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Hatsune Miku - Dear Cocoa Girls

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safe_osu
82 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
safe_osu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21 กันยายน 2553 at 17:29:55

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Dear Cocoa Girls
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: Project DIVA
BPM: 90
Filesize: 9446kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.22 stars, 113 notes)
  2. Insane (4.99 stars, 543 notes)
  3. Normal (4.11 stars, 163 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Dear Cocoa Girls
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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A song from Hatsune Miku -Project DIVA- PSP Game
Last edited by safe_osu , edited 26 times in total.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[General]
- Offset -14 - Resnap All Note
- BPM 90 - Resnap all note and Recalculate Silder Lengths แล้วปรับโน๊ตใหม่นะ -.-
- Normal hitsound is fits better with this song
- Delete "hatsune miku" from Source because They're already on Artist
- Delete "psp project diva hatsune miku" from TAG because They're already on Artist and Source
- Fix Title: Dear Cocoa Girls << ตรงนี้ต้องระวังหน่อยนึงนะ พอเปลี่ยนแล้วจะต้องอัพโหลดแบบ Full Submit เท่านั้น
แล้วก็เวลาเปลี่ยนแล้วห้ามออกจากห้องEditor ตรวจสอบก่อนด้วยว่า ลิ้งจากเพลงนั้นในเกมส์เวลา /np เวิร์คไหม
ไหนๆก็จะ Full Submit แล้ว งั้นก็แก้นี่ด้วย
- Delete .osb file ที่มันอยู่ในFolder แมพ I just know that you have the SB then ok don't delete it :P
- Set Preview Point ก็คือเวลาเรากดฟังเพลงหน้าเว็ปมันจะโชตามนั้น วิธี เลือกจุดที่เราจะจัดให้เป็น Previewก่อน ก็ไปที่ เมนูบาร์ด้านบนที่ Timing > Set Current Position as Preview Point
- BG Colour: Black ?
- สนใจเปลี่ยนBG ไหม =.= ภาพไม่ชัด + ไม่โดนเลย

เอาแค่นี้ก่อนและกัน หลังปรับโน๊ตพลอยจะมาดูให้อีกรอบงิ
safe_osu
82 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
safe_osu
Thanks a lot for epic mod

- BPM 90 is ok for Easy and Normal but in Hard all notes so tightly in compose page
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
มาโยนดาวให้ก่อน เดี๋ยวมอดให้ครับ
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
Ps: i can't mod normal and/or easy so i mod hard only =w=b

u can ignore some of my mod that doesn't make sense for u (it just suggestion = =")
H A R D
set the kiai time
it's not good to see too much combo like(1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10.11.12.13.14.15.16.17....)
and it's not good too to see too much new combo like(1,1,1,1,1,1.......)

00:09:314(1,1,1,1,1,1): Combo spam, remove all new combo and male it (1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:22:652(1): Spacing
00:28:819(1): ^ (?)
00:30:152(1): ^ (?)
00:30:985(1): ^ (?)
00:57:652(1): remove new combo
00:58:985(1): ^
00:59:819(1): >O<!!!!! why so close?
01:46:985(11): new combo
01:49:652(11): new combo
01:58:985(timing section): ??? why this section is not 2x?, what are you trying to do?
02:08:319(2): =O=! hidden start and return mark make people confuse
02:20:152(1): exactly the same space, but different in timing, ok u can say that it's new combo, but i suggest u to change it
if there are more mistake like ^ and i didn't wrote that, you better fixed it >o<

anyway, it's a good song from Miku and u do great in sounding, BG and notes
great map =w=b
Last edited by termerys , edited 1 time in total.
safe_osu
82 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
safe_osu
thanks for modding and star

I think it's better than before
- added kiai time, I'm not sure is it fits?
- changed a little skin -- hitcircle and lighting
- fixed some note pattern look easier -- old note pattern is really confuse
- fixed overall notes space and new combo
- fixed timing. It's my big mistake, I forgot re-timing after changing offset :?
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
More mod for me

HARD

You can ignore some of my mod if that isn't make sense to you.

I suggest you to change "some" of those hit circle into sliders to make the map more fun.

I think that there are too much new combos like (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2.......)

so, here's some combo mod for you.

00:01:652(1): delete new combo
00:06:152(1): ^
00:34:319(1): ^
00:47:819(1): ^
00:48:958(1): ^
00:52:319(1): ^
00:53:819(1): ^
01:00:485(1): ^
01:35:819(1): ^
02:21:485(1): ^

If some of the notes has like i mod but i didn't said it, you better fix it ><

Your pattern always the same, make a little change to make it more enjoyed play.
Great Map
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
สู้ๆ ครับ มาเอาใจช่วย ^^
safe_osu
82 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
safe_osu
Yeah! I put slider, decrease new combo and re-position some note that hard to pass

this time I'm not sure it's better than before. let's continue mod my beatmap please, thanks!
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
Hi again

I would say that your map is much better than your first version.
This would be my last mod, because the song is playable and great enough for me

02:20:152(1,2,3): doesn't match with the song, you can fix by add note on 02:20:485 at (2)

all good
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
You need to fix it at all... imo..

[General]
Delete "-Project DIVA-" from Source and add in Tag
Add Source "Vocaloid"
hitsound are too loud plz reduce them abit

[Easy]
- Silder Velocity TOO fast for an Easy diff
- Some parts of your Easy really hard for beginer as
00:02:985 (2,3) -
00:25:319 (4,5) -

[Normal]
- Silder Velocity still too fast for a Normal diff
- some 1/4 note on this diff look hard for Normal as ---- fix them by use other sound plz
00:04:986 (5,6) - Change them to silder
00:16:152 (4,5) -
00:46:485 (1,2,3,4) - Change them to Silder
00:52:319 (2,3,4) -
00:53:652 (2,3) - Change them to Silder
00:55:485 (6,7,8) - ^
00:56:652 (1,2,3) -
00:57:986 (4,5,6) -
00:59:319 (1,2,3) -
01:00:986 (4,5,6) -
01:05:651 (3,4) -
01:24:319 (1,2,3) -
01:25:652 (5,6,7) -
01:26:986 (1,2,3) -
01:28:319 (4,5,6) -
01:32:319 (7,8) -
01:33:486 (1,2,3,4) -
------ อันที่เว้นว่างคือเปลี่ยนยังไงก็ได้แต่ไม่เอาแบบ 1/4 โน๊ต
00:48:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - they look jumppy for Normal

[Hard]
- HP -1,,, It's not an Insane.
00:18:985 (4) - new combo
00:32:652 (6) - ^
00:34:986 (3) - ^
00:37:652 (3) - ^
01:58:985 (4) - This note toooo fast You NEED warning like "x2" or something like that
02:09:652 (6) - spacing? too far
02:45:485 - After this parts note are too jumppy, Can you make some warning like "Jumpp" or something else
...... You should re-name this diff to [Insane] really
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
mod in irc XD
safe_osu
82 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
safe_osu
all fixed but somethings were fixed in the other way. epic thanks :)

hard change to insane is true -- I can't get pass in 1-time-play :lol:
but should I make a new hard difficulty?
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
Well, it's not yet perfect for me
so I'll continue mod XD

SPOILER
Insane
00:32:319: new combo because the space is change
00:55:985: ^
00:59:152: hidden note, move it to the right please
01:51:985: (suggestion) red combo is confuse, some sliders have 2 return sign, it'll better if it's only 1 return sign. =w=
01:58:652: (suggestion) why don't use half time like the first one?
02:21:985: (suggestion) move it on (3)?
That's all XD
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
:) nvm
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
mod irc again XD
orioncomet
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2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
ปั้ม มากๆระวังโดนเตือน + สั่งลบเค.ดี. นะ ^^'
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Swasdi!

Remember, orioncomet's mod is just a jokes, not serious

[General]
1) 01:37:319 ~ 01:38:652 (K) - This kiai doesn't fit at all...
2) The Source must be "Hatsune Miku -Project Diva" and then, delete "Project" and Diva" in tags

[File]
Your bg (wallpaper.jpg) is need to resize to 800x600 (current is 750x600)

[Skin]
1) The section-fail and section-pass looks ugly, you have to find one
2) hit0 and hit50 is really hard to see, you have to resize them to everyone can see
3) The logo looks blur, you have to sharpen it
4) The spinner-circle is really hard too see, you have to make it darker, or else, people can't see it
5) How about rename it in scorebar-bg from "Hatsune Miku -Project Diva-" to "Hatsune Miku - Dear Cocoa Girls"?

[Easy]
1) The spacing is too big for beginner player, use distance spacing is 0.8x
2) Use Grid level 2, it's easy to make it great beatmap
00:08:319 (2) - Move 1 grid down? (use grid lv.2)
00:09:985 (6) - This slider looks better if this slider is symetric
00:14:985 (5) - Try new combo here, would be great
01:23:986 (8) - Add a finish?
01:24:319 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:23:986 (8)
01:24:986 (2) - Move 1 grid down? (use grid lv.2)
01:28:652 (6,7) - Move 1 grid up? (use grid lv.2)
01:29:653 (1) - Move new combo to 01:29:319 (8)?

[Normal]
00:06:652 (2) - New combo here suite better
00:31:152 (4) - This object is doesn't fit to the vocal. Move forward to white tick to make it fit to the vocal
00:31:652 (1) - This object is doesn't fit to the vocal too. Delete this object? If you say yes, set the new combo at 00:31:985 (2)
00:48:319 (1) - Move this new combo to 00:49:652 (4)?
01:04:319 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:02:319 (4)?

[Insane]
00:07:152 (x) - Add note here?
01:19:319 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:18:985 (5)?
01:24:319 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:23:819 (6)?
01:31:985 (4) - New combo here?
01:50:652 (6) - ^
02:32:152 (1) - Move the new combo to 02:33:319 (6)?
02:34:652 (5) - New combo here? Since is jumps
02:57:319 ~ 02:58:319 (K) - This kiai doesn't fit at all....

Good song
STAR
safe_osu
82 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
safe_osu
I get home! My trip is very fun but I forgot the camera orz

Leorda wrote:

Swasdi! -- Oh! I'm so glad, Sawaddee Krub!

Remember, orioncomet's mod is just a jokes, not serious -- it's still a mod that I fixed and gave kudosu XD

[General]
1) 01:37:319 ~ 01:38:652 (K) - This kiai doesn't fit at all... -- fixed
2) The Source must be "Hatsune Miku -Project Diva" and then, delete "Project" and Diva" in tags -- I prefer say no because it's not original song of the game, the game just imported. Then source should be "vocaloid" and tag should be "project diva" (not included "Hatsune Miku" because it is artist)

[File]
Your bg (wallpaper.jpg) is need to resize to 800x600 (current is 750x600) -- fixed

[Skin]
1) The section-fail and section-pass looks ugly, you have to find one -- fixed
2) hit0 and hit50 is really hard to see, you have to resize them to everyone can see -- fixed
3) The logo looks blur, you have to sharpen it -- fixed
4) The spinner-circle is really hard too see, you have to make it darker, or else, people can't see it -- fixed
5) How about rename it in scorebar-bg from "Hatsune Miku -Project Diva-" to "Hatsune Miku - Dear Cocoa Girls"? -- fixed

[Easy]
1) The spacing is too big for beginner player, use distance spacing is 0.8x -- I prefer change to 1.0x because it's very tight and looks hard
2) Use Grid level 2, it's easy to make it great beatmap -- accept
00:08:319 (2) - Move 1 grid down? (use grid lv.2) -- note was resnaped XD
00:09:985 (6) - This slider looks better if this slider is symetric -- fixed
00:14:985 (5) - Try new combo here, would be great -- fixed
01:23:986 (8) - Add a finish? -- no, it isn't fit
01:24:319 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:23:986 (8) -- fixed
01:24:986 (2) - Move 1 grid down? (use grid lv.2) -- note was resnaped XD
01:28:652 (6,7) - Move 1 grid up? (use grid lv.2) -- note was resnaped XD
01:29:653 (1) - Move new combo to 01:29:319 (8)? -- no, I just fixed new combo to 01:29:653 last time and I think it's better

[Normal]
00:06:652 (2) - New combo here suite better -- fixed
00:31:152 (4) - This object is doesn't fit to the vocal. Move forward to white tick to make it fit to the vocal -- fixed
00:31:652 (1) - This object is doesn't fit to the vocal too. Delete this object? If you say yes, set the new combo at 00:31:985 (2) -- fixed
00:48:319 (1) - Move this new combo to 00:49:652 (4)? -- fixed
01:04:319 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:02:319 (4)? -- fixed and also added new combo at 01:06:319

[Insane]
00:07:152 (x) - Add note here? -- accept and also changed to slider
01:19:319 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:18:985 (5)? -- fixed
01:24:319 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:23:819 (6)? -- fixed
01:31:985 (4) - New combo here? -- fixed
01:50:652 (6) - ^ -- fixed
02:32:152 (1) - Move the new combo to 02:33:319 (6)? -- I prefer moved new combo to 02:32:819
02:34:652 (5) - New combo here? Since is jumps -- fixed
02:57:319 ~ 02:58:319 (K) - This kiai doesn't fit at all.... -- fixed

Good song -- thanks
STAR -- thanks x2 XD
h3k1ru
osu! Alumni
1,910 posts
Joined March 2010
h3k1ru
nice map and song~

*
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
I hope you have not given up on this one. I really love it (and your mapping style), and the skin is incredible!

I only could find this
[Easy]
01:31:319 (4) Not distance snapped.

I could read everything else during my second playthough (just failing in some jumps at Insane...) But I was probably having too much fun with it to notice anything.

I hope you get more attention on this map ^^!

Star!
safe_osu
82 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
safe_osu

Krisom wrote:

I hope you have not given up on this one. I really love it (and your mapping style), and the skin is incredible! -- I haven't given up yet, but now I don't have much time :(

I only could find this
[Easy]
01:31:319 (4) Not distance snapped. -- fixed

I could read everything else during my second playthough (just failing in some jumps at Insane...) But I was probably having too much fun with it to notice anything. -- I'm happy to hear that, Thanks

I hope you get more attention on this map ^^! -- Yes, I will

Star! -- Thanks
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
มาให้กำลังใจ =w=
Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Great map...i loved playing through it

The skin/SB are good, and the song is of course awesome.

~STAR (good luck getting it ranked :) )
Backstep
1,007 posts
Joined September 2009
Backstep
มายิงดาว =w=

แหะๆ
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]


  • • Is that on purpose? Not a huge deal, though.
[Insane]

  • • 00:37:152 (2) - Add a repetition
safe_osu
82 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
safe_osu

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]
  • [attachment=0:4bb98]orz.jpeg[/attachment:4bb98]
    • Is that on purpose? Not a huge deal, though. -- fixed. It's a big mistake, thanks! :o
[Insane]
  • • 00:37:152 (2) - Add a repetition -- I used to did it but I change to the present by several modding :?
Firetribe
4 posts
Joined December 2009
Firetribe
Very nice map!

star~
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