[General]
- Hmm... no-vid? Yes :3
- Try mixing normal hitsound with low volume (around 60%) it fits the music Okey
- Your spinner don't have a center and because of the shadow it looks weird when spinning it <--- I think it's good T_T
- Add SadKangaroo in tags, make sure to do this for all diff <--- okey
- There are 2 osb files, delete the unused one and y'know, do a full submit again <--- Deleted
- BG for SadKangaroo's Flower is to big, the max size is 1024x768 <---Resized.

[Easy]
00:44:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not recommended for easy diff, maybe change it into slider repeat Fixed
01:06:993 (1) - this spinner is too short, I suggest change it into slider too Fixed
[Basquash]
00:43:993 (1) - Unrankable spinner, spinner must have a bonus score of min 2000 when auto - Deleted
01:24:548 ~ 01:26:549 - Fill this place with notes - Filled

and I don't like the BG, oh well...

PRIVET!!!!!

Ugh, a hentai bg, fortunately, I delete those bg. But next time, try find the better BG

[General]
If there's no video, please remove the "(TV Size)" since the video is not appear

[Easy]
00:35:771 (1) - Move forward to red tick and extend to white tick Fixed
00:46:660 (1) - Move forward to white tick and cut short to red tickFixed
01:08:437 (1) - ^ and remove new comboFixed
01:10:326 (2) - New comboFixed
01:13:882 (1) - Remove new combo?Fixed

[Basquash!]
00:36:771 (1) - Extend this spinner to white tick Fixed
00:44:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make a soft sound? Fixed
00:52:438 (6) - Cut short this slider to white tick Fixed
01:03:216 (8,9) - Spacing error Fixed
01:07:993 (1,2,3,4) - Move backward to red tick Fixed
01:26:549 (1,2,3) - Make a jumps? YES!

Leorda wrote:

[SadKangaroo's Flower]
00:11:216 (7) - New combo?? It goes within 00:10:771,but this is the end of a slider,so No
00:52:549 (5) - Move backward to blue tick and move 00:52:771 (1) to 00:52:548 and extend?? Firstly,i did the same,but when I was testing it,I've noticed that some hitsound is missing,and I don't like how it sounds w/o (5) one in general,so No
01:17:438 (7) - New combo?? No

offset: 538. Если быть честным - я в тайминге плох, но так вроде лучше, попробуй и сделай реснап нот.

0:48:093 (4) - В следующих мапах, даже в изях, лучше сделай больше коротких слайдеров, чем вот таких,
и длинных, это не интересно. Да изя сама по себе не интересная.
00:56:093 (2) - Новое комбо. Нет.
00:57:871 (3) - ^ Нет.
00:59:649 (4) - ^ Нет.
01:06:760 (5) - ^ Нет.
01:08:537 (6) - ^ Нет.
Я не понимаю, зачем спамить?

00:22:771 (4) - clap. Ok
00:23:660 (1) - clap.Ok
00:24:549 (5) - clap.Ok
00:24:771 (6) - finish.Ok
00:26:327 (4) - clap.Ok
00:27:216 (2) - clap.Ok
00:28:104 - clap.Ok
00:28:326 - finish.Ok

Ну и примерно так далее. Сделал

00:44:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - тут надо звук светсков юзать! инфа 100%, звучит. Не юзается у мну, хз почему.
00:52:548 - рано предупреждение, оно примерно тут должно идти - 00:54:993, т.к именно этот слайдер
расслабляет перед спид апом, т.к он без ускорения, просто переставь. Переставил
01:08:993 (4) - сюда нужно тоже предупреждение о скорости. Ты прав

Со спейсингом всё в норме вроде как, star~

[Easy]

00:26:993 (2) Start slider at 00:27:215 and end at 00:28326 as before?
00:50:882 Don't start spinner on a blue tick unless it's necessary.


[Basquash!]

00:08:104. I would love to see you start map it here. if it's the hardest diff you should map more on it. Also..the score on SadKangaroo's diff is higher than your hardest diff. ;-; So I suggest you map from here. I'm too lazy >_>, If someone said the same, i'll fill this place with notes :3

00:50:882 Are these short spinners allowed? I'm not sure about this.. But still.

00:58:771 - 00:59:437 WHA- Confusing.. very confusing. I mean it. Same spacing as those other 2 tick notes...The sliders at this double speed phase are confusing aswell. Someone tell me please if they fc this part..
1:00:660 (4) This fast slider don't fit here.
1:06:882 Spinner..same as the one at 00:50:882.
1:10:326 - 1:15:660: Same as at 00:58:771 - 00:59:437 - O_o

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Yes/Fixed
No/ Nothing change
Why?

[Easy]

00:26:993 (2) Start slider at 00:27:215 and end at 00:28326 as before?
00:50:882 Don't start spinner on a blue tick unless it's necessary.


[Basquash!]

00:08:104. I would love to see you start map it here. if it's the hardest diff you should map more on it. Also..the score on SadKangaroo's diff is higher than your hardest diff. ;-; So I suggest you map from here. I'm too lazy >_>, If someone said the same, i'll fill this place with notes :3

00:50:882 Are these short spinners allowed? I'm not sure about this.. But still.

00:58:771 - 00:59:437 WHA- Confusing.. very confusing. I mean it. Same spacing as those other 2 tick notes...The sliders at this double speed phase are confusing aswell. Someone tell me please if they fc this part..
1:00:660 (4) This fast slider don't fit here.
1:06:882 Spinner..same as the one at 00:50:882.
1:10:326 - 1:15:660: Same as at 00:58:771 - 00:59:437 - O_o

Thanks :3

EDIT: Seems like [Basquash!] Will become an easier version of Kirby MIX xD

Louis Cyphre wrote:

EDIT: Seems like [Basquash!] Will become an easier version of Kirby MIX xD

You wanna increase hardness? ; )

00:22:104 (1, 2)-Place 1 under 2 on mid-way? Plus add clap on 2 at the beginning of that slider. I don't like this place too, I'll just change it :3
00:30:771 (3)-Add clap.
00:31:437 (6)-Add clap on reverse arrow.
00:34:326 (2)-Remove clap on 1st reverse arrow and remove clap at the end of that slider.
00:44:104 (3)-Add clap?
00:44:771 (1) Add clap on first reverse arrow and add clap on final reverse arrow.
00:48:104 (4)-Spacing?
00:54:993 (1)-Add clap?
01:00:993 (5)-Add clap on reverse arrow.
01:01:600 (1)-Add clap on first arrow and add clap on the fifth reverse arrow
01:06:326 (4, 5) Add clap on reverse arrow and fix spacing on 4 and 5?
01:15:215 (1) Add clap.
01:15:882 (2) remove claps from the beginning of that slider, 2nd reverse arrow, 3rd reverse arrow,
4th reverse arrow, and the end of that slider.

SadKangaroo's Flower:

-I'm not really positive about 1/6 as the right snap divisor because when I renapped all notes,
they are placed differently on the time-line. =/ Maybe remap this? I'm sorry that's the only option I can think of
because other people who will mod this might say the same thing. ._. It's 1/4, not 1/6 xD

Basquash!:

-Resnap all notes.

00:34:993 (4)- Move 1 grid right.
00:35:215 (5)-Place this under 4.
00:35:882 (1, 2, 3, 4)-Symmetrical with the previous slider? Just fixed distance after replacing slider (5), i think it's good :3
00:40:771 (1)-Move 1 grid right.
00:42:326 (8)-Add clap.
00:42:660 (11)-Remove clap from first reverse arrow and Add finish on the end of that slider.
00:43:215 (2)-Add clap.
00:46:882 (2)-Remove clap.
00:48:548 (5 ,6)-Remove clap from 5 and add clap on 6.
00:54:993 (1)-Add clap on the beginning of that slider and add both clap and finish on the end of that slider.
00:57:437 (4)-Add clap and finish?
01:00:660 (4)-Remove clap from reverse arrow.
01:01:660 (1, 3, 4, 5, 7, 8, 9, 10)-Remove claps. This is my favourite part x)
01:06:104 (4)-Add clap on reverse arrow.
01:08:104 (2)-Add clap
01:08:104 (3)-Remove clap?
01:09:924 (5)-Add clap.
01:10:660 (2)-Add clap on reverse arrow.
01:11:326 (4)-Add clap on the end of that slider.
01:15:215 (5)-Add clap on the beginning of that slider.
01:18:771 (2, 6)-Add claps.

00:22:326 (1) - Start nearby slider here?
00:25:882 (1) - ^
00:29:437 (1) - ^ shorten slider so the slider tick isn't there anymore
01:05:326 (2,3) - I wouldn't use hitcircles here
01:15:882 (2) - Remove clap on repeat
01:18:104 (4) - Replace clap with finish hitsound?

SadKangaroo's Flower

Increase Overall Difficulty by 1?
Using Hardrock will be impossible, i don't like that.

Basquash!

I don't like the long streams in the beginning
01:00:771 (4) - Move the slider here on the red tick + Added a note

Thanks~

General
Use same kiai on all difficulties?

Easy
01:15:882 (2) - remove claps on red ticks?

SadKangaroo
Fine

Basquash!
Why lots of streams here <--- bcz it's hard.
00:56:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - clap on white ticks
01:00:660 (4) - move to 01:00:771(x)
01:01:215 (5) - delete this note
Thanks for modding ^_^

Teras wrote:

[SadKangaroo's Flower]

00:52:548 (5) Move this note to 00:52:437 and fix spacing and then let the spinner start at it's previous placement? It sounds better to me.

• • Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"

• • Disable countdown
  • 00:44:771 (1,2) - Spacing (keep "Distance snap" active and fix it)

• • Disable countdown
  • 00:50:771 (7) - Delete this circle and move this slider 00:50:882 (8) 1/4 earlier [star-slider 00:50:771 // end-slider 00:51:882]
  • 00:59:438 (9,1) - Spacing

I can't mod well... besides i can play only first level and so there goes my only suggestion - please consider adding something between easy and guest level.
So anyway - there goes star ^^.

Map is good, have my star
Deep modding have to wait a bit ;_; dont have much time

even though those "kirby" parts made me lose alot of acc :<

Easy
this looks more like a Normal <--- Oh why? It's E. May be discrease something? =/
00:50:882 (1) - start on white or red tick
nice slider shape =P

Baquash!
01:26:549 (1,2,3) - 2 and 3 should be closer together, like it reflect from timeline... i miss that while playing
inherited timing sections that change volume or sounds, shouldnt be on top of the beats, put it before if you have room to do so.

Sekuyi wrote:

[SadKangaroo's Flower]
- 00:47:215 ~ (1,2) maybe make a slider? start 1, end 2. but should make it a short one and change the bpm for that part. long sliders doesn't fit the overall mapping^^ There's no need to make a slider here.
- 00:54:326 ~ put a break after this. without it's a dead end for those with a too short life bar (about 1/5 will be lost in this short time!)It's an Insane anyway,I don't feel like adding a break to such a short pause.

Lizbeth wrote:

SadKangaroo's Flower
00:21:882 - add note No,it was purposely.
00:22:104 - ^ Sounds ugly,sorry,no.I'm more likely to follow the rhytm,not to follow each word from lyrics,btw it doesn't need to follow each letter.Music ended,it was a short break between two differents rhytms and parts of the song,and it started right on the point I've chosen.
00:41:104 (4,5) - remove these two, i think here doesnt fit a triple (remember to adjust spacing)No,my version sounds better to me,sorry.
some of the slow down confuse me a bit, consider adding a SB warningI hate SB warnings,they're making the maps repulsive.Maybe I'd thought about 2x warning,but I have no doubt about adding 0.5x warning - no way.I better ask to delete my map instead of adding it.

SadKangaroo wrote:

I hate SB warnings,they're making the maps repulsive.Maybe I'd thought about 2x warning,but I have no doubt about adding 0.5x warning - no way.I better ask to delete my map instead of adding it.

SadKangaroo wrote:

I won't even look to change something,after it was bubbled.

It's senseless.

Sorry, improvement comes before ranking. Not to be mean or something, but you need to look at Glasslake's suggestions. I will rebubble after.

Gens wrote:

Oh yeah, "size" needs to be capitalized correctly in the title, "Size".

Glasslake wrote:

[SadKangaroo's Flower]
00:22:104 (x) - Add a note Absolutely out of rhytm.I don't need to follow each word.
00:29:660 (x) - Add a slider that goes from here to 3, then remove 3. No,I want a jump here.And I don't want my rhytm to be identical and tasteless.
00:30:104 (x) - Add a slider that goes from here to 4, then remove 4. ^
00:36:771 (3,4) - Replace with a spinner No.
00:43:660 (4) - Turn into a slider Are you kidding?
00:46:660 (2) - Remove this It fits.Probably I could change it,but stood.
00:47:216 (1,2) - Turn into a sliderNo.
00:54:437 - 00:55:993 : Why is this part empty? Because it's the beginning of a new piece of song and a new rhythm.
01:06:771 (3) - End this slider on 01:07:660 Hm..probably,but I don't want to change it,it fits.
01:07:882 (x) - Add a slider from here to 01:08:104 ^
01:15:437 (x) - Add a slider from here to 01:15:882, and make this the combo starter I am following the rhytm.
01:17:882 (15) - Move this onto the previous blue tick, then move it back across the screen.
01:18:327 (16) - Move this onto the previous red tick
01:19:548 (3) - Move this onto the previous blue tick
01:19:882 (x) - Add a note
01:20:882 (x) - ^ No to all suggestions above.With all this you could map your own difficulty,but don't teach me how to map,please.

Thank you.