thanks!AIR wrote:
Tsukuyomi wrote:
SPOILER还可以
滑条排的丑了点，感觉挺复古，老实说照现在的审美这种图比较难看，特别是你用直滑条和三个同一flow的弯滑条的时候感觉尤其丑。
难度全都集中在kiai和后半段的串子上，然后中间大片单点又掉ACC，kiai光用滑条中间的串子又这么难滑条摆的这么简单打起来体验很不好。
我知道跟1/3不太好弄但是你还是要注意把握难度平衡。
01:47:263 (7,8) - 像这种clap强的地方你可以变一下，感觉萎了萎了
01:55:835 (3,4,1) - ↑，像这种地方拉大间距或者其他的变化可以对下面那个串子起到提示作用，现在串子比较突兀 调头
02:16:345 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 为什么间距先大后小，后面音效那么响间距反而小了不是很奇怪吗 改了
02:17:263 (1) - 这段音效哪去了√
03:16:039 (1) - 这段中间的串子太突兀了，我建议你把那些滑条的间距也拉大一点，不然反应不过来串子的
nomal hitnormal音量太大了，你是不是调了游戏设置里的音量摆音效的直接用的默认xiexie,09kami wrote:
SPOILER差点搞忘了 来还摸的
卧槽 我看完后怀疑这图还有没有需要摸的地方........其他找不出什么可以摸的了
- 01:32:876 (5,1,2,3) - 这里有个小小的间距误导区 1/6段接1/4段期间 1/6段的间距比1/4的大
- 02:16:651 (5) - 变间距NC整个改了
- 03:33:182 (1) - 从这里开始的连打换个音效 这个音效连打太刺耳了 不太适合这段 或者考虑降音好
- 03:40:121 (3,4) - 这里讲道理非常难连上
- 03:41:447 (4,5) - 同上
- 04:36:243 (5) - nc√
这图我感觉稍微修饰下音效可以直接RANK了 射课星吧等等推:)
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JimmyThumb-P feat.Hatsune Miku - from Y to Y
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Topic Starter
[First]
In my opinion
Should get changed
Not rankable
[General]
Source: Add a source if there is one.
Tags: Please add some tags.
[Luminous]
00:53:386 (8) - This slider looks awkward.
00:58:896 (1,2) - There was a stream before 00:57:876 (1,2,3,4) - Thats why I thought this would be another stream. (Change DS)
01:09:610 (4,5) - Why the DS is here bigger than before?
01:11:447 (2,3) - And small here again? xD
01:42:978 (2,3,4,5,1) - This couple of slider confused me because of the bad overlap.
02:41:753 (1,2) - I personally see this as a really bad overlap because of the stacking before.
03:12:978 (2,3) - I clicked too early q_q
03:42:365 (1,2,3,4,1) - What the hell?
03:56:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Probably same DS?
03:57:672 (1,2) - Finally no more bad overlaps.
Topic Starter
Pata-Mon wrote:
SPOILERm4m我摸得更水……☆
- 00:31:957 我喜欢这样
- 00:37:774 (1,2,3,4) - 因为1的尾巴、2、3、4开头之间的时长一样，我觉得固定一下ds，要比12分开然后234放在一起要好不太好读
- 01:05:631 (7,1) - ds和01:00:733 (7,8)以及01:03:182 (7,8)保持一致会不会更好并没什么分别。。
- 01:18:488 (1,2,3) - 改变节奏型的第一组，如果放近一些的话玩家会更好适应（更简单）
- 03:16:039 (1) - 这段滑条尾静音怎么样
- 05:16:039 (1) - 这种超长的转盘我个人不太喜欢
thanks!Azulae wrote:
SPOILERHere my mod, as requested.
[First]
In my opinion
Should get changed
Not rankable
[General]
Source: Add a source if there is one.
Tags: Please add some tags.
[Luminous]
00:53:386 (8) - This slider looks awkward.
00:58:896 (1,2) - There was a stream before 00:57:876 (1,2,3,4) - Thats why I thought this would be another stream. (Change DS)nc here, no necessary to change..
01:09:610 (4,5) - Why the DS is here bigger than before?
01:11:447 (2,3) - And small here again? xDlooks the distance is about the same by either, so keep...
01:42:978 (2,3,4,5,1) - This couple of slider confused me because of the bad overlap.
02:41:753 (1,2) - I personally see this as a really bad overlap because of the stacking before.
03:12:978 (2,3) - I clicked too early q_qnc here
03:42:365 (1,2,3,4,1) - What the hell?
03:56:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Probably same DS?
03:57:672 (1,2) - Finally no more bad overlaps.
[luminous]
01:37:161 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里是1/4鼓点 用圈就好 何必用1/4滑条
01:48:182 (2,3) - 这两个遮的太多了 把移开吧 不然有点难读 rc有写不要太遮滑条
01:49:406 (6,7,8) - 我觉得这样好打点 原来的打起来有点不舒服 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4136307
01:53:080 (2,4) - 翻转下像我这样改下如何 你那样摆打起来很不好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4136310
03:56:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这里音乐没啥特别的地方 建议关网格开ds摆一下
挺神的一张图 唯一需要做的是你应该想办法让整个图好打
有的地方打起来有问题 建议你多开点加分mode去test或者找五位数玩家试一试
要是你觉得现在这样就可以 把摸回复下然后给我发pm吧
01:37:161 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里是1/4鼓点 用圈就好 何必用1/4滑条
01:48:182 (2,3) - 这两个遮的太多了 把移开吧 不然有点难读 rc有写不要太遮滑条
01:49:406 (6,7,8) - 我觉得这样好打点 原来的打起来有点不舒服 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4136307
01:53:080 (2,4) - 翻转下像我这样改下如何 你那样摆打起来很不好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4136310
03:56:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这里音乐没啥特别的地方 建议关网格开ds摆一下
挺神的一张图 唯一需要做的是你应该想办法让整个图好打
有的地方打起来有问题 建议你多开点加分mode去test或者找五位数玩家试一试
要是你觉得现在这样就可以 把摸回复下然后给我发pm吧
[General]
Mapping-wise, there's nothing wrong. You just need to put some more work into your hitsounds. Good luck.
- The Romanised Artist should be JimmyThumb-P, as suggested by some sites including the wikia.
- You can add Hatsune Miku into the tags, as well as Megurine Luka for doing main vocals and back-up vocals respectively.
- This song is also featured in the -Project DIVA- series, so you might want to add that into the tags as well.
- There are a lot of drum beats that you haven't hitsounded into the song. These play out on 00:09:916 (1,3,4) - the highlighted beats here. I highly recommend that you add these in as it's a vital part of the song.
- 00:34:406 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:35:631 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about the random increase in spacing here. The song doesn't get any more intense, so there's no logic behind making it more spaced. I suggest reducing the spacing here to keep in line with previous patterns.
- 00:39:304 (1) - There's a cymbal sound here, so a finish should be placed to represent it here. Also in this part, every downbeat there seems to be a piano sound which can be represented by a whistle.
- 02:17:263 (1) - Again, some of the downbeats here have a nice low piano sound which hasn't been emphasised enough. I would suggest adding hitsounds here to represent it.
Mapping-wise, there's nothing wrong. You just need to put some more work into your hitsounds. Good luck.
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY wrote:
SPOILER[luminous]
01:37:161 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里是1/4鼓点 用圈就好 何必用1/4滑条你有没有觉得差不多，连打还要摆形状
01:48:182 (2,3) - 这两个遮的太多了 把移开吧 不然有点难读 rc有写不要太遮滑条√
01:49:406 (6,7,8) - 我觉得这样好打点 原来的打起来有点不舒服 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4136307√
01:53:080 (2,4) - 翻转下像我这样改下如何 你那样摆打起来很不好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4136310√
03:56:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这里音乐没啥特别的地方 建议关网格开ds摆一下√
挺神的一张图 唯一需要做的是你应该想办法让整个图好打
有的地方打起来有问题 建议你多开点加分mode去test或者找五位数玩家试一试
要是你觉得现在这样就可以 把摸回复下然后给我发pm吧
thanks!DahplA wrote:
SPOILER[General][Luminous]
- The Romanised Artist should be JimmyThumb-P, as suggested by some sites including the wikia.√
- You can add Hatsune Miku into the tags, as well as Megurine Luka for doing main vocals and back-up vocals respectively.√
- This song is also featured in the -Project DIVA- series, so you might want to add that into the tags as well.
-
- There are a lot of drum beats that you haven't hitsounded into the song. These play out on 00:09:916 (1,3,4) - the highlighted beats here. I highly recommend that you add these in as it's a vital part of the song.I'm not good at hitsounds, so, avoid superfluous i think
- 00:34:406 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:35:631 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about the random increase in spacing here. The song doesn't get any more intense, so there's no logic behind making it more spaced. I suggest reducing the spacing here to keep in line with previous patterns.√
- 00:39:304 (1) - There's a cymbal sound here, so a finish should be placed to represent it here. Also in this part, every downbeat there seems to be a piano sound which can be represented by a whistle.√
- 02:17:263 (1) - Again, some of the downbeats here have a nice low piano sound which hasn't been emphasised enough. I would suggest adding hitsounds here to represent it.
Mapping-wise, there's nothing wrong. You just need to put some more work into your hitsounds. Good luck.
神图
多搭讪赶快起飞
SP够了我就不射了
多搭讪赶快起飞
SP够了我就不射了
fine for me, bubbled
m4m
柑橘各种排版可以再设计一下，目前的好像有点简单了。
good luck
Luminous
- 00:28:590 (1,2,3,4) - 这个overmap没必要吧。
- 00:48:182 (8,9,10) - 这里不搞成两个二连么，难得有了两个明显的鼓点还要和前面搞成一样节奏么。
- 01:16:957 (1,2,3,4,5) - 好吧，同第一条。
- 01:33:182 (1,2,3) - 这个ds梗。。。建议01:33:182 (1,2) - 的nc换一下。
- 01:43:590 (4,5,1) - slider 1 is nearly completed overlapped, i think this is unrankble.
- 02:46:345 (4,5) - 这跳没必要那么大。。。note 5 stack在02:46:039 (3) - 的头上就好。
- 03:43:590 (1,1,1) - 没必要nc spam。
- 03:52:467 (1) - 掰弯。
- 03:53:692 (1,2,3) - 建议弄成1/3折返，或者note+1/3slider。
- 04:26:753 (8) - 感觉ctrl+g更好。
- 坚持要overmap也无所谓，吐槽勿怪。
good luck
Topic Starter
thanks!Hollow Wings wrote:
SPOILERm4m柑橘各种排版可以再设计一下，目前的好像有点简单了。Luminous
- 00:28:590 (1,2,3,4) - 这个overmap没必要吧。
- 00:48:182 (8,9,10) - 这里不搞成两个二连么，难得有了两个明显的鼓点还要和前面搞成一样节奏么。
- 01:16:957 (1,2,3,4,5) - 好吧，同第一条。
- 01:33:182 (1,2,3) - 这个ds梗。。。建议01:33:182 (1,2) - 的nc换一下。
- 01:43:590 (4,5,1) - slider 1 is nearly completed overlapped, i think this is unrankble.
- 02:46:345 (4,5) - 这跳没必要那么大。。。note 5 stack在02:46:039 (3) - 的头上就好。
- 03:43:590 (1,1,1) - 没必要nc spam。
- 03:52:467 (1) - 掰弯。
- 03:53:692 (1,2,3) - 建议弄成1/3折返，或者note+1/3slider。
- 04:26:753 (8) - 感觉ctrl+g更好。
- 坚持要overmap也无所谓，吐槽勿怪。
good luck
改改改神麻婆就是真理
all fixed
#1 Bubbled -> Due to normal-hitfinish hitsound change
叫ZZH二泡 (#2 Bubbled)，接下來找心靠你自己 LOL
叫ZZH二泡 (#2 Bubbled)，接下來找心靠你自己 LOL
Topic Starter
smallboat wrote:
#1 Bubbled -> Due to normal-hitfinish hitsound change
叫ZZH二泡 (#2 Bubbled)，接下來找心靠你自己 LOL
船业谢辣!
我草 这也戳?
bub #2
bub #2
Topic Starter
你真棒！ZZHBOY wrote:
我草 这也戳?
bub #2
Hello, as your request.
Unicode Artist should be 'ジミーサムP feat.初音ミク', while the Romanised Artist should be 'JimmyThumb-P feat.Hatsune Miku'.
You may add some more tags, for example, 'EXIT TUNES', 'Vocalostar', etc.
Good luck!
Unicode Artist should be 'ジミーサムP feat.初音ミク', while the Romanised Artist should be 'JimmyThumb-P feat.Hatsune Miku'.
You may add some more tags, for example, 'EXIT TUNES', 'Vocalostar', etc.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
thanks!IamKwaN wrote:
Hello, as your request.
Unicode Artist should be 'ジミーサムP feat.初音ミク', while the Romanised Artist should be 'JimmyThumb-P feat.Hatsune Miku'.
You may add some more tags, for example, 'EXIT TUNES', 'Vocalostar', etc.
Good luck!
不OD8麼?
Topic Starter
翔度不忍直视...Rizia wrote:
不OD8麼?
fixed and update
qualified
Topic Starter
wow, thanks everyone ＞口＜Rizia wrote:
qualified
Thanks for bringing full ver.
以前也想re掉last night和Y两首歌, 一转眼就3年了..
以前也想re掉last night和Y两首歌, 一转眼就3年了..
Topic Starter
too shit, rating已经爆炸Autumn wrote:
Thanks for bringing full ver.
以前也想re掉last night和Y两首歌, 一转眼就3年了..
AIR wrote:
too shit, rating已经爆炸Autumn wrote:
Thanks for bringing full ver.
以前也想re掉last night和Y两首歌, 一转眼就3年了..奥图木酷爱飞last night;w;
等有学上了再来处理这堆烂摊子. 我还有个泡了一个多月的图没人点. 法克 bn
500th post √
oh boy this is gonna be good
*gets popcorn ready*
*gets popcorn ready*
Xexxar wrote:
oh boy this is gonna be good
*gets popcorn ready*
nice mapping style but nah.Xexxar wrote:
oh boy this is gonna be good
*gets popcorn ready*
hey this is pretty nice
the only thing i was a bit sad about is that you miss out so many opportunities to highlight this song in terms of hitsounding, currently the way you hitsound the whole map is very minimalistic and you could have created even more impressions with hitsounding imo
also either i'm deaf or the 1/12 sliderspam section sounds much better as just 1/6 sliders
the only thing i was a bit sad about is that you miss out so many opportunities to highlight this song in terms of hitsounding, currently the way you hitsound the whole map is very minimalistic and you could have created even more impressions with hitsounding imo
also either i'm deaf or the 1/12 sliderspam section sounds much better as just 1/6 sliders
则不呢突然qualified我感觉你可以改进的地方还有很多
Xexxar wrote:
oh boy this is gonna be good
*gets popcorn ready*
Very good fun map to play !
The only thing I'm concerned about (not meant to aim for disqualification or something but keep in mind for next future maps)
03:53:692 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you should use lower spacing like below 1.0x for those streams because the way players perceive such spacing is similar to 1/6 that got started from 03:33:182 (1) - to 03:43:590 (1) - so players can misinterpret the rhythm as the current spacing is presented for 1/6, not 1/8
keep it up
! The only thing I'm concerned about (not meant to aim for disqualification or something but keep in mind for next future maps)
03:53:692 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you should use lower spacing like below 1.0x for those streams because the way players perceive such spacing is similar to 1/6 that got started from 03:33:182 (1) - to 03:43:590 (1) - so players can misinterpret the rhythm as the current spacing is presented for 1/6, not 1/8
keep it up
Topic Starter
懒癌病入膏肓;w;Tsukuyomi wrote:
则不呢突然qualified我感觉你可以改进的地方还有很多
Okoratu wrote:
hey this is pretty nice
the only thing i was a bit sad about is that you miss out so many opportunities to highlight this song in terms of hitsounding, currently the way you hitsound the whole map is very minimalistic and you could have created even more impressions with hitsounding imo
also either i'm deaf or the 1/12 sliderspam section sounds much better as just 1/6 sliders
okey, I get it. but the map seems too hard to play, feel so sorry about thatFrostxE wrote:
Very good fun map to play
The only thing I'm concerned about (not meant to aim for disqualification or something but keep in mind for next future maps)
03:53:692 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you should use lower spacing like below 1.0x for those streams because the way players perceive such spacing is similar to 1/6 that got started from 03:33:182 (1) - to 03:43:590 (1) - so players can misinterpret the rhythm as the current spacing is presented for 1/6, not 1/8
keep it up
So I came for the song, but after playing through I need to say a few things:
First of all, why is everything in the intro in straight rhythms? You're obviously following the drums, except that you're not on the right snap. I know that you know it's not the right snap too, since you got it correct at 00:39:304 -
Hitsounding is damned near non-existent due to incredibly low volume which is a pity since this song really gives you a lot to work with. If you could hear the hitsounds at all, you could easily tell that a significant portion of the map isn't snapped correctly.
01:18:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - is pretty much the exact same rhythm. Which is overmapped to boot. Please try some rhythmic diversity.
01:33:335 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - And now you suddenly decided to stop following the song again and go with 1/2 rhythms instead of swinging?
01:37:161 (2,3,4,5,6) - Can you really tell these are normal-hitnormals? I sure can't.
Seriously? The first chorus is pretty much a repeat of what happened at 01:18 except it's all sliders now instead of mixing between circles and sliders. The other chorus also suffers from this.
03:16:039 - Now that we finally came to the part that is easily the best place for use of kiai time, it's missing plus the part to play is incredibly anti-climactic. This is the huge reveal. Juliet just found out Romeo is dead. Luke Skywalker just found out he kissed his sister. Let's play short stubby sliders! I dunno, more of a rant than a real mod for this, but I was really disappointed with it.
03:33:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Suddenly uncharacteristic stream which seems to do nothing but provide a huge spike in difficulty. Why?
04:56:447 (1) - And back to incorrectly snapped objects.
Please look into making the map a bit more interesting rhythmically and a bit more balanced difficulty-wise. Right now it's a bit of a mess and needs some work beyond the technical problems.
First of all, why is everything in the intro in straight rhythms? You're obviously following the drums, except that you're not on the right snap. I know that you know it's not the right snap too, since you got it correct at 00:39:304 -
Hitsounding is damned near non-existent due to incredibly low volume which is a pity since this song really gives you a lot to work with. If you could hear the hitsounds at all, you could easily tell that a significant portion of the map isn't snapped correctly.
01:18:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - is pretty much the exact same rhythm. Which is overmapped to boot. Please try some rhythmic diversity.
01:33:335 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - And now you suddenly decided to stop following the song again and go with 1/2 rhythms instead of swinging?
01:37:161 (2,3,4,5,6) - Can you really tell these are normal-hitnormals? I sure can't.
Seriously? The first chorus is pretty much a repeat of what happened at 01:18 except it's all sliders now instead of mixing between circles and sliders. The other chorus also suffers from this.
03:16:039 - Now that we finally came to the part that is easily the best place for use of kiai time, it's missing plus the part to play is incredibly anti-climactic. This is the huge reveal. Juliet just found out Romeo is dead. Luke Skywalker just found out he kissed his sister. Let's play short stubby sliders! I dunno, more of a rant than a real mod for this, but I was really disappointed with it.
03:33:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Suddenly uncharacteristic stream which seems to do nothing but provide a huge spike in difficulty. Why?
04:56:447 (1) - And back to incorrectly snapped objects.
Please look into making the map a bit more interesting rhythmically and a bit more balanced difficulty-wise. Right now it's a bit of a mess and needs some work beyond the technical problems.
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Unrankable issues
Hi! On behalf of quite a few people I know, I am going over this map for you. You might want to find a good chinese to english translator to help you out with this mod, as it is very full of words and I am very bad at speaking in plain, easily-translatable ways.
I am not doing this to be mean, but to try to attempt to explain what parts of this map are "Bad Quality". It is important for mappers to know that they are doing things incorrectly or in ways that can be improved with a little bit of effort and a lot of love for music.
Please note that this does not include infringing on your "style". There are many ways to make your maps neater and more visually appealing without changing object placement all that much at all!
(Although, looking at the map, you don't appear to have any style at all. Or if you do, please change that style because it is bad.)
Major suggestions
Aesthetic suggestions
Unrankable issues
Hi! On behalf of quite a few people I know, I am going over this map for you. You might want to find a good chinese to english translator to help you out with this mod, as it is very full of words and I am very bad at speaking in plain, easily-translatable ways.
I am not doing this to be mean, but to try to attempt to explain what parts of this map are "Bad Quality". It is important for mappers to know that they are doing things incorrectly or in ways that can be improved with a little bit of effort and a lot of love for music.
Please note that this does not include infringing on your "style". There are many ways to make your maps neater and more visually appealing without changing object placement all that much at all!
(Although, looking at the map, you don't appear to have any style at all. Or if you do, please change that style because it is bad.)
- Your hitclap custom hitsound appears to be much louder in the Left channel than the Right! This is clearly unintended.
- Please change your habit of using Small gridsnap. This ruins your map because you cannot make everything even and your patterns will not be clean. At the very least, use Tiny so that any small errors are hard to notice.
- Almost all of your curved sliders look bad. They do not curve comfortably at all, overlap in ugly ways, don't blanket when they try to go around other notes, and in general they can pretty much all do with being redone.
- Your streams need major work. They bend at random points. Generally, if you want a stream to change directions, it is best to do so on a white tick, or, in rare cases such as this very low bpm map, a red tick. You don't want them changing direction anywhere else.
- With the exception of a single 1/8 stream about 2/3rds into the map, this entire track is in 1/6 metronome. Please remap all of the sections in which you use 1/4 with this in mind. Note that most of the calm sections do not have any sounds anywhere except on white and red ticks. You have to follow the music. Even Miku's vocals are following a 1/6 signature.
- 00:11:753 (5,6,1) - Because of your use of grid snap, these combos are not actually parallel to each other. A good way to make combos like this is to make the entire combo vertically first, and then rotate it afterwards to be at an angle. This goes for your entire map, I will not point out every single case in which this happens as I do not have the time. Just know that this happens every like three seconds in the areas where you use these patterns.
- 00:45:733 (7) - This slider's end is snapped to 1/4 when the rest of the section uses 1/3!!! Not there there are actually any noises on either 1/4 or 1/3 in most of this section, but consistency is vital.
- 00:56:600 (2) - This is placed on a 1/4 tick when the actual beat in the song is on 1/3!!!
- 00:57:365 (5) - This slider end should be snapped to 1/3! and for the sake of consistency, 00:57:059 (4) - should be as well!
- 01:34:253 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - All of these notes should be snapped to 1/3 timing!!!
- 01:37:161 (2,3,4,5,6) - The beats for this drumroll are in 1/3 timing, not 1/8!!!
- Hey, the whole "notes get softer and then loud and softer" bit is pretty neat. Good job! But why didn't you do it anywhere else?
- 02:51:396 (5) - Please be sure that notes are snapped to the correct timing signature. In the future of this post, if I link an object and provide no explanation, it is because it is snapped to 1/4 but should be 1/3 or vice versa.
- From 03:16:039 - to 03:33:182 - I shouldn't need to explain why this is bad. But if I do, here you go: There are no instruments or anything here for you to be using these weird 1/6 sliders for. Do something else.
- 03:35:325 (10) - Is this really snapped to 1/12? There is nothing in the music to warrant this being a slider. It can just be a circle.
- 03:36:549 (4) - ^
- 03:37:467 (1,2,3,4) - ^^^
- 03:40:121 (3) - You get the idea.
- 03:53:156 (2,3,4,5) - This is 3 notes, not 4. Listen carefully at 25%.
- 04:53:080 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is too much.
Thank you for your time and patience!
Garven wrote:
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well, the snap true have some problems as they mentioned.
AIR加油，修复了snap你又是一条好汉！
AIR加油，修复了snap你又是一条好汉！