SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:Gemie - X.U. [Osu|Taiko]‬ · forum‬

Starfall9908

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-05-03T15:06:18+00:00

I noticed a few small things in my GD so I changed them

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Source:終わりのセラフ
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mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-05-03T15:24:42+00:00

mrbubbles415 wrote:
You guys got a great fucking beatmap on your hands keep up the good work im sure that you will be ranked in no time

owh...thanks 4 ur support <3

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-05-03T15:30:12+00:00

nadapan wrote:

I noticed a few small things in my GD so I changed them

Random box? >_>

osu file format v14

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Source:終わりのセラフ
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428,188,51127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,284,51599,6,0,P|320:316|128:320,1,233.999992858887
108,284,52780,2,0,L|48:300,2,58.4999982147217
168,260,53489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,204,54198,2,0,P|412:176|464:116,2,130
300,172,55379,6,0,P|252:144|156:144,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,140,56087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,180,56324,2,0,P|40:232|48:320,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,260,57268,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,260,57741,2,0,P|240:272|304:252,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,204,58450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,140,58686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,92,58922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,68,59158,6,0,P|160:64|88:104,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,216,60103,2,0,L|108:288,1,65
156,292,60576,2,0,L|228:304,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,304,61048,6,0,L|364:256,1,65
380,220,61520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,92,61993,2,0,L|424:64,2,65,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,100,62701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,100,62938,6,0,P|148:72|92:80,2,130,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,140,64119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,196,64355,2,0,L|276:260,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,288,64827,6,0,P|152:304|92:284,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,236,65536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,180,65772,2,0,P|171:167|233:183,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,204,66717,6,0,P|392:188|444:108,2,130,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,228,67898,2,0,L|320:316,2,65,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,164,68607,6,0,L|228:108,1,65
180,88,69079,2,0,L|96:88,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,69552,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,188,69788,2,0,L|-8:248,2,65,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,196,70497,6,0,P|168:188|244:236,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,264,71205,2,0,P|320:272|396:228,1,130
392,172,71914,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,108,72150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,64,72387,6,0,P|280:56|184:88,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,140,73095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,204,73331,2,0,P|92:236|36:232,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,108,74276,6,0,P|160:76|216:80,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,136,74985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,192,75221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,96,75694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,96,76166,6,0,P|396:160|400:232,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,276,76875,2,0,L|308:312,1,65
252,288,77347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,248,77583,2,0,L|152:196,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,156,78056,6,0,P|40:180|-4:240,2,130,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,79473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,236,79946,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,236,80182,2,0,P|256:272|232:288,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,232,80890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,172,81127,2,0,L|84:136,2,65,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,200,81835,6,0,P|248:180|280:100,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,44,82544,2,0,P|340:24|416:52,1,130
408,104,83253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,168,83489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,232,83725,6,0,P|348:276|264:276,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,248,84434,2,0,L|168:196,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,160,84906,2,0,L|52:176,2,65,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

thanks 4 update na-chaaan <3

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-05-08T17:24:00+00:00

http://puu.sh/hG3S0/d58f5fe012.png

I just noticed this in Nofool's muzukashii and Nofool's Oni

I'll help with finding mods. :3

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-05-09T04:20:57+00:00

nadapan wrote:
http://puu.sh/hG3S0/d58f5fe012.png

I just noticed this in Nofool's muzukashii and Nofool's Oni

I'll help with finding mods. :3

Thanks for help me

WoozyCinema

7 posts

Joined August 2014

WoozyCinema 2015-05-10T01:59:41+00:00

Wow great job, love this song hopefully the beatmap will be ranked!!!

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-05-10T15:57:44+00:00

WoozyCinema wrote:
Wow great job, love this song hopefully the beatmap will be ranked!!!

thanks 4 ur support!

Manysi

336 posts

Joined July 2014

Manysi 2015-05-15T10:06:57+00:00

Nice mapset!
I found some things that may help you improve your map.

Spread
Insane has 308 notes but extra has 243 only. Also lot of them has ar9.(I suggest putting something like 9.2 on Pho's diff)

Unused BG picture.

Hard snap the inherited points

00:53:489 (4) - can be confusing(maybe NC)
00:55:379 (1,2) - I suggest starting with a slider

Insane

00:38:135 (4,5) - i really dont like that(i would stack those on the slider head)
01:04:237 (5) - nasty(u should adjust the slider's shape)

Trias's extra

00:04:355 (1) - i whouldnt pu finish here(whistle instead)
01:25:615 (16) - the problem with is it makes the diff longer than the others

Pho's Purge

00:11:914 (3,4,5,6) - The 8bit sound starts here which makes it bit of awkward but thats ok.
00:39:788 (7) - I feel like the next combo should start somewhere else.The guitar has different hang here.
I suggest making an equivalent triangle with 00:39:670 (6,7,1) -
00:56:796 (6) - I dont like this shape
01:08:016 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - uhh i dont know why you made it moving that way. You seems like an experience mapper who knows what to do so idk.

Easy and Normal diff are too slow for me so i cant help with those...

Good job guys! Keep it up!

Pho

1,786 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-05-15T11:52:32+00:00

Sailexk wrote:
Nice mapset!
I found some things that may help you improve your map.

Spread
Insane has 308 notes but extra has 243 only. Also lot of them has ar9.(I suggest putting something like 9.2 on Pho's diff)

Unused BG picture.

Pho's Purge

00:11:914 (3,4,5,6) - The 8bit sound starts here which makes it bit of awkward but thats ok. No fix for now since there's an actual sound on this beat, but valid point. Will consider if more people point it out.
00:39:788 (7) - I feel like the next combo should start somewhere else.The guitar has different hang here.
I suggest making an equivalent triangle with 00:39:670 (6,7,1) - This is more for readability reasons, so no change here
00:56:796 (6) - I dont like this shape That's a regular curved slider o.o
01:08:016 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - uhh i dont know why you made it moving that way. You seems like an experience mapper who knows what to do so idk. Keep, this gives some really interesting momentum and I think it's that hard to manage.

Easy and Normal diff are too slow for me so i cant help with those...

Good job guys! Keep it up!

No changes from me atm, sorry.
Since mion wants me to check his Insane, here what I'd like to mention for now:

[Insane]

Go delete the audio track in your video already ;-;
Please check all your greenlines again, some of them are unsnapped.
NCing: Check through your whole map again and set NCs after every 1 or 2 stanzas (every 1 or 2 long white ticks) only.
Your current NCing is a bit messed up.
Hitsounds are actually pretty well done, I might come back to this later.
00:01:048 - to 00:04:591 - do something about the flow here, it's pretty lame to follow the same movement twice in a row.
For example, you could vary the movement on 00:02:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this combo (see below for example)
00:03:410 (3) - Switch into a backslider for some rhythmical variation. There's a strong beat at 00:03:528 - to follow
SPOILER
00:04:827 (1,2,3) - This is a very awkward movement and you can't clearly see 2's position that well.
If you want higher spacing here, then make it more readable and consistently spaced. For example use 2.0xDS for this:
SPOILER
00:05:772 (4,5,6) - Space them consistently with 2.0xDS
00:06:481 (1) - Turn into two circles instead, this doesn't follow anything in the track properly. Only use offbeat sliders (sliders that start on red ticks and end on white ones) when they are following something appropriately in the track like vocals or certain instruments.
00:06:953 (4) - ^ Same. The part's a bit tricky to map, so try this out (starting at 00:06:717 - ):
SPOILER
00:07:662 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - Check the rhythm pattern in my diff pattern with this, I have used sliders here to make this section play more lenient due to a lot of polarity switches.
Circles are usually used to put emphasis on strong beats which are just not existent in here, so please rework this.
00:11:442 (7,1,2,3) - Sorry but these extended sliders don't follow anything properly in the music.
Extended sliders are used to follow prolonged notes usually. Try the following rhythm
SPOILER
00:13:804 - and 00:15:694 - , listen to the instruments, these sections sound very alike right? In these cases you should keep your rhythm pattern similar to each another for rhythm consistency (e.g. what I have done in my diff there)
Here what I suggest for you:
SPOILER

Notice how both sections are following the exact same beats. You don't have to follow the same rhythm that I showed above, but important thing is that it's consistent between these sections.
00:17:583 (1,2,3) - For now, I really recommend you to keep the spacings between such 1/4 patterns consistent (with DS, 2.0x) unless you know how to put emphasis on beats appropriately ( in this case 00:17:583 (1,2) - 2 is heavily overemphasized for no reason)
00:18:646 - Don't skip this beat.
00:19:001 (3,4) - Ctrl+g and reposition these. Again, because of offbeat slider. Rhythms a bit strange here too, so how about this:
SPOILER
00:20:890 (1) - Again, use extended sliders only if they follow any prolonged notes properly and don't skip important beats. Make this 1/2.
Similat stuff: 00:57:268 (6) - 01:12:387 (8) -
00:24:552 (6,7) - Too much emphasis on 7. Just listing up similar sections with wrong emphasis so please fix them with more reasonable spacing as I explained above:
00:26:796 (5,6,1) - 00:28:450 (5,6,7,8,1) - 00:31:284 (2,3,4,5) - 00:45:221 (7,8,9) - 00:49:001 (4,5,6) - 01:17:583 (7,8) -
00:25:142 - 00:28:922 - 00:32:701 - 00:36:481 - Listen to all these sections specifically.
I told you about rhythm consistency in a previous point already, hope you can figure out yourself how to make it consistent here.
00:32:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - I highly recommend that you don't follow vocals here since you skip way too important downbeats by doing so.
SPOILER
00:36:835 (5,6) - This is actually valid spacing.
00:39:788 (5) - Two sliders please, this is one of the highlights of the song and you dampen the emphasis with this kickslider too hard.
01:04:355 (6) - You skipped an important downbeat with this again.
SPOILER
01:07:662 (2,3,4,5,6) - Please DS these, this looks heavily messed up lol.
01:09:316 (4,1) - Ctrl+g, 01:09:316 (4) - is a passive slider (sliders that start on weaker beats than they end at) which should be avoided here.
01:10:497 - 01:18:056 - I think you know what i'm going to write here, it's the same as I said twice above.
01:13:568 (2) - No offbeat sliders please, fix.
01:25:379 (1) - Two circles please, these are both strong beats.
Still needs a lot of work, but you got interesting approaches already. Fix it up and hope for more quality mods.

Trias, if you want me to give your diff a check as well, call me up. Btw, it should be called Trias' Insane, the diff is too far away from being an Extra.

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-05-15T12:36:32+00:00

Sailexk wrote:
Nice mapset!
I found some things that may help you improve your map.

Spread
Insane has 308 notes but extra has 243 only. Also lot of them has ar9.(I suggest putting something like 9.2 on Pho's diff) i dont want to change

Unused BG picture. [/color]

Hard snap the inherited points

00:53:489 (4) - can be confusing(maybe NC) done
00:55:379 (1,2) - I suggest starting with a slide done

Insane

00:38:135 (4,5) - i really dont like that(i would stack those on the slider head) done
01:04:237 (5) - nasty(u should adjust the slider's shape) done

Trias's extra

00:04:355 (1) - i whouldnt pu finish here(whistle instead)
01:25:615 (16) - the problem with is it makes the diff longer than the others

Pho's Purge

00:11:914 (3,4,5,6) - The 8bit sound starts here which makes it bit of awkward but thats ok.
00:39:788 (7) - I feel like the next combo should start somewhere else.The guitar has different hang here.
I suggest making an equivalent triangle with 00:39:670 (6,7,1) -
00:56:796 (6) - I dont like this shape
01:08:016 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - uhh i dont know why you made it moving that way. You seems like an experience mapper who knows what to do so idk.

Easy and Normal diff are too slow for me so i cant help with those...

Good job guys! Keep it up! thanks!

DahplA

1,099 posts

Joined March 2014

DahplA 2015-05-16T13:18:08+00:00

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Pho's Purge

00:17:583 (1) - This S curve slider could use a little improvement (or just change the shape entirely)
01:01:048 (1) - Is there meant to be whistle on this slider?

Trias's Extra

00:36:481 (1) - Maybe move this away so it's not stacked, to give that part a more jumpy feel
00:50:418 (7) - I don't know what this slider is mapped to. If you want to map to vocals, move it to the white tick
00:53:489 (1) - I would remove this spinner, so you can map to the lyrics right before the kiai time
00:58:686 (4) - Ctrl+G?
01:25:615 (16) - It should just end on 01:25:615 not have a 1/1 slider

Insane

00:01:048 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - With this pattern, I think should reposition some of it, so it's not just up and down, up and down.
01:09:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Improve this curve
It's hard to target things specifically in this difficulty. I would say, just overall that the consistency is the issue here.

Hard

00:00:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - Having the slider positioned on the red ticks doesn't match the instrumentals. Change this.
00:13:568 (2) - Improve this S curve
00:19:001 (5) - Fix the anchor points on this
00:38:843 (1) - ^

Nacchan's Normal

00:15:694 (5) - What is the reverse arrow mapped to?

Easy

00:10:969 (1) - You need to allow either 1500ms or 4 beats for spinner recovery
00:49:709 (5) - Why is this placed under the other slider. Reposition and change shape if needed.
01:20:418 (5) - Can't stack in Easy difficulties

Owari no Seraph yeahh ^_^ Great maps, great song. Hope this gets ranked. Good luck

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-05-16T18:08:35+00:00

DahplA wrote:
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Pho's Purge
00:17:583 (1) - This S curve slider could use a little improvement (or just change the shape entirely)
01:01:048 (1) - Is there meant to be whistle on this slider?
Trias's Extra
00:36:481 (1) - Maybe move this away so it's not stacked, to give that part a more jumpy feel
00:50:418 (7) - I don't know what this slider is mapped to. If you want to map to vocals, move it to the white tick
00:53:489 (1) - I would remove this spinner, so you can map to the lyrics right before the kiai time
00:58:686 (4) - Ctrl+G?
01:25:615 (16) - It should just end on 01:25:615 not have a 1/1 slider
Insane
00:01:048 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - With this pattern, I think should reposition some of it, so it's not just up and down, up and down. allright!
01:09:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Improve this curve fixed
It's hard to target things specifically in this difficulty. I would say, just overall that the consistency is the issue here.
Hard
00:00:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - Having the slider positioned on the red ticks doesn't match the instrumentals. Change this. allright!
00:13:568 (2) - Improve this S curve done
00:19:001 (5) - Fix the anchor points on this fixed
00:38:843 (1) - ^ done
Nacchan's Normal
00:15:694 (5) - What is the reverse arrow mapped to?
Easy
00:10:969 (1) - You need to allow either 1500ms or 4 beats for spinner recovery. fixed
00:49:709 (5) - Why is this placed under the other slider. Reposition and change shape if needed. change
01:20:418 (5) - Can't stack in Easy difficulties done

Owari no Seraph yeahh ^_^ Great maps, great song. Hope this gets ranked. Good luck thanks!

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-05-16T18:16:56+00:00

I'll fix the mod as fast as possible (school is eating up my life). I'm really sorry

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-05-17T00:31:50+00:00

Pho wrote:
Sailexk wrote:
Nice mapset!
I found some things that may help you improve your map.

Spread
Insane has 308 notes but extra has 243 only. Also lot of them has ar9.(I suggest putting something like 9.2 on Pho's diff)

Unused BG picture.

Pho's Purge

00:11:914 (3,4,5,6) - The 8bit sound starts here which makes it bit of awkward but thats ok. No fix for now since there's an actual sound on this beat, but valid point. Will consider if more people point it out.
00:39:788 (7) - I feel like the next combo should start somewhere else.The guitar has different hang here.
I suggest making an equivalent triangle with 00:39:670 (6,7,1) - This is more for readability reasons, so no change here
00:56:796 (6) - I dont like this shape That's a regular curved slider o.o
01:08:016 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - uhh i dont know why you made it moving that way. You seems like an experience mapper who knows what to do so idk. Keep, this gives some really interesting momentum and I think it's that hard to manage.

Easy and Normal diff are too slow for me so i cant help with those...

Good job guys! Keep it up!
No changes from me atm, sorry.
Since mion wants me to check his Insane, here what I'd like to mention for now: <3 u

[Insane]
Go delete the audio track in your video already ;-; Fixed
Please check all your greenlines again, some of them are unsnapped.fixed
NCing: Check through your whole map again and set NCs after every 1 or 2 stanzas (every 1 or 2 long white ticks) only.
Your current NCing is a bit messed up. done
Hitsounds are actually pretty well done, I might come back to this later. XD
00:01:048 - to 00:04:591 - do something about the flow here, it's pretty lame to follow the same movement twice in a row. done
For example, you could vary the movement on 00:02:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this combo (see below for example)
00:03:410 (3) - Switch into a backslider for some rhythmical variation. There's a strong beat at 00:03:528 - to follow right
SPOILER
00:04:827 (1,2,3) - This is a very awkward movement and you can't clearly see 2's position that well. fixed
If you want higher spacing here, then make it more readable and consistently spaced. For example use 2.0xDS for this: like that
SPOILER
00:05:772 (4,5,6) - Space them consistently with 2.0xDS done
00:06:481 (1) - Turn into two circles instead, this doesn't follow anything in the track properly. Only use offbeat sliders (sliders that start on red ticks and end on white ones) when they are following something appropriately in the track like vocals or certain instruments. ok
00:06:953 (4) - ^ Same. The part's a bit tricky to map, so try this out (starting at 00:06:717 - ): done
SPOILER
00:07:662 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - Check the rhythm pattern in my diff pattern with this, I have used sliders here to make this section play more lenient due to a lot of polarity switches.checked
Circles are usually used to put emphasis on strong beats which are just not existent in here, so please rework this.
00:11:442 (7,1,2,3) - Sorry but these extended sliders don't follow anything properly in the music. fixed
Extended sliders are used to follow prolonged notes usually. Try the following rhythm
SPOILER
00:13:804 - and 00:15:694 - , listen to the instruments, these sections sound very alike right? In these cases you should keep your rhythm pattern similar to each another for rhythm consistency (e.g. what I have done in my diff there) done
Here what I suggest for you:
SPOILER

Notice how both sections are following the exact same beats. You don't have to follow the same rhythm that I showed above, but important thing is that it's consistent between these sections.
00:17:583 (1,2,3) - For now, I really recommend you to keep the spacings between such 1/4 patterns consistent (with DS, 2.0x) unless you know how to put emphasis on beats appropriately ( in this case 00:17:583 (1,2) - 2 is heavily overemphasized for no reason) ok
00:18:646 - Don't skip this beat. added
00:19:001 (3,4) - Ctrl+g and reposition these. Again, because of offbeat slider. Rhythms a bit strange here too, so how about this: ok
SPOILER
00:20:890 (1) - Again, use extended sliders only if they follow any prolonged notes properly and don't skip important beats. Make this 1/2.
Similat stuff: 00:57:268 (6) - 01:12:387 (8) - fixed
00:24:552 (6,7) - Too much emphasis on 7. Just listing up similar sections with wrong emphasis so please fix them with more reasonable spacing as I explained above:
00:26:796 (5,6,1) - 00:28:450 (5,6,7,8,1) - 00:31:284 (2,3,4,5) - 00:45:221 (7,8,9) - 00:49:001 (4,5,6) - 01:17:583 (7,8) - fixed
00:25:142 - 00:28:922 - 00:32:701 - 00:36:481 - Listen to all these sections specifically. changed
I told you about rhythm consistency in a previous point already, hope you can figure out yourself how to make it consistent here.
00:32:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - I highly recommend that you don't follow vocals here since you skip way too important downbeats by doing so. added
SPOILER
00:36:835 (5,6) - This is actually valid spacing. fixed
00:39:788 (5) - Two sliders please, this is one of the highlights of the song and you dampen the emphasis with this kickslider too hard. changed
01:04:355 (6) - You skipped an important downbeat with this again. fixed
SPOILER
01:07:662 (2,3,4,5,6) - Please DS these, this looks heavily messed up lol. changed
01:09:316 (4,1) - Ctrl+g, 01:09:316 (4) - is a passive slider (sliders that start on weaker beats than they end at) which should be avoided here.
01:10:497 - 01:18:056 - I think you know what i'm going to write here, it's the same as I said twice above. lol done
01:13:568 (2) - No offbeat sliders please, fix. fixed
01:25:379 (1) - Two circles please, these are both strong beats. ok
Still needs a lot of work, but you got interesting approaches already. Fix it up and hope for more quality mods.
Trias, if you want me to give your diff a check as well, call me up. Btw, it should be called Trias' Insane, the diff is too far away from being an Extra.

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-05-17T14:52:23+00:00

I've tried to re-download the map but it failed. (I tried more than 2 times but no hope)

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-05-17T15:06:10+00:00

Sailexk

Sailexk wrote:
Nice mapset!
I found some things that may help you improve your map.

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Insane has 308 notes but extra has 243 only. Also lot of them has ar9.(I suggest putting something like 9.2 on Pho's diff)

Unused BG picture.

Trias's extra

00:04:355 (1) - i whouldnt pu finish here(whistle instead) added
01:25:615 (16) - the problem with is it makes the diff longer than the others remove the slider , change to not instead.

Easy and Normal diff are too slow for me so i cant help with those...

Good job guys! Keep it up!

Pho

Pho wrote:
Trias, if you want me to give your diff a check as well, call me up. Btw, it should be called Trias' Insane, the diff is too far away from being an Extra. yep , change to Trias's Insane then.

DahplA

DahplA wrote:
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Trias's Extra
00:36:481 (1) - Maybe move this away so it's not stacked, to give that part a more jumpy feel re-map this part then.
00:50:418 (7) - I don't know what this slider is mapped to. If you want to map to vocals, move it to the white tick hmm okie
00:53:489 (1) - I would remove this spinner, so you can map to the lyrics right before the kiai time i can't fill this part , so i put spinner instead..
00:58:686 (4) - Ctrl+G? fixed
01:25:615 (16) - It should just end on 01:25:615 not have a 1/1 slider remove slider, change to not instead.
Owari no Seraph yeahh ^_^ Great maps, great song. Hope this gets ranked. Good luck

Change few thing..

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1.5
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Title:X.U.
TitleUnicode:「X.U.」
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:Gemie
ArtistUnicode:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:Gemie
Creator:mion_6GKM
Version:Trias's Insane
Source:終わりのセラフ
Tags:澤野弘之 seraph of the end owari no seraph op mion game rock Nofool nadapan Pho Sky Trias
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Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-05-20T06:35:02+00:00

DahplA wrote:
Nacchan's Normal
00:15:694 (5) - What is the reverse arrow mapped to? There is a note there actually. Above that so do I think it sounds nice so I won't change it >->

I was somhow able to re-download the map using the "No video" version of the map. But if I try to download the map wiht the video so does the map go to "failed" file. I don't know if the problem is on my own computer or the video of the song >-<

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-05-21T11:21:45+00:00

nadapan wrote:
I've tried to re-download the map but it failed. (I tried more than 2 times but no hope)

maybe something happen with ur net connection?

Pho

1,786 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-05-24T08:33:53+00:00

Chek your video again mion, I have the same issue when downloading. Seems something went wrong when you were reencoding it.

Surono

7,197 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 2015-05-24T17:41:24+00:00

wehh kulo tekan kene <(``)

[Nofool's Muzukashii]
01:09:316 - slider starts from here.. xD *delete 49
nice~

[Nofool's Oni]
thiz look fine, nice Nofo~

[Game's Oni]
01:24:788 (363) - delete, nice if hear with voice pitch~ yea?

well, just it.. this look fine and mell~
maturnuwun dah reqs ya

NepNep-

56 posts

Joined August 2014

NepNep- 2015-05-25T05:32:55+00:00

AHhhh. i can't download with vid cause its keeps corrupting the file. D:<

NepNep-

56 posts

Joined August 2014

NepNep- 2015-05-25T05:37:09+00:00

Uhhh idk how to mod maps but.
42:98 badly spaced stream on Trias insane.
Shaddup I can't make the numbers in a blue box im a nub. ;w;

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-05-26T14:35:51+00:00

Surono wrote:
wehh kulo tekan kene <(``)

[Nofool's Muzukashii]
01:09:316 - slider starts from here.. xD *delete 49
nice~

[Nofool's Oni]
thiz look fine, nice Nofo~

[Game's Oni]
01:24:788 (363) - delete, nice if hear with voice pitch~ yea?

well, just it.. this look fine and mell~
maturnuwun dah reqs ya

makaceh ya XD thanks again!

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-05-26T14:43:32+00:00

~~nobody want to mod dis mappu~~

I will re-map the Insane so maybe at 2nd week of june , dis map will ''life'' again

Asonate

507 posts

Joined July 2013

Asonate 2015-05-26T19:25:01+00:00

"Mapfile is corrupt or incomplete", drop me a PM if it works again, you have a ticket in my queue

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-05-27T11:52:18+00:00

UPDATE!!

Sorry for the trouble!!!

Asonate

507 posts

Joined July 2013

Asonate 2015-05-27T15:43:21+00:00

Alright, here goes

[General]
I really like that song already

Thanks for showing me this

[Pho's Purge]

00:00:339 (1,2) - Consider moving 2 down a bit, to make a curve and...
00:00:576 (1,2) - ...maybe make these bent, in order to match 00:00:339 (1,2) as well as consistency (all following sliders are bent
00:03:883 (3,4) - You can leave these as they are, but I would still recommend making them bent
00:17:111 (4,5) - Same as before, just that you might make them not bent to match previous sliders
01:09:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice Pattern
01:17:347 (6) - Maybe move that away from 3 by a bit
01:24:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Don't know if thats intentional, but if not you should move the last 1 and 2 with the same DS to the previous 1s/2s
I cant explain that too well, but look at the DS between the first and the second 1 and the second and the third 1 - It's different
@mion Metadata (?) Thingy, in your thread you name this diff as an extra, technically it is just an Insane (shouldn't matter tho)

[Trias's Insane]

00:42:859 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Maybe make these in additive spacing (not 3 0,7 and 3 1,2, but 0,7 -> 0,8 -> ... -> 1,2)
01:24:552 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Again, maybe do these with additive spacing
All in all, everything's looking good, but you might want to place a few more NCs
Again, metadata thingy, correct grammar would be Trias' Insane, as you don't need an "s" after apostrophes, if the name ends on "s", "x" or "z"

[Hard]

01:09:788 (5,6) - Maybe make 5 & 6 equally long repeat sliders (1 repeat), you still get 6 hitsounds, but it plays much easier
01:17:465 (3) - Move this 1 or 2 grids to the left, please
01:25:497 (8) - I would rather make this end with a long slider (following the vocals) or a spinner

That's it for now, I hope I helped

Good luck !
If you have any questions, feel free to PM me ingame

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-05-28T11:05:45+00:00

Asonate wrote:
Alright, here goes

[General]
I really like that song already
Thanks for showing me this

[Pho's Purge]
00:00:339 (1,2) - Consider moving 2 down a bit, to make a curve and...
00:00:576 (1,2) - ...maybe make these bent, in order to match 00:00:339 (1,2) as well as consistency (all following sliders are bent
00:03:883 (3,4) - You can leave these as they are, but I would still recommend making them bent
00:17:111 (4,5) - Same as before, just that you might make them not bent to match previous sliders
01:09:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice Pattern
01:17:347 (6) - Maybe move that away from 3 by a bit
01:24:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Don't know if thats intentional, but if not you should move the last 1 and 2 with the same DS to the previous 1s/2s
I cant explain that too well, but look at the DS between the first and the second 1 and the second and the third 1 - It's different
@mion Metadata (?) Thingy, in your thread you name this diff as an extra, technically it is just an Insane (shouldn't matter tho)
[Trias's Insane]
00:42:859 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Maybe make these in additive spacing (not 3 0,7 and 3 1,2, but 0,7 -> 0,8 -> ... -> 1,2)
01:24:552 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Again, maybe do these with additive spacing
All in all, everything's looking good, but you might want to place a few more NCs
Again, metadata thingy, correct grammar would be Trias' Insane, as you don't need an "s" after apostrophes, if the name ends on "s", "x" or "z"
[Hard]
01:09:788 (5,6) - Maybe make 5 & 6 equally long repeat sliders (1 repeat), you still get 6 hitsounds, but it plays much easier fixed
01:17:465 (3) - Move this 1 or 2 grids to the left, please done
01:25:497 (8) - I would rather make this end with a long slider (following the vocals) or a spinner
sorry i dont wanna delete the circle

That's it for now, I hope I helped
Good luck !
If you have any questions, feel free to PM me ingame

thanks for the mod!

Pho

1,786 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-05-29T17:00:57+00:00

Asonate wrote:
Alright, here goes

[Pho's Purge]
00:00:339 (1,2) - Consider moving 2 down a bit, to make a curve and... Did stuff.
00:00:576 (1,2) - ...maybe make these bent, in order to match 00:00:339 (1,2) as well as consistency (all following sliders are bent ^, good point.
00:03:883 (3,4) - You can leave these as they are, but I would still recommend making them bent I like these, no need for curvy sliders here.
00:17:111 (4,5) - Same as before, just that you might make them not bent to match previous sliders ^
01:09:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice Pattern :3
01:17:347 (6) - Maybe move that away from 3 by a bit Should be fine, they don't overlap anyway.
01:24:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Don't know if thats intentional, but if not you should move the last 1 and 2 with the same DS to the previous 1s/2s
I cant explain that too well, but look at the DS between the first and the second 1 and the second and the third 1 - It's different They are actually the same, was actually caused by the unnecessary greenlines at the end. Fixed that.
@mion Metadata (?) Thingy, in your thread you name this diff as an extra, technically it is just an Insane (shouldn't matter tho) Star rating is broken, hits song's more difficult to play than it looks.
That's it for now, I hope I helped
Good luck !
If you have any questions, feel free to PM me ingame

Thanks for the mod!

update

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53961
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:「X.U.」
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:Gemie
ArtistUnicode:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:Gemie
Creator:mion_6GKM
Version:Pho's Purge
Source:終わりのセラフ
Tags:澤野弘之 seraph of the end owari no seraph op mion game rock Nofool nadapan Pho Sky Trias
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Battle

2,875 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2015-05-31T19:45:48+00:00

Hi~ from my modding queue

[Tria's]
00:00:576 (1,2,3) - The triplets at the start shouldn't be so far spread, I mean this difficulty is for people who play 4.3~ star songs
00:03:292 (5,6,7,8) - If you do decide to leave the triplets the way they are, this string is very inconsistent with it's spacing then
00:06:953 (1) - NC? Maybe cuz like I usually don't like seeing 14 as part of a combo except from streams .3.
01:01:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I barely even expect people to do this well in like 5+ maps let alone people who are playing 4.3 stars
01:06:245 (4,5,6,7) - Still some pretty big spacing on those triplets
01:09:788 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - Real big spacing
01:24:552 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Big and inconsistent spacing, large combo

Yeah I'm not really good at modding the other maps because of the fact that I'm terrible when it comes to that style of beat that the other Insanes have

-FireThunder-

306 posts

Joined December 2011

-FireThunder- 2015-06-05T08:47:43+00:00

Request from Queue

kay.
"-" You Must do it
"*" My Opnimition (up to you)
"k" Kat
"d" Don
"K" Big Kat
"D" Big Don
"." Blank Note

[General]
Nothing~

[Timing]
Nothing~

[Nofool's Muzukashii]
- 00:36:009 - 46 & 47 Ctrl + G
- 00:40:379 - I know u want made a dramatic in here,
but please fill this i hate to waste the time... to 00:51:599 -
Maybe u dizzy adding in here? o.o
- 00:59:867 - k
- 01:03:410 - 28 & 29 Ctrl + G
- 01:06:481 - k
* 01:18:056 - D will be nice here :3

[Nofool's Oni]
Nice one? o.o

- 00:40:379 - See my Muzukashii mod
- 00:51:835 - It will nice if u add a slider or spinner like in ur muzukashii :3
- 01:25:497 - d

[Game's Oni]
Nothing can i mod, its really nice for me :3

Sorry latemod
Sorry inggris, nanti kalo gak ngerti message atau chat ingame aja o/
Thanks to trust me to mod ur map

Gemu-

1,015 posts

Joined October 2010

Gemu- 2015-06-05T15:13:35+00:00

Surono wrote:
wehh kulo tekan kene <(``)

[Game's Oni]
01:24:788 (363) - delete, nice if hear with voice pitch~ yea? Nop, it's fine as it is

well, just it.. this look fine and mell~
maturnuwun dah reqs ya

Thanks for you mod !

Gemu-

1,015 posts

Joined October 2010

Gemu- 2015-06-05T15:15:35+00:00

-FireThunder- wrote:
Request from Queue

kay.
"-" You Must do it
"*" My Opnimition (up to you)
"k" Kat
"d" Don
"K" Big Kat
"D" Big Don
"." Blank Note

[General]
Nothing~

[Timing]
Nothing~

[Game's Oni]
Nothing can i mod, its really nice for me :3 Thanks ^w^

Sorry latemod
Sorry inggris, nanti kalo gak ngerti message atau chat ingame aja o/
Thanks to trust me to mod ur map

Thank for you mod! :3

Nofool

Elite Mapper

1,108 posts

Joined February 2011

Nofool 2015-06-06T14:30:08+00:00

Surono wrote:
wehh kulo tekan kene <(``)

[Nofool's Muzukashii]
01:09:316 - slider starts from here.. xD *delete 49 it really starts on the blue line between - 01:09:316 - and where i started it, i made a choice x_x keeping it for now
nice~

[Nofool's Oni]
thiz look fine, nice Nofo~ thanks

-FireThunder- wrote:
[Nofool's Muzukashii]
- 00:36:009 - 46 & 47 Ctrl + G kd also fits the vocal + conjsistency with - 00:32:229 (31,32) -.
- 00:40:379 - I know u want made a dramatic in here,
but please fill this i hate to waste the time... to 00:51:599 -
Maybe u dizzy adding in here? o.o i see no point in mapping this part, the instrumental is incredibly low and it would feel overmapped to me
- 00:59:867 - k d to focus a bit more on drums here
- 01:03:410 - 28 & 29 Ctrl + G ^
- 01:06:481 - k ^
* 01:18:056 - D will be nice here :3 done

[Nofool's Oni]
Nice one? o.o

- 00:40:379 - See my Muzukashii mod ^
- 00:51:835 - It will nice if u add a slider or spinner like in ur muzukashii :3 true, my bad
- 01:25:497 - d mm both k or d works here

Thanks'

Muzukashii : http://puu.sh/ieC3G/59c62f3e40.osu
Oni : http://puu.sh/ieC4M/97fe9c9596.osu

btw @mion_6GKM, maybe it is just me but i can't see any background on my diffs, please check if you can do something :c.

DeletedUser_3821342

DeletedUser_3821342 2015-06-11T10:26:42+00:00

Insane
00:01:372(4,5) -Ctrl+G the 4 & 5 And extend the begining of the stream to start from 00:01:738 Follows music better
00:02:653(2,3) -Ctril+G this & rearrange the 2 & 3 on the grid to your liking Follows music better
00:20:945 -Add note Follows music better
00:22:775(1,2) -Move the 1 & 2 back here Follows music better
00:24:787(4,5) -Delete 4 & move the 5 here. Then add a note at 00:25:153 Follows music better
00:30:823(2,3) -Ctrl+G the 2 & 3 then rearrange them to your liking Follows music better
00:31:189(3,4) -Delete the 3 & 4 & add a slider in their place
00:54:604(7) -Move the 7 make it a jump More fun
00:56:250(13,14,1) -Ctrl+G them and rearrange to your liking Follows music better
00:56:982(2,3) -^
01:02:836(3,4) -^
01:04:939 -Add note & move the 6

Overall the off-beat-ness creates a weird flow

DeletedUser_3821342

DeletedUser_3821342 2015-06-11T10:30:41+00:00

Yoges wrote:
Insane
00:01:372(4,5) -Ctrl+G the 4 & 5 And extend the begining of the stream to start from 00:01:738 Follows music better
00:02:653(2,3) -Ctril+G this & rearrange the 2 & 3 on the grid to your liking Follows music better
00:20:945 -Add note Follows music better
00:22:775(1,2) -Move the 1 & 2 back here Follows music better
00:24:787(4,5) -Delete 4 & move the 5 here. Then add a note at 00:25:153 Follows music better
00:30:823(2,3) -Ctrl+G the 2 & 3 then rearrange them to your liking Follows music better
00:31:189(3,4) -Delete the 3 & 4 & add a slider in their place
00:54:604(7) -Move the 7 make it a jump More fun
00:56:250(13,14,1) -Ctrl+G them and rearrange to your liking Follows music better
00:56:982(2,3) -^
01:02:836(3,4) -^
01:04:939 -Add note & move the 6

Overall the off-beat-ness creates a weird flow

OMFG WRONG FORUM
sorry! XD It wont let me delete it

tasuke912

Former osu!taiko Champion: 2018

1,347 posts

Joined June 2013

tasuke912 2015-06-14T08:19:39+00:00

Hi. from my q.
[

Nofool's Muzukashii]

show video.
00:25:379 (5) - move to 00:25:142. follow the kick. but if you want to follow only the vocal, ignore this. :3
00:58:922 (14,15) - Delete, 00:59:158 - add d. I think dk-d-kd pattern is good.
01:06:717 -, 01:16:166 -, ^

[

Nofool's Oni]

show video.
00:26:087 (6,24) - I think normal note is better.
01:10:497 (73) - Remove Finish or delete (72)
01:06:481 Why dont you put kkd here?

[

Game's Oni]

01:00:221 (235,236) -, 01:00:576 (237,238) - ctrl+G.
01:10:497 (298) - it's unrankble. remove finish.

Muzukashii is pretty good. good luck.

Gemu-

1,015 posts

Joined October 2010

Gemu- 2015-06-14T17:38:35+00:00

tasuke912 wrote:
Hi. from my q. Hi tasuke

[ Game's Oni]
01:00:221 (235,236) -, 01:00:576 (237,238) - ctrl+G. Great! fixed
01:10:497 (298) - it's unrankble. remove finish. It's true xD, fixed
Muzukashii is pretty good. good luck.

Thanks for you mod!

Game's Oni

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: op.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53961
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:X.U.
TitleUnicode:「X.U.」
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:Gemie
ArtistUnicode:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:Gemie
Creator:mion_6GKM
Version:Game's Oni
Source:終わりのセラフ
Tags:澤野弘之 seraph of the end owari no seraph op mion game rock Nofool nadapan Pho Sky Trias
BeatmapID:681325
BeatmapSetID:303177

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Jerry

osu! Alumni

1,159 posts

Joined December 2010

Jerry 2015-06-15T17:47:30+00:00

Super late mod, sorry

[Nofool's Oni]
00:42:150 (84,85,86,87,88) - This part is severely undermapped. Also, the note structure is exactly the same with how you mapped this part for Muzukashii. I suggest adding more notes for this part in a way that increases the variation of patterns so that it's harder than your Muzukashii, but not too similar to Game's Oni.

[Game's Oni]

00:52:072 (202,203) - Swap this to k d so that you have a consistent rhythm with 00:50:654 (196,197,198) -

Sorry if the mod's too short, but that's all I could find. Really well mapped taiko difficulties! I enjoyed them alot.
Good luck with the map ~

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-06-15T18:03:07+00:00

Lol this map isn't even Bubbled and it has 75 likes. How many likes will it reach when this map is ranked?

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-06-16T06:05:21+00:00

Jerry wrote:

Super late mod, sorry it's okay

[Nofool's Oni]
00:42:150 (84,85,86,87,88) - This part is severely undermapped. Also, the note structure is exactly the same with how you mapped this part for Muzukashii. I suggest adding more notes for this part in a way that increases the variation of patterns so that it's harder than your Muzukashii, but not too similar to Game's Oni.

[Game's Oni]
00:52:072 (202,203) - Swap this to k d so that you have a consistent rhythm with 00:50:654 (196,197,198) -

Sorry if the mod's too short, but that's all I could find. Really well mapped taiko difficulties! I enjoyed them alot.
Good luck with the map ~ thanks for kudosu and mod! <3

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-06-16T06:11:23+00:00

nadapan wrote:
Lol this map isn't even Bubbled and it has 75 likes. How many likes will it reach when this map is ranked?

lollololol that's true! ~~maybe 100 likes :v...~~ this map really need further mod...they didn't like this song

~~it make me heartbroken~~

Gemu-

1,015 posts

Joined October 2010

Gemu- 2015-06-17T23:01:18+00:00

Jerry wrote:

Super late mod, sorry Hi Jerry!

[Game's Oni]
00:52:072 (202,203) - Swap this to k d so that you have a consistent rhythm with 00:50:654 (196,197,198) - Ok fixed :3

Sorry if the mod's too short, but that's all I could find. Really well mapped taiko difficulties! I enjoyed them alot. Thanks :33
Good luck with the map ~

Thanks for you mod!

Game's Oni

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Ringating

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mion_6GKM

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Pho

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Pho 2015-06-20T03:26:34+00:00

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I'll also give a short general feedback to the specific STD diffs I guess... since this set is really necessary of one before getting pushed forward

Don't open if you don't want to get hurt

Easy

Status: Almost fine.
This diff is pretty fine, but remember to never stack in easy diffs (like 00:14:749 (2,3) - 00:41:914 (2,3) - ) or use weird slidershapes with bad flow like 00:49:709 (1) -.

Nacchan's Normal

Status: Fine.
This one's also pretty fine, though you should revisit 00:40:261 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part again. There's more potential in rhythms here to waste it for these very monotonous 1/2 beats.Also care of bad offbeat sliders like 01:20:182 (2) - (sliders that start on non-white ticks) that end on strong white ticks since these are usually a bad option if they don't follow anything appropriately in the track.

Hard

Status: Needs work.
This needs more work.Again, please use more elaborated slidershapes since yours are still kinda cringed and awkward to play like 00:19:001 (5) - 00:38:843 (3) - .
Take care of weird offbeat sliders like 00:33:410 (2,3) - like I said in Nacchan's diff (and what I told you in my last mod actually).
Confusing spacing in certain patterns 00:53:489 (1,2,3,4) - that you should revisit.
Messy structure, caused by too many fancy slidershapes (see above), unpolished patterns (like 00:32:701 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - or 00:55:379 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ) or patterns that just don't complement with the overall image of the map(01:06:717 (1,2,3) - 00:38:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ). I think most of it can be solved if you tidy up these slidershapes lol.
Rhythms patterns are an issue as well, but I think it is negligible for the moment.

Insane

Status: Not ready.
This needs a whole lot of work. Additionally to the points mentioned in Hard:
Unpolished patterns: 00:08:135 (1,2,3) - 01:23:725 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - and more...
Spacing inconsistencies:
"Spacing is one of the most important parts of mapping Insane difficulties, as it defines the flow and emphasis of a beatmap. If you use a jump, it stresses the note the player jumps to, as the cursor movement speed is higher. If you put lower spacing, the cursor movement speed is slower, and therefore the note gets stressed less. Spacing should always relate to the music as best as possible, to make the map fit to the music well."
This map suffers fromrrandom spacing changes at certain patterns that don't follow the music in any appropriate way, making a) the map look generally confusing and b) break the flow in the map badly. Some examples:
00:18:056 (2,3,4) - Why you suddenly accelerate motion here?
00:21:363 (6,7,8) - Generally confusing spacing, the jump from 7->8 makes no particular sense with the music.
00:26:087 (5,6,7,1) - Random spacing. The higher emphasis lies on 6, but you still have higher spacing to 7... that does not fit the music either.
00:27:505 (2,3,4.5) - ^
etc.
Unfitting rhythms and bad usage of certain rhythm techniques:
Particularly extended sliders (00:43:568 (6) - ) You should take care of when to use them. Again, use entended sliders only if they are following prolonged notes in the music properly (like a violin string or vocals that are holding notes).
Also watch out for passive sliders, I told you that already and you still did it >< (00:57:505 (1) - 01:11:678 (4) - ) - just to remember, these are sliders that start on weaker beats where they end at.
Other rhythm issues:
00:54:670 (3) - This explains itself, what is this even following in the music?
01:23:725 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Uh... this NC spam makes no sense, you know that right?
etc.
Remember, these are all general things, so they apply to the whole map and NOT ONLY the specific sections I pointed out. Always keep this in mind.

Trias' Insane:

Status: Not ready.
Watch explanation of Insane since alll points apply to this diff as well (although to a less critical extent). Here specific points:
Awkward spacing:
00:02:938 (4,5,6,7,8) - Suddenly spaced lower inbetween the stream although the music is not getting weaker?
00:22:308 (2,3) - Must-fix, why is this big jump here? There's nothing on beat 3 to be emphasized that hard. Also 3 is a offbeat slider.
00:42:859 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Accelerated spacing makes no sense here since there's nothing in the track growing in tension that'd benefit from such a technique.
00:45:221 (3,4,5,6,7) - unreasonable spacing change to 7
01:00:576 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This makes me really sad to see, why are you putting a distance stream in here, it's just blowing up the actual difficulty on this map and isn't even a highlight of the track, in comparison to 01:09:316 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3) - where it actually fits in well. This needs to be dampened down.
01:14:985 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern comes in really random and doesn't seem to fit the overall image of this map as well.
01:19:946 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - ^.
01:25:615 (16) - Delete. The's just no strong beat on that tick to justify this circle.
Unpolished new comboing: 00:06:245 (10) - You missed 00:34:591 (7) - 00:38:371 (5) - etc. Please make it consistent throughout the map.
Unfitting rhythms:
00:28:450 (8,1) - Bad extended slider
01:07:662 (3) - ^
00:31:284 (7) - Offbeat slider
etc.

Conclusion: The Insanes of this map need a greater overhaul because these lack most of quality in this set. Please have a look at them again and keep the things I bolded up there in mind.

I just hope this is worth it =.=

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-06-20T10:56:56+00:00

Pho wrote:
Nacchan's Normal
Status: Fine.
This one's also pretty fine, though you should revisit 00:40:261 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part again. There's more potential in rhythms here to waste it for these very monotonous 1/2 beats.Also care of bad offbeat sliders like 01:20:182 (2) - (sliders that start on non-white ticks) that end on strong white ticks since these are usually a bad option if they don't follow anything appropriately in the track. I went through the part's you mentioned and made sure that everything is okay. I made a few changes. Thank you so much ^w^

Nacchan's Normal is here >w<

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Nitrousdragon

353 posts

Joined July 2014

Nitrousdragon 2015-06-21T00:57:54+00:00

from modding queue

[Hard]
00:54:906 (5,6,7) - That's just--no. Just no. This is the worst combination you can think of ever (seriously). Either make that 5,6,7,8 or just slider 5 that goes <,>.

The rest of the diffs (besides easy and normal) are so awkward to me, sorry.

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-06-21T02:03:57+00:00

Pho wrote:

Update here... again lol

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260,76,70497,6,0,P|316:59|387:66,1,116.999994644165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,283,70969,2,0,L|382:267,1,116.999994644165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,232,71324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,312,71442,2,0,L|310:382,2,58.4999973220826
316,296,71914,2,0,L|323:144,1,116.999994644165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,72268,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,125,72387,6,0,P|121:192|182:254,1,116.999994644165,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,265,72859,2,0,L|242:276,1,116.999994644165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,315,73213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,384,73331,2,0,L|169:311,1,58.4999973220826
280,162,73568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,180,73804,2,0,L|253:337,1,116.999994644165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,204,74158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,204,74276,6,0,P|169:135|206:93,1,116.999994644165,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,277,74749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
465,134,74985,2,0,L|464:213,1,58.4999973220826,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,170,75221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,67,75339,2,0,L|413:65,1,58.4999973220826
408,75,75694,2,0,P|331:102|265:82,1,116.999994644165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,45,76048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,213,76166,6,0,L|124:334,1,116.999994644165,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,152,76638,2,0,P|96:111|151:111,1,116.999994644165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,178,76993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,98,77111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,94,77229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,216,77347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,239,77583,2,0,L|454:225,1,116.999994644165,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
448,112,77938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,16,78056,6,0,P|265:86|245:187,1,116.999994644165,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,308,78528,2,0,P|101:260|167:205,1,116.999994644165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,185,78883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,297,79001,2,0,L|179:297,1,58.4999973220826
70,171,79237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,47,79473,2,0,P|273:29|205:51,1,116.999994644165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,127,79827,5,0,0:0:0:0:
184,127,79946,2,0,L|194:249,1,116.999994644165,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,344,80418,2,0,P|347:290|389:215,1,116.999994644165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,154,80772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,280,80890,2,0,L|448:224,1,58.4999973220826
483,67,81127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,93,81363,2,0,L|75:86,1,116.999994644165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,194,81717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,331,81835,6,0,P|184:291|207:244,1,116.999994644165,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,331,82308,2,0,P|328:291|305:244,1,116.999994644165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,158,82662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,175,82780,2,0,L|397:248,1,58.4999973220826
256,371,83016,2,0,L|256:306,1,58.4999973220826,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,94,83253,2,0,P|125:93|68:159,1,116.999994644165,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
19,289,83607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
19,289,83725,6,0,L|115:297,1,58.4999973220826
264,312,83961,2,0,P|269:343|255:394,1,58.4999973220826,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,219,84198,2,0,P|155:177|176:132,1,58.4999973220826,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,11,84434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,11,84552,2,0,P|366:48|362:98,1,58.4999973220826,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,185,84788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,46,84906,5,8,0:0:0:0:
289,67,85024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
167,123,85142,5,8,0:0:0:0:
255,185,85261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,195,85379,5,8,0:0:0:0:
172,290,85497,1,8,0:0:0:0:

I'll also give a short general feedback to the specific STD diffs I guess... since this set is really necessary of one before getting pushed forward

Don't open if you don't want to get hurt

Easy

Status: Almost fine.
This diff is pretty fine, but remember to never stack in easy diffs (like 00:14:749 (2,3) - 00:41:914 (2,3) - ) or use weird slidershapes with bad flow like 00:49:709 (1) -.all clear!

Hard

Status: Needs work.
This needs more work.Again, please use more elaborated slidershapes since yours are still kinda cringed and awkward to play like 00:19:001 (5) - 00:38:843 (3) - .
Take care of weird offbeat sliders like 00:33:410 (2,3) - like I said in Nacchan's diff (and what I told you in my last mod actually).
Confusing spacing in certain patterns 00:53:489 (1,2,3,4) - that you should revisit.
Messy structure, caused by too many fancy slidershapes (see above), unpolished patterns (like 00:32:701 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - or 00:55:379 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ) or patterns that just don't complement with the overall image of the map(01:06:717 (1,2,3) - 00:38:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ). I think most of it can be solved if you tidy up these slidershapes lol.
Rhythms patterns are an issue as well, but I think it is negligible for the moment. i remap it..follow your mod

Insane

Status: Not ready.
This needs a whole lot of work. Additionally to the points mentioned in Hard:
Unpolished patterns: 00:08:135 (1,2,3) - 01:23:725 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - and more... fixed
Spacing inconsistencies:
"Spacing is one of the most important parts of mapping Insane difficulties, as it defines the flow and emphasis of a beatmap. If you use a jump, it stresses the note the player jumps to, as the cursor movement speed is higher. If you put lower spacing, the cursor movement speed is slower, and therefore the note gets stressed less. Spacing should always relate to the music as best as possible, to make the map fit to the music well."
This map suffers fromrrandom spacing changes at certain patterns that don't follow the music in any appropriate way, making a) the map look generally confusing and b) break the flow in the map badly. Some examples: ups
00:18:056 (2,3,4) - Why you suddenly accelerate motion here? fixed
00:21:363 (6,7,8) - Generally confusing spacing, the jump from 7->8 makes no particular sense with the music. fixed
00:26:087 (5,6,7,1) - Random spacing. The higher emphasis lies on 6, but you still have higher spacing to 7... that does not fit the music either. fixed
00:27:505 (2,3,4.5) - ^ fixed
etc.
Unfitting rhythms and bad usage of certain rhythm techniques:
Particularly extended sliders (00:43:568 (6) - ) You should take care of when to use them. Again, use entended sliders only if they are following prolonged notes in the music properly (like a violin string or vocals that are holding notes). oh sorry
Also watch out for passive sliders, I told you that already and you still did it >< (00:57:505 (1) - 01:11:678 (4) - ) - just to remember, these are sliders that start on weaker beats where they end at. fixed
Other rhythm issues:
00:54:670 (3) - This explains itself, what is this even following in the music? sorry :''
01:23:725 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Uh... this NC spam makes no sense, you know that right? fixed
etc.
Remember, these are all general things, so they apply to the whole map and NOT ONLY the specific sections I pointed out. Always keep this in mind.

Conclusion: The Insanes of this map need a greater overhaul because these lack most of quality in this set. Please have a look at them again and keep the things I bolded up there in mind.

I just hope this is worth it =.= oh thank you for the mod...n sorry for my stubbornness shall i give you kudosu?

Last edited by mion_6GKM 2015-06-21T02:06:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-06-21T02:05:38+00:00

Nitrousdragon wrote:
from modding queue

[Hard]
00:54:906 (5,6,7) - That's just--no. Just no. This is the worst combination you can think of ever (seriously). Either make that 5,6,7,8 or just slider 5 that goes <,>. i remap it..follow your mod

The rest of the diffs (besides easy and normal) are so awkward to me, sorry. it's okay. thanks for ur mod

Kankri

192 posts

Joined June 2014

Kankri 2015-06-21T05:51:07+00:00

From my modding queue

[Nofool's Muzukashii]

00:17:583 (1) - D

00:37:898 (53) - k

00:57:150 (7) - ^

01:04:709 (33) - ^

01:14:040 (64,65) - k d

01:25:379 (103) - K

[Nofool's Oni]

00:16:638 (67) - k

00:31:993 (34) - ^

01:05:654 (48) - ^

01:10:497 (73) - Instead of hitfinish, put normal red note instead so the stream won't be awkward.

[Game's Oni]

00:32:583 (128) - k

Everything else looks good! gl getting this map ranked!

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

CookieBite 2015-06-21T07:05:47+00:00

okay. Hi
from my modding queue

too late.
I know you waiting for a whole month
sorry, forgive me

modding start.

[Easy]

00:05:772 (3,4,5) - change like this

one photo

01:25:615 (2) - add a circle

no any big problem.

[Nacchan's Normal]

00:04:355 (1) - make like this

photo

still no big problem... cool

[Hard]

unfortunately, I can't find any problem...
(it's not a joke)

[Insane]

I'm not a master of modding a insane difficulty
sorry i can't find problem.

I little bit like your map
thanks for using my ~~late~~ modding queue.

Bye.

Nofool

Elite Mapper

1,108 posts

Joined February 2011

Nofool 2015-06-21T12:08:55+00:00

tasuke912 wrote:
Hi. from my q.
[ Nofool's Muzukashii]
show video.
00:25:379 (5) - move to 00:25:142. follow the kick. but if you want to follow only the vocal, ignore this. :3 gonna keep the vocal focus for now
00:58:922 (14,15) - Delete, 00:59:158 - add d. I think dk-d-kd pattern is good. cool idea, applied
01:06:717 -, 01:16:166 -, ^ ^
[ Nofool's Oni]
show video.
00:26:087 (6,24) - I think normal note is better. i don't any good idea to replace this ;w;
01:10:497 (73) - Remove Finish or delete (72) bpm is low enough so i think it is ok
01:06:481 Why dont you put kkd here? it is a bit different from the other kkd in this kiai
Muzukashii is pretty good. good luck.

Thanks!

Jerry wrote:
[list][Nofool's Oni]
00:42:150 (84,85,86,87,88) - This part is severely undermapped. Also, the note structure is exactly the same with how you mapped this part for Muzukashii. I suggest adding more notes for this part in a way that increases the variation of patterns so that it's harder than your Muzukashii, but not too similar to Game's Oni. added some notes even tho having the same part in muzu should not be an issue

Good luck with the map ~

Thanks for the advice.

Kasha wrote:
From my modding queue

[Nofool's Muzukashii]

00:17:583 (1) - D mm not hight enough for a finisher imo

00:37:898 (53) - k too ballzy lol

00:57:150 (7) - ^ ^

01:04:709 (33) - ^ ^

01:14:040 (64,65) - k d mm i think so d k fits well the vocal already

01:25:379 (103) - K not high enough again i guess

[Nofool's Oni]

00:16:638 (67) - k i wanna keep the same repetitiv structure here

00:31:993 (34) - ^ ddd kkk sounds good

01:05:654 (48) - ^ why not

01:10:497 (73) - Instead of hitfinish, put normal red note instead so the stream won't be awkward. imo it isn't awkward, it plays better as it is to me

Everything else looks good! gl getting this map ranked!

Thanks'

Muzukashii : http://puu.sh/ix7OJ/06849402ab.osu
Oni : http://puu.sh/ix7PV/35519384ea.osu

@Mion plz fix the video/background issue x_x

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-06-21T12:12:59+00:00

small_hins wrote:
[Nacchan's Normal]

00:04:355 (1) - make like this I like it as it is rihgt now
photo

still no big problem... cool

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-06-21T12:49:56+00:00

small_hins wrote:
okay. Hi
from my modding queue

too late.
I know you waiting for a whole month
sorry, forgive me it's okay

modding start.

[Easy]

00:05:772 (3,4,5) - change like this fixed
one photo

01:25:615 (2) - add a circle sorry no

no any big problem.

[Hard]

unfortunately, I can't find any problem...
(it's not a joke)

[Insane]

I'm not a master of modding a insane difficulty
sorry i can't find problem.

I little bit like your map
thanks for using my ~~late~~ modding queue. thanks for ur mod!

Bye.

-BlueSun-

177 posts

Joined November 2013

-BlueSun- 2015-06-21T14:44:52+00:00

Hello!
Just a Mod here.

Easy
All around a great diff, only a few problems i found here.
00:05:772 (3) - I't doesnt look right imo. try this :http://puu.sh/ixdgA/04f02fb0ad.jpg
00:39:788 (5,1) - Blanket?
00:44:513 (4,1) - ^
00:51:599 (3) - Ugly shape. Try this: http://puu.sh/ixdq1/3812d70399.jpg
01:02:938 (1,2) - Blanket?

Nacchan's Normal
Great normal. Pretty much nothing to note here.

00:15:694 (5) - Doesn't sound right imo. try something like this: http://puu.sh/ixdE7/18868519b8.jpg

Hard
It's pretty good, i found a lot of problems here though.
00:01:520 (4) - Move to x:56 and y:272 so its in correct blanket with (3).
00:11:914 (5) - overlaps with (3)
00:20:890 (6,1) - Don't look that nice next to eachother, consider changing.
00:22:190 (3,4) - move to x:112 and y:75
00:24:670 (6) - Bend it outwards more.
00:25:142 (1,2) - Blanket this properly.
00:26:087 (3) - ^
00:37:898 (1) - Make it more straight?
00:43:568 (4) - Make it a straight slider?
00:46:166 (1,2,3) - spacing here is strange.
01:04:827 (1) - Make it the same shape as 01:04:355 (4) ?
01:08:135 (5) - ctrl + G?
01:11:205 (2,3) - blanket properly.
01:11:914 (4) - ^
01:15:694 (5,1) - doesn't look all that great. consider changing.

Insane
It's not that great tbh.

It's very stream intensive and also hard to follow, i think you should work on it a bit more or maybe even re map it. i woud have chosen a higher slider velocity, as well as a higher distance snap. It's still good, i just think the other insane is better. I don't usually mod a lot of insanes, so i can't really pinpoint whats wrong here. Sorry if i sounded harsh, i just wanted to tell you what i thought about it.

Trias's Insane

I can't find many major problems here. Well done
00:40:024 (11,12) - Why does the 12 come before the 11? many people could break their combo's on this, i would switch them around.
00:42:859 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - This stream isn't spaced properly.
00:53:489 (1) - Having a spinner end there is really bad, please end it at 00:54:906.
01:24:552 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Again, distance this properly at the end there?

Pho's Purge

Awesome diff. Loved it, i found a few odd looking mishaps, but nothing important

Great Mapset! Hope it gets ranked and best of luck to all of you!

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-06-21T14:50:55+00:00

-BlueSun- wrote:
Nacchan's Normal
Great normal. Pretty much nothing to note here.
00:15:694 (5) - Doesn't sound right imo. try something like this: http://puu.sh/ixdE7/18868519b8.jpg Seems like a lot of people didn't like that part (I liked it tho ;-;) so I have n other choise than changing it

Nacchan's Normal

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: op.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53961
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:X.U.
TitleUnicode:「X.U.」
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:Gemie
ArtistUnicode:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:Gemie
Creator:mion_6GKM
Version:Nacchan's Normal
Source:終わりのセラフ
Tags:澤野弘之 seraph of the end owari no seraph op mion game rock Nofool nadapan Pho Sky Trias
BeatmapID:683445
BeatmapSetID:303177

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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Video,0,"Owari no Seraph.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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8016,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
10024,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0
40261,-111.111111111111,4,2,3,60,0,0
53489,-100,4,2,3,70,0,0
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78292,-100,4,2,2,80,0,0
83843,-100,4,2,4,80,0,0
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 251,251,0
Combo2 : 0,128,192
Combo3 : 0,128,0
Combo4 : 174,0,87
Combo5 : 84,0,168
Combo6 : 230,115,0

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280,152,1520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,260,1993,1,10,0:0:0:0:
440,160,2465,2,0,P|456:100|436:32,2,130,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,104,3883,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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100,276,10969,6,0,P|144:300|240:296,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-06-25T04:47:12+00:00

-BlueSun- wrote:
Hello!
Just a Mod here.

Easy
All around a great diff, only a few problems i found here.
00:05:772 (3) - I't doesnt look right imo. try this :http://puu.sh/ixdgA/04f02fb0ad.jpg fixed
00:39:788 (5,1) - Blanket? fixed
00:44:513 (4,1) - ^ fixed
00:51:599 (3) - Ugly shape. Try this: http://puu.sh/ixdq1/3812d70399.jpg ok
01:02:938 (1,2) - Blanket? sorry no

Hard
It's pretty good, i found a lot of problems here though.
00:01:520 (4) - Move to x:56 and y:272 so its in correct blanket with (3). fixed
00:11:914 (5) - overlaps with (3) fixed
00:20:890 (6,1) - Don't look that nice next to eachother, consider changing. fixed
00:22:190 (3,4) - move to x:112 and y:75 sorry i like it
00:24:670 (6) - Bend it outwards more. fixed
00:25:142 (1,2) - Blanket this properly. ok
00:26:087 (3) - ^ ok
00:37:898 (1) - Make it more straight? i forgot! thanks!
00:43:568 (4) - Make it a straight slider? fixed
00:46:166 (1,2,3) - spacing here is strange. ok
01:04:827 (1) - Make it the same shape as 01:04:355 (4) ? fixed
01:08:135 (5) - ctrl + G? allright
01:11:205 (2,3) - blanket properly. ok
01:11:914 (4) - ^ ok
01:15:694 (5,1) - doesn't look all that great. consider changing. changed

Insane
It's not that great tbh. It's very stream intensive and also hard to follow, i think you should work on it a bit more or maybe even re map it. i woud have chosen a higher slider velocity, as well as a higher distance snap. It's still good, i just think the other insane is better. I don't usually mod a lot of insanes, so i can't really pinpoint whats wrong here. Sorry if i sounded harsh, i just wanted to tell you what i thought about it. nononono it's okay.. you're shoot me right in the kokoro :'v :''

Great Mapset! Hope it gets ranked and best of luck to all of you! thanks for the mod

[R]

1,058 posts

Joined November 2013

[R] 2015-06-25T17:58:33+00:00

from queue
every line "?" just an opinion

[Nofool's Muzukashii]
nice muzu

01:06:009 (37,38) - move 01:06:245 - and 01:05:772 - add d, pitch sound in 01:05:772 -

[Nofool's Oni]

01:25:024 (132,133) - dd

[Game's Oni]

00:08:135 - delete ? weird with this note
00:39:906 - d
00:40:497 - add d ?
01:02:465 (248,249,250,251,252) - kddkd ? to monotoune kdkdk repeatly
01:25:142 (366,367,368,369,370) - kdkkk ?

not much but hope helpfull

xtrem3x

1,789 posts

Joined July 2009

xtrem3x 2015-06-26T01:08:31+00:00

Mod request via ...Queue

________________________________________________________________________

General:

Don: d
Kat: k
Big don: D
Big kat: K

________________________________________________________________________

Nofool's Muzukashii:

00:02:347 - Delete (breaks .. and this is intro .-.)
00:04:119 - Delete (breaks)
00:06:127 - Delete (breaks)
00:15:576 - Delete

00:19:237 - Change to k (is high vocal)

00:19:709 - Delete
00:23:489 - Delete (no have notable sound)
00:27:977 - Delete (breaks)
00:31:757 - Delete
00:33:536 - Delete

00:59:158 - Move to 00:58:922- and Change to k

00:59:394 - k
00:59:631 - ctrl+g with next note (flow)(?)

01:06:717 - Move to 01:06:481- and Change to k (same with 00:59:158- )

01:06:953 - k (same with 00:59:394- )
01:07:190 - ctrl+g with next note (same about flow) (?)

________________________________________________________________________

Nofool's Oni:

00:26:087 - Change slider for notes ddd k (is rare with slider)
00:29:867 - ^

00:55:733 - d (a bit harder .-.)

00:58:804 - d
00:59:158 - D

01:23:489 - d

01:25:497 - Delete

________________________________________________________________________

Game's Oni:

HP/OD = 5 ...

00:08:135 - Borrala (aqui entiendo que quieres enfatizar algun sonido quizas inexistente, pero no es necesario hacerlo ..) - Igual es mencionado por [R]

00:09:788 - Cambia a k (ese cascabeleo es muy evidente para que suene con azules)
00:09:906 - Lo mismo ^

00:17:111 - kkddd -> kdkkd (enfatiza tu secuencia de dobles anterior)

00:30:103 - un ctrl+g a esta nota y la siguiente (enfoca vocales los azules)

00:32:588 - Borrar (no veo algo para que haya algo asi)

00:32:938 - un k (hay sonido para eso)

00:33:174 - un ctrl+g a esta nota y la siguiente (otro enfoque de vocales)
00:33:646 - cambia a k (para continuar con esto ^ )

00:36:363 - Borrar (igual que en 00:32:588- )
00:36:717 - un k (mismo que en 00:32:938- )
00:36:953 - ctrl+g esta y la nota siguiente (mismo que 00:33:174- )

00:37:426 - dkd -> kdk

01:09:906 - un ctrl+g a esta nota y la siguiente (por mas que oigo este stream sonaría mejor cambiando de posicion estas notas)

01:14:158 - dkd -> ddk
01:19:709 - ^

01:25:497 - Borrar (aqui se acaba el vocal y por ende ya seria mejor terminarlo ahi)
01:25:615 - Borrar ( Lo mismo ^ )

________________________________________________________________________

Gemu-

1,015 posts

Joined October 2010

Gemu- 2015-07-03T00:37:17+00:00

[R] wrote:
from queue
every line "?" just an opinion

[Game's Oni]
00:08:135 - delete ? weird with this note Fixed
00:39:906 - d Nop
00:40:497 - add d ? Nop
01:02:465 (248,249,250,251,252) - kddkd ? to monotoune kdkdk repeatly Nop
01:25:142 (366,367,368,369,370) - kdkkk ?Fixed
not much but hope helpfull

Thanks for the mod!

Gemu-

1,015 posts

Joined October 2010

Gemu- 2015-07-03T01:02:54+00:00

xtrem3x wrote:
Mod request via ...Queue

________________________________________________________________________

General:

Don: d
Kat: k
Big don: D
Big kat: K

_______________________________________________________________________

Game's Oni:

HP/OD = 5 ... El HP está en 5 pero el OD lo dejaré el 6, me parece mejor.

00:08:135 - Borrala (aqui entiendo que quieres enfatizar algun sonido quizas inexistente, pero no es necesario hacerlo ..) - Igual es mencionado por [R]

00:09:788 - Cambia a k (ese cascabeleo es muy evidente para que suene con azules)
00:09:906 - Lo mismo ^

00:17:111 - kkddd -> kdkkd (enfatiza tu secuencia de dobles anterior)

00:30:103 - un ctrl+g a esta nota y la siguiente (enfoca vocales los azules)

00:32:588 - Borrar (no veo algo para que haya algo asi)

00:32:938 - un k (hay sonido para eso)

00:33:174 - un ctrl+g a esta nota y la siguiente (otro enfoque de vocales)
00:33:646 - cambia a k (para continuar con esto ^ )

00:36:363 - Borrar (igual que en 00:32:588- )
00:36:717 - un k (mismo que en 00:32:938- )
00:36:953 - ctrl+g esta y la nota siguiente (mismo que 00:33:174- )

00:37:426 - dkd -> kdk

01:09:906 - un ctrl+g a esta nota y la siguiente (por mas que oigo este stream sonaría mejor cambiando de posicion estas notas)

01:14:158 - dkd -> ddk
01:19:709 - ^

01:25:497 - Borrar (aqui se acaba el vocal y por ende ya seria mejor terminarlo ahi)
01:25:615 - Borrar ( Lo mismo ^ )

________________________________________________________________________

Todo lo cambié así que...Gracias por su mod!

Game's Oni

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Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2015-07-03T14:28:43+00:00

As requested in my queue, here's my mod

Cool song~

[Phoi]

00:23:607 (4) - How about put a circle here and move the reverse in 00:23:725 - http://puu.sh/iLSOX/6512cd9c98.jpg
00:36:009 (1,2,1,2) - This one is too far from each other
00:38:371 (1,2,1,2) - I believe the transition between this can be smoother
00:56:560 (5) - I feel this pause is quite awkward, especially when playing, why not make reglular 1/4 slider?
This also apply in 00:58:449 (7) - , 01:00:339 (5) - , and so on
01:09:079 (1) - CTRL+G? :3

[Insane]

00:01:993 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This plays pretty badly, I suggest you to come up with something else
00:23:607 (1,2,3,4) - Why you put it here? There's nothing in the music that need to be emphasized like this
Vocal part in 00:24:434 - need to be emphasized, so don't "hide" it with reverse slider, change it into circle or slider head instead
00:36:481 (1,2) - Confusing spacing, put 2 further
00:57:741 - You "hide" the strong beat here with a slider end, consider changing this
01:03:764 (3,4,5,6) - same reason with 00:23:607 (1,2,3,4)
01:07:544 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:24:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would not recommend you to do this
This diff needs more work especially in terms of pattern in general and spacing
Actually, most of the problems has already been stated by Pho in his overview, so yeah

[Hard]

00:11:442 (4,5,1,2,3) - This rhythm here doesn't fit the music, make it into something like this http://puu.sh/iLPT1/ecaf617b7b.jpg
00:18:056 - Make it into like this to fit the music better http://puu.sh/iLQ5r/444407130f.jpg basically to emphasize 00:18:056 (2,3) - better
00:24:670 (6,1) - This jumps is waaayyy to huge... You know what to do with it
00:33:646 (3) - rotate or curve this slightly so it doesn't touch 00:32:701 (1) -
00:38:371 (2,5,6) - They're touching, which is not good to see
01:03:410 (2,4) - overlap

I have nothing against Nacchan's Normal and Easy. For some reason, I can't mod Trias's Insane, really sorry for this...
Thats all I could say and Good Luck~

Nofool

Elite Mapper

1,108 posts

Joined February 2011

Nofool 2015-07-03T14:56:02+00:00

sorry late x_x

[R] wrote:
from queue
every line "?" just an opinion

[Nofool's Muzukashii]
nice muzu
01:06:009 (37,38) - move 01:06:245 - and 01:05:772 - add d, pitch sound in 01:05:772 -
changed in a similar way

[Nofool's Oni]
01:25:024 (132,133) - dd
pref kk

not much but hope helpfull

Thanks'

xtrem3x wrote:
Mod request via ...Queue

________________________________________________________________________

General:

Don: d
Kat: k
Big don: D
Big kat: K

________________________________________________________________________

Nofool's Muzukashii:

00:02:347 - Delete (breaks .. and this is intro .-.) [b]intro doesn't need to be easy, this part is airy enough and consistent as it is imo, can't really break at some random part
00:04:119 - Delete (breaks) ^
00:06:127 - Delete (breaks) ^
00:15:576 - Delete ^

00:19:237 - Change to k (is high vocal) d for the instrumental here

00:19:709 - Delete ^
00:23:489 - Delete (no have notable sound) ^ still instrumental
00:27:977 - Delete (breaks) i pref to keep 1/2 breaks max for consistency
00:31:757 - Delete ^
00:33:536 - Delete ^

00:59:158 - Move to 00:58:922- and Change to k emphassizing drums here

00:59:394 - k ^ again, not really the style i wanna use
00:59:631 - ctrl+g with next note (flow)(?) ^, goes against drums

01:06:717 - Move to 01:06:481- and Change to k (same with 00:59:158- ) ^ changed a bit this part

01:06:953 - k (same with 00:59:394- ) ^
01:07:190 - ctrl+g with next note (same about flow) (?) ^

________________________________________________________________________

Nofool's Oni:

00:26:087 - Change slider for notes ddd k (is rare with slider)
00:29:867 - ^ ^ kinda pplied both, i had to remove these dlisers ;_;

00:55:733 - d (a bit harder .-.) mm i don't feel like adding one here

00:58:804 - d ^
00:59:158 - D it would be a bit weird imo

01:23:489 - d i may change this part later, not sure atm

01:25:497 - Delete i can hear it tho

________________________________________________________________________[/b]

Thanks'

Muzukashii : http://puu.sh/iLUOe/a2fac49b1b.osu
Oni : http://puu.sh/iLUOS/b5fa734a7f.osu

@Mion taiko difficulties should be ready for BN check now i guess

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2015-07-08T12:27:46+00:00

I see no updates

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-07-12T15:07:34+00:00

sorry 4 late reply

yaldo_27 wrote:
As requested in my queue, here's my mod
Cool song~ thanks

[Insane]
00:01:993 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This plays pretty badly, I suggest you to come up with something else
00:23:607 (1,2,3,4) - Why you put it here? There's nothing in the music that need to be emphasized like this
Vocal part in 00:24:434 - need to be emphasized, so don't "hide" it with reverse slider, change it into circle or slider head instead
00:36:481 (1,2) - Confusing spacing, put 2 further
00:57:741 - You "hide" the strong beat here with a slider end, consider changing this
01:03:764 (3,4,5,6) - same reason with 00:23:607 (1,2,3,4)
01:07:544 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:24:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would not recommend you to do this
This diff needs more work especially in terms of pattern in general and spacing
Actually, most of the problems has already been stated by Pho in his overview, so yeah l

[Hard]
00:11:442 (4,5,1,2,3) - This rhythm here doesn't fit the music, make it into something like this http://puu.sh/iLPT1/ecaf617b7b.jpg fixed
00:18:056 - Make it into like this to fit the music better http://puu.sh/iLQ5r/444407130f.jpg basically to emphasize 00:18:056 (2,3) - better fixed
00:24:670 (6,1) - This jumps is waaayyy to huge... You know what to do with it XD fixed
00:33:646 (3) - rotate or curve this slightly so it doesn't touch 00:32:701 (1) - ok
00:38:371 (2,5,6) - They're touching, which is not good to see fixed
01:03:410 (2,4) - overlap fixed

I have nothing against Nacchan's Normal and Easy. For some reason, I can't mod Trias's Insane, really sorry for this...
Thats all I could say and Good Luck~ thank you

P.S : I wll fix the insane later.

Mint

1,611 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-07-13T11:22:32+00:00

Hi! Pho requested to check the Insanes o-o

Trias

* All your green lines are unsnapped.
* 00:01:993 (9,1,2,3,4) - Not really sure why you placed it like this, just a flowbreaker to me. Shouldn't be too big of a problem, but it'd play nicer if you kept this whole pattern flowing. http://puu.sh/iXteC/0c4b291aa3.jpg
* 00:02:938 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't hear anything in this song where this sudden distance change can go with honestly. This part is identical to 00:00:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - , so suddenly switching between spacing is really uncomfortable here.
* 00:06:245 (10) - I won't mention things like NCs and stuff a lot, but definitely consider putting one here. The combo is getting too long.
* 00:08:016 (1) - Find that this spinner ends way too late. Ending it on the blue tick is just being mean to the player lol, try this? http://puu.sh/iXtnz/749f21dead.jpg Ending it on the red tick instead would make this more player-friendly

* 00:16:875 (6) - I personally disagree with this slider here after the stream. The strongest sound of this whole part, the clap, is poorly emphasized now due to being on a slider end. A rhythm like this would catch all the sounds, while still making the clap clickable. http://puu.sh/iXtyk/0d414f3be8.jpg
* 00:19:001 (3,4,5,6) - No idea what's going on here. The rhythm here is alright, but the placement is putting me off. (3,4) and (5,6) are spaced so closely, I almost thought they were 1/4 like 00:13:568 (4,1) -
* 00:40:024 (11,12,1) - Please don't do this, these 1/4 jumps between (10,11) and (12,1) are way too sudden and the last one is definitely too big and plays uncomfortable.
* 00:45:576 (6,7) - I don't understand why you did that here as well, there's no need for jerky things like this, especially not in a calm part. Would prefer if it was just a regular stream.
* 00:45:930 (8,9,10) - Hmm.. not sure why you chose for these sliders here. I don't really know what they follow to be honest o_o
* 00:53:489 (1) - Would end this one on the red tick as well if I were you.

I see some interesting things here and there, but you should definitely watch your spacing. It doesn't have to be consistent all the way through of course, but try to keep it reasonable and player-friendly. Also, avoid combo's getting longer than 12 ._.

Insane

* 00:23:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please avoid doing things like these. They don't play well at all and come way too sudden. There's nothing in the song itself that calls for this anyway.
* 00:29:158 (2,3,4) - Snapping is the same, yet spaced differently. Any reason?
* 00:36:245 (8,1,2) - This is really misleading. (8,1) and (1,2) are spaced exactly the same, yet different in snaps. You should definitely make (1,2) larger than (8,1)
* 00:50:654 (3,4,5,6) - Same is happening here as well.
* 01:03:410 (2,3,4,5,6) - 01:07:190 (3,4,5,6,7) - I find this creative, gotta give you that, but again these are way too sudden. Just make a regular stream or use kicksliders ._. Even really strong notes like 01:10:024 (8,9,10,11) - don't have insanely large spacing like these.

Didn't mention too much as it's basically the same thing over and over. Just like Trias' diff, I can see some interesting and creative things here and there, but also try to keep reasonable (and playable) spacing. The thing is, those pattern would play fine if the whole diff is like this (see Pho's Purge for example), but if your diff is calm and relatively easy all the way through, try to keep it that way.

Could use more work. I see some nice things, but I really wish that things could me more consistent.
Good luck!

Pho

1,786 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-07-15T02:09:04+00:00

O i didn't get any update messages allright.
I think Trias' will still afk for quite a long time so yea... lol

yaldo_27 wrote:
As requested in my queue, here's my mod
Cool song~

[Phoi]
00:23:607 (4) - How about put a circle here and move the reverse in 00:23:725 - http://puu.sh/iLSOX/6512cd9c98.jpg Creates too much tension in a rather weak spot of the song, so i keep what i have.
00:36:009 (1,2,1,2) - This one is too far from each other Hmm, I will think about this, but for now keep.
00:38:371 (1,2,1,2) - I believe the transition between this can be smoother It's already smooth enough though ;-; Same as above.
00:56:560 (5) - I feel this pause is quite awkward, especially when playing, why not make reglular 1/4 slider?
This also apply in 00:58:449 (7) - , 01:00:339 (5) - , and so on These gaps are intended to give players more time to react to the next pattern since 1/4 jumps are pretty heavy for this song. There's also nothing noteworthy to follow in the gaps, so it is fine.
01:09:079 (1) - CTRL+G? :3 Would cause bad slider leniency and flow to 01:09:079 (1,2) - , so I keep what i have.

I have nothing against Nacchan's Normal and Easy. For some reason, I can't mod Trias's Insane, really sorry for this...
Thats all I could say and Good Luck~

No fix for now, but thanks for the mod anyway yaldo!

Gemu-

1,015 posts

Joined October 2010

Gemu- 2015-07-15T03:05:53+00:00

Kasha wrote:
From my modding queue

[Game's Oni]

00:32:583 (128) - k This is aplicated in the diff so, thanks and fixed nwn

Everything else looks good! gl getting this map ranked!

Thanks for you mod!

_tasty

161 posts

Joined December 2013

_tasty 2015-07-26T12:28:28+00:00

hi o/ from mod queue

[General]

check off widescreen support on all diffs

[Pho]

I can't really play this diff with all the spaced stuff so ._.
00:40:261 (1) - blanket 00:40:142 (3) - ?

[Trias]

00:00:339 - add?
00:02:465 (1) - ctrl h+g this? this is a really huge awkward jump to 00:02:938 (4) - and it doesn't really flow well
00:03:292 (5,6,7,8) - this is confusing to read and nothing in the song really allows you to do this
01:17:111 (8) - curve this properly around 9

[Insane]

00:23:843 (3) - only the intro of the song, please reduce this jump
01:17:583 (6) - fix blanket
01:18:528 (2) - mirror 1?

mion_6GKM

214 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

mion_6GKM 2015-07-26T13:12:42+00:00

_tasty wrote:
hi o/ from mod queue
[General]
check off widescreen support on all diffs oh i forgot!
[Insane]
00:23:843 (3) - only the intro of the song, please reduce this jump done
01:17:583 (6) - fix blanket done
01:18:528 (2) - mirror 1? sorry
thanks for the mod!

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-08-15T17:08:54+00:00

Asonate

Asonate wrote:
Alright, here goes

[General]
I really like that song already
Thanks for showing me this

[Pho's Purge]
00:00:339 (1,2) - Consider moving 2 down a bit, to make a curve and...
00:00:576 (1,2) - ...maybe make these bent, in order to match 00:00:339 (1,2) as well as consistency (all following sliders are bent
00:03:883 (3,4) - You can leave these as they are, but I would still recommend making them bent
00:17:111 (4,5) - Same as before, just that you might make them not bent to match previous sliders
01:09:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice Pattern
01:17:347 (6) - Maybe move that away from 3 by a bit
01:24:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Don't know if thats intentional, but if not you should move the last 1 and 2 with the same DS to the previous 1s/2s
I cant explain that too well, but look at the DS between the first and the second 1 and the second and the third 1 - It's different
@mion Metadata (?) Thingy, in your thread you name this diff as an extra, technically it is just an Insane (shouldn't matter tho)
[Trias's Insane]
00:42:859 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Maybe make these in additive spacing (not 3 0,7 and 3 1,2, but 0,7 -> 0,8 -> ... -> 1,2) re-map that part
01:24:552 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Again, maybe do these with additive spacing re-map that part
All in all, everything's looking good, but you might want to place a few more NCs add more NC
Again, metadata thingy, correct grammar would be Trias' Insane, as you don't need an "s" after apostrophes, if the name ends on "s", "x" or "z" fixed , change to Trias' Insane
[Hard]
01:09:788 (5,6) - Maybe make 5 & 6 equally long repeat sliders (1 repeat), you still get 6 hitsounds, but it plays much easier
01:17:465 (3) - Move this 1 or 2 grids to the left, please
01:25:497 (8) - I would rather make this end with a long slider (following the vocals) or a spinner
That's it for now, I hope I helped
Good luck !
If you have any questions, feel free to PM me ingame

-BlueSun-

-BlueSun- wrote:
Hello!
Just a Mod here.

Easy
All around a great diff, only a few problems i found here.
00:05:772 (3) - I't doesnt look right imo. try this :http://puu.sh/ixdgA/04f02fb0ad.jpg
00:39:788 (5,1) - Blanket?
00:44:513 (4,1) - ^
00:51:599 (3) - Ugly shape. Try this: http://puu.sh/ixdq1/3812d70399.jpg
01:02:938 (1,2) - Blanket?

Nacchan's Normal
Great normal. Pretty much nothing to note here.
00:15:694 (5) - Doesn't sound right imo. try something like this: http://puu.sh/ixdE7/18868519b8.jpg

Hard
It's pretty good, i found a lot of problems here though.
00:01:520 (4) - Move to x:56 and y:272 so its in correct blanket with (3).
00:11:914 (5) - overlaps with (3)
00:20:890 (6,1) - Don't look that nice next to eachother, consider changing.
00:22:190 (3,4) - move to x:112 and y:75
00:24:670 (6) - Bend it outwards more.
00:25:142 (1,2) - Blanket this properly.
00:26:087 (3) - ^
00:37:898 (1) - Make it more straight?
00:43:568 (4) - Make it a straight slider?
00:46:166 (1,2,3) - spacing here is strange.
01:04:827 (1) - Make it the same shape as 01:04:355 (4) ?
01:08:135 (5) - ctrl + G?
01:11:205 (2,3) - blanket properly.
01:11:914 (4) - ^
01:15:694 (5,1) - doesn't look all that great. consider changing.

Insane
It's not that great tbh. It's very stream intensive and also hard to follow, i think you should work on it a bit more or maybe even re map it. i woud have chosen a higher slider velocity, as well as a higher distance snap. It's still good, i just think the other insane is better. I don't usually mod a lot of insanes, so i can't really pinpoint whats wrong here. Sorry if i sounded harsh, i just wanted to tell you what i thought about it.

Trias's Insane

I can't find many major problems here. Well done
00:40:024 (11,12) - Why does the 12 come before the 11? many people could break their combo's on this, i would switch them around NC
00:42:859 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - This stream isn't spaced properly. re-map that part
00:53:489 (1) - Having a spinner end there is really bad, please end it at 00:54:906. fixed
01:24:552 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Again, distance this properly at the end there? re-map that part before

Pho's Purge

Awesome diff. Loved it, i found a few odd looking mishaps, but nothing important

Great Mapset! Hope it gets ranked and best of luck to all of you!

appleteeaterx

appleeaterx wrote:
Hi! Pho requested to check the Insanes o-o

Trias

* All your green lines are unsnapped. RIP
* 00:01:993 (9,1,2,3,4) - Not really sure why you placed it like this, just a flowbreaker to me. Shouldn't be too big of a problem, but it'd play nicer if you kept this whole pattern flowing. http://puu.sh/iXteC/0c4b291aa3.jpg re-map some part there
* 00:02:938 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't hear anything in this song where this sudden distance change can go with honestly. This part is identical to 00:00:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - , so suddenly switching between spacing is really uncomfortable here. fixed there
* 00:06:245 (10) - I won't mention things like NCs and stuff a lot, but definitely consider putting one here. The combo is getting too long. fixed
* 00:08:016 (1) - Find that this spinner ends way too late. Ending it on the blue tick is just being mean to the player lol, try this fixedhttp://puu.sh/iXtnz/749f21dead.jpg Ending it on the red tick instead would make this more player-friendly
* 00:16:875 (6) - I personally disagree with this slider here after the stream. The strongest sound of this whole part, the clap, is poorly emphasized now due to being on a slider end. A rhythm like this would catch all the sounds, while still making the clap clickable. http://puu.sh/iXtyk/0d414f3be8.jpg re-map that part
* 00:19:001 (3,4,5,6) - No idea what's going on here. The rhythm here is alright, but the placement is putting me off. (3,4) and (5,6) are spaced so closely, I almost thought they were 1/4 like 00:13:568 (4,1) - fixed
* 00:40:024 (11,12,1) - Please don't do this, these 1/4 jumps between (10,11) and (12,1) are way too sudden and the last one is definitely too big and plays uncomfortable.re-map that part
* 00:45:576 (6,7) - I don't understand why you did that here as well, there's no need for jerky things like this, especially not in a calm part. Would prefer if it was just a regular stream. re-map that part
* 00:45:930 (8,9,10) - Hmm.. not sure why you chose for these sliders here. I don't really know what they follow to be honest o_o umm
* 00:53:489 (1) - Would end this one on the red tick as well if I were you. fixed

I see some interesting things here and there, but you should definitely watch your spacing. It doesn't have to be consistent all the way through of course, but try to keep it reasonable and player-friendly. Also, avoid combo's getting longer than 12 ._.

Insane

* 00:23:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please avoid doing things like these. They don't play well at all and come way too sudden. There's nothing in the song itself that calls for this anyway.
* 00:29:158 (2,3,4) - Snapping is the same, yet spaced differently. Any reason?
* 00:36:245 (8,1,2) - This is really misleading. (8,1) and (1,2) are spaced exactly the same, yet different in snaps. You should definitely make (1,2) larger than (8,1)
* 00:50:654 (3,4,5,6) - Same is happening here as well.
* 01:03:410 (2,3,4,5,6) - 01:07:190 (3,4,5,6,7) - I find this creative, gotta give you that, but again these are way too sudden. Just make a regular stream or use kicksliders ._. Even really strong notes like 01:10:024 (8,9,10,11) - don't have insanely large spacing like these.

Didn't mention too much as it's basically the same thing over and over. Just like Trias' diff, I can see some interesting and creative things here and there, but also try to keep reasonable (and playable) spacing. The thing is, those pattern would play fine if the whole diff is like this (see Pho's Purge for example), but if your diff is calm and relatively easy all the way through, try to keep it that way.

Could use more work. I see some nice things, but I really wish that things could me more consistent.
Good luck!

_tasty

_tasty wrote:
hi o/ from mod queue
[General]
check off widescreen support on all diffs
[Pho]
I can't really play this diff with all the spaced stuff so ._.
00:40:261 (1) - blanket 00:40:142 (3) - ?
[Trias]
00:00:339 - add? added
00:02:465 (1) - ctrl h+g this? this is a really huge awkward jump to 00:02:938 (4) - and it doesn't really flow well keep there
00:03:292 (5,6,7,8) - this is confusing to read and nothing in the song really allows you to do this re-map that part before
01:17:111 (8) - curve this properly around 9fixed
[Insane]
00:23:843 (3) - only the intro of the song, please reduce this jump
01:17:583 (6) - fix blanket
01:18:528 (2) - mirror 1?

Thanks for all mods , really helpful

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neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,547 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2015-08-22T12:53:43+00:00

General

Why not add AudioLeadIn

Tria's Insane

00:03:410 (6,7,8) - really awkward, and I can't see why it is as such, and the rest match but these don't
00:06:245 (10) - NC
00:08:016 (1) - end it at 00:09:788 - this is where the music comes back up but you overlooked it, which places the spinner end in a weird position of being neither here nor there, as it's in the middle of a triplet beat
00:19:001 (3,4) - spacing is anti-climatic, the blanket isn't well done either
00:19:946 (5,6) - ^
00:21:127 (7) - you could place it better....the so called equal spacing from each head is not exact either, and 00:19:946 (5,7) touch each other and isn't nice
00:37:426 (3,4,5) - why differ the spacing between them? Imo, it makes the pattern sloppy
00:38:371 (5,6) - eh, I mean if you wanna curve them around each other, you could at least make the blankets neater
00:40:024 (11,12,1) - if you want to end it off with 1/4 circles, honestly speaking, don't make it similar to the sliders before them, they don't make any emphasis, and the fact that you switched back to using circles, surely you wanted to focus on something. You could do something like making the spacing between 00:40:024 (11,12,1) equal from each other like some jump or just switch back to using slider to end the 1/4 part, that was more comfortable...
00:45:576 (6,7,8) - equal spacing between their heads? Also 00:45:930 (8) ends when the vocals start, which is at 00:46:166 - his makes 00:46:402 (9) awkward as it's placed on nothing, you should have something start on that red line
00:46:402 (9,10) - make blankets, they make things neater here
00:46:875 - vocals hold here, slider ends here, plays off, also all the melody lines like 00:47:347 are ignored with these long sliders
00:53:489 (1) - seriously redundant holds of the spinner to end 1/4 later. She sings 'there' at 00:55:142 - end the spinner with the music
01:00:103 (3,4) - is it really necessary for them to barely touch each other this way
01:25:379 (14,15,16) - closer spacing, sure, but with them touching each other slightly, visually it doesn't help the pattern look nice:

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The spacing really needs reconsideration to make it more tidy, it really looks haphazard

Insane

Just some tips for this.

Have more direction and sense of unity with the shapes and patterns you use, somehow the placement used just makes everything individual, and seems like they don't relate with each other.
Also avoid making placement like 00:37:426 (4,5,6,7) - this is just random, untidy with the slight overlaps, and also the curves don't help the movement
01:01:993 (3,4,5,6) - any reason for the differing spacing for all of them? Even if you did want difference between the circles and slider, I see no reason for the sliders to differ as well
Also overlaps like 01:07:662 (5,6) - just not really nice unless really purposely used and well, overlapped with an adequate amount
01:08:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - just the overall flow of things like this not really well
01:17:583 (6,7,1) - ^
01:21:835 (1,2) - not really well/visually/movement-wise nice
01:22:308 (2,3,4,5) - then bam, last circle spaced in a different way

Been told before, something you could use, slider steams don't always have to touch with each other, like circle streams, you could have jump/spacing between them when done right

Really could use improvements, you could use more fitting rhythms, you could make things more organised and neat

Good Luck

RVMathew

991 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-08-24T11:09:14+00:00

Hi there. From my modding queue: t/336458/start=120

In fact, you made a request for this map back in June (see page 2 of the modding queue). I am very sorry that you had to wait so long.

Please note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say. Changes are separated into boxes.

General

1) Maybe add a spinner at 01:25:379 and ends at 01:27:032? If you do do that, then at 01:27:032 make the volume 5%. The reason for the spinner is that you can hear the music fade out; it is not abrupt. Moreover a spinner is an integral part of the game so it would be nice to have it.

mion_6GKM's Easy

1) 00:18:056 The note overlaps this note (00:16:166) and that does not look good. There are 2 ways you can fix this.
First way: Place 00:18:056 where the previous note is:

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Second way: Place it away from the note like so (you get a nice diamond pattern as well):

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Other instances where it occurs: 01:15:694

2) 00:27:032 Slider 3 has some overlap with slider 1. This does not look neat. Try this (you can get the blanket curves):

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If you do not like this, try something else, but try and not get any overlaps, because in my opinions, having overlaps like this will make a beatmap look messy.

3) 00:44:985 If you were intending to make a blanket, then position the curve like so (My example: the slider is curved less).

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4) 00:53:016 Move the slider left. New coordinates: x: 340, y: 204 It looks better

Nadapan's Normal

Nice to see you again (you may remember me when I modded your GD on the Kuroko beatmap by Meow2)

1) 00:03:883 This note overlaps this note (00:01:520). Overlaps can be messy so try this:

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This also fixes a blanket issue; currently the note was not in the middle of the blanketing slider.

2) 00:21:363 The slider. I think that for this one, keep the repeating slider, but have it start at 00:21:363, then have the slider end at 00:21:717 so when the slider repeats the final position is at 00:22:072. The only problem is that with this you will have to change the positions of the note.

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3) 00:46:402 Position slider 4 like so to avoid it overlapping note 2:

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mion_6GKM's Hard

1) 00:03:410 Rotate the slider 16 degrees clockwise and make the slider straight. Then for 00:04:355 copy the slider at 00:03:410, remove the repeat, double the length and place it like this. It looks a lot better compared to the current setup:

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2) 00:28:450 and 00:28:922 Keep the sliders the same shape, because when the shapes are symmetrical, it looks better. Which one you want to keep depends on you. My personal choice is to copy 00:28:922 because when you make the pattern the sliders are parallel hence a lot more clean.

Other instances where it occurs: 01:08:135 and 01:08:607

3) 00:42:150 I assume you are making this a blanket slider to blanket 00:41:914. If so do this:

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Other instances where it occurs: 01:13:095

4) 00:47:820, 00:48:292 and 00:48:764 It would look better if you made these sliders parallel. The pattern is nice but make the sliders parallel

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mion_6GKM's Insane

I think a lot of stuff will be overlapping with Neonat's thoughts

1) Should you call this a light insane? It does not seem that hard to warrant an insane difficulty. However this may be just me.

2) 00:21:363 and 00:21:835 Make it the same shape so it is parallel. Looks a lot better.

3) 00:29:513 and 00:29:867 Make it the same shape. Right now the movement from an angled slider to a curved slider is not that good but it is forgivable to me at least.

4) 01:11:914 Change the shape of the slider like so:

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5) 01:20:772 Stack. Makes the pattern a bit easier to handle, but that is just me.

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6) 01:24:670 to 01:25:379 Make the spacings consistent.

Sky Trias's Insane

I think a lot of stuff will be overlapping with Neonat's thoughts
1) 00:09:906 Can we actually allow a spinner like that? In playing the game, if the person wants to get max score on the spinner, he or she has to try and end that spin on the exact location where the next note starts, or else they get a miss. You should make the spinner end at 00:09:788.

Other instances where it occurs: 00:55:261

2) 00:11:442 Idea for the slider. When she says no-------body, the music fades down a little bit. I was thinking of trying this: Add a green point at 00:11:442, and make the audio at least 20-30% lower. Then at 00:11:678 put another green point so then the volume is at normal again. This may add a nice effect to the beatmap.

3) 00:21:835 Try and avoid overlapping this slider with the previous slider as it does not look nice. You can stack the slider but try to make sure that the slider bodies do not intersect.

4) 00:21:835 The pattern is a nice idea but it does not look good as it looks irregular. Move note 2 (00:22:308) to x: 462, y:90, then copy both the notes and then ctrl+h and then ctrl+j. It looks a whole lot better when you make it symmetrical.

5) 00:28:450 The slider ends at 00:28:686 because the vocal also ends at 00:28:686. You can add a note at the blue tick if you like.

Other instances where it occurs: 00:56:087, 00:59:394, 01:05:064

6) 01:18:056 and 01:18:764 I would recommend making the sliders the same shape.

7) 01:24:552 I have to agree with Neonat here; the stream does not look good at all. Keep the spaced stream but make it consistent.

Pho's Purge

1) 00:44:985 Tuck this note underneath sliderend of slider 4 (00:45:103). Looks better because overlaps are messy. Also occurs at 01:09:316

2) 00:58:686 Stack the slider on note 7. Occurs also at 01:04:355 and 01:17:583

3) 01:15:339 I believe the rhythm sounds a lot better if you add a single note here, then move the current slider 1 tick to the right so it starts at 01:15:457 and ends at 01:15:576. You will have to change the position of the notes though.

Final thoughts. The map is very good, and the rhythm in all of the beatmaps are quite sound. There are some position issues, but a lot of them was because I was very critical.

Good luck, and again I apologize for making you wait 2 months for a mod (you even had to post it again). Contact me via forum PM if you need extra help).

P.S: "PLEASE DON"T TAKE MY BG!"You are implying that you have something to do with the BG. Just to let you know, unless you made that BG yourself or played some part in making it, anyone can technically take that BG.

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