Hi.

Offset: 12838
BPM Seems fine at 177.000 If you ask me. (I could be wrong, but my offset feels better for sure.)
Don't forget to resnap notes according to the new offset via the timing menu.

There are quite a few symmetry fixes to be done here, but I don't like being nazi, so someone else should have a look at that.

Map has potential. Have a Star.

Thank you~ <3
The map sounds much more better now~
Sankies for the star too~ <3

h^^
click on View--->Grid Level------> 3
EasyNormal:
23:68 (1)= 2 squares down
24:024 (2)= 1 squares right
27:075 (4)= 1 squares up
27:583 (5)= 1 squares left
35:210 (3)= 4 squares right
35:719 (4)= 1 squares down
40:634 (3,4)= 2 squares up
49:109 (4) = 1 squares down
1:04:702 (2)= 1 squares up
1:49:797 (3)= 1 squares up
1.50:126 (4) = 1 squares up

The distance is wrong. Anyway nice song

Thank you~ <3
Hopefully it's all better now~

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Hm~ My bad, I didn't see that~ </3
Fixed now though~

Some thing I see while going through it fast:
(Level 3 grid, symmetrical fixes, since nobody else is looking. Also note, these are suggestions, you don't have to accept it.)
[Hugs & Kisses]
00:24:363 (3) - 1 Level 3 grid down looks better
00:29:787 (3) - 1 level 3 grid to right
00:30:804 (2) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right
00:31:143 (3) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right, and 1 Level 3 grid down. IF you changed the above.
00:31:821 (All three sliders) - If you changed the above, mark all three and move 1 level 3 grid right and two level 3 grids down.
00:46:736 (5) - Looks better as a straight slider, IMO.
00:47:753 (6) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right looks better
00:49:109 (4) - Wrong spacing. Move it closer to (3). While you're at it, line it up straight with (3) Respace the few coming notes accordingly.
00:56:566 (2) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right)
00:59:278 (2) - 1 Level 3 grid down
01:04:024 (5) - 2 Level 3 grids up
01:30:295 (2) - 1 Level 3 grid down
01:30:295 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This whole combo is a little messy... Maybe clean it up and make the spacing more even?
01:36:227 (3) - 2 level 3 grids down.
01:45:380 (2) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right
01:50:126 (4) - 3 level 3 grids up, 1 level 3 grid left

Thank you~ <3

The map looks better now~
I also made some of the sliders more stright.
Thank you~

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It's kinda annoying when maps don't get enough attention, one of my maps that I had wroked hard on went to the graveyard just recently because no one took a look at it even if I bumped it. @_@
GRR, I guess I'm gonna do a shout out about this map when I can play again.
Thank you for the support~ <3

*Likes this song and all the parodies*
I'm gonna star this map.

First thing's first.
BPM: 177.02
Offset: 1,981
Everything was late. Plus, the offset was set on the wrong stanza and beat. So there you go. Make sure you resnap all notes.

Video offset: -150 (you'll have to change it in notepad)

smooooch:
00:39:603 (9) - Swap finish hitsounds from the end to the beginning of this slider.
00:39:942 (1) - Turn it into a slider that goes half a beat.
00:40:281 (2) - ^
00:40:620 (3,4,6,8-10 + 1) Turn into whistle
00:45:365 (1) - Apply Finish hitsound.
00:46:721 (1) - Make it a slider and make it go to the 2.
00:47:060 (3) - Bump it back a quarter beat.
00:48:077 (7) - Wouldn't stack it.
00:49:348 - Add a note or do something here.
00:50:280 (6) - You missed. This is supposed to be a regular note and the slider is half a beat ahead.
00:56:212 (1) - Wouldn't a spinner make sense?
00:58:923 (1) - ^
01:00:618 (5,6) Stacking
01:01:465 (1) - ^ + bump it back half a beat.
That's a long break there. If you think so, then put some stuff in there.
01:36:885 (1) - Get rid of a slider reverse (so that there's four hits in the slider) and bump back the next one. After that one, put a note under where the slider finishes.
The rest of the song looks pretty good (surprisingly)

Well... I don't wanna seem harsh, but it's kinda just that little particular section and the sliders that were weird. The main thing is the timing and I hope you change it.

Thank you so much~ TwT
I really want to finish this map.

Loooots to do, I'll do it tomorrow. (It's late here~)

Okey, I decided to fix most of the stuff now, I haven't done the last one though.

May I ask you, How do I change the offset in notepad?
I can open it up in notepad and such, but I can't find the text I'm looking for. >_>''

Oh btw, before I forget, I'm gonna keep that gaint pause.

Otium wrote:

May I ask you, How do I change the offset in notepad?
I can open it up in notepad and such, but I can't find the text I'm looking for. >_>''

Umm... Lets see...

[Events]
//Background and Video events
1,[b]-150[/b],"93068dc572d33151537969f95cdb0fe0.avi"
0,0,"smoooosh2.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,13047,14020
2,15759,16731
2,18470,19782
2,66935,86210
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Failing)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Passing)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,255,0,185

I'm sure you can find background and video events yes? So I just boldened the offset right there which should be 150.

EDIT: Well, it didn't work. But you can see the [b][/b] that I put there that has failed to bolden, and that it's 150 over there right? So then it's there.

Ah~ Thank you~ :3
All fixed now~

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Hugs and Kisses:
00:28:07 (6) - align with 5
00:36:38 (5) - don't cross sliders..
00:38:07 (3) - align with 2
00:48:07 (1) - align with 6
00:49:43 (5) - 1 level 3 grid down
00:54:17 (2) - wouldn't have slider under slider
01:07:05 - long break :/
01:32:14 (7) - make straight

smooooooooooooch:
00:43:50 (1) -move 1 level 3 grid left
00:47:39 (5) - I wouldn't have slider under notes
00:57:56 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would space these out its kinda confusing in a stack
01:02:99 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:07:05 -I don't think there needs to be such a long break :/

have a star

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#mod is hit and miss. It really depends on who is there and when you come

Hugs & kisses

smooooooooooooch:

Only minor errors. Fun song. Star.

Thank you. ;w;
It's really hard to get your map modded and begging for it in PMs and such feels kinda desperate. ._.''
I've fixed everything. Thank you~

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Otium wrote:

Yay, Thank you~ :3

np.

Might as well Star this. Do you play IIDX or did you jsut find this song another way?

Thank you~

No, I accidently found this song somewhere. Can't remember how though. ô_õ
I'd probably suck at playing IIDX. xD

/me is tempted to give a kudosu star.

I really like this map, so I might advertise for you in #mod? I know people there so it might help.

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smooch
01:01:46 - add a note here and start the slider at 01:01:63 instead

hugs
01:45:35 (2) - align with (1)
01:49:42 (2) - ^

that's all, haha. really awesome beatmap C:

I've always thought that part have sounded a bit weird.
Thank you~ <3

my difficultyyy (: feel free to change anything!

Download: kors k - smooooch (Otium) [Yes's xoxo].osu

There~ It's added. ;D

I'm baaaaaack

Hugs and Kisses:
00:20:96 (1) - Maybe add an extra slider reverse? Also, get rid of half of the finishes.
00:30:45 (1,2,3) - Feels really awkward. I suggest making a slider at 00:30:11 that goes until the red tick. Then, (1) will be bumped forwards to the next red tick, and (2) will be converted to another slider that lasts a half beat.
00:31:80 (1,1) - Remove the finishes on the ends of these sliders.
00:34:51 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird. Put a circle at 00:35:53. Also, make those sliders half beats too. Then you can put them at 00:35:87, and 00:36:38.
00:39:94 (1,2,3,4) - You cannot switch from the beat to the vocals in one combo.
00:43:67 (3) - Remove half of the finishes.
00:45:36 (1) - Spacing.
00:56:55 (2,3) - Remove finish.
00:57:56 (4) - Remove finish except for the head of the slider.
00:59:26 (2,3,4) - Do the above.
01:02:31 (2,3,4) - ^
01:04:68 (2,4) - Remove finish.
01:05:70 (5) - Remove half of the finishes.
01:23:32 (1) - Add finish to end of the slider.
01:25:36 (3) - Add finish. Also, stack under the previous note?
01:42:98 (3,4,5,6) - urg pattern isn't consistent.
01:46:88 (3) - Spacing and straightness.
01:47:73 (1) - Straightness. Also, alternate between finish and clap between each slider reverse.
01:47:73 (x) - Or you could make a spinner here.
I know I may have sounded confusing for those 'remap' sections, but if you pay attention to every step properly, it results in a good effect.

Hopefully, this has helped your map towards ranking? Be sure to make star/mod requests as much as possible (as in every time you log in, not spam it every minute) so that you can accumulate the necessary amount of priority stars, as well as improve your map. You're the only one with a valid smooooch map so get it ranked!

I don't think you uploaded my difficulty correctly since the song still only has 2 difficulties!

@ Harris, HOLY SHIZZEL.
I'll start up with it now. when I'm done with something first. <_>

@ Yes, Hmm... I'll try to upload the map again, okey?

There, everything SHOULD be edited now. Probably made a couple of errors... Buuuut, I think it looks kinda nice~
Anyway, Yes, Your map SHOULD be uploaded now. If it isn't there, press F5 or something or re-download the map. @.@

ooh okie it works. bumping thread for youuuu

I'm glad it works now~ ;D

Bumps are awesome. <3

I give you a star

Thank you~ It really helps~ <3

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I'm hunting bats now and then, but they are kinda hard to reach.
And I think it feels just silly asking for a mod request and such through PM. Eeep. >w<

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Thank you~

I'm gonna try to PM someone to take a look at this map. I hate to beg for things, But I guess it can't be helped.

Hello~

[Hugs & kisses]
I suggest using Kisses instead of kisses

[Yes's xoxo]
00:23:16 (1) - This is an unrankable spinner(Too short) Why? Beacause it's a rule lol
Rankable spinner should get at least 2000 bonus points with auto mod, you can run auto mod by pressing A button(While testing beatmap)

01:17:39 (1) - Same as above

01:49:85 (1) - Same as above ;_;

Pretty nice map
Get more modders and keep accepting their suggestions~
I'll be back later.

I have 1 forgot
[Hugs & Kisses]
00:56:890 Place a note here
00:59:601 Place a note here

[Yes' xoxo]
00:34:180 Place a note here and use finish hitsounds

You have to place the note in empty area to make better

There, Fixed [Hugs & Kisses].

Yes' is fixing with [Yes' xoxo]. ;o

Hi
now mod start~

[General]

1. Delete osb.file please
2. Set a preview time, 01:28:750 I think, it means 88750 in osb. file code

[Hugs & Kisses]

1. 00:24:012 (2) - make it overlapped with 00:22:995 (3) would be more beautiful

[Yes's xxoo]

1. 00:22:317 (1) - this not put here may result in a misread I think
2. 00:55:195 (5,6) - (4,5,6) didn't stack well, turn off grid snap to stack them better

[Smooooch]

1. 00:15:708 (4) - delete this note maybe

Nice map
star!

Thank you so much~!
I've fixed everything and the only thing left is Yes' map.
Again, Thank you~! -curtsey-

(I haven't updated the map yet, Osu is being a bit mean right now and won't let me connect. So I'll try to upload it later.)

Hej!
I'm very very very very very sorry, the last I post It was terribly embarrassing

[General]
[Hugs & Kisses]

[Yes's xoxo]

Again, I very sorry about that, for apologize I give you a kudosu star

Oh~ Thank you~!
No worries~ I have patiences to wait, also my computer broke down a couple of days ago, so I can't fix any of the errors right now...

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I saw that...
It really got me down. But I'm not giving up! I've worked hard on this map and I don't want to give it up!

Please add Yes to the tags in all diffs since he made a difficulty for you.
and also, please don't capitalise the 'm' in Beatmania. ;_; .Nothing I can see wrong with the difficulties.. Just some nazi issues that are really too minor.

This is a good song and map, so don't let this die. Please have it ranked!

EDIT:

You may or may not use this bg:

There, fixed those minor errors~

I would never let it die~ I've worked way too hard with it. I do hope it get ranked soon~

I thought the BPM was supposed to be 177,00? I saw real1's pot about the BPM and offset, and i want to say that the BPM should be 177,00 as Real said and not 177,02 :3

But I dunno if it's just me seeing wrong.. Oh well.

Star anyways. (I will mod this if I get time to)

Thank you so much. ;W;
It was on 177,00 before, but I change it. I'll check if it I see if it fit or not~

I neeed to revive this map... I've worked too hard on it for it to be trashed like this.

Come on. .Get this revived and ranked soon
It has been here for too long...

PS: There's an unrankable spinner in Yes' diff.
Unless this goes for approved only I guess?

I've been a bit busy and haven't been able to work on it. I'M SO SORRY! ;A;

About Yes' diffy, I will most likely remove it. Yes' haven't been able to edit it and said that I could change the map myself or just remove it. I don't want to change the map completely, I dislike fixing with other peoples stuff. <_>

ALRIGHT, I have changed the background to the one ChaCha gave me(Thank you!) and changed the BPM to 177.00.
LESSE WHAT WILL HAPPEN...

Otium wrote:

ALRIGHT, I have changed the background to the one ChaCha gave me(Thank you!) and changed the BPM to 177.00.
LESSE WHAT WILL HAPPEN...

It will get ranked <.<

Teras wrote:

Otium wrote:

ALRIGHT, I have changed the background to the one ChaCha gave me(Thank you!) and changed the BPM to 177.00.
LESSE WHAT WILL HAPPEN...

It will get ranked <.<

I hope it will~ ♥

Soo old...

[General]
Bleh, you need a easier difficulty under 3,00 stars <.<

Remove osb and full submit.

Does Yes still have a guest difficulity on this?
If not remove it from tags.

Also remove Smoooosh from tags as it's not needed.


[Smooooch]
00:34:523 (2) - New combo.

Well, only took the more important stuff, I could probably nazi/suggest far more than this but I guess you just want it ranked considering how old this is.. (If you want me to do that though PM me)
It's not that bad so here is a star.
*star*

If you only knew...Started working on it february last year...

There~
Most of the stuff was something I already had noted and was going to remove... BUT I tend to forget...
I'm REALLY bad a creating easy maps. They somehow always end up pretty hard anyway... HRM...
Well, I'm kinda okey with people being nazis on my map...

Done~
Sorry for late



Download: 6287 kors k - smooooch.zip

Aw~ You weren't late~

Anyway, It's added now~

Let's see...

- Spacing correct
- Sound effects good
- Design cool
- Offset & BPM OK
- Difficulties respected

Well...I have nothing bad to say for this map, congratulation !

Hope this map will be ranked ~ And of course, star.

Ah~ Thank you so much~ >w<

Anyway, I'm half done with the Easy difficulty. But I'm a bit unsure on how long it should be and how many pauses I should give it...

[youngdow's Taiko Oni]
00:23:675 - 1st Kiai should start from here ;_;
01:28:760 - 2nd Kiai should start from here ;_;



Just good song ;_;
Anyway, keep going :3

ps. Don't give kudosu please :3



edit. Wait a min...




;_;

WAT OAO''
How could I miss those?! D'x Aw, drat it. Oh well, it's fixed now.

I'm sending youngdow/3UNI a message about those, I have no idea how you do taiko maps. <_>
Anyway, Thank you and you know, not clicking on that kudos buttos is almost IMPOSSIBLE for me. Please, let me give you kudos! ;A;

Ok, Fixed

Thanks to mod arien666 ^^.

Download: kors k - smooooch (Otium) [youngdow's Taiko Oni].osu

Better quality :3

Ah~ Thank you~
I've been thinking of getting a video in better quality, but I kinda keep forgetting to do that. Thanks~!

Star~I love this song!

Thank you so much~ ♥

Hi ~
Ehh...when I try to test your map, and I click skip the video stops working Fix ??

General;
- You use too many linear sliders ~ change some for cute ones with bezier ??
- Delete osb file and full-sub
- What the...no preview time in all diff ?!
- Audio lead-in of 1000 please, because when I start playing I can barely see the BG ~
- Your video size is 20MB...please ehhh lower the size of the video...under 10MB should be fine (maybe that's why it stops working when I click skip while playing...)
- Ehh...the 4th custom color doesn't fit...delete it
- Use a nice skin ~ here have this things I made ~


Hearts ~

Hugs;
- This is easy right ?? Slider velocity is too much
- Since is easy, 0.8x snap is too much, use 0.5x instead ??
- 00:24:862 >> move to 00:25:031
- 00:27:065 >> end at 00:27:404
- 00:27:574 >> move to 00:27:743
- 00:30:286 >> move to 00:30:116
- 00:30:964 >> move to 00:30:794 and end at 00:31:133
- 00:50:116 >> add finish
- 00:50:794 >> new combo
- 01:00:286 >> kind of ugly...meh
- 01:04:353 >> new combo
- 01:50:455 >> kiai time ends here in all diff (except taiko)
- Map this to the end, is not very hard to map since is a short song ~
- Add hitsounds, but I don't recommend whistle...for some reason maps with this song use whistles I think it sounds bad...use claps ~ :3

Normal;
- 00:24:862 (1)(2)(3) >> select all and move (1) to 00:25:031, all notes should move with (1) to white ticks, also make (3) just a note not a slider
- 00:27:065 >> end at 00:27:404
- 00:30:116 >> end at 00:30:455
- 00:38:082 >> end at 00:38:591
- 00:40:964 >> curve this slider better
- Some notes overlap others and that looks bad try to place beter your notes

Smooooches;
- Why do you use 1/6 snap divisor here ??
- Oh...shi~ lower HP drain and overall diff by 1 ??
- I don't know about you but I'm my opinion normal whistles just don't work for this song...
- - Some notes overlap others and that looks bad try to place beter your notes
- 01:36:896 >> curve this slider better

* Sorry I can't really mod Hard or Insane or Taiko LOL
* Star ~

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Aww~! I love you! It's fun to get alot to edit!
About the video, I noticed that it stopped working if I skipped. It might be bacause of the site I used, but I'm not sure. I'm going to try to find a different site to download the video from.
I've been always thinking of making a skin to this song. Would be fun to have a crown as the meter thingy. But, I don't have photoshop so I can't do much. I'll see if someone can make a skin for me. Thanks for the really pretty buttons! ♥
I'll make sure to fix everything.

Otium wrote:

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Aww~! I love you! It's fun to get alot to edit!
About the video, I noticed that it stopped working if I skipped. It might be bacause of the site I used, but I'm not sure. I'm going to try to find a different site to download the video from.
I've been always thinking of making a skin to this song. Would be fun to have a crown as the meter thingy. But, I don't have photoshop so I can't do much. I'll see if someone can make a skin for me. Thanks for the really pretty buttons! ♥
I'll make sure to fix everything.

No problem ~ Hope this gets ranked, good luck !! :3

Smoooooooooooooooooooch!

Star. nice song.

Otium wrote:

LET'S MAKE A RESTARTS.
Alright folks, I 've worked on this map for god knows how long. I would really want it ranked soon. SO BE SURE TO POINT OUT ANY ERRORS YOU MIGHT FIND!

A takio difficulty has been added!
Thank you Youngdow~

16/07 - Making an easier difficulty. Not done with it so don't mind it.
3/08 - Worked a bit more on the easy difficulty. Renamed the others too.
7/08 - New video in better quality~ Thanks arien666~!
5/09 - I need to work a little bit more on it. <:

Nice start .
;___;

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I love this song . <3
So -star- for you.

I'm sorry. ;A;

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