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Pegboard Nerds feat. Elizaveta - Hero (Original Mix)

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Angelolz1
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Joined August 2013
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Angelolz1
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, September 6, 2014 at 11:50:12 PM

Artist: Pegboard Nerds feat. Elizaveta
Title: Hero (Original Mix)
Source: Monstercat 017 - Ascension
Tags: Monstercat Pegboard Nerds 017 Ascension
BPM: 150
Filesize: 5371kb
Play Time: 04:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy/Normal (1.79 stars, 231 notes)
  2. Hard (3.12 stars, 382 notes)
  3. Insane Alt (4.08 stars, 530 notes)
  4. Insane (4.01 stars, 531 notes)
Download: Pegboard Nerds feat. Elizaveta - Hero (Original Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks for playing my map!
Here's a Hard Dance song by Pegboard Nerds!
Thanks to all the people in #modhelp for helping me out through out mapping the whole thing! You guys are awesome!
Also, try to give some feedback if you can!
Thanks also to these people!
SPOILER
-Zelda
-Taeyang
-onotoleonide
-Secretpipe
-MeekRhino
-Maeglwn
-N1ghtRabb1t
UPDATE 6/12/2014:
-Changed Difficulty Name of "Easy" to "Easy/Normal"
-Change "Hard" Difficulty's AR from 7 to 6.
-Added Insane Difficulty.
UPDATE 6/27/2014:
-Fixed combo colors for Easy/Normal and Hard difficulties.
-Redone hitsounds for all difficulties.
-Fixed few misplaced notes for Easy/Normal and Hard difficulties.
-Fixed sliders in Insane difficulty.
-Removed countdown from all difficulties
UPDATE 6/30/2014:
*Thanks to Taeyang for helping!*
-Fixed a few note positions and slider curves and angles on all difficulties.
UPDATE 7/26/2014:
-Fixed timing, note positions, slider speeds on all difficulties.
UPDATE 8/01/2014:
-Remapped all diffs. Check it out! :D
UPDATE 8/04/2014:
-Moved to WIP/Help.
UPDATE 9/3/2014:
-N1ghtRabb1t's Mod. Thanks a lot, N1ghtRabb1t!
-Made a few hitsound changes.
UPDATE 9/6/2014:
+Added test diff "Insane Alt". Tell me if the original Insane is better or if the Alternate version is better! :D
Last edited by Angelolz1 , edited 8 times in total.
Taeyang
Elite Mapper
1,209 posts
Joined June 2013
Taeyang
offset so late i recommend 16767 or 15167

normal
00:39:967 (7,8,9) - is not right angle

01:03:167 (1,2,3,4) - is not right angle and 00:55:167 (1) - spin after you can more circle

01:07:967 (1,2) - angle

01:15:567 (2,3,4) - distance

01:57:567 (1) - slid on the note

02:37:567 (1,2) - angle

02:45:167 (2,3,4) - distance

hard

00:48:767 (6,7) -
00:51:967 (5,6) - angle is not good

01:03:967 (7) - distance
02:27:967 (1) - i recommend more note or breketime one note circle bored

more add lightcurve

insane

need more distance rhythm,stream so not good

you can compose -> convert slider to stream
_DG
242 posts
Joined December 2013
_DG
Hello Angelo. I've irc modded your map and this is the continuation

I'll just add in the irc mod in this post.

[Easy/Normal]

  • 00:19:967 (1) - This beat is slightly overlapped by the previous slider, even with a proper distance spacing.
    00:35:567 (1,2,3,4,5)- It sounds unfitting that the slider ends are the ones to emphasize the drumbeat in the song. I can suggest this form of slider pattern and is up to you to how you would use it. (Note that the 8 starts at 00:35:567 - )
    img
    01:04:367 (4,1) - These two created an ugly overlap and slider 1 sounds short by two more reverses.
    01:17:167 (5,6,7) - Could you not just have this in one line instead of zig zagging up and down?
    01:20:367 (1,2) - I kind of got a bit confused with the distance of this and the one above.^ Probably you should follow the distance spacing of 0.8x because this one does not look like it did.
    01:35:767 (2,3) - This pattern is unfitting to the music. Beat 3 is way off from emphasizing the vocals here. Suggestion to have it like this, because that blue tick is where there are vocals.
    img
    01:38:967 (3,4) - Same as above. As well as 01:42:367 (3,4) -
    01:47:567 (2) - Mapping over the strong beat (which is that long white tick inside it) is very unfitting. You could start a slider on 01:47:967 - to bring out the stronger sound. Same goes for 01:50:767 (6) - .
    01:58:167 (6) - Starting on the red tick is kind of bad and might be able to throw off certain people. And 01:58:367 - is a strong beat taken out by the use of this slider.
    Do not make 02:01:167 (4) - as a slider because is doesn't map the same sound as 01:59:967 (2) - . Preferably better to map a slider starting at 02:01:567 - and turn 02:00:767 (3) - into a slider.
    02:03:567 (1) - Why not the same as 02:01:967 (1,2,3) - ? The song is almost similar in these two parts.
    I rather you start the break at 02:11:967 - and map the part before it.
    02:29:567 - No break?
    02:34:367 (1,2) - Why not the same as 01:04:767 (1) - . The first slider here is bad anyway.
    Proper stacking of 02:43:567 (5) - with the sliderend of 02:42:367 (3) -
    02:43:967 (1,3) - Slight overlap
    02:44:767 (2,4,5,6) - Unimaginable overlaps, oh god.
    02:50:367 - Add a hitcircle.
    03:11:167 (2,1) - Overlap.
    03:59:967 (3) - I don't think you need that third red anchor ._.
    04:18:367 (4,1) - Not a pretty good overlap, here.
    04:22:767 (3) - Would rather you not map over 04:23:167 - because it sounds weird.
    04:28:767 (9) - NC this one because the combo is a bit too long.
[Hard]
  • 00:25:967 (4,5,6) - The 6th circle is not on the same level as circle 4. Looks ugly if they're no on the same level on the grid.
    01:06:367 (5) - Ends in an awful spot on the timeline.
    01:07:967 - Would prefer if you map this part here to emphasize the strong beat.
    01:18:767 (2,3) - Slight overlap. Bad.
    01:27:367 (1,2,3,4) - Shifting from 1/4 slider to double beats... Would prefer if you actually had this somewhere before this time to improve pattern.
    01:34:367 (2) - Improve the shape as shown in my suggestion below
    img
    01:41:767 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would suggest 4,5 to become a 1/4 slider and then slider 7 become double beats for "creativity".
    img
    01:47:167 (1) - Ermahgerd clusterfuck of anchors. Also, the slider is ugly.
    02:42:567 (6,7,8) - Not a really nice sight, I must say.
    03:03:167 - From this point onwards the movement of the circles,slider and their pattern are really boring, in my opinion :\
    04:14:767 (3) - Not a good place to start a slider. Preferably better at 04:14:367 (2) - instead.
IRC mod desu
2014-08-11 20:59 N1ghtRabb1T: hi
2014-08-11 20:59 N1ghtRabb1T: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/439296 Pegboard Nerds feat. Elizaveta - Hero (Original Mix) [Insane]]
2014-08-11 21:01 BronyAngelo: Hi!
2014-08-11 21:02 BronyAngelo: Anything for me to improve in? o3o
2014-08-11 21:02 N1ghtRabb1T: irc mod your entire map
2014-08-11 21:02 N1ghtRabb1T: so I'll be checking now
2014-08-11 21:02 BronyAngelo: m'kay. thanks! ^u^
2014-08-11 21:02 N1ghtRabb1T: I have to say the Insane is interesting, but not really beautiful
2014-08-11 21:03 BronyAngelo: Is it the sliders?
2014-08-11 21:03 BronyAngelo: because if those kind of weird sliders isn't allowed, i'll change it.
2014-08-11 21:04 N1ghtRabb1T: You can keep them.
2014-08-11 21:04 N1ghtRabb1T: But you need to improve them.
2014-08-11 21:04 BronyAngelo: By how?
2014-08-11 21:05 N1ghtRabb1T: by not making them ugly.
2014-08-11 21:05 N1ghtRabb1T: Wait let me choose a few
2014-08-11 21:06 N1ghtRabb1T: Also, your insane is actually kind of a hard diff honestly.
2014-08-11 21:06 N1ghtRabb1T: Just the streams and what not make in an insane
2014-08-11 21:07 BronyAngelo: damnit.
2014-08-11 21:07 BronyAngelo: okay.
2014-08-11 21:07 N1ghtRabb1T: The intro section is quite okay.
2014-08-11 21:07 BronyAngelo: i have no idea how to make it insane :/
2014-08-11 21:08 N1ghtRabb1T: Anywhere up to 00:42:367 - looks fine to me (this is insane if you haven't already known.
2014-08-11 21:09 N1ghtRabb1T: 00:53:567 (1) - In my opinion you could silence this spinner to use the faint eagle sound as the spinner sound instead
2014-08-11 21:10 N1ghtRabb1T: 00:56:767 - Might be a place to add a note.
2014-08-11 21:10 N1ghtRabb1T: 00:59:967 - Goes for this as well.
2014-08-11 21:10 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:01:567 (2) - This is a new section so you could New combo this
2014-08-11 21:11 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:06:367 (9,10,11,12,13) - I don't think you would need to keep all of this in one place. How about a slow stream of these notes curving upward to keep the flowof the cursor?
2014-08-11 21:13 BronyAngelo: oops sorry.
2014-08-11 21:13 BronyAngelo: i'm back.
2014-08-11 21:13 N1ghtRabb1T: According to the slider speed of 01:09:167 (8) - ,01:09:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - is awfully close and greatly reduces the speed of the cursor. What is more, the distance spacing between each and every note here is kind of large and I would look at it as a nonsensical section of unnecessary slow down and speed up.
2014-08-11 21:15 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:12:767 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Cursor movement is too linear and thus probably making it boring.
2014-08-11 21:15 N1ghtRabb1T: Like it moves right up until 01:13:567 (9) -  and then moves up.
2014-08-11 21:15 BronyAngelo:  hmm... okay. Seems like a great suggestion. Let me fix it.
2014-08-11 21:16 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:14:967 (5,6) - Movement is kind of awkard. Since there is a jump between 01:14:667 (3,4) - I would suggest also a slight jump between these two.
2014-08-11 21:18 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:15:167 (6) - You might be able to change this into two 1/2 sliders instead, with the second one emphasizing the "music" on 01:15:767 - and flowing perfectly into 01:15:967 (7) - 
2014-08-11 21:19 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:15:567 - Either doing the above suggestion or not, you will need to hitsound a clap here 01:15:567 - 
2014-08-11 21:19 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:16:167 (8,9,10,11,12) - Kind of a far distance spaced stream
2014-08-11 21:20 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:18:767 (2,3) - Slight overlap, yes. 
2014-08-11 21:22 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:32:567 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Awkward movement from 3. (minor issue here probably)
2014-08-11 21:23 N1ghtRabb1T: Sometimes, from what I've seen, You are able to you emphasizing jumps to indicate stronger parts of the map
2014-08-11 21:23 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:33:567 (2) - This being an example where you can say "SCREW YOU DISTANCE SPACING"
2014-08-11 21:25 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:34:367 (1) - Use [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1914955 this] as an example.
2014-08-11 21:32 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:41:767 (2,3) - Something such as this is kind of confusing.
2014-08-11 21:33 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:43:167 (7) - Ugly wiggle slider. AS how I showed you in the ic by the red anchors, try to rework these types of sliders the same way.
2014-08-11 21:34 BronyAngelo: Do I make it the same exact slider as the screenshot above?
2014-08-11 21:34 N1ghtRabb1T: no, just  used the anchor placement in the screenshot and make different kinds of sliders.
2014-08-11 21:34 N1ghtRabb1T: It's to beautify them.
2014-08-11 21:35 N1ghtRabb1T: Though its not really liked if you have too many of these
2014-08-11 21:35 BronyAngelo: okay.
2014-08-11 21:36 N1ghtRabb1T: 02:02:367 (8) - I liked this though.
2014-08-11 21:36 N1ghtRabb1T: 02:15:167 (6) - This is ugly.
2014-08-11 21:38 N1ghtRabb1T: 02:21:567 (6) - This part of the song... and this slider? Unfitting and unmatching with the other parts
2014-08-11 21:39 N1ghtRabb1T: I think this is like the only kind of non-wiggle slider in the entire section.
2014-08-11 21:39 N1ghtRabb1T: 02:26:367 -  and 02:29:567 - are good places with a beat.
2014-08-11 21:41 N1ghtRabb1T: 02:46:567 (14) - Would rather not start slider here and end where the hitclap is.
2014-08-11 21:41 N1ghtRabb1T: just place a circle on the red tick then a sldier later.
2014-08-11 21:41 N1ghtRabb1T: 02:51:167 (3,4) - In between thesetwo circles, you can place one more circle to go with that faint sound in the music.
2014-08-11 21:42 N1ghtRabb1T: 03:15:967 - Unnecessary break here.
2014-08-11 21:45 N1ghtRabb1T: I am not saying anything else, but 03:41:567 - could have a sliter velocity multiplier of somewhere below 0.80
2014-08-11 21:45 N1ghtRabb1T: just to avoid ugly sliders like 03:41:567 (1) - :\
2014-08-11 21:46 N1ghtRabb1T: 03:59:967 (3,4,5,6,1) - There could be a larger distance spacing between these two.
2014-08-11 21:46 BronyAngelo: multiplier is .75x lol
2014-08-11 21:46 N1ghtRabb1T: 04:06:367 (1) - Is probably too early by two full ticks
2014-08-11 21:46 BronyAngelo: okay wait let me finish the rest before then i'll go down the list.
2014-08-11 21:47 N1ghtRabb1T: 04:18:367 (1) - Unnecessary spinner in my opinion.
2014-08-11 21:47 N1ghtRabb1T: 04:21:167 (1,2) - Too close.
2014-08-11 21:47 N1ghtRabb1T: 04:31:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Similarly, you could space them a bit further from each other.
2014-08-11 21:48 N1ghtRabb1T: 04:45:567 - Sounds better if you mapped until 04:45:567 - 
2014-08-11 21:49 N1ghtRabb1T: If you ask me, there is a faint sound of drums in the music.
2014-08-11 21:50 N1ghtRabb1T: Well, that's probably all for insane. Now to Hard.
2014-08-11 21:51 N1ghtRabb1T: 00:56:667 - Unnecessary break.
2014-08-11 21:51 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:05:567 (3,5) - Slight overlap. Do not do this.
2014-08-11 21:52 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:07:967 - Rather have you map this part as the first strong beat of the kiai.
2014-08-11 21:53 N1ghtRabb1T:  01:18:767 (2,3) - Overlap.
2014-08-11 21:53 N1ghtRabb1T: 01:27:967 (5,6,7) - This type of movement is weird.
2014-08-11 21:53 BronyAngelo: How do i take out the break in 03:15:967
2014-08-11 21:54 N1ghtRabb1T: By mapping in it.
2014-08-11 21:54 N1ghtRabb1T: There is still good enough parts in the song to be mapped there.
2014-08-11 21:55 N1ghtRabb1T: blerrghhh sorry if my mod is getting bad, I'm a bit hungry and losing brain power to keep being interested.
2014-08-11 21:56 N1ghtRabb1T: Slowed down just to give you more time in fixing what you want fixed.
2014-08-11 21:59 BronyAngelo: Nah, it's oaky.
2014-08-11 22:00 BronyAngelo: It's a nice mod though, thanks!
2014-08-11 22:01 BronyAngelo: About this 01:14:967 (5,6) - I don't get what you mean
2014-08-11 22:01 BronyAngelo: (in insane)
2014-08-11 22:03 N1ghtRabb1T: okay let me change that part a bit.
2014-08-11 22:04 N1ghtRabb1T: The movement of the cursor is weird because it has to take a sharp turn from the previous circle.
2014-08-11 22:04 N1ghtRabb1T: I suggest changing 01:15:167 (6) - to a curve slider.
2014-08-11 22:07 N1ghtRabb1T: just give the signal when you are moving on to hard.
2014-08-11 22:17 BronyAngelo:    okay moved on to hard
2014-08-11 22:17 N1ghtRabb1T: alright
2014-08-11 22:17 BronyAngelo: how do i copy everything on this chat
2014-08-11 22:18 N1ghtRabb1T: what
2014-08-11 22:18 BronyAngelo: Like from when you started this conversation
2014-08-11 22:18 BronyAngelo: until here
2014-08-11 22:19 BronyAngelo: how do i copy all that's said here
2014-08-11 22:21 N1ghtRabb1T: why do you want to do that.
2014-08-11 22:21 N1ghtRabb1T: just go to your osu folder 
2014-08-11 22:21 N1ghtRabb1T: Chats folder
2014-08-11 22:21 N1ghtRabb1T: find my name
2014-08-11 22:21 N1ghtRabb1T: click on notepad and then copy
2014-08-11 22:24 N1ghtRabb1T: ...Well your hard still has ugly sliders.
2014-08-11 22:24 BronyAngelo: Augh damn.
2014-08-11 22:24 N1ghtRabb1T: Reduce the number of these types of slider, in my opinion.

That's all. Other than the sliders I see on Hard and Insane, and certain pattern issues, I really can't say much anymore. Good luck.
Angelolz1
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Angelolz1
you're now my favorite person on osu! c:
Bivrizzington
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Bivrizzington
I love it! Hope to get better so I can play the harder versions XD
Great job!!
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