1. Easy (1.45 stars, 112 notes)
2. Hard (4.87 stars, 346 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 354 notes)
4. Normal (2.68 stars, 136 notes)

• 01:04:992 (1) - グリーンラインをノーマルサウンドにして ノーマルフィニッシュ音
  01:10:640 (1) - フィニッシュ音
  01:05:698 (2) - クラップ音削除 次のノートにクラップを追加でその後のノート音も逆にして下さい
  01:14:877 (1,2,3) - 初心者プレイには恐らくこの３つのテンポではきつすぎるジャンプだと思います。
  01:17:701 (3) - クラップ音削除
  01:19:113 (1,2) - 頭のクラップを終わりの方にチェンジ
  01:22:643 (2) - クラップ音
  01:24:055 (3) - フィニッシュ音削除、クラップ追加
  01:26:879 (1) - グリーンラインを ノーマルサウンドに変更
  01:27:409 (1) - ＾
  01:41:706 - ノートをここに追加
  01:32:704 - のグリーンラインをノーマルに変えてみるのはどうでしょう
  01:42:412 (1) - スピン終了時にノーマルサウンドでのフィニッシュ音を入れたら格好いいですよ

• 00:14:333 (4) - 1 Tiny Grid 上に
  00:14:509 (5) - ＾
  00:14:686 (6) - ＾
  00:14:862 (7) - 2 Tiny Grid 上に
  00:17:157 (4) - 1 Tiny Grid 下へ
  00:17:334 (5) - ＾
  00:17:510 (6) - 2 Tiny Grid 下へ
  00:17:687 (7) - ＾
  01:34:822 (4) - 1 Tiny Grid 上へ
  01:34:999 (5) - ＾
  01:35:175 (6) - 2 Tiny Grid 上へ
  01:35:352 (7) - ＾
  01:37:823 (5) - 1 Tiny Grid 下へ
  01:38:000 (6) - ＾
  01:38:176 (7) - 2 Tiny Grid 下へ
  01:42:412 (1) - フィニッシュ音

• 00:15:039 - ノート追加？
  00:15:215 (7) - ＾
  00:17:864 - ＾
  00:18:040 (8) - ＾
  00:24:394 (3) - 1 Tiny Grid 上へ
  00:32:337 (8) - ノート追加？
  00:34:985 (4) - 新コンボにあがる
  00:35:691 (9) - ノート追加？
  00:36:044 (10) - ＾
  00:51:400 (4) - 右 1 上 1 Tiny Grid
  00:51:577 (5) - 右 2 下 1 Tiny Grid
  00:57:049 (6) - 1 Tiny Grid 上へ
  00:57:225 (7) - ＾
  00:59:343 (1,2) - 左 1 下 1 Tiny Grid
  00:59:873 (4) - 1 Tiny Grid 左へ
  01:00:050 (5) - 左 2 上 2 Tiny Grid
  01:00:403 (6) - ノート追加？
  01:12:582 (4,5) - 1 Tiny Grid 右へ
  01:23:879 (12) - ＾
  01:24:408 (14) - ノート追加？
  01:30:057 (6) - ＾
  01:37:470 (1,2) - 1 Tiny Grid 下へ
  01:38:000 (4,5) - 1 Tiny Grid 上へ
  01:38:529 (6) - ＾

masuo wrote:

BPM 170(or 85)
offset 755
変更しました。

ってゆか、なぜビデオ入らない？
Movie追加しました。

あたしは一つdiffがほしい、いいかな？多分[I]と思います^^
insaneを作った方がいいという事ですか？

スター
ありがとうございます　＝ω＝

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
there's 3 Insanes, unrankable according to the ranking criteria.

[Easy]
use some sliders instead of 1/1 circles.
00:12:764 (6,1) - switch new combo
00:57:938 (3) - new combo.
01:19:114 (1) - 1 grid right.
01:20:525 (2) - 1 grid right+ 1 grid up.

[Normal]
use less 1/2 notes. or use slider instead of them.
don't always place note in a straight line like they are just axis......
01:14:879 (1,2,3) - don't jump since this is normal.

[soulfear's chaos]
need more hitsounds.
01:03:235 - 01:05:000 too short as a break. remove plz. fit the music,need a break.
01:05:529 (3,4,5) - spacing. play no problem
01:06:941 (4,5,6) - doesn't make sense. just weird. play no problem
... i won't mod more. you're mapping for people to play, but most of the traps you're using is unneccesary. alright

[Hard]
try to use higher slider velocity.
01:03:235 - 01:05:000 too short as a break. remove plz.
01:35:172 (4) - 1 grid right.

[Insane]
need more hitsounds.

• • Source: ChäoS;HEAd (or Chaos;Head)
  • Add some Tags
  • Disable countdown, since it's unused
  • Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"
  • Why "CHAOSüGHEAD.avi" is unused? Add this video in all difficulties

• • Slider Tick Rate: 1 (or 2)

[General]

• Source: ChäoS;HEAd (or Chaos;Head)
• Add some Tags
• Disable countdown, since it's unused
• Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"
• Why "CHAOSüGHEAD.avi" is unused? Add this video in all difficulties


[Insane]

• Slider Tick Rate: 1 (or 2)

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:35:357 (5) - new combo

~Normal~
The circle size should be larger.
00:46:651 (4) - new combo
00:49:474 (8) - ^
01:19:122 (6) - ^

~Hard~
Fine.

~Insane~
Fine.


+Star

All

use same BG color D:
use same combo color D:
Source :Chaos;Head NoAH ?
Add an hitcircleoverlay.png on the folder. You can't add only hitcircle.png

Insane

01:02:886 (1) - end at 01:03:592 (remove finish)
01:24:769 (1) - remove finish ?
01:29:797 - this timing point is unnecessary <3

Hard

01:02:886 (1) - ^
01:12:769 (5) - move left 1 gird (lv3

Normal

01:24:416 (1) - start at 01:24:769 ?

Easy

STR(Slider Tick Rate): 0.5 feels better :3

nice song <3

01:24:416 (1) - start at 01:24:769 ?

Source :Chaos;Head NoAH ?

H-boy wrote:

Easy
fine

Normal
fine

some suggestions about note placement(just imo,so you can ignore it)
00:14:710(6) - del
00:17:533(6) - ^
01:05:710(3) - use a slider end at 01:06:063
01:07:298(x) - add a note with clap
01:11:357(3) - use a slider end at 01:11:710
01:18:592(x) - add a note with clap

hard
fine

Insane
fine

starrr

Leorda wrote:

KONNICHIWA

[General]
Tags?

[File]
Delete .osb and full submit

[Easy]
00:21:239 (5) - New combo?
00:26:886 (5) - ^
00:38:180 (2) - The slider is odd, use bezier please, IMO
01:00:769 (1) - End at 01:03:416?
01:09:945 (5) - Add finish and remove clap? Like 01:07:122 (5)?
01:10:651 (1) - Mix it up with clap and finish, doesn't looks good...... Remove clap or finish?
01:24:769 (1) - End at 01:26:710? Not done

[Normal]
00:04:298 (6) - New combo?
00:26:886 (5) - ^
01:00:769 (1) - End at 01:03:239? Noe done
01:07:474 (x) - Add note? The rhythm are misbleeding 0.0
01:09:239 (3) - Add one repeating slider? Not dene
01:13:475 (7) - New combo?
01:42:416 (1) - Silence this spinner　　Hmm...Not done...

[Hard]
01:42:416 (1) - Silence this spinner Hmm...Not done...

[Insane]
00:02:886 (7) - New combo?
00:05:710 (7) - ^
00:11:357 (5) - ^
01:42:416 (1) - Silence this spinner Hmm...Not done...

Not bad
STAR

01:02:886 (1) - Bad slider if we consider the part of sono where it is on. Try to make normal notes or some slider not 1/4.

Leorda, I'm more nazi than you

Kecco wrote:

•Insane•
00:09:063 (4,5,6,7,8) - Make those notes respectively on the same place of 00:07:122 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:35:357 (6) - Bad slider if we consider the part of song where it is on. Try to make a spinner -> [Begin : 00:35:357 ; End : 00:36:769]
00:45:592 (6,7,8,9,10) - Make those closer each other.
01:02:886 (1) - Bad slider if we consider the part of sono where it is on. Try to make normal notes or some slider not 1/4. Nor done
01:23:357 (9) - ^ Not done
01:38:886 (1,2,3,4,1) - 1 grid up?
01:41:533 (8,9) - 15 grids up? Not done

•Hard•
00:11:357 (5) - Add two arrows and then put a clap on the end. This way it seems more catchy. Not done
00:42:592 (1) - Remove this alone clap.
01:02:886 (1) - Same of Insane ↓ Not done

01:02:886 (1) - Bad slider if we consider the part of sono where it is on. Try to make normal notes or some slider not 1/4.

01:09:239 (5) - Add two arrows? Not done
01:22:651 (5) - New combo.
01:23:357 (9) - ^

•Normal•
00:14:180 (3,4,5) - These notes are not intuitive (maybe for the excessive closeness) for normal players, IMO. Try with a slider or something else.
00:17:004 (3,4,5) - ^
00:35:357 (1) - I don't know. Maybe replacing it with a spinner as proposed in the Insane mod?
00:46:651 (1) - Add clap on this slider's end?
01:07:122 (6,7,8) - Fail. I don't suggest those 1/2 notes for a Normal Diff, also because the BPM is too high.
01:34:651 (3,4,5) - ^
01:37:475 (3,4,5) - ^
01:38:886 (1) - Add a clap on this slider's end?
01:40:298 (3) - Add a clap on this slider's begin and also on the second arrow?

•Easy•
On this diff's mod I'm gonna type a lot of notes combinations which are a bit hard for easy players, but you don't need and is not necessary to change them. They are good in the way you mapped. What I reported in the following lines are just suggestions. I repeat : You don't need and is not necessary to change them.

Well ... I did not change
00:14:180 (3,4,5) - I don't know, maybe those are a bit hard for easy players. Try to fix those in another way? Maybe with a slider.
00:17:004 (3,4,5) - ^
00:42:416 (3,4,5) - ^
00:45:239 (3,4,5) - ^
00:48:063 (2,3,4) - ^
00:50:886 (2,3,4) - ^
01:06:416 (3,4,5) - ^
01:09:239 (3,4,5) - ^
01:12:063 (3,4,5) - ^
01:17:710 (3,4,5) - ^
01:34:651 (3,4,5) - ^
01:37:474 (3,4,5) - ^


Pretty map for being your second beatmap~
Good~
Star~


Leorda, I'm more nazi than you

Frill wrote:

offset looks good.


[Easy]

00:04:298 (5) - return to add Clap (00:05:710 (5) - )
00:07:827 (2) - remove clap.
00:08:533 (3) - add a clap.
00:09:239 (4) - remove clap.
00:09:945 (5) - add a clap

[Normal]

00:27:592 (3) - add a whistle
01:42:416 (1) - add a finish

[Hard]

00:51:592 (5) - remove clap. Instead.. add a finish

[Insane]

00:26:533 (8) - remove a finish Sounds odd to me.


To a whole..

Especially,almost bad clap
I think that it is not suitable for the drum.

However, good map!

+Star

banvi wrote:

Nice thismap and skin!
私から見たらほとんど完璧なので細かい私の意見しか言えません
違うなあと思ったらスルーしてください

SPOILER

Normal
00:38:180 add spinner?　(Easyではここにbreakがないので) うーん・・・2個連続スピンは好きではないので今回はこのままにしておきます
01:24:945 (1) 手前のホワイトラインから始めたほうが自然だと思います始まりが早すぎるきもするのでこちらもこのままにしておきます
Hard　Hardは全部直しました！
00:12:945 (2) 1 grid left
00:59:886 (4) 1 grid up
01:00:063 (5) 2 grid up
01:40:651 (3) 1 grid right
01:40:827 (4,5,6) 2 grid right
01:41:357 (7) 1 grid down and 1 grid right
Insane
01:04:298 - 01:04:474 - 01:04:651 add note? (ジャンプ入れても面白いかと思います)ジャンプの提案ありがとう！01:03:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - にノート追加で今回は入れてみました。
日本人同士お互い頑張りましょうｗ 日本人同士お互い頑張りましょうｗ 　はい、頑張りましょう！ｗ
また機会ある時によろしく＞ω＜

Frill wrote:

Fight!

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Easy] All Fixed
00:46:651 - distance
00:52:298 - ^
01:33:945 - ^
01:34:651 - ^
01:36:063 - ^
01:36:769 - ^
01:37:474 - ^

[Normal]
01:00:769 - spam　How do fix?

Another diffs fine ;; )

Clare wrote:

hi~

tags...You have to write something

[Easy]
00:07:122 (1) - add clap? look like Normal
01:04:827 (T) - Make a normal audio line in this,If you want to use normal audio

[Normal]
01:04:827 (T) - look like easy

[Hard]
00:12:063 (7) - Why don't you put the clap in 00:11:710 ?
01:04:916 (T) - look like easy

[Insane]
01:04:916 (T) - look like easy

Good job!
star!