nano - Happy Ending Simulator [CatchTheBeat|OsuMania]‬ · forum‬

Hunter Howl

Joined July 2013

applied to what _ Hatsune Miku said. thanks
http://puu.sh/dBY6m/243dfc94f3.osu

Pharos21 wrote:
Wehh. Musicnya keren. tapi kalo ngga pake Video mending di edit bagian intronya, (00:00:000 sampe 00:41:698 Potong aja)

GL~

*Nembak pake peluru *

masalah musiknya ga apa-apa deh selama draining timenya diatas rekomentasi (yaitu 45 detik). std mapset punya Umi aja ga dipotong

Aste-

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Aste- 10 years ago

raianshimuzu wrote:
masalah musiknya ga apa-apa deh selama draining timenya diatas rekomentasi (yaitu 45 detik). std mapset punya Umi aja ga dipotong

Dia kan pake Video (T0T) ini kan kagak

GAMI

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Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

Pharos21 wrote:
raianshimuzu wrote:
masalah musiknya ga apa-apa deh selama draining timenya diatas rekomentasi (yaitu 45 detik). std mapset punya Umi aja ga dipotong
Dia kan pake Video (T0T) ini kan kagak

i'm lazy desu ~ :3

nanti gua added video kalo bisa buat map ctb `-`

Hunter Howl

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Hunter Howl 10 years ago

Pake punya si Umi aja videonya =w=

GAMI

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GAMI 10 years ago

raianshimuzu wrote:
Pake punya si Umi aja videonya =w=

bisa dl kan khusus videonya aja? kuota saya udah sekarat :C

Hunter Howl

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Hunter Howl 10 years ago

[quote=GAMI]bisa dl kan khusus videonya aja? kuota saya udah sekarat :C[/quote]
nope. harus download beserta beatmapnya :<

GAMI

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GAMI 10 years ago

everyone who download it, please re-download it again

puxtu

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puxtu 10 years ago

Pharos21 wrote:
[Puxtu's NM]00:43:046 (43046|1,43383|0) - Ctrl G?
00:45:742 (45742|2,46080|3) - ^ keep

00:50:967 (50967|0) - Move to 4
00:52:147 (52147|3,52147|1) - Delete salah satu delete nyawamu aja ya kidding
00:52:484 (52484|0) - Tambah Note not enough sound

00:52:653 (52653|3) - Move ke 3
00:52:821 (52821|2,52821|1) - ^ 1&2

01:19:619 (79619|1) - ^ 3
01:19:787 (79787|3) - ^ 2
01:19:956 (79956|2) - ^ 4

01:32:090 (92090|3) - ^ 2

01:40:517 (100517|3) - ^ 2 keep

thx for mods
not replied means..OK
update with self modding and fixed hitsounds: http://puu.sh/dCBQL/63c0f8afd7.rar
ps: gami pls pindahin yg MX ke creator's word. thank you

Last edited by puxtu 10 years ago, edited 2 times in total.

GAMI

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GAMI 10 years ago

puxtu wrote:
Pharos21 wrote:
[Puxtu's NM]00:43:046 (43046|1,43383|0) - Ctrl G?
00:45:742 (45742|2,46080|3) - ^ keep

00:50:967 (50967|0) - Move to 4
00:52:147 (52147|3,52147|1) - Delete salah satu delete nyawamu aja ya kidding
00:52:484 (52484|0) - Tambah Note not enough sound

00:52:653 (52653|3) - Move ke 3
00:52:821 (52821|2,52821|1) - ^ 1&2

01:19:619 (79619|1) - ^ 3
01:19:787 (79787|3) - ^ 2
01:19:956 (79956|2) - ^ 4

01:32:090 (92090|3) - ^ 2

01:40:517 (100517|3) - ^ 2 keep
thx for mods
not replied means..OK
update with self modding and fixed hitsounds: http://puu.sh/dCBQL/63c0f8afd7.rar
ps: gami pls pindahin yg MX ke creator's word. thank you

ok

puxtu

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puxtu 10 years ago

sorry ane ngga berbakat bikin mx wkwk

GAMI

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GAMI 10 years ago

ane ngga berbakat nge-map :3

puxtu

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puxtu 10 years ago

vienna pls :C

btw kok masih diff yg lama ya?
belum di update?

GAMI

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GAMI 10 years ago

emang iya haha...
mana jari telunjuk saya buat main ctb pada luka
tambah parah xD

puxtu

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puxtu 10 years ago

Lel gws Vienna

Btw kalo udh di update, lansung manggil usagi bwt modding ya

GAMI

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GAMI 10 years ago

usagi ? 0.0

nanti yee... _(:3」∠)_

Hunter Howl

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Hunter Howl 10 years ago

Sama mod ctb sekalian yak :v

GAMI

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GAMI 10 years ago

raianshimuzu wrote:
Sama mod ctb sekalian yak :v

iya, saya udah usahain kok

GAMI

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GAMI 10 years ago

raianshimuzu wrote:
Sama mod ctb sekalian yak :v
iya, saya udah usahain kok

double xl-kampret :V

Last edited by GAMI 10 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

GAMI

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GAMI 10 years ago

raianshimuzu wrote:
Sama mod ctb sekalian yak :v
iya, saya udah usahain kok

fck post

puxtu

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puxtu 10 years ago

hatrick 0.0

Hunter Howl

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Hunter Howl 10 years ago

2nd mod :3

semua yang gue sebutin hanyalah saran / sugesti. mungkin ada beberapa bagian yang harus diubah jadi tolong pertimbangkan kembali :3
all of this was just some suggestion. please reconsider before applying them

[puxtu's NM]
00:41:698 - kecilin dikit volumenya (antara 40-50%) and what's with dat Drum Custom hitsound? :/)
00:42:035 (42035|2) - rasanya kaku kalau ga tambahan hitsound. coba pake drum whistle
00:43:383 (43383|0) - ^
00:44:731 (44731|1) - ^
00:46:080 (46080|3) - ^
00:46:754 (46754|2) - ^
00:47:428 (47428|1) - ^
00:48:776 (48776|2) - ^
00:50:799 (50799|1) - Normal Clap
00:51:473 (51473|2) - ^

intinya, (sebagian besar) berasa kaku dikarenakan tidak adanya hitsound yang bervariasi :/

01:17:091 (77091|2) - jadiin LN kalau bisa
01:24:000 (84000|2) - ^
01:29:393 (89393|1) - ^
01:34:787 (94787|2) - ^

Patternnya udah bagus

[puxtu's HD]
00:41:698 - kok beda tipe penggunaan hitsoundnya? :/ yang NM lu pake drum. HD lu pake Soft. gue bingung gaya elu untuk penggunaan hitsound :v
00:42:035 (42035|3) - bakal gue sebutin untuk pake whistile lagi (entah soft ato drum)
00:41:698 - 00:50:377 - ^ (tebak aja sendiri yang mana dipakein whistle)
00:50:799 (50799|3,50799|2) - diganti dengan custom soft whistle
00:51:304 (51304|2,51304|3) - Soft Custom Whistle
00:51:473 (51473|1,51473|0) - Soft Custom Clap
00:51:641 (51641|2,51641|3) - Soft Custom Whistle (LN yang kepalanya)
01:22:483 (82483|2) - seharusnya taruh soft custom clap disini. bukan di 01:22:652 (82652|3,82652|1) - :/
01:24:000 (84000|0,84000|3) - ^ (01:23:831 (83831|1) - )
dst dibagian kiai

00:55:181 - asiknya tambah not satu deh di kolom 3
00:56:529 - ^ (2)
01:00:574 - ^ (3)
01:01:922 - ^ (2)
01:03:271 - Kecilin volumenya (40-50%)
01:17:428 (77428|1,77512|0) - sekedar saran, mending note di kolom 2 ditaroh di 01:17:512 - dan note di kolom 1 ditaroh di 01:17:428 -
01:17:765 (77765|1,77849|0,78102|1,78186|0) - ^ (lu kirain sendiri timingnya. huee)

ini diff mania emang asik dimainin. tapi karena salah tempat naruh hitsoundnya, gw sering miss :/

[Salad]
hanya 2 hal yang bakal gw sebutin untuk ini diff dikarenakan semua patternnya udah mulus. ahue (meskipun masih sering miss gara-gara lag lappy `-`)
01:32:258 - 02:01:584 - hitsoundnya mana? :/
02:01:921 (1) - ini spinner kayaknya berakhir di 02:03:101 - deh :3

[Frobe's Platter]
nice diff. so i'm gonna point out 2 things
first of all, i wonder why you love putting "Triplets" (like in std mode) at some part of the music? just wondering okay. i'm not forcing you to change it

01:02:765 (2,4) - try to make them line up in here. i feel like i'm playing light rain in this part. if you don't understand, simply Ctrl + G :/

[Rain]
01:02:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - dari sini, ane mau saranin ke ente untuk ubah posisinya :
(1) = x = 128
(3) = x = 256
(4) = x = 176
(5) = x = 144

njir. dibagian kiainya bikin gw fail. akwkakwakwa

[Raian's Overdoze]

Hello :3 /

kayaknya gitu aja. selanjutnya bakal dimod sama pemain lain / BAT :3

GAMI

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GAMI 10 years ago

raianshimuzu wrote:
2nd mod :3

semua yang gue sebutin hanyalah saran / sugesti. mungkin ada beberapa bagian yang harus diubah jadi tolong pertimbangkan kembali :3
all of this was just some suggestion. please reconsider before applying them

[puxtu's NM]
00:41:698 - kecilin dikit volumenya (antara 40-50%) and what's with dat Drum Custom hitsound? :/)
00:42:035 (42035|2) - rasanya kaku kalau ga tambahan hitsound. coba pake drum whistle
00:43:383 (43383|0) - ^
00:44:731 (44731|1) - ^
00:46:080 (46080|3) - ^
00:46:754 (46754|2) - ^
00:47:428 (47428|1) - ^
00:48:776 (48776|2) - ^
00:50:799 (50799|1) - Normal Clap
00:51:473 (51473|2) - ^

intinya, (sebagian besar) berasa kaku dikarenakan tidak adanya hitsound yang bervariasi :/

01:17:091 (77091|2) - jadiin LN kalau bisa
01:24:000 (84000|2) - ^
01:29:393 (89393|1) - ^
01:34:787 (94787|2) - ^

Patternnya udah bagus

[puxtu's HD]
00:41:698 - kok beda tipe penggunaan hitsoundnya? :/ yang NM lu pake drum. HD lu pake Soft. gue bingung gaya elu untuk penggunaan hitsound :v
00:42:035 (42035|3) - bakal gue sebutin untuk pake whistile lagi (entah soft ato drum)
00:41:698 - 00:50:377 - ^ (tebak aja sendiri yang mana dipakein whistle)
00:50:799 (50799|3,50799|2) - diganti dengan custom soft whistle
00:51:304 (51304|2,51304|3) - Soft Custom Whistle
00:51:473 (51473|1,51473|0) - Soft Custom Clap
00:51:641 (51641|2,51641|3) - Soft Custom Whistle (LN yang kepalanya)
01:22:483 (82483|2) - seharusnya taruh soft custom clap disini. bukan di 01:22:652 (82652|3,82652|1) - :/
01:24:000 (84000|0,84000|3) - ^ (01:23:831 (83831|1) - )
dst dibagian kiai

00:55:181 - asiknya tambah not satu deh di kolom 3
00:56:529 - ^ (2)
01:00:574 - ^ (3)
01:01:922 - ^ (2)
01:03:271 - Kecilin volumenya (40-50%)
01:17:428 (77428|1,77512|0) - sekedar saran, mending note di kolom 2 ditaroh di 01:17:512 - dan note di kolom 1 ditaroh di 01:17:428 -
01:17:765 (77765|1,77849|0,78102|1,78186|0) - ^ (lu kirain sendiri timingnya. huee)

ini diff mania emang asik dimainin. tapi karena salah tempat naruh hitsoundnya, gw sering miss :/

[Salad]
hanya 2 hal yang bakal gw sebutin untuk ini diff dikarenakan semua patternnya udah mulus. ahue (meskipun masih sering miss gara-gara lag lappy `-`)
01:32:258 - 02:01:584 - hitsoundnya mana? :/
02:01:921 (1) - ini spinner kayaknya berakhir di 02:03:101 - deh :3

[Frobe's Platter]
nice diff. so i'm gonna point out 2 things
first of all, i wonder why you love putting "Triplets" (like in std mode) at some part of the music? just wondering okay. i'm not forcing you to change it
01:02:765 (2,4) - try to make them line up in here. i feel like i'm playing light rain in this part. if you don't understand, simply Ctrl + G :/

[Rain]
01:02:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - dari sini, ane mau saranin ke ente untuk ubah posisinya :
(1) = x = 128
(3) = x = 256
(4) = x = 176
(5) = x = 144

njir. dibagian kiainya bikin gw fail. akwkakwakwa

[Raian's Overdoze]

Hello :3 /

kayaknya gitu aja. selanjutnya bakal dimod sama pemain lain / BAT :3

rain & salad has been change (lol sama sering mati dibagian kiai pertama jadi saya ubah posisinya)

I will update after all GD-ers sending their diff

puxtu

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puxtu 10 years ago

vienna pls
ini diff ane belum di update.. masih versi yg lama
update dulu yg baru, baru manggil modder yg lain ok?

raian: tahan dulu modnya, tunggu di update sama gami

GAMI

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Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

puxtu wrote:
vienna pls
ini diff ane belum di update.. masih versi yg lama
update dulu yg baru, baru manggil modder yg lain ok?

raian: tahan dulu modnya, tunggu di update sama gami

Please... -_- coba cek ulang

Hunter Howl

335 posts

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Hunter Howl 10 years ago

puxtu wrote:
vienna pls
ini diff ane belum di update.. masih versi yg lama
update dulu yg baru, baru manggil modder yg lain ok?

raian: tahan dulu modnya, tunggu di update sama gami

Yang lama?
Please. Perasaan gami selalu update diff mania ente, putu -_-

puxtu

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puxtu 10 years ago

puxtu wrote:
thx for mods
not replied means..OK
update with self modding and fixed hitsounds: http://puu.sh/dCBQL/63c0f8afd7.rar
ps: gami pls pindahin yg MX ke creator's word. thank you

yg ini belum di update

Frobe

Former osu!catch Champion: 2015

743 posts

Joined January 2011

Frobe 10 years ago

GAMI wrote:
raianshimuzu wrote:
[Frobe's Platter]
nice diff. so i'm gonna point out 2 things
first of all, i wonder why you love putting "Triplets" (like in std mode) at some part of the music? just wondering okay. i'm not forcing you to change it because i think it is fit the song :v
01:02:765 (2,4) - try to make them line up in here. i feel like i'm playing light rain in this part. if you don't understand, simply Ctrl + G :/ instead, reduced the distance

thank you ^^

code

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 81135
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Happy Ending Simulator
TitleUnicode:Happy Ending Simulator
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:ナノ
Creator:GAMI
Version:Frobe's Platter
Source:Gunslinger Stratos 2
Tags:ガンスリンガーストラトス２ square enix  WEST GROUND puxtu raianshimuzu frobe
BeatmapID:541717
BeatmapSetID:217949

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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GAMI

582 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

already update it
tell me if your new diff is not being updated ^^

(srly jengkel gua ama update osu yg terbaru lol)

ursa

1,302 posts

Joined April 2010

ursa 10 years ago

*Mods ;3

It's not my Intense mod , so feel free to ignore

General Problem
Berdasarkan check & Testplay sih , bagi gw diffspread rada kacau di Overdose - Rain diff , soalnya penggunaan beat jump cenderung banyak di Rain & Overdose lebih ngedominan slider jump

Raian's overdose
Note : most of your flows depends on slider , well it's good but some part would be a little weird if you using it too many

00:45:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - well i feels this part like a mirror(copy-paste) for fot the side one , so i suggest , how about changing the shape between 1 part of this one
00:47:259 (2) - Move this beat to right [x=312] because 00:47:091 (1,2,3,4) - feels like missing hyper
01:03:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - well generally you can improve this part by making some 1/2 beat jump + slider instead of using only long slider
01:15:405 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - your stream is catchable & fine , but the structure stream feels kinda not clean.
01:20:967 (1,2) - it looks not cool if you make this one stacked
01:28:888 (3,4,5,1) - this part feels like missing hyper
01:45:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - technically it still catchable , but the structure are pain to catch, i suggest you should readjust this part
01:47:090 (1,2) - Missing Hyper
01:59:225 (1,2) - Missing Hyper on 01:59:225 (1) - Slider end , to fix this one , just move 01:59:730 (2) - to x = 0

Rain
Note : Bagian awal sih udah lumayan , tapi menurut gwa , mending di nerf dikit bagian dikit , soalnya rada overjumped x-x

00:43:046 (1,2,3,4) - Jumpnya kayak ngulang seperti bagian awal = - = ,saran gwa sih coba bikin jump yang berbeda aja
00:48:439 (1,2,3,4) - same case seperti di atas , cuman berbeda dikit
01:00:237 (4,1) - posisi 01:00:574 (1) - mending di pendekin dikit ( x = 192 )
01:08:327 (2,3) - posisi slider 01:08:748 (3) - ini lumayan aneh = - =
01:14:563 (1,2,3,4,5) - posisi jumpnya rada jauh dikit , saran gwa ,coba di atur dulu posisinya
01:25:517 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - gap distance di bagian ini terlalu tinggi , mending di pendekin dikit
01:27:876 (3,1) - missing hyper , saran gwa mending 01:27:876 (3) - di buat hyper aja
01:49:449 (2,1,2) - posisi slider ini 01:49:786 (1) - rada sakit banget klo gak di buat hyper
01:50:123 (2,1,2) - ^ sama
02:00:573 (1,2,3) - beberapa jump di buat hyper aja, klo menurut gw

Platter
Note : A clean flow for platter , that's all i want to said
00:43:046 (1,2) - feels the jumps is like repeating like the previous part
01:53:831 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - it feels so repeating , please make some improvement to this part

Salad
Note : Pattern Salad sih menurut gwa masih banyak bagian yang bisa di improve , cman hal ini aja yang gwa rasa bisa gwa sarankan

00:46:417 (1,2,3) - coba geser slider ini ke kiri dikit biar bisa buat jump dengan pattern selanjutnya
00:50:462 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - bagian ini kayaknya coba di buat seperti ini biar bagus *Pic
00:53:495 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - bagian ini sebenarnya masih bisa di improve dengan di tingkatin distancenya (ato gak di map ke kiri juga bakal bagus kok)
01:13:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - masih bisa di improve buat jump pattern ini
01:32:258 (1,2,3) - ^ sama

well , secara umum masih banyak bagian yang gwa bisa point di salad ,tapi cma itu dulu.

goodluck , PM balik klo udah dapat mod

Hunter Howl

335 posts

Joined July 2013

Hunter Howl 10 years ago

ursa wrote:
*Mods ;3

It's not my Intense mod , so feel free to ignore

General Problem
Berdasarkan check & Testplay sih , bagi gw diffspread rada kacau di Overdose - Rain diff , soalnya penggunaan beat jump cenderung banyak di Rain & Overdose lebih ngedominan slider jump

Raian's overdose
Note : most of your flows depends on slider , well it's good but some part would be a little weird if you using it too many

00:45:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - well i feels this part like a mirror(copy-paste) for fot the side one , so i suggest , how about changing the shape between 1 part of this one sorry. Biar keliatan nggak kaku untuk bagian ini
00:47:259 (2) - Move this beat to right [x=312] because 00:47:091 (1,2,3,4) - feels like missing hyper Applied
01:03:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - well generally you can improve this part by making some 1/2 beat jump + slider instead of using only long slider Masalahnya gua mau ngikutin vocalnya. jadi hanya sebagian yang gue ubah
01:15:405 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - your stream is catchable & fine , but the structure stream feels kinda not clean. done
01:20:967 (1,2) - it looks not cool if you make this one stacked Udah dipindahin (1) ke kanan :3
01:28:888 (3,4,5,1) - this part feels like missing hyper Applied on (4)
01:45:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - technically it still catchable , but the structure are pain to catch, i suggest you should readjust this part dah tuh
01:47:090 (1,2) - Missing Hyper Ekor kedua slider berasa off screen @_@
01:59:225 (1,2) - Missing Hyper on 01:59:225 (1) - Slider end , to fix this one , just move 01:59:730 (2) - to x = 0 Berasa offscreen juga :3

Makasih yah, Om/Tante /me run away
GAMI, INI Updatenya http://puu.sh/dKPb2/f07e35cc19.osu

Frobe

Former osu!catch Champion: 2015

743 posts

Joined January 2011

Frobe 10 years ago

ursa wrote:
Platter
Note : A clean flow for platter , that's all i want to said
00:43:046 (1,2) - feels the jumps is like repeating like the previous part
01:53:831 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - it feels so repeating , please make some improvement to this partd

well... i don't think that is have a problem. sorry

GAMI

582 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

update done

and thanks ursa for the mods !

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Vhy 10 years ago

as requested on queue

[General]
- you can disable "widescreen support" on all diff since you don't have any SB on it
- unnecessary hitsound files "soft-sliderslide" and "soft-sliderslide2" because in sliderslide in CtB are always unaudible. but im not sure about mania
- your BG resolution must be either 1024x768 or 1366x768 in order to get it rankable. the current are 1228x767 so you need to resize it
- only 2 combo colours? actually im not against this but it's better to add more colour as variety stuff to get the map more interesting. also these 2 combo is way to similar
- im not sure with the red timing point at 01:20:124. i know this is used to reset the metronome but i think it's wrongly placed and cause the main beat is off on timeline because it should be on big white tick instead. considering move that red timing to 01:19:956 to correct the stanza?. if you agree with this then don't forget to add another red timing at 01:43:045 to reset the stanza. remember this is just a suggestion to make the timeline easier to deal with, applying this won't affect any on the gameplay

[Salad]

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00:50:546
00:51:136
00:57:877
01:09:591 - ~
01:09:675 - ^
01:09:928 - ^
01:10:012 - ^
01:10:265 - ^
01:10:349 - dunno if those 5% volume is intended. else just remove these
01:11:360
01:20:124 - it already has the red timing

00:46:754 (3,1) - the amount of spacing here is way too much. it's almost like the spacing is doubled from the previous note which is really surprising. considering reduce the spacing here and make it similar like 00:46:585 (2,3)
00:47:596 (4) - i would like to see this placed in the left of (3)
00:50:799 (5,1) - the spacing here should be higher than the previous pattern since the tone of the vocal here goes high. sort of like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2447315
00:52:821 (2,3,4) - make the spacing of these notes similar to balance the movement
00:53:832 (1) - maybe rotate it by 60 degrees anti-clockwise and move it around x:296 to have a better flow
00:55:518 (1) - just what is this slider? having that curve shape is fine but followed by two reverse could be annoying in gameplay. player will miss the droplet easily here. it's better to divide this to a two 1/1 slider and make a proper pattern
00:56:866 (1) - here as well
01:13:383 (1,2,3,4) - this part is really lack of movement if you compare it to 01:11:360 (1,2,3,4). since the background is similar, it should be at least have some consistency in distance matter
01:23:663 (2,3,4,5,1) - lack of movement. peoples are always expect to get more movement in kiai
01:39:674 (3,4,1) - ^

this diff still needs some works. both pattern and spacing are really inconsistent in some part. there are too much constant of 1/2 beat usage in pattern. also the overall hitsound can much better than this

[Frobe's Platter]
00:50:293 (2,3,4,5) - don't you feel weird when play this part? nice pattern there but the spacing between (3,4) is way too little. make its spacing similar to the next note to highlight the drum sound better
00:55:012 - imo it feels doesn't right to ignore this vocal. maybe add a beat here?
00:55:433 (3) - this can be removed because it's follow nothing. adding triplet here sounds unfitting with the tone of vocal on the music
00:59:057 (6,7) - regular triplet pattern? like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2447625
01:04:029 (2) - kind of overmap. not even fit to this calm part. considering change it to a single circle instead at 01:04:113
01:08:579 (5) - same here. just remove
01:09:563 (2) - orz why using 1/3 beat here? there's nothing in the music has this 1/3 beat. please move it to 01:09:506
01:09:900 (4) - same as above
01:19:956 - unused greenline. you can remove this

rest look acceptable

[Rain]

unused greenline

00:50:562
00:51:136
00:57:877
01:07:315
01:11:360
01:20:124

00:41:698 (1,2) - a HDash in this early part? it's better not to. let's just give the player an easy pattern to introduce with
00:50:630 (2,3) - swap their position and move (3) more to the left until a HDash spawn to make a flow
00:52:653 (2,3,4) - im not sure about this 2 HDashes at this part. i prefer to get rid one of these Hdash to simplify the pattern it self since you are constantly using 1/2 slider
00:53:832 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - lack of movement. please add some
01:03:102 (5,6) - stacking this as end of the stream doesn't go well. please add spacing here more more and more than the stream if needed. a HDash is also possible to add
01:17:933 (2) - why is this ends at blue tick?
01:34:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - this is just weird. why all these triplet doing there? the song didn't call for it so it's better to make a normal 1/2 slider or circle instead. this way will make that chain HDash to be more enjoyable

shut... all of your remain pattern were just has the same issue imo. please pay more attention on your pattern ans spacing. dunno why but i feels most of your pattern especially those constant 1/2 sliders pattern were randomly placed and flipped away, or maybe it is just me.

[Raian's Overdoze]
all fine for me. im just expecting the kiais could be more harder and interesting. that's all

not really bad overall. but watch out the spread between rain and overdose because i found the rain is a bit harder and the overdose is a bit easier
okay good luck with the map

Hunter Howl

335 posts

Joined July 2013

Hunter Howl 10 years ago

Vhy wrote:
[Raian's Overdoze]
all fine for me. im just expecting the kiais could be more harder and interesting. that's all

not really bad overall. but watch out the spread between rain and overdose because i found the rain is a bit harder and the overdose is a bit easier
okay good luck with the map

huee. makasih yah _(:3 _|Z)_
nah, untuk dibagian kiainya, sorry. i don't wanna change that part cause at it seems already fits with the music rhythm. so it doesn't need to be harder than the rest of the part, avoiding "overmap" or such.

GAMI, akan kuserahkan kau untuk mengubah Red Lines (kalau kamu memutuskan untuk mengubahnya)

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Vhy 10 years ago

raianshimuzu wrote:
Vhy wrote:
[Raian's Overdoze]
all fine for me. im just expecting the kiais could be more harder and interesting. that's all

not really bad overall. but watch out the spread between rain and overdose because i found the rain is a bit harder and the overdose is a bit easier
okay good luck with the map
huee. makasih yah _(:3 _|Z)_
nah, untuk dibagian kiainya, sorry. i don't wanna change that part cause at it seems already fits with the music rhythm. so it doesn't need to be harder than the rest of the part, avoiding "overmap" or such.

GAMI, akan kuserahkan kau untuk mengubah Red Lines (kalau kamu memutuskan untuk mengubahnya)

lol bukaaaaaaaaannn...
ritme mu oke2 aja cuman pattern nya itu loh kalo bisa dibikin lebih menantang ato jumpy2 gitu. ngga maksa sih cuma berharap aja orz

Hunter Howl

335 posts

Joined July 2013

Hunter Howl 10 years ago

now that you've mentioned it, gw juga baru sadar masih kurang akan Jump HDashnya `-` thanks for the warning
GAMI, Update http://puu.sh/e8adR.osu

GAMI

582 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

nanti saya update setelah screen monitor saya kembali normal ;w;
and untuk Timing Points saya ngikutin map Umi ✰✰✰ jadi saya ngga akan ganti =w=

kalo yang batang ijo (yg ngga diperluin) nanti saya hapus :3

thanks for mods Vhy ^^

GAMI

582 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

double post

raianshimuzu wrote:
now that you've mentioned it, gw juga baru sadar masih kurang akan Jump HDashnya `-` thanks for the warning
GAMI, Update http://puu.sh/e8adR.osu

btw raian bisa crop-in wallpapernya ngga? kek yang moe Vhy bilang.. monitor gua break jadi ngga bisa ngelakuin apa2

please... :3

puxtu

2,926 posts

Joined August 2013

puxtu 10 years ago

usagi kok ngga dateng dateng ya >.>

Hunter Howl

335 posts

Joined July 2013

Hunter Howl 10 years ago

GAMI wrote:
double post

raianshimuzu wrote:
now that you've mentioned it, gw juga baru sadar masih kurang akan Jump HDashnya `-` thanks for the warning
GAMI, Update http://puu.sh/e8adR.osu
btw raian bisa crop-in wallpapernya ngga? kek yang moe Vhy bilang.. monitor gua break jadi ngga bisa ngelakuin apa2

please... :3

Bentar yak. Lappy gw dipake adek

Edit : Backgrund Standar Ranking Criteria

[AyanoTatemaya]

1,090 posts

Joined June 2013

[AyanoTatemaya] 10 years ago

yo pux. here's my mod as requested~

Col: 1|2|3|4

[NM]
00:52:653 (52653|2,52821|1) - ctrl+h. complements with 00:53:495 (53495|0,53495|1,54169|3,54169|1,54844|2,54844|3) pattern (open-close-open)
01:01:248 (61248|0,61585|1) - move to 2 and 4, respectively
01:11:360 (71360|1,72035|0) - ctrl+j
01:13:383 (73383|2) - move to 2
01:22:989 (82989|1,83157|0) - move to 1 and 2, respectively. maintains the momentum from 01:22:483 and also mirrors 01:27:876 (87876|2,88045|1,88382|3,88550|2)
01:30:067 (90067|3) - move to 3, move 01:30:573 (90573|2) to 4, and move 01:30:741 (90741|1) to 1. you're not really following the drums at this part, so there's no need to make them a trill.
01:31:079 - http://puu.sh/ehXhP/f2dab27c6c.jpg for playability and appropriateness for the said part of the song. also, removed the note on 01:31:753
02:02:932 (122932|1,123101|2) - why not make these into a hammer at 1 and 4? good for ending the song.

[HD]
01:12:540 (72540|0) - move to 3, move 01:12:709 (72709|1,72877|2) 1 space to the left
01:15:405 to 01:19:956 - i just came

01:24:843 (84843|0) - (optional) move to 2
01:56:275 (116275|2) - move to 4, then move 01:56:444 (116444|3) to 3, for variation. also a great follow up for 01:56:697 (116697|2,116865|2)
01:59:140 (119140|3,119225|2) - ctrl+j. i personally love this one.

good luck

puxtu

2,926 posts

Joined August 2013

puxtu 10 years ago

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:
yo pux. here's my mod as requested~

Col: 1|2|3|4

[NM]
00:52:653 (52653|2,52821|1) - ctrl+h. complements with 00:53:495 (53495|0,53495|1,54169|3,54169|1,54844|2,54844|3) pattern (open-close-open) woah good notice senpai
01:01:248 (61248|0,61585|1) - move to 2 and 4, respectively
01:11:360 (71360|1,72035|0) - ctrl+j
01:13:383 (73383|2) - move to 2
01:22:989 (82989|1,83157|0) - move to 1 and 2, respectively. maintains the momentum from 01:22:483 and also mirrors 01:27:876 (87876|2,88045|1,88382|3,88550|2)
01:30:067 (90067|3) - move to 3, move 01:30:573 (90573|2) to 4, and move 01:30:741 (90741|1) to 1. you're not really following the drums at this part, so there's no need to make them a trill.
01:31:079 - http://puu.sh/ehXhP/f2dab27c6c.jpg for playability and appropriateness for the said part of the song. also, removed the note on 01:31:753
02:02:932 (122932|1,123101|2) - why not make these into a hammer at 1 and 4? good for ending the song.

[HD]
01:12:540 (72540|0) - move to 3, move 01:12:709 (72709|1,72877|2) 1 space to the left
01:15:405 to 01:19:956 - i just came woah O_O
01:24:843 (84843|0) - (optional) move to 2 keep
01:56:275 (116275|2) - move to 4, then move 01:56:444 (116444|3) to 3, for variation. also a great follow up for 01:56:697 (116697|2,116865|2)
01:59:140 (119140|3,119225|2) - ctrl+j. i personally love this one. why would I ctrl+j, if you love it? lol

good luck

not replied means ok
thanks for mods senpai
update

GAMI

582 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

i'll update it next week :3

Hunter Howl

335 posts

Joined July 2013

Hunter Howl 10 years ago

Yay. You're back
Just a heads up. Diff update ane sama Resized BG standar ranking criteria ada di post sebelumnya

GAMI

582 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

udah diupdate tinggal frobe belum nge-fix diffnya

Hunter Howl

335 posts

Joined July 2013

Hunter Howl 10 years ago

GAMI wrote:
udah diupdate tinggal frobe belum nge-fix diffnya

gw udah kasih tau ke Frobe. jadinya tinggal menunggu untuk dia kirim update

GAMI

582 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

raianshimuzu wrote:
GAMI wrote:
udah diupdate tinggal frobe belum nge-fix diffnya
gw udah kasih tau ke Frobe. jadinya tinggal menunggu untuk dia kirim update

okok

Frobe

Former osu!catch Champion: 2015

743 posts

Joined January 2011

Frobe 10 years ago

Vhy wrote:
[Frobe's Platter]
00:50:293 (2,3,4,5) - don't you feel weird when play this part? nice pattern there but the spacing between (3,4) is way too little. make its spacing similar to the next note to highlight the drum sound better
00:55:012 - imo it feels doesn't right to ignore this vocal. maybe add a beat here? i need more opinions about this.
00:55:433 (3) - this can be removed because it's follow nothing. adding triplet here sounds unfitting with the tone of vocal on the music
00:59:057 (6,7) - regular triplet pattern? like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2447625 well... i like this now :>
01:04:029 (2) - kind of overmap. not even fit to this calm part. considering change it to a single circle instead at 01:04:113
01:08:579 (5) - same here. just remove
01:09:563 (2) - orz why using 1/3 beat here? there's nothing in the music has this 1/3 beat. please move it to 01:09:506 i think this is the alright about 1/3 beat.
01:09:900 (4) - same as above ^
01:19:956 - unused greenline. you can remove this

rest look acceptable

not mentioned is all fixed. thank you! and sorry for the late reply.

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i can't now login the often osu.

i'm sorry for the late.

GAMI

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Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

Frobe wrote:

Vhy wrote:
[Frobe's Platter]
00:50:293 (2,3,4,5) - don't you feel weird when play this part? nice pattern there but the spacing between (3,4) is way too little. make its spacing similar to the next note to highlight the drum sound better
00:55:012 - imo it feels doesn't right to ignore this vocal. maybe add a beat here? i need more opinions about this.
00:55:433 (3) - this can be removed because it's follow nothing. adding triplet here sounds unfitting with the tone of vocal on the music
00:59:057 (6,7) - regular triplet pattern? like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2447625 well... i like this now :>
01:04:029 (2) - kind of overmap. not even fit to this calm part. considering change it to a single circle instead at 01:04:113
01:08:579 (5) - same here. just remove
01:09:563 (2) - orz why using 1/3 beat here? there's nothing in the music has this 1/3 beat. please move it to 01:09:506 i think this is the alright about 1/3 beat.
01:09:900 (4) - same as above ^
01:19:956 - unused greenline. you can remove this

rest look acceptable

not mentioned is all fixed. thank you! and sorry for the late reply.

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336,316,79956,6,0,P|420:340|448:156,1,320,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,316,81135,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,316,81303,6,0,L|124:168,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,316,81809,2,0,L|220:168,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,136,82315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,82483,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,136,82652,2,0,P|416:160|420:256,1,160
260,136,83157,2,0,P|184:160|180:256,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,83663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,231,83831,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,304,84000,6,0,P|476:224|464:136,1,160
436,144,84421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,144,84506,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,148,84674,2,0,L|328:96,1,80
156,148,85011,2,0,L|76:96,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,148,85348,6,0,P|296:208|240:300,1,160
180,284,85854,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,280,86022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
99,280,86191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,284,86359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
99,280,86528,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,336,86697,6,0,L|240:196,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,224,87202,2,0,L|196:84,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,96,87708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,87876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,96,88045,6,0,P|456:120|448:244,1,160
284,92,88550,2,0,P|232:116|240:240,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,212,89056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,212,89225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,296,89393,6,0,P|416:236|392:132,1,160
256,68,89899,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,144,90067,2,0,P|94:221|120:296,1,160
256,348,90573,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,296,90741,6,0,P|416:236|392:132,1,160
252,128,91247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,128,91416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,112,91584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,91753,2,0,L|344:72,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,76,91921,2,0,L|428:36,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,40,92090,6,0,L|412:196,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,188,92595,2,0,L|324:344,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,336,93101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,331,93270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,332,93438,6,0,P|20:288|44:200,1,160
220,336,93944,2,0,P|276:292|252:204,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,212,94449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,212,94618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,212,94786,6,0,P|176:168|200:80,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,88,95292,2,0,L|328:8,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,88,95629,2,0,L|184:8,1,80
356,88,95966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
329,12,96135,6,0,P|388:64|352:152,1,160
183,12,96640,2,0,P|124:64|160:152,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,192,97146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,192,97315,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,192,97483,6,0,L|468:360,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,192,97989,2,0,L|232:360,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,348,98494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,344,98663,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,348,98831,6,0,P|8:292|32:196,1,160
112,196,99337,1,8,0:0:0:0:
31,196,99506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,344,99674,2,0,P|277:267|252:192,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,132,100180,6,0,P|192:152|248:100,1,160
404,132,100685,2,0,P|320:152|264:100,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,132,101191,2,0,L|140:212,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,132,101528,6,0,L|332:312,1,160
160,220,102034,2,0,L|192:300,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,220,102371,2,0,L|320:300,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,220,102708,2,0,L|192:272,1,40
260,260,102876,2,0,L|240:312,1,40
180,344,103045,6,0,P|152:296|180:200,1,160,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,200,103550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,184,103719,2,0,P|208:176|260:112,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,348,104393,6,0,P|436:304|416:188,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,104899,1,8,0:0:0:0:
98,205,105067,2,0,P|86:283|39:348,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,344,105741,6,0,P|360:296|332:200,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,200,106247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,184,106416,2,0,P|304:176|252:112,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,348,107090,6,0,P|76:304|96:188,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,107595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
413,205,107764,2,8,P|425:283|472:348,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,344,108438,6,0,P|100:304|104:208,1,160,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,108944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
95,221,109112,2,0,P|97:299|160:344,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,272,109786,6,0,P|352:280|300:224,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,200,110292,2,0,L|412:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,124,110798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,344,111135,6,0,P|412:304|408:208,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,111640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
417,221,111809,2,0,P|415:299|352:344,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,272,112483,6,0,P|160:280|212:224,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,112989,2,0,L|100:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,124,113494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,272,113831,6,0,B|120:200|120:200|160:268,1,160,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,272,114337,2,0,B|392:200|392:200|352:268,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,272,114843,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,320,115180,6,0,P|344:252|280:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,320,115685,2,0,P|168:252|232:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,116191,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,272,116528,6,0,B|392:200|392:200|352:268,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,272,117034,2,0,B|120:200|120:200|160:268,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,272,117539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,320,117876,6,0,P|168:252|232:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,320,118382,2,0,P|344:252|280:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,320,118888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,308,119225,6,0,L|296:264,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,308,119730,2,0,P|280:267|312:180,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,120236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,308,120573,6,0,L|216:264,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,308,121079,2,0,P|232:267|200:180,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,200,121584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,308,121921,6,0,L|272:256,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,122427,2,0,L|240:256,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,268,122932,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,264,123101,1,12,0:0:0:0:

i can't now login the often osu.

i'm sorry for the late.

it's okay :3 btw update done ( I just update my rain too ) ! ready for next mod or should I call BAT ? 0.0

puxtu

2,926 posts

Joined August 2013

puxtu 10 years ago

prprs! 0.0

GAMI

582 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

puxtu wrote:
prprs! 0.0

???

Hunter Howl

335 posts

Joined July 2013

Hunter Howl 10 years ago

menurut gw kayaknya masih belum siap buat diranked. tapi ga ada salahnya untuk manggil BAT untuk mod lebih lanjut

gue saranin, Xinely, CLSW, Spectator, & Kurokami :3

RuberusuScarlet

1,476 posts

Joined April 2013

RuberusuScarlet 10 years ago

hi ~

mod request from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

mod

[General]

[NM]

01:31:247 (91247|0) - move to 2

01:32:090 (92090|0) - end to 01:33:101 -

02:03:101 (123101|0) - hitsound change finish → whistle

[HD]

01:15:068 (75068|1) - move to 1
01:15:237 (75237|3) - ^2
01:15:405 - add (hitsound clap)
01:15:405 (75405|0) - hitsound change Clap → whistle

02:03:101 (123101|2) - hitsound change finish → whistle

good luck >w</

puxtu

2,926 posts

Joined August 2013

puxtu 10 years ago

RuberusuScarlet wrote:
[NM]
http://puu.sh/eWTVX/aa272830eb.png fixed

01:31:247 (91247|0) - move to 2

01:32:090 (92090|0) - end to 01:33:101 -

02:03:101 (123101|0) - hitsound change finish → whistle cymbal sound

[HD]
http://puu.sh/eWTzD/ee0e356ab3.png fixed
01:15:068 (75068|1) - move to 1
01:15:237 (75237|3) - ^2
01:15:405 - add (hitsound clap)
01:15:405 (75405|0) - hitsound change Clap → whistle snare sound
02:03:101 (123101|2) - hitsound change finish → whistle cymbal sound

thx for mods
http://puu.sh/eXar7/2eeccf40db.rar
vienna tolong perbaiki metadatanya

GAMI

582 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

puxtu wrote:
RuberusuScarlet wrote:
[NM]
http://puu.sh/eWTVX/aa272830eb.png fixed

01:31:247 (91247|0) - move to 2

01:32:090 (92090|0) - end to 01:33:101 -

02:03:101 (123101|0) - hitsound change finish → whistle cymbal sound

[HD]
http://puu.sh/eWTzD/ee0e356ab3.png fixed
01:15:068 (75068|1) - move to 1
01:15:237 (75237|3) - ^2
01:15:405 - add (hitsound clap)
01:15:405 (75405|0) - hitsound change Clap → whistle snare sound
02:03:101 (123101|2) - hitsound change finish → whistle cymbal sound
thx for mods
http://puu.sh/eXar7/2eeccf40db.rar
vienna tolong perbaiki metadatanya

ane update ntr

raianshimuzu wrote:
menurut gw kayaknya masih belum siap buat diranked. tapi ga ada salahnya untuk manggil BAT untuk mod lebih lanjut

gue saranin, Xinely, CLSW, Spectator, & Kurokami :3

kalo untuk ctb emang belum siap, saya mau cari bat mania dlu

n untuk bat ctb udah ada spec yg check ini map =3=

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,053 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 10 years ago

MOD INFO

Plain text - Suggested
Bolded text - Highly suggested
Red bolded text - Unrankable issue (must fix)

[General]

Check metadata (artist) on puxtu's MX diff. It conflicts.
Hitsounds on the Kiai Time are a bit low. Increase volume to 80%

[

Salad]

Lower CS to 3.5, this is to create a better spread (3.5-4-4-4.5)
00:45:742 (1,2,3,1) - These jumps are a bit hard and the song is just starting. I'd put them closer, at a distance of about x1,90-x1,95, like this. The jump that may have a larger distance is 00:46:755 (1,2) -
00:46:755 (1,2) - Remove NC on (1) and add on (2), the meter is 4/4 so it's absurd to have a NC on the 3rd slider and not the 4th.
00:50:462 (5) - Move to x:136 to reduce the jump, it's currently too large
01:00:911 (5,2) - I'd add a bit more distance between these and their previous notes
01:11:360 (1,2,3) - Move (2) to x:236, so it is actually in the middle of them.
01:21:135 (1) - There's a vocal at 01:21:303 -, so I think it's better replacing this with a circle + slider, a repeat slider or something else that follows it.
Add a note on 01:26:528 -, 01:29:225 - ^ and 01:30:573 -
01:35:798 (3,4) - Why don't you replace them with a 1/2 repeat slider? It wil follow vocals better
01:37:315 - A note should be here
01:56:528 (1,2) - Reduce distance a bit
01:57:876 (1,2) - ^Same
01:59:562 (2) - Avoid stacking
02:00:910 (4) - ^Same

[

Frobe's Platter]

00:52:990 (2) - Reduce distance by moving it to x:328
01:09:506 (2) - I think it's better if you place it on the red tick. Right now it's following a very picky sound.
01:09:844 (4) - ^Same
01:17:428 (1) - Move this a bit to the left, x:392 seems fine.
01:36:135 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+H to prevent stack with previous note. Also, it creates a nice jump on 01:37:146 (3,4,1) -
01:56:528 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ctrl+H on this to prevent stack
02:01:921 (1,2,3,4) - ^Same

[

Rain]

00:41:698 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce the distance to x2,50 for this one, to serve as an introduction
00:45:742 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think it's better to Ctrl+H this section. Since the previous pattern (00:44:394 (1,2,3,4) - ) was left side biased, I think most players will expect notes to come up to the right.
01:03:271 (1) - It's better if this one is right-side oriented, like this:
SPOILER
01:12:877 (4) - Move to x:64 for a nicer jump
01:14:900 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:240 and (4) to x:352 to reduce distance a bit, voice is a bit calmer on this part.
01:15:405 (1) - Ctrl+H to create a hyperdash and a nice jump on 01:15:405 (1,2,3) -
01:16:585 (4) - Move to x:48
From 01:21:135 - to 01:40:854 - is just a 1/2 spam, without any breaks except from 01:31:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - . You should really add some variety on this, it doesn't feel like following the music at all.
01:24:506 (3) - Move to x:40
01:25:180 (3) - Move to x:472
01:27:202 (6,1,2) - Reduce distance, it's too jumpy to fit
01:36:303 (1,2) - Reduce distance
01:36:977 (1,2) - ^Same
01:43:045 (1) - Ctrl+G for a nicer jump
01:45:741 (1) - It would hurt to move this a bit to the left to make it easier to catch.
01:50:798 (3,1) - This jump must be memorized, that's completely annoying. Reduce distance, please
01:56:191 (1,2) - This is too hard after the hyperdash. 01:53:494 (3,4) - was way better, repeat something like that.
01:59:225 (3) - This is a no. Make it more vertical so it isn't that hard to catch. Like this, at least:
SPOILER
02:00:573 (1) - ^Same

[

Raian's Overdoze]

The correct name for the diff is Raian's Overdose.
00:43:046 (1,2,3,4) - The idea is nice, but with hyperdashes so large it feels a bit exaggerated. I think x:122 for (3) and x:400 for (4) is better.
01:08:327 (4) - If you're following vocals, this should end on the red tick. You can then add a circle to keep following the guitar, but personally I don't like it.
01:16:670 (4,1) - This jump is a no for me, a x7,39 1/4 hyperdash? That's crazy. I'd prefer something like this:
SPOILER

I'm unsure about some other patterns, but I think other modders can also check them.

puxtu

2,926 posts

Joined August 2013

puxtu 10 years ago

ZiRoX wrote:
[General]
Check metadata (artist) on puxtu's MX diff. It conflicts.

there's no my MX

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,053 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 10 years ago

puxtu wrote:
ZiRoX wrote:
[General]
Check metadata (artist) on puxtu's MX diff. It conflicts.
there's no my MX

Woops, my fault. I have one deleted MX then.

Hunter Howl

335 posts

Joined July 2013

Hunter Howl 10 years ago

ZiRoX wrote:
[ Raian's Overdoze]
The correct name for the diff is Raian's Overdose. i think using "z" doesn't matter for the map as long as it represent the highest diff in ctb maps. i also sees some map using "z"
00:43:046 (1,2,3,4) - The idea is nice, but with hyperdashes so large it feels a bit exaggerated. I think x:122 for (3) and x:400 for (4) is better. That might too close. so i just reduce the distance of (3) & (4)
01:08:327 (4) - If you're following vocals, this should end on the red tick. You can then add a circle to keep following the guitar, but personally I don't like it. Keeping it as it is
01:16:670 (4,1) - This jump is a no for me, a x7,39 1/4 hyperdash? That's crazy. I'd prefer something like this:
SPOILER
i might need to consider about this jump if anyone mentions this part again.

I'm unsure about some other patterns, but I think other modders can also check them.

i was expecting something more than this but okay. thanks anyway

GAMI, Update http://puu.sh/f2tD1.osu

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,053 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 10 years ago

raianshimuzu wrote:
ZiRoX wrote:
[ Raian's Overdoze]
The correct name for the diff is Raian's Overdose. i think using "z" doesn't matter for the map as long as it represent the highest diff in ctb maps. i also sees some map using "z"
00:43:046 (1,2,3,4) - The idea is nice, but with hyperdashes so large it feels a bit exaggerated. I think x:122 for (3) and x:400 for (4) is better. That might too close. so i just reduce the distance of (3) & (4)
01:08:327 (4) - If you're following vocals, this should end on the red tick. You can then add a circle to keep following the guitar, but personally I don't like it. Keeping it as it is
01:16:670 (4,1) - This jump is a no for me, a x7,39 1/4 hyperdash? That's crazy. I'd prefer something like this:
SPOILER
i might need to consider about this jump if anyone mentions this part again.

I'm unsure about some other patterns, but I think other modders can also check them.
i was expecting something more than this but okay. thanks anyway

GAMI, Update http://puu.sh/f2tD1.osu

Welp, I had found your diff pretty decent overall, except for a few parts. But if you want it, it's time to be picky :^)

[

Raian's Overdoze]

I will insist that you should rename it to Raian's Overdose. Two reasons: 1) If I search 'Overdose' I will miss your difficulty because of that childish caprice; 2) The only person that really uses 'OverdoZe' as a diffname is ursa, other diffs you've seen around is just a bunch of newer indonesian mappers trying to copy that. And ursa has a backstory for using that name.
00:47:428 (3,4) - A hyperdash might fit nicely here
00:50:799 (3,4,5,6) - If you want a more jumpy pattern that will emphasize the vocals, you can Ctrl+G (4) and move (5) right of its tail (maybe x:440 or around)
00:52:821 (3,4,5) - These distances are awkward to play, because even though they're both 1/2s, (4) is x0,60 apart from (3) while (5) is x2,00 apart from (4). It will flow better if you put 00:53:327 (4) - on x:328 so it's in the middle of the path.
00:56:866 (6) - Rotate it 60° on clockwise direction about playfield centre (it should end like this). It will be consistent with 00:56:866 (6) - and plays better (and funnier)
00:58:551 (4) - Make this one have a bit more distance from previous note
01:00:911 (4) - I think it's better if you make this one have more movement, either by making it more open to the left (like this) or by having the same movement as 00:56:866 (6) -
01:03:271 (1) - You can move this to x:488 to have a kick hyperdash
01:07:653 (2,3) - You can Ctrl+G (2) and move (3) a bit to the left to add more movement.
01:07:990 (3,4) - I still think these 3/4 sliders don't fit very well. Indeed, if they did, you would have used them for the other parts where this rhythm repeats.
01:12:035 (1,2) - This jump is SO close to being an hyperdash it becomes too hard; in fact, if I move 01:12:540 (2) - to x:136 (one grid space), it becomes an hyperdash and will be less frustrating this way.
01:16:670 (4,1) - I still think this jump is annoyingly hard. I'd prefer to continue using the pattern at 01:16:079 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but with some more distance.
01:25:854 (2) - Ctrl+H for a larger jump that emphasizes the drum at 01:25:854 -
01:26:697 (1,2) - Move (1) to x:312 to create a hyperdash and Ctrl+G (2) to make the other hyperdash more friendly
01:27:203 (2) - Try this to emphasize vocals. To do it, move (1) to x:304, move (2) to x:360, Ctrl+G (3) and move it to x:64 and move (4) to x:120. It plays really fun~
01:32:090 (1) - Move this to x:336 to create the hyperdash, it's too close to being one.
01:33:270 (4) - Move this to x:200, the flow will be better because it will be in the middle of both objects.
01:34:787 (1) - Ctrl+G and 01:35:293 (2) - Ctrl+G (do it separately, it should end like this)
01:38:832 (1) Ctrl+H and move it to x:136 for an hyperdash
01:49:112 (5) - Move to x:288 to make it easier to catch after the hyperdash
02:01:921 (1,2,3) - Move together to x:104 for a reduced hyperdash that's easier to play. Move (3) to x:56 so the notes don't stack

Frobe

Former osu!catch Champion: 2015

743 posts

Joined January 2011

Frobe 10 years ago

ZiRoX wrote:
[ Frobe's Platter]
00:52:990 (2) - Reduce distance by moving it to x:328
01:09:506 (2) - I think it's better if you place it on the red tick. Right now it's following a very picky sound. instead, delete note
01:09:844 (4) - ^Same ^
01:17:428 (1) - Move this a bit to the left, x:392 seems fine.
01:36:135 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+H to prevent stack with previous note. Also, it creates a nice jump on 01:37:146 (3,4,1) - i changed the pattern of 01:37:146 (3,4,1) -
01:56:528 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ctrl+H on this to prevent stack
02:01:921 (1,2,3,4) - ^Same

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100,320,118382,2,0,P|168:252|232:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,118888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,308,119225,6,0,L|216:264,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,308,119730,2,0,P|352:256|300:200,1,160
148,200,120236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,308,120573,6,0,L|296:264,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,308,121079,2,0,P|160:256|212:200,1,160
364,200,121585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,308,121921,6,0,L|240:256,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,308,122427,2,0,L|272:256,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,268,122932,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,264,123101,1,12,0:0:0:0:

fixed all, thanks!

Hunter Howl

335 posts

Joined July 2013

Hunter Howl 10 years ago

ZiRoX wrote:
[ Raian's Overdoze]
I will insist that you should rename it to Raian's Overdose. Two reasons: 1) If I search 'Overdose' I will miss your difficulty because of that childish caprice; 2) The only person that really uses 'OverdoZe' as a diffname is ursa, other diffs you've seen around is just a bunch of newer indonesian mappers trying to copy that. And ursa has a backstory for using that name. fine
00:47:428 (3,4) - A hyperdash might fit nicely here Done
00:50:799 (3,4,5,6) - If you want a more jumpy pattern that will emphasize the vocals, you can Ctrl+G (4) and move (5) right of its tail (maybe x:440 or around) Nope. i'm keeping this
00:52:821 (3,4,5) - These distances are awkward to play, because even though they're both 1/2s, (4) is x0,60 apart from (3) while (5) is x2,00 apart from (4). It will flow better if you put 00:53:327 (4) - on x:328 so it's in the middle of the path.I'm keeping 00:53:327 (4,5) - and changed the 00:52:484 (1,2,3) -
00:56:866 (6) - Rotate it 60° on clockwise direction about playfield centre (it should end like this). It will be consistent with 00:56:866 (6) - and plays better (and funnier) lol. applied
00:58:551 (4) - Make this one have a bit more distance from previous note moved to the edge of the playfield
01:00:911 (4) - I think it's better if you make this one have more movement, either by making it more open to the left (like this) or by having the same movement as 00:56:866 (6) - Moved to the left
01:03:271 (1) - You can move this to x:488 to have a kick hyperdash i don't think adding a HDash would fit for introducing the song's part
01:07:653 (2,3) - You can Ctrl+G (2) and move (3) a bit to the left to add more movement. both done
01:07:990 (3,4) - I still think these 3/4 sliders don't fit very well. Indeed, if they did, you would have used them for the other parts where this rhythm repeats. if anyone mention this with a better idea, i'm gonna change it
01:12:035 (1,2) - This jump is SO close to being an hyperdash it becomes too hard; in fact, if I move 01:12:540 (2) - to x:136 (one grid space), it becomes an hyperdash and will be less frustrating this way. done
01:16:670 (4,1) - I still think this jump is annoyingly hard. I'd prefer to continue using the pattern at 01:16:079 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but with some more distance. it's gonna feel weird if i keep using the pattern that you've pointed out. but if anyone has better idea, i'm gonna change it
01:25:854 (2) - Ctrl+H for a larger jump that emphasizes the drum at 01:25:854 - Done
01:26:697 (1,2) - Move (1) to x:312 to create a hyperdash and Ctrl+G (2) to make the other hyperdash more friendly Both Done
01:27:203 (2) - Try this to emphasize vocals. To do it, move (1) to x:304, move (2) to x:360, Ctrl+G (3) and move it to x:64 and move (4) to x:120. It plays really fun~ Wasn't that a bit conflict with ^ ?
01:32:090 (1) - Move this to x:336 to create the hyperdash, it's too close to being one. Done
01:33:270 (4) - Move this to x:200, the flow will be better because it will be in the middle of both objects. Done
01:34:787 (1) - Ctrl+G and 01:35:293 (2) - Ctrl+G (do it separately, it should end like this) Both done
01:38:832 (1) Ctrl+H and move it to x:136 for an hyperdash Done, and i have to rearrange a little on 01:39:338 (2,3) -
01:49:112 (5) - Move to x:288 to make it easier to catch after the hyperdash Done
02:01:921 (1,2,3) - Move together to x:104 for a reduced hyperdash that's easier to play. Move (3) to x:56 so the notes don't stack Just done it on (3)

Now That's what i'm talking about lol. thanks for your "Picky" Suggestion

GAMI, tolong hapus diffku di mapset dan ganti dengan ini Karena Perubahan nama Diff http://puu.sh/f8CJ5.osu
sorry ngerepotin. huee

GAMI

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Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

ZiRoX wrote:
MOD INFO
Plain text - Suggested
Bolded text - Highly suggested
Red bolded text - Unrankable issue (must fix)

[General]
Check metadata (artist) on puxtu's MX diff. It conflicts.
Hitsounds on the Kiai Time are a bit low. Increase volume to 80%

[ Salad]
Lower CS to 3.5, this is to create a better spread (3.5-4-4-4.5)
00:45:742 (1,2,3,1) - These jumps are a bit hard and the song is just starting. I'd put them closer, at a distance of about x1,90-x1,95, like this. The jump that may have a larger distance is 00:46:755 (1,2) -
00:46:755 (1,2) - Remove NC on (1) and add on (2), the meter is 4/4 so it's absurd to have a NC on the 3rd slider and not the 4th.
00:50:462 (5) - Move to x:136 to reduce the jump, it's currently too large
01:00:911 (5,2) - I'd add a bit more distance between these and their previous notes
01:11:360 (1,2,3) - Move (2) to x:236, so it is actually in the middle of them.
01:21:135 (1) - There's a vocal at 01:21:303 -, so I think it's better replacing this with a circle + slider, a repeat slider or something else that follows it.
Add a note on 01:26:528 -, 01:29:225 - ^ and 01:30:573 -
01:35:798 (3,4) - Why don't you replace them with a 1/2 repeat slider? It wil follow vocals better
01:37:315 - A note should be here
01:56:528 (1,2) - Reduce distance a bit
01:57:876 (1,2) - ^Same
01:59:562 (2) - Avoid stacking
02:00:910 (4) - ^Same

[ Rain]
00:41:698 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce the distance to x2,50 for this one, to serve as an introduction
00:45:742 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think it's better to Ctrl+H this section. Since the previous pattern (00:44:394 (1,2,3,4) - ) was left side biased, I think most players will expect notes to come up to the right.
01:03:271 (1) - It's better if this one is right-side oriented, like this:
SPOILER
01:12:877 (4) - Move to x:64 for a nicer jump
01:14:900 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:240 and (4) to x:352 to reduce distance a bit, voice is a bit calmer on this part.
01:15:405 (1) - Ctrl+H to create a hyperdash and a nice jump on 01:15:405 (1,2,3) -
01:16:585 (4) - Move to x:48
From 01:21:135 - to 01:40:854 - is just a 1/2 spam, without any breaks except from 01:31:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - . You should really add some variety on this, it doesn't feel like following the music at all.
01:24:506 (3) - Move to x:40
01:25:180 (3) - Move to x:472
01:27:202 (6,1,2) - Reduce distance, it's too jumpy to fit
01:36:303 (1,2) - Reduce distance
01:36:977 (1,2) - ^Same
01:43:045 (1) - Ctrl+G for a nicer jump
01:45:741 (1) - It would hurt to move this a bit to the left to make it easier to catch.
01:50:798 (3,1) - This jump must be memorized, that's completely annoying. Reduce distance, please
01:56:191 (1,2) - This is too hard after the hyperdash. 01:53:494 (3,4) - was way better, repeat something like that.
01:59:225 (3) - This is a no. Make it more vertical so it isn't that hard to catch. Like this, at least:
SPOILER
02:00:573 (1) - ^Same

I'm unsure about some other patterns, but I think other modders can also check them.[/list][/notice]

for the rain 01:21:303 (1) - until 01:42:961 (6) - I remake that part & 01:03:271 (1) - I wont change that part for the all... I fixed but some just I move not to far D:

also for Salad, i'll fixed 80% too because I'm bad at makin Salad diff LOL

thanks for mod zirox-san it's very useful

update all of it ! wait for next mod !

puxtu

2,926 posts

Joined August 2013

puxtu 10 years ago

we need more ctb mapset ranked come on!
why u ctb people so lazy? ;w;

GAMI

582 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

GAMI 10 years ago

puxtu wrote:
we need more ctb mapset ranked come on!
why u ctb people so lazy? ;w;

uguu... well

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

StickyPicky 10 years ago

Hai ` from my queue :3

[Salad]

Change Slider tick Rate to 2 since you are following the guitar rhythm in the first part
Change AR to 7 and Drain Rate to 5

00:48:270 (1,2,3,4) - why not make this pattern look like this 00:44:225 (1,2) - ? its much better i guess.
00:49:618 (1,2,3,4) - ^ , copy 00:44:225 (1,2) - here , press Ctrl-h then move this at x:440 , like:

00:45:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - please scale this to 0.877 , to lessen the star rating.
01:00:068 (3,4) - reduce distance by moving (4) at x:224
01:00:742 (5) - ^ same
01:11:697 (2) - move at x:232 for consistency of space
01:15:068 (1) - - since you are following the drum beat at the same time with the vocal, this should be at 01:14:899 - ( white-tick )
01:20:797 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - messed up. move this at 01:20:967 - ( white-tick )

[Platter]

00:42:877 (1,2) - Ctrl-h :3
00:57:371 (4) - move at x:296
01:08:495 (5) - extend this slider to the at 01:08:663 - ( red-tick )
01:35:797 (4,2) - move (4) at x:408 for a better jump, imo

nice platter `

[Rain]

00:45:911 (3,3,2) - remove the clap
00:59:899 (2) - move at x:176 for consistency of space
01:02:596 (4,5,6) - move this at x:96 for a better stream , like:

01:29:730 (5,6) - move (6) this at x:416 for consistency
01:30:404 (7,1) - you might wanna add HDash here

move (7) at x:416

Goodluck `

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