Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[SB]
Nice 'n simple.
Is all that transparency on the right of the all images necessary? asking

[Easy]
00:52:097 (2,1,2) - Hrm, maybe try to rearrange these so there isn't so much overlap (especially on 1)?
01:17:392 (5) - Add finish on end of spinner
01:27:980 (2) - Maybe be confusing for new players as to when the repeating part is going to end. let it be a challenging part for new players?
No break? is a short song, so I think it's fine

[NormalPLUS]
Ugh, the stacks with the huge hit circles and low OD make this kind of annoying to read. circle size+1
00:57:980 (3) - Snap the end of this slider to 1/6 and move it to 00:58:372. yeah, you found that~!
01:15:627 (1) - Spacing.
No break?

[Hard]
01:40:333 (3) - It took me three tries before I finally realized this note was here. Kind of a downer to lose to something like that so close to the end. moved 01:40:333 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)
Rest is nice, though.

[Special]
Sweet.

Nice set you have here. I just didn't like the way Normal looked.

kiddly wrote:

:) yeah 好歌

[Storyboard]
淡入淡出只用一帧感觉有点突兀,有些歌词交替的时间点也不是很好.
我稍微修改了一点,可以参考下:
[attachment=0:62594]Yuuki Aira - Miageru ano sora de (Vikon).osb[/attachment:62594]
记得备份之前的文件. 我的眼比較殘，看了幾遍也找不到分別 囧,遲一點再找其他人商議一下.

[Skin]
我感觉圈有那么一点太大了……有点影响判定. 我改圖技巧很差，改完全很可怕，所以不冒險了
好像影响也不是很大,所以我也就提一提不强求你修改.

[Easy]
没啥问题.

[Normal+]
00:58:862 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 摆法不是很好.
首先00:59:450 (1,2,3) 跟00:58:862 (4,5,1) 相同时间距离差太多,然后01:00:333 (5,1,2,3)这种对新手玩来
说是有点小迷惑的.
01:15:627 (1,2) - 再隔远点更容易读.

[Hard]
00:29:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 音量渐强再渐弱,效果更好. 好提議!!

[Climbb's Special]
fine.

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Easy]
00:59:156 (3,4) - spacing?
01:34:450 (2,3,4) - nazi spacing.
01:40:921 (8) - 不是很确定,但我觉得去了尾音whistle好一点.

[Normal+]
太难了也太挤了.这么多note OA感觉至少要5,spacing也是拉开点好...至于星数,啊哈哈 OA加了1(避免有3個[I]圖示所引起的誤會-_-), 而spacing, 我遲一點再考慮一下
00:24:745 (7) - 尾音whistle消了?
01:14:156 (5,6,7) - 看不出67是两circle还是slider. 我覺得還可以 (個人意見)
01:27:686 (4,5,6,7) - 阅读不能. 其實這是否顏色的問題? 我加了new combo和移開了一點, 使它們變清晰了
01:32:392 (1,2,3,4) - 也很难.. 轉了combo顏色 和移開了

[Hard]
Slider Tick Rate用0.5比较好,另我觉得这个难度其实比N+简单... 囧 N+我能打出SS,但[H]有可能會fail的 (沙包萬歲~!)
01:36:215 (7) - new combo不然还是正常间距吧.

[Climbb]
我居然没能看出nazi...orz...写的真的好少...

Clare wrote:

hihi
漂亮的SKIN > < THX~

[Easy]
01:39:450 (1) - new combo? 原本已經new combo了 囧

[Normal+]
fine

[Hard]
00:16:803 (3) - 這個slider是不是歪了- -? 眼力真好~!

[Climbb's Special]
00:24:742 (5) - 這個sliderslide是故意讓他有聲音的嗎?靜音感覺好點? 我去問一問

GOOOOOOD MAP !!
GOOOOOOD JOB !!
star!!!

banvi wrote:

Hello

Easy
I think okay
Normal+
01:07:392 (4,5) spacing is a bit close.
01:27:097 (2,3) spacing
Hard
00:48:568 (1) remove new combo?
Climbb's special
01:17:674 (2,4) 1 grid up?
01:18:556 (5,6) 1 grid right?

nicemap & skin ~
star & gl

Lissette wrote:

Climbb's Special
BPM should be the same in all difficulties seems I press a wrong button when I edit this diff XD!

Hard
00:31:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - long combo ><..... 00:33:274 - here should start another combo ^^ (i know is an end of a slider, but i'm just saying where should be) try to fix next combos too, seems too random to me remapped
00:38:862 (1) - remove new combo

Easy
00:25:921 (5) - remove note
00:29:450 (1) - too short spinner for easy, also 00:31:215 (1) - to near to the spinner for easy change spinner to slider , and remove 00:31:215 (1)
01:37:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - too long combo for easy

lovely song/map.... but i noticed you have problem setting combos, Yes XD!
a little advice, try to set combos evenly, like for example every four beats maybe..... the thing is, you have in some parts end of sliders where should start a combo, so maybe if you fix those, need to re-map some parts >< its up to you ^^ I remap some part, thx~

good luck
Star!!

Mystearica wrote:

You should use sounds and rhythm more consistently. there is a pattern of the hitsound, and they repeated

Your mp3 is cut very suddenly...go back to the full version, cut a bit longer and add a fade out then add about 2 seconds of silence time at the end of the fade on the mp3 file. I have considered this question when I cut the mp3, so there is a fade out already, and after the fade out,the lyric begins again, so I can't include a silence time

[Easy]

This should be called Normal IMO. at the beginner, this is called [Normal], but I asked and the respond is, called [Easy] is more acceptable

Use softwhistles instead of normal-normalhit until the drums start? You should start using normal-hitnormal beginning 00:40:333 in my opinion, it doesn't sound so fitting to me before that. good idea

Kiai fountains rankable here? I think yes, and I am only worrying about the kiai time in the end whether it is rankable

[Normal+]

This should be called Hard, it's got too many 1/4s

00:38:274 (1,2,3,4) - Remove these finishes and use whistles please I think this part is fine..
00:55:921 (1,2,3,4) - See here you used whistles and it sounds great, you need to ensure consistency~

Okay I'm sure those kiai bursts here are unrankable per current kiai standards, any BAT confirm this? ^

[Hard]

Hard -> Insane.

Too many soft finishes...use them where the music has a finish.

00:29:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Whistles instead please yes, that's better~

Again kiai notice here.

[Special]

Well...I could pick on the hitsounds at the start, but it's mainly the same issues, you used stuff where there are no sounds in the music but when there are sounds in the music you didn't use your own sounds, so I'd suggest consistency again but meh, leave it if you want.
I woukld like to ask for more modders..... thx for pointing out that,

I still love the song ;_;

sorry for disappointing you.... , but I think the hitsound is not bad.....

Mystearica wrote:

I'll map this song for myself later, purely for fun and it won't be uploaded, so I'll share my version with you if you'd like

It's fine, you're not disappointing me, no worries Good luck!

• 00:37:980(3):去掉Slider最后的Finish
  01:20:921(4,1,2,3,4,5):一连串1/2 note对于Easy来说太难了
  01:42:392(1):建议这个Spinner停在01:46:215（其他难度也是）

• 01:00:333(5,1,2):换成一个Repeat Slider 后面有些1/4拍note也最好换成Slider

• 00:40:039(4,6,8):我觉得这些Slider还是对称更美观些
  00:43:715(2):去掉Whistle
  00:53:274(2):去掉Slider后面的Finish
  01:36:215(1,2,3):拖得离6远点
  01:44:303(7):去掉Slider开头的Finish

• 太精彩了 挑不出任何问题

1. hitcircle-overlay.png是不是小了一圈? 看上去hitcircle.png也没有裁好边...

1. 01:17:097 (4,5) - 合体成为一个新的slider吧..
2. 其实这个难度感觉x0.8的 spacing会很难读 加到1.0或者1.2再排一次会好很多
3. 01:42:392 (1) - 这个感觉很奇怪 结束在01:46:803会好很多 但是这样很长 那么01:44:450开始 之前用note来补充

1. 01:15:186 (1) - 这个让reverse arrow更明显点吧
2. 结尾spinner参考Easy

1. 01:20:333这里应该有个note
2. 01:44:303 (7) - 延长至01:46:803

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. hitcircle-overlay.png是不是小了一圈? 看上去hitcircle.png也没有裁好边...

我後來也發覺尺寸不合，但覺得這樣較美 XD

[Easy]:

1. 01:17:097 (4,5) - 合体成为一个新的slider吧.. 改好了
2. 其实这个难度感觉x0.8的 spacing会很难读 加到1.0或者1.2再排一次会好很多 因為Normal在用0.9, Hard在用1.0, 所以.....
3. 01:42:392 (1) - 这个感觉很奇怪 结束在01:46:803会好很多 但是这样很长 那么01:44:450开始 之前用note来补充

用另一種方式改了，謝謝提點~

[Normal+]:

1. 01:15:186 (1) - 这个让reverse arrow更明显点吧移開了~
2. 结尾spinner参考Easy

如easy

[Hard]:

1. 01:20:333这里应该有个note 這裏果然應該有個note XD
2. 01:44:303 (7) - 延长至01:46:803

老板的没话说 ._.

star~

• - Miageru Ano Sora de?
  - 開Epilepsy warning._.
  

• 01:30:627 - 這個flash效果似乎不適合出現在這個時間點._.?
  00:21:509 - 求做一個spread out效果..例子: 00:40:333
  
  
  Easy
  [list:78e69]- 音效音量低的接近聽不到...求提高

• - 大寫 Normal

• - 嗯...希望下次note開始的地方不要在那麼...遠D:
  - Note重疊做的不夠好._. 例子: 00:25:921 (1,2,3) - 疊好會更好看..之類的

• 哎唷我擦, 難得爬b不是guest taiko啊:D

Krisom wrote:

Modding as requested on queue

[General] considering
The custom hitwhistle can't be heard that well, and it's a really nice custom hitsound, so try to tune it up a bit.
The hitcircle overlay is kinda weird. It's pretty, but the circle looks too big when a slider appears.
Also, make the sliderborders blue to match the hitcircle overlay's color?

[Easy]
Too much 1/2 for the easiest diff imo. the song is slow, I think it's fine.
01:42:392 (1) - Instead of silencing this spinner inmediatly, maybe make it fade away. good idea!

[Normal+] waiting for Saturio
00:40:627 (1) - Spacing
01:42:097 (1) - Finish

[Hard]
00:39:450 (1) - SSSSpacing. I know what you're trying to do here,but try this instead? good idea~
01:25:627 (1) - Spacing?Try this instead. I think my pattern is fine
01:26:803 (1) - ^? Try this instead. ^
You break the spacing for the sake of creating these beautiful patterns, but IMO you can create beautiful patterns wihout breaking. the spacing. Besides, this is just "Hard", right? yes, creating beautiful patterns without breaking the spacing is better, but I also think that a little jump is allowed in Hard ^^"

[Insane]
good

[Speacial]
Nice!

Star

Pokie wrote:

Genernal

• - Miageru Ano Sora de? 改名字很麻煩，反正不是英文，小階還蠻好看吧 (我在欺騙自己 囧~?
  - 開Epilepsy warning._.
  [attachment=0:f170a]vikon_01.jpg[/attachment:f170a]

這是啥, 不管了，開了再研究 見到標誌了. thx


Storyboard

• 01:30:627 - 這個flash效果似乎不適合出現在這個時間點._.?
  00:21:509 - 求做一個spread out效果..例子: 00:40:333
  遲點找小葉商談..
  
  Easy 好，讓我的耳朵慢慢研究一下
  [list:f170a]- 音效音量低的接近聽不到...求提高

01:21:215 (1) - 音量提高幅度求縮小


Sharon's

• - 大寫 Normal

改了


Hard

• - 嗯...希望下次note開始的地方不要在那麼...遠D: 嗯，謝了-_-之
  - Note重疊做的不夠好._. 例子: 00:25:921 (1,2,3) - 疊好會更好看..類的

印象中就算完全重疊了，因為stack leniency的緣故，也會疊得不好的，所以沒有疊得很小心


爬...climbb's

• 哎唷我擦, 難得爬b不是guest taiko啊:D

完結...>_>

samiljul wrote:

Hi :3
May I make Taiko diff?

Vikon wrote:

Sorry, I think there are enough difficulties and this song is not suitable for taiko 0_0'

1. Please set tick rate 2 on all difficulties.
2. The hitcircles in your skin are too big. See how they overhang beyond the slider track? This is misleading to the player since the actual clickable area is the same size.
3. Please don't make BOTH sliderslides and sliderticks silent. One or the other is tolerable.

1. Rename this "Sharon's Normal".

1. So many straight horizontal/vertical sliders, such as 00:26:215 (3) - , aren't exactly aligned. Please check them.
2. 00:28:274 (8) - This slow slider comes without anything to suggest.
3. 01:14:744 (1,2) - This weird kickcluster is confusing for a hard.
4. 01:26:509 (3,1) - Spacing.
5. 01:29:744 (3) - This slow slider comes without anything to suggest.
6. 01:35:921 (5) - ^

1. So many straight horizontal/vertical sliders, such as 00:09:745 (1) - , aren't exactly aligned. Please check them.
2. 00:28:274 (8) - This slow slider comes without anything to suggest.
3. 00:42:686 (3,4,5,1) - Spacing.
4. 00:43:862 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:50:627 (3) - This slow slider comes without anything to suggest.
6. 01:10:921 (1) - ^
7. 01:15:627 (3) - ^
8. 01:29:744 (1) - ^
9. 01:36:215 (1,2,3) - Spacing is confusing.

1. Looks fine.

MetalMario201 wrote:

All difficulties:

1. Please set tick rate 2 on all difficulties. i think using differant tick rate is fine
2. The hitcircles in your skin are too big. See how they overhang beyond the slider track? This is misleading to the player since the actual clickable area is the same size. Fixed
3. Please don't make BOTH sliderslides and sliderticks silent. One or the other is tolerable.

I think it's fine

Sharon's Normal+:

1. Rename this "Sharon's Normal".

Fixed
Hard:

1. So many straight horizontal/vertical sliders, such as 00:26:215 (3) - , aren't exactly aligned. Please check them. I think it's fine
2. 00:28:274 (8) - This slow slider comes without anything to suggest. Fixed
3. 01:14:744 (1,2) - This weird kickcluster is confusing for a hard. ^
4. 01:26:509 (3,1) - Spacing. using the same spacing with 01:22:980 (3,1,3,1,1,3,1) , so I think it's fine
5. 01:29:744 (3) - This slow slider comes without anything to suggest. Fixed
6. 01:35:921 (5) - ^

^

Insane:

1. So many straight horizontal/vertical sliders, such as 00:09:745 (1) - , aren't exactly aligned. Please check them. fine.
2. 00:28:274 (8) - This slow slider comes without anything to suggest. Fixed
3. 00:42:686 (3,4,5,1) - Spacing. Fixed
4. 00:43:862 (3,4) - ^ ^
5. 00:50:627 (3) - This slow slider comes without anything to suggest. ^
6. 01:10:921 (1) - ^ ^
7. 01:15:627 (3) - ^ ^
8. 01:29:744 (1) - ^ ^
9. 01:36:215 (1,2,3) - [color ^=#dd1100]Spacing is confusing.[/color]

Fixed

Climbb's Special:

1. Looks fine.

MetalMario201 wrote:

There a still a couple cosmetic inconsistencies with some objects having silent ticks and others not, but the mapper seems happy with this.

I'd always be happy if mappers would wait for next public for readable slider speeds, but this is still fine.

Bubble.

Alace wrote:

<Climbb's Special>
I suggest HD+2 and OD-1 (OD8 doesn`t really fit)
00:31:215 (2) - i can hear slider sound here. you can put the green line on the end of slider
01:41:803 (1) - I think you can set this spinner like easy or hard

<Sharon's Normal>
OD -2 ?

all fixed~

All diffs are big circles XD, i suggest that try to use different circle size to map next time Easy is large circle ~XD, and normal sized circle is too small for me 我是沙包 XD

Alace wrote:

OK ranked