
02:34:953 (7,8,9) - lol wtf is this intentional cuz 8 should be above 9 (also u could make ds from 9 ~ 16 higher too!!)
03:13:953 (1) - same as b e fore
04:29:673 (1) - could make long slider that ends at 04:31:233 - for a bit more interesting rhythm
fek batman bg its so bad
[Terror]
00:32:193 (1) - kinda same as last diff
00:39:873 (3) - try this to emphasize more melody http://puu.sh/pBGts/d049967ce4.jpg
01:49:083 - useless timing point s
02:18:153 (1) - why is this have red nc? still makes not much sense to me in terms of rhythm if u say its following vocals cuz the rest in this nc is all bw thing thus this looks random
02:27:873 (1) - 2 circles? x d
03:36:513 (3) - nc ? cuz u made jump so its a bit more constant
[Eckstra]
00:39:873 (3,1) - why start of new verse has so low spacing lo l maybe atleast ctrl+g 1
00:46:533 - theres no sound here yO 1/4 double thing is on 00:46:593 - 00:46:653 -
01:14:433 (7,8) - should be emphasized more i m o maybe split them to 1/2 stack circles!!!
01:51:513 (2,3) - dont know why 1/4 got ignored since u mapped 01:50:553 (7,8,9) - rhythm thing (same for next stanza s)
02:29:343 - delete this timing poin t
imo second half is fine rhythm wise
good luck!!