Arusha Shuna wrote:

SPOILER

Normal
00:03:453 (1) - Spacing issue, consider moving this reworked all the spacing in normal, should be ok now
00:05:936 (4) - ^
00:08:419 (1) - remove new combo fix'd
00:09:247 (2) - add new combo, also spacing issue, consider moving this fix'd
00:10:902 (1) - also spacing issue, consider moving this
00:15:867 (4) - ^
00:20:833 (1) - ^
00:23:316 (4) - ^
00:24:971 (7) - ^
00:32:419 (1,2,3,4) - don't stack? fix'd
00:38:626 (1) - consider change this to a set of sliders instead of lots of repeat? fix'd
00:46:074 (5) - also spacing issue, consider moving this
00:47:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't stack? fix'd
00:58:902 (6) - also spacing issue, consider moving this
01:21:040 (4) - ^
01:26:212 (1) - ^
01:29:936 (1,2,3,4) - don't jump? fix'd
01:33:660 (1) - move to the very center of the map fix'd
01:56:005 (4) - new combo
02:00:143 (1) - spacing issue and align with the center Y coordinate line fix'd
02:16:902 (4) - spacing issue, then lengthen the slider to the next blue tick (1/4 beat) fix'd
02:20:419 (6) - spacing issue, add one more repeat fix'd
02:21:867 (x) - add note fix'd
02:23:109 (1) - consider change this to a set of sliders instead of lots of repeat? fix'd
02:26:626 (5) - line up with (4) fix'd
02:28:074 (3) - spacing issue
02:29:109 (1) - ^
02:35:729 (6) - ^
02:39:867 (1) - ^
03:25:384 (5) - ^
03:41:109 (5) - ^
Hard
Change the slider tick rate to 2 fix'd
00:31:178 (x) - add a note fix'd
00:31:593 (5) - finish on the previous white tick fix'd
00:38:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - don't stack fix'd
00:41:938 (4) - spacing issue, slider ends in the previous blue tick fix'd
01:05:732 (6) - spacing issue fix'd
01:22:695 (4) - ^ not sure what's wrong here
01:22:905 (1) - ^ fix'd
01:30:971 (1) - move to previous blue tick fix'd
01:53:113 (6) - spacing issue fix'd
01:57:251 (4) - ^ fix'd
01:59:320 (6) - ^ fix'd
03:10:074 (3) - ends at next red tick fix'd
03:15:040 (8) - spacing issue fix'd

DiamondCrash wrote:

You need to change this whole map with distance snap on, ok?

samipale wrote:

SPOILER

[General]
The preview time isn't the same,you can open .osu by notepad to fix it fixed
BPM should be 145 Instead of doubling the BPM I used 1/8 beat snapping. I asked if it was okay in both #osu and #mod and I was told that there was no problem in it.

[Normal]
some LOOOONG slider's whistle is boring to me

01:07:591(1) - end at 01:10:488? fixed
00:57:247 - suddenly 0.6x? lol i'm not sure what you're talking about
01:20:419 - suddenly 0.5x? lol i'm not sure what you're talking about
01:23:729(5) - spacing fixed
01:33:660(1) - move down a grid on level2 fixed
01:47:729(2) - end on 01:49:384? fixed
01:52:902(7,8,9,10,11) - confused to me reworked over here a bit, should be okay now.
01:57:867(1,2) - what an lol jump reworked over here a bit, should be okay now.
02:27:453 to 02:29:316 - spacing reworked over here a bit, should be okay now.
03:21:247(2) - it's a slider that do not following rhythm fixed
03:30:350(6) - ^ fixed (now it ends at the next white tick)
03:59:316(1) - it isn't at the very MID fixed

different spacing should be understood clearly
and some place the new combo is wrong

[Hard]
00:30:350(1,2,3) - not align fixed
00:54:557(1,2,3) - confused to me fixed
01:33:660(1) - move down a grid on level2 fixed

it needs more mod and i will give star when it has no serious problem

DiamondCrash wrote:

Normal;
00:07:591 (5) - New combo here. fixed
00:09:247 (1) - No new combo here. fixed
00:24:143 (5) - New combo. fixed
00:35:316 (6,7,8) - Forward 1/2, and space accordingly. fixed
00:43:591 (1,2) - Switch the new combo from the one to a two. fixed
01:00:971 (1,2,3) - Lol wut? Spacing. fixed
01:04:281 (1) - Spacing. fixed
01:21:040 (4) - Start on the "in"? not sure what you're talking about ._.
01:29:936 (1,2,3,4) - Put on the center line. :p fixed
01:33:660 (1) - Center. last mod asked me to move it down 1 grid, not sure what i should do here ._.
01:50:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Too long. fixed
01:57:867 (1,2) - Too short. fixed

Hard;
00:56:419 (1) - Spacing.fixed
01:05:729 (6) - End on the white tick. fixed
01:24:350 (x) - Note here. fixed

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Normal
00:24:971 (7) - remove finish add clap? fixed
00:36:557 (x) - add note fixed
01:02:212 (5) - spacing issue' fixed
01:02:212 (5) - slider ends in the next ehite tick fixed
01:04:281 (1) - spacing issue, stack w/ 01:02:212 (5) slider end if you want fixed
01:47:729 (2) - spacing issue fixed
02:23:109 (1) - remove new combo fixed
03:09:660 (7) - ^ fixed
03:17:316 (x) - no break needed fixed
03:32:005 (1) - spacing issue fixed
Hard
00:30:350 (1,2,3) - spacing must be same with 00:29:522 (1,2,3) or vice versa fixed
00:54:143 (2) - add note fixed
01:22:074 (1) - spacing issue, move it to under 01:22:281 (2) or elsewhere? fixed
02:29:109 (x) - add note? fixed
03:35:316 (x) - ^ fixed
03:35:729 (x) - ^ fixed
03:36:143 (x) - ^ fixed

awesome work! STAR!

dlguiga wrote:

01:33:660 (1) - Center. last mod asked me to move it down 1 grid, not sure what i should do here ._.

gdeath wrote:

[Normal]
make the slidertick decrease to 1.0 done
02:16:902 (4) - make it 1/4 later done

[Hard]
fine

Star.

1. osb.file didn't used, please delete it then full submit
2. I think you need a audio lead-in about 0.5s-1s, you can set it at song set up - audio - Lead - in
3. Please turn off countdown in all difficulties, you can turn off it by not check the box of song set up - storuboading - enable countdown

1. 00:49:591 (6) - end at 00:49:798 seems better
2. 00:54:143 (6) - remove clap, add clap at (5)
3. 02:39:867 - 03:06:350 break - this break feel a little long :/

1. fine

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. osb.file didn't used, please delete it then full submit done (i will full submit later)
2. I think you need a audio lead-in about 0.5s-1s, you can set it at song set up - audio - Lead - in done
3. Please turn off countdown in all difficulties, you can turn off it by not check the box of song set up - storuboading - enable countdown done

[Normal]

1. 00:49:591 (6) - end at 00:49:798 seems better done
2. 00:54:143 (6) - remove clap, add clap at (5) done
3. 02:39:867 - 03:06:350 break - this break feel a little long :/ i don't know how to make it shorter

[Hard]

1. fine

about hitsound set, I suggest you try put clap every two long white note, that would sound great tweaked the hitsounds in both normal and hard a bit, hope it sounds better now.

TKiller wrote:

[Hard] 00:38:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream is unrelated to music, just some random "ratatatatata" Used the suggestion you made in IRC.

TKiller wrote:

And adding a random AMV to beatmap? What's the reason? It's unrelated to song, I'd remove it and find some fine background image. It's just an unneeded traffic usage.

YGOkid8 wrote:

Normal

Combo Mod~ fixed all combos
00:32:419 (1) - No New Combo.
00:38:626 (1) - ^
01:58:488 (1) - ^ (maybe?)
02:00:143 (1) - ^

00:33:247 (5) - New Combo.
01:56:833 (7) - ^ (most DEFINITELY)
03:09:660 (7) - ^ ^
03:16:281 (7) - ^ ^
03:23:729 (3) - ^
03:56:005 (4) - ^

03:21:247 (2) - New Combo here instead of 03:20:419 (1).
03:33:660 (2) - New Combo here instead of 03:32:833 (1).

Normal Mod~
01:02:212 (5,1) - Personally dislike the overlap. removed overlap

02:40:074 ~ 03:05:109 - Very long break orz. Try not to have breaks over 15 seconds. reduced break in both difficulties
--------------------

Natteke desu wrote:

Hi.

Wow, that weird bg scares me D:

No tags? I've updated them, instead of using the album name in source, they are in the tags now, but I haven't full submitted yet

[Normal]

00:03:453 (5) - There isnt supposed to be any hitfinish, try to use hitclap instead. fixed
00:08:005 (2) - No hitfinish here fixed
And so on.....Don't overuse hitfinish, it's supposed to be used in an aproppriate moments, not like that
00:27:453 (1) - Hitfinish here, but not here 00:29:936 (6) fixed
And on and on...

[Hard]

This diff looks pretty boring to me :< I'm sorry to hear that, however, I'm open to suggestions on how to make the map better
You could put some sliders in your second break. This break has no beats whatsoever, I think it'd be strange putting some sliders there.
Don't see any serious problems though...

Neo Adonis wrote:

[General]
Curiously, I don't like the way the sample sounds are used. However, I'm going to mod someones I consider important.

[Normal]
Reduce the drain level 1 star. I don't think the hp drain is too severe.
00:15:867 (4) - New combo Done
00:25:798 (4) - ^
00:48:143 (5) - ^
00:56:419 (8) - New combo, because the circle takes too time in come.
00:58:902 (6) - It doesn't like me this slider ends on a 1/4 beat. Why don't you add 1/4 beat later on the same point a hit circle? I believe you're saying that the slider is ending 1/4 beat too early. It that's it, I fixed it.
00:58:902 (6) - New combo, cause this slider is too long and it drains too much energy
01:02:212 (5) - ^
01:21:040 (4) - ^
01:23:729 (5) - ^
02:23:109 (5) - ^
02:23:109 (5) - Wrongly snapped. Move one grid down. Fixed.
03:10:902 (6) - Add clap sound at the final of the slider. Fixed.
03:15:453 (5) - Add clap sound Fixed.
03:32:833 (5) - Why don't you replace the sound with a final one? Fixed.
03:46:074 (5) - ^ Fixed.


[Hard]
02:21:040 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed.

James2250 wrote:

delete osb file in folder and do full submit
map might be too long.....but I guess wait for BAT to say
raise audio on notes 2 ticks or so

normal:
00:14:212 (1) - add finish done
00:40:695 (1) - ^ done
00:42:764 (6) - I would point this down not sideways done
00:44:833 (3) - add repeat? done
00:55:798 (8) - add note? done
01:01:798 (4) - align with the 2? done
01:10:902 (1) - finish isn't needed moved it to 01:12:143 -
01:21:040 (4) - I don't think this slider fits well removed the sliders
01:27:660 (1) - start at 01:27:453, end at 01:29:522 done
01:33:660 (1) - put at center of grid done
01:47:729 (2) - put this so the previous 1 is in the middle below it? done
01:56:833 (1) - extend 1/2 done
02:00:143 (9) - new combo? done
02:21:867 (7) - move right to align slightly better done
02:31:178 (2) - extend 1/4 done
add some claps between 03:18:764 (1) and 03:59:316 (1) done

hard:
00:27:453 (1) - add finish done
00:36:971 (1,2) - switch new combo done
00:36:971 (6) - move down to align with stream before it? done
00:38:212 (3) - add note done
00:52:281 (1) - new combo not needed done
01:04:902 (4,1) - move closer together done
01:07:178 (1) - start spinner here (normally isn't good to start spinners on blue ticks) done
01:22:695 (4,1) - move these so repeat isnt hidden done
01:27:453 (1) - end at 01:29:522 done
01:33:660 (1) - center on grid
02:14:729 (3) - move to red tick next to it done
02:57:247 (3) - add clap done
02:58:902 (9) - ^ done
03:12:143 (1) - add 1 repeat done

I don't follow combo's 100% of the time but will let someone else check that
*star*

Sushi971 wrote:

[Hard]
00:29:936 (3,1) - nazi alignment fixed
01:07:178 (1,1) - slider and note are on the same time. BAD even if it is a spinner fixed
01:19:178 (2,4) - symetry fixed
03:26:626 (2) - 1 grid down to center it, or make the following (3) follow the spacing fixed




Fine, sir

Neo Adonis wrote:

By the way, I forgot to say you the song and the video are soooo cool!! ^^

mrtn wrote:

[normal]
00:46:488 (5) - clap here? fixed
00:48:143 (5) - ^ fixed
01:07:591 (1,1) - at least a full beat of time between a spinner and note is required in normal fixed
01:27:453 (1,1) - ^ fixed
01:31:591 (1,1) - ^ fixed
02:13:384 (1,2) - overlap looks ugly imo removed
02:54:764 (4,5,6,1) - ^ removed

[hard]
01:07:488 (1) - slider end point sounds bad even though it's technically not wrong i suggest changing it fixed, hope it's better now
03:57:660 (1,1) - map between these 2 notes. done

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[Hard]
01:07:178 (1...1) - Make the spinners in this chorus start at similar times. (I like having a beat on the "fall" and then the spinner starting 1/2 after) And make the first two end at similar times too. (For that, I like ending on the "take") fixed
02:29:316 (10) - This shouldn't be using 1/8 snap at all. fixed
03:19:591 - Kiai time should start here. fixed (also made the other kiai start at 03:46:074, sounds better now
03:43:798 - I don't like the short break here. removed break and inserted a couple of sliders

[Normal]
00:53:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would love to see more beatmapping like this! It works with the vocal line, which is a lot more fun than the rhythm. Nothing you have to change, just a suggestion.
01:07:178 - Same problem with the spinners as [Hard]. fixed
03:19:591 - Kiai time should start here. fixed (also made the other kiai start at 03:46:074, sounds better now

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[All difficulties]
01:14:005 (1,1,2,3) - Is this all 1/4 late, maybe? fixed the spinner and reworked the beats after
01:27:040 (1) - Hitcircle on "fall"? done
03:37:178 - You know, the kiai ends at an odd time. fixed

rust45 wrote:

[Infected Real1]
01:10:488 (4) - Don't use 1/3, use 1/8, it sounds much more in time, your way is waaaaay early.
01:17:109 (4) - ^ Also, I don't really like your use of finishes, they don't sound right as the vocals at that point are getting softer and not accented.
01:21:453 (4) - Kind of a dick move as the earlier patterns did not have notes under the sliders.
01:23:729 (2,3,4) - Take a guess.
01:30:350 (1) - ^
02:43:178 (5) - Use freaking 1/8 and not 1/3!
02:49:798 (1,2,3) - ^
02:56:419 (1) - ^
03:03:040 (3) - ^
03:22:902 (10) - ^
03:29:522 (4) - ^
03:36:143 (4) - ^
03:42:764 (4) - ^ You probably have the idea by now
03:49:384 (3) - ^ Well this is for emphasis!

The maps are fine except for Real1's wrong snapping. So I'll give it a star.

Real1 wrote:

Delete my diff if it doesn't suit you.

rust45 wrote:

Real1 wrote:

Delete my diff if it doesn't suit you.

Is this directed to me, or to dlguiga?
If it's too me, I thought your map was rather enjoyable and the only real issue I have with it is that every time the song says "Take No more" your notes are just a tad early. Did you check it? All you have to do to fix every part which I said had the wrong snapping was change it to 1/8, and then move the second and third notes forward just a little bit.

Here is what you have: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4532

Here is what sounds more in time in my ears: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4533

This snapping problem is the only thing I find unrankable in this map.

gyt wrote:

Osu is a rhythm game, not a trap game
03:51:669 (1) exist.

By the way these are only suggestions..

RemmyX25 wrote:

23.8mb

RemmyX25 wrote:

23.8mb