10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! ^^ A random mod has arrived!

[General]

1. Try to keep you clap hitsounds consistent. Try using a pattern like hits for example:
   

I'm not yet used to this use of clap, but I will watch again all my clap to check them

[Easy]
00:39:400 (1) - Add soft-finish to the head, by adjusting to these settings:

and If your unsure how to remove the clap on the head,simply double-click on the head of the slider. You'll know it's been selected once it is highlighted in red. Add the finish and your done! ^^ Oh my... You just taught me how to make a better hitsound pattern !!! Bless you

00:42:808 (1) - Remove that finish, doesn't sound right here. Done
00:44:171 (3) - ^ Done
00:44:853 (1) - Add a soft-finish to the head. [Done]
01:03:600 (2,4) - Looks slightly off on the stacking :S move 01:04:963 (4) - to the same coordinates as 2 on x:276 y:228. Corrected the off stack
01:07:349 (2) - Remove finish, or change finish to a clap? Clap is great here
01:10:076 (4) - ^ ^
01:27:800 (1,3) - Remodel sliders, they look pretty dull imo :S I also dislike how their slightly curved inwards, towards each other. Imo I appreciate this form
01:31:891 (1) - Add soft-finish to the tail. Done
01:36:662 (1) - Add soft-finish to the head.Done
01:51:660 (2) - ^ Done
02:03:931 (1) - ^ Done
02:21:655 (2) - Reverse, I don't like how the flow leads back to the previous slider. Good Idea
02:25:745 (2) - Just flip it horizontally ^^ Obviously

Looks pretty good - I will tell Ami

[Normal]

1. AR -1
2. HP drain rate -1, none of these difficulty settings should be exceeding over 5.

I didn't knew about this one, thanks for the information !
00:25:765 (1) - Add finish Done
00:32:582 (2) - Change clap to finish ^^ Done
00:33:264 (4) - Remove clap. Done
00:36:673 (1) - Way to far from the tail, why not place it under the tail instead? I was afraid player would be confused If I do so. But since you point it out, under the tail would be ok
00:39:400 (1) - Add finish Done
00:44:853 (1) - ^ Done
00:48:943 (3) - ^ and a classic curved slider may look better imo, this slider really stands out (not much in a good way though ) I must agree, the whole slider style is curved, a broken one is a mistake. Thanks for pointing it out
00:52:011 (5) - NC Done
00:59:851 (1) - Change clap to finish Done
01:02:237 (5) - NC Done
01:04:963 - ^ Done
01:05:304 (10) - Add finish Done
01:11:099 (2) - Change to a 1/1 slider, a mini-slider looks silly here. Sorry I don't understand the 1/1 :s
01:13:144 (7) - Add clap. Done
01:16:799 - Add finish and clap. Done
01:16:893 (2) - Add clap, what happened to this hitsound pattern?? Sorry, I'm not yet used to hitsound
01:17:404 (3) - Add clap on the tail. Done
01:18:257 (4) - Remove clap on the head. Done
01:18:257 - 01:20:131 Try this rhythm?
Shall try
01:27:119 (1) - Add finish Done
01:27:119 - 01:36:322 Where are de claps?? Not used to add sound
01:30:527 (3,4,5) - Looks too complicated, replace with 01:28:312 (3) - here. I think it's quite simple pattern :s
01:39:048 (1) - Add finish on the tail. Done
01:56:432 (2,1) - Stack better. Done
02:01:204 (5) - Add finish on the head. Done
02:09:384 (1) - ^ Done
02:10:748 (2,3,4,5) - Add finish on all or just 02:10:748 (2) - and 02:12:111 (4) - If your not into using finish hitsound that much :3 Done
02:14:838 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Done
02:18:928 (1) - Add finish on the head. Done
02:23:018 (1) - ^ Done

This diff looks so-so :/ hitsounds could use more work, and some of your objects don't match the rhythm very well.
It's my first map, I'm already happy you didn't said it's horrible. But for sure I must improve it a lot !

[Hard]

1. Circle size -1, now that's just mean

Humm... I'm used to small circle. This with low AR is quite balanced, don't you think ?
00:25:765 (1) - Add finish. Done
00:33:946 (1) - Remove clap on both ends, and add a finish to the head.Done
00:34:287 (2) - Remove clap on the tail, this hitsounds being overused now :S Done
00:34:628 (3) - Remove clap on both ends.Done
00:34:968 (4) - Remove clap on the tail Done
00:35:309 (5) - Remove clap on both ends. Done
00:35:991 (1) - Add finish to the tail. Done
00:39:400 (1) - Add finish to the head.Done
00:41:956 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove clap on all of their tails. Done
00:44:853 (1) - Add finish. Done
00:48:943 (8) - ^ Done
01:03:259 (1) - Reverse end please, I hate how it's tail is faces at the previous object >.< Humm... no ?
01:05:304 (1,1) - Ass pretty as the slider is, you do know that THIS is a very bad overlap Consider remodeling it to something else, so that 01:10:076 (1) - is at least not under the slider. I will try to find a solution
01:10:758 (3) - Add finish. Done
01:11:951 (6) - ^ Done
01:16:211 (1) - ^ Done
01:20:302 (5) - Remove clap, not consistent. Done
01:20:642 (1,3) - Add claps Done
01:21:665 (1,1,1,1) - This type of flow is nice, but it doesn't work here I'm afraid sorry! For me it does follow the vocal and rythm
01:27:119 (1) - Add finish. Done
01:32:572 (1) - Add finish on the head. Done
01:33:936 (2) - ^ Done
01:39:389 (3) - Add finish. Done
01:45:013 (1,2,1,2) - Move them more apart please, it's okay to break the DS a few times in this diff when it's necessary. No ?
01:48:592 (4) - NC Done
01:48:592 (4,6,8) - Add claps Done
01:53:023 (1) - Add whistle to the head. Done
01:55:750 (1) - ^ Done
01:58:477 (1) - ^ Doesn't exist anymore
02:01:204 (6) - Add finish. Done
02:01:885 (3) - Doesn't fit here, should've been at 02:02:567 - 02:03:931 with a finish on the tail. I don't see your point
02:08:362 (1,1) - Add finish. Done
02:18:928 (1,2,3) - Change claps to finish on the head? Sounds better imo. No

[Insane]

1. Circle size -1

Same than for hard diff
00:31:219 (7,2) - Bad overlap, please fix. Done
00:33:946 - 00:35:139 sounds really over mapped. Try this rhythm? [Insane]

1. Circle size -1

00:31:219 (7,2) - Bad overlap, please fix.
00:33:946 - 00:35:139 sounds really over mapped. Try this rhythm? Actually it follows the vocal and the trumpet. A triplet here is to reinforce the music

00:35:991 (1) - Add finish to this tail Done
00:48:262 (6) - NC Done
01:00:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - Have them curved outwards instead. Done

....Hmm, sorry I'm going to have to stop my mod here. judging by the entire map, I suggest you consider re-mapping this diff. Re-check the flow and consistency in your patterns please! x.x

Hug

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

hello, from my queue.
result:
general:
02:03:931 - 02:24:382 -->another kiai here Not hot about an other Kiai once is good enough
diff:easy
AiMod:

00:54:397 (1) - move to (376,52) Fixed
01:12:803 (2) - move to (272,160) Fixed

diff:normal
00:50:648 (2,3) - change to a slider? Two circle is better here
01:11:610 (3) - delete and let 01:11:099 (2) end on 01:11:610 This match exactly the vocal, so I can't
01:12:462 (5) - delete and let 01:11:951 (4) end on 01:12:462 I agree with you
01:28:993 (4) - delete and let 01:28:312 (3) end on 01:29:334 Here also suit with the vocal here
01:30:016 (2,3,4,5) - change to a long slider As same with previous mod, I think here fit the music and the pattern. HOWEVER, if someone points it out again I shall modify it

diff:hard
01:45:013 (1) - move to (300,192) Fixed
01:46:377 (1) - move to (88,192) Fixed
02:07:680 (4) - end in 02:07:850 Fixed

diff:insane
01:16:211 - 01:36:708 -->where is the kiai? Forgot it...
01:39:645 (4) - start delay to 01:39:730 and keep the end in 01:39:901 ) Fixed
01:41:008 (4) - like ^ ) Fixed

good luck

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! ^^ A random mod has arrived!

01:11:099 (2) - Change to a 1/1 slider, a mini-slider looks silly here. Sorry I don't understand the 1/1 :s

1. Slider 7 is a 1/1 slider:
   Because it's 1 beat long.
   
   
2. And a 1/1 slider with a reverse will look like slider 1 here:
   Has a turn on it.
   
   
3. A 1/2 slider with a reverse will be this!
   Since half a beat will result in the object reaching to the red tick mark instead.
   
   
4. And then 2/1 with a reverse would be slider 6.
   Since the slider is now 2 beats long.

10crystalmask01 wrote:

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! ^^ A random mod has arrived!

01:11:099 (2) - Change to a 1/1 slider, a mini-slider looks silly here. Sorry I don't understand the 1/1 :s

Okay.

1. Slider 7 is a 1/1 slider:
   Because it's 1 beat long.
   
   
2. And a 1/1 slider with a reverse will look like slider 1 here:
   Has a turn on it.
   
   
3. A 1/2 slider with a reverse will be this!
   Since half a beat will result in the object reaching to the red tick mark instead.
   
   
4. And then 2/1 with a reverse would be slider 6.
   Since the slider is now 2 beats long.

Really its just some simple terms used to suggest what type of slider you should use.
Hope that clears things up a bit ^^'

Thank you for that explanation

iNickel wrote:

Ok. my mod:

Easy:

01:05:304 (1,2) - This flow is a bit uncomfortable... Here we go from a linear to a triangle flow. It's quite simple and abordable for easy players

Normal:

00:50:648 (2,3) - flow is a bit uncomfortable... Modded for better flow
01:11:099 (2,3) - ^ No ?
01:18:257 (4,1) - ^ No ?
01:30:016 (2,3,4) - ^ No

I mean this is not very good for easy/normal

1. 00:27:811 (2) - The flow isn't the best one. Even if it's easy, you shouldn't forget flow. (something like this: http://puu.sh/4wul8.jpg maybe?)
2. rest seems fine.

1. 00:28:492 (1) - strg + g for better flow
2. 00:31:219 (3) - that sudden jump doesn't fit with normal. pls use consistent ds
3. 00:33:946 (1) - nothing, actually. i just like that slider. pretty *Q*
4. 00:42:126 (4) - you should add a finish, or a whistle or sth there. since there's an exaggeration in the song, too
5. 00:45:535 (2) - strg + g for flow again
6. 00:47:410 (4) - this circle doesnt fit and could be confusing for newly players. first your following the drum and beat and suddenly you follow the singer. that's not consistent and could confuse. IF you want to do it, you should do sth like that: http://puu.sh/4wuBM.jpg
7. 00:52:011 (1,2,3,4) - no jumping in normal pls!
8. 01:18:257 (4,1) - this doesnt fit at all and isnt pretty and whatever. pls change it!
9. 01:59:670 (1) - change clap to whistle. it fits better, because the part is quiet.
10. 02:18:928 (1) - sth like this would look more interesting: http://puu.sh/4wuJe.jpg (and then mirror it)

1. 00:32:242 - add a circle here and make a triangle? there's sound and it would look good
2. 00:33:094 - ^
3. 00:47:069 (4) - strg + g for better flow
4. 01:21:665 (1,1,1,1) - this plays boring. pls change
5. rest seems fine.

HelloSCV wrote:

M4M

General

1. 02:03:931 - why don't you add kiai time?

One is enought imo

Easy

nothing special

Normal

00:33:946 (1) - touching HP bar Fixed
00:59:851 (1) - delete NC It's new instrument, so new combo
01:39:730 (1) - ^ Fixed

Hard

00:40:081 (1) - delete NC Fixed
01:52:768 - useless green line True
02:03:931 (1) - add finish Done
02:04:612 (3,6) - check slider Done
02:10:748 (2,3) - why u snapped in blue tick?

Simple error

[notice]Insane

I remapped it completly

maybe you need more experience on mapping good luck~

ChivaCookie wrote:

ohai ~ M4M because PM

Pls find a better mp3! Even with a "better mp3" it would be same result due to 192kbps rule

Easy

General: Think about lowering the volume of your hits. The way they are now, it destroys the song a bit. The song becomes background and it shouldnt be like that. Actually sound are 50%, your sound configuration must have a problem

Other stuff:

1. 00:27:811 (2) - The flow isn't the best one. Even if it's easy, you shouldn't forget flow. (something like this: http://puu.sh/4wul8.jpg maybe?)
2. rest seems fine.

Good

Normal

1. 00:28:492 (1) - strg + g for better flow Yeah
2. 00:31:219 (3) - that sudden jump doesn't fit with normal. pls use consistent ds It's barelly a jump imo X)
3. 00:33:946 (1) - nothing, actually. i just like that slider. pretty *Q* Thanks buddy !
4. 00:42:126 (4) - you should add a finish, or a whistle or sth there. since there's an exaggeration in the song, too Done
5. 00:45:535 (2) - strg + g for flow again Done
6. 00:47:410 (4) - this circle doesnt fit and could be confusing for newly players. first your following the drum and beat and suddenly you follow the singer. that's not consistent and could confuse. IF you want to do it, you should do sth like that: http://puu.sh/4wuBM.jpg The whole part follow the singer imo
7. 00:52:011 (1,2,3,4) - no jumping in normal pls! Little jump hurt no one <3
8. 01:18:257 (4,1) - this doesnt fit at all and isnt pretty and whatever. pls change it! no T_T
9. 01:59:670 (1) - change clap to whistle. it fits better, because the part is quiet. Done
10. 02:18:928 (1) - sth like this would look more interesting: http://puu.sh/4wuJe.jpg (and then mirror it) Great !

nice diff Thanks !


Hard

1. 00:32:242 - add a circle here and make a triangle? there's sound and it would look good Done
2. 00:33:094 - ^ Sweet Idea
3. 00:47:069 (4) - strg + g for better flow Done
4. 01:21:665 (1,1,1,1) - this plays boring. pls change It gets quiter, this represent the calm part
5. rest seems fine.

Great !

Tsuchimikado wrote:

Another mod just for your new insane difficulty

[Kaizoku no o]

General
Make sure to fix this. I don't know why it doesn't conflict with Easy. Maybe you used Easy to 'Save As New Difficulty...' ? Not sure about the Insane because it's no longer a part of the actual beatmap.
If you update all map at once you don't have this problem

Map
00:35:309 (5) I suggest making this the start of a new combo. Good idea

In-game i didnt notice this, but when I watched it through editor, I noticed that 00:35:309 (7,8,9,10) is a square like the first, but instead it's tilted. I think you should rotate it another 10-15 degrees. Whatever you do to this square, fix 00:48:943 (11) respectively. Done

01:08:372 This double-tapping bit here was confusing because of how sudden the move is. For a section like this, I suggest either taking out one note before the move, or making this a stream. I know that would require a little bit more remapping, but I'll leave it to you to decide what to do. I see your point. I turn last slider into two circle so player can get ready for double

At 01:17:149 (3) This slider is on the Blue tick (on the timeline). I think I know what you were trying to do, but notice how the slider extends past where it should end in order to match the rhythm of one eighth note. It needs to be shortened to the white line on the timeline to match the rhythm. OTHERWISE you could just move it back on tick and have it be a regular eighth note rhythm. Extended

02:02:567 This kind of sounds weird as all claps. Turned into a drum clap

02:04:868 Regarding that slider at 01:17:149 (3) I think this slider should be dealt with the same way, either shortened to the white line, or moved back one tick to match a typical rhythm. Extended

Lastly, the HP Drain/Note ratio. I think that, either the HP drain is too high, or there aren't enough notes for the HP drain to be forgiving enough. Understanding that this is Insane, it's up to you whether you want to change anything or not. Insane can be interpreted many ways. I think I will do a -1 because I want it to be a nice insae

Good luck again!

Disgallion wrote:

Bonsoir ! Réponse du M4M o/

Comme dit IG, je n'ai rien à dire concernant l'easy diff !

Normal :

01:16:552 (1,2) - C'est pas un peu violent comme jump pour une normal diff ? D: Un piti jump lent ne fait pas mal
01:18:768 (1) - Devrait être juste un peu plus loin vu que tu utilises le même espacement ici 01:11:099 (2,3) - alors que le timing est différent ! fait
01:22:858 (1) - Le triple HS gache un peu, j'en aurait mit qu'un seul sur la dernière partie Ca colle à la musique

Hard :

00:31:901 (2,3,4,5) - Le triangle ne va pas avec la voix je trouve, j'aurais supprimé le 4, et fait en sorte que le slider suive la voix, soit en reverse pour coller avec la baisse d'intonation, mais dans les deux cas en l'allongeant pour qu'il finisse 1/2 derrière 00:31:901 (2,3,4,5) - fait
01:12:462 (1,2,3) - C'est infime mais l'écart en Y n'est pas le même !fait
01:21:665 (1,1,1,1) - Sympathique mais vraiment trop simple / ennuyant pour du hard je pense !fait
01:27:800 (3) - Lève juste un chouia l'inclinaison pour suivre les circles précédentsfait
01:29:675 (7) - Jusqu'à 01:31:550 (5) - C'est un peu pauvre je trouve ici par rapport aux paroles ! fait
02:14:838 (1,2) - Pas symétrique !fait

Insane :

01:19:961 (3,7) - C'est normal qu'elles soient décalées ?fait
01:24:733 (1,2,3,1) - Le reverse slider sonne faux, je l'aurais supprimé, et j'aurais déplacé les 3 circles précédents de sorte qu'ils finissent 1/2 avant
le slider 01:25:755 (2) - fait
01:45:184 (1,3) - Tu peux rajouter un circle 1/2 avant :3fait
01:45:865 (5) - Raccourci le d'1/4 !fait
01:50:297 (1) - Alors pour ça, l'augmentation soudaine au x1.50 pour un slider aussi énorme, j'ai peur que n'importe qui se fasse avoir une fois si il ne le sait pas à l'avance, ce qui n'est pas fun ! Comme discuté, le rythme baisse, ca compense à mon goût
01:53:023 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Là au contraire c'est trop simple pour de l'insane, mets un peu plus de distance entre les slider->circle ! fait
01:55:068 (2) - Devrait être un chouillat plus haut pour suivre l'inclinaison fait
01:55:750 (1) - Tu devrais compliquer les chose ici, le vide se ressent par rapport au son fait
02:05:209 (3,4) - Ils sonnent mieux si tu les recule d'1/4 fait

Sinooon dans toutes les diffs tu as des hitsound (souvent des claps) qui ne s’enchaînent pas, ça fais bizarre Ca il faut me les signaler pour m'aider
Et euh voilà !

Bonne soirée o/

Ntasuto wrote:

Mushi Mushi :P coming from #Modreq

so

Easy

SPOILER

Looks good to me . Great job Ami is happy

Normal

SPOILER

01:30:868 (5) - I think it should end here 01:31:038 not here 01:31:209 Both work indeed, but I prefer a long slider that suit the long vocal

Hard

SPOILER

00:35:309 (5) - I think is should end here 00:35:650 not here 00:35:480 It's better indeed
01:13:485 (1) - make this spinner end here 01:15:871 Thanks !

Kaizoku no o

SPOILER

01:19:790 - add note here yes
01:20:131 - ^ yes
01:30:698 - ^ yes
01:30:868 - ^ yes
01:31:038 - ^ yes
01:35:299 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe put some space between 01:35:299 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:36:322 (6,7,8) For spacing I can't move it :/
01:38:622 (1) - move it to 01:38:708 , sounds much better Agree

01:40:753 (3,4) - needs fix, sounds ugly. My suggestion:- Before: http://puu.sh/4xiHZ.jpg, After1: http://puu.sh/4xiJV.jpg or After2: http://puu.sh/4xiKz.jpg /// whatever sound better to you, imo they both kinda feet but mostly After1 i think after 2 is better

01:50:297 (1) - the slider end is on a random spot in timeline , edit the slider length a little Fixed !
01:53:535 (2,3,4) - Doesn't sound right, move 01:53:620 (3) to 01:53:875 OR add 2 notes here for mini steam: 01:53:790 - 01:53:875 ! They both fit the rhythm Mini steam :3
01:54:898 (2,3,4) - Same as above, move 01:54:983 (3) to 01:55:239 OR add 2 notes here for mini stream :01:55:154 - 01:55:239 ! - ^ Mini steam :3
01:56:261 (2,3,4) - ^ , Move 01:56:347 (3) - to 01:56:602 - OR add 2 notes here for a mini stream : 01:56:517 - 01:56:602 ! - ^ Mini steam :3
01:58:477 (4,5) - 2 Options i suggest here, Either remove 01:59:159 (5) OR remove both and add a slider at 01:58:477 until 01:59:499 ! Mini steam :3
01:59:670 (6,7,8) - Move them to 01:59:499 - 01:59:585 - 01:59:670 respectively and replace (8) with a slider until 01:59:840 Slider
02:06:231 (4) - Move to 02:06:146 - and make it one snap linger until 02:06:657 Done
02:07:509 - Add a note here , the beat does not stop Ninja beat O_o

I tried my best, hope i helped You helped me a lot my friend! Thanks
Mushi Mushi awaaaayyyy

1. You can add bookmarks (ctrl+B) on a timeline on the very first note, just to easy navigate

1. 02:02:397 - I'd move slider (3) forward 1 snap on 1/2 divisor, and place one circle before (on the place where the slider is now)

1. The beginning: u could reach perfect symmetry by moving notes not necessary ~
2. 00:48:943(1) - Placing this circle ruins square and this new combo is necessary?
3. 01:17:149(3) - I don't like place for this slider, you should move it back on 1/4 beat snapping, or 1 forward on 1/6 (better back on 1/4 I think)
4. 02:21:655 - why last slider on the same place as 6?

Jinxy wrote:

[General]
The timing feels weird at parts, I'd suggest you find someone good in timing to help you with it. The timing already have been checked twice, and once by a great mapper
The length of the last spinner is completely random in Normal, Hard and Kaizoku, with no good reason. Please standardize where it ends. I take care of it

[Kaizoku]
I think the problem here is that you're mapping too much by only following the drum beat at the start, which results in constant 1/1s or 1/2s that aren't fun to play. Try and map more to the voice and trumpet. Actually I maped over drum, bass, and trumpet using vocal for empty space :/
Another part which might be considered not fun to play is how the beats are placed, if you keep placing them in a constant pattern more then twice or so, it looks and plays really boring too. I personally like when a pattern appears more than twice
For example, 00:27:470 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - is just the same beat over and over again, and placement is centered around the middle. Here's a small example of what I personally would do: http://puu.sh/4xm9Y.jpg The point of the pattern is to exist six time as the bass rythm

I'll put a * on the parts where I feel is too repetitive.

00:31:901 (2,3,4) - The beats here aren't 1/1 apart, (3) should be on 00:32:156, (4) starts on 00:32:412. The repeats sound kinda bad too, so maybe make (4) a long slider or a spinner? With slider it's more alive
*00:35:480 (6,7,8) - These beats feel overmapped, I don't hear what they are mapped to. Try making another pattern in this combo that doesn't keep going back to the point, too. It fit the drums
*00:39:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part keeps going back to the center, so try using another shape. Try mapping to the voice here. Improved
*00:49:966 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Also, the combo here is not of even length. I would remove NC on 00:50:648 (1). Add new combo instead
*00:52:693 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - I like it
*00:54:738 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - i like it not too hard here
00:59:169 (1) - From here on, it's not too bad, so you can use the rest of the map as a reference to what patterns feel overdone.
01:03:089 - The stack starts here, add a beat here. Done
01:08:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I can not hear what this stack is mapped to at all, and it feels a little overmapped. I would just follow the voice, but if not, then I think this should be made into a stream instead because splitting them into 2 stacks makes no sense imo, and (6) is too far from the first stack. Drums here
*01:19:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Modded previously
01:30:868 - This sudden break in the combo feels really weird. Map this part out more, and with more than just plain notes. Modded previously
01:35:299 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't know what this is mapped to, either, so same suggestion, try and take the voice into account. And stacking so many beats usually doesn't look very good. Position them out more. Drums and bass again
01:38:963 (2,3) and 01:40:753 (3,4) - This is not very good at all. In the first combo, they are 1/1 yet put on each other, while the next combo is 1/4 but still spaced the same as the first. My suggestion is to not stack 01:39:730 (3) under (2), and shorten 01:40:753 (3) to the previous red tick. Modded previously
02:06:231 (4) - Start this 1/4 earlier, on the red tick. Modded previously

[Hard]
00:31:901 (2,3) - These two beats don't follow the music very well. There should be something on 00:32:156 and 00:32:412. I would suggest a slider: http://puu.sh/4xmKr.jpg This as been fixed by a previous mod
00:41:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing is really uneven, some sliders overlap the next one a little. Fixed
01:12:803 (3) - Remove one repeat and make it 1/4 longer, it fits the voice better. Fixed
01:22:347 (2,3,1) - This spacing is just wrong, (3) is much too close to (1). Same for the next few beats. This as been fixed by a previous mod

WujekGrzyb wrote:

Hi! m4m

All diffs

1. You can add bookmarks (ctrl+B) on a timeline on the very first note, just to easy navigate Never thought about it !

TIMING
I tryed to fix timing problems at the song ending, but I haven't look at beggining yet. but here is what I've done:

Since you are the second person saying that I will ask for a third timming check :/

Hard

1. 02:02:397 - I'd move slider (3) forward 1 snap on 1/2 divisor, and place one circle before (on the place where the slider is now) Good Idea!

Kaizoku no o

1. The beginning: u could reach perfect symmetry by moving notes not necessary ~ Achieved !
2. 00:48:943(1) - Placing this circle ruins square and this new combo is necessary? Modified
3. 01:17:149(3) - I don't like place for this slider, you should move it back on 1/4 beat snapping, or 1 forward on 1/6 (better back on 1/4 I think) I will change it
4. 02:21:655 - why last slider on the same place as 6? Because I like it ? :)

You did this good so far, it should be marked as ranked soon Thanks !

YunoFanatic wrote:

m4m <3

Easy

00:29:174 it should be like this http://puu.sh/4xrss.jpg since this is easy you really need to perfect blanket,pattern,hitsound and overlapping so the appearance for the diff is pretty neat for beginners.. you should snap the next notes after you do this I can't do that du to snapping distance
00:33:946 why antijump? snap it and place to 128|48 so it has banket Done
00:44:853 - 00:46:217 i dont like the overlap of this 2 notes i suggest just make a blanket here No T_T
00:50:988 fix your blanket http://puu.sh/4xrBl.jpg this didnt have overlap so i think this is blanket then snap the next notes Fixed
00:59:510 delete nc then add the nc on 00:59:851 No
01:10:076 why is this unsnapped? this is very annoying for easy specially the note is too close to the slider.. you should snap this and snap the next notes Here it's snapped
01:31:891 make this curve Already curvy
02:03:931 this timing point (green) why isnt this a kiai time? i am totally sure this should be a kiai time One is enough

Normal

00:33:605 this note isnt really much covered by the slider 00:33:946 Fixed
00:46:898 whstle isnt really needed add the whistle on the next note No
00:51:329 just blanket this with 00:50:818 You love blanket, don't you ?
00:57:124 you could try your fancy sliders here instead of the curve one it could do much better Too much fancy make it common
01:00:873 im really sure you missed nc here because the nc pattern on the upcoming notes Fixed
01:39:048 - 01:39:730 really bad overlap just blanket this it would be fine There is no overlap here O_o
01:47:911 add clap in slider head you do this in before sliders Done
01:59:670 why did you make this curve now it looks aweful :/ Because it's curvy after and that i can't make triplet for normal diff
02:05:124 no fancy slider? i suggest copy 00:39:400 and paste it then curve it a little bit and shorten Too much fancy make it common


Hard

00:32:071 this slider is too close to the note you can still snap it somewhere else that didnt touch the note I want perfect triangle here
01:00:532 not really fan of 2 repeat-slider specially in insane and hard its too hard to catch But that's the point :3
01:58:477 what happen with this slider? It follows the vocal change
02:02:567 rather having this looooong slider repeat you can add streams too! No stream for hard

Im blown by this slider formations <3 specially 01:05:304 so majestic! Thanks !

Insane

its all good!

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

+1 star for M4M as mentioned in queue

[General]
Easy is good but other diffs needed to be improved a little more
For Normal, Iard and Insane diff, please follow more cover instead of vocal, so it helps your map to get ranked faster
Your map is likely old maps style, try to refer to songs around the BPM of this song and see how mappers get ranked with their maps

02:03:953 - KIAI starts here
02:10:771 - KIAI off here

I disagree with an other Kiai

[Ami's Easy]
00:25:772 (1) - Move the tail of the sldier a little bit up and DS (distance snap), refer image below:
Done
00:27:135 - Whistle Done
00:30:544 (1,2,3,1) - Please use 1.0x DS if possibleDone
01:07:362 (2,3,4) - DS Done
01:43:498 (3) - Avoid stacking with 01:45:544 (2) - Done
01:53:044 - Break starts here I don't see the problem
02:03:953 - KIAI? Nope
02:03:953 - Fix timing point Done
02:20:998 - ^ Done
02:19:635 (2) - Avoid stacking with 02:21:680 (2) - because there's a reverse slide Done


[Normal]
Put some hitsounds, mainly claps I would welcome your help
Don't keep changing your DS (distance snap) Fixed at 1x
Use 1/2 on mapping if possible, avoid 1/4 Some rythms have to be 1/4 imo
Change grid size to Tiny Done
00:27:475 - Clap Done
00:27:561 (1) - Move to white tick Done
00:30:203 - Clap Done
00:30:885 - ^ Done
00:32:930 (3) - Press G and change the grid size to "Tiny" and stack with the tail of 00:33:953 (1) - Done
00:33:612 (5) - Avoid stacking circle on slider This one is pretty imo
00:36:680 (1) - Remove NC and stack to the tail (hold shift and move if you cant stack perfectly) Done
00:42:305 - Make spinner starts here Done
00:44:862 (1) - Too far from middle after a spinner, change to a circle or remove it or move more to middle Done
01:11:112 (2) - Change to long slider instead of short reverse Short reverse fit the vocals
01:11:623 (3) - Delete this and extend the slider to here ^
01:15:544 - Make spinner stops here and add note 01:16:225 - Done
01:16:566 (1,2) - Don't make jumps, follow DS (use a constant DS and less mentionable change) Done
01:17:419 (3) - DS Done
01:18:271 (4,1) - ^ Done
01:22:873 (1) - Change to a slider instead of short reverse Short reverse is needed for rythm
01:26:453 - Make spinner stops here or 01:26:794 - Done
01:27:135 (1) - Too far from middle after a spinner Done
01:34:975 (3) - Blanket Done
01:36:680 (4) - Stack perfectly Done
01:47:930 (1) - Don't point reverse arrow side on previous note Done
01:53:044 (1) - I prefer original slider with 3 white pointsDone
01:54:407 (2) - ^ Done
01:53:044 (1,2,1,2,3) - Constant DS Done
01:59:691 (1) - Change to 1 slider Done
02:02:078 (6) - Delete this circle and make 02:02:248 (7) - stack on 02:02:419 (8) - , follow DS
02:07:362 (3,4) - It's close to HP bar, move down a little if possible
02:09:407 (1) - DS Done
02:09:407 (1) - Change to 2 sliders Nope
02:10:771 (2,3,4,5) - Make the direction same as 02:14:862 (1,2,3,4) - , the first set goes anticlockwise so follow by 2nd set too Done
02:27:816 - Extend spinner to here so it follows the vocal I reduced it because a too long spinner is not fair (score) for normal versus spin master

[Hard]
Add some hitsounds
00:25:772 (1) - Delete this and put something here 00:27:135 - , make it constant of where it starts on all difficulties All diff start on this spinner, so I will keep it
00:35:998 (1) - Stack this perfectly Done
00:55:430 (3) - Not good for the flow, don't reverse too many times instead, change to 2 sliders Sliders do not sound good :/
01:00:544 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^ Good as it is
01:04:294 (2) - Stack on 01:02:930 (4) - Done
01:10:089 (1,2) - Change to 2 circles which placed at the middle of previous slider (either stacking or not), time circles here 01:10:089 - and 01:10:430 - I did that before... and got modded T_T
01:12:816 (3) - Don't reverse too many times It's hard. twice is ok I think
01:20:998 (2) - Stack perfectly with tail of 01:21:680 (1) - , hold shift and move Done
01:59:862 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Constant spacing Can't do better :s
02:27:816 - Extend spinner to here Nope

[Kaizoku no o]
^ Change to "Kaizoku no ou" Done
It's really hard to mod for this diff, I suggest a remap and add more notes if you would like to do it I prefer heavy mod
Other diffs are using soft sampleset, so try to follow too for this diff Done
00:25:772 (1) - Same as hard diffs, delete and starts 00:27:135 - Nope
00:32:589 (4,1) - This pattern is not good Fixed
00:57:135 (1,2,3,1) - Make these sliders stop at red tick, it's hard to be played, refer these sliders 02:03:953 (1,2,3,4) - (applies to other same patterned sliders too) Done
01:21:339 (9) - Stack this perfectly Done
01:36:339 (6,7,8) - Don't stack Done
01:38:725 (1) - Make the ed of slider stick to 01:38:981 (2) - Done
02:19:038 (1) - Move to white tick Done
02:25:941 - Make a spinner here and stops 02:27:816 - Nope

Have to work more to get ranked >.o /

- Jelly - wrote:

Kaizoku no ou

00:32:589 (1) - 00:34:294 (2,4,) - 00:36:680 (2) - 加上clap 00:35:487 (2,4) - 去掉clap 这样感觉听起来更舒服点谢谢
01:04:464 - 前面做了个5连这里不加有点难受。没事儿
00:52:703 (1) - 00:53:385 (1) - 00:54:066 (1) - 加clap谢谢
00:57:135 (1,2,3) - 00:59:180 (1) - 滑条头部加Clap 谢谢
01:01:225 (1) - ^ 谢谢
00:59:862 - 之后这段没有音效有点单薄 我要安静的段
01:13:839 (1) - finish 谢谢
02:02:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 音量减小点，或者可以做个渐变 谢谢
02:26:112 - 再做个转盘 到02:28:498结束，加finish音效 谢谢

排版有点像老图，这种图的排版我不懂orz 抱歉。啊啊，多人告诉我:你的orz为2008orz一样

Hard

CS-1 我不会
00:32:078 (3) - 做一个弧度，blanket 会好看点 我最喜欢不用blanket在这儿
00:54:578 (1) - 跟着节奏比较好 00:54:407开始 不对，在00:54:578 他开始唱歌
01:12:816 (3) - 折返次数有点多。对
01:59:862 (2,3,4,5,6) - 对称做仔细 谢谢！
02:03:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这几个排的不好看
结尾跟ins一样比较好谢谢

Normal

01:05:657 (1) - 这转盘太长了，前面再做点东西 没事儿
01:11:623 (3,4) - normal不适合节奏这么变化，直接对在白线上吧
结尾问题同hard一样，最后跟ins一样做到曲子完没办法-我需要这个圆

Ami's Easy

00:30:203 (4) - 节奏不要变化，去掉这个 对

这类的图我是真的见得不多 orz...音效有点薄弱。clap建议多加一些。
最后祝rank ._. 谢谢！！！
能用中文mod真是太好了，我i英语无比差劲QAQ 啊啊啊，我觉得你的英语不错

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hi! Sorry it took awhile, but here's your re-check!

[Ami's Easy]
AR +1 I want to keep a low AR for an easy
00:25:772 (1) - Change the whistle on the tail to a finish, by double-clicking the tail on the timeline, like this:
done
00:29:180 (3,1) - ?

*You'l need to move 00:31:907 (2) - more down and to the right, but it shouldn't be too hard done
00:33:271 (3) - Remove. No, it's according to lyrics when he make a "Ah"
00:33:953 (1) - Place finish on the head and tail. done
00:39:407 (1) - Change whistle no the tail to a finish. done
00:48:271 (1) - Place finish on the tail. done
00:59:862 (2) - Change whistle to finish on the head. done
01:05:316 (1) - ^ done
01:22:703 - Need to add a note here for consistency. True
01:38:044 (1) - Pretty much flip 01:36:680 (1) - and use it here like this:
Modifications made
01:51:680 (2) - Change whistle to finish on the head. done
02:03:953 - Add Kai time here, and change volume on this timing point to 50% like the rest please. No kiai
02:20:998 - Is where Kai will end, and adjust volume to 40% ^
02:21:680 (2) - Add finish on the reverse. done

Definitely looks better then before, but could still use a bit of work with the rhythm. Hitsounding stills need some fixing though...I'll get onto that sometime later. Thanks !

[Normal]
00:25:772 (1) - Remove clap. done
00:27:475 (1) - Too close to the previous spinner,move it to 00:27:816 and remove 00:28:157 (2) - I think it's good for normal
00:31:566 - Rhythm suggestion:
Your pretty much switching 00:32:589 (2,3,4) - with 00:31:566 (1) - and expanding the slider as well. This slider fits better at 00:32:589 because it matches the long hold on the 'ta'i in the lyrics if you listen carefully. You're right, but I tried an other rythm instead
00:33:953 (1) - Switch whistle with a finish on the head.done
00:36:680 (2) - Remove clap,not needed. done
00:44:862 (1) - To close to the previous spinner...try removing it, and pulling the spinner's end to this point with a finish. That way, the space at 00:45:203 will help give time for players to react. same as above
00:48:953 (3) - Switch whistle with a finish on the head. Done
00:59:862 (1) - Add finish Done
01:16:566 (2,3) - Remove finish, use them sparingly. I think the 3 finish here fits
01:36:680 (4) - Remove clap. Done
02:03:953 - 02:20:998 Add Kai? No

[Hard]
CS +1? No
00:33:953 (1) - Finish on the head,clap on the tail instead. done
00:48:953 (3) - Remove clap. Done
00:59:862 (3) - Add finish Done
01:05:316 (1) - ^ on the head. Done
01:05:316 (1,1) - ...Didn't I say to fix this on the previous mod? And didn't I said I would not ? ^^
01:20:316 (5) - Move to 01:20:146 so it follows the vocals. You're right
01:34:635 (3) - Remove clap on the tail? done
01:56:964-Add note? right again !
02:03:953 - 02:20:998 Add Kai? No
02:08:385 (1) - Tail should end either at 02:09:407 or 02:10:089. I don't think so
02:12:135 (2) - Reversing the selection (Ctrl + G) Creates a better effect with the sliders, sincethey're 2/1 beats apart. Done
02:16:225 (2) - ^ DOne

Rhythm's ehh improved a bit.
[Insane]
Not yet I'm waiting for it ^^

Hope this helps~! ^^[/color]

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hi! Sorry it took awhile, but here's your re-check!
01:05:316 (1,1) - ...Didn't I say to fix this on the previous mod? And didn't I said I would not ? ^^ Umm okay. How about removing objects 01:10:089 (1,2) - since there's no vocals on that part?
Sorry, I'm just really desperate in seeing that bad overlap be removed. Overlaps are one of the most worst and obvious mistakes to see on a map

10crystalmask01 wrote:

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hi! Sorry it took awhile, but here's your re-check!
01:05:316 (1,1) - ...Didn't I say to fix this on the previous mod? And didn't I said I would not ? ^^ Umm okay. How about removing objects 01:10:089 (1,2) - since there's no vocals on that part?
Sorry, I'm just really desperate in seeing that bad overlap be removed. Overlaps are one of the most worst and obvious mistakes to see on a map

IRC fixed

[Navy] wrote:

Hello~ m4m request

[Ami's Easy]

00:42:816 (1,2) - change distance like (3) plz DS perfect, no

00:49:635 (3) - avoid overlapping with (2) Done

[Normal]

00:42:135 (4,1) - delete (4) and move (1) to 00:42:135 Done

00:58:839 (1) - delete nc? No, lyrics come again

01:25:260 (1) - I think this spinner is unnecessary.. sliders&circles are better I think it fits the lyrics

02:03:953 - how about adding kiai time in this timing? No kiai at the end

[Hard]

circle size 4 is better for hard diff Will not change it

00:58:498 (1) - delete nc and 00:59:862 (3) -nc ,01:00:544 (1) - delete nc <<just my think ! Better indeed


01:05:316 (1) - WOOWWW HOW TO MAKE IT? Thanks !

01:12:816 (3,1) - These notes are too close.. I recommend deleting one reverse on (3) No

[Kaizoku no ou]

00:52:703 (1) ~ you used too many NC. Change them plz Fixed

01:25:260 (1) - extend to 01:25:600 - No


That's all~ good luck

pife1 wrote:

Hi from your M4M

General:
I think that should have another KIAI: 02:03:953 No kiai at the end

In the Easy:
00:25:772 (1) - Please could put this note like this:
Image

No
00:27:475 - Should be a note here because the Singer continue singing It's bassed on bass, so no
00:28:839 -^ ^
00:30:203 - ^ ^
00:31:566 - ^ ^
00:44:862 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of slider Done
00:50:657 (1,3,2,1,3,2,4,2,4) - these clap don't have rhythm! if you want a normal rhythm need use a note White(clap) after wait a note White but without use the clap and after at the following note White add a clap, a rhythm like the choir with the whistles There is no problem here

Image

But real problema are yours slider longer they occupied three note White
01:13:498 (1) - it should end : 01:15:885 No
01:16:225 (1) - Move to 01:16:225 of course there will three notes empty ^
01:27:475 - Should have a note here No

In the Normal:
00:28:498 (1) - Remove combo No, it fits the Tomarenaii
01:05:657 (1) - Please don't use like this the spiral like a filler please remove and add circles and sliders It fells right to me
01:34:975 (3) - the repeating of slider is out flow ?

In the Hard:
00:49:975 (1,2,3) - These drums are out flow listen to lyrics : A-I-E, three note, three drums
01:00:544 (1,3,1) - Their repeating are longer Fits the music
01:05:316 (1) - Oh my god this slider honestly I think that it look weird I only feel that is filler please remove So you missed the squid form. Definitly will not remove
01:57:135 (2) - New combo Done
01:57:475 (1) - Remove combo Done

In the Insane:
00:29:862 (2,2,3) - I think that you should change them by a slider and beginning with a note White and end with red No
00:35:487 (2,3,4,5) - This change of rhythm is a bit weird Welcome to insane
02:02:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Holy steam tell me you can do this difficulty in SS ^

Honestly I think that the hard and Insane need more work

Good luck

1. Pourquoi ne pas mapper jusqu'au bout? Il te manque à peine 10 secondes et en plus c'est cette partie qui est surement la plus épique alors ça fait bizarre de la voir pas mappée.
2. Normal HP-1 et OD-1 pour équilibrer avec la hard et la easy.

1. I refuse to mod people who don't respond to the mod and since i didn't see you responding to any. I'm not modding this.

1. 00:33:953 (1) - Je ne comprend pas l'intéret du grand slider ici. Il y a énormément de rythme ici qui passe à la trappe à cause de ça. Ce genre de gros slider n'est que rarement utilisée à la place d'un spinner lorsqu'un son est maintenue pendant longtemps donc voir un slider pareil ici ça fait très random. Voila un exemple de rythme que tu aurais pu utiliser:
   
2. 00:36:680 (5) - Remplace la note par un slider de longueur 2 temps? Tu suis la voix et vu que cette note est maintenue pendant 2 temps il vaut mieux mettre un slider ça correspondra mieux à la chanson.
3. 00:39:407 (1) - Comme pour 00:33:953. Pourquoi pas:
   
4. 00:47:419 (4) - Remplace par un slider jusqu'à 00:47:930? Puisque c'est jusque là que la note est maintenue dans la musique.
5. 01:05:657 (1) - Pourquoi un spinner ici. Tu pourrais très bien mappé cette partie là puisqu'il y a beaucoup de vocals et d'instru. Rien ne justifie un spinner ici. Comparé à, par exemple 01:13:498 (1), qui lui est très bien justifié puisqu'il suit la voix qui maintien un son. D'ailleurs t'aurais très bien pu mettre a la place du spinner un de tes random long slider ici ça serait passé sans problème!
6. 01:17:248 - ajoute une note ici. Le trou de 3/2 entre les notes est très complexe à joué pour une normal et est en général à éviter s'il n'est pas bien justifié par la musique. Ce qui n'est pas le cas ici car la voix chante une note ici donc il en faut une!
   01:22:873 (1) - Interdiction aux 1/4 dans une normal! Même en slider avec reverse. Et l'excuse du "mais je veux suivre la voix parfaitement ne tiens pas" car tu ne respectes pas du tout cette règle à de nombreux endroits de la map (genre 00:57:135 (5) et tout les autres longs sliders par exemple). D'ailleurs tu n'as pas mis le 1/4 à 01:59:691 (1).
   01:27:135 (1,2) - Utilise plutôt ce rythme, ça concorde beaucoup mieux:
   
7. 01:30:032 (2,3,4) - Ta diff à tellement peu de 1/2 que ça fait vraiment bizarre de voir ça. Ca créé un énorme pic de difficulté qui est plutôt désagréable à jouer. Reregarde le début de ta map qui n'a quasiment aucun 1/2 et tu verras qu'il y a beaucoup de 1/2 dans les vocals que tu as justement skippé alors mieux vaut faire pareil ici et changele rythme afin de rendre le pattern plus simple.
8. 01:32:589 (1) - Commence le 1/2 beat plus tôt car c'est là que le chanteur commence à crié (ralenti la chanson si tu me croit pas)
9. 01:34:294 (1,2,3,4) - Alors là ca ne suit pas du tout la voix bizarrement alors que tu la suit depuis le début. Fait plutôt ça:
   
10. 02:03:953 (1,2,3,1) - La musique répète 2 fois la même chose et tu utilises 2 rythme radicalement différent. Pourquoi? Retire le slider et utilise un rythme similaire à 02:03:953 (1,2,3). Je ne te dis pas de forcement utilisé le même mais au moins un truc qui ressemble.
11. 02:21:680 (5) - Rajoutes une fleche? Le chanteur fini la note à 02:22:703.
12. 02:25:430 - Rajoute une note ici ainsi qu'à 02:25:771. Bizarrement tu l'as fait dans la insane mais pas ici. C'est vraiment bizarre pourtant c'est des notes puissantes et qui doivent être jouées.

1. 00:32:589 (2,1) - Overlap pas très joli.
2. 00:41:453 (2) - Ta donné une forme un peu bizarre à ton slider. Il a l'air un peu "cassé" au bout. Essaye de donné une forme plus arrondie.
3. 00:48:953 (3) - Pas très joli. Les sliders à 3 points font automatiquement de belles courbes donc essaye de les utilisés au plus possible dans ce genre de cas.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:53:044 (4) - ^ (etc....)
5. 02:06:510 (1,2) - Mauvais sapcing (x0.87 au lieu de x1.0)
6. 01:39:748 (2) - Bouge la note à x=244 y=80 pour la double blanket.
7. 01:43:328 (4) - Cette fois le slider est bien justifié musicalement, félicitation! Par contre utilise un slider a 3 points, c'est bien plus joli:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:58:839 (1,1) - Il y a un NC de trop ici. Le combos de longueurs 1 sont en général assez rare dans les normal et ne sont là que si il y a quelque chose de particulier dans la chanson ce qui n'est pas le cas ici.

1. 00:29:862 - Pourquoi pas de note ici? La voix chante une note comme pour 00:29:691 (6,1,2,3,4).
2. 00:32:589 (4) - Commence le slider 1/2 beat plus tôt. C'est là que le chanteur commence à crier.
3. 00:35:998 (1) - Rajoute une flèche à la fin du slider car le chanteur maintien la note finale pendant ces 2 beats.
4. 00:41:964 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ce rtyhme ne suit vraiment rien. J'ai beau écouté je vois vraiment pas pourquoi t'as fait ça. Ici c'est plus l'endroit pour mettre un spinner comme en normal.
5. 00:44:862 (1,2,3) - Pourquoi il n'y a pas de note sur les 1/2 entre les notes déja mise? Tu as plutôt l'habitude de les mettre comme pour 00:49:975 (1,2,3) ou 00:29:691 (6,1,2,3,4). Mieux vaut avoir une logique de mapping constant ou la map parait random.
6. 00:49:294 - Met un slider de longueur 1/2 ici? Pourquoi ignorer ces notes très puissante? Surtout que tu as déja montré que tu suivais quelquefois l'instru lorsqu'il n'y avait pas de voix.
7. 01:00:544 (3,5,7) - Si tu écoutes bien tu entendras que ces sliders commencent 1/2 beat trop tôt. La voix commence sur le red tick!
8. 01:05:316 (1) - Ok, le slider est joli je suis d'accord mais ce n'est pas "on créé le pattern et on essaye de le faire coller au rythme de la musique d'une façon ou d'une autre" mais c'est "on utilise le rythme de la musique et ses contraintes pour créé les patterns donc ton slider, aussi joli soit it, n'a rien à faire ici et tu dois mapper cet endroit normalement.
9. 01:35:998 (5) - Comme pour 00:35:998.
10. 01:45:203 (2,2) - C'était bien parti, tes gros sliders commençaient à être justifié par la musique mais non tu as recraqué! Donc retire-les et utilises le vrai rythme. Et si jamais tu persistes a les garder au moins transforme les en slider a 3 points ce sera vachement plus joli et fait les terminer 1/2 beat plus tard car écoute bien la musique c'est là qu'ils doivent terminer.
11. 01:59:691 - Non mais là t'as le droit d'utiliser 1/4 alors vas-y! Fait un triplet!
12. 02:08:385 (1) - Retire le spinner et mappe cette partie-là. Le spinner n'a rien à faire ici.
13. 02:19:975 - Rajoute une note ici.
14. 02:25:430 - Rajoute les 2 notes de fin.

1. 00:32:078 (3) - Courbe le sldier pour éviter l'overlap pas très esthétique et faire une blanket à la place.
2. 01:03:271 (7) - Oriente ce slider dans le sens opposé ca fera plus joli pour le pattern et ça donnera un bien meilleur flow.
3. 01:39:407 (3,4) - Pourquoi un spacing si petit (x0.86)?
4. 01:41:794 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 01:53:044 (1,1) - Le stack est pas bon.
6. 01:58:498 (4) - La forme bizarroïde de ce slider n'est pas du tout justifié. Fait un slider normal ici.

1. 01:35:998 (5) - Tu avais mis un NC à 00:35:998 qui est un endroit complètement identique dans la musique.

1. Le titre de la diff est vraiment bizarre. Pourquoi ne pas l'apeller insane tout simplement?

1. Trop de problème de rythme, je ne peux pas là.

1. 01:50:316 (1) - Ok, cette fois le placement du slider est bien justifié. Malheureusement c'est totalement unrankable car l’accélération est violente et injustifiée. On sent qu'elle est là juste pour pouvoir casé le slider et rien d'autre ce qui n'est pas bon.

rezoons wrote:

Salut ^^,

Voilà mon mod comme promis:

[Général]

1. Pourquoi ne pas mapper jusqu'au bout? Il te manque à peine 10 secondes et en plus c'est cette partie qui est surement la plus épique alors ça fait bizarre de la voir pas mappée. Honnêtement, je suis très embêté avec la fin de ma map, je ne sais pas trop quoi en faire. Mais je vais y réfléchir
2. Normal HP-1 et OD-1 pour équilibrer avec la hard et la easy.

Plop de fait !

[Ami's Easy]

1. I refuse to mod people who don't respond to the mod and since i didn't see you responding to any. I'm not modding this.

Bon, un mod en moins à faire ^^

[Normal]
Rythm

1. 00:33:953 (1) - Je ne comprend pas l'intéret du grand slider ici. Il y a énormément de rythme ici qui passe à la trappe à cause de ça. Ce genre de gros slider n'est que rarement utilisée à la place d'un spinner lorsqu'un son est maintenue pendant longtemps donc voir un slider pareil ici ça fait très random. Voila un exemple de rythme que tu aurais pu utiliser:
   Très bon point
2. 00:36:680 (5) - Remplace la note par un slider de longueur 2 temps? Tu suis la voix et vu que cette note est maintenue pendant 2 temps il vaut mieux mettre un slider ça correspondra mieux à la chanson. bonne idée
3. 00:39:407 (1) - Comme pour 00:33:953. Pourquoi pas:
   Je le trouve bon celui là
4. 00:47:419 (4) - Remplace par un slider jusqu'à 00:47:930? Puisque c'est jusque là que la note est maintenue dans la musique. Bonne idée
5. 01:05:657 (1) - Pourquoi un spinner ici. Tu pourrais très bien mappé cette partie là puisqu'il y a beaucoup de vocals et d'instru. Rien ne justifie un spinner ici. Comparé à, par exemple 01:13:498 (1), qui lui est très bien justifié puisqu'il suit la voix qui maintien un son. D'ailleurs t'aurais très bien pu mettre a la place du spinner un de tes random long slider ici ça serait passé sans problème! Oh, feignant que je suis... je vais mapper tout ca !
6. 01:17:248 - ajoute une note ici. Le trou de 3/2 entre les notes est très complexe à joué pour une normal et est en général à éviter s'il n'est pas bien justifié par la musique. Ce qui n'est pas le cas ici car la voix chante une note ici donc il en faut une! Oh, rajouté
   01:22:873 (1) - Interdiction aux 1/4 dans une normal! Même en slider avec reverse. Et l'excuse du "mais je veux suivre la voix parfaitement ne tiens pas" car tu ne respectes pas du tout cette règle à de nombreux endroits de la map (genre 00:57:135 (5) et tout les autres longs sliders par exemple). D'ailleurs tu n'as pas mis le 1/4 à 01:59:691 (1). Je veux bien que ce soit interdit, mais j'ai rien de mieux pour cette partie
   01:27:135 (1,2) - Utilise plutôt ce rythme, ça concorde beaucoup mieux:
   Je préfère mon rythme
7. 01:30:032 (2,3,4) - Ta diff à tellement peu de 1/2 que ça fait vraiment bizarre de voir ça. Ca créé un énorme pic de difficulté qui est plutôt désagréable à jouer. Reregarde le début de ta map qui n'a quasiment aucun 1/2 et tu verras qu'il y a beaucoup de 1/2 dans les vocals que tu as justement skippé alors mieux vaut faire pareil ici et changele rythme afin de rendre le pattern plus simple.Je trouve qu'un pic de difficulté est toujours nécessaire. Je ne peux pas prendre toutes les vocals en compte toujours, je fais des erreurs après tout
8. 01:32:589 (1) - Commence le 1/2 beat plus tôt car c'est là que le chanteur commence à crié (ralenti la chanson si tu me croit pas) Fait
9. 01:34:294 (1,2,3,4) - Alors là ca ne suit pas du tout la voix bizarrement alors que tu la suit depuis le début. Fait plutôt ça:
   Je ne suis pas que la voix, mais les drums et la basse aussi
10. 02:03:953 (1,2,3,1) - La musique répète 2 fois la même chose et tu utilises 2 rythme radicalement différent. Pourquoi? Retire le slider et utilise un rythme similaire à 02:03:953 (1,2,3). Je ne te dis pas de forcement utilisé le même mais au moins un truc qui ressemble.Parce que je n'aime pas trop me répéter dans mon mappage
11. 02:21:680 (5) - Rajoutes une fleche? Le chanteur fini la note à 02:22:703. Oui !
12. 02:25:430 - Rajoute une note ici ainsi qu'à 02:25:771. Bizarrement tu l'as fait dans la insane mais pas ici. C'est vraiment bizarre pourtant c'est des notes puissantes et qui doivent être jouées.

Je m'en occuperais
Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:32:589 (2,1) - Overlap pas très joli. reglé
2. 00:41:453 (2) - Ta donné une forme un peu bizarre à ton slider. Il a l'air un peu "cassé" au bout. Essaye de donné une forme plus arrondie. modifié
3. 00:48:953 (3) - Pas très joli. Les sliders à 3 points font automatiquement de belles courbes donc essaye de les utilisés au plus possible dans ce genre de cas.réglé
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:53:044 (4) - ^ (etc....) réglé
5. 02:06:510 (1,2) - Mauvais sapcing (x0.87 au lieu de x1.0) fait
6. 01:39:748 (2) - Bouge la note à x=244 y=80 pour la double blanket. Fait
7. 01:43:328 (4) - Cette fois le slider est bien justifié musicalement, félicitation! Par contre utilise un slider a 3 points, c'est bien plus joli:
   
   SPOILER

   

Fait
NC

1. 00:58:839 (1,1) - Il y a un NC de trop ici. Le combos de longueurs 1 sont en général assez rare dans les normal et ne sont là que si il y a quelque chose de particulier dans la chanson ce qui n'est pas le cas ici.

Fait

[Hard]
Rythm

1. 00:29:862 - Pourquoi pas de note ici? La voix chante une note comme pour 00:29:691 (6,1,2,3,4).
2. 00:32:589 (4) - Commence le slider 1/2 beat plus tôt. C'est là que le chanteur commence à crier.
3. 00:35:998 (1) - Rajoute une flèche à la fin du slider car le chanteur maintien la note finale pendant ces 2 beats.
4. 00:41:964 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ce rtyhme ne suit vraiment rien. J'ai beau écouté je vois vraiment pas pourquoi t'as fait ça. Ici c'est plus l'endroit pour mettre un spinner comme en normal.
5. 00:44:862 (1,2,3) - Pourquoi il n'y a pas de note sur les 1/2 entre les notes déja mise? Tu as plutôt l'habitude de les mettre comme pour 00:49:975 (1,2,3) ou 00:29:691 (6,1,2,3,4). Mieux vaut avoir une logique de mapping constant ou la map parait random.
6. 00:49:294 - Met un slider de longueur 1/2 ici? Pourquoi ignorer ces notes très puissante? Surtout que tu as déja montré que tu suivais quelquefois l'instru lorsqu'il n'y avait pas de voix.
7. 01:00:544 (3,5,7) - Si tu écoutes bien tu entendras que ces sliders commencent 1/2 beat trop tôt. La voix commence sur le red tick!
8. 01:05:316 (1) - Ok, le slider est joli je suis d'accord mais ce n'est pas "on créé le pattern et on essaye de le faire coller au rythme de la musique d'une façon ou d'une autre" mais c'est "on utilise le rythme de la musique et ses contraintes pour créé les patterns donc ton slider, aussi joli soit it, n'a rien à faire ici et tu dois mapper cet endroit normalement.
9. 01:35:998 (5) - Comme pour 00:35:998.
10. 01:45:203 (2,2) - C'était bien parti, tes gros sliders commençaient à être justifié par la musique mais non tu as recraqué! Donc retire-les et utilises le vrai rythme. Et si jamais tu persistes a les garder au moins transforme les en slider a 3 points ce sera vachement plus joli et fait les terminer 1/2 beat plus tard car écoute bien la musique c'est là qu'ils doivent terminer.
11. 01:59:691 - Non mais là t'as le droit d'utiliser 1/4 alors vas-y! Fait un triplet!
12. 02:08:385 (1) - Retire le spinner et mappe cette partie-là. Le spinner n'a rien à faire ici.
13. 02:19:975 - Rajoute une note ici.
14. 02:25:430 - Rajoute les 2 notes de fin.

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:32:078 (3) - Courbe le sldier pour éviter l'overlap pas très esthétique et faire une blanket à la place.
2. 01:03:271 (7) - Oriente ce slider dans le sens opposé ca fera plus joli pour le pattern et ça donnera un bien meilleur flow.
3. 01:39:407 (3,4) - Pourquoi un spacing si petit (x0.86)?
4. 01:41:794 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 01:53:044 (1,1) - Le stack est pas bon.
6. 01:58:498 (4) - La forme bizarroïde de ce slider n'est pas du tout justifié. Fait un slider normal ici.

NC

1. 01:35:998 (5) - Tu avais mis un NC à 00:35:998 qui est un endroit complètement identique dans la musique.

[Insane]

1. Le titre de la diff est vraiment bizarre. Pourquoi ne pas l'apeller insane tout simplement?

Rythm

1. Trop de problème de rythme, je ne peux pas là.

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 01:50:316 (1) - Ok, cette fois le placement du slider est bien justifié. Malheureusement c'est totalement unrankable car l’accélération est violente et injustifiée. On sent qu'elle est là juste pour pouvoir casé le slider et rien d'autre ce qui n'est pas bon.

Bon, au cas où tu ne l'est pas compris ton défaut majeur c'est le !!!!!RYTHME!!!!! Tu dois créé tes patterns en fonction de la musique et non créé tes pattern d'abord et essayer de les faire coller quelque part après cela pose sinon de nombreux problème. Je te conseille vraiment de revoir completement le rythme utilisé dans toutes tes diffs car il est vraiment chaotique à certains moment. Je pense avoir corrigé le plus gros de la normal et hard mais il reste encore quelques problèmes plus mineurs. Quand à la insane elle est bourée de problème de rythme, serieux recheck là mais au ralenti (75% et 50%) et tu verras.

Sinon j'ai pas check les hitsounds mais de ce que j'ai entendu il pourraient vraiment être amélioré. Notamment les finish qui sont un peu random a certains passage et qui manquent à d'autres.

Aussi fait attention à tes sliders. Lorsque tu veux faire une forme simple utilise els slider à 3 points c'est essentiel!!!!!!

Sinon pour les pattern c'est très inconsistant. La hard a de bons pattern, la normal alterne entre des bons pattern et du random mais je suppose que les bons patterns sont du remapping et que le reste est ce qui reste de la diff avant qu'elle soit moddée. Et la insane c'est à peu près pareil.

En tout cas je te conseille vraiment de retravaillé ces points. Je ne pense pas que ta map est prête pour les BAT mais si tu doutes encore tu peux toujours demander à gabe par exemple (ou a un autre bat) de faire un testpaly rapide.

Bon, en espérant que ça t'as aidé et pas découragé

-Man wrote:

Hi HeShu

[Insane]

• 01:32:589 (1) - 01:33:271 (2) - Tried to fix this section
  
  01:38:981 (2) - Fix This https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1214804
  
  Go to make the change hitsound up to 70%
  This will be interesting to hear http://puu.sh/64r2J.JPG

HeShu wrote:

Ohhhh le bon gros bébé !
Bon tu imagine bien que je vais moddé ma map par petit bout pour ne rien rater comme toi ^^

rezoons wrote:

Salut ^^,

Voilà mon mod comme promis:

[Général]

1. Pourquoi ne pas mapper jusqu'au bout? Il te manque à peine 10 secondes et en plus c'est cette partie qui est surement la plus épique alors ça fait bizarre de la voir pas mappée. Honnêtement, je suis très embêté avec la fin de ma map, je ne sais pas trop quoi en faire. Mais je vais y réfléchir
2. Normal HP-1 et OD-1 pour équilibrer avec la hard et la easy.

Plop de fait !

[Ami's Easy]

1. I refuse to mod people who don't respond to the mod and since i didn't see you responding to any. I'm not modding this.

Bon, un mod en moins à faire ^^

[Normal]
Rythm

1. 00:33:953 (1) - Je ne comprend pas l'intéret du grand slider ici. Il y a énormément de rythme ici qui passe à la trappe à cause de ça. Ce genre de gros slider n'est que rarement utilisée à la place d'un spinner lorsqu'un son est maintenue pendant longtemps donc voir un slider pareil ici ça fait très random. Voila un exemple de rythme que tu aurais pu utiliser:
   Très bon point
2. 00:36:680 (5) - Remplace la note par un slider de longueur 2 temps? Tu suis la voix et vu que cette note est maintenue pendant 2 temps il vaut mieux mettre un slider ça correspondra mieux à la chanson. bonne idée
3. 00:39:407 (1) - Comme pour 00:33:953. Pourquoi pas:
   Je le trouve bon celui là
4. 00:47:419 (4) - Remplace par un slider jusqu'à 00:47:930? Puisque c'est jusque là que la note est maintenue dans la musique. Bonne idée
5. 01:05:657 (1) - Pourquoi un spinner ici. Tu pourrais très bien mappé cette partie là puisqu'il y a beaucoup de vocals et d'instru. Rien ne justifie un spinner ici. Comparé à, par exemple 01:13:498 (1), qui lui est très bien justifié puisqu'il suit la voix qui maintien un son. D'ailleurs t'aurais très bien pu mettre a la place du spinner un de tes random long slider ici ça serait passé sans problème! Oh, feignant que je suis... je vais mapper tout ca !
6. 01:17:248 - ajoute une note ici. Le trou de 3/2 entre les notes est très complexe à joué pour une normal et est en général à éviter s'il n'est pas bien justifié par la musique. Ce qui n'est pas le cas ici car la voix chante une note ici donc il en faut une! Oh, rajouté
   01:22:873 (1) - Interdiction aux 1/4 dans une normal! Même en slider avec reverse. Et l'excuse du "mais je veux suivre la voix parfaitement ne tiens pas" car tu ne respectes pas du tout cette règle à de nombreux endroits de la map (genre 00:57:135 (5) et tout les autres longs sliders par exemple). D'ailleurs tu n'as pas mis le 1/4 à 01:59:691 (1). Je veux bien que ce soit interdit, mais j'ai rien de mieux pour cette partie
   01:27:135 (1,2) - Utilise plutôt ce rythme, ça concorde beaucoup mieux:
   Je préfère mon rythme
7. 01:30:032 (2,3,4) - Ta diff à tellement peu de 1/2 que ça fait vraiment bizarre de voir ça. Ca créé un énorme pic de difficulté qui est plutôt désagréable à jouer. Reregarde le début de ta map qui n'a quasiment aucun 1/2 et tu verras qu'il y a beaucoup de 1/2 dans les vocals que tu as justement skippé alors mieux vaut faire pareil ici et changele rythme afin de rendre le pattern plus simple.Je trouve qu'un pic de difficulté est toujours nécessaire. Je ne peux pas prendre toutes les vocals en compte toujours, je fais des erreurs après tout
8. 01:32:589 (1) - Commence le 1/2 beat plus tôt car c'est là que le chanteur commence à crié (ralenti la chanson si tu me croit pas) Fait
9. 01:34:294 (1,2,3,4) - Alors là ca ne suit pas du tout la voix bizarrement alors que tu la suit depuis le début. Fait plutôt ça:
   Je ne suis pas que la voix, mais les drums et la basse aussi
10. 02:03:953 (1,2,3,1) - La musique répète 2 fois la même chose et tu utilises 2 rythme radicalement différent. Pourquoi? Retire le slider et utilise un rythme similaire à 02:03:953 (1,2,3). Je ne te dis pas de forcement utilisé le même mais au moins un truc qui ressemble.Parce que je n'aime pas trop me répéter dans mon mappage
11. 02:21:680 (5) - Rajoutes une fleche? Le chanteur fini la note à 02:22:703. Oui !
12. 02:25:430 - Rajoute une note ici ainsi qu'à 02:25:771. Bizarrement tu l'as fait dans la insane mais pas ici. C'est vraiment bizarre pourtant c'est des notes puissantes et qui doivent être jouées.

Je m'en occuperais
Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:32:589 (2,1) - Overlap pas très joli. reglé
2. 00:41:453 (2) - Ta donné une forme un peu bizarre à ton slider. Il a l'air un peu "cassé" au bout. Essaye de donné une forme plus arrondie. modifié
3. 00:48:953 (3) - Pas très joli. Les sliders à 3 points font automatiquement de belles courbes donc essaye de les utilisés au plus possible dans ce genre de cas.réglé
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:53:044 (4) - ^ (etc....) réglé
5. 02:06:510 (1,2) - Mauvais sapcing (x0.87 au lieu de x1.0) fait
6. 01:39:748 (2) - Bouge la note à x=244 y=80 pour la double blanket. Fait
7. 01:43:328 (4) - Cette fois le slider est bien justifié musicalement, félicitation! Par contre utilise un slider a 3 points, c'est bien plus joli:
   
   SPOILER

   

Fait
NC

1. 00:58:839 (1,1) - Il y a un NC de trop ici. Le combos de longueurs 1 sont en général assez rare dans les normal et ne sont là que si il y a quelque chose de particulier dans la chanson ce qui n'est pas le cas ici.

Fait

[Hard]
Rythm

1. 00:29:862 - Pourquoi pas de note ici? La voix chante une note comme pour 00:29:691 (6,1,2,3,4). ok
2. 00:32:589 (4) - Commence le slider 1/2 beat plus tôt. C'est là que le chanteur commence à crier. ok
3. 00:35:998 (1) - Rajoute une flèche à la fin du slider car le chanteur maintien la note finale pendant ces 2 beats. oui
4. 00:41:964 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ce rtyhme ne suit vraiment rien. J'ai beau écouté je vois vraiment pas pourquoi t'as fait ça. Ici c'est plus l'endroit pour mettre un spinner comme en normal. en effet
5. 00:44:862 (1,2,3) - Pourquoi il n'y a pas de note sur les 1/2 entre les notes déja mise? Tu as plutôt l'habitude de les mettre comme pour 00:49:975 (1,2,3) ou 00:29:691 (6,1,2,3,4). Mieux vaut avoir une logique de mapping constant ou la map parait random. Je suis d'accord
6. 00:49:294 - Met un slider de longueur 1/2 ici? Pourquoi ignorer ces notes très puissante? Surtout que tu as déja montré que tu suivais quelquefois l'instru lorsqu'il n'y avait pas de voix. Tout à fait d'accord
7. 01:00:544 (3,5,7) - Si tu écoutes bien tu entendras que ces sliders commencent 1/2 beat trop tôt. La voix commence sur le red tick! Très bien entendu :O
8. 01:05:316 (1) - Ok, le slider est joli je suis d'accord mais ce n'est pas "on créé le pattern et on essaye de le faire coller au rythme de la musique d'une façon ou d'une autre" mais c'est "on utilise le rythme de la musique et ses contraintes pour créé les patterns donc ton slider, aussi joli soit it, n'a rien à faire ici et tu dois mapper cet endroit normalement. Non je garderais mon calamard
9. 01:35:998 (5) - Comme pour 00:35:998. Oui
10. 01:45:203 (2,2) - C'était bien parti, tes gros sliders commençaient à être justifié par la musique mais non tu as recraqué! Donc retire-les et utilises le vrai rythme. Et si jamais tu persistes a les garder au moins transforme les en slider a 3 points ce sera vachement plus joli et fait les terminer 1/2 beat plus tard car écoute bien la musique c'est là qu'ils doivent terminer. 3points mon général !
11. 01:59:691 - Non mais là t'as le droit d'utiliser 1/4 alors vas-y! Fait un triplet! Triplet !
12. 02:08:385 (1) - Retire le spinner et mappe cette partie-là. Le spinner n'a rien à faire ici. Bien compris
13. 02:19:975 - Rajoute une note ici. Oui
14. 02:25:430 - Rajoute les 2 notes de fin. Oui

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:32:078 (3) - Courbe le sldier pour éviter l'overlap pas très esthétique et faire une blanket à la place. Remappé
2. 01:03:271 (7) - Oriente ce slider dans le sens opposé ca fera plus joli pour le pattern et ça donnera un bien meilleur flow. Moddifié
3. 01:39:407 (3,4) - Pourquoi un spacing si petit (x0.86)? Je trouve que ca colle bien à cette partie
4. 01:41:794 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
5. 01:53:044 (1,1) - Le stack est pas bon. good
6. 01:58:498 (4) - La forme bizarroïde de ce slider n'est pas du tout justifié. Fait un slider normal ici. Ca colle au petit vibrato du chanteur

NC

1. 01:35:998 (5) - Tu avais mis un NC à 00:35:998 qui est un endroit complètement identique dans la musique.

[Insane]

1. Le titre de la diff est vraiment bizarre. Pourquoi ne pas l'apeller insane tout simplement?

Rythm

1. Trop de problème de rythme, je ne peux pas là.

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 01:50:316 (1) - Ok, cette fois le placement du slider est bien justifié. Malheureusement c'est totalement unrankable car l’accélération est violente et injustifiée. On sent qu'elle est là juste pour pouvoir casé le slider et rien d'autre ce qui n'est pas bon.

Bon, au cas où tu ne l'est pas compris ton défaut majeur c'est le !!!!!RYTHME!!!!! Tu dois créé tes patterns en fonction de la musique et non créé tes pattern d'abord et essayer de les faire coller quelque part après cela pose sinon de nombreux problème. Je te conseille vraiment de revoir completement le rythme utilisé dans toutes tes diffs car il est vraiment chaotique à certains moment. Je pense avoir corrigé le plus gros de la normal et hard mais il reste encore quelques problèmes plus mineurs. Quand à la insane elle est bourée de problème de rythme, serieux recheck là mais au ralenti (75% et 50%) et tu verras.

Sinon j'ai pas check les hitsounds mais de ce que j'ai entendu il pourraient vraiment être amélioré. Notamment les finish qui sont un peu random a certains passage et qui manquent à d'autres.

Aussi fait attention à tes sliders. Lorsque tu veux faire une forme simple utilise els slider à 3 points c'est essentiel!!!!!!

Sinon pour les pattern c'est très inconsistant. La hard a de bons pattern, la normal alterne entre des bons pattern et du random mais je suppose que les bons patterns sont du remapping et que le reste est ce qui reste de la diff avant qu'elle soit moddée. Et la insane c'est à peu près pareil.

En tout cas je te conseille vraiment de retravaillé ces points. Je ne pense pas que ta map est prête pour les BAT mais si tu doutes encore tu peux toujours demander à gabe par exemple (ou a un autre bat) de faire un testpaly rapide.

Bon, en espérant que ça t'as aidé et pas découragé

jonathanlfj wrote:

alright lets see

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]

better quality BG

I did change it, looks better now !
I would like you to reconsider your normal sample slider whistle usage. Some times it might fit the song to a certain degree, but most of the time its just added noise and feels vastly unnecessary. I'd suggest you remove all of them and leave the emphasis to slider starts/ends
I don't know how to use them, so deleting them is the easiest way to deal with them
im also a bit iffy about the timing at some places, see if you can get a good timer to verify this
Already checked by - Umi - and Shiro (page 1 and 3)

[Ami's Easy]
00:42:816 (1,2) - avoid the overlap here, make it look like 00:43:498 (2,3) Done
00:59:862 (2) - NC here instead of 00:59:521 (1) Done
01:12:816 (2) - stack this on 01:10:089 (4) for a better reverse effect Done
01:22:703 (3) - missed a clap Fixed
01:33:953 (1,2) - form it like this for a cleaner pattern:

SPOILER

I did my best
01:46:907 (4,5) - the blanketing here can be done better Fixed
01:53:044 - add a note here, or drag the break to start here, the effect would be better (use soft sample if you add a note) I made a blanket
02:25:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think its better if you flip this vertically so 02:25:771 (2) will not be partially blocked. remember to adjust distance spacing Changed

[Normal]
clap patterns are a bit messy, remember that claps sounds best if you keep them on the 2/4th white line in each measure
00:28:498 (1) - NC is not needed Fixed
00:57:135 (5) - use a 3 point slider here, would look better compared to 4 points Done
01:01:907 (1,2,3) - i would map this like 01:04:975 (1,2,3), mostly because there is not much emphasis on 01:01:907 It's the characters presentation opening, it does need emphasis imo
01:07:362 (1,2) - this may confuse some players due to its larger spacing and partial overlap, ctrl+g on 01:08:044 (2) and readjust spacing on this pattern Done
01:11:112 (2,3) - how bout this rhythm instead:

SPOILER

Modified and added a reverse-flow end
01:22:873 (1) - don't use 1/4 sliders on a normal; its not only hard to read but also poses problems in taiko conversions Modified and gived it an anchor form, ugh ugh ~~
01:30:544 (3,4) - try a rhythm like this:

SPOILER

Had to fully remap the pattern
01:43:328 (4) - the blanket here could be done better Fixed
01:50:316 (1) - remove the finish on this, doesnt really fit imo Done
02:05:146 (1) - remove NC Done
02:09:407 (1) - multiple repeats might raise some confusion for players at this level, better to split this into 2 normal sliders Done
02:21:680 (5) - ^ Done

[Hard]
00:32:419 (4,5,6) - this pattern is very hard to read under this AR, either remove the middle note or use normal spacing Done
00:54:407 - add a note here feels better, try stacking on top of 00:54:578 (1) done
00:59:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this section plays really bad, mostly because there is an ambiguous number of repeats, forcing players to read approach circles instead of following the actual song. Might want to remap it to something less confusing Done
01:10:089 (1,3) - these two sliders can also be mapped with a simpler rhythm (e.g. circles on white line or 1/1 sliders), it will just be easier to follow and more appropriate for a hard modified
01:26:112 (5) - make this turn the other way would flow better

SPOILER

True
01:33:953 (2) - NC here instead of 01:32:589 (1) Done
01:43:328 (2) - this sounds better if you ended it at 01:44:691 True
01:59:691 (5) - add NC here, combo number gets a bit big Done
02:08:725 (6,7,8) - map it with this rhythm instead:

SPOILER

Done
02:25:430 (1,2) - might want to have some symmetry here Done

[Insane]
01:00:203 (2,3,4) - use normal spacing here would be more appropriate Done
01:03:612 (4,5,6) - same here, its easy to misread this as 1/2 spaced Done
01:08:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this doesnt really work here; first of all the stream is following nothing in the music, which makes it incredibly hard to hit properly, and the slider is skipping over a lot of strong beats in the music. suggesting a remap here with a more appropriate rhythm Done
01:14:862 - this is actually a good place to put a stream instead of the spinner, basically from 01:14:862 up until the start of the kiai to make up for deleting the previous stream I think it's my most beautifull stream <3
01:27:475 (2) - this doesnt really flow that well, i would move it more to the left Fixed
01:29:095 - add a note here to follow the same rhythm as 01:27:731 (3) Done
01:33:271 (1) - remove this NC and add it on 01:33:953 (2); then remove NC on 01:34:294 (1) as well Done
01:38:725 (1,2) - one more repeat on 01:38:725 (1), and start 01:38:981 (2) at 01:39:066 done
01:50:316 (1) - although this give a cool visual effect, it is incredibly hard to follow the slider properly at this SV; keep the sv below 1.25x (you can resize the slider via ctrl+shift+s to keep it snapped) Remapped <3
01:53:555 (2,2,2) - these should all have an extra repeat to catch the vocals Done
02:02:609 (1) - unsnapped circle and green line Corrected
02:09:066 (5) - make this into a 1/2 slider to catch the sound at 02:09:237 Done

I hate to say this, but even if you applied everything i said, the map still needs more work to be deemed as rankable by today's standards. You might want to consider remapping some parts of your diffs, especially sliders with old beizer curves and some rhythms that are hard to read/play. Also get play tests from people who do not map/mod; player opinion is valuable and sometimes are worth more than a mod like this. You can use the channel #modhelp in game to find some others to try your map as well, and if you have any questions feel free to pm me. Good Luck ><
Ugh

Irreversible wrote:

Hm. Don't give up, after you fixed the stuff he mentioned, we can try to make it look a bit more clean. Jonathan; also consider that it's his first map, and personally I wouldn't say mods help too much. It's just the map being like this. Let's just try our best to polish it as good as we can, and then give it a try!

01:09:237 (11) - Insane; make this one nicer already xD

Old style of mapping so old cs style

It's 40%, can't go lower

Ntasuto wrote:

Hello ^^

Insane only as you requested

00:45:544 (5) - distance snap this like the previous notes. its a bit too close Fixed
00:59:862 (1,2) - ugly overlap and the spacing does not match the timeline note snap. nothing special sounds to put it so close.Also the next notes have less time apart and they are spaced further. so it is a bit confusing. Fixed!
01:27:135 (1,2,3,4) - this kinda breaks the flow. :/ - make it more convenient like this maybe :

SPOILER

Great idea
01:31:907 (10,1) - blanket it better( don't let it touch) . my OCD sense it tingling Done !
01:38:725 (1,2) - looks so sudden, coz the rest of the map is not mapped that style. 2 options i suggest. put put it closer so it touched like the rest of the 1/4 notes or at least ctrl+g Took last solution and fixed alignment
01:50:316 (1,1) - ugly overlap and breaks the flow . make it more appealing and fix the flow They were no other way... kill the squid :'(
02:09:237 (6) - sounds wrong. 02:09:833 - the reverse point here doesn't match the beat. 1/4 randomness :/ i suggest you split it like this. this is the correct rhythm imo, :

SPOILER

It's not matched to the beat, but the inflexion of the singer voice. On the reverse you can clearly hear the singer lowering the "AhhhAhhh" tone.
02:23:044 (1) - could make it end here : 02:24:748 - so you could add a note here : 02:25:089 - to match the 3 final beats For me the end of the circle is a beat :3

1 more thing. go easy on the color combo. looks kinda random ( long, short combo colors out of the blue.) try re arranging it. i cant post it , since it requires imo to change from the beginning and it would keep going like domino one after another. 7
In fact all combo are based on a modification. The only exception is the spine streams in order to make it more beautifull and easier to read :3

Wish you good luck
Feel free to always ask my in IRC

cya

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I got pulled in for a test play for a Normal diff and see this horrible thing. Just going to do a quick mod of normal so the mapper knows how to fix it.

First off, please get a better video. The current one looks pixelated.
Hard to get a better one, I did try before but the video size outweighted the 20mo limit. I'm actually at 16,668mo and I doubt 3mo would change a lot

Normal:
Seriously 8 spinners with a 1 white tick between it and the next note is pretty evil to beginniners and makes a fairly boring/annoying map overall
00:32:589 (2) - blanket the end of 00:31:566 (1) or don't attempt a blanket like shape at all did my best to improve it
00:33:271 (3) - blanket the end of 00:32:589 (2) better (imperfect) did my best to improve it
Not going to mention too many more blanketing fixes, but you really need to fix these blankets did my best to improve it
00:54:748 (1) - unrankable slider (not allowed to have unreadable wiggles like in the intro) Remapped
00:58:839 (1) - make this blanket the end of 00:57:135 (5) or don't have them interact at all Fixed
01:00:885 (1,1) - these might look nicer if they blanket each other done
01:28:328 (5,6) - while you might be aiming for symmetry overlapping the middle of the slider like that looks terrible imo Ctrl+J and it's better
01:42:475 (2,4) - another unneeded overlap Needed to give the feeling of closing the blanket imo
02:05:146 (1,1) - ^ Fixed

I feel like I might be overreacting a bit, but the spinners are really getting to me. Adding on a bad video + bad blankets + overlaps, this map just makes me an unhappy player.

1. CS5, vraiment nécessaire ? Je préférerai CS4
2. 00:27:816 (2) - courber le slider ? pour rendre le flow plus naturel
3. 00:32:419 (4) - la forme de ce slider peut être améliorée
4. 00:32:419 (4,5) - le changement de spacing se lit plutôt mal
5. 00:33:953 (1,2,3,4) - tu peux mieux jouer avec les courbes des sliders, ça se joue mieux
   
   Exemple

   
6. 00:44:862 (1,2,3,4,5) - tu peux avoir beaucoup plus de précision ici! soit aligne, soit donne un effet courbé, pas un mix imprécis entre les deux x)
   même le spacing imprécis se ressent visuellement
7. 01:05:316 (2) - tu m as bien fait rire ici, je m attendais pas à ça ^^ très joli slider ! mais infernal à jouer
8. Complètement suggestif
   01:12:816 (3) - enlève 1 répétition
   01:13:583 (1) - supprime le spinner, remplace par :
   
   Exemple

   
   ça fits beaucoup mieux la musique et c'est plus sympa pour arriver au kiai. (est ce adapté à la dif?)
9. 01:25:260 - gros problème de rythme ici, écoutes à vitesse 25%
10. Je vais m'arrêter là car la suite est un peu trop old map à mon goût, j'arriverai pas à modder

Kocari wrote:

Tari and Kocari's Modding Queue

Here as requested sorry it took so long to get back to you but I will do my best Senpai
You're the best <3

[Easy]

00:25:772 (1) - Long slider seems really weird and throws things off maybe try it with a spinner starting at the same place and ending at the same place. What ever floats your boat is what I'm really after. And considering this note placed next to it right after 00:27:816 (2) seems really weird and like throws off the dimension of the notes shape True, now it's a spinner with a slider on the trumpet instead
00:57:816 (4,5,1) - Make sure that sequence right there is perfectly lined together or it will look strange when playing through that Sure it is now
01:10:771 (1,2) - Possibly just try to move those 2 notes apart instead of having them stacked like that seems really delayed to the next note but again you just sit at the same place for like a second of 2 humm... I moved it
01:16:907 (1) - ^ (Move up 1 unit) Checked symmetry
01:29:862 (3) - Move it a bit to match the previous slider and don't worry about if they are touching or not doesn't really throw off the dimension of that sequence at all so NP Remmaped
01:31:907 (1) - Possible have that curve a bit instead of straightening it out http://puu.sh/7H9Hd.jpg because it also kind of far away wraps around the next note Remmaped
01:36:680 (1) - Have this arc a little more to match http://puu.sh/7H9Ky.jpg I prefer it this way :3
01:42:135 (1,3) - Have those 2 notes more symmetrical to each other done
02:05:998 (3) - Move that note a NorthEast a little to make them perfect with each other Done
02:13:157 (1,1,2,3) - My little sequence but yours is good too http://puu.sh/7Ha11.jpg Everyone have different taste :3
Nothing else out of the blue so easy seems FINE TO ME!
Also get rid of three overlapping I didn't noticed before O_o

[Normal]

00:48:612 (2) - Move it down a little more to bring it in the center of slider Done
01:17:419 (4) - That note should be on a white tick because red throws off the rhythm considering the previous notes before that are on white ticks as well
so change that to a white tick slider and just move things around and you should be good Better on the actual way
01:22:873 (1,2,3,4) - Why note have it like this http://puu.sh/7HakM.jpg because before the 2 notes on a normal difficulty like that seems quite hard It's not hard to catch it for beginner, got it tested, no fail on it
01:30:032 (2) - Again like before why note have it like this http://puu.sh/7HaoO.jpg ^
01:47:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sequence seems a bit challenging to hit notes and time those for a normal difficulty so this is what I revised it to be http://puu.sh/7HayW.jpg I do'nt agree, it looks hard but it's easy, just need to have a 1 tick rythm. No trick, no combo breaking
02:25:771 (2,1) - Why note add a spinner like this http://puu.sh/7HaF4.jpg Because it's two strong trumpet sound, not a long drum roll
Nothing else out of the ordinary so normal successful!

[Hard]

Just wanted to start off by saying how about changing the Circle Size to 4?
00:36:680 - Break should start around here because the continuation of that repeat slider doesn't go with anything in the song Agree
00:47:760 (5) - Try to move that note a little more spaced out it is a hard difficulty and people wouldn't expect a note to be that close because if they doubletime and the notes are that close they would generally hit it sooner than expected because it's still going off with the same color sequence Fixed
01:03:100 (2,3,4,5,6) - Why not try something like this out http://puu.sh/7Hc6i.jpg Remap
01:05:316 (2) - Love the shape of that <3
01:21:339 (3,1,2,1) - Try something like this because that (2) note was a blanketed weirdly so this looks better because it repeats the same pattern http://puu.sh/7Hcev.jpg
01:22:703 (1,2,1,2,1) - Hard to show you my sequence so I'll break it down into 2-3 pictures and again this didn't use distance snapper so I just went with it for this one during the song http://puu.sh/7HcjK.jpg next is http://puu.sh/7Hckg.jpg and 01:25:430 (2,3,4) - should be spread out in the center like this http://puu.sh/7Hcn1.jpg using distance snapper Remapped
01:34:635 (2) - Move this a little bit to the left and arc curve a little bit for symmetry like this http://puu.sh/7HcuW.jpgRemapped
01:34:464 (2) - Like before have a note here possibly http://puu.sh/7HcuW.jpgRemapped
01:42:987 (1) - Why not put that note in the center of the slider nothing is being effected so why not? http://puu.sh/7HcxA.jpg You're right
02:25:941 - Put a slider here ending here 02:27:816 like before Same as before

Insane wasn't my specialty so I stopped there. Other than that One Piece sure has quite a song in it Hope I did well modding for you and thanks again for asking I tried my best

Jethh wrote:

Here we go \o/ j'essaie de moder suite à ta demande. et je vais faire un peu la hard.

[Hard]

1. CS5, vraiment nécessaire ? Je préférerai CS4 ... Je crois que CS 5 était une mauvaise idée après tout. CS4 pour la hard !
2. 00:27:816 (2) - courber le slider ? pour rendre le flow plus naturel Remappé
3. 00:32:419 (4) - la forme de ce slider peut être améliorée Remap
4. 00:32:419 (4,5) - le changement de spacing se lit plutôt mal Remap
5. 00:33:953 (1,2,3,4) - tu peux mieux jouer avec les courbes des sliders, ça se joue mieux
   
   Exemple

   
   Remap
6. 00:44:862 (1,2,3,4,5) - tu peux avoir beaucoup plus de précision ici! soit aligne, soit donne un effet courbé, pas un mix imprécis entre les deux x)
   même le spacing imprécis se ressent visuellement Remap
7. 01:05:316 (2) - tu m as bien fait rire ici, je m attendais pas à ça ^^ très joli slider ! mais infernal à jouer <3
8. Complètement suggestif
   01:12:816 (3) - enlève 1 répétition Fait + déplacement du spinner
   01:13:583 (1) - supprime le spinner, remplace par :
   
   Exemple

   
   ça fits beaucoup mieux la musique et c'est plus sympa pour arriver au kiai. (est ce adapté à la dif?)Non adapté, on garde le spinner
9. 01:25:260 - gros problème de rythme ici, écoutes à vitesse 25% En effêt, remappé
10. Je vais m'arrêter là car la suite est un peu trop old map à mon goût, j'arriverai pas à modder

^^

Tout de même, dans l'ensemble, je trouve que tu te focalises trop sur les vocals, ce qui donne un manque de fluidité au niveau gameplay. Essaie d'écouter les instrus pour faire des liaisons (drums par exemple)
Sinon t'as fait du gros boulot sur les sliders lol (peut être un peu trop ? :3)

Hésite pas à mp si besoin !

Sylpheria wrote:

Hey, i've finished the playtest of ur map
so, here it is !

Easy = http://puu.sh/7IFwD
Normal = http://puu.sh/7IFFr
Hard = http://puu.sh/7IFG3

sorry, i didnt post the image. got some problem with the screenshot
so,far so good,tho. but if i may suggest, try more to synchronize the map with the song, so it gets better
at some point :
Hard :
(1) 01:05:316 whats this ? this one too long and awkward for a hard diff. try to separate it to pieces and follow the song rhytm
That's called a slider with awesome shape. Before they were a spinner, but since I was asked to fill it, I filled it with my imagination <3
(2) the Slider at 01:35:998 it ended at 01:37:362 try to decrease the slider end at 01:36:680 it sounds better
"Gooooo" finish on 01:37:362 so no
(3) 01:37:703 and 01:40:089 empty ? try to fill the emptiness with objects/sliders Hard diff players intent to get bored if there's an empty space while the music still on at the background.
First is a break, second filled

well, thats all i can help. hope this one will be helpful

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Yo, testplay from my queue

Ami's Easy

Nice.

Normal

00:31:566 (1) - You've overused the nodes on this slider. Please don't do this, unless there is a unique rattling-like sound of some sort (You can often find these types of sliders in DnB or Dub step sort of music). Vibrato = nodes for me
00:39:407 (1) - ^ Same issue as a bove, and forgot to add a finish on the head. ^ + fixed
01:27:475 (2,3,4) - Sounds really off, why the random triplet here? Please remap this part. To (1) DE(2) Ki(3) Nai(4), because it follows the music
01:30:032 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Remap. No


Rhythm isn't completely bad, but you still should try to make it sound consistent.

Hard

Still needs a lot of fixing, but hey it's playable at least. Your opinion

Insane

Didn't pass this diff, there's a lot of things that's wrong here. Please consider remapping, and focus on fixing the rhythm and flow.Your opinion

Good luck.

My test

HARD + HD
insane

Lancelot wrote:

J'ai pas finit de créer ma premiere map mais...

Insane

00:27:731 & 00:27:816 ( 2 , 3 ) No,don't follow the bass
00:27:987 Ajouer un beat ( Optionel ) No,don't follow the bass
00:29:073 & 00:29:159 ( 2 , 3 ) No,don't follow the bass
Remplace la fin du slider ( 1 ) de 00:29:009 à 00:28:988 No,don't follow the bass
00:29:350 Ajouer un beat ( Optionel ) No,don't follow the bass
00:30:032 Ajouer un beat ( Optionel ) No,don't follow the bass
00:30:714 Ajouer un beat ( Optionel ) No,don't follow the bass
00:50:828 ( 2 , 3 ) Tu peux mettre un slider peut être No
00:54:578 Tu pourais commencer un stream 1/4 jusqu'au slider no
00:56:027 Tripets 1/4 entre les deux sliders Ne suit pas le rythme
01:01:055 Ajouer un beat ( Optionel ) Sur un 1/16 ?! Non O_o
01:03:100 & 01:03:612 Une stream de 7 combo au lieu des Triplets? Non
01:30:032 Fin du slider Non
01:43:328 Début du slider ( 7 ) 01:44:862 Fin Remmaped
01:54:237 Fait quelque chose come ça ou comme ça? ( 1/8 ) Non
01:15:643 Place ton slider correctement Fait
01:24:549 & 01:24:634 ( 3 , 4 ) meme chose pour 02:05:913 ?
Essais de bien placer le combo avec les sons que tu veux nous fair entendre.

Irreversible wrote:

[General]

1. Fix the diff spread Options, you use HP 4 on normal and hard, this is not really good. Go for something more consistent like 2/2/2, 4/5/4, 6/7/6, 7/8/7 Done
2. You might wanna use some Combo Colors, it's better to have some imo Rainbow >_<
3. Why not mapping until the end? I think it's not really finished where you end your diffs! Will be done since it's not the first time requested
4. The hitsounds.... they're not really appealing, almost noisy. . . . I can't hitsound at all X__X I'll help you different with it, I think.

Can't help it, I followed Andrea an Rezoons's advices, can't do better

[Ami's Easy]

Since she seems to don't care anymore since long, I will take care of the mod

00:30:544 (1) - Sehr fragwürdiger flow hier o.o Versuch 00:30:544 (1) - den slider als Verbindung zwischen 00:29:180 (2,2) - zu nehmen, auch wenn das "pattern" verloren geht. Fixed
01:33:953 (1,2,3) - Nicht schön gemacht. Fixed
01:40:089 (4) - ^ Fixed
02:03:953 (1,2,3) - Etwas sehr laut mit den finishes.. Denkst du es gibt was passenderes? It's ok for me
02:27:816 (5) - NC Fixed

Die Easy ist okay, aber es scheint ne ältere diff zu sein (denk ich?), weil ich schon viel besseres von dir gesehen habe. Vielleicht schaust du nochmal durch und hast ne bessere Idee, aber wie gesagt, es ist ok. Yep, sadly she seems to don't give a damn anymore <_<

[Normal]

00:29:862 (1) - Rotate this one a bit to get a better Transition which feels more natural to Play. If possible by 10°. Adjust the next things as well, so they won't look odd, please. Done
00:31:566 (1) - DS Done
00:35:316 (3) - I suggest a NC for the new stanza and the strong beat. Done
00:36:680 (1) - I don't really like this stack in a normal, and it's overlap is quite weird too, could you possibly just place it as the DS tells you to do?
00:42:135 (1) - Not enough recovery time, please let it end earlier! Remmaped
00:46:907 (3) - Not sure how confused normal Player will be, I mean it Ends pretty harsh on a red tick and stuff. I'd go for regular 1/1 here. remapped
00:50:316 - This beat is really strong, it should be covered by a clickable Action. At the Moment you let a slider end on it and this effects get lost. You can do something cool with 1/2 I think. If you Need some more help with that I can help you, but try to get it yourself for now~ Help ?
00:58:839 (1) - Not proper made blanket, also the flow goes nuts here. Not really sure how to solve it, because the stuff seems to be connected, but it should be fixed. 00:57:135 (6) - Maybe try another, more creative shape with this one? It might solve the Problem.
01:01:907 (1) - Basically same flow Problem as above. remapped
01:00:885 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - However; the rhythm in this part is pretty broke. Of course you follow the vocals, and I like this but it's not always a good solution to do this in a lower diff, since, in my opinion, it's really important to get an ongoing rhythm with the lessest interruptions as possible. Try to connect the vocals with sliders, it helps. remapped
01:05:998 (1,2,1,2) - DS remapped
01:10:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think the same goes for here, the 1/2 is pretty awkward to Play I think. remapped
[from there
01:13:498 (1) - Recovery time.
01:17:419 (4) - http://puu.sh/8mVTo/fcb848d4a3.jpg ?
01:18:271 (5,1,2) - Rhythm.. explained above why this is not good
01:22:362 - Yeah...
01:25:260 (1) - ^
01:28:328 (5) - I think this stack is unreadable as well; look, you've got so much space you can use, why stacking it ? Especially in a normal diff, this is just a no-go.
X_X The rest of the kiai Needs some rework as well on the rhythm.
to there : Remap]
01:45:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This seems pretty cool tho.. I think if it's clearly in the song and Standing there alone it works.. What do you mean ?

When are you online? In the higher diffs you got way more possibilities for rhythm, but I'm pretty strict in normal etc, we Need to rework single parts a bit, and it's not meant to be offensive, I just want to help you so you can make solid easy / normal maps within not too much time. But try to fix what you can already, maybe the suggestions above already help you for the rest.

[Hard]

Hard is actually pretty okay to Play~ (positive opinion ~~)

Just some things.

00:50:657 (4) - The pattern before doesn't really compliment this slider here, it doesn't really look professional I think .. http://puu.sh/8mWyD/39a803307c.jpg what about this? it is a jump yes but it has a pretty cool flow imo. Beware, I got your permission to put a jump in hard ^^
00:54:407 (1,2,3,4) - Try to adjust the spacing a bit, couldn't read it at first and kept missing here because the rhythm is really awkward here.. (maybe make a new rhythm then new placing xD) I'm sure you can follow something else here? Done
01:00:203 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to space it a bit more, i felt really stopped while playing it If I space more I'm DS out :/
.01:02:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
01:05:316 (2) - ..lol xDD He loves you too !
01:10:089 (1) - don't use so many repeats :O That doesn't Sound good at all. Fixed
01:12:816 (3) - Try this rhyth mhere, it sounds way more elegant. http://puu.sh/8mWEi/3736c3a970.jpg Fixed
01:21:850 (1,2) - How on earth should this be readable, heshu pls. EVERYONE would except slider 2 on this spot: 01:22:362 - so, -1 repeat and shift I know my map too well lol. Fixed
01:22:532 (2) - back. Modified
01:35:998 (4) - Try to get a blanket so it doesn't overlap Blankettt
01:39:066 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again in this part, you should decide what you follow and not just Change your pattern, first it was instrumental, then vocals, it's inconsistent D: Vocal or trumpet the rythm stay the same for me 1234,1234,1234
02:18:953 (1,2,3,4) - I see that this pattern is nice but how is it related to the song?
1 - Tip Ich
Middle Ni
End Sun
2 - Shine
3 - Yoooooooooooon
4 - weeeeeeeee
Spin : GOOOOOO