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Astom

Sallad4ever wrote:

Here you go
[attachment=0:a5047]Easy Sallad.rar[/attachment:a5047]

As always I like making a challenging easy :twisted: :3 I have problems making challenging easy hahaha

And Astom my friend, this skin is by far The most cutest skin I see :oops: hahahahaahahhahaha xD
Looking forward to the SB maybe some day I finish it xD
Double pink Star~

EDIT : I guarantee this is EASY orz
even the AI mod say so
Sallad4ever
I give up Astom orz :cry:

Sorry
Topic Starter
Astom

Sallad4ever wrote:

I give up Astom orz :cry:

Sorry
hahhaha xD
roflninja
i tiried, couldnt find anything
Topic Starter
Astom

roflninja wrote:

i tiried, couldnt find anything
oh.. that's normal xDDD still thx for u star ^^
Vikon
Like Rita, and your map, so I am here to mod~!

[General]
disable the countdown in 3 difficulties
add " Sallad4ever " to tag

[Easy Sallad]
wow, I love the "soft-hitwhistle2" audio
00:04:945 (2) add "soft-hitwhistle2" here ?
00:09:308 (2) ^
00:19:672 (1) add finish?
00:28:399 (1) ^
00:41:490 (1) ^

[Hard]
00:02:081 remove this timing section and use this volume in the red timing section(00:00:03).
01:00:854 (1) add a back on the slider ? or add a note at 01:01:126

[Insane]
00:42:581 (4) using the soft-sliderside2 to slience this sliderside?

Nice, really nice song and map.
Star + Kd star

Is there any space for 1 more guest difficulty? I would like to make a difficulty between [H] and [I] if it is available :P .
Topic Starter
Astom

Vikon wrote:

Like Rita, and your map, so I am here to mod~!

[General]
disable the countdown in 3 difficulties I forget that
add " Sallad4ever " to tag I add it when Lizbeth send me her diff

[Easy Sallad]
wow, I love the "soft-hitwhistle2" audio
00:04:945 (2) add "soft-hitwhistle2" here ?
00:09:308 (2) ^
00:19:672 (1) add finish?
00:28:399 (1) ^
00:41:490 (1) ^

[Hard]
00:02:081 remove this timing section and use this volume in the red timing section(00:00:03). rdy
01:00:854 (1) add a back on the slider ? or add a note at 01:01:126 I make this slider longer lol

[Insane]
00:42:581 (4) using the soft-sliderside2 to slience this sliderside? mm I think that is not necesary

Nice, really nice song and map. thx ^^
Star + Kd star

Is there any space for 1 more guest difficulty? I would like to make a difficulty between [H] and [I] if it is available :P. Uhmm sry I'm waiting for a guest diff [I] or [H] from Lizbeth, if u Like can make a [N] diff :P
Vikon
" Taiyou " , written as 「 太陽 」in japenese, which means " Sun"
And in Chinese, we pronounce this word as " Tai yang", so I make a difficulty named "Tai yang"
But 囧,
After cosidering, I find there is no apparent relation between " Taiyou " and " Taiyang", So I renamed the file xD

P.S. if you think my difficulty is bad or unsuitable for your map, feel free to ignore it ! ~ ;)

Download: Rita - Taiyou (Astom) [Vikon's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
Astom

Vikon wrote:

" Taiyou " , written as 「 太陽 」in japenese, which means " Sun"
And in Chinese, we pronounce this word as " Tai yang", so I make a difficulty named "Tai yang"
But 囧,
After cosidering, I find there is no apparent relation between " Taiyou " and " Taiyang", So I renamed the file xD

P.S. if you think my difficulty is bad or unsuitable for your map, feel free to ignore it ! ~ ;)
MMMmmm it's fine, but need some mods =P well I give some work to mods lol, maybe too much circles =/ (my hard have less circles and have more level of stars lol)
frost-b-spec
why WIP?

[General]
tag:sallad4ever vikon

[Easy Sallad]
0:21:854(5) - more grid up(It is not easy to see. )
0:30:581(5) - ^
0:40:399(6,1) - ^
0:53:490(4,5,6) - more grid down

[Insane]
1:12:854(3) - more grid up

star~ :)
Topic Starter
Astom

frost-b-spec wrote:

why WIP? Because is WIP LOL

[General]
tag:sallad4ever vikon I know I know xD but I'm waiting for another guest diff

[Easy Sallad]
0:21:854(5) - more grid up(It is not easy to see. )
0:30:581(5) - ^
0:40:399(6,1) - ^
0:53:490(4,5,6) - more grid down

[Insane]
1:12:854(3) - more grid up mm ok

star~ :)
Ignacio_old
:D
Vikon
decreased the number of circle, changed the hitsound and volume of [Vikon's Normal] , and now the Max score is 917,612 .

It seems the score of [Hard] (662,332) is a little bit low for a song last for 85s, would you like to add more notes?

Download: Rita - Taiyou (Astom) [Vikon's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
Astom

Vikon wrote:

decreased the number of circle, changed the hitsound and volume of [Vikon's Normal] , and now the Max score is 917,612 .

It seems the score of [Hard] (662,332) is a little bit low for a song last for 85s, would you like to add more notes?
Yea I go to make some changes when I get some time
Vikon
( no kudosu )

I found somethings in [Hard]
00:13:945 (6) end at 00:14:763?
00:24:035 (3) ... delete this note?
00:46:126 (x) add a note here?
00:49:808 (X) ^
01:32:217 (1,2,3,4,5) the spacing confused me
Topic Starter
Astom

Vikon wrote:

( no kudosu )

I found somethings in [Hard]
00:13:945 (6) end at 00:14:763? no
00:24:035 (3) ... delete this note? no
00:46:126 (x) add a note here? no
00:49:808 (X) ^ x_x no
01:32:217 (1,2,3,4,5) the spacing confused me ok
Sallad4ever
I make it easier, this is properly easy now I guess

Download: Rita - Taiyou (Astom) [Sallad's Easy].osu

Please change it Astom :(
Foster Don
:P
Lizbeth
Por fin esta lista!
Disculpa la tardanza, ya supiste mis razones T.T

Aquí va la diff completa, hasta con hitsounds (ni yo me lo creo o.o)

Para el custom hitsound, sustituye el soft-hitclap por el normal-hitnormal, y activa el custom override 1 en todas las timing sections, y listo.

Espero que te guste, nos vemos!

Download: Rita - Taiyou (Astom) [Lizbeth].osu
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

fuck yeah, you are earning my kud star again.

[General]
make kiai time the same on all diffs.

[Sallad's Easy]
Overall+1/+2
don't think clap on every 2nd and 4th white line is a good idea, but not a big deal.
00:10:399 (4) - green lines for changing volume should not be put exactly on notes. make the timing point 1/2 earlier.
00:33:854 (3) - nazi, 1 grid right.
00:57:854 (4) - whistle is better.
01:29:490 (3,1) - switch new combo
01:31:672 (3,1) - ^

[Vikon's Normal+]
HP Drain Rate+1, Overall+1
00:08:763 (1,2,3,4) - use two sliders instead maybe. i don't like stack notes at the very beginning, players will get confused.
00:15:035 (1,2) - switch new combo
00:28:399 (1) - 00:37:126 (1) - new combo is overused at this part, but your choice.
00:54:308 (4,5,1) - little spacing problem...
00:57:581 (1) - remove new combo
01:30:308 (1,1) - emm... 1/2 notes after a spinner? too hard for Normal players.

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate+1
remove sliderwhistle orz. if you want to whistle on all beats of a slider, choose them one by one and add whistle, don't want to save time and just choose the slider. and by the way, i don't think default clap fits.
00:28:399 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - wow confusing... change the shape?
01:08:899 (2) - emm... use a circle here and let this slider start 1/4 later?
01:17:626 (2) - ^
01:32:217 (1,4,5) - nazi here... 1- 1 grid right, 4- 1 grid left, 5- 2 grids left.
01:33:854 (6) - new combo?

[Insane]
00:00:854 (3) - remove whistle?
00:55:263 (3,4) - 1 grid up.
pretty good.

[Liz's Lemon Pie]
00:02:763 (2) - whistle?
00:03:445 (4) - whistle at first repeat and the end.
00:04:945 (2) - whistle
00:05:627 (4) - whistle at first repeat.
00:07:126 (3) - whistle
00:07:944 (7,9) - whistle
00:08:763 (1) - whistle at the end.
only focus on hitsounds mod for the front part.... other parts are great.
Vikon

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Vikon's Normal+]
Personally, I don't like the shining notes in kiai time, but if Astom want to unify the kiai time, it would be fine.
HP Drain Rate+1, Overall+1 ok, but if there is no changes on the HP Drain rate of [Hard], I would like to switch it back 囧
00:08:763 (1,2,3,4) - use two sliders instead maybe. i don't like stack notes at the very beginning, players will get confused. ok
00:15:035 (1,2) - switch new combo ok
00:28:399 (1) - 00:37:126 (1) - new combo is overused at this part, but your choice. ok
00:54:308 (4,5,1) - little spacing problem... This is a little jump 囧
00:57:581 (1) - remove new combo ok~
01:30:308 (1,1) - emm... 1/2 notes after a spinner? too hard for Normal players. yes, you are right-_-
here is the fixed version, thx NR~

Download: Rita - Taiyou (Astom) [Vikon's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
Astom

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

fuck yeah, you are earning my kud star again. hahaha thx

[General]
make kiai time the same on all diffs. no x3

[Sallad's Easy]
Overall+1/+2
don't think clap on every 2nd and 4th white line is a good idea, but not a big deal.
00:10:399 (4) - green lines for changing volume should not be put exactly on notes. make the timing point 1/2 earlier.
00:33:854 (3) - nazi, 1 grid right.
00:57:854 (4) - whistle is better.
01:29:490 (3,1) - switch new combo
01:31:672 (3,1) - ^

[Vikon's Normal+]
HP Drain Rate+1, Overall+1
00:08:763 (1,2,3,4) - use two sliders instead maybe. i don't like stack notes at the very beginning, players will get confused.
00:15:035 (1,2) - switch new combo
00:28:399 (1) - 00:37:126 (1) - new combo is overused at this part, but your choice.
00:54:308 (4,5,1) - little spacing problem...
00:57:581 (1) - remove new combo
01:30:308 (1,1) - emm... 1/2 notes after a spinner? too hard for Normal players.

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate+1 ok
remove sliderwhistle orz. if you want to whistle on all beats of a slider, choose them one by one and add whistle, don't want to save time and just choose the slider. and by the way, i don't think default clap fits.
00:28:399 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - wow confusing... change the shape? no *¬*
01:08:899 (2) - emm... use a circle here and let this slider start 1/4 later? ok
01:17:626 (2) - ^ no :3
01:32:217 (1,4,5) - nazi here... 1- 1 grid right, 4- 1 grid left, 5- 2 grids left. I move 1 - 1 grid left =P
01:33:854 (6) - new combo? I think that it's not necesary

[Insane]
00:00:854 (3) - remove whistle? no
00:55:263 (3,4) - 1 grid up. fixed in another way
pretty good.

[Liz's Lemon Pie]
00:02:763 (2) - whistle?
00:03:445 (4) - whistle at first repeat and the end.
00:04:945 (2) - whistle
00:05:627 (4) - whistle at first repeat.
00:07:126 (3) - whistle
00:07:944 (7,9) - whistle
00:08:763 (1) - whistle at the end.
only focus on hitsounds mod for the front part.... other parts are great.
Card N'FoRcE
- Sallad's Easy:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Perfect. And claps are great, because they're not only 2/1.
- Vikon's Normal+:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Fine.
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    A "problem" at the beginning: i know you used New combo, but things like 00:02:217 (1,2,1) - are... weird D:
- Insane:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    01:24:308 (2,3,4) - i didn't like this, but it's ok.
- Liz's Lemon Pie:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    00:44:763 (1) - LOOOOL nice.
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:50:217 (3) - stack correctly? :P
    01:21:854 (5) - ^ (but i actually like this one unstacked)
Yay for storyboards~
Lizbeth
Lissette
Liz's Lemon Pie
podrías subirle uno al OD >.>

Insane
00:21:035 (2) - quita esta nota ><
00:35:354 (1) - no inicies spinner en tick azul a menos que sea necesario ^^
00:49:808 - agrega nota
01:32:217 - mira screenshot (time line)

Hard
00:03:445 (1) - empiezalo 1/4 de beat antes, y dale otro repeat, ya que da la impresión que este slider es igual que el anterior, y es medio confuso @.@
00:07:945 (1) - igual
00:13:945 (6) - terminalo aqui 00:14:763 -
01:33:854 (6) - new combo?

puede que alguien se queje por el uso solo del burst del kiai >.>

aparte de esto, esta todo bien ^^

Star!!

Topic Starter
Astom

Lissette wrote:

Liz's Lemon Pie
podrías subirle uno al OD >.>

Insane
00:21:035 (2) - quita esta nota >< o_o no
00:35:354 (1) - no inicies spinner en tick azul a menos que sea necesario ^^bueno dice "te" en 00:35:354 asi q lo dejare ahi :3
00:49:808 - agrega nota ee no
01:32:217 - mira screenshot (time line) hice el cambio en hard

Hard
00:03:445 (1) - empiezalo 1/4 de beat antes, y dale otro repeat, ya que da la impresión que este slider es igual que el anterior, y es medio confuso @.@ na <3
00:07:945 (1) - igual nop >:3
00:13:945 (6) - terminalo aqui 00:14:763 - le agregue un circle
01:33:854 (6) - new combo? ok

puede que alguien se queje por el uso solo del burst del kiai >.> a q se kejen =(

aparte de esto, esta todo bien ^^

Star!!
Leorda
BUENO

[Sallad's Easy]
00:04:399 (3) - Maybe whistle at tick 2?
00:08:763 (3) - ^
00:19:126 (4) - I really don't like stack with 3
01:07:126 (3) - ^
01:11:490 (3) - ^
01:12:035 (1) - I feel I want clap at tick 1 after repeating slider, IMO

[Vikon's Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
00:35:354 (1) - Add finish?
00:49:945 (x) - Add note?
00:56:490 (3,4) - Why this object volume is low?

[Insane]
00:49:945 (x) - Add note?
00:54:581 (x) - Add note with finish?

[Liz's Lemon Pie]
No kiai O.o?

00:15:035 (2) - New combo?
00:39:035 (x) - Add note?
01:03:035 (B) - Fill this with spinner? Like other diff?
01:34:399 (1) - Since this silence, how about extend this to 01:42:035

Good song
STAR
kino77
Nice map and song~ :3

[General]
Diffs' name suggestion~
Vikon's Normal+ -> Vikon's Normal
Hard -> Normal+
Insane -> Hard

[Vikon's Normal+]
00:24:308 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:50:217 (5,1) - Switch new combo?
00:54:580 (5,1) - ^
00:56:491 (1,2) - ^
00:58:127 (1) - Remove new cmbo?
00:58:945 (3) - New combo?
00:59:764 (1) - Remove new cmbo?
01:27:581 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:12:854 (1,2) - Switch new combo?

[Insane]
01:24:308 (2,3,4) - Too far > <

Star~
Topic Starter
Astom

Leorda wrote:

BUENO

[Sallad's Easy]
00:04:399 (3) - Maybe whistle at tick 2?
00:08:763 (3) - ^
00:19:126 (4) - I really don't like stack with 3
01:07:126 (3) - ^
01:11:490 (3) - ^
01:12:035 (1) - I feel I want clap at tick 1 after repeating slider, IMO

[Vikon's Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
00:35:354 (1) - Add finish? ok
00:49:945 (x) - Add note? no~
00:56:490 (3,4) - Why this object volume is low? because I like it :3

[Insane]
00:49:945 (x) - Add note? no
00:54:581 (x) - Add note with finish? mm ok

[Liz's Lemon Pie]
No kiai O.o?

00:15:035 (2) - New combo?
00:39:035 (x) - Add note?
01:03:035 (B) - Fill this with spinner? Like other diff?
01:34:399 (1) - Since this silence, how about extend this to 01:42:035

Good song
STAR
Topic Starter
Astom

kino77 wrote:

Nice map and song~ :3

[General] uhmm no
Diffs' name suggestion~
Vikon's Normal+ -> Vikon's Normal
Hard -> Normal+
Insane -> Hard

[Vikon's Normal+]
00:24:308 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:50:217 (5,1) - Switch new combo?
00:54:580 (5,1) - ^
00:56:491 (1,2) - ^
00:58:127 (1) - Remove new cmbo?
00:58:945 (3) - New combo?
00:59:764 (1) - Remove new cmbo?
01:27:581 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:12:854 (1,2) - Switch new combo? no

[Insane]
01:24:308 (2,3,4) - Too far > < *¬*

Star~
Lizbeth

Leorda wrote:

[Liz's Lemon Pie]
No kiai O.o? kiai added n.n

00:15:035 (2) - New combo? nop, 1 and 2 should be in the same combo
00:39:035 (x) - Add note? I really want to keep that free space =)
01:03:035 (B) - Fill this with spinner? Like other diff? I will keep the break, just to reposition of the hand n.n
01:34:399 (1) - Since this silence, how about extend this to 01:42:035 I don't like long spinners >.<
Thanks for modding Leorda =)

Astom aqui esta la version con el kiai
Saludos!

Download: Rita - Taiyou (Astom) [Liz's Lemon Pie].osu
Vikon

kino77 wrote:

[Vikon's Normal+]
00:24:308 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:50:217 (5,1) - Switch new combo?
00:54:580 (5,1) - ^
00:56:491 (1,2) - ^
00:58:127 (1) - Remove new cmbo?
00:58:945 (3) - New combo?
00:59:764 (1) - Remove new cmbo?
01:27:581 (1) - ^
I see your point of changing the combos, but I think they are fine now.
Anyway, Thx for modding~ kino77

P.S. I find that no one is using N:C2, So I added 2 audio files(Normal-slidetick2 + Normal-sliderside2) and changed the hitsound of my diff
(But I don't know why I can't upload the audio files, could you add them for me?
the sound of [normal-slidertick2] is [soft-hitwhistle2]
the sound of [normal-sliderside2] is [soft-sliderslide] , Thx :D )

Download: Rita - Taiyou (Astom) [Vikon's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
Astom
All rdy <.<
Shulin
~ Star ~
Mafiamaster
[Insane]
01:24:308 (2,3,4) - I don't like how this is the only triplet that's spaced this far in this difficulty. Maybe move them closer?
Topic Starter
Astom

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Insane]
01:24:308 (2,3,4) - I don't like how this is the only triplet that's spaced this far in this difficulty. Maybe move them closer? I delete circle number 3 :P
Rdy
Mafiamaster
Bubbled!
Also I love the preview point on this =)
Cyril Scarlet
oops, I'm find wrong word >x<"


hikari manatsuke no saki kara → hikari matsuge no saki kara

chiisana anata mo abunage na → chiisana anata no abunage na

watashi wo mae de → watashi no mae de

chiisana anata hashagu nagara → chiisana anata hashagi nagara

koneko no youni teroppu → koneko no youni korobu

daite goran → taete goran

moshimo de kaerarenai kanashimi → moshimo kakaerarenai kanashimi

hirogeta nara → hirotta nara

ni iro ii ga suru → nioi ga suru

omae ga itami → yawarakai kami

takasaan no → wakakusa no

SPOILER
01.太陽(Tarte ひなたぼっこ オープニングテーマ)
作詞:Rita
作編曲:Blueberry & Yogurt

光 まつ毛の先から こぼれ 駆けて来る
小さな あなたの 危なげな  足元を照らす
少し目を細め 見てる 私の前で
小さなあなた はしゃぎながら 子猫のように 転ぶ

少しくらいの痛みなら 耐えてごらん
もしも 抱えられない悲しみ 拾ったなら
魔法の呪文できっと 助けてあげる
だから自由に走っていいんだよ

あなたを 抱きしめると ひなたのにおいがする
あなたのやわらかい髪 若草の雫 連れて
あなたは誰よりもまぶしい
あたたかな 太陽

http://sinfonia.in/archive/index.php/t-67752.html
Alace
Please fix the SB stuffs which SiRiRu posted,i asked him about that
Liz`s diff <3

<Hitsounds>
in insane diff, normal clap and soft clap mixed up, they don`t really sound sweet for me
Liz`s hitsounds fit the song XD

anyway you only needs to fix SB stuffs and i will recheck it
Topic Starter
Astom

Alace wrote:

Please fix the SB stuffs which SiRiRu posted,i asked him about that
Liz`s diff <3

<Hitsounds>
in insane diff, normal clap and soft clap mixed up, they don`t really sound sweet for me
Liz`s hitsounds fit the song XD

anyway you only needs to fix SB stuffs and i will recheck it
Hey it's orion fault this time <-<
I haven't time right now so I fix this later, maybe tomorrow I don't know

Kudosu to u because I go to recheck hitsounds how u suggest, I'm not good with hitsounds but I try again =)
Oh ~ and thx for checking this without asking for it =3
Alace
Ask me to recheck after you fixing

EDIT:Everything is so cute here <3
Cyril Scarlet
So Cute Hit circle XD
Topic Starter
Astom

S i R i R u wrote:

So Cute Hit circle XD
U need hit a cute hit circle >;o!
Lizbeth
nice, is bubbled! thanks Alace <3
Mafiamaster
IRC modded on a part of the SB
Topic Starter
Astom

Mafiamaster wrote:

IRC modded on a part of the SB
rdy <-<
Mafiamaster
Ranked!
Topic Starter
Astom

Mafiamaster wrote:

Ranked!
Thx :3

And thx to the people who support this song ;3

10th Ranked song ;3!
roflninja
gratz :)
Lizbeth
yay! felicidades!
Sallad4ever
Didn't realize this is already ranked orz

Finally ranked, the cutest map I've seen so far ;)
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