caren_sk wrote:

Rumiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa♥

intoon wrote:

Rumiaisiteru

Momovely wrote:

nice map W

HeatKai wrote:

nice, aku suka :3

T-Mac wrote:

[General]

好きになるその瞬間を 这个是可以加进metadata的，是专辑名好

02:57:390 - 这根红线好像不是3/4的样子，如果不是的话这根红线也就没什么用了 我还不知道这一点，我先扔

combo color颜色都是比较亮的那种，建议亮的和暗的搭配一下或者用哪些比较切合BG的颜色 我不知道该用什么颜色Q_Q

[Regret]

00:11:086 (3,5) - overlap？

00:12:390 (1) - 这个串我觉得可以拉大间距，和00:12:227 (5) - 做一个blanket，然后在00:12:717 (5) - 加音效 done,00:12:717 (5) -这是whistle吗?

00:15:488 (1,2) - 这个间距有点太小，容易当1/4处理掉 距离增加

00:51:847 (4) - NC吧，因为这里是钢琴音，和前面的音色差距挺大的，而且时间间隔也比较长 好

01:45:325 (4) - 这个地方感觉上来说是不用折返的，然后在01:45:651 - 这里补上note因为这里是大白线 好

01:49:564 - 到01:50:706 - 这里我觉得用1/2滑条填满比较好，这样听上去比较符合vocal 我想保留这部分，因为它是好玩了

02:57:390 (1,2,3,4) - 这个难度有点大了，就算是混combo，难度也不小，02:57:824 (3) - 没有折返，加上这一段是1/3，对读图要求一下子就提高了 我没有任何更好的主意如何做到1/3 QAQ

04:01:956 (5) - 这里用一下NC吧 好

这摸图效率醉了，明天补上 233 ,感谢的摸

T-Mac wrote:

后续，no kd

[Insana]

难度名？应该是只有最高难度的难度名可以自己取名的 Q.Q

00:14:836 (7) - 这滑条看上去形状有点诡异。。改

01:23:477 - 补上note？这地方应该是大白线+finish吧 啥也没听见有

02:02:608 (1) - 前后间距不一样，就算是从1.0x变成0.5x，我觉得这个串的间距还是应该保持一致的，像这里的话就相当于从0.2的DS变成了0.1 对 , fix

02:25:760 (6) - 变间距的话用一下NC？另外02:25:678 (5,6) - 这个间距我觉得还是跟之前一样用0.6的比较好，这样的话就是4个0.6，4个1.0了 好

02:58:369 (1) - 这里建议ctrl+G，同样一个1/3，打完折返滑条就要马上折回去，这难度有点太大了，另外建议取消NC fix

02:59:999 (9) - NC？似乎没有必要

04:02:119 (1,2,3) - 这里放几个跳？感觉很适合的样子 好

[Hard]

00:25:108 - 00:25:760 - 补上note吧？这样空着我感觉也不太好 我下面的vocal哦

00:27:553 (3,4) - 这样叠着似乎打起来并不是太合节奏的样子，还是建议都分开放，或者00:27:880 (4,5) - 叠起来会好一点的样子 fix

00:38:803 (5,1) - 这里也是，滑条结束的时候和下一个滑条开始，居然是相反方向的，00:38:803 (5) - 同样建议ctrl+G，但你可以留你的光标在一个地方和slider不破

01:49:238 (8,1) - 这里也是 ^

00:56:738 (1) - 这里建议拆成两个折返滑条吧？对

01:04:890 (8,9) - 不知道none的话是怎么样的，HR的话头一回打真的可能会被坑到，感觉还是换成一个折返滑条比较好，两个1/4感觉有点难度 改变一些

01:44:021 (6,7) - 也是跟上面一样，而且前后间距也有点问题，时间上差了1/2和1/4，但是用了同样大的间距 fix

01:53:477 (6) - NC？另外我觉得01:54:374 (9) - 这个可以去掉，四个滑条打起来应该也是更符合音乐的，因为滑条头都是强音 fix

03:16:303 (2,3) - 这两个怎么是5/4？哈哈哈我醉了 , fix

T-Mac wrote:

后续，no kd

[ffstar's Normal]

OD2.5有点低，别的没什么了

ffstar0716 wrote:

Hard done
http://puu.sh/jnJHz/a2fa2c6bbc.rar

T-Mac wrote:

后续，no kd

[ffstar's Normal]

OD2.5有点低，别的没什么了

rumia help me increase my normal diff's OD and HP to 3 thanks!!!!!

Rumia- wrote:

lol u give me the update of normal instead of hard ;w; anyway updated for now

1. 00:59:347 (1,2)
   Reverse and change location :3
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:11:575 (1) Remove NC
2. 00:19:401 (1) ^
   
   
3. 00:11:738 (1) add NC
4. 00:12:390 (1) ^
5. 00:19:564 (1) ^
6. 00:27:390 (5) ^
7. 02:59:673 (1) ^
   
8. 00:59:510 (3) Cahnge Location
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:14:673 add Circle

A s h e m u wrote:

Rumiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ :3

[Regret]

1. 00:59:347 (1,2)
   Reverse and change location :3 fix with other location :3
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insana]

1. 00:11:575 (1) Remove NC
2. 00:19:401 (1) ^
   
   
3. 00:11:738 (1) add NC
4. 00:12:390 (1) ^
5. 00:19:564 (1) ^
6. 00:27:390 (5) ^
7. 02:59:673 (1) ^
   some nc fix on other part but fix mostly ~
8. 00:59:510 (3) Cahnge Location cool :3
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:14:673 add Circle add

Good Luck ~ <3

Kencho wrote:

[General]

1. You don't have SB, so .osb file can delete.（If you want Lyrics SB i can do, but very simple）

[ffstar's Normal]

1. 00:44:021 (4,1) - Here spacing is 0.94x. In low difficulty, you need keep your DS in same setting and don't deviation more than +-0.05x.
   
   03:26:738 (2,3) - 0.91x
   
   omg why this will happen =w=, fixed
   
   Other things is well, nice diff. thanks!

[ffstar's Hard]

1. SampleSet change to Soft. i thought already soft? @@
   
   
2. 00:19:401 (1,2,3) - I think it maybe hard to read. So how about 3 stack with 00:20:869 (1) - ?
   
   00:29:673 (4,1) - stack, the same reason
   
   00:34:890 (4,1) - ^
   i would like to keep the stack first, sorry ><

Good Luck (~^-^)~

Kencho wrote:

[General]

1. You don't have SB, so .osb file can delete.（If you want Lyrics SB i can do, but very simple） its ok ill delete the .osb

[Hard]

1. 00:16:956 (6) - NC
   
   00:17:934 (9) - change to 2 circle
   
   00:19:075 (3) - delete
   
   00:19:238 (1,2,3,4) - i give you screenshot i am following the vocal here
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   00:20:869 (1,2,3) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   00:22:173 (4) - NC，后面我不多说了，you need keep 1大白线 1NC.
   
   00:33:586 (3) - no need 3/4, just use 1/2
   
   01:19:564 (5,1) - spacing too far, try this
   
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   02:04:890 (2,3) - 1/4 slider is hard to play in hard diff, change to 1/4 reverse slider as well

[Insane]

1. 00:29:836 (5) - NC
   
   00:46:956 (6) - NC
   
   01:01:303 (5) - NC
   
   01:03:749 (5) - NC，后面我不多说了，you need keep 1大白线 1NC.
   
   01:04:075 (6) - ctrl+G
   
   01:08:640 (7) - put it more high, y:70
   
   01:18:749 - add a circle here, try this, 2 and 4 stack, 1 and 3 stack. changed something in this part :3
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   02:25:515 (3,5) - delete it, simplify to 5连打
   
   03:38:803 (4,5,6,7,1) - 03:39:619 (2,3,4) - 03:40:434 (1,2) - 04:00:651 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - use more small spacing, otherwise it too close with your highest diff. i think the spacing is fine except for the last jump i reduced spacings /color]

[Regret]

1. 00:40:760 (7) - change to 1/2 slider, because 00:40:923 - has vocal
   
   00:45:651 (7) - NC，00:46:303 (1) - No NC，00:47:445 (1) - No NC
   
   00:47:119 (2) - no need this, because 00:47:119 - no sound, you can add a circle on 00:47:282 - and put it far, so you can try this, 1 and 2 are stack.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   01:02:445 (4,1,2,3) - 有点乱，try this, you can see 4123 is 等边 fix in some other way ~
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   01:07:662 (4,5,1) - totally ctrl+G
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   01:12:227 (5) - put to x:100 y:284, flow will better
   
   01:13:369 (3) - try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   01:16:467 (4,5) - ctrl+G
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   01:53:314 (4) - NC
   
   01:58:532 (5) - NC
   
   01:59:999 (9) - NC，02:00:325 (1) - No NC
   
   02:01:140 (1) - No NC，02:01:303 (3) - NC
   
   02:28:532 (1) - 虽然很好看，but this maybe a unrankable
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   02:37:662 (5) - put to x:26 y:266
   
   02:53:803 (3,4) - 没blanket好
   
   03:26:575 (6) - delete it maybe better, because here you follow vocal, this red line circle is hard to click.
   
   03:49:564 (1) - nice slider, but have a bit not perfect, i give a more perfect, just find in .osu 229564 and replace it
   
   SPOILER

   280,160,229564,6,0,B|345:119|329:230|251:267|251:267|174:229|157:117|225:160,1,360,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Good Luck (~^-^)~

1. Reduce HP Drain to 6. HP7 is incredibly high especially for those who plays HR when the HP drops drastically for no apparent reason.
2. (Optional) Reduce AR9.3 to AR9. Since this song is only 184bpm, there's no need to increase the AR over 9
3. (Optional) Reduce OD8.5 to OD8. OD 8 fits perfectly for this kind of map. Since this is not extremely tough or streamy map like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/186677 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/88180 so there's no need to increase OD over 8.

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:

Noob Rumia pui :c

Metadata

You should add a few more tags like:

1. HoneyWorks kyouku utattemita 5 (Album released by HoneyWorks which includes Little Regret)
2. utaite (Well, sana)
   fixed ^
   Source (Unreliable):
3. http://utaite.wikia.com/wiki/HoneyWorks_Albums
4. http://mikudb.moe/album/honeyworks-kyoku-utattemita-5/

[Regret]

Difficulty

1. Reduce HP Drain to 6. HP7 is incredibly high especially for those who plays HR when the HP drops drastically for no apparent reason.
   as a HR player , ive been testing this map with HR like almost everytime and i didnt find a part where i lose HP too hard so i think HP7 is reasonable and not exegeratingly high
2. (Optional) Reduce AR9.3 to AR9. Since this song is only 184bpm, there's no need to increase the AR over 9 i know ar9 are readable but as for this diff with full of jumps i think increasing it to 9.3 shouldnt be a problem
3. (Optional) Reduce OD8.5 to OD8. OD 8 fits perfectly for this kind of map. Since this is not extremely tough or streamy map like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/186677 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/88180 so there's no need to increase OD over 8. i dont get the idea of reducing OD because its not streamy , jumps are meant to be more accurate and i think OD8.5 isnt much a problem. it has been lowered from 9 as i felt its incredibly rediculous

Some stuff

1. 00:01:304 - 00:02:200 - Most preferable if you include some hitsound here. Default drum sample (The claps and Finish) would be nice.
2. 00:12:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to bracket the streams here, looks neater.
   
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3. 00:28:532 (1) - Maybe change this to 1/4 slider like 00:28:695 (2,3) ? It would fits the vocal here like what you did at 00:28:695 (2,3) . those 1/4 sliders are for the hi hat to emphasize the hihats , dont feel like putting a 5plet here since its kinda soft part
4. 00:38:314 (3,4,5) - Unintentional? Either stack them or like this
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:42:553 (1,1) - - Swap NC here. The NC on 00:42:553 (1) seems very random.
6. 00:44:021 (1,2,3,4) - There's no need to NC for this kind of stream note. Remove NC
7. 00:48:912 (2) - A clap here would be nice following 00:48:260 (6,7,8) .
8. 00:52:499 (1) - Clap here too. Without clap here seems very "empty" and a sudden clap here 00:53:151 (2) seems out of place. By adding the clap it fits the song nicely.
9. 00:53:477 (1,2,3) - Whistle here seems very fitting here i dont really think so ..
10. 00:57:390 - Add a circle at the last part of the stream here and move the spinner 1/4 note later. Ending a stream in an even number (In this case 14) would be quite awkward for most of the player. Adding a circle here would be more fitting in my opinion.
11. 00:59:265 - Reduce the spinner length to 00:59:184 . The spinner should be at least 1/2 apart. 1/4 would be quite sudden as the player would move towards the circle right before the spinner even finishes.
12. 01:00:977 (5) - Missing clap I suppose?
13. 01:02:282 - ^
14. 01:05:543 (2) - ^
15. 01:04:890 (10) - Similar about NC as I mentioned before. Remove it and maybe add a NC here 01:03:912 (6) .
16. 01:10:108 (4,1) - Finish here would fit nicely following the vocal like 01:09:782 (3) . added on (1) , but on (4) sounds a bit lousy
17. 01:15:162 (4) - Random clap here seems a little off
18. 01:17:934 (4,5,6,7,1) - The stream pattern here is quite weird, maybe something like this? fix in another way but still uses the concept of yours
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 01:19:890 - Sudden missing circle here kind of disrupts the flow and weird not to follow the beat at part. there is no beat there and i dont think its weird too
20. 01:35:706 (3,4,5) - Blanket nicer plz asd
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 02:04:564 (5,6,7) - Not snapped properly, DS plz
22. 02:04:809 (1,2) - Swap NC here, for stream is nicer for NC every 4 notes.
23. 02:08:151 - Missing clap at the end of the slider.
24. 02:09:456 (8) - Same.
25. 02:09:619 (1) - Maybe NC here? The combo from 02:07:825 (1) seems too long.
26. 02:12:390 (3) - Clap at the end of this slider too. Quite awkward to the streams of claps without clap here
27. 02:11:412 (5), 02:12:064 (2), 02:13:369 (2), 02:14:021 , 02:16:630 (4), 02:39:130 (1) - where claps noob
28. 02:42:553 (1) - the slider shape and overlapping here doesn't seem that nice at all. Maybe something like this? fix in some way
    http://puu.sh/jqhb6/9c65f5cc4e.jpg
29. 02:43:043 (5) - I prefer if you change the direction of the slider to maybe here? http://puu.sh/jqhjx/d7d6cf4fc5.jpg There's a lot of notes like "cramping" at the bottom left and that slider there would make the flow feels "tight". ^
30. 02:54:782 (1) - weird slider shape especially this part http://puu.sh/jqhtz/3470faf023.jpg . Move the 2nd point a little upward to make a smoother curve to make the slider look nicer http://puu.sh/jqhvs/049f801b05.jpg^
31. 02:58:369 - 02:58:695 - The part here is actually 1/4 . Including the electric guitar part.
32. 03:03:912 (1) - I kinda disagree with this 1/1 slider here. Try this? http://puu.sh/jqhF2/095c1ad7aa.jpg . Ignoring the vocal at 03:04:238 would be weird especially at this slow part of the song.
33. 03:16:303 (4,6) - Blanket plz http://puu.sh/jqhKg/6488b935b8.jpg
34. 03:24:782 (7,8) - ^
35. 03:35:461 (8) - Probably accidentally clap, remove it.
36. 03:41:738 (5,6) - Better blanket plz, http://puu.sh/jqhQa/4797a66513.jpg try to make use of the approach circle ring as a guide to make the slider blanket better.
37. 03:51:847 (6) - Move the slider to x:300 y:308 to keep a constant distance between 03:51:521 (4,5,6) .
38. 03:54:782 (1) - Remove clap here, probably accidental.

That's it for now~
I'll probably mod again soon lel. The rest of the diff I'll mod sooner or later when I have time xd

Midge wrote:

[regret]

first run+replay

http://hnng.moe/f/2EC

1. 00:17:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - antijumps here are kinda awkward imo kinda change something here
2. 00:18:260 - this section is a bit odd. i can't tell what you're trying to map here.
   00:20:869 (1,2,5,6) - follows the guitar quite well, but then 00:19:075 (4,5,6,7) - antijumps seem kinda out of place, idk, not much you can fix, but it'd good to keep in mind what part of the song you're trying to map. yea reworked this part
3. 00:28:695 (2,3) - kind of unnecessary kick sliders. i think its good to emphasize those hi hats
4. 00:35:706 (4,1) - antijump here kinda kills the flow yea right kinda change some placements here
5. 00:56:249 (2) - just a suggestion, but i always find streams that start on red ticks awkward to play, so i'd put a kick slider instead, and start the stream on the white tick.
6. 01:06:521 (1,2) - flip these, better flow imo http://hnng.moe/f/2EG
7. 01:16:956 (1) - rotate, flows better http://hnng.moe/f/2EH
8. 01:20:869 (1) - stack onto 2 for the antijump
9. 01:40:271 (1,2,3) - rotate by 120 instead, looks cleaner http://hnng.moe/f/2EI 20*
10. 02:28:532 (1) - よ よ
11. 02:41:738 (7) - ctrl+h for better flow http://hnng.moe/f/2EJ
12. 03:01:140 (4,5) - sounds better as a slider instead of 2 notes
13. 03:30:651 (1,2) - いい
14. 03:45:651 (1) - ctrl+g

unreplied are fixed as suggested!

[insane]

first run+replay

http://hnng.moe/f/2EE

1. 00:28:369 (1) - i'd recommend shortening the slider to end on the blue tick and putting a not on the white tick. slider ends are not good at emphasizing strong beats,
2. 00:44:347 (5,1) - stack on 1 for antijump
3. 00:57:390 (1) - つ
4. 00:58:532 (2) - it's で not て >:C fixed now :c
5. 01:42:390 (3) - should copt+past 1 instead of redrawing the slider
6. 01:58:369 (4) - try this pattern, puts heavier emphasis on the vocals http://hnng.moe/f/2EL
7. 01:59:836 (10) - change to this http://hnng.moe/f/2EM
8. 02:26:086 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nothing to change, but rhythmically, this is perfect. slider starts to heavily emphasize the strong beats, circles for transitions, and the jumps at the end that focus on the change in vocals. just sayin thanks !

[hard]

1. 00:19:238 (1,2) - ds is off, makes it confusing to read
2. 00:21:358 (2,3) - same as ^
3. 00:38:477 (3,4) - jump here may be too extreme for hard
4. 01:17:934 (8) - ctrl+g this. 2x repeaters always end on the opposite slider end
5. 01:49:238 (8) - same ^

mainly ds inconsistencies in this diff. i'd recommend getting some 100k players to testplay this and see where they might mess up

fixed all , also did a lot of consistent the ds work overall the diff huuuu

lower diffs look fine and clean, imo, but i'll take a closer look if you need me to. this song is long T~T

don't hesitate to hmu on irc if you have any questions.

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