1. Hard (4.34 stars, 411 notes)
2. Normal (2.9 stars, 256 notes)

oipoi wrote:

shoot my love(star)!

先射星，下午来帮你MOD图哈

整天值周烦死嘞

oipoi wrote:

帮你看了下，发现你有个很独特的风格，就是Note完全脱离歌了，她唱她的你打你的……

BPM没什么问题

还有四星半的那个，1:22:132节奏感很强的那个地方，应该每一拍都要包含一个Note点，这样才会睾同步，那里最好是每个鼓点都加上clap

还有啊，高潮的地方曲风完全不柔和了，Note音换成Normal啦

lxy wrote:

Alan~纯听歌~

Sunny Holic wrote:

General
需要hit300k.png,hit300g.png。不然会和其他skin混在一起。
offset是4.069
总体来讲，有些近有些远的太多了，还是把grid snap关掉比较好……
还有，注意一些重叠的note重叠好。重叠好了玩的时候osu会自动显示成阶梯形
第二，第四个拍子加clap
关于hitsound，请用太鼓auto模式play一下。大圈是finish，蓝圈是clap和哨子，看看用的适不适

Normal
00:09:216 (3,4) - 3往上移一格，4对准(90度)
01:29:815 (1) - 注意slider不能盖住下一个note。unrank要素
01:22:072 (T) - 从这儿开始用normal hit sound
01:45:243 (1) - Normal难度有jump有点奇怪
02:26:100 (2) - ^

Hard
grid snap问题就不一一提了。
01:14:100 (5) - 被覆盖了


note放的真到位啊……不错……弄好看一点就好

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~ sorry for the late :>

[Normal]
01:30:640 (2,3) - Bad because that's hide by 01:29:783 (1). That's better if you do that :>

SPOILER

02:00:640 (6) - There are a little spacing problem here :>
02:02:783 (2) - Too hard in a normal diff. Remove and add 1 reverse at 02:02:354 (1)
02:03:497 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and extand by 3/4
03:20:640 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard in a Normal diff :> change that
03:22:640 (2,3) - ^
03:27:783 (1,2,3,4,5,8) - ^
This difficulty must be less than 3.00 star to be Ranked. But if you fix the three last problem, I think the diff willl be less 3.00 star.

[Hard]
02:03:497 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and extand by 3/4
02:10:354 (1) - Add finish
02:16:069 (1) - ^
02:43:783 (5) - Finish at the end
03:09:786 (1) - Too close to the previous note, that's confusing :<

Nice for a first map, You get my star~

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

Resnap all notes.
A lot of your SB images have unnecessary transparency, please crop them.
01:53:783 - What is the point of the kiai time here? Let star to gush.

Normal;

00:11:783 (6,7) - Spacing.
00:15:497 (3) - This repeat is hidden with the hitburst of the 2.
00:15:497 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:17:211 (5,6) - This is too hard for your easiest diff, in my opinion.
00:26:926 (4,5) - ^
00:30:640 (2,3) - ^
Same goes for all the sliders that do that.
00:30:640 (2,3) - Finish doesn't fit here.
02:25:783 (1,2) - ^

Hard;

01:04:354 (3) - The repeat doesn't fall on anything
02:10:926 (1,2) - Spacing. It's a jump lol
02:16:354 (2) - What is the point of this
03:09:211 - Use an inheriting section here?

• 
  
  
  1. Offset有点抢拍 重新测一下
  
  2. 你的Skin里加了Combo数字 所以你还需要
  default-comma default-dot default-percent 和 default-x 这四个
  另外Hitcircle和approachcircle 也是必要的
  3. 02:07:497---02:30:354
  03:11:497---03:34:354
  建议在这两段加Kiai Time
  
  4. 个人不太喜欢图里加的Finish音效
  建议把Finish音效加在最长的白线上

• 
  02:25:783 (1,2): 距离有点远
  02:26:354 : 转盘在这里开始

• 
  
  我没有看到2倍速度
  04:11:4979 (3,4,5) : 0.5倍速里 建议不要有这么严重的跳

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~

我的建议:

[General]

• 
  
  
  1. Offset有点抢拍 重新测一下
  
  2. 你的Skin里加了Combo数字 所以你还需要
  default-comma default-dot default-percent 和 default-x 这四个
  (PS:好像是score才有comma dot percent和x吧……)
  另外Hitcircle和approachcircle 也是必要的
  3. 02:07:497---02:30:354
  03:11:497---03:34:354
  建议在这两段加Kiai Time
  
  4. 个人不太喜欢图里加的Finish音效
  建议把Finish音效加在最长的白线上

[Normal]

• 
  02:25:783 (1,2): 距离有点远
  02:26:354 : 转盘在这里开始

[Hard]

• 
  
  我没有看到2倍速度 (2倍速后来删了 )
  04:11:4979 (3,4,5) : 0.5倍速里 建议不要有这么严重的跳

Good map~

※ STAR ※

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request :3

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. The offset is too early. I got 4100~4110 but not too sure. Whatever it is, you should check the offset. [!]
2. Remove "Inuyasha" from tags box. Source covers it.
3. The creator's words on beatmap information page is messed up.
4. I don't know if this is your style but there are a lot of nazi spacing in [Normal] nor [Hard].

[Storyboard]
1. If you are using Photoshop, please trim all the lyrics image. Go to Image then choose Trim. It could decrease the filesize.
2. Add effects like flash or light will make the SB more interesting.
3. Lyrics in purple (and pink maybe) are hard to notice since the background has the same color with the lyrics. Consider changing the color?

[Normal+]
-- I found a lot of combo issues. You may re-check your map and see them yourself if I don't mention some here.
-- I also don't like how you put the kiai time. Read further.
-- Could you just map the rest of this map?

00:06:681 (5,1) - Swap new combo.
00:09:252 (3) - This clap is not really good here imho.
00:12:967 (8) - Move one tiny grid right (align with 7).
00:13:252 (1) - Remove the sliderslide sound.
00:13:252 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
00:28:967 (7,1) - ^
00:19:538 (3) - Clap is not fit to the song.
00:34:395 (2) - Move one tiny grid down (align with 1)
00:36:109 (1) - Change finish to whistle or just leave it blank.
00:40:681 (5,1) - Swap new combo.
00:42:967 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:49:252 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
00:53:824 (10) - This single clap sounds terrible.
01:05:538 (5,1) - Swap new combo.
01:13:824 (1,2) - ^ [?]
01:40:395 (8) - Move one tiny grid up (align with 7)
01:43:824 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
01:45:252 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:46:395 (1) - ^
01:54:110 (6) - Move one tiny grid up (align with 1).
01:54:110 (6,1) - Swap new combo.
01:53:824 - Remove the kiai time here. Inconsistent.
02:03:109 (1) - Remove all kiai times during this spinner. [!]
02:07:538 - Don't you know that kiai is far better used in such this point (reff)?
02:17:252 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:18:395 (3,4,5) - Move one tiny grid up (align with 2).
02:20:681 (1) - Inconsistent placement of spinner.
02:26:109 (2) - Bad apple jump here. I suggest you to re-distance this.
02:30:109 - This kiai is bad.
02:47:252 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:00:967 (1) - ^
03:04:967 (2) - Move one tiny grid down (align with 1).
03:05:252 (3,4) - Move one tiny grid down (algin with 2).
03:11:538 - This is what I'm talking about about the kiai placement. Please review this diff.
03:14:395 (1,4) - Swap new combo.
03:27:538 (2,1) - ^
03:29:824 (1) - Remove all kiai times during this spinner. [!]

[Hard]
-- Mod your new combo in this diff. There are a lot of new combo which don't fit to the lyrics or even song. I could consider this as new combo spamming.
-- You shoudl fix the kiai just like what I've said before in [Normal] diff mod.
-- A bit overmapped but, well.. it's okay I think.
-- You put a lot of half-times inconsistantly.
-- I don't really support sudden jumps and little jumps in this diff.

00:18:966 (7) - Ahh, please no clap here.
00:20:108 (9) - Move one tiny grid right (align with 8).
00:20:394 (10) - Will be better if aligned with 9.
00:30:108 (6,7) - Move one tiny grid up (align with 5).
00:32:394 (4) - Inconsistent placement of half-time. Too sudden imo.
00:44:680 (4) - Such this note placement will be hated by almost all hidden player. I know this is not official rule but any note and slider should be noticed clearly with hidden mod activated.
00:52:966 (3) - Move one tiny grid right (align with 2).
01:02:966 (8) - Move one tiny grid right (align with 6).
01:05:537 (4,5,1) - Align with 3.
01:08:680 (3,6) - Move one tiny grid down (3) and up (6) so the spacing will look neater.
01:37:251 (4) - Move one tiny grid down (align with 2).

I think I will stop my nazi spacing mod here (actually nazi spacing mod is not my style). Please seek and fix them yourself.

01:59:680 (1) - Remove this.
02:03:109 (1) - Remove all kiai times during this spinner. [!]
02:58:966 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This both are almost alike patterns. Confusing.
03:18:823 (8) - Remove whistle.
03:29:537 (2) - Such this note placement will be hated by almost all hidden player. I know this is not official rule but any note and slider should be noticed clearly with hidden mod activated.
03:29:823 (1) - Remove all kiai times during this spinner. [!]
04:15:537 (1) - Looks like an overlapping slider. I suggest you to fix it. [?] Also, remove all kiai times during the slider. (I think is reasonable?)[!]

Call me back for star (lol is my star really important?).

Clickz wrote:

time to 挖坟