1. ...Diet Feeling (0,83 stars, 147 notes)
2. Bittersweet Feeling (4,63 stars, 336 notes)
3. Hot! Feeling (5 stars, 474 notes)
4. Normal Feeling (1,94 stars, 165 notes)
5. Super Feeling (4,06 stars, 288 notes)

Blue Dragon wrote:

All
Offset: 15548, depois vai na aba timing (lá em cima, na barra cinza) e em "resnap all notes"

Blue Dragon wrote:

Normal
Você tem que usar uma coisa chata chamada Distance Snap. É bem chato, mas você tem que colocar pro beatmap ser aceito. É melhor fazer isso com a música parada. Ele determina o lugar onde as beats ficam, quanto mais tempo entre elas, mais longe uma da outra.
Tenta usar mais beats, não só sliders.

Blue Dragon wrote:

00:36:393 (2) - Esse tipo de slider não dá pra colocar, porque confunde os jogadores e o pessoal da equipe não deixa. :/
01:34:827 (1) - A mesma coisa que o slider acima..
01:39:001 (1) - Mesma coisa.
01:47:349 (1) - ^
02:00:156 (Break) - Essa break é muito longa. Tenta deixar ela com menos de 15 segundos, de preferência.
02:41:610 (1) - Tenta melhorar esse slider, ele ficou estranho

Blue Dragon wrote:

Ali do lado, tem um botão "Give Kudosu", é pra clicar lá se você achar que o meu post ajudou.

xxx_vinny_xxx wrote:

O-O

• Remova Marcelo Adnet da lista de tags, ele já está como autor, não é necessário! (Remova de todas as dificuldades)
  Coloque MTV: 15 Minutos na source e remova ambos da lista de tags!

Dragvon wrote:

Por favor não dê kudosu feito louco. Só dê se o post for REALMENTE útil!
Só pelo fato de ter dado estrela sem um mod no post não é motivo para dar :X

No fim de semana vou dar uma olhada no seu mapa e volto aqui para te dar um mod e talvez uma estrela '-'!

guifisilva wrote:

Blue Dragon wrote:

Texto do blue -q

O que resnap faz exatamente? Mudei o offset da batida... é, eu não percebi que começava antes, haha. Ainda tá sincronizado. Valeu!

Dragvon wrote:

Por favor não dê kudosu feito louco. Só dê se o post for REALMENTE útil!
Só pelo fato de ter dado estrela sem um mod no post não é motivo para dar :X

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

[Overall]
Please delete the .osb file in your song folder and full submit. -> Oh, I'll do that.

[...Diet Feeling] -----> Well I didn't like this difficulty that much. Let's see if you can make me make it better.
00:25:973 through 00:29:104 - Can you map these some other way? Seven hit circles on top of each other like this on an easy difficulty... Bah. -> I get your point. xD
00:34:973 (1) - So many rebounds. -> It's ugly alright. I created three sliders and now it should look way better.
00:44:756 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could put (2) and (4) above (1) and (3) so they won't be on top of each other like that. It's boring the way it is. -> Oh I liked it! :D:D
00:57:669 (2) - I don't recommend blue ticks on an easy difficulty.
00:58:452 (4) - ^
01:35:234 (2) - ^
01:36:017 (4) - ^
01:36:930 through 01:42:669 - You are starting to use too many blue tick hit circles for an easy. Please don't do it, it isn't good for new players. <- Ok, I forgot why I created an Easy difficulty when I did this. o_o I fixed these beats on blue ticks, and now they should appear only on white ones. ^____^
01:51:539 through 01:59:886 - Oh so very boring, everything is just on top of each other. <- Argh, what have I done?!?!?!?!! *headdesk* Fixed!
02:00:147 - The break is a bit on the long side. -> I knooowwwww I need inspiration!
02:57:799 through 03:01:712 - What is this? It's horrible, on top of each other for boring-galore, all new combos, Plus new players would be surprised by it and not hit it well. -> I tried making something colourful buuuuuut I agree it's terrible. I made a new combination and it looks much better now!
03:01:712 - End your Kiai time by putting an inherited timing section here. -> Okay!
Whee it looks great now.

[Normal Feeling]
Raise circle size by one. -> Done!
Lower HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by one. ->Won't the beatmap get too easy? D: Oh well, done.
00:44:756 (2) - Unrankable slider, do not overlap the same slider's start and end. ->Whoops!
01:30:669 - What the hell? Why is the slider end and spinner start overlapping on the timeline. Fix it. -> I made the slider a bit shorter but now it is kinda out of sync.
01:55:712 (8) - New combo. -> Done.
01:57:539 (12) - New combo. -> Done too!
02:00:147 - Break is still on the long side. -> Any suggestions about what should I put to make it shorter?
02:29:625 (9) - New combo. -> Done..
02:37:452 (9) - New combo. -> *headdesk* Done. x_x
02:41:625 (1) - No. This slider is horrible. -> Ok, I agree. I did a wavy-like one, instead.
03:01:712 - End your Kiai time by putting an inherited timing section here. -> Done.

[Super Feeling]
You map way too much to the lyrics in this difficulty. -> Ew D: I did it on purpose, otherwise the map would sound kinda repetitive... I guess. Should I highly edit it?
Raise circle size by one. -> Done
01:18:147 - I lol'd at this slider. I wasn't expecting it to match the background music. -> Haha, I took too much time on this one. x) I really like it.
01:49:452 (1) - This doesn't match the music. -> Meh, I got stuck some time on it. I'm changing it to a curved slider. It looks better anyway.
01:55:712 - New combo. -> Makes sense.
03:02:495 - End your Kiai time by putting an inherited timing section here.
My major complaint is that you STILL put hit circles on top of each other way too much such as: 02:58:321 ->It's so colourful and beautiful on the editor But it's horrible in-game. Hopefully it's better the way I arranged the notes now.

[Hot! Feeling]
Again, you map way too much to the lyrics on this difficulty.
This map is boring for an insane difficulty. <- It looked cool after I finished it. But now I realize it's boring after all. D: I think I will redo this difficulty, or most parts of it. (The only bit I really liked was the Kiai mode)
Raise circle size by one. <- Done!
I shall wait to mod this until you fixed the other difficulties.

No star. Fix what I have pointed out and PM me for a recheck. <- Okidoki.

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Alright! I'm back for a recheck~

[...Diet Feeling]
The only thing that bothers me now, is the new combos in your Kiai time. Please make some of them all one combo, don't just have new combos all over the place. i know you want it all "colourful" and stuff, but please don't do it. ->Okay okay, now it should be fine Y_Y lol!

[Normal Feeling]
01:26:495 (1) - Have this end on 01:30:147 -> Much better.
02:58:321 (1) - Oh gawd, remove this whistle, it's ear rape. -> Lol! Done.

[Super Feeling]
01:18:147 - I STILL lol at this slider lol -> Yay!
01:22:321 through 01:23:625 - Make this all one combo. -> Done~
01:29:104 - Be careful with 1/8 beats. You shouldn't exactly be using them. -> Oh yeah, it's kinda hard to hit. x_o It's fixed now.
01:27:017 (1) - Remove new combo. -> Done and
01:28:060 (1) - Remove new combo. -> done.
02:16:973 (1) - After looking at this a few times, I realized that I don't like this slider, and some modders would agree. It'st just ugly. -> I don't like it too. x_x Oh well, random sliders and notes on the way. (It's better actually. I think I'll do similar stuff with other difficulties.)

[Hot! Feeling] -> Alright, let's change lots of things. As of now, I'm revamping this difficulty.
You map too much to the lyrics in this difficulty.
00:42:669 - This slider sounds ugly and doesn't match the music.
01:30:669 - Slider end overlapping spinner start. Fix it.
01:34:843 (5) - This slider looks ugly.
In your Kiai times, please extend the combos to at least 6 or 7.
This insane difficulty was boring.

Still got some work to do. No star yet.

Bittersweet wrote:

Rá, só pra dar star, depois volto com mod e bla bla

edit 1: Óia, eu voltei :3 (não terminei a diff ainda e- orz)

...Diet:
Eu não gosto de dietas em geral >_>

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A velocidade da slider tá me matando de sono (e nem venha dizer que é coisa de pro pq eu jogo mais easy que outra coisa nessa vida :'D). Muda pra 0,80, pelo menos. Combina melhor, não é tão rápido e não dá sono pra seguir, olha que bonitinho <3 Isso vai te dar um trabalho da porra, já que você vai ter que ajustar todas as sliders do mapa, mas, hey, nada na vida vem sem esforço 8D

Eu vou fazer o mod levando em conta que você aceitou a sugestão, k? ;B

00:17:625 (1,2,3) - use o distance snap aqui :3 (eu sei que ele é um cu a maioria das vezes, mas acho que fica melhor pra seguir em easys)
Jurava que tinha usado na música toda o-o Consertado

00:20:756 - add uma nota ^.^
Feito

00:21:799 (1) - faz essa slider até aqui 00:22:843 e depois acrescenta um reverse, fazendo terminar no 00:23:886. Soa melhor :3
Hm, gostei x)

01:18:147 (1) - Feia >_> tenta dar uma melhorada nisso, gui :~
Agora tá com ângulos mais retos, não reclame u_u

01:34:843 (1,2,3,4) - eu posicionaria isso de alguma outra forma, já que antes do spinner (01:27:017) as notas já estavam uma em cima da outra. Tenta explorar mais o espaço que você tem pra trabalhar (leia-se 'que o distance snap deixe')
Feito

01:36:930 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Feito lol

01:56:495 (1) - Não tou certa sobre isso, mas~ remove essa? (Testa, se você concorar, tira. se não, deixa como tá )
Hm, acho que soa melhor sem~

Acho que é tudo D:
Eu juro que usei distance snap na música toda, mas mudou tudo agora e_e enfim, editado

Normal:

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Não entendi pq você usou grid lvl 3 no easy e aqui o lvl 1. >_> Eu, pessoalmente, aconselho a mudar pro lvl 3, mas é só pq não gosto do 1 mesmo D: então pode ignorar :3
A verdade é que eu não estava usando grid snap nessa dificuldade lol.

00:23:886 (3) - feia ._.
00:25:973 (4) - gigante ._. eu sei que tu seguiu o vocal e tal, mas uma slider longa assim é chata~
Mudei um pouco x)

00:42:669 (1) ~ 00:42:669 - "eu vejo sliders" "com que frequencia" "todo o t-" é, acho que tu pegou o espírito XD mas tem um certo ritmo, então não acho que precise mudar ^.^ (00:55:191 (1) - eu vi msmo uma caveira? *.* -> credo kkkkk)
E sim, a falha dessa dificuldade são os sliders. Mas acho que eles fazem parte da dificuldade agora, não quero mudar muito~

00:59:886 (1) - gigante ._. eu sei que tu seguiu o vocal e tal, mas uma slider longa assim é chata~ (sim, isso foi copypaste~)
Mudandoooo~

01:09:799 (1,2,3) - essa parte ficou estranha. e meio complicado pra um normal, na minha opinião~
Lol, soa perfeitamente dentro com a música para mim D:

01:11:886 (4,5,6) - ^ particularmente a slider 01:12:669 (6). meio que quebra o ritmo.
Isso eu concordo, coloquei uma curva fechada

01:18:278 (1) - remove ._.
Okidoki

01:26:495 (1) - deleta esse reverse e faz a slider terminar em 01:28:582
Ê

01:34:843 (1) - feia e longa. você pode colocar silers menores no tempo dessa enorme.
Adicionei mais um slider~

01:37:321 (2) - muito tick azul pro meu gosto em um normal, mas acho que tudo bem a menos que mais alguém comente algo o.o
Ainda não entendi por que não pode 3/4 e pode 1/2 o-o Vou deixar como tá

01:39:017 (1) - feia~ muda, plis? ;.;
mas


02:41:625 (1,2) - dê um tiro na minha cabeça ;.;
*D*

02:55:452 (4) -talvez mover essa pro próximo tick branco? (02:55:712)
Nãonãonão u_u

ok pra slider longa no final
Legal, próximo~~~~~

Super:

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Leve o conselho do osu! a sério: não use divisor 1/8 a menos que você seja um mapper experiente.
Como vou sincronizar a música? Não é como se eu usasse o tempo todo, de qualquer forma x_x

00:27:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - complicado de ler, gui. eu arrumaria um pouco do spacing pra facilitar (mesmo que isso seja um hard o.o')
Hm, consertado

00:51:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - >_> espaçamento? (não por ser difícil, e sim por ser meio chato mesmo <_<)
<_> (lol) (feito)

01:18:147 (1) - feia/longa~
Não vou mudar essa! Minha obra prima D: lol

01:21:278 (5,6,7) - não gostei do ritmo que você colocou aqui.
Adicionei mais uma nota e ficou soando melhor.

01:29:756 (5,6) - ^
Idem

01:43:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - mesmo que em 00:51:017
Repeteco êêê *headdesk*

01:47:625 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - eu diminuiria o volume dos claps, ou removeria eles.
Consertado, acho que tá melhor agora x)

02:22:843 (1,2,3,4) - não faço idéia do pra que isso ._.
Hm, tem umas batidas baixas no fundo e eu quis dar o efeito de "desaceleração", acabei gostando do que fiz :s

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

[Overall]
You aren't storyboarding, so delete the .osb from your song folder and full submit. -> Eek! It's not there, actually. I made sure to delete it before I full uploaded sooner today... x_x Why does it keep showing?! I'll full upload again, anyways.

[...Diet Feeling] (A bit of nazi to fix some spacing stuff)
00:25:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Fix the spacing of this. It's so cramped. (0.8x Distance Snap)
00:30:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ -> Yeah right. Spacing got buggy with this diff, you know. x_x Anyways. Fixed!
00:35:886 (2) - Move one grid up and right (Turn off distance snap) -> Uuh pretty!
01:05:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix the spacing of this. It's so cramped. (0.8 Distance Snap) -> Done!
01:41:104 (1,2,3,4) - Move two grids to the right (Turn off distance snap) -> Done x)
01:43:191 (1) - Move one grid up (Turn off distance snap)
01:56:495 (x) - Add note? -> There was one, but I removed it. I thought it sounded nicer that way, but I'm not sure now. ........................ So, it sounds incomplete. I'll add it again. Whe!
01:58:321 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all these new combos. -> Done!

[Normal Feeling] (More nazi) -> So nice of you.
00:25:973 (1,2,3) - Move one grid up -> Done.
00:28:582 (4) - Move three grids up -> Done. Wow, I'm impressed. Better looking now. o_o
01:52:582 (3,4) - Realign with (1,2) by holding shift. -> Uhm, I think i did it... lol
01:53:625 (5,6,7) - After fixing the above, realign (5,6,7) by holding shift. -> Done
01:56:756 (4) - Align with (3) by holding shift. -> Done
01:57:799 (2,3,4) - Align with (1) by holding shift. -> Same
01:59:886 (6) - Align with (5) -> Same again x)
02:30:147 (2) - Fix spacing with distance snap. -> Done
02:30:669 (3) - One grid right -> Done
02:55:400 (4) - One grid left -> Done
03:01:973 - Move inherited timing section to here (which also ends the kiai time here) -> Done!

[Super Feeling]
00:27:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Cluster-fuck. Consider changing the way you mapped this part. -> Should look better now.
01:11:625 (4) - Move one grid left -> Done
01:18:147 - I have just determined that this slider will always make my day lol. -> lol!
01:56:756 (4) - Move two grids up.
02:22:843 (1,2,3,4) - What happened to the spacing right here? -> Hard to explain. I guess it's not working, anyways. Fixing!~

[Bittersweet Feeling]
00:51:539 (2) - Space this out like (3) is spaced from (2) -> Done
02:57:799 - End kiai time here.
This difficulty made me go "blah"
I mean, there's not wrong with it, it's just that the spacing is weird and the way it was beatmapped makes me feel weird. It's boring, and notes are just scattered all over the place. There were barely any beatmapping techniques used here. -> I'll talk to her later and see if she can work on it some more. x)

[Hot! Feeling]
00:15:538 - I suggest you start mapping from here and delete what's before it. (Because for one, you need all the same offset for all your difficulties, and two, it's not advised to map before the start of your first timing section. -> Hm... I get it. I made it just for fun, it's not absolutely neccessary. x) Removing!
00:34:321 - New combo. -> Ops! Forgot that one.
00:55:451 (2) - I liked the way you were mapping before this slider. Maybe keep mapping the way you were? -> Oh you bet!
01:30:408 - Move one tick forward on the timeline. Fix spacing. -> Instead I added another note.
Alot of the stuff you mapped in your first kiai time is cluster-fuckish. Mind fixing it? -> Tricky, but I'll try. You see. Left part is the "I gotta know" voice and right one is the "O no-no no-no no-no" one. I'll do this tomorrow or some other time. I learned many things since I made this bit.

*sits and looks over my wall of text*
Okay, you can finally have a star, since I don't color code my nazi spacing mod and nothing was critically wrong with this mapset. Good luck guifisilva.

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

[Bittersweet Feeling]
This difficulty made me go "blah"
I mean, there's not wrong with it, it's just that the spacing is weird and the way it was beatmapped makes me feel weird. It's boring, and notes are just scattered all over the place. There were barely any beatmapping techniques used here.

TheVileOne wrote:

Bittersweet Feelings

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Background text is too hard to see. Bittersweet's name is all blurred .


00:35:625 (3) - Move down 1 unit? ~ ok

00:38:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - Eh it doesn't play right to me. Maybe it would play better if the note path was more curved. ~ hm, indeed. when i tested it was a bit weird, but i couldn't think of anything else. Still doesn't seem soo perfect, but I think it is better. o.o

00:46:843 (6,7,8,9) - Move left 1 unit. I don't like how it looks misaligned like that. ~ ok :3

Also the transition between note 6 and 7 is different than notes 7 and 8. ~ yeah, but i'm not sure about what i can do with it .-.

00:49:712 (2) - Slider should NOT be hidden like this. It isn't rankable. ~ as i imagine, pff. fixed.

00:52:582 (4) - Reverse cannot be hidden. Unrankable. ~ fixed too ^.^

00:53:365 (5,6,7,8) - Eh I can't determine what this is following really. Note 8 doesn't make any sense at all. ~ fixed deleting a note and changing the slider for a note. I think it's better.

00:56:756 (7) - New combo. You switched from vocals to beat. ~ ok

01:22:321 (10) - New combo ^ ~ ok

01:22:321 (10,11,12) - Fix the spacing discrepancy by applying the distance snap with grid snap off. ~ done

01:41:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - What is this following? Overmapped? ~ a little, i think. fixed (i hope ._.)

01:42:669 (6) - Remove? What the hell does it have to do with anything? It's not part of the beat, you weren't following that part of the vocals at the time so this note shouldn't be mapped unless the vocals are correctly mapped before it. ~ actually has a beat just along with the vocal. This is what the note're following, not the voice itself. I think it is kind of weird without it, so i'll keep this one. I blame the weird song.

01:43:191 (7) - New combo. How could the combo continue after that? ~ ops, fixed.

02:11:886 (5) - New combo. It feels like there should be one or maybe here 02:12:408 (6) - ~ at 02:11:886, because of spacing, I think it looks better.

02:13:973 (7,8) - I don't like the overlap. Maybe note 8 should be placed above note 7. ~ k, boss :3

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16631

02:24:930 (5) - New combo? ~ ok

02:26:495 (9) - Move right 1 unit. ~ ok

02:27:799 (13) - Move left 1 unit. ~ ok

02:28:321 (15) - ^ ~ ok

02:36:147 (1) - Part of the previous combo? ~ done

02:39:278 (10) - New combo? It's kind of long. ~ ok

02:39:799 (13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move left 1 unit? ~ ok

02:43:973 (9) - Is this meant to be 1 unit too high? ~ actually... k, no. fixed ^^

02:45:799 (11) - New combo??? ~ ok!!!

TheVileOne wrote:

(((Let's see...)))
Overall

furfle doesn't need to be in tags. The song has furfle in the title. Also add Bittersweet to the tags in all difficulties. -> Fixed!

Diet Feelings

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Suggestion: Increase OD? -> Hmmmm nah, I think it's okay the way it is~


00:17:625 (1,2,3,4) - Slight unequal spacing and it isn't centered. 00:19:712 (3,4,1) - Move these left 1 unit to fix the spacing and center the combo, while patching the alignment with the next combo. (Note: If your intentions were to make a more spread out pattern, then moving note 3 down 1 unit should accomplish that.) (((This is what happends with so many pixels on the screen, lol~ It was the first case in this case. Fixed!)))

00:25:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This can be aligned better.

The Fix
Move 5 down to where note 1, and move note 7 1 unit to the left to align up 5,6,7.

(My suggestion though. Pull on notes 2,3,4 until the edges almost separate, then fit 5 over note 1, and place note 6 back where note 2 is. (This essentially increases the spacing of all the notes by less than a unit. )

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16607 -> You're right. Actually I made them more square-like, but it is almost the same you asked anyway. Thanks!

00:42:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - These notes would be easier to play if they weren't so close together. Look at the distance between each note in the timeline and look how close they are in the map. It just doesn't flow well when the notes deviate a straight line. I get 100s and 50s. Eh after a few tries I have gotten the hang of it,but it's so easy to mistake the closer spacing as being closer timed notes. -> I get your point. Actually I *forgot* to fix this bit after I figured that the distance snap was was changed sometime when I was making the beatmap. (1, 2, 3, 4) Moved up and left, (2, 4) moved down, nem combo (2, 4) moved up. Should be better now!

01:09:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move left 1 unit. (Can be moved down 2 units to, but that isn't important)
01:13:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:18:147 (1,1) - ^
(You should move all these notes left to center 01:18:147 (1,1) - and fix the distance snap between 01:07:712 (6,1) - . Moving the notes down 2 units is just a cosmetic thing and just a preference of mine.) -> No, actually bringing two steps down looks better, it gets aligned with (6) 1:07:712. I like it (and the distance snap gets fixed alone with it). The sliders got centered and... Gee, perfect.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16612

Look at the vertical line and you will see that your sliders are one unit too far to the right. -> Nice eye

01:40:582 (4,1,2,3) - Move left 1 unit. (spacing and the stack isn't fully stacked.)

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16613 -> Yeah I noticed it just now >_> Silly me

(((Next!)))
Normal Feelings

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01:13:973 (1,2,3) - This doesn't look good with the overlap. -> Now that you speak about it... Hm

How about making the note path lok like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16617 -> I like this, I'm just making it a bit more symmetric~
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16618
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16619

This design improves how it looks, but I think it could be made better with a little mapper ingenuity. Think of how the notes flow. I do not think that note 4 needs to be part of the blue combo or the same snap for that matter. It could be placed somewhere away from note 3. But keep flow in check. -> I modified the (4) slider. It's a new combo now and slightly more curvy. It's snapped a bit more below than it should, too.

My version places note 8 at an ideal distance away from the start of the next combo. You might want to consider keeping it that far apart. -> It's nice this way. Changed!

01:20:756 (8) - This slider is ugly. -> Sure is, it's not curvy enough. D: Fixed.

01:51:538 (1,2) - Move these notes up a few units to reduce the overlap of note 2 and the fading note 6 of the previous combo.

I think that this works really well. I think that having notes 3 and 4 be lower than notes 1 and 2, fits the slight change in tone of the vocals perfectly.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16621 -> Haha, loved it! Thanks!

02:30:147 (2,3) - Odd anti jump. I suggest you fix this. -> I think it's okay now. Fixed.

02:58:321 (1) - Maybe you should lower the volume for this slider. -> Volume down 50%!

(((Tee-hee~)))
Super Feelings

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01:04:843 (1) - Remove? I feel that the vocals are stronger than the beat here. -> I was supposed to be with the vocals but oh, it's better without it, I guess.

01:04:843 (1,2,3,4) - Blue notes are hard to see on the black background and hard to hit with the fading green note further obstructing the approach circles. I highly suggest you move this combo or change it's color somehow. -> Hm. They're now at the lower part, they fitted well with the combo. Fixed!

01:11:625 (4) - Move right 1 unit? (Fixes spacing.) (((It was to look better))) Might have to tug on 01:11:886 (5) - to make sure the distance snap is correct. -> Minor edit on the sliders. (4) is still centered and fixed!

01:26:756 - Add a note? (((Let's see... Try to renovate this part of the map. (01:26:625 (1,2) - ) It doesn't play right the way it is and I'm not sure how to fix it) -> Idk, it's nice to me. You see, this bit is i sync with the vocals and the finger snaps... meh.

01:28:582 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing >.< -> Haha, (3) Was snapped wrong! *headdesk* Much less confusing now (I guess o.o)

01:45:278 (8) - Make this slider look better? -> Modified a little~

01:50:625 (3) - Not fully aligned with notes 2 and 4. Turn grid snap off and move it until it looks centered between the two notes. -> It looks PERFECTLY centered here. No kidding. o-o

02:41:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Whistle spam hurts my ears and makes no sense at all. -> Ew X_X Fixed!

02:57:800 (7) - Move up 1 unit (spacing) -> Whoops!

02:59:886 (1,2,1,1,2) - Shouldn't this look similar to this 02:58:060 (1,1,1,2) - or vice versa. -> It's the same, but with misplaced new combos. Fixed.

Bittersweet Feelings

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Background text is too hard to see. Bittersweet's name is all blurred . -> I'll fix it

(((And with that we reach the last one)))
Hot! Feeling

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Offset is different in this map. -> Fixed

00:42:669 (5) - New combo. (Switches to vocals) -> Done

00:44:495 (3) - Remove? (Not a full note) -> Hm okay.

00:48:669 (3,4) - Empty notes. Remove. -> Done!

00:58:843 (5) - New combo. -> Done!

00:58:843 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Sound odd with the hitsound volume being so loud. -> Volume down 50% on this bit.

01:15:408 (6,7,8,9) - overmapped? -> Removed 6, 8 and 9

01:18:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Way overmapped!!!!! -> Spammed some sliders, should look better xD

01:22:321 (1,2,3,4,5) - Reversing direction this fast kills the flow. I don't suggest placing notes like this. -> Created a square-like stream.

01:37:712 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Overmapped -> Agreed. Let's spam more sliders!


(((Kiai was revamped.)))
02:25:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - This does not look good to me.

02:29:756 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

02:34:843 (7) - I don't like how hidden this note is. Can you find a way to place it out from under those other notes?

02:55:190 (4,5,6,7,8) - Hard to read.
(((Continuing...)))

03:02:103 (9) - New combo. -> Done

03:02:103 (9,10,11,12) - Overmapped??? -> Replaced with sliders with half bpm.

Prognosis

You can keep your overmapped bits if you want, but I will never star this with an overmapped beatmap in it. -> Let's see now, I think it can be further improved anyways.

Dragvon wrote:

Yay Yay! Finalmente cheguei pra dar meu mod :>!

Legenda:
Cor normal -q: Sugestões!
ERRO! Arrume isso por ser inaceitável!
Frescurites! Pode ignorar isso, como eu disse, são frescuras xD!
Mods Gerais

<Geral>
• Como todos já disseram, tira o furfle das tags em TODAS as dificuldades (senão não sai)! -> Tirando~
• Tbm já foi dito, mas como na minha versão ainda está faltando, coloque o nome da Bitter em todas as diff. -> Colocando~
• Você não escolheu nenhuma cor padrão para o seu mapa. -> Pensei que tinha escolhido preto o_o Tá normal aqui, eu hein
• Eu se fosse você colocaria um spinner-background.png. Apenas para que a skin do jogador não fique estranha com o spin-circle que você colocou xD! (Você também pode forçar a skin default se quiser) -> Já tinha feito isso, e eu forçava a skin antes disso. Tem certeza que você baixou o mapa de novo? lol
• Delete o Marcelo Adnet - Furfles Feelings (guifisilva).osb (Ele está vazio!) -> Já é a quarta vez que vou fazer isso. X_X Quando mudar o background da bit vou dar full upload ê

<Timing>
• Eu estou achando um pouquinho atrasado o offset. Experimente usar 15.519. Se optar pelo meu, não esqueça de arrumar TODAS as notas! (Use Resnap All Notes e de uma conferida)

<...Diet Feeling>
• 00:59:886 (1) - Experimente fazer algo semelhante a isso:

Reduza o slider a um pequeno de 1/1 e cria 2 repetições. Isso combinará mais com o canto, mas você ficará com um buraco depois dele mas fácil de mapear -> Haha, ótimo!

• 01:12:408 (7,8,9) - Hmm essas palmas soam meio estranhas ou é impressão minha? -> É, soou estranho pra mim também *headdesk* agora só com o 9!
• 01:18:147 (1) - Slider feio IRAIRAIRAI Deixa isso ae mais bunito rapaz, mas se não quiser tudo bem, frescuras :3 -> RIAIRIARIAIRIARIAR já teve sliders piores -q, mas só está ali pela sincronia, e não para se fazer de purpurina. D: lol. E não consigo pensar em outro slider pra substituir esse..
• 01:27:017 (1,2,3,4) - Que tal whistles em (1),(2) e (3) e trocar as palmas por um finish no (4)? -> Hmmmm aceitável.
• 01:35:365 (2,4,2,2,4,2) - Apitos nestes. -> Sutil, gostei
• 01:36:408 (4,4) - Esses não precisam de Finish. Coloque whistles (apitos).
• 01:42:669 (4) - Finish nele.
• 01:45:278 (2) - Troque o claps por finish
• 01:59:886 (6) - Finish -> Nããão! Não combina com a música D: Achei que ficava melhor com whistle, coloquei nele

Diff legal, apesar da velocidade do slider me irritar (Sou DTmaníaco =p) -> Acredite, já foi mais lento q


(((Próximo!)))
<Normal Feeling>

• 00:44:756 (2) - Troque o finish por claps -> Duh, que óbvio -se castiga-
• 00:51:017 (1) - Finish no fim do slider -> Ah sim
• 00:53:104 (2) - Claps no fim do slider (Percebeu o ritmo?) -> Lololololol.
• 01:34:843 (1) - Remova o Finish do fim do slider. -> Arrã
• 01:38:495 (6) - Claps -> Arrã2
• 01:42:669 (6) - Idem ^ (Perceba o ritmo) -> Lololololol (ah cara é engraçado ok D:)
• 01:45:278 (5) - Não precisa de tantos finishs! De uma olhada. -> Haha, tirei do primeiro e do terceiro "combo", deixando no quinto

Hmm achei que vc exagerou um pouco na quantidade de sliders longos. -> De fato. Mas faz parte da dificuldade agora, não quero mudar muito~ ê -apanha-

(((Arrrrr)))
<Super Feeling>

• 00:36:408 (8) - Isso é tão... Estranho? Omg não entendo arte moderna xD! De novo, frescuras~ -> Ai
• 01:03:278 (7) - Remova ou altere as palmas por um apito -> Hm, alteração boa
• 01:04:843 (1) - Remova as palmas
• 01:18:147 (1) - Minhoca atropelada por um trem... Interessante 8D -> Não, foi um caminhão roubado tá
• 01:23:886 - Coloque uma nota aqui com claps -> Hm, ok
• 02:54:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Outro exagero de finishs hmm -> vai ver se eu tô lá na esquina Consertado

Urgh, o spacing ta muito estranho. As notas parecem meio jogadas de qualquer jeito D:! -> Juro que fiz isso por causa do distance snap.

(((Vamos para a ovelha negra)))
<Hot! Feeling>

• 00:17:625 (2,4,5) - Claps no fim dos 3 sliders. Perceba o ritmo! -> Feito
• 00:59:495 (10,11) - Esses 2 são desnecessários e soam estranho. Remova-os. -> Feito
• Durante os Kiais você abusou de overmapping. Os streams estão meio sem noção, recomendo que vc dê uma BOA olhada no ritmo deles :X

Bem, essa diff ta com muitos hitsounds fora do lugar, por isso nem comentei, caçe eles, j[a te dei várias sugestões sobre eles e acho que você já é capaz de identificá-los!

Por ora é só! Star quando arrumarem <3 -> Ai como vocês dificultam as coisas ;_; Enfim, ao menos eu tentei