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hehe

Joined November 2012

hehe 2014-07-12T03:10:08+00:00

from #modreq~ m4m

generally fun to play, like the jumps and triples. but have spacing problems and NC problems. try to use more DS when appropriate, couldn't list them all down.

00:03:127 (1,2,3,4) - weird spacing, make square?
00:12:601 (3,4,5,6) - use DS
00:18:741 (3,4,5) - use DS/angle properly
00:24:531 (2,3) - either add a 1/4 circle inbetween, or space more
00:26:636 (4,1) - either stack or space, messy overlap
00:28:039 (2,1) - first slider don't be parallel with next slider
00:34:004 (1,2) - ^ but less severe
00:36:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - pls use convert stream to slider/use DS
00:37:162 (2) - ctrl+g
00:37:513 (3) - ctrl+g
00:37:864 (4) - don't end this at blue, change it
00:40:671 (4) - ^
00:46:109 (4,5,6) - space further
00:50:671 (1,2,3) - minor: use slider here to keep player tempo
00:55:057 (1,2) - this is too far apart, put closer to change to circles
00:56:987 (2) - ctrl+g
00:57:338 (3) - ctrl+g
01:02:074 (1,2) - don't like this too
01:04:355 (9,1,) - space it more, preferably put 9 further away
01:06:987 (6,7) - put 7 closer to 6, spacing confusing when 8 is same distance
01:08:566 (4) - maybe NC
01:11:022 (2) - ctrl+g
01:18:390 (4,1) - don't like
01:32:601 (7,1) - ^
01:35:057 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - change angle when doing this
01:48:039 (4) - slider end at blue
01:50:846 (4,1) - ^
01:54:706 (4,5,1) - space, important
02:17:162 (5,6) - please space this
02:28:215 (5,6) - change~
02:34:618 (7,1) - can be fun, lower spacing. if its mistake, change it
02:35:759 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - odd to play
02:48:215 (6) - NC
02:48:741 (1) - remove NC
02:50:671 (2,3) - ctrl+g one of them
02:52:601 (6,1) - spacing
02:55:759 (1) - remove NC, NC on next note
03:15:057 (1,1) - space this too

Hard

on the simpler side for a hard. good usage of DS. lack of fun patterns
00:03:127 (3,4,5) - maybe

00:07:864 (1,2,3) - can stack regularly, whynot?

00:13:829 (1,2,3) - ^
00:25:057 (7,8,1) - this will be nice

00:28:566 (2,3) - doubles.. try not to!
00:32:952 (8) - NC maybe
00:42:074 (1,2,3,4) - space, maybe confusing
00:47:338 (2,3,4) - turn it into

00:49:443 (7,8) - slider after repeat? easier
00:55:057 (5) - angle to the top-left
00:58:566 (1) - NC here, remove NC after
01:01:373 (1,2,3) - stax
01:04:004 (4,5,6) - suddenly low spacing??
01:10:495 (8) - NC, remove NC after
01:24:180 (1,2,3,4) - change ~
01:31:548 (1,2) - try not to
01:52:425 (2,3) - space
01:57:513 (5,6,7) - same as 00:47:338 (2,3,4)
02:05:934 (4,5,6) - bad flow
02:06:811 (2,3,4,5,6) - line pattern is frustrating, maybe add small angle
02:16:460 (4) - NC maybe
02:21:548 - add circle
02:50:145 (1) - ehh a little unermapped cuz its kiai time

looking forward to seeing <Sentimental Dream> diff mapped finish! will remod~

HolyForce

17 posts

Joined January 2013

HolyForce 2014-07-12T10:28:18+00:00

handsome wrote:
from #modreq~ m4m

HF Insane
generally fun to play, like the jumps and triples. but have spacing problems and NC problems. try to use more DS when appropriate, couldn't list them all down.

00:03:127 (1,2,3,4) - weird spacing, make square? tried to make a square
00:12:601 (3,4,5,6) - use DS ok
00:18:741 (3,4,5) - use DS/angle properly sorry i think currently is okay....
00:24:531 (2,3) - either add a 1/4 circle inbetween, or space more i increase the spacing
00:26:636 (4,1) - either stack or space, messy overlap sorry, it is good for me...if other people mention the problem, i may fix it.
00:28:039 (2,1) - first slider don't be parallel with next slider i change the direction a little bit. but i like this type of overlap.
00:34:004 (1,2) - ^ but less severe same as above.
00:36:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - pls use convert stream to slider/use DS i have used distance snap...i make it more curved now...
00:37:162 (2) - ctrl+g nope, it will affect the flow
00:37:513 (3) - ctrl+g same as above
00:37:864 (4) - don't end this at blue, change it sorry i think it fit the song. I don't want a lot of 1/2 slider
00:40:671 (4) - ^ same as above
00:46:109 (4,5,6) - space further okay
00:50:671 (1,2,3) - minor: use slider here to keep player tempo lol ... i want to consist with 00:49:267 (1,2,3) -
00:55:057 (1,2) - this is too far apart, put closer to change to circles spacing has been decreased
00:56:987 (2) - ctrl+g no....it fit the flow.
00:57:338 (3) - ctrl+g no...the flow will be destroied
01:02:074 (1,2) - don't like this too lol...i will consider to change it. but this is not a bad position. i can find it in many ranked map. I think it can make player feel funny.
01:04:355 (9,1,) - space it more, preferably put 9 further away lol...okay..
01:06:987 (6,7) - put 7 closer to 6, spacing confusing when 8 is same distance umm...the distance between 7 & 8 is very large. i think it is good enough.
01:08:566 (4) - maybe NC ok
01:11:022 (2) - ctrl+g umm...let me think about this...
01:18:390 (4,1) - don't like lol...but i like ;p
01:32:601 (7,1) - ^ lol...i like this...haha
01:35:057 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - change angle when doing this sorry, i cannot get your meaning...
01:48:039 (4) - slider end at blue just like what i have said before. I love this type of slider. if it is a big problem, i will fix it.
01:50:846 (4,1) - ^ same as above
01:54:706 (4,5,1) - space, important lol...it is because the slider velocity has changed at this position...
02:17:162 (5,6) - please space this okay...
02:28:215 (5,6) - change~ lol..same as above...
02:34:618 (7,1) - can be fun, lower spacing. if its mistake, change it okay i have lower the spacing
02:35:759 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - odd to play okay i increased the spacing between 02:36:987 (6,7) -
02:48:215 (6) - NC i added nc at downbeat and i don't want to change it. sorry
02:48:741 (1) - remove NC same as above
02:50:671 (2,3) - ctrl+g one of them umm...nice idea but i want to think more on it. I will consider it.
02:52:601 (6,1) - spacing lol...i like this...
02:55:759 (1) - remove NC, NC on next note NC is on downbeat...I want to add it on downbeat...
03:15:057 (1,1) - space this too lol...I want to be as this..sorry

Nice mod. Change lot of it. thanks for your mod

To Artavia, here are my update. please check

osu file format v13

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284,88,183302,2,0,P|256:136|128:188,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,184004,12,2,188215,0:0:0:0:
312,80,188741,6,0,P|348:128|368:252,2,180,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,20,189618,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,20,189794,6,0,P|136:40|60:140,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,124,190320,2,0,P|152:196|164:304,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,216,190846,2,0,P|264:288|360:356,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,236,191373,2,0,P|396:272|532:256,1,180
448,180,191899,2,0,L|496:92,2,90,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,312,192601,6,0,P|336:240|312:136,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,288,193127,2,0,P|236:224|228:92,1,180
152,256,193653,2,0,P|136:184|144:68,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,220,194180,2,0,P|40:128|60:32,2,180,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,328,195057,6,0,L|28:356,2,45,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,340,195408,6,0,P|160:360|280:360,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,276,195934,2,0,P|256:280|352:260,1,180
232,196,196460,2,0,P|320:184|408:144,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,104,196987,2,0,P|344:84|448:20,1,180
312,16,197513,2,0,L|204:24,2,90,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,108,198215,6,0,P|432:204|432:300,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,220,198741,2,0,P|352:288|248:376,1,180
264,288,199267,2,0,P|208:316|72:316,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,244,199794,2,0,P|96:236|16:136,2,180,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,332,200846,5,2,0:0:0:0:
452,296,200934,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,260,201022,2,0,P|464:192|404:76,1,180,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,176,201548,2,0,P|348:128|216:60,1,180
272,160,202074,2,0,P|200:136|80:136,1,180
176,208,202601,2,0,P|116:208|-4:244,1,180
108,304,203127,2,0,L|24:340,2,90,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,272,203829,6,0,P|364:252|432:160,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,216,204355,2,0,P|88:184|40:88,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,40,204881,2,0,P|304:116|272:236,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,308,205408,1,4,2:0:0:0:
68,336,205583,1,4,2:0:0:0:
112,188,205759,1,4,2:0:0:0:

Artavia

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Topic Starter

Artavia 2014-07-12T10:37:32+00:00

update. I will soon indentify handsome's mod...

Artavia

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Artavia 2014-07-13T06:16:42+00:00

handsome wrote:
from #modreq~ m4m

Hard
on the simpler side for a hard. good usage of DS. lack of fun patterns

00:03:127 (3,4,5) - maybe - Sorry.. I can't fix it.

00:07:864 (1,2,3) - can stack regularly, whynot? - Make something up on purpose. ^^

00:13:829 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

00:25:057 (7,8,1) - this will be nice - hmm.. I can't agree with the opinion of you.

00:28:566 (2,3) - doubles.. try not to! - Sorry. If other people mention the problem, I may fix it.

00:32:952 (8) - NC maybe - okay,I fix it.

00:42:074 (1,2,3,4) - space, maybe confusing - In my opinion, I don't want to fix it. Because of AR doesn't matter..

00:47:338 (2,3,4) - turn it into - Sorry...

00:49:443 (7,8) - slider after repeat? easier - Sorry... do on purpose.

00:55:057 (5) - angle to the top-left - a little fix it. :3

00:58:566 (1) - NC here, remove NC after fix

01:01:373 (1,2,3) - stax - nope

01:04:004 (4,5,6) - suddenly low spacing?? - nope. it is still 1.0x

01:10:495 (8) - NC, remove NC after - fix it

01:24:180 (1,2,3,4) - change ~ - Sorry, If other people mention the problem, I may fix it.

01:31:548 (1,2) - try not to - fix it.

01:52:425 (2,3) - space - no fix

01:57:513 (5,6,7) - same as 00:47:338 (2,3,4) - Sorry. no change.

02:05:934 (4,5,6) - bad flow - Why? i don't know why points out.

02:06:811 (2,3,4,5,6) - line pattern is frustrating, maybe add small angle - wwww omg. i fix it (a little)

02:16:460 (4) - NC maybe - fix it

02:21:548 - add circle - no fix. because I focused on the lyrics. so when i add it, bit awkward.

02:50:145 (1) - ehh a little unermapped cuz its kiai time hmm..? it will be no problem.

looking forward to seeing <Sentimental Dream> diff mapped finish! will remod~

thank you, handsome!

Artavia

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Artavia 2014-09-01T10:50:57+00:00

Change map-set.

Slow's EAZY - Delete

Normal, Hard - Re-mapping

HF's Insane - Delete.

Add Easy, Frobe's Insane and Rakuen's Extra (sooooooon)

Rakuen

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Rakuen 2014-09-07T13:00:57+00:00

Hi~

Here's my extra diff: http://puu.sh/bpgor/81a8fa68de.osu

Thanks

Artavia

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Artavia 2014-09-14T10:09:04+00:00

update!

Len

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Len 2014-09-17T17:20:59+00:00

Nah.

Artavia

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Artavia 2014-09-19T08:48:09+00:00

Fast wrote:
Nah.

슈팅스타

Artavia

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Artavia 2014-10-08T15:15:52+00:00

All done. Start!

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Tenseki 2014-10-08T16:06:16+00:00

Hi, PM Request
[Easy]
00:21:373 (1,2) - 제가 듣기엔 뭔가 이상한듯, 속도 50%해도 이상하구..
01:46:987 (1,2) - 1/4 칸씩 늘려주는것도 나쁘지 않을듯..
03:19:794 (3) - 이왕이면 흰색줄에 맞추는것도 나쁘지 않을듯..
[Normal]

01:00:671 (1) - NC풀고 01:01:373 (2) - 여기 NC
01:09:794 (1,2,3) - 노말치고 어려울것같네여..
02:44:531 (1) - 제가 모딩받을때 어디서 들은적이 있는데 노말엔 리버스 두번이상쓰면 별로 좋지않은거라 하더라구여..
02:55:759 (1) - ^
02:57:162 (3) - ^
02:54:355 (3) - NC - 깔맞춤

그리고 계속 3연타 같이 생긴게 보이는데 BPM떄문에 그런건지 생각됩니다만... 역시 노말유저분들이 플레이 하기 어려울듯..

[Hard]
00:32:864 (2) - 삭제 - 어울리긴 하는데 리듬에 안맞는것같네요, 밤이라 저만 그럴수있으니 Recheck
00:55:057 (5) - 너무 꼬은듯하네요, 저도 그렇게 만들다가 지적당한적이 있어서 한번 적어봅니다..
01:06:987 (5) - NC 빼고 01:07:688 (6) - NC

[Frobe's Insane]
브로브님을 여기서 뵙다니..
00:33:916 - 서클추가, 제생각엔 이게 더 좋을듯하네요..
01:44:092 - ^

저에겐 이게 최대인듯하네여..
[Rakuen's Extra]
i dont know about Extra diff... ,but exciting maps!

[Finish]
좋은노래며 좋은패턴이였고 저에겐 패턴공부만 한거같아서 오히려 얻어가는게 더 많은거같네요...
행운을 빌겠습니다. go ranked!

ExGon

Former osu!catch Champion: 2017

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ExGon 2014-10-08T16:30:05+00:00

간단한 모드

따로 뺀 힛사

00:13:127 -
01:23:302 -
03:25:408 -
이 세 구간의 힛사가 다른 난이도가 있네요 하나로 통일해주세요
전 clap을 추천합니다

힛사

00:42:425 (1) - 첫부분에 피니시를 넣어도 될듯
01:52:601 (1) - ''
02:37:162 (5) - 마지막 노트 힛사를 whistle로 넣으시고 주위 1/4로 2칸내에 있는 힛사는 없애세요
노말은 예외로 슬라이더 첫부분에 넣어야 되겠네요

이지

00:23:829 (1,1) - 이지에서 스피너랑 노트가 이렇게 가까이 있으면 안됩니다
00:45:232 (1,1) - 1번째랑 같습니다
01:13:302 (1,1) - ''
01:32:952 (1,1) - ''
01:44:881 (1,1) - ''
03:01:373 (1,2,3,4) - 제안인데 대충 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2113260 이정도로 고치신 다음 다시 노트 배치해보시는것도 나쁘지는 않을듯
03:04:180 (1,1) - 1번째랑 같습니다
03:12:601 (1) - 이 슬라이더 길이를 노래에 맞게 약간 줄여보시는게..
03:18:215 (1) - ''

제일 어려운 Hard 난이도의 힛사만 고치시고 이지노말은 t/131540 이거 이용해서 힛사 복제하시는게 좋을듯
옵션에 백업기능 있으니 만일을 대비해서 백업하세요

모딩을 너무 못해서 죄송하네요

Artavia

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Artavia 2014-10-09T02:16:29+00:00

Tenseki wrote:
No Comment - Fix

[Easy]
00:21:373 (1,2) - 제가 듣기엔 뭔가 이상한듯, 속도 50%해도 이상하구.. - 약간 엇박으로 간건데... 다른 지적이 오면 수정하겠습니다.
01:46:987 (1,2) - 1/4 칸씩 늘려주는것도 나쁘지 않을듯.. - 가사를 따라서 맞춘거기 때문에 현재로선 수정할 생각이 없습니다
03:19:794 (3) - 이왕이면 흰색줄에 맞추는것도 나쁘지 않을듯.. - 수정할 필요가 없다고 생각합니다
[Normal]

01:00:671 (1) - NC풀고 01:01:373 (2) - 여기 NC
01:09:794 (1,2,3) - 노말치고 어려울것같네여.. 난이도 분포상 조금 어려운 노멀을 계획했기 때문에 수정하지 않겠습니다.
02:44:531 (1) - 제가 모딩받을때 어디서 들은적이 있는데 노말엔 리버스 두번이상쓰면 별로 좋지않은거라 하더라구여.. 재지적이 들어오면 수정하겠습니다
02:55:759 (1) - ^ ^
02:57:162 (3) - ^ ^
02:54:355 (3) - NC - 깔맞춤

그리고 계속 3연타 같이 생긴게 보이는데 BPM떄문에 그런건지 생각됩니다만... 역시 노말유저분들이 플레이 하기 어려울듯..

이거 난이도 분포도 때문에 노린거예요. 곡 특성상 좀 잔잔할줄 알았는데 찍다보니까 그렇게 되기도 하더라고요

[Hard]
00:32:864 (2) - 삭제 - 어울리긴 하는데 리듬에 안맞는것같네요, 밤이라 저만 그럴수있으니 Recheck
00:55:057 (5) - 너무 꼬은듯하네요, 저도 그렇게 만들다가 지적당한적이 있어서 한번 적어봅니다.. 저도 상당히 걱정하면서 넣은 패턴이기 때문에 한번 더 두고 수정하겠습니다.
01:06:987 (5) - NC 빼고 01:07:688 (6) - NC 그냥 두겠습니다.

[Finish]
좋은노래며 좋은패턴이였고 저에겐 패턴공부만 한거같아서 오히려 얻어가는게 더 많은거같네요...
행운을 빌겠습니다. go ranked!

모딩해 주셔서 고맙습니다.

Artavia

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Topic Starter

Artavia 2014-10-09T02:41:20+00:00

ExGon wrote:
따로 뺀 힛사
00:13:127 - Clap+Finish로 동일하게 수정했습니다
01:23:302 - ^
03:25:408 - ^
이 세 구간의 힛사가 다른 난이도가 있네요 하나로 통일해주세요 Done
전 clap을 추천합니다

힛사
00:42:425 (1) - 첫부분에 피니시를 넣어도 될듯 Done
01:52:601 (1) - ^
02:37:162 (5) - 마지막 노트 힛사를 whistle로 넣으시고 주위 1/4로 2칸내에 있는 힛사는 없애세요
노말은 예외로 슬라이더 첫부분에 넣어야 되겠네요

이지
00:23:829 (1,1) - 이지에서 스피너랑 노트가 이렇게 가까이 있으면 안됩니다 00:23:478 (4) - 삭제하고 스피너를 당겼습니다
00:45:232 (1,1) - 1번째랑 같습니다 스피너 1/2박 당겼습니다.
01:13:302 (1,1) - '' 음... 이건 생각해 보도록 하겠습니다.
01:32:952 (1,1) - '' 1/1박 당겼습니다
01:44:881 (1,1) - '' 이거 어떻게 수정해야할지 모르겠네요
03:01:373 (1,2,3,4) - 제안인데 대충 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2113260 이정도로 고치신 다음 다시 노트 배치해보시는것도 나쁘지는 않을듯 수정
03:04:180 (1,1) - 1번째랑 같습니다 음... 재지적이 오면 수정하겠습니다.
03:12:601 (1) - 이 슬라이더 길이를 노래에 맞게 약간 줄여보시는게.. 오히려 늘리는 방향으로 수정했습니다.
03:18:215 (1) - '' 수정

제일 어려운 Hard 난이도의 힛사만 고치시고 이지노말은 t/131540 이거 이용해서 힛사 복제하시는게 좋을듯
옵션에 백업기능 있으니 만일을 대비해서 백업하세요 음... 이건 생각해보겠습니다.

모딩을 너무 못해서 죄송하네요 아닙니다. 모딩해 주시는것 만으로도 감사하게 생각합니다.

Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 2014-10-10T14:36:25+00:00

[General]
Disable letterbox for all difficulty

[Easy]

Always respect distance spacing in easy ^^

[Normal]

00:05:934 (1) - not sure about this reverse slider, might want to map the sound here 00:06:460 , since you mapped the same sound after instead of just drum 00:06:987 (2) and other note after~
01:36:811 (4) - slider to crunched >,<
01:46:987 (1,2,3) - make this symetric
02:44:531 (1,2) - this might be a bit to hard for normal, really short 2 reverse with a circle after xD (circle are more hard to get on accuracy then slider so is harder then this 02:57:162 (3,4) )
03:12:952 (2,3) - remove these 2, add a note here instead 03:13:127 , important sound~ like you did here 03:23:829 (1,2,3)
03:18:215 (5) - improve blanket with the end of 03:17:513 (4)

[Hard]
00:04:531 , 01:35:145 , 01:55:583 - remove useless greenline
00:25:583 (1) - Finsh on the begining of the slider
00:26:109 - add something, kinda losing rythmn here xD
00:31:022 (3) - Finish on the reverse
00:42:074 (1,2,3,4) - I seen this on insane but not on hard, might want to distance the triplet with the slider
01:22:250 (2) - add finish
01:35:759 (3) - finish on the begining of the slider
01:41:373 (4) - add finish at the beginng of the slider, and I think you wanted to put a clap in the begining, but you put it on slider instead xD
01:55:232 (3) - remove finish, add finish here instead 01:55:408 (5)
01:55:934 (3) - clap in the begining of the slider instead of whistle
03:24:355 (2) - add finish

GL

!! need more nano <3

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2014-10-11T05:57:38+00:00

Heh. As requested.

Format: Time (object) - suggestion | reason why I suggested it

Rakuen's Extra

00:30:145 (3,4,5,6,7) - I believe this is something you can improve. | It looks out of place.
00:34:881 (4) - How about moving this to x:348 y:132? | It creates some kind of weird flow.
00:42:425 (1,2) - How does this look? You can do it by rotating (1) by 16 degrees using Selection Centre, and then moving (2) to make a blanket. | RIP flow from (5) to (6,7,1).

Image

01:02:074 (1,3) - Properly stack the ends. | Nazi-Perfectionism.
03:25:759 (3) - Add a finish here? | lel.

Nothing much here. Nice map.

Frobe's Insane

Nothing here. I like the mapping style

Hard

00:08:566 (1,2,3) - Straighten this please. | Nazi-Perfectionism
00:17:162 (1,2) - Blanket please. | ^
00:21:197 (1,2,3) - Weird spacing between the slider and the hitcircles. | ^
00:30:671 (2,3) - Blanket? | ^
00:33:653 (3) - Move to x:200 y:272 | ^
01:37:162 (1) - Replace this with a slider or use hitcirlcles instead | The repeat doesn't follow anything.
01:48:215 (4) - Improve this slider's shape. | Yep.
01:50:320 (2,3,4) - Weird spacing here lolz. | ^
02:07:513 (6,7) - I suggest making this a blanket. | For perfection purposes.
02:11:548 (2,3) - I think the spacing here is too close. Consider moving (3) farther. | Can confuse players.
03:14:531 (4,5) - ^ | ^
03:18:215 (5,6) - Move (6) to the big white tick and then the hitcircle after the slider. | Sounds better.

Some parts can be still improved, overall is good.

Easy and Normal

Nothing too important here. Just try to improve some shapes of sliders and check the distance spacing.
Also try to blanket some notes. 110% certain, they will look better.

Short mod, sorry. :<
Good luck!

Artavia

454 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Artavia 2014-10-11T06:28:09+00:00

Julie wrote:
No Comment = Fix

[General]
Disable letterbox for all difficulty

[Easy]

Always respect distance spacing in easy ^^ looool

[Normal]

00:05:934 (1) - not sure about this reverse slider, might want to map the sound here 00:06:460 , since you mapped the same sound after instead of just drum
If other people mention the problem, I may fix it.

00:06:987 (2) and other note after~ ^
01:36:811 (4) - slider to crunched >,< xDD
01:46:987 (1,2,3) - make this symetric ....? This has already been symmetrical.
02:44:531 (1,2) - this might be a bit to hard for normal, really short 2 reverse with a circle after xD (circle are more hard to get on accuracy then slider so is harder then this 02:57:162 (3,4) I agree. Remove 1 reverse
03:12:952 (2,3) - remove these 2, add a note here instead 03:13:127 , important sound~ like you did here 03:23:829 (1,2,3) hmm.. sry. no fix.
03:18:215 (5) - improve blanket with the end of 03:17:513 (4)

[Hard]
00:04:531 , 01:35:145 , 01:55:583 - remove useless greenline
00:25:583 (1) - Finsh on the begining of the slider
00:26:109 - add something, kinda losing rhythm here xD - ahh... If other people mention the problem, I may fix it
00:31:022 (3) - Finish on the reverse
00:42:074 (1,2,3,4) - I seen this on insane but not on hard, might want to distance the triplet with the slider
01:22:250 (2) - add finish If other people mention the problem, I may fix it
01:35:759 (3) - finish on the begining of the slider
01:41:373 (4) - add finish at the beginng of the slider, and I think you wanted to put a clap in the begining, but you put it on slider instead xD
01:55:232 (3) - remove finish, add finish here instead 01:55:408 (5) My mistake. fix it.
01:55:934 (3) - clap in the begining of the slider instead of whistle
03:24:355 (2) - add finish

GL !! need more nano <3

Artavia

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Topic Starter

Artavia 2014-10-11T06:46:50+00:00

Mira-san wrote:
No Comment = Fix

Format: Time (object) - suggestion | reason why I suggested it

Hard
00:08:566 (1,2,3) - Straighten this please. | Nazi-Perfectionism
00:17:162 (1,2) - Blanket please. | ^
00:21:197 (1,2,3) - Weird spacing between the slider and the hitcircles. | ^ hmm.. no fix.
00:30:671 (2,3) - Blanket? | ^
00:33:653 (3) - Move to x:200 y:272 | ^
01:37:162 (1) - Replace this with a slider or use hitcirlcles instead | The repeat doesn't follow anything. no fix
01:48:215 (4) - Improve this slider's shape. | Yep.
01:50:320 (2,3,4) - Weird spacing here lolz. | ^ rly? hmm.. If other people mention the problem, I may fix it
02:07:513 (6,7) - I suggest making this a blanket. | For perfection purposes.
02:11:548 (2,3) - I think the spacing here is too close. Consider moving (3) farther. | Can confuse players.
03:14:531 (4,5) - ^ | ^
03:18:215 (5,6) - Move (6) to the big white tick and then the hitcircle after the slider. | Sounds better.

Some parts can be still improved, overall is good.

Easy and Normal
Nothing too important here. Just try to improve some shapes of sliders and check the distance spacing.
Also try to blanket some notes. 110% certain, they will look better.

Short mod, sorry. :<
Good luck!

Len

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Joined June 2012

Len 2014-10-12T08:49:07+00:00

fast irc mod

17:35 Artavia: 모12딩해주실 개트롤 구함
17:35 Fast: 신고
17:35 Artavia: ㅅㅂ
17:35 Artavia: 모딩점
17:35 Fast: irc모딛ㅇ해줌
17:35 Artavia: 그럼
17:35 Artavia: 남겨서 리플써주셈
17:35 Artavia: kds주게
17:36 Fast: ㅇ
17:36 Fast: np
17:36 *Artavia is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/443674 nano - A Genesis]
17:36 *Fast is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/164618 Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - Yes! YuYuYu*YuruYuri (TV Size)]
17:37 Fast: 이거듣고있으셈
17:37 Artavia: ?
17:37 Artavia: 저 매핑할게 산더미
17:37 Artavia: 공통점이 뭔줄알아?
17:37 Fast: 어쩔
17:37 Artavia: ㅇ
17:38 Fast: 하드가 너무어려움
17:38 Fast: bpm 171에비해
17:38 Fast: 점프가넘많음
17:38 Artavia: 나머지는
17:39 Fast: 00:08:741 (3,4,1,2,1,2,3) -
17:39 Fast: 00:19:969 (2) - 이거 모양을 다듬
17:39 Fast: 00:26:636 (3) - 여기에 뉴콤을주던지해서 점프에 혼란스럽지않게 하는것도 나쁘지않은듯
17:39 Fast: 00:25:583 (1,1) - 이거 거리가 00:26:285 (1,2) - 이 1/2 박자랑 점프 비슷해서
17:40 Fast: 00:26:109 - 여기 빈공간을위해
17:40 Fast: 00:25:583 (1) - 이거의 위치를 좀 떨어뜨리는것도
17:40 Fast: 00:29:443 - 노트추가
17:41 Fast: 00:45:232 (3) - 마찬가지로
17:41 Fast: 위치가 1/2 흐름에 맞는 위치라서
17:41 Fast: 좀 떨어뜨리는것도
17:41 Fast: 00:44:355 (1,2) - 아니면 이거의 위치를 떨어뜨리는게 좋음
17:41 *Fast is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/435406 nano - A Genesis [Hard]]
17:42 Fast: 00:55:583 (6) - 디스턴스
17:42 Fast: 전체적으로 00:59:794 (2,3,4,5) - 이런 흐름의 디스턴스가 넓은 점프는 하드에 어울리지 않다고봄..
17:43 Fast: 01:05:934 (1,2,3,4) - 이런건 ㄱㅊㄱㅊ
17:43 Fast: 01:09:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ㄴㄴ
17:43 Fast: http://puu.sh/c9d2O/fc3422d7cd.jpg 01:10:846 - ~ 01:11:723 -
17:43 Fast: 01:19:794 (2,1) - 점프가 너무큼
17:44 Fast: 01:58:566 (3) - 이노트 x111 y263에 이동하는게 흐름에좋음
17:45 Fast: 02:21:548 (3,4,5) - 디스턴스
17:45 Artavia: 궁금한게
17:45 Artavia: 01:09:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 얘는 왜 안되는거야?
17:45 Fast: 하드에
17:45 Fast: 1.5 1.75 점프가
17:45 Fast: 슬라끼리 점프면 괜찮은데
17:45 Fast: 노트끼리 이렇게 떨어져이ㅏㅆ고
17:46 Fast: 인세인이 존나 어려우면 모르겠는데
17:46 Fast: 그렇게추천은 안함...
17:46 Fast: 02:34:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ㄴㄴ
17:46 Artavia: kk
17:46 Fast: just no
17:46 Fast: 02:54:355 (1) - 모양
17:47 Fast: 03:17:338 (3,4) - 디스턴스
17:47 Fast: 03:15:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 이 전체적으로 디스턴스
17:47 Fast: 03:19:267 (1,2) - 이거까지포함
17:47 Fast: 끝
17:48 Fast: 디스턴스 좀 큰 하드 참고할거있으면
17:48 *Fast is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/355623 yuikonnu - Byoumei Koiwazurai [Hard]]
17:48 Fast: 이걸 참고해보는것도 좋음
17:48 Fast: 다른난이도는 나중에

Rakuen

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Rakuen 2014-10-16T12:00:52+00:00

Mira-san wrote:
Heh. As requested.

Format: Time (object) - suggestion | reason why I suggested it

Rakuen's Extra
00:30:145 (3,4,5,6,7) - I believe this is something you can improve. | It looks out of place. Will try to change pattern
00:34:881 (4) - How about moving this to x:348 y:132? | It creates some kind of weird flow. Ok
00:42:425 (1,2) - How does this look? You can do it by rotating (1) by 16 degrees using Selection Centre, and then moving (2) to make a blanket. | RIP flow from (5) to (6,7,1). Ok, fixed the flow abit too
Image
01:02:074 (1,3) - Properly stack the ends. | Nazi-Perfectionism. Ok
03:25:759 (3) - Add a finish here? | lel. Ok

Nothing much here. Nice map.

Short mod, sorry. :<
Good luck!

Thanks for mods!

My update: http://puu.sh/ceoTj/8ce75474e5.osu

Artavia

454 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Artavia 2014-10-16T13:11:05+00:00

update~

_WinRAWR

169 posts

Joined September 2013

_WinRAWR 2014-10-18T08:33:38+00:00

Hello I'm here from m4m!

Easy
Alright, so I am almost certain there is a ranking criteria for these Easy maps and this map does not fit the requirements. From what I know, distance snap must be on for low star difficulties and no sv changes...
I'm not sure but you might have to remap/fix the sv change and ds the notes so that the map is rankable.

Normal
01:16:460 (4) - Maybe change this to 3 singles so it goes better with the music?
02:23:478 (1) - End this on a better tick, where it ends + the finish sound sounds and plays bad (02:26:285 may be good?)
02:37:513 (5) - change to single

Hard
00:08:566 (1,2,3) - Remove (2) for better flow
00:29:618 (1,1) - Unexpected and awkward pause, definitely add some notes here
00:42:074 (1,2,3) - remove (2,3)
00:45:232 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to read because the spacing stays the same while the timing isn't. Fix please
01:56:460 (4,5,6) - Either space these out more or stack them, by first glance it looks like a triple
03:14:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move (5) a bit further out to the left, again, spacing is the same while timing is different

Frobe's Insane
00:29:443 (3,4,1) - Move up
00:42:425 (1,2,3,4) - All NC would be nice here :3
01:52:601 (1,2,3,4) - ^^
02:31:431 (1,2,1,2) - 02:31:431 (1,2,1,2) - sv change feels completely random and will mess a player up who is playing it for the first time
Very beautiful beatmap, good job :3

This was a winrawr mod ( ´ ▽ ` )

Len

2,812 posts

Joined June 2012

Len 2014-10-18T10:10:29+00:00

[Frobe]
00:06:987 (3,4) -

00:29:443 (3,4,1) - 쭈욱 연타가아니라 1/4 비우고 연타라서 헷갈리고 위치가 좀 안좋은부분이 ?

01:23:916 (1) - 지우고 01:24:004 - 여기에 노트?

01:35:408 (1,2,3,4) - ?

02:50:145 - ~ 02:56:285 - 여긴 안어울리는듯

03:23:127 (5) - ~

[Rakuen]
00:13:215 (2) - remove please like this 03:23:829 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -

00:48:916 - ~ 00:50:145 - try this timeline?

00:53:039 (2) - and 00:53:390 (4) - overmap?

00:55:320 (2) - and 00:55:671 (4) - same as above

01:00:408 (2) - remove

01:05:846 (5) - ^

01:06:899 - add note

01:08:829 (6) - and 01:09:180 (1) - remove

01:10:057 - add note

01:23:566 (3) - remove

02:00:232 (1) - ^

02:04:267 (2) - and 02:04:794 (4) - ^

02:51:285 (6) - ^

02:59:706 (6) - ^

03:00:057 (1) - ^

(rly overmappeddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd)

[normal]00:02:425 (1) - distance

00:09:794 (2) - ^

00:13:127 (2) - ^

00:15:408 (2) - x308 y304

00:19:443 (1,2) - distance

00:25:583 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 1.3?

01:02:074 (2) - x48 y84

01:09:794 (1) - x388 y244, 01:10:145 (2) - x314 y307, 01:10:320 (3) - x260 y324

01:11:548 (1) - x256 y204

01:16:285 (3) - x400 y156

01:34:531 (4) - distance

01:48:390 (3,1) - toooooooo far

그 뭐냐 1.3하다가 1.0하다가 1.1하다가.. 뒤에는 알아서 디스턴스만 맞으면 ㄱㅊ을듯 그리드풀고 세세하게 하는것도 좋은방법

Artavia

454 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Artavia 2014-10-18T12:52:47+00:00

Fast wrote:
No Comment = Fix

[normal]00:02:425 (1) - distance

00:09:794 (2) - ^

00:13:127 (2) - ^

00:15:408 (2) - x308 y304

00:19:443 (1,2) - distance

00:25:583 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 1.3? 1.3

01:02:074 (2) - x48 y84

01:09:794 (1) - x388 y244, 01:10:145 (2) - x314 y307, 01:10:320 (3) - x260 y324

01:11:548 (1) - x256 y204

01:16:285 (3) - x400 y156

01:34:531 (4) - distance

01:48:390 (3,1) - toooooooo far

그 뭐냐 1.3하다가 1.0하다가 1.1하다가.. 뒤에는 알아서 디스턴스만 맞으면 ㄱㅊ을듯 그리드풀고 세세하게 하는것도 좋은방법

고마워요~

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-10-18T13:01:21+00:00

Fast wrote:
[Rakuen]
00:13:215 (2) - remove please like this 03:23:829 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -

00:48:916 - ~ 00:50:145 - try this timeline?

00:53:039 (2) - and 00:53:390 (4) - overmap?

00:55:320 (2) - and 00:55:671 (4) - same as above

01:00:408 (2) - remove

01:05:846 (5) - ^

01:06:899 - add note

01:08:829 (6) - and 01:09:180 (1) - remove

01:10:057 - add note

01:23:566 (3) - remove

02:00:232 (1) - ^

02:04:267 (2) - and 02:04:794 (4) - ^

02:51:285 (6) - ^

02:59:706 (6) - ^

03:00:057 (1) - ^

(rly overmappeddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd)

그 뭐냐 1.3하다가 1.0하다가 1.1하다가.. 뒤에는 알아서 디스턴스만 맞으면 ㄱㅊ을듯 그리드풀고 세세하게 하는것도 좋은방법[/notice]

Fixed all overmap things mentioned~ Thanks!

Done~

My update: http://puu.sh/ch2D5/d80519887f.osu

Artavia

454 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Artavia 2014-10-18T13:09:10+00:00

_WinRAWR wrote:
No Comments = Fix

Hello I'm here from m4m!

Easy
Alright, so I am almost certain there is a ranking criteria for these Easy maps and this map does not fit the requirements. From what I know, distance snap must be on for low star difficulties and no sv changes...
I'm not sure but you might have to remap/fix the sv change and ds the notes so that the map is rankable. hmm... yeah

Normal
01:16:460 (4) - Maybe change this to 3 singles so it goes better with the music? no fix
02:23:478 (1) - End this on a better tick, where it ends + the finish sound sounds and plays bad (02:26:285 may be good?)
02:37:513 (5) - change to single

Hard
00:08:566 (1,2,3) - Remove (2) for better flow no fix
00:29:618 (1,1) - Unexpected and awkward pause, definitely add some notes here
00:42:074 (1,2,3) - remove (2,3) no fix

This was a winrawr mod ( ´ ▽ ` )

Thanks for moding!

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-10-18T13:20:00+00:00

Woops~

New update fix: http://puu.sh/ch3E8/e26e268e7f.osu

Thanks!

Edit: Help me untick the letterbox and widescreen if there's any

Last edited by Rakuen 2014-10-18T22:22:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Frobe

Former osu!catch Champion: 2015

743 posts

Joined January 2011

Frobe 2014-10-18T17:23:04+00:00

Tenseki wrote:
[Frobe's Insane]
브로브님을 여기서 뵙다니..
00:33:916 - 서클추가, 제생각엔 이게 더 좋을듯하네요..
01:44:092 - ^

저에겐 이게 최대인듯하네여..

no fix

_WinRAWR wrote:
Frobe's Insane
00:29:443 (3,4,1) - Move up
00:42:425 (1,2,3,4) - All NC would be nice here :3
01:52:601 (1,2,3,4) - ^^
02:31:431 (1,2,1,2) - 02:31:431 (1,2,1,2) - sv change feels completely random and will mess a player up who is playing it for the first time well... i think this is no problem.
Very beautiful beatmap, good job :3

i have checked your mod. but, i don't think need to fix it now. if i get the same mod it, i'll fix it.

thank you for mod

Fast wrote:
[Frobe]
00:06:987 (3,4) - 이전의 2번슬라랑 3번슬라의 동선이 더 안좋아지는거 같아

00:29:443 (3,4,1) - 쭈욱 연타가아니라 1/4 비우고 연타라서 헷갈리고 위치가 좀 안좋은부분이 ? 위에서 지적 받긴 했는데 어프로치 서클이 가려져서 박자 구분하기 어려운게 아니니 문제 없다 생각함. 일단 보류

01:23:916 (1) - 지우고 01:24:004 - 여기에 노트? 처음엔 모딩한 박자로 뒀는데 단순한 느낌이 들어서 지금으로 배치함. 이건 바꿀생각 없음

01:35:408 (1,2,3,4) - ? ㅠㅠ 이것도 보류. 이후로 같은 모딩 받으면 고침

02:50:145 - ~ 02:56:285 - 여긴 안어울리는듯 좀 생각해보고...

03:23:127 (5) - ~ 이것도 ^^꺼랑 같이 별 생각 없이 둔 건데, 마찬가지로 같은 모딩 받으면 고치겠음.

당장 고칠 필요는 없어보이니... 패쑤

Last edited by Frobe 2014-10-21T04:01:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

RikiH_ 2014-10-18T22:10:26+00:00

I was supposed to mod this today. I'm sorry but I came back home really late so now I'm really tired, I will mod it tomorrow evening or Monday, and I will edit this post

Okay time to mod this for real xD

Rakuen's Extra

00:13:215 (2) - I feel like this note is really unconfortable to play because there isn't any big sound here... I would delete it and re-arrange the pattern like you did at the end in 03:25:408 (1,2,3)
00:28:039 (7) - I would move it to 79|176 or something similar, for consistency with the rest of the pattern, it also looks and flows nice in playmode (in my opinion)
00:30:320 (4,5,6,7,8) - If I were you, I'd try to create a regular figure here, I suggest a penthagon
00:59:267 (1) - This should end in 00:59:531 for consistency with 00:47:688 (3) and 00:50:846 (1) and 01:01:723 (2) and so on
01:23:566 (3) - Same as 00:13:215 (2)
01:50:145 (2) - Move this to 256|272 for symmetry and for a better flow
02:14:355 (1,2,3,4) - I think these 1/4 jumps are a little too high compared to the rest of the map, I'd reduce the spacing a bit
02:17:162 (4,5) - I think you should move 5 a little bit to the right, or unstack the following slider, since these sliders overlap in playmode
02:53:302 (2) - (Nazi) The spacing looks a bit weird if you look closely, maybe move the 2nd sliderpoint to 414|319
03:03:829 - I think this big sound should be included (with a clap) so maybe shorten the slider a bit

Frobe's Insane

01:32:952 (3) - I'd put a NC here
01:35:320 (4,1) - I'm not sure about it... It's a bit too hard compared to the rest of the diff, so consider reducind the spacing here
02:52:250 (3,1) - Stack these properly

Hard

00:35:408 (4) - Sliders with two repeats like this break the flow in my opinion so I suggest to split it in two
01:01:373 (1) - This looks weird to me, I'd make it symmetrical!
01:45:583 (3) - Same as 00:35:408 (4)
02:14:881 (1) - This NC should be on the following note 02:15:057 (2)
02:57:162 (1) - You know
03:08:039 (5) - I don't like this shape, the curve is really weird...

Normal

00:04:180 (3,4) - Uh, I don't really like this, it's just ugly, sorry

00:19:443 (1,2) - I suggest to avoid jumps like this in Normal diffs, they can be really tricky and unreadable for newbies
00:41:022 (4) - What if you make a normal round slider? This looks a bit weird
01:16:460 (4) - ^
01:46:987 (1,2,3) - Make this pattern a little better-looking
02:02:425 (4) - Fix spacing here
02:45:232 (2) - ^ (This looks really weird)
02:49:443 (1,2) - These should have the same shape

Easy

00:19:969 (2,1,2) - Fix this pattern and make it symmetrycal
01:13:302 (1,1) - These are too nera for an easy diff... I also highly suggest to move the slider away from the center of the grid because it's unreadable for newbies
01:54:004 (2) - The spacing here is really odd, fix it
02:46:987 (2) - Here too, the spacing here is not perfect and you can almost notice in in playmode
03:04:180 (1,1) - They are again too near, try to end the spinner in 03:06:285

______________

This mapset is solid. I like it! I just think Easy and Normal need some aesthetical improvement.
Good luck, take a star

EscapeReality

133 posts

Joined September 2013

EscapeReality 2014-10-21T03:29:24+00:00

Hi, returning my mod~ Excuse my crappy formatting

Easy
00:45:057 (1) - would cut this to the white tick instead of red, the recovery time is a bit harsh for new players.

From osu! wiki (https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy)
The reasoning is because most new players are going to react slowly to a spinner, so there's a delay in starting them. Then they will also spin wildly, usually drawing along the perimeter of the screen. Once the spinner is complete, they will be most probably disoriented and wondering where their cursor is. This is the reason why if you have a spinner in the middle of a mapped phrase, you should allow for as much time as possible for recovery. A good rule of thumb is 3-4 beats after a spinner, but this can vary depending on BPM.

01:13:302 (1) - here, as well, way too little recovery time for an easy
01:23:302 (5) - reverse slider instead?
01:44:881 (1) - spinner recovery
02:03:829 (4,5,1) - sounds a bit too empty here, for kiai i would always fill as much time as possible with objects
02:59:969 (4) - you could do a better blanket here, if that's what you're going for
03:04:180 (1) - more spinner recovery
03:25:408 (1) - would reverse slider here, I know it's an easy but I feel like the end needs an extra kick and a reverse slider isn't going to make it much harder

Normal
01:55:408 (3) - could blanket better here
02:16:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think this is a bit of a diff spike
03:12:601 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds awkward, since you're ignoring the red ticks, would just use a slider on white, slider on red, slider on white

Hard
I think AR 8 plays better.

Frobe

Former osu!catch Champion: 2015

743 posts

Joined January 2011

Frobe 2014-10-21T03:52:14+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
Frobe's Insane

01:32:952 (3) - I'd put a NC here
01:35:320 (4,1) - I'm not sure about it... It's a bit too hard compared to the rest of the diff, so consider reducind the spacing here
changed pattern
02:52:250 (3,1) - Stack these properly

all fixed, thank you

osu file format v13

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Bl4ckk

110 posts

Joined August 2013

Bl4ckk 2014-10-21T09:50:41+00:00

Here for your M4M

Let's start...
Easy
I suggest to put Cs: 2. It's not necessary but it's better for an easy diff.
01:09:794 (4) - Same y as this one 01:08:390 (2) - So please put it down a little bit, just one square is needed (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156069)
01:11:899 (2) - This one doesn't really fit any sound... So... Put it back to 01:11:723 (2) - And add a note here: 01:12:776 (3) - (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156072)
01:39:969 (3) - Whistle sounds good here!
03:06:987 (1) - Too hard as a jump for an easy diff. A low level player can't take this note right after a spinner, so, you can remove it
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156078 This part doesn't really fit the song, so, you can try to do something like this..
Normal
AR -1, if you want.
02:50:145 (2) - Try to put the end of this, in the end of this 02:48:741 (4) -
Hard
00:06:285 (2,3,4,5) - I can't understand this spacing...
00:26:811 (4) - Can you just put this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156092 here and do a good spacing? D:
00:40:145 (2) - This made me a little bit confused. Why did you slow it?
00:48:039 (1,2) - This jump is much easier than this one 00:48:566 (3,4) - . I can't understand why did you do this on the whole map
Frobe's Insane
00:24:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - First of all, I can't hear a stream. If you really want to do a stream here, make it with a sound, at least.
01:23:916 (1) - Add a timing point with default drum preset. 94% of volume. Put a clap in the slider, than, the first and the third notes of the triplet are finish hitsound, and the second is a clap.
01:32:601 - And here, add the timing points with the sounds you wanna have.
02:37:338 (4) - It's better if you change that reverse slider with a slow slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156111
Rakuen's Extra
01:23:478 - This is not a triplet, i can't hear it. You can do a thing like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156115
01:24:004 (1) - Heya, default drum preset, make it a clap
02:14:355 - So hard... it reminds me the big black... Can you do it in a different way?
03:01:373 - Can't hear triplets here too..

Waiting for ya!
Hope I helped.

Artavia

454 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Artavia 2014-10-21T09:56:49+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
I was supposed to mod this today. I'm sorry but I came back home really late so now I'm really tired, I will mod it tomorrow evening or Monday, and I will edit this post

Okay time to mod this for real xD

No Comment = Fix

Hard

00:35:408 (4) - Sliders with two repeats like this break the flow in my opinion so I suggest to split it in two
01:01:373 (1) - This looks weird to me, I'd make it symmetrical!
01:45:583 (3) - Same as 00:35:408 (4) If I get the same mod it, I'll fix it.
02:14:881 (1) - This NC should be on the following note 02:15:057 (2)
02:57:162 (1) - You know
03:08:039 (5) - I don't like this shape, the curve is really weird...

Normal

00:04:180 (3,4) - Uh, I don't really like this, it's just ugly, sorry Yeah... But I'll not fix it
00:19:443 (1,2) - I suggest to avoid jumps like this in Normal diffs, they can be really tricky and unreadable for newbies
00:41:022 (4) - What if you make a normal round slider? This looks a bit weird
01:16:460 (4) - ^
01:46:987 (1,2,3) - Make this pattern a little better-looking
02:02:425 (4) - Fix spacing here
02:45:232 (2) - ^ (This looks really weird)
02:49:443 (1,2) - These should have the same shape

Easy

00:19:969 (2,1,2) - Fix this pattern and make it symmetrycal It is already symmetrical patterns.. What do you mean?
01:13:302 (1,1) - These are too nera for an easy diff... I also highly suggest to move the slider away from the center of the grid because it's unreadable for newbies
01:54:004 (2) - The spacing here is really odd, fix it
02:46:987 (2) - Here too, the spacing here is not perfect and you can almost notice in playmode
03:04:180 (1,1) - They are again too near, try to end the spinner in 03:06:285

______________

This mapset is solid. I like it! I just think Easy and Normal need some aesthetical improvement.
Good luck, take a star

Thanks.

Artavia

454 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Artavia 2014-10-21T10:14:15+00:00

EscapeReality wrote:
Hi, returning my mod~ Excuse my crappy formatting

No Comment = Fix

Easy
00:45:057 (1) - would cut this to the white tick instead of red, the recovery time is a bit harsh for new players.

From osu! wiki (https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy)
The reasoning is because most new players are going to react slowly to a spinner, so there's a delay in starting them. Then they will also spin wildly, usually drawing along the perimeter of the screen. Once the spinner is complete, they will be most probably disoriented and wondering where their cursor is. This is the reason why if you have a spinner in the middle of a mapped phrase, you should allow for as much time as possible for recovery. A good rule of thumb is 3-4 beats after a spinner, but this can vary depending on BPM.

01:13:302 (1) - here, as well, way too little recovery time for an easy
01:23:302 (5) - reverse slider instead? no fix
01:44:881 (1) - spinner recovery
02:03:829 (4,5,1) - sounds a bit too empty here, for kiai i would always fill as much time as possible with objects a little fix it
02:59:969 (4) - you could do a better blanket here, if that's what you're going for no fix
03:04:180 (1) - more spinner recovery
03:25:408 (1) - would reverse slider here, I know it's an easy but I feel like the end needs an extra kick and a reverse slider isn't going to make it much harder no fix

Normal
01:55:408 (3) - could blanket better here If I get the same mod it, I'll fix it.
02:16:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think this is a bit of a diff spike no fix
03:12:601 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds awkward, since you're ignoring the red ticks, would just use a slider on white, slider on red, slider on white no fix

Hard
I think AR 8 plays better. Sorry. But I do not fix it

Dasheroo wrote:
Here for your M4M
Let's start...
Easy
I suggest to put Cs: 2. It's not necessary but it's better for an easy diff. no fix

01:09:794 (4) - Same y as this one 01:08:390 (2) - So please put it down a little bit, just one square is needed (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156069)
01:11:899 (2) - This one doesn't really fit any sound... So... Put it back to 01:11:723 (2) - And add a note here: 01:12:776 (3) - (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156072)
01:39:969 (3) - Whistle sounds good here!
03:06:987 (1) - Too hard as a jump for an easy diff. A low level player can't take this note right after a spinner, so, you can remove it
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156078 This part doesn't really fit the song, so, you can try to do something like this..

Normal
AR -1, if you want.
02:50:145 (2) - Try to put the end of this, in the end of this 02:48:741 (4) -

Hard
00:06:285 (2,3,4,5) - I can't understand this spacing...
00:26:811 (4) - Can you just put this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156092 here and do a good spacing? D: no fix
00:40:145 (2) - This made me a little bit confused. Why did you slow it? focus lyrics and mood
00:48:039 (1,2) - This jump is much easier than this one 00:48:566 (3,4) - . I can't understand why did you do this on the whole map You can understand later.

Waiting for ya!
Hope I helped.

Thanks.

jtd1

195 posts

Joined June 2012

jtd1 2014-10-21T10:54:03+00:00

Hello, M4M from what seems like ages ago...

General

AiMod says Easy / Normal / Hard has "letterbox in breaks" conflicts with the 2 guest difficulties. I don't think this is a problem, but it's probably a good idea to make you aware of this :p

Easy

I would say that the spacing is the biggest problem here. Save the larger jumps for the Kiai time, and it'll work better.

00:07:513 (3,4) - These notes are too far apart - move them closer together
00:21:373 (1) - Move to x:240 y:232?
00:21:723 (2) - Move the slider to x:344 y:168?
00:29:443 (2) - Move to x:264 y:128?
00:30:846 (1,2) - Personally I think these notes are too far apart. Move them closer together?
00:31:197 (2,1) - Most people playing an Easy diff will struggle with this jump. Move them closer together.
00:35:759 (3) - Move to x:248 y:136?
00:36:811 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Reduce the spacing on this, I don't think the Distance snap should be 1.5 x. Make it around 1.1 or 1.2.
00:45:057 (1) - Not sure I'd use a spinner here, but it's your choice.
00:50:495 (4) - Move to x:400 y:160
01:13:302 (1) - I would end the spinner here, to give the newbie player time to recover from the spinner.
01:16:109 (1) - The slider needs to repeat on the red tick at 01:16:635 imo.
01:18:039 (2) - Unsure about this - remap?
01:44:881 (1) - Unsure about this - change to some circles / sliders?
02:46:636 (1,2) - Move (1) to x:160 y:272 and move (2) to x:48 y:272
03:04:180 (1) - End the spinner at 03:05:760
03:06:987 (1,2,3,4) - Change the rhythm into this

03:23:127 (3) - Change the length of the slider from 3/2 to 1/1, and then move the slider to 03:23:127

Normal

The use of the triples worries me, as I don't think they should be in a Normal diff...

00:04:180 (3) - Move to x:176 y:120
00:36:811 - I think the slowing down of the sliders isn't a great idea, especially since the song is reaching Kiai time...
01:16:460 (4) - Replace with 2 circles, one on 01:16:460 and one on 01:16:635
01:18:916 (1,2) - These sliders don't match the song very well imo.
01:32:950 - Turn the hitsound volume up for this timing section?
01:48:039 (2) - Move to x:176 y:208
01:58:279 - Change the rhythm to this?

02:21:899 (3,4) - The hitsounds on these 2 notes don't sound very nice. Lower the volume?
03:18:215 (5) - Change the slider length from 2/1 to 3/2
03:19:794 (1) - Remove NC?
03:21:022 (2) - Add NC?

Hard

00:05:934 (1) - Move to x:424 y:64
00:06:285 (2,3,4,5,6) - Swap the positions of (3) and (5) ?
00:26:285 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is a bit weird for me. Consider changing?
01:19:794 (2) - Move to x:240 y:40
01:39:794 (1) - Remove NC?
01:40:846 (2) - Add NC?
02:32:601 (5,6) - This overlap is hideous. Remove the overlap please.
03:18:215 (5,6,7) - I don't think the notes here work too well. Change?

Frobe's Insane

Check AiMod, there are a few unsnapped notes.

Can't really mod this, ~~I'm not a good enough player to play this map~~

Rakuen's Extra

Same as Frobe's - can't mod this because it's too strong for me

Good luck with the map, it all seems very nice

Frobe

Former osu!catch Champion: 2015

743 posts

Joined January 2011

Frobe 2014-10-21T17:13:37+00:00

Dasheroo wrote:
Frobe's Insane
00:24:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - First of all, I can't hear a stream. If you really want to do a stream here, make it with a sound, at least.
01:23:916 (1) - Add a timing point with default drum preset. 94% of volume. Put a clap in the slider, than, the first and the third notes of the triplet are finish hitsound, and the second is a clap.
01:32:601 - And here, add the timing points with the sounds you wanna have.
02:37:338 (4) - It's better if you change that reverse slider with a slow slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156111

no fix... sorry, i do not agree at all.

jtd1 wrote:
Frobe's Insane

Check AiMod, there are a few unsnapped notes.

Can't really mod this, ~~I'm not a good enough player to play this map~~

oops, thx

fixed

osu file format v13

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232,208,180495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,180671,5,8,0:0:0:0:
64,24,180846,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,112,181022,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,32,181197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,208,181373,6,0,L|240:304,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,336,181636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,336,181723,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,356,181899,6,0,P|432:348|464:320,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,248,182250,2,0,P|116:218|99:179,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,182601,2,0,P|347:99|346:56,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,57,183829,6,0,L|352:140,1,71.25
340,164,184180,6,0,P|248:172|216:92,1,190,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,260,184706,2,0,B|136:240|184:268|184:268|232:260|232:260|208:256|196:236,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,337,185232,2,0,B|112:360|112:360|124:348|128:332,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,181,185759,2,0,P|168:251|128:331,1,190,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,372,186197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,372,186285,2,0,P|44:332|64:276,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,181,186636,2,0,P|125:136|114:91,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,132,186987,6,0,B|124:136|124:136|156:156|156:156|232:160,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,104,187513,2,0,B|308:100|308:100|276:80|276:80|200:76,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,181,188039,2,0,B|99:225|99:225|111:261|103:301|103:301|111:333|111:333|124:301,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,236,188566,5,8,0:0:0:0:
20,264,188741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,324,188916,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,320,189004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,189092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,112,189267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,116,189355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,120,189443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,189618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,140,189794,6,0,B|360:92|388:44|388:44|376:4|376:4|360:28|360:28|368:56,1,190,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,222,190320,2,0,P|447:189|456:100,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,222,190846,2,0,P|64:189|56:100,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,8,191373,2,0,B|296:24|296:24|224:56,1,190,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,42,191811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,42,191899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,140,192074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,222,192250,2,0,B|276:188|276:188|268:128,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,326,192601,6,0,B|276:246|276:246|288:190|288:190|281:139,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,364,193127,2,0,B|244:372|244:372|296:352|344:368|344:368|384:368|376:348|376:348|363:346,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,193653,2,0,B|228:104|228:104|176:124|128:108|128:108|88:108|96:128|96:128|108:129,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,192,194180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,32,194355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,56,194443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,80,194531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,192,194706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,194881,2,0,L|120:304,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,195145,2,0,L|456:220,1,47.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,148,195408,6,0,B|145:121|73:133|73:133|117:129|141:97,1,190,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,258,195934,2,0,B|303:313|369:346|369:346|331:323|292:335,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,128,196460,2,0,B|288:65|255:0|255:0|272:41|310:54,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,227,196987,2,0,B|154:275|144:347|144:347|153:304|130:271,1,190,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,291,197425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,291,197513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,197688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,197,197864,2,0,B|356:180|392:176|392:176|372:172|364:160,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,198215,6,0,P|160:200|216:308,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,252,198741,2,0,P|492:180|436:72,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,199267,2,0,B|160:36|160:36|136:52|136:52|84:28|56:56|48:108|120:80,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,16,199794,6,0,P|320:28|376:16,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,200145,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,47,200232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,46,200320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,128,200495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,127,200582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,126,200670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,56,200846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,16,201022,6,0,B|271:83|332:126|332:126|304:129|275:95,1,190,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,340,201548,2,0,B|206:285|132:286|132:286|153:267|196:277,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,63,202074,2,0,B|138:84|198:39|198:39|192:67|152:84,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,186,202601,2,0,B|311:206|290:277|290:277|278:251|300:216,1,190,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,263,203127,2,0,B|99:208|74:138|74:138|99:152|102:196,1,190,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,188,203566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,188,203653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,336,203829,6,0,L|304:344,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,300,204092,2,0,L|317:303,1,47.5
224,192,204355,6,0,P|212:140|232:100,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,48,204618,2,0,L|175:45,1,47.5
396,156,204881,6,0,L|301:150,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,205145,2,0,L|176:194,1,47.5
56,136,205408,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,336,205583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,205759,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-10-23T15:09:24+00:00

RikiH_ wrote:
I was supposed to mod this today. I'm sorry but I came back home really late so now I'm really tired, I will mod it tomorrow evening or Monday, and I will edit this post

Okay time to mod this for real xD

Rakuen's Extra

00:13:215 (2) - I feel like this note is really unconfortable to play because there isn't any big sound here... I would delete it and re-arrange the pattern like you did at the end in 03:25:408 (1,2,3) Keep for constant pattern
00:28:039 (7) - I would move it to 79|176 or something similar, for consistency with the rest of the pattern, it also looks and flows nice in playmode (in my opinion) Keep for stacked triplets
00:30:320 (4,5,6,7,8) - If I were you, I'd try to create a regular figure here, I suggest a penthagon Nothing wrong here, flow is quite okay ._.
00:59:267 (1) - This should end in 00:59:531 for consistency with 00:47:688 (3) and 00:50:846 (1) and 01:01:723 (2) and so on This consistency doesn't make sense, so the start of the KIAI ends at red tick which is 00:48:215 - and then the 2nd part is already stayed with red tick too 00:59:443 -
01:23:566 (3) - Same as 00:13:215 (2) Keep for constant pattern
01:50:145 (2) - Move this to 256|272 for symmetry and for a better flow Fixed to symmetry with different position
02:14:355 (1,2,3,4) - I think these 1/4 jumps are a little too high compared to the rest of the map, I'd reduce the spacing a bit I find fun to play in Extra
02:17:162 (4,5) - I think you should move 5 a little bit to the right, or unstack the following slider, since these sliders overlap in playmode No change here, but maybe will change in stack latency if needed. Keep for proper snap in mapping
02:53:302 (2) - (Nazi) The spacing looks a bit weird if you look closely, maybe move the 2nd sliderpoint to 414|319 Fixed
03:03:829 - I think this big sound should be included (with a clap) so maybe shorten the slider a bit Fixed

______________

This mapset is solid. I like it! I just think Easy and Normal need some aesthetical improvement.
Good luck, take a star

Thanks for mods!

Dasheroo wrote:
Here for your M4M
Let's start...

Rakuen's Extra
01:23:478 - This is not a triplet, i can't hear it. You can do a thing like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2156115 Keep for constant pattern
01:24:004 (1) - Heya, default drum preset, make it a clap Keep, not too special hitsound there
02:14:355 - So hard... it reminds me the big black... Can you do it in a different way? Nope, nothing to do with big black =_=
03:01:373 - Can't hear triplets here too.. Keep for constant pattern

Waiting for ya!
Hope I helped.

Thanks for mods!

My update: http://puu.sh/cnqsQ/ec4a050a04.osu

Artavia

454 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Artavia 2014-10-25T10:16:14+00:00

jtd1 wrote:
Hello, M4M from what seems like ages ago...

No Comment = Fix

General

AiMod says Easy / Normal / Hard has "letterbox in breaks" conflicts with the 2 guest difficulties. I don't think this is a problem, but it's probably a good idea to make you aware of this :p

Easy

I would say that the spacing is the biggest problem here. Save the larger jumps for the Kiai time, and it'll work better.

00:07:513 (3,4) - These notes are too far apart - move them closer together
00:21:373 (1) - Move to x:240 y:232? no fix
00:21:723 (2) - Move the slider to x:344 y:168?
00:29:443 (2) - Move to x:264 y:128? no fix
00:30:846 (1,2) - Personally I think these notes are too far apart. Move them closer together?
00:31:197 (2,1) - Most people playing an Easy diff will struggle with this jump. Move them closer together.
00:35:759 (3) - Move to x:248 y:136? no fix
00:36:811 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Reduce the spacing on this, I don't think the Distance snap should be 1.5 x. Make it around 1.1 or 1.2.
00:45:057 (1) - Not sure I'd use a spinner here, but it's your choice.
00:50:495 (4) - Move to x:400 y:160
01:13:302 (1) - I would end the spinner here, to give the newbie player time to recover from the spinner.
01:16:109 (1) - The slider needs to repeat on the red tick at 01:16:635 imo.
01:18:039 (2) - Unsure about this - remap? no fix
01:44:881 (1) - Unsure about this - change to some circles / sliders? no fix
02:46:636 (1,2) - Move (1) to x:160 y:272 and move (2) to x:48 y:272 ^
03:04:180 (1) - End the spinner at 03:05:760
03:06:987 (1,2,3,4) - Change the rhythm into this
03:23:127 (3) - Change the length of the slider from 3/2 to 1/1, and then move the slider to 03:23:127

Normal

The use of the triples worries me, as I don't think they should be in a Normal diff...

00:04:180 (3) - Move to x:176 y:120
00:36:811 - I think the slowing down of the sliders isn't a great idea, especially since the song is reaching Kiai time... Yeah... If I get the same mod it, I'll fix it.
01:16:460 (4) - Replace with 2 circles, one on 01:16:460 and one on 01:16:635
01:18:916 (1,2) - These sliders don't match the song very well imo.
01:32:950 - Turn the hitsound volume up for this timing section? If I get the same mod it, I'll fix it.
01:48:039 (2) - Move to x:176 y:208 no fix
01:58:279 - Change the rhythm to this?
02:21:899 (3,4) - The hitsounds on these 2 notes don't sound very nice. Lower the volume?
03:18:215 (5) - Change the slider length from 2/1 to 3/2 already 2/1
03:19:794 (1) - Remove NC? no fix
03:21:022 (2) - Add NC?

Hard

00:05:934 (1) - Move to x:424 y:64 no fix
00:06:285 (2,3,4,5,6) - Swap the positions of (3) and (5) ?
00:26:285 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is a bit weird for me. Consider changing? no fix
01:19:794 (2) - Move to x:240 y:40 a little fix
01:39:794 (1) - Remove NC?
01:40:846 (2) - Add NC?
02:32:601 (5,6) - This overlap is hideous. Remove the overlap please.
03:18:215 (5,6,7) - I don't think the notes here work too well. Change? Remove Whistle

Frobe's Insane

Check AiMod, there are a few unsnapped notes.

Can't really mod this, ~~I'm not a good enough player to play this map~~

Rakuen's Extra

Same as Frobe's - can't mod this because it's too strong for me

Good luck with the map, it all seems very nice

Thanks.

+ all update!

Sognux

131 posts

Joined July 2013

Sognux 2014-10-28T17:43:27+00:00

Hello! From my modding queue!

Forgive me if it's bad, i just woke up from a ''nap''

General
http://puu.sh/cuf4c/919cf362ee.jpg Maybe less Kiai Time?

Hard
00:57:513 (5,6) - Move up the hit circle so that you like go in a straight line, would look better that way.
01:32:952 (1) - What's with the timing points in the slider?
02:21:723 (5,1) - Is there possible to get something in between here? It feels kinda empty

03:02:601 (5,1) - ^

Frobe's Insane
00:02:425 (1,2) - This felt weird for some reason o.o
00:02:776 (2) - Maybe put this like right above it so you just drag your cursor in a straight line?
02:21:899 (3,1) - Feels empty o.o

Rakuen's Extra
Couldnt find anything wrong with this, just thought that some of the jumps were abit too hard but that's really nothing to think about (02:01:899 (1,2,3) - )

Good luck getting this ranked!

aigoh

398 posts

Joined February 2014

aigoh 2014-10-30T01:16:26+00:00

몇몇 벳하고 모더들은 예전 포스팅도 읽는듯하니 다른사람도 이해해야될부분은 영어쓸게요.
모르는 영어로 된 줄임말 있으면 제 배너 참고하시면 됩니다.

[General]
1) BG랭크기준 사이즈는 1024x768아니면 1366x768입니다. 사이즈 바꿔놨습니다. http://puu.sh/cvaq1.jpg
2) 키아이 타임은 같게.
a. Normal, Hard에 첫번째 kiai 끝부분 00:13:478으로 바꾸세요.
b. Frobe’s insane에도 키아이가 같지않네요. 밑에 Frobe씨가 보게 적어두겠습니다.

[Hard]

[*Timing/composition/flow]
* 00:33:829 –00:30:320 -02:08:390 -02:14:706 -여기 싱글노트든 슬라이더든 뭔가 있어야될듯. Fill in these gaps
* 01:51:723 (6) – 01:51:899 –에 끝나는 slider으로 바꾸세요. Change to slider
* 01:40:320 -01:40:495 -01:40:671 – 뒤에 바이올린 소리 들리네요. 싱글노트 넣으세요. Add notes
* 01:51:723 – vocal따라가는 slider 넣으세요. Add slider
*스피너까지 있는 빈공간 채우세요. 03:02:601 (5) – 이걸03:03:127 – 에 끝나는 슬라이더로 바꾸시고03:03:302 –에 슬라이더 넣으세요. Fill in the gaps with sliders

[*hit-sounds]

[Normal]
1) 담요: Artavia님은 담요 많이 안하는 맵펴라고 짐작했기때문에 평소보다안봤습니다.담요 완벽하게 하는기준으로 모딩 원한다면PM으로다시 불러주세요. 담요 하는방법은 알고계실거라 생각합니다.

[*Timing/composition/ flow]
* 00:19:443 (1,2) –vocal 따라가는건가요? 그렇다면 ctrl+ G 하고나서(2) 를 00:19:969 –로move. Ctrl G will do better rhythm.
* 00:04:180 (3) - 00:05:583 (5) - 02:59:267 (2) -AiMod에서 DS체크. Check DS in AiMod
* 00:45:232 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/cuzbX.jpg Drum 따라가는것 같은데 이 리듬이 괜찮을듯
* 01:40:846 (1) – 01:40:671 –로 옮기면 나을듯. Move note to this timing point.
* 01:43:302 (5) – 01:43:127 –로 옮기면 나을듯.
* 01:49:618 (1) – 01:49:443 –로 옮기면 나을듯.
* 02:22:601 (4) – end를02:22:952 –로 줄이고 spinner start을02:23:302 -로 move. 스피너 끝나는 지점 원래있던데로 늘리는거 잊지 마시구요. 03:03:302 (3,1) – 도 비슷한 리듬 쓰면 될듯
* 01:34:531 (4) – Reverse arrow가 파란마크에 있어서drum이랑 안맞네요. 01:34:531 –에다가 싱글노트 하고01:35:057 –에 시작해서01:35:408 –에서 끝나는 슬라이더 사용하세요.
* 01:39:969 (3,1) – drum에서 vocal따라가는 transition이 자연스럽지 못합니다. 01:40:671 –에 노트 넣고01:40:846 (1) – 지우세요.
* 01:43:302 (5) - 01:43:127 –로 move
* 01:49:618 (1) - 01:49:443 –로 move
* 01:54:531 (1,2) – 여긴 키아이 전이여서 리듬 이대로가 좋을것같네요.

[*Aesthetics/ patterns]
* 00:22:425 (5,1) – 00:26:987 (3,4) -00:37:162 (2,3) - 02:02:776 (5,1) -03:17:513 (4,5) -여기에선 blanket하려고한것 같은데, “T” 눌러서 grid snap 끄고 담요하세요. Blanket these.

[*hitsounds]
* 00:14:355 (1) –여기 머리에 whistle빼먹으셨네요
* 00:42:074 (1) –00:51:899 (2) - clap
* 01:39:267 (2,3) –머리에 whistle

[Easy]
여기는DS고치는게 우선인데, 꼭 1번 먼저 하고 2번 하세요. 꼭이요.
1) DS 1.5 세팅은 easy에 무리수예요. 1.0으로 세팅한후에 노트들 한땀한땀 옮기세요. Change DS from 1.5 to 1.0 since this is an easy difficulty. Also, keep the DS consistent throughout the map.
2) DS고쳐야될게 좀 많네요… (모딩할당시 DS문제가 12개 있었습니다) AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) 들어가서 “check distance snap” 박스 체크하고 고치세요.

[*Timing/ composition/ flow]
* 00:13:127 (2) – 오스 처음하는사람은 짧은 reverse slider가 어려울수 있으니 싱글노트로 바꾸고, 00:13:478 –에 노트하나 더 넣으세요. Short reverse arrow may confuse newbies, so change to double tap.

[*hitsounds]
* 00:19:969 (2) – 머리에 whistle
* 01:38:916 (2) –reverse arrow에 whistle
* 02:14:706 (2) – clap으로 바꾸시는게? 02:13:302 (2) –에 했듯이
* 02:57:162 (2,3) –여기 꼬리에만 whistle은 왜하신거죠? 아니면02:59:969 (4) –에 꼬리whistle하는거 깜빡하신건가요?
[*aesthetics/patterns]
* 01:56:811 (2,1) – 담요
* 02:50:145 (1) - NC빼세요

[Frobe’s Insane]
1) add first kiai time that starts at 00:03:127and ends at 00:13:478.
2) second kiai should end at 00:58:215, not 00:58:566

[*Testplay]
* 03:11:373 (4,5,6) – 03:16:987 (4,5,6) - 03:23:127 (5,6,7) – People don’t follow the EXACT shape of the slider when playing. I was drawing linear lines for these sliders during testplay, and the slider shape made 5 and 6 hard to hit. The shape is nice, but not ideal for stacking with doubles. I suggest changing the shapes to linear or curved. 00:28:916 (2,3,4) – I found this part okay though.
* 01:39:267 (3,4) – I found 4 hard to hit, and I don’t know why, lol
Other than that, great map

[*hitsounds]
* 00:23:829 (4) – 01:12:952 (1) - 03:03:829 (1) - add drum sample on the head, since there’s a huge drum sound here.
* 02:51:899 (2) – 02:53:829 (2) - add clap on head

[*Aesthetics]
03:16:460 (3) – touches HP bar

[Rakuten’s Extra]
Fun map. I couldn’t find stuff to mod, lol

[*hitsounds]
00:13:829 (1) –00:23:829 (1) - 01:12:776 (1) - change the slider head or note to drum sampleset

랭크 화이팅!!!

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