Shinxyn wrote:

From what I found, the actual song title is "Egg Planet" [Really?! But it does play on the whole galaxy D: Fixed, anyway], the Good Egg Galaxy theme. The artist you used is/are the performers, so that's fine, though you don't need the "super" in it [Fixed]
What's with the extra tags... ehh, anyways, add "Koji Kondo" (original composer) and "Mahito Yokota" (orchestral arrangement) to tags? [Ok~]
On to modding~
Eep timing.. -tries... -fails- blames orchestral- I can tell your first offset is off by a large margin though (+80..)[Fixed with something like that~] + and 154.000 is a tad bit too slow (or theres a few offset changes...), yea... offset after break is fairly off by about +60..[Ok~] (with the same 154-ish BPM... @.@ graaah, go find a timing expert ;-;

For both diffs-
the hitsounds come out strong in this song in general, so I think you might have used a bit too much (or make them even quieter?), and the normal section is a fair bit louder than the soft, please lower the volume for those.
Remove all sliderslide whistles please?[Sorry, but I like to use them >_<]
Placement is fine~ timing is not x.x [Just as I thought =s]

Sorry I wasn't much help here, I can't do timing well..

James2250 wrote:

maps look fine but I can clearly tell that some of the timing is off
however I am not good enough at multiple timings to fix these so all I can do is
*star*

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Timing... well timing an orchestra isn't fun you know! It's SS'able but you might want to try here if you haven't posted already.
-- Change the song and artist like Shinxyn said using the instructions here I'll try~
-- "Super Mario Galaxy" would suffice for the source the rest of the album information goes in tags. Though in Super Mario Galaxy is your artist then the source probably isn't even necessary. I see. Fixed~
-- Tags ~ some people like decapitalised tags but w/e idc. I like capitalized

Piranha Plant:

00:04:157 (1) - Unsnapped. Fixed~
00:52:608 -- Yeah was expecting a spinner here. Don't know....

Dino Piranha:

00:47:118 (x) - Note? Good Idea~
00:52:608 -- I did expect another spinner here to add to the build up. If anyone else say this, I'll fix it. For now, I'll keep that way that is now =/

Nice maps overall, sorry I couldn't help with the timing.[Don't worry, no one could help me with that =p. Now I'll have to pray for Rolled's help] ~ Star.

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

I'll never map a orchestra again D:

• 1. BPM 154 , Offset 4135

soradg123 wrote:

OSU! Timing Help!

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

I'll never map a orchestra again D:

You should be thankful that this song has a constant BPM unlike most orchestrated music. Therefore, you'll only need one timing point as the BPM and offset never change.

• 1. BPM 154 , Offset 4135

Beautiful beatmap~!
Starred~!

fartownik wrote:

Offset -5 (4 130)
then Timing -> Resnap All Notes Ok~

You have 5 .osb files in the song folder. Delete 3 files titled "Good Egg Galaxy" and one of the files titled "Egg Planet". Ok~

[Dino Piranha]

01:03:354 (2,3) - Sounds better if you make the slider (2) 1/2 shorter and move the note (3) 1/2 back. Like previous patterns. Read the advice below. I did the (2) shorter but turned the (3) into a sldier that ends at 01:04:328, where you said that I should add a note. I think this way is nice~
[01:04:328] - Add a note.
01:17:380 (5) - Finish at the start. Ok~

Yeah. Solid map.
+star

Teara wrote:

I cant find anything wrong. Following are just suggestions. Offset still feels a little off for me~ but not a lot. so not a train smash. and I like the SB, good job.

Have a star!

PM me when you did these or ignored them, so that I can award you my first ever given Protobubble

[Dino Piranha]

Combo Mod:
01:01:791 (4) - New combo Sorry, I like the way that is now =/

Hitsounds:
00:57:192 and up, reduce to 60%, its really loud ~ :< Ok~

Lybydose wrote:

Dino:

00:50:888 (1,1) - This is kind of boring. I suggest adding a circle at 00:53:420 and another at 00:56:537. Should probably keep it like it is in the easier difficulty though. Ok, good idea :]
01:01:791 (4) - the end of this slider sounds so bad. It sounds better to me if you reduce it by 1/2. Even if you don't do that, at least remove the whistle from the endpoint. I really like the way that is now, but ok then =/
01:14:258 (1) - ^ Ok~

Pirahna: Did both~

01:01:791 (4) - those same two sliders from Dino
01:14:258 (1) - ^

Oh whoops, forgot one thing: Change the source to "Super Mario Galaxy". If you want to include the album name, put that in the tags. Ok~

Lissette wrote:

I feel timing a bit off, specially the first offset, but i couldn't fix it, i suggest you to post it in Zekira's queue, im sure he/she can help you with this n.n

Star!

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Lissette wrote:

I feel timing a bit off, specially the first offset, but i couldn't fix it, i suggest you to post it in Zekira's queue, im sure he/she can help you with this n.n

Dino Piranha
00:10:170 (9) - unsnapped Ok
00:07:149 - add note Not really sure... But ok, done
00:07:441 (1) - remove note Sorry, like the way that is now =/
00:19:617 - add note Not really sure again but still done~
00:19:909 (1) - remove note I like this note
01:08:025 (1,2,3,4) - didnt like how sounds this combo >.< i suggest this: put a spinner start 01:08:025 and end 01:08:804, then put three notes at this points 01:08:999 - 01:09:193 - 01:09:388, lets see what you think :p Sorry, I like the way that used to be >__<

Piranha Plant
fine

Star!

Lissette wrote:

I feel timing a bit off, specially the first offset, but i couldn't fix it

Shulin wrote:

General:

Lissette wrote:

I feel timing a bit off, specially the first offset, but i couldn't fix it

^ The timing still feels off. I just can't get it right, sorry.

Piranha Plant:

00:04:129 (1) - Finish? Hum, ok
00:52:635 to 00:53:804 - Still feels empty here imo. The same as Dino Piranha
01:18:934 (1) - Soft finish at the end? Think it's better the way that is now

Dino Piranha:

00:13:383 (x) - Note? I think it's better the way that used to be~
00:21:272 (4) - This return doesn't sound that great, maybe just make 1/2? Ok~
01:09:388 (x) - Note? Hum... not realy sure... ok, did it!
01:19:128 (1) - Soft finish at the end? No thanks =/

~ Don't give kudos for this post. Uh? Ok then

NoHItter wrote:

Overall
I believe the artist is supposed to be Koji Kondo & Mahito Yokota and you can put Mario Galaxy Orchestra in the the tags instead of the other way around. I think that this is wrong. Is the same that use the original band name in a cover song. Koji Kondo made it but didn't play it

Storyboard
The initial strobing of the background image when the kiai activated was alright, but the ones after it was over-excessive IMO. Sorry, I like it =/

Also for some odd reason when you play it in regular mode (not in test) the SB in the end with the fading background doesn't appear. LOL it's all black o_O Hope now it's fixed

The map itself is perfect, but the timing... hey, I can SS it D:

Yes wrote:

:)

• • 00:04:324 (2) - 1 square down and 1 square to the right (grid level 3)

xxheroxx wrote:

[Dino Piranha]

• • 00:04:324 (2) - 1 square down and 1 square to the right (grid level 3) Hum... Ok~

termerys wrote:

hihi
suggestion mod XD

Overall:
I think you might have another difficulty like insane or normal difficulty (it's ok if you don't want to do ; suggestion ;__; ) Maybe.. (if it's guest >_>)

Piranha Plant
00:25:948 : i think in easy map, the timing should be the same ; 1x it may confused novices player Hum.. I'll check another players suggestion about this 1/4 speed. For now, i'll keep it~
00:32:375 : oh that's quite a looooong brake for short song But... but.... it's a ouendan size D:

Dino Piranha
no problem

good job
star

DJPop wrote:

~Piranha Plant~
00:25:964 (1) - silence the slidertick Done~
00:44:664 (1,2) - start and end on the same y-axis I don't know if did exacly what you said cuz I didn't really understand what do you mean with y-axis D:
00:47:781 (1,2) - ^

~Dino Piranha~ - I decided to "unovermap it" a lot to get more like a normal, but I didn't upload it on time, Sorry >_<
00:23:042 (9) - new combo
00:23:236 (1) - remove new combo
00:25:964 (1) - silence the slidertick Ok~

~Fiery Dino Piranha~
00:25:964 (1) - silence the slidertick Ok~


+Star

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

I don't know if did exacly what you said cuz I didn't really understand what do you mean with y-axis D:

DJPop wrote:

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

I don't know if did exacly what you said cuz I didn't really understand what do you mean with y-axis D:

Align the start and the end of slider to the same line as previous one.

Garven wrote:

Ah, this song just brings a big smile to my face. Excellent pick for a song to map.
I see all these mods for three difficulties, but I only see two? Actually just DjPop modded 2 >_> It's because the third one suck and I decided to take it off

[Piranha Plant]
00:13:496 (1) - Remove whistle from slider slide Done~
00:46:222 (2) - ^ ^
00:49:339 (2) - ^ ^
Plays and sounds fine otherwise. I tried to click on the fire flower as it came down, though. Broke my slider.
Also, at that point, your freeze warning SB is half-covered up by the sliders. Ok, fixed~

[Dino Piranha]
00:13:496 (1) - Remove whistle from slider slide Ok~
00:15:055 (3) - ^ ^
00:44:664 (1) - ^ ^
00:46:222 (5) - ^ ^
00:47:781 (1) - ^ ^
00:49:339 (5) - ^ ^
01:09:599 (1) - Add finish to beginning of slider Ok~

Eh, all I have is the whistle sliderslide noise, and if it's intentional use of them, they're not used consistently. I wish there was a third difficulty to look at. Just take my star to add to your collection.

Matma Rex wrote:

Nothing wrong.

Except that the freeze slider is damn ugly on both diffs, and strobes from 01:00:216 to 01:18:950 look bad and are annoying.

Sakura301 wrote:

why are there 2 .osb files?

Sallad4ever wrote:

Lovely SB

The only strange thing I found is that near the end there's a black layer that fade in, but because I try listening to the song until the end, I kinda surprise that the mario BG suddenly appears again WAIT WAT? o_o Let me check it ~_^... It's not happening here... Let me Full upload it to see if it dos get fixed

Too bad you only have 2 diff I've already tried to make another one but it always suck
Anyway Great map
Double Star~ because your SB have a lot of star

Krisom wrote:

Such a lovely song/sb ^^!

Star! (as if there were not enough on the sb aldery <_<, you get it? God! Im funny =w= )

Agent Spin Here wrote:

You got a star... ;D Lovely map

stickmeister wrote:

Beautiful beautiful beautiful beatmap! Everything is perfectly timed and a perfect flow was created, and the storyboard was very very nice and Kaia time was used well. Colors blend well and the hitcircle's texture is fitting. I especially love the Freeze Frame part, that was very clever.
A perfect beatmap. It's crazy, but it really is.

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Check the rules of my mod queue next time~
But I'm nice so I took a look at your beatmap.
Pretty great map you got here.
I'm not too fond of the skin, but this is YOUR beatmap so yeah.
Also, you can have this
*Star*

Kecco wrote:

The map is good for me, but there are some issues with the timing. I'll type the solutions and also some suggestion.

•Timing•
00:04:146 (Red Timing Section) - Change the offset : 4.100
00:23:225 - Add a red timing section.
01:02:948 - Add a red timing section.
Resnap all notes and check the position of the notes in whole map.

Nice~
Star~

gabrielwoj wrote:

Great map cara! ^^
Adorei, bom storyboard, mui epic

YGOkid8 wrote:

map's basically flawless

S i R i R u wrote:

Mario XD

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

gabrielwoj wrote:

Great map cara! ^^
Adorei, bom storyboard, mui epic

Vlw
Podia ter me dado uma estrelinha mas ta belê :<

YGOkid8 wrote:

map's basically flawless

Thanks :]

gabrielwoj wrote:

Se quiser, eu faço uma básica do galaxy aqui... Para o beatmap

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

gabrielwoj wrote:

Se quiser, eu faço uma básica do galaxy aqui... Para o beatmap

Nah, prefito assim mesmo... Mas valeu pela estrela >w<
Daqui a pouco o gens vai fazer um mod nesse map~

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Gens wrote:

I prefer soradg's timing. I don't understand why are there so many red lines too...

Be sure to resnap everything properly.

Also, is it just me or the end of the slider at 00:25:964 sounds off?

Gens wrote:

I prefer soradg's timing. I don't understand why are there so many red lines too... Ok, did it~

Be sure to resnap everything properly.

Also, is it just me or the end of the slider at 00:25:964 sounds off? Oh, I just saw why. The original BPM should be 19,25 but osu only uses 20 BPM :/ Thanks for noticing, decided to use 38,5~

gabrielwoj wrote:

Wait... On what difficult? I'm not the currently creator of map, but I could help on some details...

hime_nikki04 wrote:

Star ~

Ana Kagura wrote:

eggs

PedroGabriel wrote:

great map

polenta wrote:

star in the map's friend osu! br

adron zhero wrote:

Rank?

Xgor wrote:

[General]
A normal would be nice to even the spread on the difficulties. Actually, there is a Normal (that's like a Easy + or Normal -- >_>), a Hard and a Insane ._.

I think you need a empty hitcircle in the skin or else there will be skin problems Know what? No overall anymore, I don't like it anyway. >_>

[Easy]
:D

[Hard]
Maybe lower the HP drain? Ok~

[Insane]
o/

Great map, should be ranked soon! (Been in pending for way too long time.)
*star+star*

James2250 wrote:

Your freeze warning could prob be cut down slightly more~ Yeah, did it~

Normal:
For the easiest difficulty why is HP Drain and AR so high -2 for both? (at least -1) reduced 2~

I have no other problems with the maps but I don't really like the sound of the timing...I don't really trust my timing skills enough to fix that. Get a well known timer to double check it all and it should be fine for bubble~ I'll look for one but Gens said that Soradg's timing looks good.

(you don't need to kudosu) Are you sure? you mod was useful ._.

MarioBros777 wrote:

I really wanna bubble this map. However, red sections have always been unrankable and I do ask that you take them out of your map and replace them with 0.5 sections. It's not going to fit with the "Freeze Warning" but did it

It's a great map.

Sallad4ever wrote:

After 9 months of struggle finally ranked :3
Congratz
bye2 hold slider
d(^o^)b

Yes wrote:

:) Congrats <3

James2250 wrote:

Congrats
(sorry for not rechecking it as soon as I should of)