wow nice song!
VanMoNky wrote:
As your request.
Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.[General]Star.
1. White and pinkish colors are bad ideas. Change them to dark orange or yellowish colors based on the background.
2. Cut the useless section of the song.
[Sallad's Normal]
00:13:656 (4) - Better remove the clap.
00:18:874 (2) - Change the hitsound at the end of slider to clap or whistle. Move the finish to the next note, (1).
02:17:144 (1) - Better move this spinner to the end of the map. It's placed inconsistently in the middle of kiai.
[Love]
00:18:893 (3) - Overlapped slider I think. [!] done
00:35:632 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo. done
00:22:806 (9,1) - Swap new combo. done
00:25:849 (3) - Add new combo.done
00:49:111 (1) - What is this? Sounds weird to me. no, I like it. I won't remove that.
00:53:458 (8,1) - Swap new combo.
01:01:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Overmapped. I hate this. maybe, but I like it too
01:04:980 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ maybe, but I like it too
01:06:719 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ maybe, but I like it too
01:14:545 (1) - Move one tiny grid left.
01:27:154 (6) - Add new combo.
01:44:110 (2,3,4) - Move them one or two tiny grids from (1).
01:49:762 (11,12,13,14,15) - Move them one or two tiny grids from (10).
01:51:719 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:57:371 (1) - Move it one tiny grid down. Don't forget to move the rest notes too.