Real1 wrote:

It's unrankable to have so much unmapped space! You will have to cut the mp3! What program ? I tried with some, but turned out bad.
Offset is wrong! It can't be -34! The offset can't start before the music starts.
I get offset: 1250. Don't forget to resnap all notes after changing offset. Timing - Resnap all notes


[Skelectro's hotpants]

00:15:422 (5) - You might want to make this a new a combo.
00:32:166 (4) - waay too close to (3)
00:42:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - We want some hitsounds! Perhaps a clap on every other note?
00:48:051 (5) - Too close to 4. It's not intuitive.

You sure you want it to be this short?

[With Pants]
General
No hitsounds? You might wanna add some to spice things up. OK!
Spacing feels kinda random, which is okay, but don't over-use that technique!OK!
01:21:969 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This pattern looks really random. You might wanna simplefy it.OK!

[Chacha's without pants]
General
Big parts of the map has no hitsounds. Those that are here already sound good, though.

[Simplistic's Hardpants]
Well done hitsounds.
00:38:387 (4) - Make this a new combo.
Your "flower" starting at 00:38:387 has spacing errors... But it doesn't feel too bad while playing so I won't complain. You could fix this by making some notes new combos. I won't go deep into this but yeah.



Fix this stuff for a star.
Peace.

Real1 wrote:

Here you go, I cut the mp3 for you using Audacity.
It fades out nicely.

NOTE: There is a high risk the offset will be wrong after adding the new mp3, look into that.

Real1 wrote:

Not getting the new mp3 when I re-download. You need to do a full re-submit after placing the new mp3 in the folder.
When you are about to submit a map, you have two choices, standard or full submit, choose full submit so osu can exchange the mp3!

Edit: Add a text in your presentation saying something like this:
"If you have downloaded this before the 11th of January, please re-download"

Otherwise ppl may be stuck with the old mp3.

DJPop wrote:

~Skelectro's Hotpants~
00:08:119 (8) - new combo
00:08:978 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:271 (1) - ^
00:14:344 (2) - new combo
00:22:287 (1) - remove new combo
00:23:360 (2) - new combo
00:26:795 (3) - ^
00:32:162 (4) - ^ , stack with (3)
00:33:021 (1) - remove new combo
00:35:597 (3) - new combo
00:45:901 (8) - ^
00:46:330 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:335 (8) - new combo
00:50:194 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:053 (2) - new combo
00:52:770 (6) - ^
00:53:629 (1) - remove new combo
00:54:487 (2) - new combo

~With Pants~
Resnap all sliders.
00:07:690 (1) - remove new combo
00:08:119 (2) - new combo
00:09:407 (1) - remove new combo
00:09:836 (2) - new combo
00:11:554 (6) - ^
00:27:010 (10) - remove hitwhistle (so annoying)
00:28:727 (11) - new combo
00:36:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacings are weird
00:40:749 (3) - repeat 3 times
00:48:906 (4,5,6,7,8) - spacings are weird
01:20:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:23:038 (8) - new combo
01:24:541 (1) - end on white tick

~Chacha's Without Pants~
ADd more hitsounds around the middle of the map.
00:06:402 (3) - new combo (to match the vocal)
01:25:400 (5) - use circle

~simplistiC's HardPants~
No Major issues.


+Star

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

.osb references nonexistant files.
good_job_blue_ribbon.png is unused.
Preview point is only set on [With Pants], please add to the other diffs.
simplistiC's diff has unrankably low stack leniency.
Please add the guest mappers' names to the tags.
Why is the background colour green? Pink, purple, or white would be better.
Skelectro's difficulty needs lead-in time.
Make the combo colours consistent?
I strongly recommend using grid level 2 or 3.
Trim the MP3.

Timing feels off, try BPM 139.8, offset 1265. Get someone else to double-check.

[Skelectro's Hotpants]

Spacing needs to be looked at here at:
00:13:271 (7,8) -
00:16:276 (2,3) -
00:37:314 (3,4,5,6) -
00:48:906 (8,1,2) -

All three inherited timing sections are useless, delete them.

This map is kinda wtf in terms of difficulty; it goes through mostly like an Easy, but has parts like 00:23:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) which would be better for a Hard. Thus, it's not suitable as the easiest difficulty; please make a proper Easy, or fix this one up to be more...Easy-ish.

[With Pants]

Spacing is fluctuating all over the place. I had started a list below, but it grew to be very, very long. So I removed it.

00:09:836 (1,2,3,4,5) - Gets kinda messy here.
00:33:879 (5) - Slider is not snapped, drag the endpoint a little.
00:56:205 - Remove these 2 timing sections.
01:20:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing is so bad, I had to point it out.

[Chacha's Without Pants]

Some offsets are not before the note.

00:55:770 (8) - Offscreen.

[simplistiC's HardPants]

00:00:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Quite unreadable. *
00:03:826 (3,1,2) - Watch spacing; 3-1 touch but 1-2 don't. Fixed
00:07:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Unreadable. *
00:36:885 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I'd recommend you change this so that every note requires you to jump across; with a pattern like this, you're pretty much guaranteeing that players will need to retry here several times until you have a clue where the thing actually goes. *
00:40:319 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Yeah, this is fine. How is this fine but not ^? They're exactly the same.
00:56:205 - Pointless timing sections again. Fixed.
01:18:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Pretty unreadable again. *

* Had 2 people try it, almost FCed on first try but played these parts perfectly fine.
Lots of issues.

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

.osb references nonexistant files.
good_job_blue_ribbon.png is unused.
Preview point is only set on [With Pants], please add to the other diffs.
simplistiC's diff has unrankably low stack leniency.
Please add the guest mappers' names to the tags.
Why is the background colour green? Pink, purple, or white would be better.
Skelectro's difficulty needs lead-in time.
Make the combo colours consistent?
I strongly recommend using grid level 2 or 3.
Trim the MP3.

Timing feels off, try BPM 139.8, offset 1265. Get someone else to double-check.

[Skelectro's Hotpants]

Spacing needs to be looked at here at:
00:13:271 (7,8) -
00:16:276 (2,3) -
00:37:314 (3,4,5,6) -
00:48:906 (8,1,2) -

All three inherited timing sections are useless, delete them.

This map is kinda wtf in terms of difficulty; it goes through mostly like an Easy, but has parts like 00:23:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) which would be better for a Hard. Thus, it's not suitable as the easiest difficulty; please make a proper Easy, or fix this one up to be more...Easy-ish.

[With Pants]

Spacing is fluctuating all over the place. I had started a list below, but it grew to be very, very long. So I removed it.

00:09:836 (1,2,3,4,5) - Gets kinda messy here.
00:33:879 (5) - Slider is not snapped, drag the endpoint a little.
00:56:205 - Remove these 2 timing sections.
01:20:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing is so bad, I had to point it out.

[Chacha's Without Pants]

Some offsets are not before the note.

00:55:770 (8) - Offscreen.

[simplistiC's HardPants]

00:00:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Quite unreadable.
00:03:826 (3,1,2) - Watch spacing; 3-1 touch but 1-2 don't.
00:07:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Unreadable.
00:36:885 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I'd recommend you change this so that every note requires you to jump across; with a pattern like this, you're pretty much guaranteeing that players will need to retry here several times until you have a clue where the thing actually goes.
00:40:319 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Yeah, this is fine.
00:56:205 - Pointless timing sections again.
01:18:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Pretty unreadable again.

Lots of issues.

Kytoxid wrote:

[Chacha's Without Pants]

Some offsets are not before the note. Fixed

00:55:770 (8) - Offscreen. Fixed: i moved that note 1 grid up, and i also moved 00:54:913 (6) one grid down

I've also used your timing.

Shinxyn wrote:

quick mod!
Add the mapper names to the tag please
add "Rockerz" to tag, too (actually I think the "z" one is the actual way to spell the artist's name)
>: I couldn't find a source
wow,custom grid size!?! lol (grid lvl 4...oh wow)
Skelectro and SimplistiC's offset+BPM is different! or is it yours and ChaCha's that's off? hmm I can't tell xD!

Skelectro's- Nice Easy diff
Add Lead-In time (at least 1-2 seconds)
This map could be completely distance snapped, there are some new combos that are fairly close to the one prior, but it doesn't really cause an issue (maybe just let AImod point them out) OK!

With Pant's-
okay, theres nothing wrong with the map stucture, but I'd still ask you to use a smaller grid size (small/lvl 2) and arrange things prettier, the map is kinda messy in places
Example-

SPOILER

00:25:299 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - clearly could be spaced better OK!
00:32:166 (1) - doesn't have to be partially covered like this OK!
00:48:475 (3) - ...whats with this ...line-ish shape? OK!
00:51:050 (8) - ^!? (plus this combo gets long, add new combo here?) OK!
01:11:865 (2,3) - spacing here is different from rest of combo! it shouldn't have to be since its snapped the same time apart OK!
01:15:299 (3,4) - ^ OK!
01:18:732 (3,4) - ^ OK!
01:20:449 (3,4) - ^ OK!
01:21:737 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - clumped up section, messy D:

OK!

Chacha's- There's no preview point in this diff
Nazi-

SPOILER

00:08:561 (5) - down a tick just to make the line (3,4,5,6,7) straight
00:24:870 (4,5) - I suggest you remove the whistle here to sound like the combo before (which sounded better)
00:27:016 (1,2,3,4) - just suggestion- make these all shorter by one repeat, so its easier to catch
00:30:449 (3,5,7) - straighten (compared to top line)
00:31:522 (8) - new combo since this reverted from the jumps
00:34:526 (6,10,11) - up a tick?
00:43:325 (3) - right a tick~
00:46:758 (3,4) - right+down a tick
00:54:269 (4) - new combo? maybe
00:59:634 (4) - new combo for new sound (and speed change)
mmm the soft whistle like on 01:01:350 (1) changes to normal whistles like 01:03:067 (1), they don't match, use one of the two for all the (1)'s like this?

SimplistiC's- D:!!! overall diff waaaay too low, the notes get really clumped up, Overall diff+2!
High hp drain... is fine since theres lots of notes to recover from
Lots of confusing non-stacked patterns, I'm fine with it, but yea, aside from the overall diff, this map is fine with me

xD the ending is hard to follow, that's the music's fault though

Teara wrote:

[simplistiC's HardPants]

OMG Very nice beatmap :3 < inlove

some suggestions thou

Some of the new combos suggestions is just to make a tiny bit easier to read :3

-edit-

Scratch the new combo's, I see you changed the circle patterns to the more dull and commonly used version, thus all my excitement went flying out of the window. I liked the first circle pattern too, but some people didn't like it

Shulin wrote:

simplistiC's Hard Pants:

-- Stacking leniency is too low, raise to 0.4. Don't really like it that high, set it at 0.2 for now.
-- Fix all unsnapped notes. Done

00:00:820 (1,2) - Notes before offset. Unrankable?

Pretty awesome.

Once you've fixed unsnapped notes etc I'll star. That's all for now

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Source?
-- Add guests to tags in all difficulties.
-- Disable countdown on all difficulties?
-- Kiai?
-- Make sure the BG color is the same on all difficulties.
-- Delete you .osb and full submit.

Skelectro's Hotpants:

-- Fix all unsnapped notes.
-- Use a consistent distance snap since this is meant to be easy.
-- Combo colors 1 and 2 look very similar, consider using a different color.
-- What happened to the grid level? Put it back to 3.

00:23:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Very confusing for the easiest difficulty.
00:37:297 (3,4,5,6) - Distance snap this all are too close.
00:53:175 (2,3,4) - Too close.

Use a consistent distance snap because the spacing is all over the place. Note: I didn't list every spacing error.

With Pants:

-- Uses a different offset, make sure it's the same as other difficulties.

00:16:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too clustered. OK!
00:19:612 (3) - Offbeat, it's not following anything in the music.OK!
00:20:363 (7) - Raise one square, and adjust rest of triplet.OK!
00:22:724 (1,2) - Looks messy.OK!
01:12:402 (5,6,7) - Move right one square.OK!

You could increase the distance snap slightly to avoid cluster, also some of the beat placement looks sloppy at times.

Chacha's Without Pants:

00:00:820 (1,2) - Notes before offset, change.
00:27:001 (1,2,3,4) - These returning sliders are hard to see, maybe new combo them.
01:05:198 (2,3,4,5,6) - Why is the spacing reduced here? Make it the same as 01:03:481 (2,3,4,5,6) -

Hmm, some of the beat placement looks like its on a slant at times, I wasn't sure if this was intentional so I didnt nazi mod.

simplistiC's Hard Pants:

-- Stacking leniency is too low, raise to 0.4.
-- Fix all unsnapped notes.

00:00:820 (1,2) - Notes before offset.

Pretty awesome.

Once you've fixed unsnapped notes etc I'll star. That's all for now

Whiss wrote:

[With Pants]
00:21:217 (10) - New combo OK!
00:43:749 (1,2) - Spacing? It's fine

[simplistiC's HardPants]
00:22:290 (3,4) - Not similar spacing to 1,2
00:45:895 (9) - This one is unnecessary (Place a note instead slider)
00:49:328 (8) - ^
00:59:629 (5) - New combo
01:03:062 (6) - ^
01:06:925 (7) - ^

Star

simplistiC wrote:

Shulin wrote:

-- Stacking leniency is too low, raise to 0.4. Don't really like it that high, set it at 0.2 for now.

Leorda wrote:

[Chacha's Without Pants]
Please map this to the end of song

Leorda wrote:

[Overall]
I mod the clap hitsound, I think this is great. For Chacha and simplistiC, please listen the clap for song, if you listen clap hitsound, please place the object with clap hitsound at the same time.

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Chacha's diff has countdown; other diffs don't.
There are 3 different preview times right now; please make them consistent.
Chacha's diff is missing the tags.

Kytoxid wrote:

Please do not use both kiai and white notes; my eyes die at the sight of them.

Chacha17 wrote:

Leorda wrote:

[Chacha's Without Pants]
Please map this to the end of song

hmm, sorry, but i don't feel like mapping it to the end

Leorda wrote:

[Overall]
I mod the clap hitsound, I think this is great. For Chacha and simplistiC, please listen the clap for song, if you listen clap hitsound, please place the object with clap hitsound at the same time.

I didn't get what you mean by this D:

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Chacha's diff has countdown; other diffs don't.
There are 3 different preview times right now; please make them consistent.
Chacha's diff is missing the tags.

Well, anyway, emil, cud u please add the tags to my diff? i can't do it tonight.. neither tomorrow.. Already did, lol :3

And please fix the preview times? Also did that :3

Kytoxid wrote:

Please do not use both kiai and white notes; my eyes die at the sight of them.

Cud i keep the white combo color? since my diff doesn't have kiai times. (gah, other diffs have but for consistency's sake).. or... bah, i can't think of another sensible color for the beats other than white.

Leorda wrote:

[simplistiC's HardPants]
Please map this to the end of song I just mapped to where emaal ended it

[Overall]
I mod the clap hitsound, I think this is great. For Chacha and simplistiC, please listen the clap for song, if you listen clap hitsound, please place the object with clap hitsound at the same time. Translation?

Sushi971 wrote:

[SimplistiC's]
00:07:690 (1) - move 1 grid down to stack Fixed
00:08:763 (5) - ^ ^

Kytoxid wrote:

[simplistiC's HardPants]

Offsets to affect audio must come before the note they are to affect. For example, 01:04:779 should be moved 1/2 earlier. Fixed

01:18:513 (1) - This section's spacing is totally off. Compounded with the weird rhythms, it only plays well if you know the song, and just results in rage if you don't. This looks better than what I had before.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

BPM should be 139.75. And offset 1,256.

Dusty wrote:

[Skelectro's]
00:29:586 (1,2,3) - Not symmetrical. OK!
00:42:890 (2,3) - wtf spacing OK!
00:54:478 (1,2,3,4) - not horizontal OK!

[With Pants]
Lower OD. OK!
Lower Drain. OK!
The stack leniency is way too low. OK!
00:11:131 (3) - ctrl+h it, especially if you don't lower the OD OK!
00:14:135 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Unstack.I like it that way :3
00:27:118 (1,1) -
00:28:727 (1,2) - align OK!
00:56:195 (1,1,2) - 20 second long break might be excessive. OK!
01:26:238 (1) - Lengthen or delete. (auto 2000+ is a guideline, not a minimum, usually auto should be able to get more...) OK!

[Chacha's]
Good map.

[simplistiC's]
01:24:736 (2,1,4,3,6,5,8,7,10,9,12,11,14,13) - What? Something bad happened here, got two circles/spinners happening at the same time
otherwise good map.

Xgor wrote:

[Mp3]
A pretty large part of the Mp3 is unused, cut it or map the rest It's only 15-20 seconds o.o


[Hotpants]
00:23:366 (2) - (Suggestion) Move this 1/2 forward on the time-line and then remove one reverse arrow OK!
00:26:801 (3) - ^ OK!
00:55:781 (1) - Stupid spacing OK!

[With Pants]
Maybe lower the HP drain? OK!
00:14:136 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Stupid stack!! Can not unsee! OK!

[Without pants]
LOWER THE HP DRAIN

[Hardpants]
Maybe lower the HP drain?
00:59:638 (5,6,7,8,9) - Move one grid up
01:03:072 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:24:751 (2,1,4,3,6,5,8,7,10,9,12,11,14,13) - This is just Bullshit! Having two circles at the same place is just stupid!

*star*

Dusty wrote:

[simplistiC's]
01:24:736 (2,1,4,3,6,5,8,7,10,9,12,11,14,13) - What? Something bad happened here, got two circles/spinners happening at the same time No idea what happened here, it was fine when I uploaded it. Fixed though.

Xgor wrote:

[Hardpants]
Maybe lower the HP drain? Lowered by 1 tick
00:59:638 (5,6,7,8,9) - Move one grid up Nah
01:03:072 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^ ^
01:24:751 (2,1,4,3,6,5,8,7,10,9,12,11,14,13) - This is just Bullshit! Having two circles at the same place is just stupid! Yeah, something definitely happened. Fixed.

Shulin wrote:

SimplistiC's HardPants:

- Fix all unsnapped notes. Fixed

Fix the following overlapping notes in this stream:

01:24:859 (3,2,5,4,7,6,9,8,11,10,13,12) - Done.

Shulin wrote:

Chacha's Without Pants:

-- Tags for this difficulty?
-- Source for this difficulty?

00:27:016 (1,1,1,1,1) - This is extremely hard to see especially the last note since it comes later than the returning sliders.

The rest is good.

Xgor wrote:

[Mp3]
[Without pants]
LOWER THE HP DRAIN

1. audio lead-in : Chacha's Without Pants and simplistiC's HardPants are 1000ms, while Skelectro's Hotpants is 1004ms, and With Pants have no audio lead-in, this diff. without audio lead-in is OK, you'd better unify audio lead-in in other diff.s ; )

1. fine, only some notes are not alined, maybe you like putting them like that o.o

1. 00:14:243 (1) - spacing, why it's different to 00:14:136 (3) and 00:14:350 (2)? they are all distance 1/4 beat

1. fine

1. hitsound too loud sounds to me, others are fine

Breeze wrote:

OK, mod start XD

[General]

1. audio lead-in : Chacha's Without Pants and simplistiC's HardPants are 1000ms, while Skelectro's Hotpants is 1004ms, and With Pants have no audio lead-in, this diff. without audio lead-in is OK, you'd better unify audio lead-in in other diff.s ; )

OK!

[Skelectro's Hotpants]

1. fine, only some notes are not alined, maybe you like putting them like that o.o

[With Pants]

1. 00:14:243 (1) - spacing, why it's different to 00:14:136 (3) and 00:14:350 (2)? they are all distance 1/4 beat

Fixed!

[Chacha's Without Pants]

1. fine

[simplistiC's HardPants]

1. hitsound too loud sounds to me, others are fine

well, good map
star

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Rechecking WithPants


00:14:243 (1) - Delete this note? OK!

much better ^^ Now have ur star

1. Shinxyn said add "Rockerz" to the tags... do it?
2. I still feel the offset's iffy. =/
3. As many others have pointed, the preview point and audio lead-in is not the same on all difficulties. You may have to check the .osu manually to fix it.

1. Call it "[Skelectro's HotPants]" to match the other difficulty ("[simplistiC's HardPants]").
2. 1:00 feels a bit too short for my taste. =/

• Remove the Kiai? This song doesn't seem to be that much "Kiai fitting" (well, I mean that the chorus would be too long... or something like that), but might be just me. If you leave it like that, consider adding it to the other difficulties as well.

Gens wrote:

[General]

1. Shinxyn said add "Rockerz" to the tags... do it? Fixed
2. I still feel the offset's iffy. =/
3. As many others have pointed, the preview point and audio lead-in is not the same on all difficulties. You may have to check the .osu manually to fix it.

Fixed

[Skelectro's Hotpants]

1. Call it "[Skelectro's HotPants]" to match the other difficulty ("[simplistiC's HardPants]").Fixed
2. 1:00 feels a bit too short for my taste. =/

[With Pants]

• Remove the Kiai? This song doesn't seem to be that much "Kiai fitting" (well, I mean that the chorus would be too long... or something like that), but might be just me. If you leave it like that, consider adding it to the other difficulties as well.

Fixed

00:01:256 - Maybe you should start the difficulty from here. It'd be better, at least for me.Fixed

[Chacha's Without Pants]

00:47:409 (1,1,1,1) - Honestly, I didn't find these jumps to fit the song. I can understand the ones at 00:54:493 (2,3,4,5) (and maybe the ones at 01:23:903 (6,7,8)), but those jumps just don't convince me.

~ ~ ~

I guess that's it. Nice mapset, by the way.

Matma Rex wrote:

"grid" = smallest grid.

[Skelectro's]
WTF, why it has grid size set to smaller than tiny? Set it to something normal. FIXED!
00:22:293 (1,2) - spacing. Also the slider is totally randomly placed and looks ugly.FIXED!
00:26:157 (2,3) - ^FIXED!
00:29:592 (1,2,3) - not symmetrical.
00:33:885 (6) - totally randomly placed. FIXED!
00:40:755 (3) - ^FIXED!
00:43:331 (3) - 1 grid down, 1 grid right. FIXED!
00:48:912 (8,1,2,3,4) - oh come on, you can make it look better. FIXED!
00:50:629 (4,1,2,3,4) - looks ugly due to stacking. Move (1) somewhere else. FIXED!
00:52:347 (5,1) - spacing.FIXED!
00:53:635 (4) - snap to grid.
00:54:493 (1,1,1,1) - snap to grid and center. FIXED!

[With Pants]
I suggest renaming to emaal's With Pants, since you have 3 guest diffs already. FIXED!
00:04:261 (8) - 1 grid right. FIXED!
00:03:402 (6,7,8) - not symmetrical, make it nicer. FIXED!
00:14:136 (3,4) - 1 grid left to fix both alignment with (2) and pacing with (5). FIXED!
00:39:037 (6) - make it nicer.
00:44:619 (2) - stack under (1)\s beginning? FIXED!
00:46:336 (6) - wtf @ slider points. FIXED!
01:15:531 (4,5) - EFFING CONFUSING
01:18:966 (4,5) - ^

[Chacha's]
00:27:016 (1,1,1,1,1) - TOTALLY UNREADABLE. In other words, this part sucks.
00:37:105 (3,4) - confusing and random. Unstack it.
00:50:844 (1,2,3) - ugly overlaps.
01:06:944 (2,3,4) - confusing and random. Unstack it.

[Simplistic's]
00:45:907 (9,1) - ugly overlap.
00:49:341 (8,1) - ^. But I have no idea how to fix it
01:15:316 (2,3) - again, ugly overlap. Unstack or stack properly.
01:25:406 (12) - sounds terribly. Remove whistle and shorten by 1/1.


Uff.

Chacha17 wrote:

updated at last:
[attachment=0:1e3a3]Crazy Rockers - Dance With My Pants (emaal) [Chacha's Without Pants].osu[/attachment:1e3a3]




[*]Chacha's Without Pants (4,97 stars, 237 notes)
[*]emaal's With Pants (4,51 stars, 170 notes)
[*]simplistiC's HardPants (4,98 stars, 261 notes)
[*]Skelectro's Hotpants (2,02 stars, 80 notes)
[*]Skelectro's HotPants (2,02 stars, 80 notes)



???!
(refer to first post) Mistake of mine xD

Better use "Hard Pants" and "Hot Pants"

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Lowercase all the tags. Anyway, nice song. FIXED!

[Skelectro's HotPants]
Actually, jumps are not allwoed for the easiest diff in a map.
00:04:690 (5) - New combo. FIXED!
00:11:560 (5) - ^ FIXED!
00:14:994 - Add note here. FIXED!
00:23:152 - ^ FIXED!
00:30:450 (2) - Spacing error. Nazi. FIXED!
00:31:309 (3) - Move this to right under the (1). FIXED!
00:51:488 (2) - Don't make this a jump. FIXED!
00:53:635 (4) - Snap this to the grid.
00:54:493 (1,1,1,1) - Move them to right under the (4). FIXED!

[emaal's With Pants]
00:14:350 (4) - Spacing error. if you are going to fix this, make sure you have check the rest notes. FIXED!
01:20:039 (1) - Use distance snap for this note. FIXED!

[Chacha's Without Pants]
00:00:719 - Add note here.
00:46:980 (4) - Move forward one 1/2 tick. Make sure to check spacing.
00:56:211 (1) - Move one tiny grid right.
00:59:216 (4) - Add note here.
01:26:264 (1) - Add finish.

[simplistiC's HardPants]
01:25:406 (12) - Remove whistle from the end.

Star.

1. Timing seems to work. I thought it was off at first but I found out I was wrong when I checked again.

Doomsday93 wrote:

Hi

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. Timing seems to work. I thought it was off at first but I found out I was wrong when I checked again.

[SKELECTRO'S HOTPANTS]

00:52:347 (5,1) - Easy difficulties don't usually have jumps. I'd remove this one. Fixed

[EMAAL'S WITH PANTS]

Hard already? Theres no normal? I can let that go, It's just that the sudden jump from easy to hard is dodgy.

00:28:733 (1) - hitting this note after that slider just after is pretty annoying. You should delete this beat.. Fixed
00:32:168 (1,2) - Spacing between these is shorter than the rest of the beats after. its not too bad, but you should make the spacing here the same as the rest of the stream. Looks cleaner that way. . Fixed

[CHACHA'S WITHOUT PANTS]

00:00:719 (1,2) - This feels awkward to play to me. I'd delete these.

[SIMPLISTIC'S HARDPANTS]

00:00:826 (1,2) - Like in chacha's difficulty, these feel awkward before the songs actually starts. I'd delete these.

Not too bad. Its got some rough edges, but theres nothing majorly wrong with it. That timing still feels off in places but that could just be the song being a bit offbeat at times, and if so, that can't be helped.

Starred

Doomsday93 wrote:

I don't mean to sound rude, but may you please give me kudosu for my post? (since you took some of my suggestions ) Well I forgot to do that.. Sorry xD

@Zekira: I guess he meant +8 offset. Maybe he mistyped.

Zekira wrote:

See, I knew it, there's something iffy about the composition of the song. Very small offset jumps tend to make this sound unpleasing to the ears.

@James: Uh, wait a minute, if it sounds early then shouldn't you be increasing the offset and not decreasing it? I find that I'm using +4 though

emaal wrote:

So what should I do with the offset?

Doomsday93 wrote:

emaal wrote:

So what should I do with the offset?

Zekira suggested adding +4 ms to it, and I assume James meant adding +8 ms to it. After I checked it, I think you should add +6 ms.

They are all good though. Go with which ever one you think feels best

Chacha17 wrote:

[attachment=0:cc94e]Crazy Rockers - Dance With My Pants (emaal) [Chacha's Without Pants].osu[/attachment:cc94e]

[DBF] wrote:

[Chacha's Without Pants]
00:46:970 (4) - delete this is bit.
Not bad diff i think.

[DBF] wrote:

[Skelectro's HotPants]
00:32:174 (4,5) - spacing.
00:51:065 (1,2) - spacing.
[emaal's With Pants]
00:17:791 (7,8) - little distance problem.
01:26:270 (2) - i think this is place for spinner.

Your diff have some problem with spacing, really, fix it.
[Chacha's Without Pants]
00:46:970 (4) - delete this is bit.
Not bad diff i think.
[simplistiC's HardPants]
00:08:128 (3) - hidden slider, its make me confused.
00:21:433 (1,2,3,4 and ect) - finish very hard sound, dont use it more.

Good luck, star~

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Oh no, tag capitalization is different across the difficulties! (no, I don't actually care)
Weird diff names.
Chacha's and Simplistic's have a different BPM than the others.

[Skelectro's HotPants]

00:13:283 (3,4,5,6,7) - You could shift this 2 grids right to make 3 symmetrical.
00:18:006 (4) - Probably would be better placed on the right side, symmetric with 2 of the previous combo.
00:54:499 (1,1,1,1) - Don't put so many new combos.

[emaal's With Pants]

Don't stack 2 timing sections in the same spot. For the first timing section, just put all the audio settings inside it; no need for the inherited section on top of it.

Combo placement seems very random.

00:16:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Big mess of notes.
00:32:174 (1,2,3,4) - Better square? BETTER LIFE!
00:58:363 - Might as well map this break; your song is only barely over a minute anyways.
01:22:406 (4,2) - These kicksliders don't really fit.

[Chacha's Without Pants]

2 unsnapped notes; notes before the first offset need to be manually resnapped.

[simplistiC's HardPants]

Same 2 unsnapped notes as Chacha's diff.

01:26:240 (1) - LOL TWO SPINNERS SIMULTANEOUSLY. Please delete one.

arien666 wrote:

[Skelectro's HotPants]
00:13:28(3,4,5) - Umm...? Spacing changes :3...
00:27:02(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down? Took it
00:30:45(2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up? Took it

[emaal's With Pants]
00:02:55(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right? Took it
00:33:46(4) - ^ Took it

[Chacha's Without Pants]
00:00:83(1,2) - Unsnapped
00:47:39(1,1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?

[simplistiC's HardPants]
00:00:83(1,2) - Unsnapped



Good song :3
And keep going XD

Here's my star :3

Skelectro's HotPants:

Turn down the hitsounds volume by one tick.

emaal's With Pants:

00:04:696 (9) - New combo.
00:06:414 (1) - Remove new combo. ( As a side note, this new combo looks copy-pasted, my suggestion would be to make it, instead of a inverted linear combo, make it diagonal, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3699 )
00:18:435 (9) - Add new combo.
00:18:864 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:28:739 - Turn down the hitsounds volume by a tick.
00:29:168 (6) - New combo.
00:35:179 (6) - ^
00:36:467 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:39:043 (6) - New combo.
00:39:902 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:42:478 (5) - New combo.
00:43:766 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:45:913 (5) - New combo.
00:47:630 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:49:347 (4) - New combo.
00:50:206 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:51:848 (1) - ^
00:52:782 (3) - Add new combo.

All the diffs but emaal's:

Maybe adding a kiai at the last spinner like emaal's?

Larto wrote:

Timing:
Paste this into the [TimingPoints] section of the .osu files. Then resnap all difficulties.

1280,428.571428571429,4,1,0,40,1,0
28735,428.877769835597,4,1,0,100,1,0
57903,429.184549356223,4,1,0,100,1,0
74865,429.184549356223,4,1,0,100,1,0
78308,429.184549356223,4,1,0,100,1,0
81751,429.184549356223,4,1,0,100,1,0

General:
The combo colors are different on all difficulties.. Is this really intended? I liked the ones from chacha's and simplistic's difficulties the best.

Simplistic:
00:43:751 (4) - New Combo
00:45:897 (9) - If you put a new combo here, it would destroy the pattern, but suit the music more. Try to find a way to improve this...
00:47:184 (3) - New Combo
00:49:330 (8) - If you put a new combo here, it would destroy the pattern, but suit the music more. Try to find a way to improve this...
00:50:618 (3) - New Combo

Chacha:
00:47:399 (1,1,1,1) - I sorta dislike these New Combos...
01:23:880 (6) - New Combo for jump?

emaal:
The New Combos in this difficulty are weird. Very. Try to place them more systematically.
01:22:406 (4,5) - Spacing fail? It's not intuitive. No, I fail
01:23:265 (2,3) - ^

Larto wrote:

You PM'd me to recheck this..?

Simplistic:
Doesn't have the timing i suggested [I tried as you can see in the notepad, and I did like I did with my difficulty, but nothing happens..]

Chacha:
Doesn't have the timing i suggested [I tried as you can see in the notepad, and I did like I did with my difficulty, but nothing happens..]

01:23:898 (5) - New combo

emaal:
Good~

Skelectro:
still good

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Skelectro's HotPants]

00:13:278 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is too hard compared to all the difficulty. Fixed

[emaal's With Pants]

00:54:468 (1,1,1,1) - Unnecessary new combo spam. Fixed

[Chacha's Without Pants]

There are a lot of wrong new combo.

00:03:838 (6) - New combo.
00:04:696 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
00:32:586 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:33:873 (3) - New combo. Fixed
00:34:946 (6) - ^ Fixed
00:38:378 (6) - ^ Fixed
00:39:451 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
00:42:454 (11) - New combo. Fixed
00:42:883 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
01:26:242 (1) - Unsilence this and add a finish.[/color] Fixed

[simplistiC's HardPants]

01:25:383 (7) - Remove whistle on slider end. Fixed