Here comes my mod~

[Overall]
BPM sounds ok, but I'm pretty sure the offset is wrong. I'm not an offset wiz, so you're going to have to ask a BAT to check it.
Also, one more thing I want to point out, is that you will need a difficulty that is under three stars. The reason for this, is that the BATs want new players to be able to play more, so to get your map ranked, you will need to include a difficulty under three stars.

[Rina]
01:00:245 - 01:02:458 - Hard to tell when the sliders end because of the rebounds.
02:50:655 (3) and 02:51:884 (2) - I'm pretty sure it would be better if you just replaced these with hit circles.

[Kakkon]
This is good.

[Shiika]
Oh gawd small hit circles for those jumps This was more fun to play when I made the circle size bigger by one tick.
The overall difficulty is pretty high, lower it by 1 - 2, and then raise the HP Drain by 1.
02:06:393 - 02:08:114 - A bit cluster-fuckish
Gah! I can't do these jumps.
Then again I was never really good at jumps to begin with.

Are you sure this is your first beatmap? Gee, it's already well mapped.
Here you can have this.
*Star*

•Overall•
Offset : 3.980 ~ Resnap All Notes
I don't suggest timing sections with normal sound before the first kiai time, but it's up to you.

•Shiika•
00:10:573 (3) - Please don't make this covered sliders, they are awful. Try to move it away.
00:14:999 (4) - New combo.
00:27:048 (7) - Please don't make this covered circles, they are awful. Try to move it away.
00:29:507 (9) - New combo.
00:53:852 (1) - WTF? Very quick slider
00:59:015 (6) - New combo.
01:02:950 (7) - New combo.
01:03:442 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:245 (9) - New combo.
01:15:737 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:17:212 (7) - New combo.
01:23:114 (8) - ^
01:47:950 (7) - ^
01:59:999 (6) - ^

•Kakkon•
02:35:655 (1) - Wrong spacing.

•Rina•
00:08:360 (6) - New combo.
00:13:770 (4) - ^
00:14:999 (2) - ^
00:19:671 (5) - ^
00:21:638 (6) - ^
00:29:507 (3) - ^
00:33:934 (5) - ^
00:43:278 (6,1) - Wrong spacing.
00:45:737 (5) - New combo.
00:59:507 (8) - ^
01:10:327 (1) - 1 grid left?
01:10:573 (2) - 1 grid left and 1 up?
01:17:212 (8) - New combo.
01:20:901 (4) - ^
01:23:114 (5) - ^
01:24:589 (7) - Awful heart.
01:44:261 (3) - New combo.
01:48:688 (7) - Move this slider on the following white tick and new combo.
01:52:130 (2) - ^
01:53:360 (1) - ^
01:56:065 (7) - Move this slider on the following white tick and new combo.
01:58:032 (1) - Wrong spacing.
02:01:966 (1) - ^
02:22:130 (6) - New combo.
02:27:786 (5) - ^
02:29:261 (4) - ^
02:37:868 (7) - ^
02:45:245 (5) - ^

Star~

你的COMBO数啊。。。。要好好搞一下。
音量线..我觉得这种搞法有点怪怪的..不过这个我不擅长- -

Kakkon
00:08:360(6,7)这里有点微妙，建议还是6踩白线到00:08:360，7拖到00：09：835
00:33:442(x)加个NOTE？
00:34:917(x)^
00:43:278(6)spacing
00:46:720(6)new combo
00:56:311(6)减少一个折返？并且02:18:934也是一样的问题，这后面有的有折返有的没，觉得还是统一一下比较好
01:21:638(6)这边的COMBO数感觉都比较需要改...好吧NEW COMBO
01:45:983(3,4,5,6)spacing并且对齐
01:53:360(3,4,5,6,7)^并且 new combo

Rina 这难度感觉spacing多多少少有点问题，需要检查
01:10:573(2)spacing
02:29:999(1,2,2)对齐

Shiika
00:29:507(9) NEW COMBO ?不过这个有点前后不搭
00:41:925(5,6,7,8) 下一格
01:30:990 (1)这里跟后半部分不对应。要不这里往后退，加个NOTE。要不后面往前拉，删掉那个NOTE

后面要么作完要么剪掉吧。
半夜不能玩。只MOD下先。
泪包加油。

STAR

[General]:

1. Source: Mushi Uta
2. ED可以放在Tags里
3. 需要一个更简单的难度

[Rina]:

1. 00:23:114 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
2. 00:55:573 - KIAI和normal hitsounds的使用建议从这里开始
3. 00:55:081 (3,4,5) - spacing
4. 00:57:786 (3,4,5,6) - ^
5. ....note间距要尽量保持一致 否则HR下会很难看
6. 01:24:589 (10) - 不美观..
7. 02:18:196 - KIAI和normal从这里开始好点
8. 02:57:540 (T) - KIAI这里结束

[Kakkon]:

1. note声音突然出现和消失很让人费解...可以降低升高 但是几乎没有是不好的
2. 01:06:393 (6,7) - 这个跳有点Orz
3. KIAI和Normal hitsounds不再指出

[Shiika]:

1. 00:53:852 (1) - unrankable spinner...太短了 test下转不够2000
2. 02:16:474 (1) - ^

节奏掌握的不错 最高难的海沟跳看起来好看 好不好玩就不清楚了...

It will be better if you cut unwanted part(unplayed) of the song out.(~1:30 mins )

[Rin]
decrease overall difficulty by 1?


[Shiika] very hard for mouse user - -*
01:53:160 - add note here?
02:19:717 - add note here?
02:27:422(1) - delete overlap note here...
00:25:406 - add note here?

nice~*

already fixed it. and add a new diff
thank for all

General
- 去掉countdown?
- 刪掉.osb 檔案後full-submit

Senri
00:37:914 (5) - spacing
00:45:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - 最好不要easy裡面jump o.o
02:12:340 (6) - spacing
02:08:406 (1,2,3,4) - 同00:45:783

Rina
00:43:323 (6) - spacing
02:10:373 (6) - ^
02:29:307 (4) - ^
02:53:652 (x) - spinner在這裡開始?

Kakkon
00:38:652 (8) - 增長至00:39:143?
00:57:340 (1) - no clap
01:06:684 (7) - 個人覺得不太好D: 跳太遠了
01:25:619 (5) - spacing

Shiika
00:53:775 (1) - 短spinner接大跳o.o...好觸
kiai跟音量麻煩參考前面的難度XD 我有點懶的再寫一次hahaha

整體上來說不錯

因为破笔记本各种触摸屏 我刚刚发现lol
基本上修改完了

nice song~

[Senri]

00:37:176 (4,5) - Aimod spacing
00:54:389 - this kiai time volume 70~80%
00:57:586 (4) - new combo
01:09:389 (1) - this spinner end 01:10:865 -
01:21:193 (4) - New combo
02:17:258 - this kiai time volume 70~80%


[Rina]

00:19:717 (5) - New combo
00:59:307 (7) - ^
01:06:930 (5) - ^
02:37:176 (4) - ^
02:40:373 (9) - ^
02:45:045 (4) - ^
02:54:881 (1) - add finsih

[Kakkon]

goo


+Star

[General]
1) delete the .osb file
2) consider to disable the countdown in 4 diffs? (seems this song is not suitable for countdown...the strong man is shouting "are you ready" when the background music is really soft.)
3) consider to slience the sliderside by adding a slient silderside file?
4) all red timing section should be the same in different difficulties.

[Senri]
00:03:98 delete 1 red timing section
00:45:783 (4,1) check spacing ( no such a big jump in [Easy] or [Normal] plz)
01:11:111 (1,1) 1/2 note after spinner is not suitable for [Easy] and [Normal]
02:16:029 (1) end this spinner at 02:17:258 and let the kiai time start here. also, delete 02:17:258 (1) ( 1/4 note after a spinner is not allowed in [Easy] or [Normal] )

[Rina]
00:35:332 delete this timing section?

[Kakkon]
00:29:553 (1) too close to 00:29:061

[Shiika]
00:05:57 useless timing section? or you forgot to make changes?
01:34:10 ^
02:06:930 (4,5,6,7,8) a little bit hard to read.
02:48:734 (3,4,5) check spacing


Star.
P.S. seems you have made some changes when I was modding lol, hope my suggestions are still effective.

Overall:
tag里写Anime就行。吧ED去掉

[Senri]
00:03:980 为什么这里有重复的两条timing?去掉一个多余的。
00:03:980 --->> 00:35:455 可以适当的加一些soft-whistle
01:42:340 --->> 02:16:029 ^

[Rina]
开始部分和[Senri]一样使用soft-hit听起来比较好。
高潮部分可以使用Normal-hit.柔和部分全部使用soft-hit.

[Kakkon]
00:28:570 (1,2,3) - remove clap.首先soft-clap不适合柔和部分的节奏；其次连续的下soft-clap是忌讳；最后，请按照自身的判断来解读我的建议。
00:30:783 (1,3,5) - ^

[Shiika]
根据上述说的也相应修改下hitsound.
图本身没多少问题，作为第一张图来说，已经很不错了。

Star!

延迟...

[Senri]
00:11:848 (1) - finish in end.
00:13:816 (2) - ^
00:24:143 - whistle.
00:26:111 - ^
00:27:586 (5) - finish in end.
00:29:553 (6) - ^
00:45:045 (4,1) - (1) must be closed to (4).
01:14:799 (5) - clap in end.
01:15:783 (6) - ^
01:29:061 (5) - clap in start and end.
01:52:176 (3) - whistle.
01:54:143 (5) - whistle in start.
01:55:619 (6) - whistle in center.
02:02:012 (7) - remove whistle.
02:02:504 (1) - whistle in center.
02:05:453 - whistle.
02:07:914 (7) - ^
02:09:881 (4) - ^
02:16:029 (1,1) - spinner + fast bit not good for easy, and spinner really so fast for easy.
02:45:783 - clap.
02:47:750 - ^
02:49:717 - finish.
02:53:898 (1) - ^

[Rina]
00:03:979 - 00:35:332 need more hitsounds, use whistle and finish.

all fine about spacing.

[Kakkon]
00:19:717 (1,2,3,4) - Edit > Flip Horizontally.
00:25:619 (5,1) - so close.
00:29:061 (3,1) - ^
01:02:258 (4,5,1) - compare spacing, i think that too so close.
01:30:537 (7) - put that slider away of (6).
02:27:094 (6,1) - so close.

[Shiika]
01:43:324 (4,5,6,7,8) - where claps?
01:51:193 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:08:406 (1,2,3,4) - that bits out of border, that not correct, put it on border.

I like hitsounds in last difficulty.

Star~

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
timing上感到一定的late，大概+8ms. 另第一个kiai结束应该在01:31:029
很多重叠的问题……这个如果你不是直接从之前的结束点（主要是指slider）直接拉的话，就要关掉grid snap自己仔细对齐，建议各难度都复核一遍。
音效上……上传了两个，我不知道这两个音效会不会有比较好的配合？（主要指前面偏静的部分），sliderslide音考虑消掉吧

[Senri]
前面可以考虑多些whistle，整体建议new combo可以多用点
00:32:012 (2,3,4) - 美观需求，样例1：

00:33:980 (4,1) - spacing
00:45:045 (4,1) - ^,顺带一提，13不对称的，差一格
00:47:750 (5) - 如果仍然这个结构的话，new combo
02:50:701 (2) - 右上一？后面也跟着变动

[Rina]
感觉要用到0.9 Stack Lenienc，如果这样的话请全难度统一。
01:11:111 (4) - nazi,上一格。后边跟着变动。顺便这数字好喜。
01:28:078 (3,4) - 这俩slider倾斜角不一样啊。。orz，这时复制粘贴了来摆吧。
01:45:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 2下一3左一6右一，应该好些。
02:37:668 (3) - 左上一
02:52:422 (3,4,5,6) - 很奇怪，自己调下吧。

[Kakkon]
这歌可能适合更多的用二连而不是三连，另外三连的摆法可以多样点，比如一个 1/4 slider带进下一个长slider做三连
我觉得间距大了。。
00:15:045 (1) - 爆音了，以及其他几个soft拉到100的地方也是，调低吧
00:45:783 (7) - new combo
01:30:045 (6) - ^
02:52:668 (6) - ^

[Shiika]
用默认的normal-hitnormal再开始做出的那些三连五连各种不好听。强烈建议改。可以考虑默认whistle配自定义finish（风铃）和clap，已上传……另就是默认clap的契合度也比较糟糕，但没到受不了
间距我只表示彩笔压力很大……
01:06:684 (6,7,8) - 6 new combo, 另6 8 明显不对称……另就是这个布局出现了很多次？是刻意的吗
01:29:061 (5,6) - spacing
02:18:242 (5) - new combo

后面两个难度实在不知道怎么nazi或者怎么spacing……hitsounds要改的话大概就需要比较大的改动了（尤其最后一个）
Edit:……没给星只是我失误没点而已……不过既然recheck就稍微加点吧……最后难度加了前面的hitsounds。。。合不合口味怎么用都随你了


Download: hitsounds.rar

Download: Satou Hiromi - Sayonara (Mokou_Fujiwara) [Shiika hitsounds].osu

Hello Mokou_Fujiwara.

[All difficulties]
00:55:627(x) - Start Kiai here?
02:18:250(x) - ^

[Senri]
00:45:791 (1) - Fix the spacing here.You can switch off the Distance Snap on (2,3,4) as you did,but this one must be spaced right.Anyway,it's too unexcpected.
02:14:315 (7) - Allign better,please.
02:17:266 (1) - What a jump on 1.5 star map? Well,I don't mind,better wait for BAT's conclusion.

[Rina]
01:12:102 (6) - Allign.
02:03:004 (2) - Use auto-allign.
02:10:381 (6) - Allign.
02:38:660 (5) - ^

[Kakkon]
00:42:594 (8) - Allign better.
02:18:987 (6) - Use auto-allign.

[Shiika]
Well,the same concept as above.The rest of your sliders need to be alligned better.I've listed the most visible,but probably I missed some,so you better check precisely by yourself.And another one...2,4 slider velocity? Oh,please,kill me.

Good luck,have a star~

all fixed. thanks

Hi~

[General]
不太喜欢难度的名称,这样用看不出难易度.

[All diff]
00:55:627 - Start KIAI here?
02:18:250 - Start KIAI here?
Try hitsound pattern like what I'm saying in Senri?

[Senri]
Turn volume up a little bit?
00:45:053 (4) - Move it closer to 1?
01:30:545 (1) - Start at next white tick and add note here?

Hitsound mod
[Rina]
Make note spacing perfectly unified?
01:12:102 (6) - Put right under 5?
02:03:004 (2,3) - Move away from end of 1?
02:49:725 - Add note?

[Kakkon]
OD +1?
00:19:233 (4) - 1 grid up?

[Shiika]
Work hard on hitsound plz.

贴上来才发现是天朝人...我...
作为第一张图很不错的,真是后生可畏> <
Costom hitsound的声音很不错,就是一定要用在适合的地方,加油~
STAR~

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • Open all .osu files and change...
  
  SPOILER

  //Background Colour Transformations
  3,100,82,103,84
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 186,169,254
  Combo2 : 160,215,134
  Combo3 : 236,238,142
  
  • Remove "Anime" from tags becouse it's the genre.
  • If you could get an mp3 that is not cut off at the end, that would be awesome.

[Kakkon]

• • 00:28:086 (3,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
  • 00:29:069 (3,1) - ^
  • 00:55:135 (2) - Delete this slider

Hi

Senri
00:50:463 (1) - Add finish maybe?

Rina
Looks good

Kakkon
00:24:151 (4,5) - HATE the whistles in these repeating sliders. Replace with claps please.
00:32:020 (6,7) - Same here. Normal whistles in a song this soft... Just no. Put soft whistles or normal claps, please. However, normal whistles may be able to sound well in the chorus.
01:50:217 (1) - Whistles sound better around here because the song loses it's quiet overtone around here. Just saying

Shiika
00:35:463 (1,2,3) - This whole part here just doesn't fit the music well enough. Consider remapping these 3 notes.
00:45:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - O_o tough jumps.
02:53:906 (1) - Add finish

Also consider chopping off the part of the mp3 that's not used. Most likely BATs or MATs avoid bubbling or pubbling because of this.

嘛，沙包路过，泪包加油><

酱油路过么lol

Hello.

my mod

Thismap is very nice overal.
star & gi

star

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vvvv

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.....

加油！喵！

我来帮忙

>< star~

K触好触

star

star~

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.

[General]
Add some Tags.
02:57:717 - 04:23:575 - Delete this part from the .mp3 if you won't map it.

[Senri]
00:08:414 (5) - The repeats don't fits the song nor the voice.
00:21:692 (4) - New Combo.

For the rest is fine.

star

[General]
*54589 feels just a wee bit late for the preview point. It's usually best to step back a 1/4th beat or so to give the music fade-in some leeway. Perhaps try 54397 instead? (on the red tick)
*The offset isn't on the downbeat. Use 2512 instead.
*Please make kiai end consistently between difficulties. Also, perhaps end it either before or after the spinners rather than in the middle of them.

[Senri]
00:15:053 (3,4) - Perhaps make this a slider so that the single red tick notes aren't as unpredictable? :v (Plus, the first time this was around (00:06:938) you had notes mapped to the white ticks instead...)
00:35:955 (2) - Maybe extend this to (3)?
00:37:184 (4,5) - spaced too far away from each other (the other notes have 1 beat spacing between each, but these are only half a beat yet the same exact distance spacing is used...)
00:44:561 (3) - Now that the pattern has been established, keeping this as a single note is fine (but perhaps finish it like the last time?)
00:48:250 (1) - Due to the low overall difficulty, spinners like this one (that is, spinners that should really start on the previous note but don't) fade in slower, so perhaps move this back to the red tick and extend appropriately?
00:50:463 (1) - ^ but to the white tick
01:09:397 (1) - this spinner is fine compared to the above :p
01:11:365 (1) - but this is a bit far from the center of that spinner...
01:15:791 (6) - second repeat is a bit hard to see due to 5's hitburst
01:30:545 (1) - I think that this would look better starting a white tick later (so put a note or extra repeat at 01:30:545) and also with the entire thing silenced instead of just the end.
02:53:906 (1) - I'd silence this with 0 volume soft set and then add an inherited section on the blue tick before the ending for a normal finish (possibly also with a kiai fountain? :3)

[Rina]
00:55:627 (5) - New phrase; New combo as a general rule :B
01:11:365 (5,6) - not stacked properly; and new combo (5) like above?
01:31:283 (1) - same silence suggestion as the last diff
02:02:020 (1,2,3,4,5) - restack
02:08:414 (4,5,6) - ^
02:18:250 (5) - new combo
02:33:988 (5) - ^
02:37:922 (4,5) - restack
02:53:660 (1) - same silence suggestion +kiai

[Kakkon]
00:41:856 (7,8) - restack
00:50:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest spacing these closer to show that 6 will be 0.5x bpm
00:55:627 (3) - new combo
01:08:414 (3) - second repeat covered up by 2's hitburst (which is unrankable btw)
01:31:283 (1) - silence
02:10:381 (5) - show that this is 0.5xbpm better somehow ;x (or make it 1x)
02:13:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - space closer to show that 6 is 0.5x
02:18:250 (5) - new combo
02:33:988 (4) - ^
02:39:397 (8,9) - restack
02:53:906 (1) - same silence suggestion +kiai

[Shiika]
*same spacing for 0.5x bpm suggestions
00:55:627 (5) - new combo
01:29:561 (6) - move back to the blue tick and extend
01:31:037 (1) - silence
02:05:709 (1,2) - restack
02:07:922 (7) - ^
02:16:406 (1) - pointless near-ninja spinner imo (even though it technically hits 2000 bonus orz)
02:33:988 (4) - new combo
02:52:184 (5) - move back to the blue tick and extend
02:53:906 (1) - same silence suggestion +kiai

哇 小泪包去做我做过的歌曲嘛? 加油啊, 需要的话来找我吧?

...那些whistle clap都是什么.....

你去参考一下我的吧. 节奏和音效很主要地......

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/13555

Mystearica wrote:

哇 小泪包去做我做过的歌曲嘛? 加油啊, 需要的话来找我吧?

...那些whistle clap都是什么.....

你去参考一下我的吧. 节奏和音效很主要地......

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/13555

嗯嗯 有一部分是参照了点泪姐的啊=A=~

完全看不出出来 >_>

我真的一点也找不到节奏和音效是怎么下的 ._.

不过和我做第一张时候差不多D:

我觉得你应该慢慢去了解这首歌然后再重新下一次节奏.

lol
我去反省 这难道就是对歌曲的理解不同么lol
我再去理解理解嗯

O.o/
The custom finish blended into the music well~
Considering you used the default soft-hitnormal, why not add the default soft-hitwhistle too? o.o?
ouendan whistles?

Senri-
00:47:758 (1) - I don't think the custom clap fits here... (maybe on 4 instead)... actually... remove this note and start the spinner here?
02:53:906 (1) - all... four diffs have this last spinner at different volumes and Rina even has the timing panel in the middle of the spinner...?
The claps in the kiai follow... an odd pace.. =/
Okay

Rina-
00:03:988 (1,2,3) - o.o why did you start with low spacing?
01:44:807 (4) - add the finish hitsound? o.o~
02:03:004 (2,3) - this stacks really poorly during play, don't stack theses? also, (3) has a slider slide whistle, I assume its not on purpose
02:38:660 (5) - stack this properly? or don't stack
=/ the clap also follows weird pace here... added with whistle, doesn't sound too bad once you get used to them ><
Good

Kakkon
00:28:447 - unused/unchanged timing panel?
01:06:201 (4,5,6) - space this out a bit better? (5-6 is a bit closer than 4-5...)
02:07:061 (3) - ... remove? if not, then at least add a hitsound to (4) then...
:< there's less custom finish hitsounds on this...
And is that whistle really the right choice for this song... :<
Stacking triplets under slider ends while 1/2 is... misleading for the most part x_x;
Fine

Shiika- lol jumps
00:20:832 (5,6) - xD this spacing is a bit different, move 6-7-8 up a tick? XD
01:10:381 (1,2,3,4) - huh, how did you determine where to place these.... try flipping one note to all four corners (Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J << try this for most of those jump patterns you have.. though it seems like you did use it for 02:08:414 (1,2,3,4)...)
01:11:487 (2,3) - nazi stream spacing~ (up a tick ><)
01:51:201 (4,5) - the stream is spaced a bit different here~ 5-6-7-8 right a tick?
Ehh, there's also less custom finish on this... and more whistles.. Dx
Good...

I still think the custom whistles don't fit... either of the maps... though you did place them fine... x_x;;

all fixed. changed the new hitsound .thanks

Star! =A=

NI HAO

[General]
Tags?

[Skin]
Add aproachcircle.png?

[Senri]
00:37:184 (4,5) - Too far between these two
00:47:266 (4,1) - Spacing error
00:57:594 (1) - Remove clap at start?
00:59:069 (2) - Clap?
00:59:561 (3) - Remove clap?
01:00:053 (4) - Clap at start and end?
01:01:528 (5) - Remove clap at start and end, and then add clap at repeatimg slider?
01:03:496 (2) - Remove clap at start?
01:04:971 (3) - Clap?
01:05:463 (4) - Remove clap?
01:05:955 (5) - Clap at start and end?
01:07:430 (6) - Remove clap?
01:07:922 (7) - Clap at start and end?
01:11:365 (1) - Remove clap and add finish?
01:11:856 (2) - Clap at start?
01:13:332 (3) - Remove clap?
01:13:824 (4) - Clap at start?
01:14:807 (5) - ^ and remove clap at end?
01:15:791 (6) - Clap at start and 2nd repeating slider?
01:17:758 (7) - Clap at start and end?
01:19:725 (2) - Clap?
01:20:217 (3) - Remove clap?
01:21:201 (1) - ^
01:21:692 (2) - Clap?
01:22:184 (3) - Remove clap?
01:22:676 (4) - Clap?
01:23:168 (5) - Remove clap at start and end, and then clap at repeating slider?
01:24:643 (6) - Clap at 2nd repeating slider?
01:52:184 (3) - New combo?
02:01:037 (5) - New combo, it's too long for easy diff
02:06:447 (4) - ^
02:23:168 (5) - Forgot clap at repeating slider?
02:35:955 (4) - New combo, it's too long for easy diff

[Rina]
00:08:414 (2,3,4) - Spacing error here
00:27:102 (7,1) - ^
00:28:086 (2) - Is not stacked with 1 at the end
00:30:053 (4) - Is not stacked with 3 at the end
00:37:676 (5,1) - Spacing error here
00:43:332 (6,1) - ^
00:56:365 (2,1) - ^
01:04:233 (5,1) - ^
01:12:102 (6,1) - ^
01:14:069 (3) - Is not stacked with 2 at the end
01:17:266 (8,1) - Spacing error here
01:42:840 (2) - Is not stacked with 1 at the end
01:48:250 (7,1) - Spacing error here
01:54:643 (6,7) - ^
01:56:119 (7,1) - ^
02:10:381 (6) - Is not stacked with 5 at the end
02:18:987 (2,1) - Spacing error here
02:25:135 (9,1) - ^
02:26:856 (4,1) - ^
02:26:856 (4) - Is not stacked with 3 at the end
02:34:725 (6,1) - Spacing error here
02:38:660 (5) - Is not stacked with 4 at the end
02:42:594 (4,1) - Spacing error here
02:49:725 (9,1) - ^

[Kakkon]
Circle Size +1? And please open AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) and fix those spacing issue, if the line is red, it's issue, if it's green, it's fine.

02:39:397 (8) - Is not stack with 7 at the end

[Shiika]
Jump 0.0

00:45:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Evil jump, crop it
00:54:643 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:45:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:17:266 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Good song
STAR

hiromiiiii

Normalwhistle and normalclap don`t fit the song at all
Shiika is overmapped too
Kakkon`s beginning part sounds good. i think you can follow that feeling to fix your map

Alace wrote:

Normalwhistle and normalclap don`t fit the song at all
Shiika is overmapped too
Kakkon`s beginning part sounds good. i think you can follow that feeling to fix your map

Yeah. So I tried to remap it.Just wait a while

omg

改完offset记得对齐绿线

[Rina]
02:30:761 (2) - wtf...这样太阴了吧ol

除了有些挤以外问题不大，可以考虑把note摆开一点?

[Kakkon]
00:10:381 (3) - 把3的头放在1的折返的中间怎么样?看下面~ 顺便2的位置也往右一格
00:45:761 (1,2,3,4) - 2贴的1太近了导致1234之间的spacing好像不一致>.>把2往下一点
01:04:449 (6) - 这个slider往下面拉一点吧 显得和1之间很拥挤
01:30:023 (5) - 感觉藏在4里面有点不大好看0.0
01:52:646 (3) - 微调 往左一点
01:58:056 (1,2,3) - 其实这种节奏出现很多呢>.> 改成这样如何?
如果用的话很多地方都要改一下0.0
02:19:203 (5) - 这个挡到了后面 而且从这边开始都很挤啊...
02:28:056 (2) - ^
02:47:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 说实话OA这么低 这样放感觉很不好打>.>

[Shikkai]
唔...节奏问题跟上一个难度差不多>.>
00:35:187 (X) - 这里感觉空空的 加个NOTE?
00:41:335 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这连打摆的..
02:04:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

有点超过>.>

[General]
长白线不在每小节第一拍上嘻嘻,为了防止被某些人挑刺offset应该为2482嘻嘻
应该把歌后面不用的部分切掉嘻嘻?
我发现谱一开始那几十个note都是一样的?嘻嘻,咦不对很多note都一样的么嘻嘻
normal-hitnormal.wav跟normal-sliderslider.wav你还要么嘻嘻?不要就删了吧嘻嘻

[Senri]
作为Easy也是难了嘻嘻

[Rina]
太阴人了作为Normal+嘻嘻
00:41:826(6) - 关掉whistle嘻嘻，太恶心了嘻嘻
01:09:859(x) - 为什么不加一个note嘻嘻
02:04:449(6) - spacing错误嘻嘻

[Kakkon]
除了F4外note的摆放跟最后一个难度差不多嘻嘻?KIAI开始的白线三连太沉重了嘻嘻，这难度可以删去很多白线开始的三连打嘻嘻
02:49:449(7) - ._.嘻嘻

[Shiika]
00:24:121(3) - 0.5x+1/1过渡不大好?嘻嘻
00:41:949(4,5,6,7,8,9,10),02:04,449(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ._.嘻嘻
01:09:982 to 01:10:228 - 这里直接串到底会更好嘻嘻
02:32:605 to 02:32:851 - ^嘻嘻


纯骗kudosu嘻嘻所以想给就给嘻嘻

SamiPale wrote:

[General]
长白线不在每小节第一拍上嘻嘻,为了防止被某些人挑刺offset应该为2482嘻嘻
应该把歌后面不用的部分切掉嘻嘻?
我发现谱一开始那几十个note都是一样的?嘻嘻,咦不对很多note都一样的么嘻嘻
normal-hitnormal.wav跟normal-sliderslider.wav你还要么嘻嘻?不要就删了吧嘻嘻

[Senri]
作为Easy也是难了嘻嘻

[Rina]
太阴人了作为Normal+嘻嘻
00:41:826(6) - 关掉whistle嘻嘻，太恶心了嘻嘻
01:09:859(x) - 为什么不加一个note嘻嘻
02:04:449(6) - spacing错误嘻嘻

[Kakkon]
除了F4外note的摆放跟最后一个难度差不多嘻嘻?KIAI开始的白线三连太沉重了嘻嘻，这难度可以删去很多白线开始的三连打嘻嘻
02:49:449(7) - ._.嘻嘻

[Shiika]
00:24:121(3) - 0.5x+1/1过渡不大好?嘻嘻
00:41:949(4,5,6,7,8,9,10),02:04,449(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ._.嘻嘻
01:09:982 to 01:10:228 - 这里直接串到底会更好嘻嘻
02:32:605 to 02:32:851 - ^嘻嘻


纯骗kudosu嘻嘻所以想给就给嘻嘻

<_< 你這是隨便mod的吧

这首歌很好听啊~ 图很美~
那么多SP...本来说了是≤20的……可是刚刚更改成≤∞了...还是mod吧

[General]
重音白线和重音没有对齐哦~(同上
[Senri]
如果这图是定位成NM的话...缩小圈圈大小1格
00:23:138 (1,2,3,4) - 排得好密...很难看清
00:54:613 (1) - 移上点?
01:02:974 (1,3) - 交换combo
01:18:712 (1,3) - ^
[Rina]
00:11:826 (1) - 被挡住了……
00:19:695 (1,3) - 交换combo
00:30:023 (3) - clap
00:41:826 (6) - slider side的声音好难听...
01:04:203 (4) - 轻微遮挡
01:12:072 (2) - 严重遮挡 hidden玩家会恨死你的...
02:29:531 (6) - 阴人啊...
02:30:761 (2) - ...
02:44:531 (3) - 轻微遮挡
[Kakkon]
00:30:023 (3) - clap
00:55:720 (2) - delete it...这里不太适合1/4连打
02:18:343 (2) - ^

LOL

star~

~STAR~

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