Screenshot:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3653958Replay:
http://puu.sh/k5s6r/4aabe78194.osrMod:
00:42:592 (3,4,5) - This feels awkward to play. Either add a beat or change the spacing.
00:53:501 (1,2,3) - Feels too forced because this triplet is the only one with this kind of spacing.
01:04:580 (1,2,3) - Feels weird and doesn't look too good.
01:11:740 (5,1) - Maybe add a beat or change the spacing.
01:49:921 (2,3) - I think you should add a beat here in the middle of these two.
02:06:285 (2,3) - Weird spacing. Still playable though, but aesthetically doesn't look really good.
02:12:762 (4,5) - ^
02:17:024 (5,6) - ^
02:17:705 (1,2) - ^
03:10:715 (3,4) - Make the 4 a bit further.
03:15:488 (1,2) - Feels weird to play.
03:39:010 (13,14,15,16,1) - This pattern doesn't look too good.
03:40:544 (7,8,9) - This Muya-styled spacing feels too forced.
03:42:760 (9,10,11,12) - Play with the pattern a bit, I think. It just looks weird. It fits the song though.
03:47:192 (13,14,15,16) - I was expecting another spaced stream here.
03:52:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Looks bad.
03:54:266 (12,1) - Forced.
04:30:828 (5,1) - Add a beat in the middle
The general flow is pretty weird, like it starts really awful at the start, but it gets better progressively. I think that's really based on your mood, huh?
All of these mods are just my opinion though so you may or may not follow them.