Droid803 wrote:

First, have a star.

[Sara]
Looks fine.

[Tsugumi]
Are all those jumps intentional? There's quite a few of them.
Stuff like:
00:42:042 (5) - There's a jump before this note, but it's ok
00:47:059 (1) - I would space it further from the slider for clarity, no real sense jamming it all together in a corner.
00:49:092 (1) - See above comment
01:18:062 (2) - Another jump here, don't know if it's intentional
01:25:061 (3) - 01:26:064 (7) - I see how this makes it look nice and symmetrical, bt

If they are intentional, just ignore that last part, since this is a higher difficulty it should be ok...I think.
If they aren't, use distance snap to have "better" spacing of notes, though.

Shinxyn wrote:

Nice~
all skin elements seem to be there... hmm, Shinde should make a "lighting.png"
Don't use gray notes please, looks too much like you failed in multi or in tag mode D:! fixed.
Skin matches video, doesn't match background images =/ oh well T T, not every character has a good BG with the "Ocean" theme... so just keep them there.
Remove "Ever17" and "infinity" from tags, since they're in source, and please place a space in the source (between Ever17 and "-the", just to look better (I don't know if the letters are to have capitals or not) fixed. caps are according to the game itself so should be no problem.

Sara- a tad bit complex cuz of the 1/4, but understandable, maybe map something easier, I don't mind though
00:37:249 (1,2,3,4) - avoid this pattern for this diff (or map something easier) remapped.
01:12:163 (1) - add another timing panel 1/4 before for hitsound, and lower the normal hitsound volume (max soft volume =/= max normal volume) fixed.
02:09:059 (4) - up at tick or down+right a tick please~ looks hanging from the combo fixed.
hmm... map an easier diff just in case, I'm still worried about the 1/4 vocal and 2x kiai i'll discuss this with Ichigo-Sora. or i will make another easier diff myself. (but i don't know how to name it then XD)

You- good good~
though the whistles came out a bit strong (maybe lower volume more), and there were places where you could've added finish not so much finishes... soft finish is not good in my opinion..= =
02:14:361 - you do NOT have to have a 1/4 timing panel before for the end of a spinner (you can't exact hit the spinner later or early for hitsounds), and this just makes a loud spin sound at the end while playing, just don't increase the volume, remove this fixed.

Sora- I don't play CtB, so I only listened to hitsounds
01:15:137 (3) - add whistle to sound the same as stream before? sure.
Could use finish hitsounds >: uran will do that= =

Tsugumi- <3 hitsounds were wonderful~ climbb65588 is talented wwwwww
00:18:499 (4,5) - inconsistent spacing D: (5- right a tick~) fixed.
01:25:094 (1,2,3) - ^ (bring 3 closer by a tick? D:) fixed.
01:28:714 (1,2,3) - ^ (2,3 up at tick?) fixed.
01:29:362 (2,3) - ^ (3 down a tick) fixed.
01:48:370 (5) - complete suggestion- shorten this by 1/4 and add a note to 01:48:758 and keep or remove 01:49:016 (8)?(it sounds like it would match the combos before better) nice.
01:56:904 (2) - complete suggestion- remove this slider, and add note to 01:56:761, 01:57:033 and 01:57:163?
Lovely map~ just wanted to point out little things~ nice.

ooh spinners, I forgot I made the background and metre xD yay that's yours= = great spinners
~~ you may ask me for pubble when you think its ready (if not already ganna get pubbled/bubbled) still need some more mods. later. thanks~

Lokamp wrote:

Sara
01:02:464 (2) - move this beat on 01:02:594 , it will be more intuitive to click. fixed.
01:06:214 (spinner) - silence this spinner's end silenced this spinner = =
01:09:318 (4) - ... new combo? yes.
01:13:456 (1,2) - move these beats away from the next slider's path... it's fine now...
01:31:042 (3,4) - refine spacing... even if it's ok for the AIMod, these sliders are TOO near, according to the other sliders's gap. the spacing is from 3's end to 4's start so should be ok.

You
00:27:939 (5,6,7,8,9) - very confuse and hard to understand passage. Change spacing to some beats? use new combos to fix this problem.
00:19:663 (2,3) - fix spacing as AIMod suggested. no.

Tsugumi
[General] I suggest you a new combo check for this mode (and maybe an AIMod check...) ...a total new combo check and fixed many. but for a [Insane] i think people can read them is enough, AIMod doesn't fit. and i'll asked climbb65588 to check if there's still something wrong...
00:44:749 (1,3) - new combo on 3rd, remove previous new combo
00:47:077 (1,2) - new combo on 2nd, remove previous new combo
00:48:628 (1,5) - new combo on 5th, remove previous new combo

Sora (Ctb only)
Make this passage easier! By letting the slider run fromletf to right can make this map's start better! uran is doing that part = =

An average, good map for NatsumeRin & friends. Have your star!

Xero_HT wrote:

Nihao =),

[Overall]
Kiai Time should be the same on ALL diffs. fixed.
Combo colours should be the same on ALL diffs. (Sara still has grey.) fixed.
There's a grammar mistake in the video . It's called "Rettungsstation" not "Rettung Station" lol. not my fault~

[Sara]
00:28:456 (3,1) - Look at the screen. (Suggestion) nice.


Nothing else found!
+Star

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. The title of the map is wrong. I'm sure the title is "LeMU ~Harukanaru Lemuria Tairiku~". Use "~" instead of "-". fixed. my fault.
2. Consider compressing the video into smaller size? About 7 or 8 MB maybe if it's possible? [?] changed to a flv file, smaller now.

[Sara]
00:53:801 (2) - I really want this slider stop on the previous blue tick. no. since it's a normal= =
00:55:870 (2) - ^ no.
01:02:077 (1,2) - This part broke my combo. I prefer (2) put on the previous blue tick. Or change the (1) become a slider which stop on the blue tick then remove the (2). no. the reason is the same... i don't want there's a lot of 3/4 in a normal
01:04:146 (2) - I really want this slider stop on the previous blue tick. = =orz, you really love the 3/4s lol

[You]
00:47:982 (2) - You generally mapped the song based on the vocal. This slider will sounds off with the current length. Reduce it 1/4 tick. yes u r right.
00:53:154 (2) - It doesn't fit to the song. Move forward one 1/4 tick. it fits to the vocal= =

[Sora (CTB Only)]
Honestly, this diff doesn't look like CTB diff at all especially when on the play mode. There's nothing special. But it may be just my feeling. Don't mind this.

[Tsugumi]
00:18:111 (4,5,6,7) - Ugh. This part is overmapped. If you want to make me happy, please delete the (5). sure.
00:28:456 (6) - Replace this slider with a 5-1/4-notes stream like 00:35:956. good idea.
00:32:464 (4) - Make this closer to the end of slider (3). They look like 1/2 stream. fixed.
02:06:344 - I thought this part is the end of the diff. Put a break time here. a 2s break seems unmeaningful...

Star. If you want to pubble this, just contact me.

Anyway, do you own this Ever17 game? I want this game but I couldn't find it in any game store. It's an old game. i find it in Beijing's game store XD, and for downloading... i'm sorry, i only find a Chinese version...
It's hard to download the full version of this game..

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

To be honest, that video makes me sad T T, i can't make it better with this file size...

[Skin]
I think you need to set the preferred skin to Deep Sea it's not..?

[File]
EV_YU11A_1.png need to resize to 800x600, current bg (EV_YU11A_1) is 799x600 fixed.

[You]
01:28:973 (1) - Don't stack with 5 ....why?

Not bad
STAR

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- You need an easier difficulty (without x2) so people don't complain about the difficulty spread. 1.5 stars [Coco] added.
-- I got 2 .osb files when I downloaded, delete both and full submit. fixed.
-- I really wish you could have used a HQ video ;_; ...i transfered it from the video in the game.... so maybe it's the best i can do...

Sara:

00:39:318 (6) - New combo? fixed.
00:47:594 (6) - ^ fixed.
00:56:904 (1) - This slider is a bit confusing to read, it almost looks like 2 close together beats. I'd suggest not to follow the vocal for this small section and make the sliders longer. no. since there's an easier diff now so i won't change it here.
00:57:809 (4) - ^ Same thing. ^
01:05:180 (1) - ^ ^
01:08:283 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Sliders here maybe, the 1/4 might be pretty to catch for some people. good idea.
01:13:456 (1) - Remove new combo? Or maybe new combo 01:15:525 (2) - and 01:17:594 (2) - for consistency. fixed.
01:24:577 (1) - The end is covered so it might get a bit confusing for new players. Maybe reposition to the end if visible? no.
01:26:646 (5) - New combo? fixed.

That's all, the X2 is okay but there definitely needs to be an easier difficulty without it imo.

You:

Good. thanks

Sora (CTB only):

-- Rename this to "Sora (CTB)"
-- I presume this is okay, I don't play CTB.

Tsugumi:

-- Preview time is different to the others.

02:08:283 (1) - Maybe move this back to 02:06:214, the gap feels a little empty. Or put something else here? fixed.

Good job on the maps, I'd happily pubble this with an Easy so pubble request now= =
~ Star.

H-boy wrote:

过20sp了~不过..我当时看时还没有，所以我只提些建议了

Sara
00:28:456(3) - 用clap fixed.
00:28:973(1) - 用normal 的finish 并且降低40%的音量 fixed. 这个地方的确这么改感觉更好.
01:28:197(7) - remove finish no.

You
00:36:732(2) - finish fixed.
01:38:801(4) - clap 这个和下面两个一组的,从之前那个4拍开始就没加.
01:39:835(3) - ^
01:40:352(5) - ^

Sora(CTB only)
没玩过去

Tsugumi
01:40:352(5) - move one grid up 把1挪上了一格,现在应该是一条直线.

star~

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

The song is so beautiful, have you submitted it to be a ranked map? I would soo love that seeing as the difficulty could really make things interesting!

Lissette wrote:

Tsugumi
01:12:163 - put other green line to change volume half beat earlier cuz you are changing volume here, i leave this for kiai fixed.
01:53:542 - 02:01:818 - what a insignificant rise of volume :S lol. i think climbb is not mean to do that

You
01:53:801 - move this green line half beat earlier cuz you are changing volume here too fixed.

Coco
00:20:697 - move green line half beat earlier fixed.
00:37:249 - ^ fixed.
01:53:801 - ^ fixed.

Star!

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted
agh sorry for the long delay >.<, this maight be already modded by someone else

Coco
02:10:22 (T) - move the timing section to 02:10:35 (spinner end)instead? no.
Sara
01:03:62 (1) - whistle? nice.
01:04:14 (2) - whistle the WHOLE slider? nice.
01:05:56 (2,3) - add whistle to one of them add to (3)
01:06:21 (1) - eh? silence spinner end? why? because if i don't do so, i feel there should be more notes after that= =
02:10:35 (1) - silence the spinner end? fixed.
Tsugumi
wow awesome beat placing! love it! climbb will be very happy= =
01:48:37 (3) - make the slider diagonal parallel to 01:47:85 (2)? no.
You
01:10:35 (1) - 01:28:71 (5) like other diff, use normal hitsounds? no.
01:19:40 (3) - whistle? nice.
01:41:90 (1) - finish?

no.

Nice! STAR! thanks~

Garven wrote:

Ooo, Ever17.

[Coco]
00:12:939 Remove whistle on the return hit of slider. no. i made it there= =
00:18:628 (2) - This sounds better with a whistle only on the last hit of the slider to me, though the three hits is okay too. *shrug* better
01:05:697 (4) - Why not have this above the slider? good idea.
02:02:077 (1) - End this spinner at 02:05:697 and start the next slider at 02:06:214. no.
00:47:594 (3) - [nazi] Move the return anchor up one grid. i don't hate nazi= =
01:36:732 (1) - Maybe a finish at the end of this slider? no.

[Sara]
I'm not liking the double soft finishes like at 00:21:473 (2,1) and 00:24:318 (3,1). removed.
00:39:318 (1) - Move the end point left 2 and up one grid point, and the center point down one grid. fixed.
01:13:456 (2,3) - These notes actually fall on 1/3 beats. Set your beat snap divisor to 1/6 and move 2 and 3 back one notch. i don't think it's fine to use 1/3 beats in a Normal= =
01:15:525 (2,3) - ^
01:17:594 (2,3) - ^
01:26:646 (1) - I'm not sure if the sudden volume change here works too well. This is the only difficulty you use it in too. yay...it's ichigo-sora's diff, but i decided to reduce the volume
01:39:318 (1) - ^ deleted.
01:57:939 (2) - Add a whistle on the return point of the slider. good.
02:03:887 - Add another volume reduction point here so the one at 02:05:956 isn't so sudden. fixed.

[You]
Crap, I wonder if I can remember her name... Youbeseikarukana or something. (Also, I know, but no spoilers ) = =...well, i can't lol
00:28:714 (1) - This is pretty hard to see. it's ok to me= =...
01:08:283 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These are pretty big jumps for a hard. this is a hard+= =
02:02:594 (1) - Lower the volume on this spinner. fixed.
Instead of having a second spinner, maybe have a circle at 02:13:585 (1) to go with the singer saying "breathe"? The second circle on this diff didn't make a lot of sense to me, and none of the other difficulties go that far into the song. Hell, maybe even add it to the other three difficulties that go this far. add a slider.

[Tsugumi]
As a whole, this didn't feel that much harder than You. it's climbb65588's style= =...
01:15:008 (4) - Here's that 1/6 timing again, though with the rhythms that you're doing, maybe keep the starting point the same, but snap the end of the slider with the 1/6 ending at 01:15:439. no...
02:02:077 (1) - This spinner is too loud. Move the volume down two ticks. fixed.
02:06:214 (1) - This spinner is too quiet. Move the volume up two ticks. fixed.

Nice maps, though. Just wish that the Tsugumi difficulty was a little harder compared to You.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[General]
There's no "default-1.png" in the folder. orz i can't find it... so deleted all "default-blabla"
Delete .osb file i don't have it in my folder T T
If you're using parts of the default skin, why not just force the default skin from the Storyboarding tab. fixed.

[You]
00:47:982 (2) - Move this from under 1 so it's not hidden. fixed.

The health bar is sexy.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Remove "reversearrow.png" along with "score-0" through "score-9" as they are part of the default skin as well. Also "sliderscorepoint.png"
Once those are gone, I'll bubble.

abalee wrote:

Score-0.png ~ Score-9.png is still exist. :/

Selee wrote:

沙包表示开始滑杠太慢... =.= 而且you的大跳很有难度 T_T

尝试4mod刷EASY... >.<

很喜欢这歌