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Bamboo Blade Cast - Star Rise

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yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Ooh!! I like this song!

Let's sincerely hope this map will strive for ranking, unlike those unfortunately graveryarded predecessors.

And may I map an Insane diff? (wakuwaku~ :) )

I'll mod tomorrow, gotta sleep wwww
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
I'm glad that you like this song. :D

I hope for your [Insane] difficulty map.

Try to make this map ranked.
This map is still bad,so I wait for your modding.
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
私は"hitsounds"が下手です, so I won't mod them.
Ok here we go:

Overall:
Please change the mp3 to that of higher quality~ This one's bitrate is too low and the volume goes up and down...
After changing the mp3 you will have to find a new offset and resnap the notes.
Also consider changing the combo colors.
Hitsound volume is too loud, lower them please.

[Easy]
Consider making some straight sliders curved. Just a suggestion. It may look better. >_^
Some notes are just 1 beat away from the end of spinner, I am not sure if this is hard for an Easy...

00:13:255 (1) - how about start this spinner at 00:13:720?
00:34:185 (1) - an Easy diff shouldn't have jumps~
00:43:255 (1) - how about start this spinner at 00:43:487?
00:56:278 (1) - how about start this spinner at 00:56:510?
01:03:952 (1)(2) - these sliders are a bit off-screen
01:18:836 (1)(2) - these too
01:25:813 (1) - how about start this spinner at 01:26:278?

[Normal]
Same suggestions for the spinners as in [Easy].
Otherwise, nice rhythm~

[Hard]
Some combos are a bit long, use your judgment to shorten them.
Same suggestions for the spinners as in [Easy], but on a sidenote, I recommend to use spinners less often in Hard.
Some notes are a bit off-screen, fix them please~

00:05:348 (4) - I think this note sounds better if moved to 00:05:115?
Again, nice rhythm~

I will be back to recheck. Oh and wait for my diff~ ^^
frost-b-spec
786 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
star~ :)
動画の歌詞が違うのが気になったくらいですｗ

あと、osbファイルがいらないかと思います。
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
>yongtw123
I changed the mp3,but you may be not like it.
(Changed animation video too,because the video must match changed mp3.)
If you don't like it,please bring the mp3 and video you like to me.
(My searching ability is poor,so I can't find high quality mp3. :( )

Fixed many thing you said,but it may be not perfect.
So please check again.

Thank you for your many advice! :)

>frost-b-spec
星、ありがとうございます☆ :)

yongtw123さんのアドバイスで結構変更したので、良ければまた見て下さい。
後、osbファイルとは何でしょうか？　教えて下さい。
(What is the osb file. Please teach me it.)
frost-b-spec
786 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
mp3変えたことによって恐らく全部がずれてます。

osbファイルはsongフォルダの中のこの曲のフォルダに「Bamboo Blade Cast - Star Rise (quintessence).osb」というファイルがあると思うので、それを消せばOKです。
(osbはStoryBoardのためのファイルです)
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Quick reminder:

The offset is not right, it should be around 1182.

Also, the video file included has its own audio track. Although OSU! seems can ignore it, to reduce file size please remove the audio track from the video file.

By the way, there's a small drumming sound at the beginning of the mp3. It's not a big deal but >:(
If you'd like, here is another one (offset 1210): http://www.mediafire.com/?bozauxtzvzm

PS. Finished placing notes for Insane, arranging...
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
Use offset 2,571. (or +15 on your current offset, resnap)

The difficulties are weird... you didn't correctly put your objects do you? They are supposed to be appearing later.

anyway I will consider making a dif for this map. :3 star'd
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
Oh! I'm sorry. :?

When I reuploaded this map today,I noticed that timing and putting notes were not correctly. :cry:
I'll fix again with your advice. Please wait.
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
I didn't changed the mp3,because I didn't want to cause the same accident.(Sorry yongtw123 :( )

Thanks to your advice,timing and notes may be correctly.
Please recheck.

>frost-b-spec
osbファイルを消し、アップロードをして、この曲を再びダウンロードしたら
osbファイルが復活していたのですが、これでいいのですか？
frost-b-spec
786 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
fullでUPしましたか？
(消えた状態で)fullでUPすれば消えるかと思います。

ただ、SBを入れるなら必要なので注意してください。

下はすべて提案です。
[Normal]
00:06:291(5) - 短いスライダーで中央が角になっているのはこれだけだと思うので、直した方が良いかと思います。

[Hard]
Normalと同じ
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Rechecked, all nice.

Three things:
1. Long sliders may look better if curved.
2. For [Hard], there are still some almost off-screen notes. Not a big problem though.
3. Add some stuff to tags. Like "anime".

And here's my diff :)

Download: Bamboo Blade Cast - Star Rise (quintessence) [yongtw123's Insane].osu
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
>frost-b-spec
Fullでupするの忘れてました! :?
ちゃんとosbファイルが無くなりました。
ありがとうございます！

>yongtw123
Thank you for your nice map!
Added it and some tags.
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
Another thing: Is the artist really "Bamboo Blade Cast"? Artist is supposed to be the person who sang it.

I've finished my dif :3

Download: Bamboo Blade Cast - Star Rise (quintessence) [ignore's Insane].osu
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
Oh! Nice map!

Thank you ignorethis. :D

About artist :
This song was sung by voice artists playing main five girls.
So I think the artist name is right.
frost-b-spec
786 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
hi :)

[ignore's Insane]
add kiai

[yongtw123's Insane]
01:23:501(7) - spacing
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123

frost-b-spec wrote:

hi :)
[yongtw123's Insane]
01:23:501(7) - spacing fixed
Thanks!

Download: Bamboo Blade Cast - Star Rise (quintessence) [yongtw123's Insane].osu
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
Reflected.
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
(If you don't mind) Manual bump. ;)
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
I noticed your message today. (Sorry. :( )
I didn't know that there was a message box in upside of menu screen.

I think your idea is nice! But I am a beginner about Computer and Osu.
So I have many unknown things.
<For example>
I don't know how to attach my map file.
Whom should I ask mod?
Can I ask mod suddenly?
...etc.

If you don't mind,please answer these questions.

[Postscript]
solved these questions.
Thanks yongtw123.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
KONNICHIHA!

[File]
Your bg (Background bamboo.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 (current 1080x768)

[Easy]
00:39:315 (4) - Can you do it like this to make nice pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8132
00:59:315 (1,1) - Remove the new combo, since this a combo spammer
01:14:199 (1,1) - ^
01:07:222 (x) - Add note here? Feels empty about rhythm~
01:07:687 (1,2,3,4) - Can you make a zig-zag pattern to make nice pattern??

[Normal]
00:06:291 (5) - This slider it's looks bad if 4 is overlap with this slider, make it blanket pattern like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8133
00:08:151 (7) - Add 1 repeating slider?
00:46:988 (7) - Can you make it curve by using bezier?? It's looks ugly here
00:50:942 (1) - I think this looks horrid if object is appear after spinner immeadiately, delete this?
00:54:431 (7) - Can you make it curve by using bezier?? It's looks ugly here
00:59:314 (1,1) - Remove the new combo, since this a combo spammer
01:14:198 (1,1) - ^
01:29:780 (4) - I think stack with 3 doesn't looks good~

[Hard]
00:56:291 (1) - Very x5 ugly
00:59:081 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo, since it combo spammer
01:13:965 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:22:570 (1) - Very x5 ugly
01:29:081 (1,2,3,4) - How about make a square pattern?

[ignore's Insane]
00:18:384 (7) - New combo, since it's jumps
00:25:826 (7) - ^
00:58:850 (3) - ^
01:15:129 (2) - New combo?

[yong123's Insane]
01:23:850 (x) - Add note?

Good song
STAR
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123

Leorda wrote:

[yong123's Insane]
01:23:850 (x) - Add note? done~
Thanks for the modding!

My diff updated.

ファイト！

Download: Bamboo Blade Cast - Star Rise (quintessence) [yongtw123's Insane].osu
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
Thanks Leorda!

Fixed.
Niva
Global Moderator
3,196 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Random modding :)

[General]
Remove "Bamboo Blade" from the tags because it's already in the source.
01:03:966 (1) - The slider's start and end is not at the same height. Rotate by 1 or 2 degrees counterclockwise
01:11:408 (2) - Move somewhere upper. looks ugly in there
01:18:850 (1) - The slider's start and end is not at the same height. Rotate by 1 or 2 degrees counterclockwise

[Normal]
01:01:640 (6) - Add clap?
01:03:500 (6) - Add clap?
01:07:686 (1) - 1/4 streams like this are quite hard for Normal, but it's fine since the song is relaxing
01:16:524 (6) - Add clap?
01:18:384 (6) - Add clap?

[Hard]
00:08:849 (3) - Move somewhere lower so 00:09:314 (1), 00:08:616 (2), and 00:08:849 (3) forms a straight line
00:37:686 (4) - Move one grid to the right, so it is placed at a same height with 00:36:756 (2)?
00:46:756 (6) - New combo.
00:46:988 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:58:849 (1) - The position looks weird for a quint-angle pattern.
01:13:733 (1) - ^, also perhaps try flip vertical for variation?

[Ignore's Insane]
00:31:408 (3) - Weird curve comparing to 00:30:477 (1)
01:02:803 (6) - Not perfectly stacked

[yongtw123's Insane]
00:11:408 (9) - Add clap?
00:14:664 (11) - Add clap?
00:34:896 (5) - Move one grid to the right? (or one grid down and one grid right, I'm not sure)
01:29:547 (1) - I think it's better if placed in a same height as 01:28:617 (3) or 01:29:082 (5)
EDIT: At second thought I also think this triangle pattern can be used:


In my opinions, Ignore's Insane is the best diff in this map. Have a Star.
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
Thanks Nivalis :)

Fixed almost problem you pointed out except guest difficulties.
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123

Nivalis wrote:

[yongtw123's Insane]
00:11:408 (9) - Add clap?
00:14:664 (11) - Add clap?
00:34:896 (5) - Move one grid to the right? (or one grid down and one grid right, I'm not sure)
01:29:547 (1) - I think it's better if placed in a same height as 01:28:617 (3) or 01:29:082 (5)
EDIT: At second thought I also think this triangle pattern can be used:
Excellent suggestions, all done! Thanks for the modding!

Download: Bamboo Blade Cast - Star Rise (quintessence) [yongtw123's Insane].osu
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. set the offset 710, there shouldn't be circles before the first offset.
[Easy]:
  1. 00:02:571 (4) - move it to 00:03:036
  2. 00:03:501 (5) - move it to 00:03:966
  3. 00:04:896 (2) - clap
  4. 00:05:827 (4) - clap
  5. 00:06:757 (T) - you can use costomer overlay or SB sound to add a clap here. or just make (5) a back-slider. or just leave this emply :3
  6. 00:07:687 (6) - clap
  7. 00:08:152 (7) - clap at 00:08:617
  8. oh, add claps and check the whole diff. listen to the music, it's not very hard.
[Normal]:
  1. 00:12:337 (1,3) - clap
  2. this diff also need more claps, maybe u should add some notes or just leave them there.
  3. others are fine
[Hard]:
  1. I still suggest more claps orz.
[ignore's Insane]:
  1. Ignorethis don't like KIAI, but you should add some in this diff orz.
  2. awesome. just need some hit sounds.
[yongtw123's Insane]:
  1. pretty good
nice mapset, star~
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
The song attracted me to here, that's why I mod.

[Easy]

00:47:222 (3) why concave?
00:54:664 (3) ^

[Normal]
00:40:477 (5) too right, try to pull it back
01:01:640 (6) new combo?
01:03:500 (6) ^
01:16:524 (6) ^
01:18:384 (6) ^

[Hard]
00:04:431 (1,2) delete these notes and start a slider at 00:04:198, end at 00:04:664
00:08:850 (3) change it to whistle?
00:33:036 (5) too right, try to pull it back
00:37:919 to 00:43:036 the clap pattern of this part is nice, why don't you use it in the rest of the song?
00:40:477 (5) try to pull it back
00:55:361 (4) ^
01:25:128 (3) ^

[ignore's Insance]
nice difficulty, I can find nothing at all
or consider to slience the soft-sliderside?

[yongtw123's Insane]
nice pattern of placing notes, consider to slience the soft-sliderside?
00:15:129 (13) I was shocked by the whistle


all above are suggestions, not instrustions, you can just get my star~
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
Thanks Colin Hou and Vikon :D
It's difficult for me to set hitsounds well.
So your advices were useful! :)

Fixed.(There are a little points I didn't fix.)
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
A little changes in hitsounds

Updated!

Thanks for Vikon's modding!

Download: Bamboo Blade Cast - Star Rise (quintessence) [yongtw123's Insane].osu
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
delete the .osb file and re-full submit.
the map has 3 [I]'s now... and according to the ranking criteria this is unrankable.
try to use more sliders in Easy and Normal... and, don't copy&paste a lot since this song is not that long.

[Easy]
Overall +2
00:51:408 (1) - only 1/1 after the spinner... a bit fast for beginners.
01:03:501 (4,1) - spacing.
01:08:152 (3) - whistle?
01:11:873 (3) - ^

[Normal]
00:37:919 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5) - use some sliders plz...
00:58:849 (1,2,3) - maybe stack them is better.
01:07:686 (1---) - the 1/2s is hard for a Normal
01:13:733 (1,2,3) - same as 00:58:849

[Hard]
OA8 and use the middle circle size... you're crazy...this is Hard but not a Insane. OA-2 and make the circle size larger
00:30:477 (1,2,3) - spacing.
00:39:081 (1) - remove new combo

[ignore's Insane]
00:07:919 (4) - new combo for the jump.

[yongtw123's Insane]
you need a timing section to finish the kiai.
00:58:617 (1) - remove?
01:00:245 (2) - new combo?
01:18:850 (2,3,4) - the 1/4 triple doesn't fit here imo.
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123

NatsumeRin wrote:

[yongtw123's Insane]
you need a timing section to finish the kiai. OK
00:58:617 (1) - remove? OK
01:00:245 (2) - new combo? OK
01:18:850 (2,3,4) - the 1/4 triple doesn't fit here imo. OK, now triplets start on red ticks.
Thanks for the modding~!

Download: Bamboo Blade Cast - Star Rise (quintessence) [yongtw123's Insane].osu
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
>NatsumeRin

Thanks for your advices. :)
almost fixed!

>yongtw123

oh! fast fixing!

Thanks yongtw123. ;)
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Hi~ Good choice of song

Add "ryou hirohashi megumi toyoguchi sachiko kojima houko kuwashima rina satou" in tag, that's the name of all artist :D

Star~
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
Thanks for your star and advice. :)
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Hi~nice map~
I want to say some japaness,でも...えど...never mind x_x


[Easy]
01:00:244 - Start KIAI right here?

[Normal]
00:23:035 - Break time is too long,start map here?
01:00:244 - Start KIAI right here?

[Hard]
00:23:035 - Break time is too long,start map here?
01:00:244 - Start KIAI right here?

Hitsound mod
SPOILER
00:49:547 - Clap?
00:50:477 (5) - ^
00:58:152 (6) - Finish?
00:59:780 (5) - ^
01:02:570 (4) - Clap?
01:04:431 (3) - ^
01:05:361 (7) - ^
01:07:221 (2) - ^
01:14:664 (5) - Finish?
01:16:058 (5) - Remove finish?
01:17:454 (4) - ^
01:19:315 (3) - ^
01:22:105 (2) - ^

[ignore's Insane]
01:00:244 - Start KIAI right here?
ignore me~ :3

[yongtw123's Insane]
All good~
噗~噗~ :3

Starrrrrr
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
Thanks advice and star! :)

Fixed.
hime_nikki04
89 posts
Joined April 2010
hime_nikki04
Hello!

Easy:
Slider on 01:05:827 sounds better on when moved to 01:05:709.
Slider on 01:20:709 sounds better on on 01:20:593.
Consider adding a slider to fill the space between 01:21:523 and 01:22:571?

Normal:
Aline the note on 00:39:779 with the others?
Slider on 00:40:012 last on one beat longer.

Star ~
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
thanks modding and star. :)
but, I didn't fix.
...sorry. :(
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
<Normal>
00:39:547 (1) - cancel the new combo
00:51:640 (1) - ^

<ignore's Insane>
HP drain +2

<yongtw123's Insane>
HP drain +1

Nice map
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123

Alace wrote:

<Normal>
00:39:547 (1) - cancel the new combo
00:51:640 (1) - ^

<ignore's Insane>
HP drain +2

<yongtw123's Insane>
HP drain +1

Nice map
Thanks for modding!
quintessence, can you fix the diff for me? It's a small fix.
quintessence
88 posts
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Topic Starter
quintessence
Thanks Alace :)

fixed. (include guest diff)
Alace
osu! Alumni
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Alace
bubble
Selee
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Joined February 2010
Selee
Star rise~ XD
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
Thanks for the your star :)
Alace
osu! Alumni
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Alace
If you fix your thread or upload map
bubble will popped
i fixed it
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
good~ :oops:
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
thanks swish :D
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
Lead-in should be the same on all difficulties. A bit picky...

Also delete osb.

The audio track could be removed from the video, though filesize isn't exactly being a problem...

I could rank after you fix this, provided that you don't modify anything else. =]
quintessence
88 posts
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Topic Starter
quintessence
thanks Gens :)

fixed.
Gens
osu! Alumni
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Gens
Ranked.
yongtw123
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Joined April 2009
yongtw123
quintessence-san omedetou~
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
quintessence
arigatou~ :)

Thanks to the all people who helped me! ;)
Kurai
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Kurai
Yay, finally ranked o/
Congratz :33
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