Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)
  4. Beatmap Graveyard

Paramore - Misery Business

posted
Total Posts
91
show more
MaxwellDemon
osu! Alumni
903 posts
Here since the beginning
MaxwellDemon
Fix the BPM up, so it features the full rounded BPM~

Aside from that...

Hard

Maybe consider reducing circle size here? Because the screen looks very cluttered and confusing with those huge notes

00:26:95 (6,7,8,9) - Overlapping sliders. :(
03:01:98 (2,3,4,5) - Here again~

Insane
01:15:67 (4) - This is one confusing slider... but then, it is not the first one, so nevermind that. XD
03:17:06 (5) - Okay, this one is REAAAAAALLY confusing.

Anyway... I am afraid I can't bubble this~
Good map for a good song though!
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
Wow, this one is already 2 months up. :X
MaxwellDemon
osu! Alumni
903 posts
Here since the beginning
MaxwellDemon
Insane
03:17:06 (5) - Still doesn't know where this is starting and which direction to go. :(
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox

MaxwellDemon wrote:

Insane
03:17:06 (5) - Still doesn't know where this is starting and which direction to go. :(


And why is this slider in a ranked beatmap? I had the same problem, I didn't know which direction to go.

But if you look closely enough you know what to do. :P
MaxwellDemon
osu! Alumni
903 posts
Here since the beginning
MaxwellDemon
Well, depends on how old that map is... our guidelines weren't as harsh as now.

And I know I never rank a map like that, some BATs might have a slightly different guideline... but peppy disagrees with sliders like these. So, I am just following what the boss said~
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
asdhflasdjf#

I changed it, don't want to discuss. ¬_¬
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
*poke*
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
Om nom nom.
Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
1,975 posts
Joined July 2008
Cyclone
I don't like the blackish combo color. Hard to see.

Normal:

00:37:44 (2) - Start on the red tick. Extend slider to make up for this change.
00:40:21 (2) - Left 1/4 beat on timeline
01:14:98 (3) - Up to you, but this feels better shortened by 1/4 beat.
01:24:69 (4) - Assuming you are following the vocals here, shorten by 1 repeat.
01:52:61 (1) - I personally think this feel better shortened by 1/2 beat, and moved Right 1/2 beat on timeline. However, this is fine as is if you don't want to change it.
02:10:65 (3,4) - If the 4 is going to start on a blue tick, so should the 3 i think. In Hard you have the 4 on the white tick. Check this and decide which way you want it.

Hard:

Circles are approaching WAY too slowly. Increase overall by 2-3 notches

00:37:44 (2) - Start on the red tick. Extend slider to make up for this change.
01:16:63 (1,1,1) - Move right 1/4 beat on the timeline. The forth 1 does not move.
01:21:92 (3,4) - This is only a suggestion, you don't have to do this.. Remove the 4 and have the 3 have 2 more repeat arrows.
01:54:00 (6) - Extend the slider by 1/2 beat.
03:25:39 (3,4) - Shorten both by 1/4 beat
03:27:12 (1,1,1) - Move right 1/4 beat on the timeline. The forth 1 does not move.

Insane:

01:54:00 (8) - i personally think this feels better extended by 1/2 beat.
03:17:06 (5) - I'd say change this.
03:25:39 (3,4) - Shorten both by 1/4 beat

Mogs:

02:25:56 (3) - extend by 1/4 beat
Saturos
osu! Hall of Famer
1,630 posts
Here since the beginning
Saturos
Modded because I'd feel guilty if I didn't when posting an .osr.

Normal is fine now, imo. Insane, too, though I still hate the two overlapping sliders in the outro, as well as 03:17:06 (5).

Hard: Delete this map. Please? It's just so bad, really. The amount of work to make this rankable far exceeds the fact that it's a moot difficulty, anyway. Your Normal and Insane are enough, Hard didn't fill the space very well.

Now then, Mog's map. It's still awesome, and I will continue to replay it until I get a real S. However, attached is a fake S run including 2 slider breaks for fun. Oh well.

Download: Saturos - Paramore - Misery Business [Mogsworth's Insane] (20081008015940).osr
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
This beatmap's timing is good But little confusing.
especially
Mogsworth's Insane.

Hard- Last four beats are confusing. Because last two beats are spaced at same location.
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
Oh boy, this beatmap sure has a lots of mistakes. I should take my time when doing a beatmap. >_>

Anyway, I finally updated the beatmap.
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
*bump*
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
^
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
v
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
*bump*
Zerostarry
osu! Alumni
1,563 posts
Here since the beginning
Zerostarry
Bump this topic: If this box is checked, after the upload is complete and you click submit, your beatmap's topic will be bumped to the top of the relevant subforum's first page. This is to eliminate the need to post a message to your beatmap's thread in order to alert people that your beatmap has been updated. Therefore, bumping your thread both by this method and by posting in it at the same time is to be avoided. Furthermore, do not abuse this checkbox. Please be patient and only use it once every few days, preferably if your beatmap's thread is no longer visible in the subforum's first page.
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
I know that, I already stopped to bump my threads with posts.

Anyway, thanks for the useless post.
James
osu! Hall of Famer
4,371 posts
Joined January 2008
James
hope this wont reach 8 pages..

timing... OK!

all diffs: change that black combocolor to something else.

mog insane:
nothing wrong i just dont like it. good map otherwise.

insane:
00:32:32 (5) - change the position of the slider, im just making sure no unranking will happen. better safe than sad
01:06:48 (10,11) - this two too
01:14:98 (3,4) - change the slider, not approved by me
03:17:06 (5) - not sure what to do with this one, since you made this slider for 3 hours i guess. maybe i just let it slip through..
03:25:39 (3,4) - change this definitely
good map..

hard:
01:09:60 (3) - make the start and end MORE visible
01:14:98 (3,4) - change the slider
01:47:93 (4) - change
03:06:31 (2) - change
03:25:39 (3,4) - change
p.s. if youre going to make a dumbed down version with little changes, just remove the difficulty. it wastes irl time... :(


normal:
ew tons of repeating sliders, also this difficulty is not newbie friendly.. definitely
01:15:67 (4) - change
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox

James wrote:

hope this wont reach 8 pages..
I'm sorry that I made so many mistakes in this beatmap. :\ My new ones definitely are better.

Thanks for the help.
James
osu! Hall of Famer
4,371 posts
Joined January 2008
James
insane:
01:15:67 (4) - stop copying burai with his nasty sliders XD
03:25:39 (3) - "
***what i mean change is change the shape of the sliders~~~

almost there!
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
Am I allowed to do anything?

Gnah, I changed it because I finally want to get this horrible beatmap ranked. :\
James
osu! Hall of Famer
4,371 posts
Joined January 2008
James
youre not
Saturos
osu! Hall of Famer
1,630 posts
Here since the beginning
Saturos
I have no idea what you have against spinners, but every slider >1 second long fit much better into the map as spinners.

You can have your star back.
James
osu! Hall of Famer
4,371 posts
Joined January 2008
James
( peppy ) yuck
( Ivalsetto ) gross bro

@ the long white slider in insane (03:17:06 (5))
so it means you have to change all sliders like this in all difficulties into another one, maybe a spinner?

and follow the advice saturos gave. i think its better too..

oh yeah, inherit sliders + resnap everything + double check~
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
Yeah, whatever, changed.
CheeseWarlock
osu! Alumni
1,185 posts
Joined May 2008
CheeseWarlock
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
-__- Stop taking a look at this horrible beatmap and reply to one of my better and new ones.

I will change it as soon as I will stop raging.
Mogsy
osu! Alumni
3,450 posts
Here since the beginning
Mogsy
I'll fix it for you, see if it's up to your liking once I do so, Nharox.
Download: Paramore - Misery Business (Nharox) [Mogsworth's Insane].osu
Here's my difficulty, with hitsounds altered. Your difficulties are up next.
Download: Paramore - Misery Business (Nharox) [Normal].osu
Here's Normal. Not too much to change.

Mods, pl9x, once these difficulties are readded. >:

Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
Updated~
Dakeyrus
osu! Alumni
306 posts
Joined May 2008
Dakeyrus
Modding modding modding

Mog's Insane:

01:51:228 - (6) - This slider overlaps, and even with snaking sliders on it's hard to see which way it's going when it starts. Unrankable as is, sorry mogs!

Nharox's Hard:

01:46:893 - (1,2,3,4,5) - The placement of this combo needs to change, the spacing gets inconsistent to the point where it becomes very difficult to follow properly. Just spread it out a bit more.

Normal is fine.


Fix those, and I will bubble this for you.
Mogsy
osu! Alumni
3,450 posts
Here since the beginning
Mogsy
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Paramore - Misery Business (Nharox) [Mogsworth's Insane].osu
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
K, updated~
Dakeyrus
osu! Alumni
306 posts
Joined May 2008
Dakeyrus
Perfect guys, I'm happy with it as of those changes. Bubbled, let's hope for the best :)
Rolled
osu! Alumni
1,886 posts
Joined January 2008
Rolled
I have to pop the bubble for now because Mogs's difficulty has 0 stack leniancy. This is unrankable.

Other than that, and I apologize I don't mean to be rude, but I really do not like Mogs's difficulty at all. This is probably one of my favorite songs but I can't rank something that I can't even stomache long enough to finish the beatmap.

After the stack leniancy is fixed though anybody has my permission to rebubble (dake, mogs.) If I'm around just let me know and I will rebubble it. Not popping this just because nothing is really wrong other than stacking, but I just am not feeling the sliders at all.
Mogsy
osu! Alumni
3,450 posts
Here since the beginning
Mogsy
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Dakeyrus
osu! Alumni
306 posts
Joined May 2008
Dakeyrus
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Rolled
osu! Alumni
1,886 posts
Joined January 2008
Rolled
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mogsy
osu! Alumni
3,450 posts
Here since the beginning
Mogsy

Rolled wrote:

peppy wrote:

Post subject: Don't rank maps that disable stacking Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 2:00 am
I don't think that justifies as a bullshit reason to pop. I cannot read peppy's mind.
According to my logs, peppy has explained this point already in the past. Oh well, just test/ask next time.
m980
Elite Mapper
1,234 posts
Here since the beginning
m980
Inherit your timing sections plz. (Delete the first Timing Section (The one at the veery start))

The skin is impressive, however, it's a tiny mess near the bottom left corner.

Normal
01:25:39 (5,6,7,8) - Spacing would confuse alot of people here. As well as throw them off. Either move it or make 5 a new combo.
02:10:65 (3) - Spacing would confuse alot of people here.

Hard
01:26:77 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is abit wonky here.
01:58:68 (7) - Move this left abit.
03:17:06 (5) - Should end 1/4 earlier/later
03:25:39 (3) - Spacing could confuse people.

Mogsy's Difficulty
00:58:51 (7) - Uh What?
01:19:84 (5) - Slightly offscreen.
02:26:43 (4) - Ends too late?
Stack is off?

Sorry, but i'm going to lower to a star.
Mogsy
osu! Alumni
3,450 posts
Here since the beginning
Mogsy
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Paramore - Misery Business (Nharox) [Mogsworth's Insane].osu
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
James
osu! Hall of Famer
4,371 posts
Joined January 2008
James
come on, rank this thing already..
James
osu! Hall of Famer
4,371 posts
Joined January 2008
James
grats on the 6th month~
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios

James wrote:

grats on the 6th month~
Hip Hip, HURRAY!!! ...

my beatmaps have ONLY 2 months around...

Anyway, rank this beatmap and don't lost other time.
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
Nharox
Woah, this map sucks. Somebody should rank it.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Unbubbled, Nharox says he wants to remake his difficulties

*facepalm*


EDIT: graved on mapper's request. ;_;

He's gonna finish it he said D:

Download: DJ YOSHITAKA - FLOWER (DJNightmare) [Hyper].osu
Mogsy
osu! Alumni
3,450 posts
Here since the beginning
Mogsy
Finish this, already, Nharox. This has been sitting in my folder for god knows how long and I want it out of my WIPs. ; ;

Download: Paramore - Misery Business (Nharox) [Mogsworth's Insane].osu
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Looking as innocent as possible to get Touhou.

Download: Paramore - Misery Business (Nharox) [Larto's Ugly Muffin].osu
Mogsy
osu! Alumni
3,450 posts
Here since the beginning
Mogsy
Welp, changes made again.

Download: Paramore - Misery Business (Nharox) [Mogsy's Intense].osu
chii_elda
5 posts
Joined August 2008
chii_elda
Good :O
VERY GOOD. ^^
I love this song ;D
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
41 / 91