[General]
The way you put the circles onto the canvas is really messy
[Shikai]
00:08:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - not symmetrical
00:08:582 (1,2,3) - overlap doesn't look good here
00:12:099 (5) - unstack
00:17:593 (3) - ^
00:27:703 (6) - really long 1/2 repeat sliders suck
00:49:461 (11) - too long of a combo
[Hollow]
Don't box map; most of the shapes in this map are 90 degree angles, which isn't very good
00:08:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - weird overlapping is not good mapping
00:17:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - clustering notes is not good mapping
[Hollowification]
00:25:945 (8,9,10) - Don't use three finish hitsounds in a row, especially in a 1/4 triple combo