smallboat wrote:

我看了lv3之後 其實第一個音前面那幾個節奏也可以加
不一定4個難度都不一定從相同note起步 也可用slider
這要用你的創意了
SV你要從0.8跳到1.4? 之間不用1.0或1.2試試看嗎?

Mod:先幫你最後一個難度加多點東西

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lv3:
00:01:009 (1) - 加slider拉到00:01:236處 加了一拍的slider
00:01:463 (2,3,4) - 加note 加了
00:02:145 (5) - 加note 加了
00:03:736 (9) - 刪掉note,slider拉到00:03:963加了

smallboat wrote:

lv1你設定的是normal吧? 那變hard了 clap聲有點多 再縮減一些
lv3 圈再大一點吧 難度三圍部分..最好再想一下 都快變頂了


如果真的想做的很難 就把後面的打鼓聲跟前面都加節奏吧

mod內容

lv2.5 (上面的2哩?)
00:36:009 (5) - 縮短兩次折返 fixed
00:36:690 (6) - 加slider加折返到00:37:145 加了notes 感覺是hard所以放多一點note應該可以吧...

lv3
00:07:372 (1) - 縮短到前面白線處 fixed
00:08:054 (2) - 加note fixed
00:09:418 (2) - 加note fixed
00:09:872 (4) - 加note already have a note omg..
00:13:736 (7) - 縮短到前面紅線處 fixed
00:14:190 (8) - 加note fixed, added two
00:17:259 (3) - 這段跟上面距離差好遠 很難點到呢 distance-snap ratio is 2.21x, i think it is okay for insane

leon1341414 wrote:

from #modreq

sorry for this one diff mod

音量建議調小,因為這首歌比較輕柔,100%感覺有點大聲,我推薦60% 全部改成了50-70

level 0

建議多加一些hitsound

00:21:918 (9) - slider頭的finsh去掉,只保留尾巴的finsh 改了

00:27:372 (5) - nc 改了

00:34:645 (6) - nc 改了

00:39:418 (4) - 如果這難度是easy的話,這個點不能被上一個slider蓋住喔 這個真的不知道...呵呵

00:49:190 (7) - nc 改了

00:56:463 (7) - nc 改了

00:57:145 (8) - 和00:39:418 (4)相同建議 改了

01:01:918 (2) - 這個slider的路徑感覺有點不好判斷,建議修改一下 改了

01:26:690 (4) - 和00:39:418 (4)相同建議 改了

01:27:145 (5) - nc 改了

01:33:281 (5) - nc 改了

02:01:918 (2) - 和01:01:918 (2)相同建議 改了

03:24:872 (4) - 和00:39:418 (4)相同建議 改了

03:15:554 - 03:43:736 呃,全部都設clap不是很好耶 在長白線前後都加 應該可以吧

建議是長白線的後一個白線,和長白線的前一個白線設clap

長白線上或是長白線後第2個白線,如果想製造效果就設設whistle或是finsh吧

最後這個建議可以給全部的難度使用

level 3

wow,這個按鍵尺寸好小

建議AR-1或是size-1 (呃,這是我個人的感覺,可以不要理我XD) 這個我要考慮一下...因為本身地圖已經不算難 再調少難度的話可以就變成空有insane難度的hard了

Good map I think~

加油~

neonat wrote:

level 1

00:48:509 - add a circle added
00:54:872 (3) - shorten it to end at 00:55:099 fixed with other way
01:07:145 (1) - move it to 01:07:356, make it end at 01:08:281 fixed
01:08:281 (2) - remove fixed
01:14:190 (1) - remove spinner, add circles at 01:14:190, at 01:14:645 and 01:15:554
02:07:145 (1) - move to 02:07:372, make it end at 02:08:281
02:08:281 (2) - remove
02:14:190 (1) - remove the spinner, instead, add a slider starting from 02:14:645, ending at 02:15:099, and add a circle at 02:15:327
03:12:372 (1) - move it to 03:11:918

smallboat wrote:

難度設定從1跳到2.5 中間沒2嗎? 要不然再改一下

以下mod

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lv0
1009這邊後面這邊怎麼沒東西了 可以加吧?
難道是要break?

lv1
00:52:599 (7) - 加note 或slider拉到這裡 加了notes
01:30:099 (1) - 拉到後面紅線 加了一個notes

lv2.5
00:06:009 (2) - 縮到前面紅線 這個應該不用改 因為slider中間有tick可以發聲
00:06:463 (3) - slider折返到後面紅線 加了一個notes


lv3 AR-1或2 OD+1
00:01:009 (1) - 縮到前面紅線 改了
00:01:463 (2) - 加note 改了
00:05:554 (1) - 這段位置不太好 感覺還可以
00:06:804 (4) - 加note 本身已經有...
00:08:736 (1) - 可是否配前面取代第4個note? 這個不太明白...
00:09:190 (1) - 兩個刪掉 用slider取代 改了

lv3 AR-1或2 OD+1

00:08:736 (1) - 可是否配前面取代第4個note? 這個不太明白...

smallboat wrote:

記得要做lv2的地圖喔 不然很怪..

mod:

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lv0
1009紅線後面沒東西.. offset不是第一個聽到你音嗎? 跟之後有沒有東西有什麼關係?

01:09:247 (7,8) - 這兩個設NC 加了


lv1
00:51:520 (6) - 移到前面紅線? 加了note

lv2.5 OD+1或+2

01:42:429 (8) - 移到前面紅線加長到白線 加了note
或01:42:202 (7) - +note


lv3
00:01:975 (5) - 換成slider是否比較好? ok
00:16:975 (2,3) - 兩個是否再近一點? 這個距離為2.21x...感覺合理
00:21:975 (11) - 感覺很難點 移了少少位...感覺這是insane...要有點難才可以
01:27:429 (8) - 折返的間距是否調小? 移到01:27:656 (8) - 好像ok，拉到01:28:111 這個不太懂...
01:31:975 (1) - 要不要放在下面2的旁邊? 放在下面的話感覺太難了.....
01:37:429 (7) - 這點上面沒節拍
01:37:656 (8) - 這段是白線發聲 改了一點
01:38:338 (9) - 沒對到 這個不太明白
01:43:224 (1) - 很少有看到放這麼多圈的 除非app..@@a 我沒意見 呵呵...看到其他insane都沒有這麼多,,,,不過這應該也可以用的吧....

Frostmourne wrote:

hi ! from my modding queue

General
- You can press "G" button in the editor mode to change "Grid size" to let you able to add notes prettier
- consider changing the source to "Vocaloid" , this is highly recommended fixed
- why don't use formal difficulty name like "Easy Normal Hard Insane", not a big problem but I'm curious okay i will change it
- change Audio Lead-In to 0 for every diffs All are zero now

- the end of the song is really bad because it suddenly stops so I recommend you put fade out into the mp3
here it's the fixed mp3 I did for you, Click!!
please unzip this file and replace the mp3 into your song's folder

Thx a lot. downloading it is 256kbps and i conversed it to 192kbps

level 0
01:16:520 first Kiai must start here according to the music , second kiai part and the last part fixed
increase Approach Rate(AR) and Overall Difficulty(OD) to 1 , the current are 0 ,which is unrankable fixed
00:36:747 (4,1) - this kind of pattern looks really hard in this diff. please make it less complicated like this fixed

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00:38:338 (3) - this slider should end at 00:39:020 (4) - to follow the vocal .. don't forget to correct the spacing between 00:39:020 to 00:39:475 (must be around 1.2x) fixed, also around 1.2x
01:07:429 (4,5,6) - looks really hard in this diff too.. please make it easier fixed
01:18:793 (2) - this slider should end at 01:19:020 , don't forget to fix the spacing again fixed
01:27:202 (1,2,3,4,5) - these look hard for this diff too.. make it easier ! fixed
the other parts I didn't point out because they are exact copying of the first part so I won't mod copied part. i have press ctrl+H and ctrl+J to make the shape become different now

Your rhythm is quite nice. It follows the music greatly but the major problem is
some parts look really hard. They look complicated and messy.
another problem is most of your sliders look ugly.
something like 00:18:338 (4) - , 00:24:247 (3) - , 00:31:066 (2) -
You don't have to use ctrl+click to add so many points in the slider. to use only 1 point is enough like this
00:31:066 (2) -

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after you get the ideas, please fix them by yourself

The shape of sliders have became more goodlooking Thanks for ur advices

level 1
copy and paste again..
alright, it's not a problem since you are new mapper so what I'm going to suggest is
try checking some recent ranked maps , open them in the editor for the normal diff and see how you can fix
try to compare them . I used to do like this before , it helped a lot
some problems I want to point out :
01:16:520 first Kiai must start here according to the music , second kiai part and the last part also fixed
unsnapped notes, use "hold ctrl+shift and then press A" AIMod will appear and you are to choose the tab "snapping" and fix them (it's written as "Object's End is not snapped!" resnapped
press delete these sliders and create again to fix this problem, you have to fix this because it's unrankable
00:38:794 (1) - if you move this up 1 grid, you can avoid overlapping with this slider 00:38:111 (3) -
you don't have to be afraid of "spacing" on the top right hand side. no one can notices that such a minor problem. if it's better to fix the spacing fixed
00:47:884 (6,7,1,2,3) - these look hard for a normal diff fixed
00:54:020 (1) - you shouldn't use new combo without the reason like this fixed
01:05:611 (2) - ugly slider again, use only 1 point in the slider is enough fixed
something like this looks totally better

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01:09:702 (4) - move its tail to an another point like this to avoid overlapping with this slider 01:09:020 (3) - fixed

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level 2
01:16:520 first Kiai must start here according to the music , second kiai part and the last part also fixed
HP Drain Rate - 1 , it's quite too hard as is reduced
choose the tab "Timing" on the same line as File,Edit,View,Compose , something like that and choose the red thing "Resnap All Notes" to snap all unsnapped notes for being rankable fixed, forgot to check it before
00:32:202 (1) - don't new combo like this without reason fixed
00:36:747 (6,7,8) - this looks really hard and unintuitive because of overlapping too much, I think you should move (7) (8) out from under this slider 00:36:065 (5) - fixed, maybe this type should just be put in insane...

level 3
01:16:520 first Kiai must start here according to the music , second kiai part and the last part fixed
HP Drain Rate : 6 please, I suggest you put HP Drain rate lower the Approach Rate by 1 (if HP is 8 , Approach Rate should be 9)
something like this , take it as a suggestion okay, changed.
01:17:429 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - these jumps don't fit with the music, You should place jumps on where the music sounds louder more than other parts or something like that (my personal mapping technique to create a jump) fixed by changing a part of notes to sliders
01:31:975 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ^
and many others out there which I am not going to mention also fixed

I hope you will get some ideas from my mod, open new ranked maps and try checking them, compare it with your map and see how can you copy from them

at least, don't copy paste like this because you should dedicate to your map more than this.
to just copy and paste will not let you get ranked easily I guarantee.

Good luck ! and fight fight ! , first map is always hard to get ranked (I used about 6 months to get first ranked map)

Gonzvlo wrote:

Hey,

I was checking the thread, I've noticed that you've given multiple kudosu to the same modder. Kudosu should be given just 1 time, 2 at max when there's a long period between mod and mod, you've given more than 8 kudosu to the same modder.

Maybe all those posts are valid mods but the point is that all the issues should be addressed in a single mod maybe a re-check, or a new mod when there's a "re-mapped" difficulty but this is not the case. Anyhow, I've removed those kudosu, please be more careful next time.

Good luck with this.

xxhckxyz wrote:

if u have spare time, could you please help me mod the map again after i update the map?